Date: 18 May 2010 11:50 PM Title: Chapter 2: Of Corsets and Confusion
love this story!
Date: 18 May 2010 10:12 PM Title: Chapter 12: Of Scars and Sexual Frustration
:)
Author's Response:
:-)
Date: 18 May 2010 10:00 PM Title: Chapter 12: Of Scars and Sexual Frustration
lol Poor B. If Carlisle only knew..... and the control line had me LOL. I thought Bella would laugh when he said it as a human
Author's Response:
Glad you enjoyed it. ;-)
Date: 18 May 2010 9:49 PM Title: Chapter 12: Of Scars and Sexual Frustration
Her plan is starting to back fire. Carlisle is starting to like her and may not change her Edward when the time is needed unless of course she is totally hallunicating and not in the past in truth. The hope is that Alice or one of them realize they need to intervene with Eddiekins.
Author's Response:
Hmmm... you may be right. Of course, she doesn't want Carlisle to change him. Hope she knows what she's doing! LoL!
Thanks for reading!~
Date: 08 May 2010 4:55 PM Title: Chapter 11: Of Making Peace and Meeting the Parents
ROFLOL at Edward not playing the piano well and her thinking he'd be great at it in about 100 years :) I also loved that she was a little cocky with Ed Sr. and that he played with her.
I absolutely love this story. Thanks for the chapter :)
~Susan
Author's Response:
Yes, it appears Edward has quite a bit in common with his dad - both are strong-willed, but appreciate a woman who will stand up to them. :-)
Glad you liked the chap - thanks for R&R!
Date: 08 May 2010 12:50 AM Title: Chapter 10: Of Raspberry Jam and Rivalry
Okay, question answered. It was intentiona,I tend to chirp before giving any time for explanation.
Loving ur fic so far..xx
Author's Response:
So glad you're enjoying the story so far - hope you like where it goes from here.
Thanks for R&R! :-)
Date: 08 May 2010 12:37 AM Title: Chapter 9: Of Motor Cars and Making Friends
Mr. Cullen???? And he says nothing about this??? His last name is 'Masen' after all?? Typo???
Date: 08 May 2010 12:30 AM Title: Chapter 11: Of Making Peace and Meeting the Parents
Love it i'm so confused about what i want for her i not sure anymore can she just keep human edward and be happy **cries** and tell DR. C to back off edwards woman i mean ewwww man what is he thinking lol update soon
Author's Response:
Don't cry bb! :-) It'll be okay! As for Dr. C... he is a gentleman and won't push where he's not wanted... as for what he's thinking... *shrugs* We'll just have to wait and see!
Date: 08 May 2010 12:25 AM Title: Chapter 11: Of Making Peace and Meeting the Parents
OMG, I just loved this chapter! It was SO much fun. I abosolutely loved the piano in the sunroom and Edward being no so perfect! So freaking awesome!
Loved it!
Sarah
Author's Response:
So glad you enjoyed it - thanks for R&R!:-)
Date: 07 May 2010 10:42 PM Title: Chapter 11: Of Making Peace and Meeting the Parents
:)
Author's Response:
:)
Date: 07 May 2010 10:27 PM Title: Chapter 11: Of Making Peace and Meeting the Parents
Best Part:
“No!” I disagreed. “It was… great,” I enthused. “I’m sure it will be amazing with just a little more practice.”
Yeah. Like a hundred years or so.
Author's Response:
I didn't know Edward's poor piano playing would be so well-received! So glad you like it. :-)
Date: 07 May 2010 10:10 PM Title: Chapter 11: Of Making Peace and Meeting the Parents
Haha. I loved how you made Edward's musical talents below par. Keep up the good work. I can't wait for the next chapter.
Author's Response:
Thanks - so glad you liked it! :-)
Date: 07 May 2010 6:54 PM Title: Chapter 11: Of Making Peace and Meeting the Parents
Haha lol i can't believe he's terrible but i guess it's what to expect when he hasn't had 100 years to practice lol
Author's Response:
You're right! If I had 100 years to practice, I think I'd be a pretty good pianist myself! LoL!
[Report This]Date: 07 May 2010 6:34 PM Title: Chapter 11: Of Making Peace and Meeting the Parents
Ha ha :D I love that made him bad at playing the piano :D
That was totally unexpected :)
Author's Response:
Oh good! I like to be unexpected! :-)
Glad you enjoyed the chap - thanks for reading!
