Date: 06 Dec 2010 1:11 PM Title: Chapter 5: Revelations... What´s Done In the Dark...
The intermonolugue stuff was hilarious! :)
Author's Response:
Thanks for reading and taking the time to review!
Laterzz:)
Krazi
xoxo
Date: 06 Dec 2010 12:55 PM Title: Chapter 2: PAGING DR. CULLEN
good chapter.
Author's Response:
Thanks for reading and taking the time to review!
Krazi
xoxo
Date: 06 Dec 2010 12:38 PM Title: Chapter 1: DREAMS... WHAT DO THEY MEAN?
look forward to how she will get him back for cheating.
Author's Response:
It´s going to be good! I enjoyed writing that part! Thanks for reading and taking the time to review!
Krazi
xoxo
[Report This]Date: 06 Dec 2010 12:08 PM Title: Chapter 5: Revelations... What´s Done In the Dark...
Fantastic chapter!!! I loved being inside little Pixie's mind: She's so bubbly, fiercely loyal and protective, entirely dedicated to the ones She loves...It's a pleasure to follow her crazy and convoluted but so funny rambling!!! It was a very important choice to write in her POV because She's after all the one that'll make everything possible, thanks to her fabulous meddling personality ;)
I think the big revelation went pretty well...Okay Bella freaked out a little bit but as we know it, it wasn't because of the playroom, more about all the inanity She's feeding herself!!!
Anyway, I'm kinda sad She won't be spending the holidays with the Cullens, but I understand her need to be with Charlie and to look on the bright side of things, Edward won't feel too left out if She's not there!!!
Hope you'll be able to update very soon because it's such a joy to read your words :) Xoxo
Author's Response:
Thanks for reading and taking the time to review!
Laterzz:)
Krazi
xoxo
Date: 06 Dec 2010 11:48 AM Title: Chapter 5: Revelations... What´s Done In the Dark...
I adore this story. Thank you so much for you awesome writing!
Author's Response:
Thanks for reading and taking the time to review!
Laterzz:)
Krazi
xoxo
Date: 06 Dec 2010 10:50 AM Title: Chapter 5: Revelations... What´s Done In the Dark...
Great chapter! Thanks! Yes, I was trying to figure out how on earth she was going to say something to Bella too, but I really love the way we found out how Alice knew about Bella, I surpised Alice didn't say something right away, but I can see why she didn't. This is going to be so good when Edward gets back!!! Ohhhhh just can't wait for more of the story!
I am being patient with the story development, just anxious for more... But that's a good thing that your readers are so invested in the story.... Have a good one till next time......
Author's Response:
Thanks for reading and taking the time to review!
Laterzz:)
Krazi
xoxo
Author's Response:
Thanks for reading and taking the time to review!
Laterzz:)
Krazi
xoxo
Date: 06 Dec 2010 7:59 AM Title: Chapter 5: Revelations... What´s Done In the Dark...
i cant wait to read what edward`s reaction is going to be, when he finds out that bella is a sub. can`t wait for the next chapter.
Author's Response:
Glad you´ve enjoyed so far and yes it will be a bit of a shock to them both! Thanks for reading and reviewing! Laterzzz:) Krazi xoxo
[Report This]Date: 06 Dec 2010 6:43 AM Title: Chapter 5: Revelations... What´s Done In the Dark...
Loved it and she is so a master at avoiding things and all its doing is causeing herself more hurt thanks dor sharing and update when you can thanks.....
Author's Response:
Yeah, we all know that B is a bit stubborn, but Alice is going to wear her down, never fear! Thanks for reading and reviewing!
Laterzzz;)
Krazi
xoxo
Date: 06 Dec 2010 6:40 AM Title: Chapter 5: Revelations... What´s Done In the Dark...
Ok first I think the bath time with Esme was just plain weird. As for her reaction to their playroom well I think you hit that nail right on the head with that one. Well done. I do think this story is moving too slowly. I mean it seems right now its going to be months before her and Edward get together, so yeah that is depressing.
Author's Response:
Hey there!
Ha ha! You crack me up. First with the bath, I didn´t find it weird, to me it represented a nurturing mother caring for a broken and grieving child. Bella hasn´t suffered a death per se, but the fact that she´s trying to seem emotionally detatched to the Jacob situation has come to a head. Esme is caring for her just like she would her own children; comforting her by washing her hair or her back and just sitting with her is in no way wrong. Now about the speed. It will not be that long, I tried with everything within me to make it happen next chapter, but it was just getting too long and I had to stop it there. Or you would have chewed me out for that. Remember Edward is currently in Switzerland, so he has to make it back first. In the next chapter I promise you´ll see how the plan of the anonymous scene comes togther, one more chapter and we have lift off! So hang in there with me a little while longer! Thanks for reviewing and reading!
Laterzzz:)
Krazi
xoxo
Date: 06 Dec 2010 3:39 AM Title: Chapter: 4 BREAKING UP IS HARD TO DO...
Wow, that was amazing! I really cannot wait for more :) Just a little note, can you NOT put your Chapter End Notes in all caps? It is kind of hard to read them when they ARE LIKE THIS. Anyway, amazing story, hope to see more soon :)
Author's Response:
Sorry about the all caps. :( I´ll remember that in the future. Thanks for reading and reviewing!
Laterzzz:)
Krazi
xoxo
Date: 06 Dec 2010 3:14 AM Title: Chapter 3: REVENGE IS A DISH... BEST SERVED COLD...
That was amazing! I really loved it all :D
Author's Response:
Glad your enjoying it! Thanks for reading and reviewing! Laterzzz:) Krazi xoxo
Date: 06 Dec 2010 3:06 AM Title: Chapter 2: PAGING DR. CULLEN
Wow, that was amazing! I really loved it so much. Cannot wait for Bella and Edward to get together ;)
Author's Response:
Glad your enjoying the story so far. Thanks for reading and reviewing! Laterzzz:) Krazi xoxo
Date: 06 Dec 2010 2:50 AM Title: Chapter 1: DREAMS... WHAT DO THEY MEAN?
Wow, that was incredible! I really loved it so much!
Author's Response:
Wow, I´m so glad that your enjoying it! Thanks for reading and reviewing! Laterzzz:) Krazi xoxo
Date: 06 Dec 2010 2:35 AM Title: PROLOGUE: BLIND DATING
HOLY crap, that is HOT! I really love it so much :) Keep up the amazing work!
Author's Response:
Lol! Thanks for reading and reviewing! Laterzzz:) Krazi xoxo
[Report This]Date: 04 Dec 2010 6:43 PM Title: Chapter: 4 BREAKING UP IS HARD TO DO...
Mad for this!!!!! Will be with you all the way...love them both...insecurities and all. As for Alice... well you have outdone yourself shes brill!!!
Author's Response:
Yeah E & B need to get there act together, thank God we have Alice sticking her nose into everything! Lol! Glad your enjoying. Thanks for reading and reviewing!
Laterzzz:)
Krazi
xoxo
Date: 03 Dec 2010 6:23 PM Title: Chapter: 4 BREAKING UP IS HARD TO DO...
I'm really looking forward to them actually being together now!
So did Tanya poison Mr. Brandon or do something else to hasten his death? Now I'm worried that she'll try to hurt Alice or Bella or even Edward.
Author's Response:
Lol! Me too! Soon I promise. As far as Tanya is concerned, we´ll find out a little more later. Thanks for reading and reviewing! Laterzzz:) Krazi xoxo
Date: 03 Dec 2010 8:53 AM Title: PROLOGUE: BLIND DATING
You're off to an excellent start! Very hot!! I like it.
Author's Response:
Lol! Thanks for reading and reviewing! Laterzzz:) Krazi xoxo
[Report This]Date: 03 Dec 2010 1:35 AM Title: Chapter 1: DREAMS... WHAT DO THEY MEAN?
