totally awesome, you are a amazing too

Get back here as fast as you can I Loved this chapter. You did them both perfectly.

Thanks,

crhunt123

Don't try to understand football...just cheer when everyone else does!  It's worked for me for YEARS! 

I am happy you got these two together - finally.  I am also pleased to read of Edward reaction - much the same feelings Bella is having.  What is going to happen when they see each other with out knowledge of the play-D/s segments of their 'secret' lives?  They are going to have ot see each other prior...right?  can't wait...hoping for sooner then later...thanks!

I am just going to say it...especially since not on FF…holy FUCK!  SOOOOOO worth the wait…I can’t wait to hear B’s POV!  Incredible chapter, but unlike B I didn’t get my 4 so please update soon b/c I want MORE!  I did see the update after the Super Bowl but I waited until this morning b/c I wanted to correctly practice BD/sm by being sober J (liked how you slipped the cranberry part in there – I had picked up on the “drinking” in the Prologue (even though I don’t “practice” I’ve read enough to know that rule) – yeah, yeah…way to much FF).

Again, incredibly hot chapter…and we still have so far to go – not to even mention the craziness that is Tanya (I haven’t forgotten about that nut job).  Also, I love Jasper BUT I had to laugh when you had these words “Jasper, in all his infinite wisdom…” but it was with that funky picture that looked like my 10 year old son got dressed in the dark and then his sister played dress-up with his hair – wisdom and that pic don’t go together.

Again, kudos on the visual aids – something FF definitely misses out on- did I mention this chapter was hot??? Stop reading my babble and start writing!!!! THANKS!

Wow... that was one hot chapter!  I can't wait for the big reveal.  Are you going to have the scene from Bella's POV next?  As much as I'm looking forward to them "meeting" I'd love to read that.  Thanks for a terrific chapter, update as RL allows.

That scene was absolutely perfect!! I love the fact that it was from EPOV. It's so heartbreaking to read his thoughts... he deserves to have his pussycat!

I LOVE LOVE LOVE THIS CHAPTER !!! THANK YOU SO MUCH FOR UPDATED 

NEARLY..... NEARLY... :)

Love the story! :)

Football??? who cares - just write AND POST!!! That was just wow!!!!

love it love it, so he thought of Bella
dont make me wait 2 weeks

Ok, so I did an internal 'squeee' and happy dance when I saw this chapter was up and I was NOT disappointed by it. Brilliant! I am sure Bella will be aching in the morning but in that deliciously good way! So glad that the thought of it being Bella at least entered Edward's head. Looking forward to the 'big reveal'!

So far so good. Love the funny shit it is the best keep up the good work

HOLY SHIT!  If anything has ever been worth the wait, it was this fucking chapter!!!  Girl, you have just totally blown my skirt up!  You have set the bar so high that I can only hope that you have the skills to keep it going (which I have no doubt).  Fucking amazing!!!!

wow wow wow

i seriously cant wait for them to reveil themselves to each other

that chapter was seriously amazing

Nooooo I was so hoping this chapter would contain the big reveal. Please update soon.

WOWSA~  so fucking hot I need a cool shower!  WOW.  Awesome rec on Sugar daddy needed by jess2002.  I am so keyed up over this story and I can not wait to see where you go.  God I hope she does not turn him down, Bah that would be sad.  Just wow!

xoxoxo

Kasi~

yummy.  hawt.  intense.   cant wait for more

God i fucking love this story. Please tell me that there wont be too many chapters before Bella and Edward meet as Pet and Dom. i want them together so bad.

Keep up the excellent work bb

love the update!! Can't wait for more!!

That was one hell of a test scene.  Damn, I need a cigarette and I don't smoke.

It broke my heart when Edward had to leave her.  I could tell the both wanted to stay together.  I'm just wondering how he will take it when he learns that she is Bella.  I hope he will be over the moon with happiness.  Of course Edward is a moody mother fucker so it wouldn't surprise me if he freaked out.

By the way, I love all the little pics you throw in during the chapter.  It helps so much with the mental images :)

Holy, f*n' cow.  you get better ratings than that damn game (yah, disgruntled Steelers fan here)  that was Epic,  Thanks for an amazing chapter/pick me up after the horrible on field performabce...what Edward go out of her...it was Epic.  I am as exhausted and releaved as Pet.

Score to you...master "massager!"

Holy Shit!  That is the only phrase that comes to mind after reading this chapter!  I am in awe...I think this was the most intense BDSM scene I have ever read...and they didn't even have sex!  You definitely are a master of the written word to draw that much emotion from your characters.  I cannot wait to read the next chapter...two weeks can't get here fast enough!

omg that was great and intense i felt so bad for him at the end but he had to go per her contract hopefully she will respond and they will together i await the next chapter you are a great writerbring on the lovin for edward and bella anfd bring on the playroom they so are ready for this and made for each other

Oh this was so good Krazi; Seriously good!!!!  Okay I have to admit that the wait was WELL worth the wait...Oh, I can't wait for the Chapter where they find out who they are dealing with.  Is that going to be drawn out throughout the whole story?  I mean I know that Crazy Stalker Psycho Ex-Sub Tanya will have to be dealt with somewhere in the story line, so I was just wondering if they are going to discover each other's identities or not...

No Way to Say Goodbye by: Robshandmonkey is seriously a terrific story, I read all of her stories and "The Quite One" is off the hook as well.. 

