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Reviewer: romance4me2 Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Jan 2014 9:50 PM Title: Chapter 44

Lord have mercy. And my husband has the flu. Not. Fair.

Reviewer: tff Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Jan 2014 7:53 AM Title: Chapter 43

=)

Reviewer: 2mpix Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Jan 2014 7:18 AM Title: Chapter 43

Edward is never going to let her go! It will be so interesting when jealousy comes into play.  Who will admit their feelings first?  

Reviewer: Lud Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 28 Jan 2014 10:50 PM Title: Chapter 43

WOW girl! These two can not keep his hands to each other. I do not know how Bella can get without kissing, she will end up kissing.
I'm so excited to see them interacting with the family.

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Jan 2014 10:33 PM Title: Chapter 43

oooh they are in so deep already they just don't know it yet.  Alice is really being annoying.

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Jan 2014 9:46 PM Title: Chapter 43

I want one of him please lol

Reviewer: NeNee246 Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Jan 2014 9:42 PM Title: Chapter 43

I love this!! :)

Reviewer: jupiter2005 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 28 Jan 2014 8:22 PM Title: Chapter 43

talk about a starving man lol. at least they get to have all the pleasure they are cravin but in the end it always backfires when someone falls for the other. keep up the good work

Reviewer: romance4me2 Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Jan 2014 8:16 PM Title: Chapter 43

This Edward is THE MAN!

Reviewer: LadyAngel Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Jan 2014 8:00 PM Title: Chapter 16

Drop Rosalie, add me, eveyone will love me and I will make beautiful babies!

Reviewer: sonogal Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Jan 2014 7:57 PM Title: Chapter 43

How could you not want to kiss Edward? Bella and her stupid rules. Edward is not a stranger. It is already personal.

Reviewer: Robsfan Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Jan 2014 7:15 PM Title: Chapter 43

Hopefully they figure out they are MFE

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 28 Jan 2014 6:42 PM Title: Chapter 43

:)

Reviewer: Twifan1228 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 28 Jan 2014 6:39 PM Title: Chapter 43

Oh, yeah!    Big smiles!

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Jan 2014 6:16 PM Title: Chapter 43

Looking forward to the next chapter

Reviewer: amcullen Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Jan 2014 5:53 PM Title: Chapter 43

Loved it :)

Reviewer: Banshee69 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 28 Jan 2014 5:32 PM Title: Chapter 43

The not kissing rule needs chucked out the window. Bella is foolish to think not kissing Edward will detour any feelings from arising. Getting it on a daily basis... they're gonna be sex addicts before long.

Reviewer: landaday1 Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Jan 2014 5:31 PM Title: Chapter 43

Great read, on our snow day! More please!

Reviewer: ThatsMzPeachesTYVM Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Jan 2014 5:07 PM Title: Chapter 43

Yeah, and they both think that not kissing is
actually going to keep the emotions at bay??
PFTTT!!

Reviewer: KCLutz4475 Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 28 Jan 2014 12:55 PM Title: Chapter 42

Hell yes !!!!!

Reviewer: tff Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Jan 2014 8:13 AM Title: Chapter 42

=)

Reviewer: Banshee69 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 28 Jan 2014 8:09 AM Title: Chapter 42

Holy hell... there's no stopping them now.

Reviewer: NeNee246 Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Jan 2014 3:53 AM Title: Chapter 42

HOLY OH MY WOW!! *giggles*
I love this! :)

Reviewer: pamspastime Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Jan 2014 3:17 AM Title: Chapter 42

HOT !!!!! Can't wait for next update :))))

Reviewer: Louise Clark Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 28 Jan 2014 12:56 AM Title: Chapter 42

BWAHAHAHAHAHA!! Love it!

Reviewer: Veronique24 Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 27 Jan 2014 11:30 PM Title: Chapter 42

Great chapter!

I wonder how long it will take for theyre FWB to excalade to more?

Reviewer: Veronique24 Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 27 Jan 2014 10:56 PM Title: Chapter 40

Great chapter! Loved that she didn't play fair.

