Date: 24 Oct 2017 2:44 PM Title: Chapter 16
Interesting evaluation from Garrett, but he probably does have her pegged.
Thanks!
Sally
Date: 24 Oct 2017 10:02 AM Title: Chapter 16
Oh, I like this Garrett character! Any chance we'll see some of his story?
Author's Response:
For sure!
Date: 24 Oct 2017 6:19 AM Title: Chapter 16
Here's to hoping that Garrett can help Bella with healing ..
I wonder if Edward will feel threatened if they build a friendship bond?
cannot wait for more hun !
Date: 17 Oct 2017 11:12 PM Title: Chapter 15
Carlisle's legacy is gonna haunt Bella for the rest of her life, damn his soul to hell! The best therapist in the world would have a hard time soothin' her soul so I don't hold out much hope for Leah when they find her *sigh!*
Date: 13 Oct 2017 8:21 PM Title: Chapter 15
Good to have you back with this story. I feel so bad that Bella has to leave the ranch. She was finally healing a little there. And, that nightmare was horrible. Poor thing.
Thanks!
Sally
Date: 13 Oct 2017 7:56 AM Title: Chapter 15
Looking forward to more X
Date: 13 Oct 2017 6:29 AM Title: Chapter 15
She's going to either explode or implode if she keeps ignoring it.
Date: 13 Oct 2017 12:28 AM Title: Chapter 15
I was thinking about this story just the other day. Thank you for the update.
Date: 27 Mar 2017 12:53 PM Title: Chapter 14
Thanks for writing.
Date: 05 Mar 2017 8:51 PM Title: Chapter 14
Intense indeed!
Date: 22 Feb 2017 5:33 PM Title: Chapter 14
Oh wow. Glad she is going to be with Edward. I would not want to leave him either.
Date: 21 Feb 2017 4:59 AM Title: Chapter 14
Loved it Lisa!!!
Author's Response:
Thank you, sweetheart!
Date: 21 Feb 2017 2:22 AM Title: Chapter 14
Good chapter.
Author's Response:
Thank you.
Date: 21 Feb 2017 1:43 AM Title: Chapter 14
Yikes. Not sure if everyone is going to come out of this alive. Leah definitely won't, I think. Hope they get those that aren't hunting Leah safely into the bunker. I hope Leah doesn't manage to blow their cover stories sky high. She could easily out of spite. Anyways, thanks for the update, and will be looking forward to seeing what comes next.
Author's Response:
Thank you.
Date: 21 Feb 2017 1:08 AM Title: Chapter 14
Wow, a few surprises in this chapter. Edward gave in to Bella so quickly--didn't expect that. And, Aro blasted Bella. And, even though Alice is worried Bella won't come back, at least she seems to understand why Bella has to go with Edward.
Thanks!
Sally
Author's Response:
Thank you.
Date: 20 Feb 2017 11:02 PM Title: Chapter 14
Now if they had just listened to Bella sooner about her concerns with Leah than this wouldn't be happening !!
Edward should have paid better attention too !!
In a way I agree with Aro ..
I know I know Bella's her ownn person but still ..
Cannot wait for more
Loved it X
Author's Response:
Thank you. I debated for awhile on if Bella should stay or go, but I just couldn't see her letting Edward go without her.
Date: 15 Jan 2017 5:14 AM Title: Chapter 13
Too bad they did not sedate her before they left.
Date: 15 Jan 2017 4:39 AM Title: Chapter 12
just reread to get back into this.
Date: 14 Jan 2017 9:49 PM Title: Chapter 13
Can't wait for more
Date: 14 Jan 2017 4:43 AM Title: Chapter 13
Yikes. Bet she's on her way back to try to get at Bella again. Wondering if Mike Newton really does have any evil intent, and if he is linked to the Sandman in any way. Time will tell, I guess. Thanks for the update, and I will be looking forward to the next chapter whenever you have it ready for us.