Bloody amazing...I'm hooked...
Author's Response:
Lol! Thanks for reading and reviewing! Laterzzz:) Krazi xoxo
[Report This]Date: 03 Dec 2010 1:34 AM Title: PROLOGUE: BLIND DATING
Love the start!!!!
Author's Response:
Thanks for reading and reviewing! Laterzzz:) Krazi xoxo
[Report This]Date: 30 Nov 2010 1:21 AM Title: Chapter 1: DREAMS... WHAT DO THEY MEAN?
a little hard to follow, 1st their having a blind date, then he's fixing to punish her for being late a "second" time, then she's back engaged and fantasizing about Edward, hope it all starts meshing together
Author's Response:
The blind date was real and will happen soon, but aside from that, they are both having vivid dreams about the other one. So far Bella is still a virgin. Thanks for reading and reviewing! Laterzzz:) Krazi xoxo
[Report This]Date: 29 Nov 2010 11:25 PM Title: PROLOGUE: BLIND DATING
this is a hell of a great start, very hot, thighs squeezed together. Usually don't don't read uncompleted stories so I am hoping you post regularly.
Cheryle
Author's Response:
Lol! Thanks for reading and reviewing! Laterzzz:) Krazi xoxo
Date: 26 Nov 2010 10:16 PM Title: Chapter 2: PAGING DR. CULLEN
I feel soooo bad for Edward I am TOTALLY and completely in love with your version of him! Im soooo sad you only update every 2 weeks! Im completely hoooked and not even caught up yet! One of my very favorite authors rec'd this story People like us is a brillant story so I knew yours had to be good as well and let me say im soooo NOT disapointed I cant wait until your edward and bella are together!!!
Author's Response:
Lol! Thanks for reading and reviewing! Laterzzz:) Krazi xoxo
[Report This]Date: 25 Nov 2010 3:41 AM Title: Chapter: 4 BREAKING UP IS HARD TO DO...
First and foremost...I fucking love Esme!!! She is the perfect mom to this broken hearted Domward. I love how she just knew what he needed, like a good mom should.
Tanya...woo wee that is some crazy ass cracker jack shit going on in that girl's head. Edward should have a psych evail done along with the blood tests before he takes on a new sub. I can totally see her causing some major angst when Bella and Edward finally get on the same page.
Speaking of which...are we going to get to the fun stuff soon? The way you wrote that first chapter has me drooling in anticipation. CAN NOT WAIT FOR MORE!!!!! ;)
Author's Response:
Lol! Thanks for reading and reviewing! Laterzzz:) Krazi xoxo
Date: 24 Nov 2010 3:35 PM Title: Chapter: 4 BREAKING UP IS HARD TO DO...
I'm so glad Esme talked to Edward. Even if she only gave him a cryptic message. :)
Author's Response:
I know right, I love their close relationship. Mama Esme is my hero! Lol! Thanks for reading and reviewing! Laterzzz:) Krazi xoxo
Date: 24 Nov 2010 1:28 AM Title: Chapter: 4 BREAKING UP IS HARD TO DO...
Tanya sounds like a delusional piece of work, and a problem that is probably going to come back and haunt Edward...I am ready for the present day Bella and Edward, so here's hoping you get these 2 kiddos together soon!
Author's Response:
Lol! Thanks for reading and reviewing! Laterzzz:) Krazi xoxo
[Report This]Date: 24 Nov 2010 12:44 AM Title: Chapter 3: REVENGE IS A DISH... BEST SERVED COLD...
I would never mess with Alice. That crazy pixie could be your best friend or worst enemy (as Jacob found out). I feel so bad for Bella. She is wrestling with her own inner turmoil and has no one to turn to. Well, at least now she will have Alice. Alice's comment about tying her up and spanking her was too funny.
Author's Response:
Lol! Gotta love the Pixie! Thanks for reading and reviewing! Laterzzz:) Krazi xoxo
Date: 24 Nov 2010 12:18 AM Title: Chapter: 4 BREAKING UP IS HARD TO DO...
i am so enjoying this story! can't wait to get where they figure out each other! this was rec'd to me by the people like us author.
thanks for writing!
Author's Response:
I appreciate you giving the story a chance. I´m really glad you´re liking it so far. Thanks for reading and reviewing! Laterzzz:) Krazi xoxo
[Report This]Date: 23 Nov 2010 10:59 PM Title: Chapter: 4 BREAKING UP IS HARD TO DO...
Love this story can't wait for 2 weeks to be up!
Author's Response:
Lol! Thanks for reading and reviewing! Laterzzz:) Krazi xoxo
Date: 23 Nov 2010 6:05 PM Title: Chapter: 4 BREAKING UP IS HARD TO DO...
love this story - found it from Justginger and she was so right!!
Author's Response:
I´m glad your like it, I really appreciate all the recommendaitons! Thanks for reading and reviewing!
Laterzzz:)
Krzi
xoxo
[Report This]Date: 23 Nov 2010 5:01 PM Title: Chapter 2: PAGING DR. CULLEN
I think Edward safe worded. He knew it didn't feel right and he wasn't in the right headspace to continue with this scene.
My heart was breaking for him as he cried over Bella's picture. It is sad to see him in so much pain of his own making. He should have gone after her years ago. Dom or not, he should have put his cards on the table and let her choose.
Author's Response:
They won´t be suffering too much longer, I promise! Glad your enjoying the story! Thanks for reading and reviewing! Laterzzz:) Krazi xoxo
[Report This]Date: 23 Nov 2010 3:37 PM Title: Chapter 1: DREAMS... WHAT DO THEY MEAN?
Intersting past and life Bella leads. I am glad she found out the truth about Jacob before she was legally bound to him.
Author's Response:
Thanks for reading and reviewing! Laterzzz:) Krazi xoxo
[Report This]Date: 23 Nov 2010 3:06 PM Title: PROLOGUE: BLIND DATING
Holy hell! That was quite the beginning. I don't normally fall into a story so quickly, but if this is any indication as to where you will take this..I am in for the long haul.
Author's Response:
Lol! Thanks for reading and reviewing! Laterzzz:) Krazi xoxo
Date: 23 Nov 2010 7:56 AM Title: Chapter: 4 BREAKING UP IS HARD TO DO...
ay this chapter was fabulous! OME!! But Tanya is a beyotch and she is going to be trouble!!! You know that is bad when a guy has to jack off in front of you while thinking of another chick and when he is finished, he throws up at just the mere thought of you!!! Ouch!!! IDK............I'm thinking he might should have told her that so she would know there was not hope. On the other hand, she might have cut his balls off and handed them to him. Yep, maybe just getting her the hell away from his person was the best thing. Hope she doesn't have access to anything of his that he deems important. Keys to his home, car, etc.
Awwww.........Edward purposing to his mom was so sweet that my teeth hurt!!! Loved that. And, of course, she would still have the ring.
The new toy that Rosalie was testing on Emmett? So? Which one was it? Just curious! *giggle*
The flashbacks were fab. Just added to the story!
So, I think Esme knows. Perhaps Alice told her? And why wouldn't Esme or Alice for that matter, bother to share this new found knowledge of Bella not getting married, with Edward????
Needless to say, I cannot wait for the next chappie!!!
Keye
Author's Response:
Lol! Thanks for reading and reviewing! Btw, I´m working on a blog, so I can put up pics of the things featured in the story. I´m not very creative when it come to that sort of thing, so it may take me a little while, but I´ll let you know! Laterzzz:) Krazi xoxo
[Report This]Date: 23 Nov 2010 4:23 AM Title: Chapter: 4 BREAKING UP IS HARD TO DO...
He should have just ended it before the scene. Of course Esme knew it was Bella.Good chapter.