Reviewer: robstenize Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Jan 2014 9:53 PM Title: Chapter 42

love it, cant wait for more :)!

Reviewer: sonogal Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Jan 2014 8:09 PM Title: Chapter 42

I hope they hurry up and realize that this is not just sex. It wouldn't be so good or unforgettable if it was.

Reviewer: bookreader2 Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Jan 2014 8:06 PM Title: Chapter 42

Some pull the alarm i smell smoke

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 27 Jan 2014 8:04 PM Title: Chapter 42

:)

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Jan 2014 8:01 PM Title: Chapter 42

They cant stop thinking about each other love it

Reviewer: Twifan1228 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 27 Jan 2014 8:00 PM Title: Chapter 42

I love it

Reviewer: Drmeow Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Jan 2014 7:36 PM Title: Chapter 42

Love you for the update

Reviewer: PetralouiseSahriSahri Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Jan 2014 6:57 PM Title: Chapter 42

So fucken HOT need More kinky lovin

Reviewer: Robsfan Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Jan 2014 6:30 PM Title: Chapter 42

Haha!! she forgot FWB for a second.

Reviewer: romance4me2 Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Jan 2014 6:02 PM Title: Chapter 42

LOVED it!

Reviewer: 2mpix Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Jan 2014 5:51 PM Title: Chapter 42

And kudos to you bc you are one of the best writers, when giving us readers, smut at it's finest!

Reviewer: 2mpix Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Jan 2014 5:38 PM Title: Chapter 40

He is just so smitten with her! There denial for each other is so good!

Reviewer: 2mpix Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Jan 2014 5:32 PM Title: Chapter 39

Bella brought out the big guns!

Reviewer: amcullen Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Jan 2014 5:24 PM Title: Chapter 42

Loved it :)

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Jan 2014 5:19 PM Title: Chapter 42

Looking forward to the next chapter

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Jan 2014 5:17 PM Title: Chapter 42

oh they are both in so deep.  

Reviewer: ThatsMzPeachesTYVM Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Jan 2014 5:11 PM Title: Chapter 42

Neither of them are going tawny anybody else.

what would be the point?! 

Reviewer: sonogal Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Jan 2014 4:34 PM Title: Chapter 41

Edward definately needs to check out Rosalie. I think if Edward actually went on a date with a girl Bella would be jealous. She got a taste now and I don't think she is one to share.

Reviewer: sonogal Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Jan 2014 4:30 PM Title: Chapter 40

I love Edward; bella not so much.

Reviewer: sonogal Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Jan 2014 4:26 PM Title: Chapter 39

I think Bella's rules stink. They should just see how it goes. They can keep it quiet, but they should not put a cage on their hearts.

Reviewer: Banshee69 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 27 Jan 2014 1:58 PM Title: Chapter 41

I'm even more concerned about Rosalie now. Can hardly wait to see if she has her eyes on Edward.

I liked Jasper telling Bella she was in denial, and Alice sending the wedding dress picture texts.

Reviewer: Banshee69 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 27 Jan 2014 1:45 PM Title: Chapter 40

Your AN makes me think Edward is gonna get hurt at some point. But for the moment... Hell yeah! Sexy times is a go.

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 27 Jan 2014 6:43 AM Title: Chapter 41

:)

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 27 Jan 2014 6:39 AM Title: Chapter 40

:)

Reviewer: Lud Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 27 Jan 2014 4:16 AM Title: Chapter 41

I'm afraid of Rosalie now! Alice will realize that things have changed so she sees Edward and Bella.

Reviewer: purpleclamkk Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Jan 2014 4:14 AM Title: Chapter 41

What's HEA?

Reviewer: jupiter2005 Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Jan 2014 3:59 AM Title: Chapter 41

ok i just got lost lol. first they are in her room getting it on with him going down on her and then shows her and jasper at school doing lunch. thats funny. but i am glad that they are going to try to do this friends with benefits thing but in the end someone will be hurt or very happy. keep up the good work

Reviewer: Lud Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 27 Jan 2014 3:58 AM Title: Chapter 40

YES! He accepted, Bella did not play clean, but I forgive because Bella in love and war, anything goes!