Date: 07 May 2010 5:57 PM Title: Chapter 11: Of Making Peace and Meeting the Parents
That was great loved that he was terrible at the piano
Author's Response:
Glad you liked it - thanks for reading! :-)
Date: 07 May 2010 5:41 PM Title: Chapter 11: Of Making Peace and Meeting the Parents
I so look forward to the updates on this story. I love the fact that E cant play the piano very well, I had a good laugh. Thank you, for another wonderful chapter.
Author's Response:
Thanks - I'm glad you liked it. And Edward just needs a little more practice. ;-)
Date: 30 Apr 2010 10:08 PM Title: Chapter 10: Of Raspberry Jam and Rivalry
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Hi there,
I must say I didn't expect to like this story this much because I read similar one (as basic idea) and they just didn't do it for me.
But your ideas are really interesting and captivate me! Though I have my suspicions regarding what might be happening in the future and what Bella might be messing up I am dying to hear it from you.
So, I am really glad I found it and thank you for writing so wonderful!
Lovebel xo
Author's Response:
Well, I'm so glad you gave it a try and that you're liking it so far.
Thanks for reading! :-)
Date: 30 Apr 2010 9:47 PM Title: Chapter 10: Of Raspberry Jam and Rivalry
:)
Author's Response:
:-)
Date: 30 Apr 2010 9:45 PM Title: Chapter 10: Of Raspberry Jam and Rivalry
Yay! An update! I told my BFF all about this story Wednesday night at church :)
I'm thinking Carlisle is developing feelings for Bella and that is changing the outcome of the future. And if she saves the Edward from 1918, the future is definitely changed and then Carlisle might not change anyone else. That is why the dreams are telling her she must choose. Am I right? :)
~Susan
Author's Response:
Thanks so much for spreading the word! :-)
I think you're right about Carlisle... as far as the impact on the future... who knows?
You don't really want me to tell you, do you? LoL!
[Report This]Date: 30 Apr 2010 8:51 PM Title: Chapter 10: Of Raspberry Jam and Rivalry
Love the chapter :)
Author's Response:
Thanks! :-)
Date: 30 Apr 2010 7:00 PM Title: Chapter 10: Of Raspberry Jam and Rivalry
Those dreams and visions of Bella's are getting a bit freaky lol. Hoep you update some more soon
Author's Response:
They are freaky aren't they? Poor Bella... LoL!
Thanks for reading!
Date: 30 Apr 2010 5:54 PM Title: Chapter 10: Of Raspberry Jam and Rivalry
ok you've got my attention.
Author's Response:
Glad to hear it... thanks for reading and reviewing! Hope you like where the story goes from here...
Date: 30 Apr 2010 5:45 PM Title: Chapter 9: Of Motor Cars and Making Friends
Ice cream is always appropriate.
Date: 30 Apr 2010 5:34 PM Title: Chapter 8: Of Butting Heads and Birthday Parties
sneaky man
Date: 30 Apr 2010 5:19 PM Title: Chapter 7: Of Movies, Lunch, & Samantha's Hunch
liking Samantha
Date: 30 Apr 2010 5:04 PM Title: Chapter 10: Of Raspberry Jam and Rivalry
you're gonna make me go nuts so she has to chose between staying in the past with that edward and being with future edward because i still think the crazy bitch is in the hospital on drugs but if this real why can't she choose past edward be happy and human together blahhhhh i'm nuts don't listen to me this is what u do to me its all your fault so ha u have to deal with it give me somethng a tiny clue so can maintane some shread of dignity and not go nuts over this like how nuts bella is and just help me understand
Author's Response:
Okay, a tiny clue? Hmmmm.... Bella is NOT crazy. Does that help? LoL! She'll talk about what she thinks about that dream in the next chapter... it did freak her out a bit...
Oh, and at this point she IS choosing the Edward from the past and plans to try and be happy and human together with him... how she accomplishes that will be the trick...
Thanks for reading! :-)
Date: 30 Apr 2010 4:07 PM Title: Chapter 4: Of Finding a Job and Formulating a Plan
lol messing with Carlisle....gotta love it.
Date: 30 Apr 2010 3:12 PM Title: Chapter 10: Of Raspberry Jam and Rivalry
well, there's a side of Carlisle I didn't expect.