Author's Response:
Lol! I agree... men! Lol! Thanks for reading and reviewing! Laterzzz:) Krazi xoxo
Date: 23 Nov 2010 2:58 AM Title: Chapter: 4 BREAKING UP IS HARD TO DO...
omg! ALPHALFA. I loved the episode with uncle george. hehe. you need the pepto after that. love the chapter. boy tanya is psychotic. like the pic too.
Author's Response:
Lol! Thanks for reading and reviewing! Laterzzz:) Krazi xoxo
Date: 23 Nov 2010 2:25 AM Title: Chapter: 4 BREAKING UP IS HARD TO DO...
Tanya is one scary bitch!! Yikes. Do Not Enjoy being in HER head!! Dark and Scary.
Esme is such a treat. Kinda felt like a giddy school girl for a moment. Can't wait for the family to learn Bella's moving west!!
Glad to see things progressing toward the blind date...
Author's Response:
Lol! Thanks for reading and reviewing!
Laterzzz:)
Krazi
xoxo
Date: 22 Nov 2010 10:21 PM Title: Chapter: 4 BREAKING UP IS HARD TO DO...
great chapter. Slutya is psycho and definitely going to be trouble. Hope she doesnt hurt alice or bella
Author's Response:
Ha ha! ´Slutya´ how original! The only thing I can promise is, that there will be no Fatal Attraction animal boiling. Mojo is completely safe, as for the rest of the gang... hmmm, don´t know. Thanks for reading and reviewing. Have a Happy Thanksgiving!
Laterzzz:P
Krazi
xoxoxo
[Report This]Date: 22 Nov 2010 9:37 PM Title: Chapter: 4 BREAKING UP IS HARD TO DO...
this is a good story. There aren't enough Domward/suBella stories out there! Hurry up and update! Two weeks is too long!
Author's Response:
Yeah, I´m just a sucker for a hot Domward/subElla story. I´m going as fast as I can. You people are slave drivers! Let´s see since I´m in Spain and there is no Thanksgiving or Black Friday, I have nothing else to do but write you guys another chapter. Let me get cracking!
Have a Happy Thanksgiving!!!!
Laterzzz:P
Krazi
xoxoxo
[Report This]Date: 22 Nov 2010 7:41 PM Title: Chapter: 4 BREAKING UP IS HARD TO DO...
Really loving this...how often do you update?
Author's Response:
Thanks, I´m glad your enjoying it. I say that I update every two weeks, just to be on the safe side, but it usually comes sooner..Thanks for reading and reviewing!!
Have a Happy Thanksgiving!!!
Laterzzz:P
Krazi
xoxoxo
[Report This]Date: 22 Nov 2010 7:32 PM Title: Chapter: 4 BREAKING UP IS HARD TO DO...
Wow, Tanya seems to be really psycho. I guess she will be a problem in the future, but at least Edward is rid of her (for now).
The part with Esme was really sweet, especially her cryptic remarks to wait, I hope he will take the advice.
It seems that Edward is very demanding in this chapter, especially if he "forces" you to write the scene in the playroom even when you were safewording ;-)
It is going to very interesting. Keep going!
Author's Response:
Thanks for the review. I´m glad your enjoying it. Edward is my Dom too, so I´ve gotta obey my Master... but he´s just so darn sexy! lol! We´ll see what happens.
Have a Happy Thanksgiving!!
Laterzz:)
Krazi
xoxoxo
Date: 22 Nov 2010 6:37 PM Title: Chapter: 4 BREAKING UP IS HARD TO DO...
Thanks for updated I love this story so much !
Author's Response:
Your welcome. You guys make me wanna write. I´m finding that I can´t wait for these two to hookup myself. Could they just get on with it already! Lol Thanks for the review!!
Have a Happy Thanksgiving!!!
Laterzzz:)
Krazi
xoxoxo
Date: 22 Nov 2010 6:17 PM Title: Chapter: 4 BREAKING UP IS HARD TO DO...
SNeaky, Have a happy thanksgiving, eagerly await next update . oh yea and Tanya is physco ............Holy Shit !!!!
Author's Response:
I know right. I was hoping you guys liked that, add a bit of spice to life. lol! i´m in the basement trying conjure up something. I hope I can keep the momentum going. lol Yeah, Tanya is a few eggs short of a dozen. We´ll see what happens.
Have a Happy Thanksgiving!!
Laterzzz:)
Krazi
xoxoxo
Date: 22 Nov 2010 6:15 PM Title: Chapter 2: PAGING DR. CULLEN
I had to supress a gag myself...Thank God someone safe-worded...However, The dream sequence...*Fanning Myself*...
Author's Response:
Lol! Thanks for reading and reviewing! Laterzzz:) Krazi xoxo
[Report This]Date: 22 Nov 2010 5:47 PM Title: Chapter: 4 BREAKING UP IS HARD TO DO...
Anyone else seeing a crazy ass Tanya pulling a Glen Close? Bella should have left Mojo in NYC..nah...you wouldn't do that would ya? (Definately NOT trying to give you ideas here..no Mame!
Blue
Author's Response:
Hmmm... I never thought of that, while I can´t promise harm will not come to anyone, I can assure little Mojo will be safe. I promise not to boil him in one of Mrs. Copes pressure cookers..lol... thanks for reading and reviewing!!!
Laterzzz:P
Krazi
xoxoxo
Date: 22 Nov 2010 4:38 PM Title: Chapter: 4 BREAKING UP IS HARD TO DO...
i just started reading and i love, love, love your story! i'm also giddy over the use of the pictures with each of your chapters and within the chapter! the one of rob walking down the sidewalk with his blue sunglasses on is particularly yummy.
the break up had to be one of the more satisfying break ups i've read. i love seeing tanya handed her ass. i'm guessing however, that we haven't seen the last of her.
i thought the proposal was especially sweet. i have to agree with you, it does sound like something from little rascals. i also love that we get to see these extreme sides of edward. fierce, controlling and domineering, very intimidating one moment and then sweet, thoughtful and loving the next.
i hope edward gets his wish soon...any idea when we'll see the prologue come back around?
more please!
Author's Response:
Wow I´m blown away by the response this story is getting. I really want to thank each and everyone of you for reading and reviewing. Each review is specail and you guys keep me going and make want to keep you happy. Thanks for the patience as I move these two along, even those of you with ´forced patience´... you know who you are! lol! i love the threats of taking me into the playroom for a punishment scene.. What can I say DomWard owns me. Hang in there with me and let´s enjoy this crazy ride!!
Laterzzz:P
Krazi
xoxoxo
Date: 22 Nov 2010 3:59 PM Title: Chapter 1: DREAMS... WHAT DO THEY MEAN?
I love your Bella!!! I agree with the Mr. Rogers observation...definately creepy...
Author's Response:
Wow I´m blown away by the response this story is getting. I really want to thank each and everyone of you for reading and reviewing. Each review is specail and you guys keep me going and make want to keep you happy. Thanks for the patience as I move these two along, even those of you with ´forced patience´... you know who you are! lol! i love the threats of taking me into the playroom for a punishment scene.. What can I say DomWard owns me. Hang in there with me and let´s enjoy this crazy ride!! *Happy Thanksgiving*
Laterzzz:P
Krazi
xoxoxo
Date: 22 Nov 2010 3:55 PM Title: Chapter: 4 BREAKING UP IS HARD TO DO...
great chapter
Author's Response:
Wow I´m blown away by the response this story is getting. I really want to thank each and everyone of you for reading and reviewing. Each review is specail and you guys keep me going and make want to keep you happy. Thanks for the patience as I move these two along, even those of you with ´forced patience´... you know who you are! lol! i love the threats of taking me into the playroom for a punishment scene.. What can I say DomWard owns me. Hang in there with me and let´s enjoy this crazy ride!! Laterzzz:P Krazi xoxoxo
Date: 22 Nov 2010 3:38 PM Title: Chapter: 4 BREAKING UP IS HARD TO DO...