Date: 13 Jan 2017 4:02 PM Title: Chapter 13
I had a feeling that Leah was going to Xscape. She was to come that Bella was not going with her.
Date: 13 Jan 2017 2:33 PM Title: Chapter 13
Leah is bad news!
Date: 13 Jan 2017 4:50 AM Title: Chapter 13
Oh no...what is Leah up to. I can't wait to see what is next! Great job. . . thanks!!!
Author's Response:
Thank you, sweetheart.
Date: 13 Jan 2017 4:19 AM Title: Chapter 13
Yay !
I was so excited to see this in my inbox !
Though you should be resting after your fall lovely X
I hope you are feeling better ??
You'd think Bella'd get a bit of a break but no such luck ..
Bloody Leah's gone missing !
Is it horrible for me to want her to be taken out by a car on her escape?
Maybe then Bella will get some contentment ..
As for the others all looking or not looking at Bella ..
I wonder if that's to do with her not wanting to go with Leah?
Surely they could put themselves or try to put themselves in her shoes and see why she can't !!
Mike .. Eek the puppy has arrived .. hopefully Edward put an end to him coming around ..
Anyways rest up !
& as always can't wait for more !
Author's Response:
If it helps, I'm writing in bed. Thank God for laptops. Still sore. The bruising is just starting to really show. Arm and thigh are still swollen. Head aches again, and all that crap. Think my body just hates me.
Date: 13 Jan 2017 3:03 AM Title: Chapter 13
Author's Response:
Lmao, what???
Date: 13 Jan 2017 1:00 AM Title: Chapter 13
Yowza!
Author's Response:
Thank you.
Date: 13 Jan 2017 12:52 AM Title: Chapter 13
I had a feeling that trip with Leah was not going to go well. How will they find her? And, poor Bella--knowing she is out there as a loose cannon. It's so sad, but I have to agree with Bella--Leah is a lost cause.
Thanks!
Sally
Author's Response:
I debated a lot on which way to go with Leah, but in the end, I followed my gut.
Date: 13 Jan 2017 12:33 AM Title: Chapter 13
Good chapter.
Author's Response:
Thank you.
Date: 08 Nov 2016 1:32 AM Title: Chapter 12
Such a tough situation for all of them to be in. How's your word count coming for NaNoWriMo? Good luck!
Author's Response:
I've got 11,700 words so far, but my laptop died, so I'm stuck until I can get a new one.
Date: 04 Nov 2016 12:25 AM Title: Chapter 12
Good chapter. Nice twist.
Date: 30 Oct 2016 3:30 PM Title: Chapter 12
Wow, can't wait to hear who it is. Hopefully she is not BSing.
Date: 28 Oct 2016 5:51 PM Title: Chapter 12
FUCK YOU, LEAH! Ugh, this is not going to end well. I'm afraid Bella might end up killing her. Thanks for the update, hon. Can't wait to read what happens next. xoxo Mina
Date: 28 Oct 2016 1:41 PM Title: Chapter 12
OMGosh!!!! Bella can not be alone with Leah. I am afraid that Leah will hurt Bella.
Date: 28 Oct 2016 5:22 AM Title: Chapter 12
Can I just say that I hate Leah ??
She sure as shit is a psychopath !!
& the way the everyone just didn't say anything about the way she baits Belal ..
*Shakes head* ..
She sure is in something when it comes to Bella .. Attached ? Maybe Skeezy ? Infatuated ??
All of the above ..
As always deart .. Loving it
Date: 28 Oct 2016 1:19 AM Title: Chapter 12
Thanks for the update on this one. I don't think I trust Leah an inch here. Hope she doesn't cause too much damage.
I hope you enjoy writing something different for NaNoWriMo. Will look forward to updates whenever you find the time for them.
Date: 28 Oct 2016 1:12 AM Title: Chapter 12
Leah is beyond help in my opinion. I know she went through a lot more than a lot actually but I can't help but kinda hate her and the way she's treating Bella. I'm hoping Bella will be ok. Very curious where this story is going
Date: 28 Oct 2016 1:09 AM Title: Chapter 12
ooh i dont see this ending well....holy shit!!!