Author's Response:
Hmmm... yes, I think Bella was surprised as well.
Date: 30 Apr 2010 2:42 PM Title: Chapter 10: Of Raspberry Jam and Rivalry
Seriously, I choose the wolves. :-)
Author's Response:
Really? Lol! Well THAT would be a completely different story! :-)
Date: 24 Apr 2010 4:25 PM Title: Chapter 5: Of Hanging Up and Hunting Down
love it
Author's Response:
Thank you - so glad you're enjoying the story so far! :-)
Date: 24 Apr 2010 4:06 PM Title: Chapter 4: Of Finding a Job and Formulating a Plan
Love it!
Date: 24 Apr 2010 4:01 PM Title: Chapter 3: Of Fainting and Familiar Faces
Dam!
Date: 24 Apr 2010 3:56 PM Title: Chapter 2: Of Corsets and Confusion
Love it!
Date: 24 Apr 2010 3:51 PM Title: Chapter 1: Of Rituals and Really Big D***s
love it!
[Report This]Date: 24 Apr 2010 3:49 PM Title: Prologue: Of Warm Skin and Wishful Thinking
Great
Date: 23 Apr 2010 10:25 PM Title: Chapter 9: Of Motor Cars and Making Friends
Boohoo. I'm at the last chapter you have posted. I like the realization that Bella had in this chapter...that she was seeing an Edward she's never seen...young and carefree. She fell in love with the old soul originally. Now, she's falling in love with the young boy. Question is, which does she want more? I'm still curious about Alice ;0)
I can't wait to see where this goes. Thanks for writing this.
~Susan
Author's Response:
Thanks so much for reading and all of your wonderful reviews. I'm glad you're enjoying the characters and what's happened so far. Your questions are good ones, but I can't really answer them at the moment without ruining the story! :-) I will offer you this... don't freak out! ;-) Lol!
Date: 23 Apr 2010 10:02 PM Title: Chapter 8: Of Butting Heads and Birthday Parties
So, I've been thinking. Alice keeps telling her she needs to come back. Is that cause she's messing up the future by being there and Edward falling in love with her then? He won't turn into a vamp and won't join the Cullen family and blah blah blah? Please tell me you do HEAs. I'm kinda freaking out right now LOL
~Susan
Date: 23 Apr 2010 9:32 PM Title: Chapter 7: Of Movies, Lunch, & Samantha's Hunch
I'm home. I've thought about this all day long LOL I do like Samantha and I'm glad she's going to help Bella and Edward get together. How funny that Samantha would pick up on the fact that Edward can't read Bella. I bet Bella was dying there LOL
~Susan
Date: 23 Apr 2010 1:56 PM Title: Chapter 9: Of Motor Cars and Making Friends
Nice chapter.
Author's Response:
Thank you - glad you liked it! :-)
Date: 23 Apr 2010 1:43 PM Title: Chapter 9: Of Motor Cars and Making Friends
i'm reading quite a few stories at the moment, but this one is my favorite!!!! Are we going to get maybe Alice's POV at some time and see what's going on in the present? :)
Author's Response:
Thanks so much - I'm glad you're liking it. Alice POV? Hmmm... not at the moment. This is Bella's story and we'll have to see it from her viewpoint for the time being.
Date: 23 Apr 2010 1:28 PM Title: Chapter 6: Of Sunday Picnics and Shattered Expectations
Oh. My. God. That was hilarious...the sack race...
It was like the coordination gods looked down and said, “She can’t do anything else, but the sack race… okay, we’ll give her that.”
I nearly choked laughing so hard. And now I'm sad cause I have to go teach. Maybe I can find some time during the day to sneak back here LOL
~Susan
Date: 23 Apr 2010 1:07 PM Title: Chapter 5: Of Hanging Up and Hunting Down
She's there!!!! Will she be able to convince him to leave town with her? I don't think he's going to be that easily swayed.
Can I tell you how much I am loving this story? You're doing a great job with it.
~Susan
Date: 23 Apr 2010 12:42 PM Title: Chapter 4: Of Finding a Job and Formulating a Plan
So Carlisle and Bella are working together now. I like that. He's got a great personality. The hunting comments were funny.