Great chapter! I can't wait till they get together! Can't wait for the next update!
Author's Response:
Wow I´m blown away by the response this story is getting. I really want to thank each and everyone of you for reading and reviewing. Each review is specail and you guys keep me going and make want to keep you happy. Thanks for the patience as I move these two along, even those of you with ´forced patience´... you know who you are! lol! i love the threats of taking me into the playroom for a punishment scene.. What can I say DomWard owns me. Hang in there with me and let´s enjoy this crazy ride!!
Laterzzz:P
Krazi
xoxoxo
Date: 22 Nov 2010 3:34 PM Title: PROLOGUE: BLIND DATING
Love it so far, can't wait to see what happens next...
Author's Response:
Thanks for reading and reviewing!!!
Laterzzz:P
Krazi
xoxo
Date: 22 Nov 2010 3:30 PM Title: Chapter: 4 BREAKING UP IS HARD TO DO...
awwww domward loves his momma. too cu~te!! :D
and man that bitch... i can't believe he did anything with her. grosss. there's probably something alive up in there. nasty diseases and alll. i think i need the pepto now...
can't wait to see tanya get her comeuppance.
have a good holiday week and happy typing!
CrimsonR
Author's Response:
Wow I´m blown away by the response this story is getting. I really want to thank each and everyone of you for reading and reviewing. Each review is specail and you guys keep me going and make want to keep you happy. Thanks for the patience as I move these two along, even those of you with ´forced patience´... you know who you are! lol! i love the threats of taking me into the playroom for a punishment scene.. What can I say DomWard owns me. Hang in there with me and let´s enjoy this crazy ride!! *Happy Thanksgiving*
Laterzzz:P
Krazi
xoxoxo
[Report This]Date: 22 Nov 2010 3:04 PM Title: Chapter: 4 BREAKING UP IS HARD TO DO...
You are such a naughty lill thing. teasing us like that. fab u lous chapter. Tanya has gone to a whole level of crazy bitch in this one. cant wait for more. the proposal was super sweeet. my son proposed to me when he was six dressed in his easter wear, now he is 13 and one of my joys of life. that part brought a tear to my eye. what mom doesnt love that her son adores as such.
Author's Response:
Wow I´m blown away by the response this story is getting. I really want to thank each and everyone of you for reading and reviewing. Each review is specail and you guys keep me going and make want to keep you happy. Thanks for the patience as I move these two along, even those of you with ´forced patience´... you know who you are! lol! i love the threats of taking me into the playroom for a punishment scene.. What can I say DomWard owns me. Hang in there with me and let´s enjoy this crazy ride!! *Happy Thanksgiving*
Laterzzz:P
Krazi
xoxoxo
Date: 22 Nov 2010 2:58 PM Title: Chapter: 4 BREAKING UP IS HARD TO DO...
So sweet with the proposal! Love this story!
Author's Response:
Wow I´m blown away by the response this story is getting. I really want to thank each and everyone of you for reading and reviewing. Each review is specail and you guys keep me going and make want to keep you happy. Thanks for the patience as I move these two along, even those of you with ´forced patience´... you know who you are! lol! i love the threats of taking me into the playroom for a punishment scene.. What can I say DomWard owns me. Hang in there with me and let´s enjoy this crazy ride!! *Happy Thanksgiving*
Laterzzz:P
Krazi
xoxoxo
[Report This]Date: 22 Nov 2010 2:22 PM Title: Chapter: 4 BREAKING UP IS HARD TO DO...
Excellent chapter. Esme's a dark horse isn't she? Tanya's going to be trouble. LOL. So looking forward to the next chapter.
Author's Response:
Wow I´m blown away by the response this story is getting. I really want to thank each and everyone of you for reading and reviewing. Each review is specail and you guys keep me going and make want to keep you happy. Thanks for the patience as I move these two along, even those of you with ´forced patience´... you know who you are! lol! i love the threats of taking me into the playroom for a punishment scene.. What can I say DomWard owns me. Hang in there with me and let´s enjoy this crazy ride!! *Happy Thanksgiving*
Laterzzz:P
Krazi
xoxoxo
[Report This]Date: 22 Nov 2010 2:20 PM Title: Chapter: 4 BREAKING UP IS HARD TO DO...
thanks good chapter
Author's Response:
Wow I´m blown away by the response this story is getting. I really want to thank each and everyone of you for reading and reviewing. Each review is specail and you guys keep me going and make want to keep you happy. Thanks for the patience as I move these two along, even those of you with ´forced patience´... you know who you are! lol! i love the threats of taking me into the playroom for a punishment scene.. What can I say DomWard owns me. Hang in there with me and let´s enjoy this crazy ride!! *Happy Thanksgiving*
Laterzzz:P
Krazi
xoxoxo
Date: 22 Nov 2010 1:52 PM Title: Chapter: 4 BREAKING UP IS HARD TO DO...
So glad it is over with Tanya ... but I bet she will be trouble! Esme is awesome; she knows what Edward needs! Loving the story!
Author's Response:
Wow I´m blown away by the response this story is getting. I really want to thank each and everyone of you for reading and reviewing. Each review is specail and you guys keep me going and make want to keep you happy. Thanks for the patience as I move these two along, even those of you with ´forced patience´... you know who you are! lol! i love the threats of taking me into the playroom for a punishment scene.. What can I say DomWard owns me. Hang in there with me and let´s enjoy this crazy ride!! *Happy Thanksgiving*
Laterzzz:P
Krazi
xoxoxo
[Report This]Date: 22 Nov 2010 1:49 PM Title: Chapter: 4 BREAKING UP IS HARD TO DO...
This was an interesting chapter I can't wait to see what happens next. Tanya is one demented woman so delusional.
Author's Response:
Wow I´m blown away by the response this story is getting. I really want to thank each and everyone of you for reading and reviewing. Each review is specail and you guys keep me going and make want to keep you happy. Thanks for the patience as I move these two along, even those of you with ´forced patience´... you know who you are! lol! i love the threats of taking me into the playroom for a punishment scene.. What can I say DomWard owns me. Hang in there with me and let´s enjoy this crazy ride!! *Happy Thanksgiving*
Laterzzz:P
Krazi
xoxoxo
[Report This]Date: 22 Nov 2010 1:21 PM Title: Chapter: 4 BREAKING UP IS HARD TO DO...
Great job with the safeword!
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Wow I´m blown away by the response this story is getting. I really want to thank each and everyone of you for reading and reviewing. Each review is specail and you guys keep me going and make want to keep you happy. Thanks for the patience as I move these two along, even those of you with ´forced patience´... you know who you are! lol! i love the threats of taking me into the playroom for a punishment scene.. What can I say DomWard owns me. Hang in there with me and let´s enjoy this crazy ride!! *Happy Thanksgiving*
Laterzzz:P
Krazi
xoxoxo
Date: 22 Nov 2010 12:40 PM Title: Chapter: 4 BREAKING UP IS HARD TO DO...
Again, I'm going with the so, sooooo good! WOW - did not see T being such a whack job - she is certifiable and I fear it's not Alice that's going to be on her chopping block! Loved the relationship ending word - nicely done!
And Edward and Esme - anyone who has a "baby boy" understands that relationship - you wrote it beautifully! Last night my 10 year old was saying he was going to college in town so he could stay at home and live with Mommy (again, forget Dad)!
Poor Em - can't keep his mouth shut - loved R testing out the new toy! Great reading!!!!