You have several more listed that I have been reading and following as well, Thanks for the recommendations.  I do check your blog frequently too by the way... Awesome pics if I do say!!!!!  :-) 

You have a AWESOME week and can't wait for more as always!!!!

Laters BB  Kathy xoxo

that was awsome...better than I ever expected

Keep em cumming lol

B

thanks good chapter

Yay I finally got some time to read. I so love that Bella thinks she is getting over Edward and falling for her new Dom wonder what she is going to think when she finds out that her new Dom and Edward are the same person.

Can't wait for the next chapter

Keep up the excellent work

vbfb1 xoxo

Edwards internal monologue is even funnier than Bella's.  I laughed at the image of his engorment being 'built for all weather' as if its similar to a set of steel belted tires; able to withstand the pelting rain of a cold shower.

I was wondering why Alice a earlier spoken to Bella refering to herself in the third person, but Edward stated there is no 'I' in their convestation but Bella used personal pronouns. What is the difference?

Needing more!

Alice with marks on her wrists, sound proof room................Bella blushing at TMI.She has no idea what she is in for. Mistress Rose testing her at the dealership, HOT!

Man to have an endless budget for Christmas would be awesome.....paintings, guitars, symphony tickets, just little trinkets to the wealthy. Just jealous I guess.

Alice is brilliant using a disposable cell phone to set up their communications. Anonimity is key. Can't wait for the actual meeting of the minds (or bodies). hehehe

Four little words....Sir, its me, pet.          

I wish!

I agree that singing at the top of your lungs is very liberating. So is a good cathartic cry with family/friends.
TMI for Bella to see/take in, but her senses picked up on her bodys desires, interesting response to her fears.

Laughed hard at the Pee Wee's playhouse reference....Mecca Lecca High... Mecca fucking Hinny Hoe!

To Forks she goes..........

He didn't safe word........had me fooled, but then his own hand performing the task to the thoughts of Bella while Tanya is denied her 'O' was perfect punishment. That Tanya is one wacked out obsessed female. Jazz had better protect Edward quick with that restraining order.

I loved the eight year old in the blue suit taking his date to McDonalds to propose. So Sweet and she still has the ring 24 yrs later. That's just as sweet. He is such a mommas boy, my favorite kind.

Glad that Esme knows his secrect obsession is Isabella.

Need to read more, back to the story.

I'm looking forward to them finally making it into the playroom and the reveal... Thank yoou for sharing this story;D)

Don't really care for reading Bella's defensive self talk on cleaning up dog poo. It just didn't seem to be necessary because why would a person be defensive about being a responsible pooper scooper? That makes it seem like Bella thinks people are second guessing that, "Sue me" ? I don't get that, it kinda dumbs her down, IMO. This seems like an act someone would carry out without needing to waste a second thought on. In developing her character, I can see why you want to add that she's thinking of Mojo's needs & taking him out for potty breaks & cleaning up for him because he can't do it himself but enough already about this;D(. gish. thanks for writing, & hope you know I don't mean to be destructive critical but constructive;D)

The musical Chicago comes to mind.....He had it comin'.

Go get that cheating, smooth talker and make him pay for all the lies!

Bella has some awesome wild dreams!

You must be a Shia fan... Boy Meets World and the name of his dog from Transformers...  Neat!!! I'm looking forward to them finally making it into the playroom... Thank yoou for sharing this story!!!

WOW to say you have outdone your self is an understatement......this chapter was fantastic.....absolutely loved it.......WOW~

Kasi~

It sounds like Mojo needs his jewels removed. It will solve many problems. Who wants a dog humping their pillows that is just sick. Bella is going to be so surprized. I guess she hasn't heard his voice for awhile and that is why she doesn't recognize it. She will be so ready for a release on saturday.

Author's Response:

Happy Super Bowl Sunday! I hope your favorite team wins!

I cannot wait for Saturday to come (ha, ha). Hmmmm. I feel as if I am there in person. Great chapter.

Author's Response:

Happy Super Bowl Sunday! I hope your favorite team wins!

I freakin snorted when I read about Emmett and Mojo's antics.  Too funny.

Loved the chapter, but I can not wait till we get in the playroom with Sir and pet.

phone sex can be pretty fuckin hot...blushing as i bite my lip...even better with naughty pics...LOL! yeah...i have a kink in my step ;) love the story cant wait fot #10...mwah

WOW WOW WOW

that chaper was so amazing, i cant wait for more

and cant wait to read about bella and edward discovering it is each other. woohoo

I can't wait fir the next I am excited as Bella

I keep wondering if Tanya will be at the club when they do their scene?!  I hope Bella puts that psycho in her place.  I love that Rose had a device on Emmett.  Bella should've have avenged Mojo by leading Emmett into trouble! 

OMG this is the best story so far Thank you Thank you wow I am so excited to see what happens  please keep updating :)

Can't wait for them to finally meet. Love Mojo.

I really like how you summed up what Bella felt about what happened in the last chapter. A lot of times you get too much of the same thing, but you made it so seemless that it was great.

I love how playful but strick Edward is being with her. I am hoping okay maybe begging would be a better word that the next chapter is the start of the test scene.

awesome chapter

glad for the update

can't wait for Edward and Bella to meet

nice =)

Good Chapter.....

I love it! I can't wait for them to meet in person ... almost there!