~Susan
Date: 23 Apr 2010 11:58 AM Title: Chapter 3: Of Fainting and Familiar Faces
YAY! She met Carlisle. I see a wonderful friendship there. I'm thinking she will eventually tell him what she knows and that Carlisle can change her too and then she and Edward can be together with no problems :)
~Susan
Date: 23 Apr 2010 11:41 AM Title: Chapter 2: Of Corsets and Confusion
Ok, I thought I loved Bella in this story. I did (and still do). However, I love Maggie even more...with her "wishful thinking" That was great. I've wished that before too ;0)
~Susan
Date: 23 Apr 2010 11:09 AM Title: Chapter 1: Of Rituals and Really Big D***s
I like your Bella. She's a little sassy and really funny. Please tell me though, that her finding Edward in the past is not just a hallucination.
~Susan
Date: 23 Apr 2010 10:58 AM Title: Chapter 9: Of Motor Cars and Making Friends
OH MY GOD! She called him Mr. Cullen instead of Mr. Masen. WTF! Did she forget that she was in 1918 and he was still the human son of Elizabeth and Edward Masen Sr. and not the vampire son of Esme and Dr. Carlisle Cullen? Oh wow I can't wait to see what he says to her Freudian slip. She has already made a couple of comments and slipped up a few times. I sure hope that she can fix this. Bella is kind of an idiot when you think about it. *huffs and shakes head* I sure hope that it isn't for some stupid reasoning like ' if i save him now in the past and he stays human and i am already here then we can be together.' That's crap! She was born in the future so what happens when she saves Edward and she disappears? Or better yet she is forced back to the future and there is no Edward to meet because she saved him in the past? I really hope and pray that she would not be that stupid. If she is then she is royally screwed and Alice needs to show up and beat her human ass lol. Great chapter can't wait til the next update.
Author's Response:
Bella did have a little slip of the tongue there, didn't she? Oh, Bella! *shaking head* What are you going to do now? Lol!
Your questions about Bella's plan are valid... and she is thinking about that... she'll be trying to explain herself a little better in the next few chapters, so hopefully even if you don't agree with her, you'll understand where she's coming from. :-)
Thanks for R&R!
Date: 23 Apr 2010 3:53 AM Title: Prologue: Of Warm Skin and Wishful Thinking
noooo. He doesn't know her? How did she get there? How on earth will she get him to fall in love with her? I know, you're thinking, you have to read some more ;0)
~Susan
[Report This]Date: 23 Apr 2010 12:20 AM Title: Chapter 9: Of Motor Cars and Making Friends
I can't even begin to say how much I loved this chapter! Their whole banter after the sack race... I was smiling, then chuckling, then at: “You’re not a freak dear. Calm down,” I was LMAO! The kiss was so hot, it made my girly bits twitch. lol.
Then, it ended on such a beautiful note: And my heart flipped. Because in that moment, I saw an Edward I’d never seen before. I was swooning with that whole explanation, it was so wonderfully done!
I'm not worrying about the whole messing up time thing, though I've wondered about it - I trust whatever you bring us to be great, because if what you've already given us is any indication, it's going to be amaaaaazing!
Loved the little detail of the faint smell of lavander being in the air after Alice disapeared. I'm wondering now if it's a spell Alice is using to comunicate with Bella. You sure know how to keep it interesting!
I think this may have been my favourite chapter to date. Yeah, the kissing may have had something to do with it, but... OH! Her saying she liked it - classic!!! I laughed, I swooned, I got turned on... yeah, great chapter, I'd say! :D
Next, going to check out All Aboard! ;)
Author's Response:
"I laughed, I swooned, I got turned on... " - well, then my work here is done! Lol!
So glad you liked the chapter... and that you're willing to give Bella the benefit of the doubt when it comes to the whole "Is she messing things up?" question.. I do have a plan, and hopefully you'll like where it goes from here.
Thanks for your great review! :-)
Date: 22 Apr 2010 10:07 PM Title: Chapter 9: Of Motor Cars and Making Friends
:)
Date: 22 Apr 2010 9:57 PM Title: Chapter 9: Of Motor Cars and Making Friends
That bitch is crazy is what she is she's going to mess around an erase Edward and the future even if she stays in the past with him what will she do if he dies another why and carlisie doesn't save him then what smarty hell both her and edward are nuts she might just off her self if that happens
Author's Response:
Well she could very well mess things up... but she has her reasons for trying. She'll be trying to explain herself in the next few chapters.