Author's Response:
Wow I´m blown away by the response this story is getting. I really want to thank each and everyone of you for reading and reviewing. Each review is specail and you guys keep me going and make want to keep you happy. Thanks for the patience as I move these two along, even those of you with ´forced patience´... you know who you are! lol! i love the threats of taking me into the playroom for a punishment scene.. What can I say DomWard owns me. Hang in there with me and let´s enjoy this crazy ride!! *Happy Thanksgiving*
Laterzzz:P
Krazi
xoxoxo
Date: 22 Nov 2010 11:55 AM Title: Chapter: 4 BREAKING UP IS HARD TO DO...
Okay Okay
Now I know why only two fingers
OMG Bella is still a VIRGIN
Boy isn't Edward baby in for a shockarooney
Ha Ha
Author's Response:
Wow I´m blown away by the response this story is getting. I really want to thank each and everyone of you for reading and reviewing. Each review is specail and you guys keep me going and make want to keep you happy. Thanks for the patience as I move these two along, even those of you with ´forced patience´... you know who you are! lol! i love the threats of taking me into the playroom for a punishment scene.. What can I say DomWard owns me. Hang in there with me and let´s enjoy this crazy ride!! *Happy Thanksgiving*
Laterzzz:P
Krazi
xoxoxo
Date: 22 Nov 2010 10:54 AM Title: Chapter: 4 BREAKING UP IS HARD TO DO...
wrong but right because he was saying it to himself but no follow through. Tanya is fucking nuts she is scarry. That was cute with his proposal :)
Author's Response:
Wow I´m blown away by the response this story is getting. I really want to thank each and everyone of you for reading and reviewing. Each review is specail and you guys keep me going and make want to keep you happy. Thanks for the patience as I move these two along, even those of you with ´forced patience´... you know who you are! lol! i love the threats of taking me into the playroom for a punishment scene.. What can I say DomWard owns me. Hang in there with me and let´s enjoy this crazy ride!! *Happy Thanksgiving*
Laterzzz:P
Krazi
xoxoxo
Date: 22 Nov 2010 7:30 AM Title: Chapter: 4 BREAKING UP IS HARD TO DO...
I know I'd submit to Domward!!! Good choice you can't right when your being punished!! ( Wink, wink!!) :)
Author's Response:
Wow I´m blown away by the response this story is getting. I really want to thank each and everyone of you for reading and reviewing. Each review is specail and you guys keep me going and make want to keep you happy. Thanks for the patience as I move these two along, even those of you with ´forced patience´... you know who you are! lol! i love the threats of taking me into the playroom for a punishment scene.. What can I say DomWard owns me. Hang in there with me and let´s enjoy this crazy ride!! *Happy Thanksgiving*
Laterzzz:P
Krazi
xoxoxo
[Report This]Date: 22 Nov 2010 6:47 AM Title: Chapter: 4 BREAKING UP IS HARD TO DO...
Awesome chapter
Keep up Awesome writing
Can't wait for Tanya get whats coming to her
Can't wait for Edward to find out Bella is his new Sub
Author's Response:
Wow I´m blown away by the response this story is getting. I really want to thank each and everyone of you for reading and reviewing. Each review is specail and you guys keep me going and make want to keep you happy. Thanks for the patience as I move these two along, even those of you with ´forced patience´... you know who you are! lol! i love the threats of taking me into the playroom for a punishment scene.. What can I say DomWard owns me. Hang in there with me and let´s enjoy this crazy ride!! *Happy Thanksgiving*
Laterzzz:P
Krazi
xoxoxo
Date: 22 Nov 2010 6:46 AM Title: Chapter: 4 BREAKING UP IS HARD TO DO...
awesome story can't wait for more thanks :)
Author's Response:
Wow I´m blown away by the response this story is getting. I really want to thank each and everyone of you for reading and reviewing. Each review is specail and you guys keep me going and make want to keep you happy. Thanks for the patience as I move these two along, even those of you with ´forced patience´... you know who you are! lol! i love the threats of taking me into the playroom for a punishment scene.. What can I say DomWard owns me. Hang in there with me and let´s enjoy this crazy ride!! *Happy Thanksgiving*
Laterzzz:P
Krazi
xoxoxo
Date: 22 Nov 2010 6:25 AM Title: Chapter: 4 BREAKING UP IS HARD TO DO...
Well I think that Tanya is seriously crazy. It seems that she has invested years at trying to trap Edward to marry her. She should have known that he was not into her that way. I cant wait for this story to move forward a little faster.
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[Report This]Date: 22 Nov 2010 6:21 AM Title: Chapter: 4 BREAKING UP IS HARD TO DO...
AWESOME chapter - so glad you posted today just as I finished the 4th chapter, I get an email saying you posted another one :)
WOOHOO for me!!!!
People Like Us - she rec'd me over here! PLU is a brilliant story too...
I think I'm a little stuck on Domward stories!!!!
Well, I have to say in my own defense - you guys write him SO well.... hehehe....
Can't wait for more - flogger on the cross for you if no update within a week (well 10 days then....) But seriously, I think you might enjoy it too much!!!!
Hmmm - especially with Dom Edward doing the flogging!!!
Oh how delicious...
Til next time... enjoy writing :)
T2M x
Author's Response:
Wow I´m blown away by the response this story is getting. I really want to thank each and everyone of you for reading and reviewing. Each review is specail and you guys keep me going and make want to keep you happy. Thanks for the patience as I move these two along, even those of you with ´forced patience´... you know who you are! lol! i love the threats of taking me into the playroom for a punishment scene.. What can I say DomWard owns me. Hang in there with me and let´s enjoy this crazy ride!! *Happy Thanksgiving*
Laterzzz:P
Krazi
xoxoxo
Date: 22 Nov 2010 6:13 AM Title: Chapter: 4 BREAKING UP IS HARD TO DO...
Thank you so much for this Chapter, Loved it! Always knew that Crazy Biotch Tanya was just that Craaaazzzy!! This should get pretty good very soon with that drama. Now how sweet that he asked his mother to marry him. Awwwhhh! More Chapter's Please... okay I won't beg but pretty please. Oh and Happy Thanksgiving to you. On a side note, I am reading and following all of your Rec's. those 4 stories are pretty awesome. Till your next Chapter!!!!
Author's Response:
Wow I´m blown away by the response this story is getting. I really want to thank each and everyone of you for reading and reviewing. Each review is specail and you guys keep me going and make want to keep you happy. Thanks for the patience as I move these two along, even those of you with ´forced patience´... you know who you are! lol! i love the threats of taking me into the playroom for a punishment scene.. What can I say DomWard owns me. Hang in there with me and let´s enjoy this crazy ride!! *Happy Thanksgiving*
Laterzzz:P
Krazi
xoxoxo
[Report This]Date: 22 Nov 2010 5:46 AM Title: Chapter: 4 BREAKING UP IS HARD TO DO...
loved it very much and update when you can thanks....
Author's Response:
Wow I´m blown away by the response this story is getting. I really want to thank each and everyone of you for reading and reviewing. Each review is specail and you guys keep me going and make want to keep you happy. Thanks for the patience as I move these two along, even those of you with ´forced patience´... you know who you are! lol! i love the threats of taking me into the playroom for a punishment scene.. What can I say DomWard owns me. Hang in there with me and let´s enjoy this crazy ride!! *Happy Thanksgiving*
Laterzzz:P
Krazi
xoxoxo
Date: 22 Nov 2010 5:44 AM Title: Chapter: 4 BREAKING UP IS HARD TO DO...
Tanya is all kinds of crazy and scary. I hope Bella can stand up to that much loony. That sort of broke my part that he cried over Bella getting married, that only thing that kept me from crying was that they still have a chance!
