[Report This]Date: 10 Sep 2014 1:20 PM Title: Chapter 27
How does jasper get away with murder? Is their father dead at this point?
How did Jasper pull off this grandiose scheme?
[Report This]Date: 10 Sep 2014 12:32 PM Title: Chapter 27
Jasper did what he had to do, good for him.
Date: 10 Sep 2014 10:10 AM Title: Chapter 27
Looking forward to the next chapter
[Report This]Date: 07 Sep 2014 10:03 PM Title: Chapter 26
Two destination thoughts: Alaska or Europe.
Make that three.....and island.
Jasper's know what his brother is capable of, so I'm not altogether surprised that he would have had an intricate escape plan for Bella and Eloise already in the works.
Date: 07 Sep 2014 5:51 PM Title: Chapter 26
thanks for the new chapter.
[Report This]Date: 07 Sep 2014 5:49 AM Title: Chapter 26
i am praying for good thoughts and prayers for these guys
seems marcus is a real piece of work and jasper is aware of what is father and brother are capable of. i am glad bella has a support system to keep her and eloise safe to their best ability
look forward to more
love it
Date: 06 Sep 2014 8:56 PM Title: Chapter 26
Looking forward to the next chapter
[Report This]Date: 04 Sep 2014 2:28 AM Title: Chapter 25
wow so it is time to run
they have been found out
it sucks
Date: 03 Sep 2014 4:31 PM Title: Chapter 25
whoa boy....nothing is quite so creepy as a black rose! everyone is so protective of Bella. I think she'll need all she can get.
[Report This]Date: 03 Sep 2014 1:23 PM Title: Chapter 25
Will Charlie get to see her before they run? What will happen to Edward's job at the hospital?
Was Bella's whereabouts found out because too many people knew where she was? Or was it a predictable move on her part to go back to family?
Date: 30 Aug 2014 3:48 PM Title: Chapter 24
Hope your feeling better. I think a memory book is a excellent idea. Bella will love it.
[Report This]Date: 30 Aug 2014 3:53 AM Title: Chapter 24
The calm before the storm?
Date: 29 Aug 2014 9:03 PM Title: Chapter 24
looking forward to more
Date: 29 Aug 2014 8:20 PM Title: Chapter 24
Love the idea of a memory book! Thanks for the chapter!
[Report This]Date: 26 Aug 2014 12:15 AM Title: Chapter 23
I'm finally caught up to the rest of the fan base. Whew.
Will Jacob be involved in this storyline at all?
Date: 19 Aug 2014 6:36 AM Title: Chapter 23
Fake an accident where they both die and go to another country and change their names
Date: 19 Aug 2014 4:32 AM Title: Chapter 23
been a while. i think i've lost track of a few details here and don't know what to say....
[Report This]Date: 19 Aug 2014 4:28 AM Title: Chapter 22
A man with a plan, you gotta love that.
[Report This]Date: 19 Aug 2014 3:33 AM Title: Chapter 23
edward just needs to try and be patient, it is hard but i know he can do it
love it
[Report This]Date: 19 Aug 2014 2:19 AM Title: Chapter 10
I was wondering where Jasper was and now I guess we know he helped her get away from whatever she needed to run from.
[Report This]Date: 19 Aug 2014 2:09 AM Title: Chapter 8
Phew I was worried there for a moment that E&B weren't going to have HEA.
[Report This]Date: 19 Aug 2014 1:36 AM Title: Chapter 4
Loving this story I knew she wasn't drunk, so many things mimic it, stupid Reece.
Date: 19 Aug 2014 12:34 AM Title: Chapter 23
Looking forward to the next chapter
Date: 18 Aug 2014 10:20 PM Title: Chapter 23
Edward is so cute wanting to protect her. I wonder what jasper has up his sleeve.
Date: 08 Aug 2014 8:43 PM Title: Chapter 22
Oh that was cute.
Date: 08 Aug 2014 5:23 PM Title: Chapter 22
I'm happy to see that Edward and Tia could end things amicably. What about Peter and Charlotte? Are the coming after Bella?
Date: 08 Aug 2014 9:05 AM Title: Chapter 21
Jasper is so adorable when he talks about Alice. I think that about right Edward would go anywhere with her.
[Report This]Date: 08 Aug 2014 4:00 AM Title: Chapter 21
she seems all over the place but she is
she is feeling so much
love it
Date: 07 Aug 2014 10:33 PM Title: Chapter 21
looking forward to more
Date: 07 Aug 2014 7:27 PM Title: Chapter 21
I'm now more confused than ever. Didn't we already know the names of the couple she played surrogate for?? I guess not since you say that we learned them just now and you are the writer. I need to go back and read from the beginning. I'm sorry, I'm a bad reader....I do like the story, though.
