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Reviewer: rodeinti Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 28 Feb 2013 6:48 PM Title: Chapter 229

WELL EDWARD IS HAPPY.NOT SURE HE CAN WAIT.......ATLEAST HE KNOWS SHE IS ONLY HIS.I LOVE IT

Reviewer: Shemilliah Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 28 Feb 2013 6:47 PM Title: Chapter 230

*singing* Lets get it on!

Reviewer: FeelingBella Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Feb 2013 6:47 PM Title: Chapter 230

It's hot in here!!! Super!! :)

Reviewer: Twifan1228 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 28 Feb 2013 6:47 PM Title: Chapter 230

ahhh

Reviewer: carebare1 Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Feb 2013 6:46 PM Title: Chapter 230

love it love it łlllllllllooooooooovvvvvvvveeeeeeee iiiiiiiiiiiiittttttttttt

 

Reviewer: rodeinti Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 28 Feb 2013 6:46 PM Title: Chapter 228

THANK YOU FOR THE UPDATE..EDWARD IS A HOT MESS!!!.THANK GOD SHE AGREE'S...WHERE WOULD SHE BE IF SHE DIDN'T...LOL.......EDWARD IS GOING TO PUT A HURTING ON MY GIRL, NOT THAT HE WANTS TO , THAT'S JUST THE WAY IT IS...........LOL

Reviewer: amcullen Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Feb 2013 6:43 PM Title: Chapter 230

Loved it :)

Reviewer: Sassy12345 Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Feb 2013 6:38 PM Title: Chapter 230

wisked is good, now give us more !!!!!!!!!!!!!

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 28 Feb 2013 6:36 PM Title: Chapter 229

:)

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 28 Feb 2013 6:34 PM Title: Chapter 228

:)

Reviewer: Lunarchild21 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 28 Feb 2013 6:21 PM Title: Chapter 229

Hey that's an embarrassing thing to say for a girl like her. Not that Im saying she's slut or anything just that if she wasnt that moment right there wouldn't be so nervraking. I remember when I still had mine I preferred not to say anything or talk about it 'cause my friends or people I would talk to would look at me like I was the strangest creature they had ever seen. So I can understand why she was nervous. 

Reviewer: Holidai Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 28 Feb 2013 6:15 PM Title: Chapter 229

Well done. :)

Reviewer: Holidai Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 28 Feb 2013 6:14 PM Title: Chapter 228

I like that Edward's proposal was true to his personality.  It makes more sense than a mask coming off once the wedding is over, ya know? :)

Reviewer: jenn1214 Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Feb 2013 5:56 PM Title: Chapter 228

Damn 

Reviewer: Findjulia Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Feb 2013 5:45 PM Title: Chapter 228

so not expecting that! :)

Reviewer: Sassy12345 Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Feb 2013 5:28 PM Title: Chapter 229

lol more now

Reviewer: Sassy12345 Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Feb 2013 5:26 PM Title: Chapter 228

loving it

Reviewer: amcullen Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Feb 2013 5:22 PM Title: Chapter 229

Loved it :)

Reviewer: JayNahNah Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 28 Feb 2013 5:21 PM Title: Chapter 229

Damn.....I love this!!!!

So glad he's not going to wait ~ marry the girl NOW!!

Reviewer: Create3333 Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Feb 2013 5:12 PM Title: Chapter 229

Yay! Communication for the win!

Reviewer: vggnns Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Feb 2013 5:01 PM Title: Chapter 229

Let the games begin!

Reviewer: smlpate Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Feb 2013 5:00 PM Title: Chapter 228

Omg!!!!! Fucking intense!  Bwahahaha!

Reviewer: Twifan1228 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 28 Feb 2013 4:47 PM Title: Chapter 229

Oh myGod!