Thanks for R&R! :-)
[Report This]Date: 22 Apr 2010 7:02 PM Title: Chapter 9: Of Motor Cars and Making Friends
LOVE it sooooooooooo much
Author's Response:
So glad - thank you! :-)
Date: 22 Apr 2010 6:09 PM Title: Chapter 9: Of Motor Cars and Making Friends
I've gotta wonder if she's just going to tell him "I love you" on accident at some point. I know she's just bursting with it.
Author's Response:
Hmmm... that might freak him out a bit, wouldn't it? She better keep control of herself! LoL!
[Report This]Date: 19 Apr 2010 2:56 PM Title: Chapter 8: Of Butting Heads and Birthday Parties
LOVE it sooooooooooooooo much :)
Author's Response:
Thank you! :-)
Date: 18 Apr 2010 8:08 PM Title: Chapter 4: Of Finding a Job and Formulating a Plan
Oooohhhhh....we're getting closer? I can't wait to meet this edward....
Author's Response:
Heeeeyyyy!!! :-) Thanks for reading... yep - she's getting closer to Edward! :-)
Date: 18 Apr 2010 7:50 PM Title: Chapter 3: Of Fainting and Familiar Faces
Told u I would read! Mmmmmmm edward dream sex. It was funny when she was trying to figure out the date in the beginning.
Ok. Love u.
Date: 17 Apr 2010 5:55 PM Title: Chapter 8: Of Butting Heads and Birthday Parties
LMFAO she always does what she says she wont first she wasn't gonna faint and she did and then she wasn't gonna go down and well she did
Author's Response:
Lol! You're right! Poor Bella... :-)
[Report This]Date: 17 Apr 2010 5:20 PM Title: Chapter 8: Of Butting Heads and Birthday Parties
what?! a hanger?!?! ans this big?!
but oh it is getting better :)
whats going on with alice? how is she getting ahold of bella?
Author's Response:
Sorry! Had to end it there! :-)
As for Alice... can't tell you much... but all will be explained in time...
Thanks for reading!
Date: 17 Apr 2010 4:26 AM Title: Chapter 8: Of Butting Heads and Birthday Parties
This story is absolutely FANTASTIC!!! Just loving it but wondering about Alice and why she is seeing her...also I just wish she would tell Carlisle everything!! AGH! Can't wait for more!
Author's Response:
Glad you're enjoying it! Hmmm... lots of theories about Alice. It will be explained, but not for a little while. As for Carlisle, well, Bella has her reasons for keeping things to herself for now.
Thanks for reading and reviewing! :-)
Date: 17 Apr 2010 1:29 AM Title: Chapter 8: Of Butting Heads and Birthday Parties
Loved to!! I just love their banter! There is a fine line between love and hate!!!
Sarah
Author's Response:
Yes there is... and they're walking right on it, aren't they?
Glad you liked it - thanks for R&R!
Date: 17 Apr 2010 12:13 AM Title: Chapter 8: Of Butting Heads and Birthday Parties
:) go bella.....
Author's Response:
:-) She's trying...
Date: 16 Apr 2010 9:33 PM Title: Chapter 8: Of Butting Heads and Birthday Parties
Ha ha. That was so wrong Edward! If he wasn't serious that's just hurtful.
Author's Response:
That Edward is a dirty cheater, isn't he? We'll see how Bella handles this little surprise in the next chapter.
Thanks for reading! :-)
Date: 16 Apr 2010 8:36 PM Title: Chapter 4: Of Finding a Job and Formulating a Plan
This story is absolutely brilliant!!! What an original idea and I am so enjoying it! Loved that she found Carlisle and their wonderful interaction so far and can not wait to see where you go next!!
Author's Response:
So glad you're enjoying it so far! :-) Thanks for reading!
Date: 16 Apr 2010 7:32 PM Title: Prologue: Of Warm Skin and Wishful Thinking
WOW! I have looked at this story pop up in the recent list several times and finally decided to take a look. Just with that brief introduction I am wondering why I waited so damn long! Must read more!