Date: 14 Oct 2016 12:32 PM Title: Chapter 11
Emmett is the man!!!!!! Glad he was honest with Bella. She needed to hear it.
Date: 13 Oct 2016 3:35 PM Title: Chapter 11
Girl you write such a deep emotional story. I worry about your happiness. I am reading two of your stories that are heart breaking. Sick babies and sicko men burting women.
I would just lay it on the line if Leah wants to stay and try and get through this then she has got to get help and no cornering Bella. Bella did not cause Charlie to hurt her. She is just as hurt and more so with guilt.
Author's Response:
To be honest, these stories to take a toll on my emotional health, but I do what I can to keep them real.
Date: 11 Oct 2016 4:42 PM Title: Chapter 11
wth was he thinking bringing them into her home? seriously leah scares me...i hope this is just the begining and they both find what they need.
Date: 08 Oct 2016 7:06 PM Title: Chapter 11
So glad they could find a compromise.
Date: 08 Oct 2016 4:17 PM Title: Chapter 11
I LOVE Emmett! I'm glad he was able to be blunt with Bella where everyone else has been on eggshells. And, Edward and Bella were able to come to an understanding.
Thanks!
Sally
Date: 08 Oct 2016 4:13 PM Title: Chapter 11
Awesome that's what Emmett is, just totally Awesome!
Date: 08 Oct 2016 12:52 PM Title: Chapter 10
I don't trust Leah. She is acting like a right bitch. Yes she got hurt a lot, I am not saying that she did not get hurt, but she cannot hold Bella accountable for all of the rotten things Charlie and Carlisle did. If anything Bella got her out of that situation. I get that she needs to be angry at someone.
Bella and Edward, o boy. My heart breaks for them and I hope they can recover from this together!!!
Date: 08 Oct 2016 12:48 PM Title: Chapter 11
Yep Emmett deserves a hus. It is not an easy road that they are on. But I am hopeful that together they will make it. Loved this chapther
Date: 08 Oct 2016 9:18 AM Title: Chapter 11
Thank goodness! I'm glad Edward was willing to do whatever it took to keep Bella. Seems like they can only go up from here on! Let the healing process begin!
Date: 08 Oct 2016 4:19 AM Title: Chapter 11
Edward and Bella don't need to leave
They should be making Leah, Jake and Seth go ..
The ranch is Bella's ..
I liked hearing Emmett's story even if it was heartbreaking ..
He helped her see what she needed ..
I just hope that someone spoke to Edward and made him see so he doesn't flip again ..
Loved it as always hunnie
Date: 08 Oct 2016 3:58 AM Title: Chapter 11
YAY! PARTIALLY FIXED! Now get Leah the hell out of there!!!
Date: 08 Oct 2016 1:46 AM Title: Chapter 11
Thanks for the update. Bella needed to hear what Emmett had to say. Hopefully she'll take it to heart.
One little caveat - you used the word "stag" when I think you probably wanted "stallion". Don't think a stag (male deer) would be up to Emmett's weight.
Will be looking forward to seeing what comes next.
Date: 08 Oct 2016 1:44 AM Title: Chapter 11
I'm hoping this is a turning point for them!
Date: 02 Oct 2016 9:55 PM Title: Chapter 10
I have been reading this on my Nook can not review so sorry. Really good story just the first part was hard to read. I confess I skipped the torture.
I am sure this has been hard to write.
Date: 02 Oct 2016 8:09 PM Title: Chapter 10
So sad adn Leah is a bit scary!
Date: 02 Oct 2016 5:34 AM Title: Chapter 10
Thank goodness she finally opened up!
Date: 01 Oct 2016 11:48 PM Title: Chapter 10
This is such a no-win situation right now. I'm so sad for all of them. But, mostly, I fear Leah will never get her happy ending, no matter how hard Jack tries.