Reviewer: Iteachu4600 Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Jan 2014 1:37 AM Title: Chapter 41

Rosalie the gold digger? So there's even more reason to hate her. 

Reviewer: madyson222 Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Jan 2014 1:17 AM Title: Chapter 41

love the role reversal

and appreciate a strong female who doesnt let feelings get in the way

but then again absolutly adore an oblivious Edward

 

thx for the consisent updates

smooches

Reviewer: amcullen Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Jan 2014 8:13 PM Title: Chapter 41

Loved it :)

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Jan 2014 8:05 PM Title: Chapter 41

Rose is an evil bitch that is why and how

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Jan 2014 8:00 PM Title: Chapter 40

Thank god he got in there

Reviewer: rclaurel3 Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Jan 2014 7:43 PM Title: Chapter 41

Why is Bella so against being in a real relationship

Author's Response:

She just got out of a three year relationship with Paul, the hipster douche canoe. She wants to be Bella. Not someone's girlfriend. Yes, she's being slightly selfish but...Edward's willing. 

Reviewer: LaPumuckl Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Jan 2014 7:40 PM Title: Chapter 40

I love that she admitted whole heartedly to not playing fair;)

Reviewer: tff Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Jan 2014 7:23 PM Title: Chapter 41

good

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Jan 2014 7:18 PM Title: Chapter 41

Looking forward to the

Reviewer: Twifan1228 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 26 Jan 2014 6:41 PM Title: Chapter 41

Love, love this story

Reviewer: GrandeDame Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 26 Jan 2014 6:37 PM Title: Chapter 40

Bella is like the devil on Edward's shoulder, only instead of prodding him with her little pitchfork, she prodded him with the sound of her vibrator! LMAO She even admitted to being evil...not playing fair. LOL

I just can't believe that Edward agreed to all of her stupid terms. That surprised me, & not in a good way. :( I know he wasn't exactly thinking straight though. LOL He should've at least negotiated some things for himself instead of letting her call all the shots. :( She should've at least asked him what he wanted/expected, too!

I must say once more that I really don't care for Bella. I think she's extremely weird & cold, & I have a bad feeling that she's only going to hurt Edward. :( She's extremely selfish, & she's only using him....her "best friend & brother" that she supposedly "loves". NOT! :(

Reviewer: romance4me2 Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Jan 2014 6:37 PM Title: Chapter 41

Wow, no transitioning us slowly back to the real world...I was hoping for more benefits. ;) Have to wait until next time. Thanks for the update!

Reviewer: Twifan1228 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 26 Jan 2014 6:35 PM Title: Chapter 40

I knew he would break and come to his senses!  or at least sample the goods again!   *evil smirk*  such a good storyline! 

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Jan 2014 6:32 PM Title: Chapter 41

Should have know Alice wouldn't let it go.  hmm Rose is up to something.

Reviewer: ThatsMzPeachesTYVM Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Jan 2014 6:31 PM Title: Chapter 41

Rose is an evil, money grubbing bitch, and turning her 
blue was too good for her. I can't wait for Emmett to 
hook up with someone more worthy his time. Someone
who he can love for who they are, not put up with for 
their sexual prowess.

Reviewer: NeNee246 Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Jan 2014 6:30 PM Title: Chapter 41

Oh boy! I can't wait for more of that story!! This is great! :)

Reviewer: ThatsMzPeachesTYVM Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Jan 2014 6:15 PM Title: Chapter 40

Edward wants a connection, even if he doesn't want to acknowledge it yet.

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Jan 2014 6:06 PM Title: Chapter 40

ROFL for B not pplaing fair.   Go get her mr Angry.  lol

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Reviewer: Suzanne Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Jan 2014 5:56 PM Title: Chapter 40

Love this as always!

Reviewer: romance4me2 Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Jan 2014 5:53 PM Title: Chapter 40

Hopefully they will reconsider when they realize that they have become more "benefits" than friends. The sex is so hot, it's going to take over.