Date: 10 Apr 2010 11:00 PM Title: Chapter 7: Of Movies, Lunch, & Samantha's Hunch
so you still want tell me if bella bat shit crazy and dreaming this all up n/m don't tell me i gonna believe thats what going on in my head any way so why does she only hear alice voice does edward not know yet is she trying to get her back before edward finds out plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz tell me i beg i will i will
Author's Response:
Don't beg! :-) There is a reason she's hearing Alice's voice... and all will be explained, but not for a little while yet. Sorry! :-)
Date: 10 Apr 2010 10:31 PM Title: Chapter 6: Of Sunday Picnics and Shattered Expectations
Lmao i wish she would have slapped him that would have been nice
Author's Response:
Hmmm... she probably thought about it, but in general Bella's not really violent! :-)
Thanks for reading!
[Report This]Date: 10 Apr 2010 4:46 PM Title: Chapter 6: Of Sunday Picnics and Shattered Expectations
Love it :D
Date: 10 Apr 2010 11:19 AM Title: Chapter 6: Of Sunday Picnics and Shattered Expectations
:)
Date: 10 Apr 2010 11:17 AM Title: Chapter 7: Of Movies, Lunch, & Samantha's Hunch
Loved it! I'm so captivated by this! Can't wait for more!
Sarah
Author's Response:
Thanks so much - I'm glad you're enjoying it!
Date: 10 Apr 2010 7:48 AM Title: Chapter 7: Of Movies, Lunch, & Samantha's Hunch
Oh boy! I hope that Bella's meddling doesnt screw up her future too much. would there be an Alice POV or is that part of the mystery to be solved later on? or maybe a Calrlisle POV, update soon =)
Author's Response:
Just BPOV at this point - after all, how could the others have a POV if this is all in her mind? Not that I'm saying it is... or it isn't! :-)
I promise, all the questions will be answered by the time we get to the end... Thanks for reading!
Date: 10 Apr 2010 7:20 AM Title: Chapter 6: Of Sunday Picnics and Shattered Expectations
love it, their banther (sp?) is so funny.
Author's Response:
Thanks - glad you're enjoying it. They're getting on each other's nerves a bit so far... *shrugs* but I'm sure they'll figure things out! :-)
Date: 10 Apr 2010 5:36 AM Title: Chapter 7: Of Movies, Lunch, & Samantha's Hunch
umm ok so I'm not the only person, I thought I was losing it, I was going back and forth between this chapter and the last one making sure I didn't miss something, but it did jump from seeing Edward outside to going to a movie, so I'm not sure what happened to chapter 6 but its not there. Like the other person I read the chapter anyway cause I love the story and would read anything even if it doesn't make sense due to a missed chapter. Great job awesome story....hopefully get to read missing chapter. Can't wait for the next update!!!!!
Author's Response:
Sorry about that - don't know what happened to Chapter 6 - it disappeared on me!
Anyway, it should be there now if you want to check it out. Thanks for reading - and sorry for the mixup!
Date: 10 Apr 2010 5:26 AM Title: Chapter 7: Of Movies, Lunch, & Samantha's Hunch
the chapter jumped from bella seeing edward out the front of his house, then the next chapter they were meeting at the movies... did I miss something? I still read it, even if there was a bit missing, great chapter, looking forward to the next update!
Author's Response:
So sorry... Chapter 6 disappeared on me! Grrr... it's there now, so if you'd like to figure out what you missed, check it out!
Sorry for the mixup!
Date: 28 Mar 2010 1:17 AM Title: Chapter 5: Of Hanging Up and Hunting Down
YES!! I've found you Shovelward!!! I'm so excited!!I can't wait to read the next chapter. This story is so good. Ungh! What;s the deal with Carlisle? Is he hot for Bella? oh my!! Can't wait to find out.
Author's Response:
Wow! I run out for a bit and you've read the whole story - and reviewed on two sites! Lol!
Glad you're liking it so far... Alice is a cockblocker - isn't that canon? Lol! As for Carlisle... we'll just have to wait and see! ;-)
Thanks for reviewing! Mwah! See you on Twitter!
Date: 28 Mar 2010 12:58 AM Title: Chapter 4: Of Finding a Job and Formulating a Plan
Yay!! We've found Edward!!! I love all the teasing that Bella and Carlisle are doing. Love that he's got such a great sense of humor. I really like your Bella alot.
Date: 28 Mar 2010 12:43 AM Title: Chapter 3: Of Fainting and Familiar Faces
Darn you Alice and your cockblocking way..lol. GREAT chapter! I loved Carlisle. Will she see him again? I must read on. Where are you Edward?