Reviewer: Twifan1228 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 28 Feb 2013 4:44 PM Title: Chapter 228

Oh heck yeah

Reviewer: Bobbysgirl Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Feb 2013 4:41 PM Title: Chapter 228

oooooooookay!!!!!!!! more please!!!!!!!!

Reviewer: Lunarchild21 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 28 Feb 2013 4:37 PM Title: Chapter 228

I did not expect that. Okay well she wants him anyways & this way Charlie & Jacob really won't be able to take her without charges being brought against them if Jacob tries to touch her again let alone take her. 

Reviewer: bmoregirl311 Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Feb 2013 4:37 PM Title: Chapter 228

holy shit. more more more.

Reviewer: detsinbaby Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 28 Feb 2013 4:27 PM Title: Chapter 228

WOW

Reviewer: Frogie48 Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Feb 2013 4:24 PM Title: Chapter 228

Wouldn't you think that would freak her out?  She may love him and all but she just ran away from someone who was telling her she would marry him and be his, no questions asked.  I guess my Momma Bear alarm bells are going off!  LOL!

 

Reviewer: monkey22marie Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 28 Feb 2013 4:20 PM Title: Chapter 228

Lol Edward just doesn't wast time now does he 

Reviewer: amcullen Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Feb 2013 4:15 PM Title: Chapter 228

Loved it :)

Reviewer: Legs Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Feb 2013 3:59 PM Title: Chapter 228

Oh my god

Reviewer: romance4me2 Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Feb 2013 3:58 PM Title: Chapter 228

Do I hear a ...but?

Four days, good grief he is expecting a lot from her. His is expecting her to believe his turnaround is genuine and permanent without really any proof.

Then again, with crazy Jacob and questionable Charlie hanging around, I might have headed for the airport and hopped the redeye to Vegas.

Great first chapter of the day.

Reviewer: tlwatkins36 Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Feb 2013 3:50 PM Title: Chapter 228

OMG I was not expecting that!!  So much better then I'd imagined!!

Reviewer: Mada Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Feb 2013 1:23 PM Title: Chapter 227

 - excellent - not really sure what he meant about it being a cost to her though - cant wait till tommorrow

Reviewer: FeelingBella Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Feb 2013 8:13 AM Title: Chapter 227

You are cruel... Leaving at such a moment!! :)

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 28 Feb 2013 6:15 AM Title: Chapter 227

:)

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 28 Feb 2013 6:14 AM Title: Chapter 226

:)

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 28 Feb 2013 6:14 AM Title: Chapter 225

:)

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 28 Feb 2013 6:13 AM Title: Chapter 224

:)

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 28 Feb 2013 6:12 AM Title: Chapter 223

:)

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 28 Feb 2013 6:12 AM Title: Chapter 222

:)

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 28 Feb 2013 6:11 AM Title: Chapter 221

:)

Reviewer: Holidai Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 28 Feb 2013 5:25 AM Title: Chapter 227

I look forward to tomorrow.  You certainly have not let me down.  I thought I would wait and read this story when it was completely finished but I was drawn in...and boy am I glad I was! :D  You update so much every day that my naturally impatient nature has been calmed, lol.

Reviewer: ddiva Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Feb 2013 5:21 AM Title: Chapter 227

Awww, you never let us down! This story rocks!

Reviewer: samolly Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Feb 2013 5:21 AM Title: Chapter 227

errrrrr....can't wait till tomorrow

Reviewer: farsideomoon Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Feb 2013 5:16 AM Title: Chapter 227

Yeah, no worries here, thanks for the update.

Reviewer: ddiva Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Feb 2013 5:15 AM Title: Chapter 220

:) about damn time he realizes that!

Reviewer: farsideomoon Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Feb 2013 5:12 AM Title: Chapter 225

Yes, he is clueless and to a virgin, I'm thinking that's harsh not hawt, yea know. Haha

Reviewer: Lunarchild21 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 28 Feb 2013 5:04 AM Title: Chapter 227

Will she tell him before penetration?

yeah I hope so 'cause I can see Edward being kinda pissed that he rammed into her without knowing she still had her maidenhead. If she tells him though he can be gentle with her. 