Author's Response:
Wow I´m blown away by the response this story is getting. I really want to thank each and everyone of you for reading and reviewing. Each review is specail and you guys keep me going and make want to keep you happy. Thanks for the patience as I move these two along, even those of you with ´forced patience´... you know who you are! lol! i love the threats of taking me into the playroom for a punishment scene.. What can I say DomWard owns me. Hang in there with me and let´s enjoy this crazy ride!! *Happy Thanksgiving*
Laterzzz:P
Krazi
xoxoxo
[Report This]Date: 22 Nov 2010 5:18 AM Title: Chapter: 4 BREAKING UP IS HARD TO DO...
fantastic as always :)
Author's Response:
Wow I´m blown away by the response this story is getting. I really want to thank each and everyone of you for reading and reviewing. Each review is specail and you guys keep me going and make want to keep you happy. Thanks for the patience as I move these two along, even those of you with ´forced patience´... you know who you are! lol! i love the threats of taking me into the playroom for a punishment scene.. What can I say DomWard owns me. Hang in there with me and let´s enjoy this crazy ride!! *Happy Thanksgiving* of course I couldn´t have done it with out you!! Thanks a millions BB... let´s see if we can pull out another good one this week! :P
Laterzzz:P
Krazi
xoxoxo
Date: 22 Nov 2010 5:00 AM Title: Chapter 3: REVENGE IS A DISH... BEST SERVED COLD...
okay get started I'm so ready for more. thanks for writing. I gotta say this has felt like a lot of filler in between the 1st chapter & now
Author's Response:
WELL WE CAN´T JUST KABOOM MAKE IT HAPPEN, WE´VE GOT TO GET THERE. PATIENCE! SIT BACK AND JUST ENJOY THE RIDE! LOL... THANKS FOR THE REVIEW!!
LATERZZZ:)
KRAZI
XOXOXO
[Report This]Date: 22 Nov 2010 2:46 AM Title: Chapter 3: REVENGE IS A DISH... BEST SERVED COLD...
Meant to let you know I was rec'd here too - also I SO love Escala as well - Icy is simply awesome & her Fifty shades is just AMAZING!!!!
But so is this story... I can't wait til they met but also SEE each other for the first time!
I can't believe they dream about each other SO much :)
Very citrusy dreams at that too!!! Oh how yummy!
Can't wait for more.... I'll keep the dreams happening until then....
Gonig to have a cold shower now...
T2M x
Author's Response:
Wow I´m blown away by the response this story is getting. I really want to thank each and everyone of you for reading and reviewing. Each review is specail and you guys keep me going and make want to keep you happy. Thanks for the patience as I move these two along, even those of you with ´forced patience´... you know who you are! lol! i love the threats of taking me into the playroom for a punishment scene.. What can I say DomWard owns me. Hang in there with me and let´s enjoy this crazy ride!! *Happy Thanksgiving*
Laterzzz:P
Krazi
xoxoxo
Date: 21 Nov 2010 11:50 PM Title: Chapter 3: REVENGE IS A DISH... BEST SERVED COLD...
such an awesome chapter. loved it. goodness, I can't wait for the next chapter. *giggles* I can't wait for Alice to get her hands on Bella. hehe. two weeks? you sound like the money pit, or icy.
Author's Response:
Wow I´m blown away by the response this story is getting. I really want to thank each and everyone of you for reading and reviewing. Each review is specail and you guys keep me going and make want to keep you happy. Thanks for the patience as I move these two along, even those of you with ´forced patience´... you know who you are! lol! i love the threats of taking me into the playroom for a punishment scene.. What can I say DomWard owns me. Hang in there with me and let´s enjoy this crazy ride!! *Happy Thanksgiving*
Laterzzz:P
Krazi
xoxoxo
Date: 21 Nov 2010 6:09 PM Title: Chapter 3: REVENGE IS A DISH... BEST SERVED COLD...
OK - so in love with this story! Of course we all want to get back to the Prologue BUT it's going to be all that much sweeter when you get there. The history is wonderful! I love the many sides of B - snarky and strong but still so naive and innocent! And E ~ sigh ~ we all concur we love 50 Shades but clearly other than sharing a love of domination, Escala and Mrs. C the similarities end there! You just want to wrap both of them up in your arms!
I love your writing style and am very much enjoying this story! Absolutely fantastic!
Author's Response:
Wow I´m blown away by the response this story is getting. I really want to thank each and everyone of you for reading and reviewing. Each review is specail and you guys keep me going and make want to keep you happy. Thanks for the patience as I move these two along, even those of you with ´forced patience´... you know who you are! lol! i love the threats of taking me into the playroom for a punishment scene.. What can I say DomWard owns me. Hang in there with me and let´s enjoy this crazy ride!! *Happy Thanksgiving*
Laterzzz:P
Krazi
xoxoxo
Date: 21 Nov 2010 3:27 PM Title: Chapter 3: REVENGE IS A DISH... BEST SERVED COLD...
Love the pre-nup and Jake being busted!! He's an ass...js Oh, and I also love the pics you've included in each chapter!! Helps with the visuals. :) I'm looking forward to the next chapter. I believe I know who safe worded and why......We'll see if I'm right!! Love it love it love it!! Keep up the good work!!
Author's Response:
Wow I´m blown away by the response this story is getting. I really want to thank each and everyone of you for reading and reviewing. Each review is specail and you guys keep me going and make want to keep you happy. Thanks for the patience as I move these two along, even those of you with ´forced patience´... you know who you are! lol! i love the threats of taking me into the playroom for a punishment scene.. What can I say DomWard owns me. Hang in there with me and let´s enjoy this crazy ride!! *Happy Thanksgiving*
Laterzzz:P
Krazi
xoxoxo
[Report This]Date: 21 Nov 2010 2:00 PM Title: Chapter 2: PAGING DR. CULLEN
I'm sorry but your A/N was a classic - "I kinda vomited in my mouth... "
That absolutely cracked me up...
Fantastic chapter by the way...
Now midnight here - so I'm off to bed... savouring the next chapter for tomorrow when kids are at school & hubby at work :)
Yeah for me!!!!!
T2M x
Author's Response:
Wow I´m blown away by the response this story is getting. I really want to thank each and everyone of you for reading and reviewing. Each review is specail and you guys keep me going and make want to keep you happy. Thanks for the patience as I move these two along, even those of you with ´forced patience´... you know who you are! lol! i love the threats of taking me into the playroom for a punishment scene.. What can I say DomWard owns me. Hang in there with me and let´s enjoy this crazy ride!! *Happy Thanksgiving*
Laterzzz:P
Krazi
xoxoxo
Date: 21 Nov 2010 1:51 PM Title: Chapter 1: DREAMS... WHAT DO THEY MEAN?
I am and always will be a Jake hater! Needless to say I'm soooooo excited to see what Bella and Alice come up with! LOL Moving on.....
Author's Response:
Wow I´m blown away by the response this story is getting. I really want to thank each and everyone of you for reading and reviewing. Each review is specail and you guys keep me going and make want to keep you happy. Thanks for the patience as I move these two along, even those of you with ´forced patience´... you know who you are! lol! i love the threats of taking me into the playroom for a punishment scene.. What can I say DomWard owns me. Hang in there with me and let´s enjoy this crazy ride!! *Happy Thanksgiving*
Laterzzz:P
Krazi
xoxoxo
Date: 21 Nov 2010 1:17 PM Title: PROLOGUE: BLIND DATING
I heard about FtLoD from a rec from justginger and I couldn't wait to read it!! So, here I am and I'm hooked already! Gotta continue so I can get caught up but so far I love it!!
Author's Response:
Thanks for reading and reviewing!!!
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Krazi
xoxo
Date: 21 Nov 2010 1:07 PM Title: Chapter 3: REVENGE IS A DISH... BEST SERVED COLD...