Date: 28 Mar 2010 12:26 AM Title: Chapter 2: Of Corsets and Confusion
Soooooo good! I can't wait for her to find Edward.. That locker scene was DELICIOUS!! YUM!! I'm so loving this story.
Date: 28 Mar 2010 12:15 AM Title: Chapter 1: Of Rituals and Really Big D***s
This story is pure genius!! I am so hooked. I have to go find out what happens next. No time to spare. I loved Jakes vision. So freakin funny. I already like your Bella. I'm usually catty when it comes to Bella's. lol. They always annoy me. I can tell your Bella ROCKS! I'm so excited! Still looking for Shovelward.. lol.
Date: 27 Mar 2010 2:10 AM Title: Chapter 5: Of Hanging Up and Hunting Down
so i wondering if all this is real or is she in the hospital somewhere unconscious and thinking this is all real is that why she hears alice talking in here ear you can tell me you know it would be r little secert :)
Author's Response:
That appears to be an ongoing debate among the readers... and Bella's not a hundred percent sure herself, at the moment. Guess we'll have to just wait and see... :-)
Date: 26 Mar 2010 11:42 PM Title: Chapter 5: Of Hanging Up and Hunting Down
NOOO not a cliffy.....please update soon
Author's Response:
Not too much of a cliffie... what happened in the Prologue is next... as for what happens after that, the next chapter will be posted soon! :-)
Thanks for reading!
Date: 26 Mar 2010 10:39 PM Title: Chapter 5: Of Hanging Up and Hunting Down
Ooooh noo don't stop there!!! The suspense is too much! A sweaty Edward? I can't wait for more!
Author's Response:
Can't go wrong with a sweaty Edward, right? Lol!
Won't have to wait long... I'm trying to update once a week. *fingers crossed* Hope you like where it goes from here...
Date: 26 Mar 2010 8:38 PM Title: Chapter 5: Of Hanging Up and Hunting Down
Loved the chapter.
Author's Response:
Thank you! :-)
Date: 26 Mar 2010 7:42 PM Title: Chapter 5: Of Hanging Up and Hunting Down
Good chapter I can't wait to read what happens next.
Author's Response:
Thanks so much - next chapter should be up soon... trying to update once a week. *fingers crossed*
Date: 26 Mar 2010 3:09 PM Title: Chapter 5: Of Hanging Up and Hunting Down
okay this is crazy...Alice??? So maybe Bella blacked out? I have so many theories but no answers....hmmm i guess I'll just keep on reading :)
Author's Response:
Yes... yes... please keep on reading! LoL!
Date: 22 Mar 2010 11:24 PM Title: Chapter 4: Of Finding a Job and Formulating a Plan
Oh you had me cracking up all through this. B and Dr C are hilarious together!
"Did women shave their legs in 1918? I didn’t care. I was going to." - pure class!
"Eeww. I mean, I liked Carlisle but he was like… Edward’s dad… gross!" - lol I wouldn't say no to Dr C.
"I didn’t want to turn Carlisle into a Crack Whore." - I now have this completely insane image of Carlisle as a crack whore, thats a new one!
Love this fic, and we haven't even gotten to E and B action yet!
Author's Response:
Thanks so much for reading - and for reviewing every chapter! :-)
Glad you're enjoying the story so far... I have to agree about Carlisle - I wouldn't say no either! (yum!) He's always been a fave character of mine, so I'm having fun writing these scenes between B&C.
B&E action is coming soon... just around the corner, I promise! :-) Hope you like it!
Date: 22 Mar 2010 11:05 PM Title: Chapter 3: Of Fainting and Familiar Faces
Brilliant chap. Dr C is a gem, I love his sarcastic/quirky side.
"...willing Edward to walk in and take me against the wall… or maybe that nurse’s desk. I eyed it speculatively." - hilarious.
Fic is progressing very nicely!
P.s. Pretty sure Alice has a knack for interrupting any steamy E&B moments...tie bondage, lovely!
Date: 22 Mar 2010 10:47 PM Title: Chapter 2: Of Corsets and Confusion
Lucky girl, orgasmic Edward dreams...who could want more?! Bless that Tom, he reminds me of a certain Mike Newton...with golden retriver qualities.
Look forward to some E (preferably in some swanky ass sex on legs clothing) and B action :D
Date: 22 Mar 2010 10:19 PM Title: Chapter 1: Of Rituals and Really Big D***s
Oooooh love it! I nearly choked on my coffee with the giant dick reference...hilarious!