Reviewer: farsideomoon Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Feb 2013 4:13 AM Title: Chapter 223

Haha, thanks, it was all seemingly acceptable to me;-)

Reviewer: monkey22marie Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 28 Feb 2013 3:53 AM Title: Chapter 227

I soooooo can't wait until tomorrow

Reviewer: ceceprincess Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Feb 2013 3:49 AM Title: Chapter 227

You Haven't let me down Kass! Can you post early though? hahaha!! This is the birthday present ever! Silverblossom is lucky!!!

Reviewer: amcullen Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Feb 2013 3:39 AM Title: Chapter 227

Loved it can't wait for more :)

Reviewer: Bobbysgirl Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Feb 2013 3:26 AM Title: Chapter 227

again i have to go hunt down my husband and..........til tomorrow 

Reviewer: twilightlover127 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 28 Feb 2013 3:01 AM Title: Chapter 227

EEEEEEEPPPPPPPP THANK GOD HE FINALLY TOLD HER!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Reviewer: Sassy12345 Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Feb 2013 2:56 AM Title: Chapter 227

crying can not believe you left us here

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Feb 2013 2:56 AM Title: Chapter 227

Cant wait to see what he says to her V status.

Reviewer: jemanjii Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Feb 2013 2:54 AM Title: Chapter 227

You are mean, I don't know if getting the chapter made it better or worse 

 

Reviewer: Twifan1228 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 28 Feb 2013 2:50 AM Title: Chapter 227

No you haven't let ME down at all, the wonderful anticipation is wonderful

Reviewer: jatani33 Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Feb 2013 2:50 AM Title: Chapter 227

awwww common man seriously??? just wait till tomorrow?? not nice *sighs**

Reviewer: Legs Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Feb 2013 2:48 AM Title: Chapter 227

Yeah that was worth waiting up till 2.45am for omg cant wait till later :))

Reviewer: Jojo657 Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Feb 2013 2:47 AM Title: Chapter 227

Uh oh is he gonna find out she's a virgin

Reviewer: Sassy12345 Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Feb 2013 2:41 AM Title: Chapter 226

waiting for more like now please

Reviewer: Sassy12345 Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Feb 2013 2:40 AM Title: Chapter 225

lololololo

Reviewer: jemanjii Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Feb 2013 2:38 AM Title: Chapter 226

One more please... Pretty please

Reviewer: farsideomoon Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Feb 2013 2:37 AM Title: Chapter 222

Awe, he's doting on her. Now that's a redeeming behavior.:-)

Reviewer: jukie Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Feb 2013 2:34 AM Title: Chapter 226

please more.

 

Reviewer: CodyB Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Feb 2013 2:32 AM Title: Chapter 226

Oh please one more tonight!!! Can't wait to 'see' his reaction to her being a virgin!!! :) Love, love this story!!! 

Reviewer: Twifan1228 Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Feb 2013 2:27 AM Title: Chapter 226

Oh my, hum... I wonder?    Yes please another one tonight

Reviewer: labonte18slm Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 28 Feb 2013 2:27 AM Title: Chapter 226

I can NOT wait for the bucket of cold water that has to be dumped on him. After all the whore comments, and other awful things he has said to her in the past, just wait until he hears she is UNTOUCHED! LOL!!!

PLEASE...PLEEEEZZZZ another chapter!!!

Reviewer: carebare1 Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Feb 2013 2:25 AM Title: Chapter 226

god i love this story

Reviewer: Justkilintime Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Feb 2013 2:23 AM Title: Chapter 226

one more please.  Hopefully a long one

Reviewer: TillITryIllNeverKnow Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Feb 2013 2:22 AM Title: Chapter 226

That's gotta effect the girl!