I love your story and can t wait for E/B time !
thanks
Author's Response:
Wow I´m blown away by the response this story is getting. I really want to thank each and everyone of you for reading and reviewing. Each review is specail and you guys keep me going and make want to keep you happy. Thanks for the patience as I move these two along, even those of you with ´forced patience´... you know who you are! lol! i love the threats of taking me into the playroom for a punishment scene.. What can I say DomWard owns me. Hang in there with me and let´s enjoy this crazy ride!! *Happy Thanksgiving*
Laterzzz:P
Krazi
xoxoxo
[Report This]Date: 21 Nov 2010 12:43 PM Title: Chapter 1: DREAMS... WHAT DO THEY MEAN?
OMG - what a chapter... full of history but still my goodness - those dreams are freakin AWESOME!!!
Can't wait for the real thing!!!!
Also - never bet against Alice.... LOL
YUMMY :)
T2M x
Author's Response:
Wow I´m blown away by the response this story is getting. I really want to thank each and everyone of you for reading and reviewing. Each review is specail and you guys keep me going and make want to keep you happy. Thanks for the patience as I move these two along, even those of you with ´forced patience´... you know who you are! lol! i love the threats of taking me into the playroom for a punishment scene.. What can I say DomWard owns me. Hang in there with me and let´s enjoy this crazy ride!! *Happy Thanksgiving*
Laterzzz:P
Krazi
xoxoxo
[Report This]Date: 21 Nov 2010 11:14 AM Title: PROLOGUE: BLIND DATING
Oh no Krazi - this has me in - hook, line & sinking lemony sinker already :)
You have to keep on going.... I know you have a few chapters up already & I can't wait to keep on reading them...
I was recommended over here - so happy I was!!!!
T2M x
Author's Response:
Thanks for reading and reviewing!!!
Laterzzz:P
Krazi
xoxo
Date: 21 Nov 2010 8:26 AM Title: Chapter 3: REVENGE IS A DISH... BEST SERVED COLD...
I LOOOVE this story. I saw it rec'd on People Like Us and I'm so glad she told her readers about you. Super excited to see the next chapter and the next and the next and the next . . . well you get the picture. Happy writing!
Author's Response:
Wow I´m blown away by the response this story is getting. I really want to thank each and everyone of you for reading and reviewing. Each review is specail and you guys keep me going and make want to keep you happy. Thanks for the patience as I move these two along, even those of you with ´forced patience´... you know who you are! lol! i love the threats of taking me into the playroom for a punishment scene.. What can I say DomWard owns me. Hang in there with me and let´s enjoy this crazy ride!! *Happy Thanksgiving*
Laterzzz:P
Krazi
xoxoxo
Date: 21 Nov 2010 3:42 AM Title: Chapter 1: DREAMS... WHAT DO THEY MEAN?
I absolutely love the inner dialogue with B - she's a snarky little thing - kick-ass, assertive (yeah, yeah still submissive)...really, really good!
Author's Response:
Wow I´m blown away by the response this story is getting. I really want to thank each and everyone of you for reading and reviewing. Each review is specail and you guys keep me going and make want to keep you happy. Thanks for the patience as I move these two along, even those of you with ´forced patience´... you know who you are! lol! i love the threats of taking me into the playroom for a punishment scene.. What can I say DomWard owns me. Hang in there with me and let´s enjoy this crazy ride!! *Happy Thanksgiving*
Laterzzz:P
Krazi
xoxoxo
Date: 21 Nov 2010 3:05 AM Title: PROLOGUE: BLIND DATING
Wow - JustGinger (People Like Us) was pimpin' you out and from the prologue I am in! It's refreshing to see a cleanly written, smokin' hot piece of work! Onto the next chapter!
Author's Response:
Thanks for reading and reviewing!!!
Laterzzz:P
Krazi
xoxo
Date: 21 Nov 2010 2:43 AM Title: Chapter 1: DREAMS... WHAT DO THEY MEAN?
I hope she gives it to him good.
Author's Response:
Wow I´m blown away by the response this story is getting. I really want to thank each and everyone of you for reading and reviewing. Each review is specail and you guys keep me going and make want to keep you happy. Thanks for the patience as I move these two along, even those of you with ´forced patience´... you know who you are! lol! i love the threats of taking me into the playroom for a punishment scene.. What can I say DomWard owns me. Hang in there with me and let´s enjoy this crazy ride!! *Happy Thanksgiving*
Laterzzz:P
Krazi
xoxoxo
[Report This]Date: 21 Nov 2010 2:36 AM Title: Chapter 3: REVENGE IS A DISH... BEST SERVED COLD...
I' m loving this story!! I can't wait to see where you take it!!!
Author's Response:
Wow I´m blown away by the response this story is getting. I really want to thank each and everyone of you for reading and reviewing. Each review is specail and you guys keep me going and make want to keep you happy. Thanks for the patience as I move these two along, even those of you with ´forced patience´... you know who you are! lol! i love the threats of taking me into the playroom for a punishment scene.. What can I say DomWard owns me. Hang in there with me and let´s enjoy this crazy ride!! *Happy Thanksgiving*
Laterzzz:P
Krazi
xoxoxo
Date: 21 Nov 2010 2:16 AM Title: PROLOGUE: BLIND DATING
I just started your story and really like it so far. Interesting agenda.
Author's Response:
Thanks for reading and reviewing!!!
Laterzzz:P
Krazi
xoxo
Date: 21 Nov 2010 1:47 AM Title: Chapter 3: REVENGE IS A DISH... BEST SERVED COLD...
I am liking your story. Your Alice is a scary person! LOL!!! Hell even Bella is scared of her! Ha! Good work on nailing Jacob. Alice is something. So, we are in Seattle now. Bring on Edward!!!
Can't wait to see what happens next!
Keye
Author's Response:
Wow I´m blown away by the response this story is getting. I really want to thank each and everyone of you for reading and reviewing. Each review is specail and you guys keep me going and make want to keep you happy. Thanks for the patience as I move these two along, even those of you with ´forced patience´... you know who you are! lol! i love the threats of taking me into the playroom for a punishment scene.. What can I say DomWard owns me. Hang in there with me and let´s enjoy this crazy ride!! *Happy Thanksgiving*
Laterzzz:P
Krazi
xoxoxo
Date: 20 Nov 2010 10:46 PM Title: Chapter 3: REVENGE IS A DISH... BEST SERVED COLD...
I can't wait to find out who safe worded either. This is a great story!!! I think it was in the first Chapter you said something about "Blue Bell" and I thought how does this writer know about Blue Bell Ice Cream? Way cool, best Ice Cream ever, my mom's favorite is Butter Pecan too! Anyway! More Chapters Please....can't wait to get back to where they were at the end of Chapter 1 The Blind Date......Till the next update!!!
Author's Response:
Wow I´m blown away by the response this story is getting. I really want to thank each and everyone of you for reading and reviewing. Each review is specail and you guys keep me going and make want to keep you happy. Thanks for the patience as I move these two along, even those of you with ´forced patience´... you know who you are! lol! i love the threats of taking me into the playroom for a punishment scene.. What can I say DomWard owns me. Hang in there with me and let´s enjoy this crazy ride!! *Happy Thanksgiving*
haha! of course I know about Blue Bell I´m from the south.. We Eat All We Can and We Sell The Rest!! lol.. Yeah I´m a butter pecan freak.. I miss it living in Spain though!!
Laterzzz:P
Krazi
xoxoxo
Date: 20 Nov 2010 9:10 PM Title: Chapter 1: DREAMS... WHAT DO THEY MEAN?
This just keeps getting better and better, I certainly hope your getting great reviews to give you lots of inspiration to keep writing you are really great. Love the way your laying all the background, so we can understand where they (Bella and Edward) are coming from. Yes look out JB, nothing worse than a woman scorned. Keep writing more please. On to the next Chapter!!!!