Now, on to the next chapter!
Date: 22 Mar 2010 8:46 PM Title: Prologue: Of Warm Skin and Wishful Thinking
I just discovered this fic, and I must say, I like it so far! Very sweet - always nice to find an original fic for a change!
Date: 22 Mar 2010 1:47 AM Title: Prologue: Of Warm Skin and Wishful Thinking
Ch 5.
I wish she could tell Carlisle everything I mean she is about to meet human Edward that should have consequenses enough. I wonder if "current" Carlisle is remebering anything of what has happen in the past with Bella while is happeing. Please update soon =)
Author's Response:
You're not alone in wanting her to confide in Carlisle... it's something Bella will continue to deal with. As for what present time Carlisle thinks and/or remembers... we'll just have to wait and see! :-)
Thanks for your review!
Date: 21 Mar 2010 6:40 PM Title: Chapter 3: Of Fainting and Familiar Faces
i wish she would have told Carlile more or everything since she knows she can trust him.
Author's Response:
She has her reasons... more to come on this topic in future chapters...
Thanks for reading!
Date: 21 Mar 2010 6:34 PM Title: Chapter 4: Of Finding a Job and Formulating a Plan
:)
Date: 21 Mar 2010 6:24 PM Title: Chapter 4: Of Finding a Job and Formulating a Plan
lmao this chapter was funny and fun and just amazing i loved bella trying to explain to carlisle why she couldn't tell him everything she knew itz was too adorable i can't wait to see how this story goes so far i'm loving it
Author's Response:
Glad you liked it - thanks so much for reading and reviewing!
Date: 21 Mar 2010 4:45 PM Title: Chapter 4: Of Finding a Job and Formulating a Plan
Your story is good so far.
Author's Response:
I'm glad you're liking it - thanks for reading!
Date: 21 Mar 2010 3:26 PM Title: Prologue: Of Warm Skin and Wishful Thinking
enjoying the story can't wait to see how it progresses
Author's Response:
Thanks for reading and reviewing - hope you like where it goes from here...
Date: 21 Mar 2010 2:16 PM Title: Chapter 4: Of Finding a Job and Formulating a Plan
This is a fantastic story, deffinately one of my favourites. Can't wait for the next update!!
Author's Response:
Thanks so much - glad you're enjoying it!
Date: 21 Mar 2010 12:58 PM Title: Chapter 4: Of Finding a Job and Formulating a Plan
I love Bella's interactions with Carlisle. It's fabulous for her to be working with him. Looking forward to your next and getting closer to meeting Edward.
Author's Response:
She's getting veeerrryyyy close to meeting Edward.. won't say when, but it's coming soon.
Glad you're liking the B&C relationship - I'm having fun writing it.
Thanks for your review!
Date: 21 Mar 2010 11:45 AM Title: Chapter 4: Of Finding a Job and Formulating a Plan
Great story. ill just stay put and wait on the next chapter. Keep up the good work!
Author's Response:
Thanks for reading and reviewing - glad you're liking it so far. Updates should come about weekly from here on out, pending writer's block or something equally frustrating! :-)
[Report This]Date: 21 Mar 2010 10:15 AM Title: Chapter 4: Of Finding a Job and Formulating a Plan
"I frowned at my legs and decided to add a razor to my ever-growing shopping list. Did women shave their legs in 1918? I didn’t care. I was going to." <----Great humor!
"Sometimes it was really fun messing with a vampire… at least when you were sure he wasn’t going to kill you." <----Great!
"I didn’t want to turn Carlisle into a Crack Whore." <---- Nearly spurt water over the monitor! Loved all the convo with C again. I would never have guessed this fic would be so entertaining when I had first clicked on it out of interest. I almost wish this is where SM went with New Moon! Loving every update, and I love how vampire speedy you are with those!
<3 Belinda.
Author's Response:
Thanks so much! I'm glad you liked it. I'm enjoying the interaction between B&C myself... of course, I've always been a Carlisle fan! ;-)
Thanks again for reading and reviewing!
[Report This]Date: 16 Mar 2010 8:40 PM Title: Chapter 3: Of Fainting and Familiar Faces
Like it a lot :)
Author's Response:
Glad you're liking it so far - next chapter should be up soon.