Date: 06 Aug 2014 6:23 PM Title: Chapter 20
He is sweet how much he cares for her and yes he needs to be honest with Tia let her go. So he can focus on Bella.
Date: 06 Aug 2014 2:16 AM Title: Chapter 20
I'm glad Edward opened up to Bella. It's a start and Edward answered his own questions about Tia. She's comfortable but she's not Bella.
[Report This]Date: 06 Aug 2014 1:36 AM Title: Chapter 20
this was great they talked and opened up
just what they needed
Date: 05 Aug 2014 8:34 PM Title: Chapter 20
wise and honest words were spoken. that is always good. i do long for Bella and Edward to be together, though....i like the story and will read no matter what...
Date: 04 Aug 2014 10:34 PM Title: Chapter 19
I guess I'm confused as to who Jasper and Riley are, and why they're there. Sorry. I'll try to read again from the beginning to refresh my memory.
Date: 04 Aug 2014 9:46 PM Title: Chapter 19
He gets his alone time he has been craving. What to talk about so much has happened over the years.
Date: 04 Aug 2014 8:40 PM Title: Chapter 19
Still think he needs to address the Tia issue he's not being fair to any of them.
[Report This]Date: 04 Aug 2014 4:51 AM Title: Chapter 18
oh bella i hope your family and you will be safe
these people sound rough
love it
Date: 04 Aug 2014 3:59 AM Title: Chapter 18
Oh yeah love the caveman act hehehe
Date: 03 Aug 2014 9:35 PM Title: Chapter 18
Right. I think....
[Report This]Date: 03 Aug 2014 2:45 PM Title: Chapter 17
Oh my! LOL
Loved the story of Charlie cooling Edward off with the hose, LOL!
[Report This]Date: 03 Aug 2014 5:34 AM Title: Chapter 17
oh my goodness did charlie kidnap jasper
i can't wait to find out more
loving it
Date: 03 Aug 2014 1:00 AM Title: Chapter 17
Oh what did Charlie do. Is is jasper ? Another twist just making the story more intense.
Date: 03 Aug 2014 12:40 AM Title: Chapter 17
Who are they? Bella seems glad to see them....love the reminiscing about the old days....
Date: 03 Aug 2014 12:39 AM Title: Chapter 17
who is the guy she is hugging and what happened between them in school
Date: 02 Aug 2014 8:22 PM Title: Chapter 17
I think Jasper has come to town.
[Report This]Date: 02 Aug 2014 7:24 PM Title: Chapter 17
Stranger and stranger...enjoying this.
[Report This]Date: 02 Aug 2014 7:22 PM Title: Chapter 16
Like the way you keep the tension. I keep waiting for the other shoe to drop.
Date: 01 Aug 2014 5:01 AM Title: Chapter 16
Awwww he is so sweet kissing her while she was sick.
[Report This]Date: 01 Aug 2014 1:33 AM Title: Chapter 16
Aww! :( *hugs*
[Report This]Date: 01 Aug 2014 12:36 AM Title: Chapter 16
i can see bella being very shelter and watched after
never having anytime for her taking care of her mom and then all this crap
she is strong and a fighter and glad she went back home
Date: 31 Jul 2014 8:44 PM Title: Chapter 16
So I think I need to go back and read this again cuz I'm not remembering how she got away from the couple who she was a surrogate for in the first place...
Date: 31 Jul 2014 7:08 PM Title: Chapter 16
Break up with Tia, Edward. Your heart isn't in it; it's still Bella's. Not fair to Tia to string it along. I think Tia already suspects - she may break it off first to save her the heartache.
[Report This]Date: 30 Jul 2014 12:54 AM Title: Chapter 15
i love the information
i am glad she is opening up a little
it will take time
she doesn't want anyone hurt over her
love it
[Report This]Date: 29 Jul 2014 5:14 PM Title: Chapter 15
Is Edward getting rid of the girlfriend?
Date: 29 Jul 2014 4:49 PM Title: Chapter 15
Epic fail is a harsh thing to say about yourself for missing one day's update. I am enjoying this story a lot!
Date: 29 Jul 2014 3:04 PM Title: Chapter 15
Emmett wanting to kick Jakes adds was sweet of him. Of course Carlisle will be there for her she is the daughter that got away.
Date: 26 Jul 2014 11:01 AM Title: Chapter 14
So many layers to this story. This is so good.