Reviewer: TillITryIllNeverKnow Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Feb 2013 2:18 AM Title: Chapter 225

See!  The boy can be straight forward sometimes!  At least now she knows how he feels.

Reviewer: romance4me2 Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Feb 2013 2:16 AM Title: Chapter 226

Bella must be speechless. Yes, we need more tonight!!

Reviewer: Holidai Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 28 Feb 2013 2:15 AM Title: Chapter 226

I think Bella will surprise me -- no matter what her reaction is -- so I will be patient and wait. ;)  I think Bella's reaction may depend on her ability to support herself and if she goes to school or has babies right away...I am eager to find out.

Reviewer: amcullen Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Feb 2013 2:12 AM Title: Chapter 226

Loved it :)

Reviewer: ceceprincess Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Feb 2013 2:11 AM Title: Chapter 226

Wow!!! 

Reviewer: Jojo657 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 28 Feb 2013 2:08 AM Title: Chapter 226

Lets see how she reacts to that and wow Edward had such a way with words

Reviewer: angelburt84 Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Feb 2013 2:08 AM Title: Chapter 226

please one more 

Reviewer: Jojo657 Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Feb 2013 2:06 AM Title: Chapter 224

Wow what i wouldn't do to have a kiss like that (not literally) and wow peeping tom lady is a perv

Reviewer: Create3333 Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Feb 2013 2:05 AM Title: Chapter 226

Please? Can we please have one more? 

And I'm so glad that he told her that he loves her before getting too involved in smexy times!

Reviewer: TillITryIllNeverKnow Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Feb 2013 2:05 AM Title: Chapter 223

With any luck, it's dinner.  Whether she'll eat or not, that's another story.  Great work, as always.

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Feb 2013 2:03 AM Title: Chapter 226

oooh he is really layingit out

Reviewer: Create3333 Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Feb 2013 2:02 AM Title: Chapter 225

I hope she tells him before he gets too far. She deserves to be pampered...

Reviewer: Holidai Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 28 Feb 2013 2:00 AM Title: Chapter 225

I think he will be super surprised.  I think he'll also feel bad for a moment for having thought so poorly of her in the past.  Mostly I hope he sweeps her off her sexual feet! ;)

Reviewer: Holidai Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 28 Feb 2013 1:59 AM Title: Chapter 224

I think this chapter was really sweet, well done. :)

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Feb 2013 1:56 AM Title: Chapter 225

Dayum  He is right to the point.

Reviewer: Sassy12345 Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Feb 2013 1:54 AM Title: Chapter 224

no cliff hangers please another chapter fast!

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Feb 2013 1:47 AM Title: Chapter 224

ooh first kiss.... and now bedroom....go e.

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Feb 2013 1:45 AM Title: Chapter 223

restaurants here do homedelivery. I have a fav Italianplace. yum.

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Feb 2013 1:44 AM Title: Chapter 222

awwhe is being so sweet

Reviewer: Sassy12345 Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Feb 2013 1:42 AM Title: Chapter 222

yeah

Reviewer: JayNahNah Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 28 Feb 2013 1:38 AM Title: Chapter 223

Dayum.....that got me squirming

Reviewer: Cleos Cooper Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Feb 2013 1:21 AM Title: Chapter 223

I think she is holding on to any bit of normalcy she can...good for her!

PIE hope its either jasper and/or Alice....but who knows until you tell us!

Reviewer: TillITryIllNeverKnow Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Feb 2013 1:12 AM Title: Chapter 218

If she's in shock, she might not  react logically at all right away.  By the way, good luck with the refereeing!

Reviewer: Holidai Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 28 Feb 2013 1:10 AM Title: Chapter 223

I like the playful flirting. :)

Reviewer: chris1970 Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Feb 2013 12:58 AM Title: Chapter 223

uh ho bet its tanya

Reviewer: Jojo657 Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Feb 2013 12:55 AM Title: Chapter 223

Man they're finally here

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