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Reviewer: coulierb Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Sep 2014 4:06 AM Title: Chapter 5

Interesting. Like it so far.

Reviewer: coulierb Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Sep 2014 3:06 PM Title: Chapter 2

:)

Reviewer: coulierb Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Sep 2014 3:00 PM Title: Chapter 1

Peeked my interest.

Reviewer: WAL70 Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Sep 2014 4:06 AM Title: Chapter 5

MORE PLZZZZZZZZZZZZ!!!!

Reviewer: Twifan1228 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 05 Sep 2014 6:00 PM Title: Chapter 5

Of course! they have wondered about each other!  But yea, sometimes it's hard to imagine that the other really has thought of them, since like "E" points out, Bella did what was in the end best for him, but she did walk away.   Really digging on this today!  Love your writing anyway!  All the best

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Date: 05 Sep 2014 5:53 PM Title: Chapter 4

This chapter felt good to read, regardless it felt like something was accomplished  :-)

Reviewer: Twifan1228 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 05 Sep 2014 5:51 PM Title: Chapter 3

Oh now we are getting to it. I love your writing style too!  very good story  I feel the angst coming, like you said "everyone is broken in some manner" could't agree more with that statement...

Reviewer: Twifan1228 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 05 Sep 2014 5:45 PM Title: Chapter 2

avoid avoid avoid.... can't wait to learn why!  Thanks again for writing and sharing

Reviewer: Twifan1228 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 05 Sep 2014 5:31 PM Title: Chapter 1

this looks intriguing  look forward to reading whenever you feel inspired and update.  Here's to encouraging you....

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