Reviewer: NeNee246 Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Jan 2014 5:45 PM Title: Chapter 40

FANTASTIC! :)

Reviewer: tff Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Jan 2014 5:41 PM Title: Chapter 40

=)

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Jan 2014 1:39 PM Title: Chapter 39

Looking forward to the next chapter

Reviewer: 2mpix Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Jan 2014 2:52 AM Title: Chapter 38

I love that Edward is slow to jump into this situation!  Granted I want him to rule out number one.  Bella wants friends with benefits badly she would let rule number one go w/o. Fight I think. 

Reviewer: tff Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Jan 2014 6:05 PM Title: Chapter 39

=)

Reviewer: Robsfan Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Jan 2014 5:49 PM Title: Chapter 39

He needs to go in her room and give her the dzy!

Reviewer: Jlynn W Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 25 Jan 2014 5:27 PM Title: Chapter 39

You definitely have talent, I couldn't stop reading until the last chapter! I can hardly wait until the next! Take care!

Reviewer: ddhayes30 Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Jan 2014 1:03 PM Title: Chapter 39

Poor Edward!  Great chapter

Reviewer: LilCullen454 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 25 Jan 2014 12:05 PM Title: Chapter 39

Well he needs to man up and go take care of the girl!

Reviewer: amcullen Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Jan 2014 9:37 AM Title: Chapter 39

Loved it :)

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 25 Jan 2014 5:44 AM Title: Chapter 39

:)

Reviewer: NeNee246 Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Jan 2014 5:33 AM Title: Chapter 39

I really love this!! :)

Reviewer: WAL70 Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Jan 2014 5:32 AM Title: Chapter 39

I LOVE IT! MORE PLZZZZZ!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Reviewer: Armysister1231 Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Jan 2014 5:16 AM Title: Chapter 39

Hahahahaha!!! Well, what's a girl to do if Edward won't pull his head out of his butt?? Love it, and can't wait for the next update!

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Jan 2014 4:29 AM Title: Chapter 39

oh E.  I feel for ya dude

Reviewer: ally909lovesyou Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Jan 2014 4:21 AM Title: Chapter 39

I loved the chapter. I have a feeling edward is going to go to bellas room and help her with her needs and agree to be friends with benefits(:

Reviewer: nnalday Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Jan 2014 4:16 AM Title: Chapter 39

What I hope Edward does is get up, go to Bella's room and ask if she needs help ;-) 

Reviewer: LoveMsCilla Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Jan 2014 4:15 AM Title: Chapter 39

I would love to have Bella's POV for what is going on here.  Does she trully believe that friends with benefits will work?  

Reviewer: Twifan1228 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 25 Jan 2014 4:03 AM Title: Chapter 39

This is such a great story,  he definitely over analyzes things! 

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Jan 2014 3:46 AM Title: Chapter 39

It is worth the risk ;)

Reviewer: Louie Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Jan 2014 3:24 AM Title: Chapter 39

This is a happily ever after right? I love this story but I don't think I can read anymore if Edward falls in love and Bella doesn't reciprocate. I am such a wuss when it comes to angst- ugh! 

 

Reviewer: ThatsMzPeachesTYVM Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Jan 2014 3:01 AM Title: Chapter 39

He's not going to be able to handle the thought of her pleasuring herself ... Not when he can fill that need, and help himself as well!

Reviewer: Banshee69 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 25 Jan 2014 2:35 AM Title: Chapter 39

I'm betting Bella is 'buzzing' to sway Edward's decision in her favor. He needs to get over to her room and seal the deal.

Sherry

Reviewer: jupiter2005 Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Jan 2014 2:35 AM Title: Chapter 39

he has to either choose hearing that buzzing every night or be able to get his jollies off wiith her instead. if i was him i would go with option 2 but he is already falling for her even if he doesnt realize it yet. same goes for her. keep up the good work

Reviewer: acullenfan Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Jan 2014 2:26 AM Title: Chapter 39

Now the question is whether Bella is doing that for her own pleasure or to tease Edward....

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