Author's Response:
Wow I´m blown away by the response this story is getting. I really want to thank each and everyone of you for reading and reviewing. Each review is specail and you guys keep me going and make want to keep you happy. Thanks for the patience as I move these two along, even those of you with ´forced patience´... you know who you are! lol! i love the threats of taking me into the playroom for a punishment scene.. What can I say DomWard owns me. Hang in there with me and let´s enjoy this crazy ride!! *Happy Thanksgiving*
Laterzzz:P
Krazi
xoxoxo
Date: 20 Nov 2010 8:37 PM Title: PROLOGUE: BLIND DATING
This is going to be really good, if this first Chapter is any indication!!! Big smile!!! On to the next Chapter.
Author's Response:
Thanks for reading and reviewing!!!
Laterzzz:P
Krazi
xoxo
Date: 20 Nov 2010 8:01 PM Title: Chapter 3: REVENGE IS A DISH... BEST SERVED COLD...
Love, love it already. Please don't wait too long to update. Can't wait for Bella to find out about Alice's little secret. And more importantly for her to finally meet up with Edward......don't prolong.
Author's Response:
Wow I´m blown away by the response this story is getting. I really want to thank each and everyone of you for reading and reviewing. Each review is specail and you guys keep me going and make want to keep you happy. Thanks for the patience as I move these two along, even those of you with ´forced patience´... you know who you are! lol! i love the threats of taking me into the playroom for a punishment scene.. What can I say DomWard owns me. Hang in there with me and let´s enjoy this crazy ride!! *Happy Thanksgiving*
Laterzzz:P
Krazi
xoxoxo
Date: 20 Nov 2010 6:32 PM Title: PROLOGUE: BLIND DATING
Just found this website and your story today after reading People Like Us On fanfiction. So far, I love your story. I really like the Dom/Sub type story. Yeah I guess I'm a pervert but a happy one!
Author's Response:
Thanks for reading and reviewing!!!
Laterzzz:P
Krazi
xoxo
Date: 20 Nov 2010 5:04 PM Title: Chapter 3: REVENGE IS A DISH... BEST SERVED COLD...
great chapter
Author's Response:
Wow I´m blown away by the response this story is getting. I really want to thank each and everyone of you for reading and reviewing. Each review is specail and you guys keep me going and make want to keep you happy. Thanks for the patience as I move these two along, even those of you with ´forced patience´... you know who you are! lol! i love the threats of taking me into the playroom for a punishment scene.. What can I say DomWard owns me. Hang in there with me and let´s enjoy this crazy ride!! *Happy Thanksgiving*
Laterzzz:P
Krazi
xoxoxo
[Report This]Date: 20 Nov 2010 8:27 AM Title: Chapter 3: REVENGE IS A DISH... BEST SERVED COLD...
Story war reccomendedby peoplelikeus's beta. I love where this is going. I appreciate the background information and character development, but Bella is kinda raking on my nerves right now.( i know that she is scared that people will think that there is something wrong with her)
Author's Response:
Wow I´m blown away by the response this story is getting. I really want to thank each and everyone of you for reading and reviewing. Each review is specail and you guys keep me going and make want to keep you happy. Thanks for the patience as I move these two along, even those of you with ´forced patience´... you know who you are! lol! i love the threats of taking me into the playroom for a punishment scene.. What can I say DomWard owns me. Hang in there with me and let´s enjoy this crazy ride!! *Happy Thanksgiving*
Laterzzz:P
Krazi
xoxoxo
[Report This]Date: 19 Nov 2010 2:07 AM Title: Chapter 3: REVENGE IS A DISH... BEST SERVED COLD...
Haaaaaaaa awe poor lil Jakey Poo got fucked LOL Niiiice Alice is smart! I would have never thought about that! Wow that was just awesome...Now I want Edward and Bella to have their sexy times :) Ohhh I sooo can't wait for that night in the club.
I think Tanya said the safeword. Maybe it sunk in her pea-sized brain that nothing more will come of her and Edward. Maybe jussssssssst maybe she realizes he don't love her. LOL
Great chapter BB loved it like always! Can't wait to read more!
xoxoxoxoxoxoxxxx Ari
Author's Response:
Wow I´m blown away by the response this story is getting. I really want to thank each and everyone of you for reading and reviewing. Each review is specail and you guys keep me going and make want to keep you happy. Thanks for the patience as I move these two along, even those of you with ´forced patience´... you know who you are! lol! i love the threats of taking me into the playroom for a punishment scene.. What can I say DomWard owns me. Hang in there with me and let´s enjoy this crazy ride!! *Happy Thanksgiving*
Always glad to see you ¨Swing My Way¨ haha... thank BB!!
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Krazi
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Date: 17 Nov 2010 9:39 AM Title: Chapter 3: REVENGE IS A DISH... BEST SERVED COLD...
what a great chapter... glad they got Jake by the balls and Bella just got richer woo hoo. Cant wait for the next chap...
Author's Response:
Wow I´m blown away by the response this story is getting. I really want to thank each and everyone of you for reading and reviewing. Each review is specail and you guys keep me going and make want to keep you happy. Thanks for the patience as I move these two along, even those of you with ´forced patience´... you know who you are! lol! i love the threats of taking me into the playroom for a punishment scene.. What can I say DomWard owns me. Hang in there with me and let´s enjoy this crazy ride!! *Happy Thanksgiving*
Laterzzz:P
Krazi
xoxoxo
[Report This]Date: 17 Nov 2010 12:31 AM Title: Chapter 3: REVENGE IS A DISH... BEST SERVED COLD...
goodness I hoe it is sooner too you freaking rock this story, and I am excited to read MORE liek NOW...lol thank you for sharing this! YOU ROCK!
Author's Response:
Wow I´m blown away by the response this story is getting. I really want to thank each and everyone of you for reading and reviewing. Each review is specail and you guys keep me going and make want to keep you happy. Thanks for the patience as I move these two along, even those of you with ´forced patience´... you know who you are! lol! i love the threats of taking me into the playroom for a punishment scene.. What can I say DomWard owns me. Hang in there with me and let´s enjoy this crazy ride!! *Happy Thanksgiving*
Laterzzz:P
Krazi
xoxoxo
[Report This]Date: 16 Nov 2010 10:27 PM Title: Chapter 2: PAGING DR. CULLEN
I bet it was Edward that safe worded.
Author's Response:
Wow I´m blown away by the response this story is getting. I really want to thank each and everyone of you for reading and reviewing. Each review is specail and you guys keep me going and make want to keep you happy. Thanks for the patience as I move these two along, even those of you with ´forced patience´... you know who you are! lol! i love the threats of taking me into the playroom for a punishment scene.. What can I say DomWard owns me. Hang in there with me and let´s enjoy this crazy ride!! *Happy Thanksgiving*
Laterzzz:P
Krazi
xoxoxo
[Report This]Date: 16 Nov 2010 10:27 PM Title: Chapter 1: DREAMS... WHAT DO THEY MEAN?
Watch out Jacob, you are going to get whats coming to you.
Author's Response:
Wow I´m blown away by the response this story is getting. I really want to thank each and everyone of you for reading and reviewing. Each review is specail and you guys keep me going and make want to keep you happy. Thanks for the patience as I move these two along, even those of you with ´forced patience´... you know who you are! lol! i love the threats of taking me into the playroom for a punishment scene.. What can I say DomWard owns me. Hang in there with me and let´s enjoy this crazy ride!! *Happy Thanksgiving*
Laterzzz:P
Krazi
xoxoxo
[Report This]Date: 16 Nov 2010 10:24 PM Title: PROLOGUE: BLIND DATING
Wow, damn good chapter.
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Thanks for reading and reviewing!!!
Laterzzz:P
Krazi
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