[Report This]Date: 26 Jul 2014 3:50 AM Title: Chapter 14
so it seems answers are coming
bella seems stronger
maybe being a mother is giving her the stregnth to fight for things
look forward to more
Date: 26 Jul 2014 1:41 AM Title: Chapter 14
Love the story, I commend Bella for taking care of her baby....Rose needs to open her eyes about Bella yes she is single and raising her baby....
Date: 25 Jul 2014 11:24 PM Title: Chapter 14
You're setting up a seemingly complicated situation here, with maybe a simple answer. I don't know for sure, but you have me intrigued and hanging on every clue! Terrific writing and storyline!
[Report This]Date: 24 Jul 2014 12:29 AM Title: Chapter 13
I can see her trying to help out the couple
but once faced with who or what they were her motherly instincts kicked in for the baby she was carrying, makes sense.
oh look forward to coming chapters
Date: 23 Jul 2014 5:51 PM Title: Chapter 13
Rose and Emmett don't know the story so I'll give them some latitude with their attitude toward Bella. Won't they be sorry once they know....! Edward, mushy? cute!
[Report This]Date: 23 Jul 2014 5:29 PM Title: Chapter 13
typical Emmett!!!
Date: 23 Jul 2014 5:26 PM Title: Chapter 13
Poor Edward can't catch a break.
Emmett looks like he isn't going anywhere without some answers. Everyone else has given Bella space but I think that changed the second Emmett walked in the door. Hopefully Rose can keep him in line. Can't wait to see what happens when Charlie gets back. Will he fill Edward and the others in on Bella's life the last few years?
Date: 23 Jul 2014 3:21 PM Title: Chapter 13
Well Bella has to find out about Tia. She is his girl and he cannnot just dump her.
Date: 23 Jul 2014 3:16 PM Title: Chapter 12
Poor Jasper related to someone that powerful and mean.
Date: 23 Jul 2014 3:07 PM Title: Chapter 11
Okay.. there is more not saying anything.
Date: 23 Jul 2014 3:06 PM Title: Chapter 13
Maybe Emmett and his bluntness will get her to talk.
Date: 23 Jul 2014 3:03 PM Title: Chapter 10
Should have known Renee had messed up her life.
Date: 23 Jul 2014 2:56 PM Title: Chapter 8
Don't worry about HEA Ed & Bella. If that happens fine if not fine. Why do they always have to wind up together? Some times that just does not happen.
BE STRONG and write Your story.
Date: 23 Jul 2014 2:51 PM Title: Chapter 7
so he has a somebody. So Bella is just the past and Tanya is his present, maybe his wife.
Date: 23 Jul 2014 2:27 PM Title: Chapter 5
Well she was married and where is he?
Date: 23 Jul 2014 2:22 PM Title: Chapter 4
I had Migraines when I was young. I could not stand light or anyone to touch me or loud noises. I had to lay perfectly still in a dark room. They just gave me pain medicine. I did not have them very often but when I did I was in bed for maybe a day.
Date: 23 Jul 2014 6:15 AM Title: Chapter 12
I LOVE THIS SOOO MUCH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! THANK YOU AND I LOVE YOU! CANT WAIT FOR MORE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
[Report This]Date: 23 Jul 2014 2:12 AM Title: Chapter 12
blown away
wow a senator and his wife very nasty piece of work both of them
phil is scum he needs to go down. i am glad bella and her mom got to mend fences but at what cost. how sad bella gave so much of herself and lost herself
jasper is a good guy. i like him and hope he will be around
charlie is an awesome dad
Date: 22 Jul 2014 8:30 PM Title: Chapter 12
Very interesting. I love Jasper
Date: 22 Jul 2014 6:02 PM Title: Chapter 12
wow, that explains a LOT! thanks for that, all at once! I have questions, but prefer to let the story explain itself. You're doing a great job with that!
Date: 22 Jul 2014 1:54 PM Title: Chapter 12
Oh wow that is a lot to take in. Phil is just evil and to sell her like she was a piece of furniture.
Date: 22 Jul 2014 12:11 PM Title: Chapter 12
Wow. That was a lot of information!
[Report This]Date: 22 Jul 2014 10:49 AM Title: Chapter 12
poor Bella. she has been through so much
[Report This]Date: 22 Jul 2014 4:10 AM Title: Chapter 11
i am dying to see what charlie says to jasper and what jasper says
still dying to here why bella left
baby steps
love it
[Report This]Date: 21 Jul 2014 8:51 PM Title: Chapter 11
:) just loving this.