Thanks!
Sally
Date: 01 Oct 2016 1:03 PM Title: Chapter 10
Wow...I feel for Bella, but I see Edward's point too. What a terrible situation they all are in. I worry for Leah too. How does anyone come back from this? I guess a lot of support and work from everyone. A lot of heartache too. Great job...thanks so much!!!
Author's Response:
Thank you. It's going to be . . . interesting.
Date: 01 Oct 2016 5:58 AM Title: Chapter 10
Leah's an evil bitch ..
Bella should have said what Leah said to her ..
I think Bella has the right to say what she said to Edward ..
His priority should be doing everything he can to help his wife who is struggling ..
Bella is now asking for what she needs ..
Cannot wait for more
Author's Response:
Thank you, doll. It's not so much that Leah's an evil bitch, just more that she can't get over whats happened. Not everyone can be saved, even when they're saved.
Date: 30 Sep 2016 10:22 PM Title: Chapter 10
YOU'RE KILLING ME, LISA!!!! KILLING ME!!!
Can't wait for the next chapter. I'm scared Leah might try something. EEEK.
xoxo
Mina
Author's Response:
Lol, I'm sorry for killing you. You're right to be wary of Leah.
Date: 30 Sep 2016 9:57 PM Title: Chapter 10
Bella is right to issue an ultimatum.
Author's Response:
THank you. I think so, too!
Date: 30 Sep 2016 9:48 PM Title: Chapter 10
Edward needs to decide his wife should come first in his life. If she needs to leave he should go with her.
Author's Response:
Agreed! A choice must be made!
Date: 30 Sep 2016 9:22 PM Title: Chapter 10
Oh dear - she certainly put him in a spot. Wonder which way he will end up going. Obviously she can't stay with Leah digging at her all the time, but Edward has commitments that would be difficult to abandon too. Will be looking forward to the next update, and thank you for this one.
Author's Response:
Yeah, there isn't an easy answer to this problem.
Date: 30 Sep 2016 8:15 PM Title: Chapter 10
I don't blame Bella for being scared of Leah, I would be too. I think she and Edward do need time alone with each other to try and heal. They need to talk.
Author's Response:
Thank you so much.
Date: 26 Sep 2016 3:18 AM Title: Chapter 9
Bella needs professional help......BAD!!!!!
Date: 24 Sep 2016 4:13 AM Title: Chapter 9
Yikes! Edward needs to know how she feels though.
Date: 23 Sep 2016 8:49 PM Title: Chapter 9
Honestly, Bella is giving me whipslash. She wants Edward, but she pushes him away. She is sending mixed signals and Edward is not a psychologist nor a mind reader (at least not in this fic) to know what to do
And Edward, jesus christ, he is too invovlved in the case, in wanting to find his sister, he pretty much let his wife sacrifice herself in that quest and doesn't he see what he has done? He keeps putting everyone first, including the mission, when he should be focusing on his wife.
I really hope they can find a way to make it work, bcause otherwise, I say they should take a break and get better on their own.
Thanks for the update, bb. Can't wait to read what you give us next!
zozo Mina
Date: 23 Sep 2016 1:14 AM Title: Chapter 9
Thanks for the update. Ouch - that was quite the bit of drama at the end. Hopefully Edward can forgive that. It will be interesting to see if Bella is able to reconcile with Leah or not. Will be looking forward to the next chapter.
Author's Response:
I'm not sure Edward has anything to forgive. Yet, at least.
Date: 22 Sep 2016 7:06 AM Title: Chapter 9
Woohooo I'm back !!
Just caught up on the chapters !
Edward sure does put his foot in his mouth a lot ..
He needs to realise where his priorities should lie and he keeps choosing wrong ;)
I hope this is the wakeup he needs and also in a way the wake up Bella needs !
Can't wait for more
Author's Response:
Welcome back!
Date: 22 Sep 2016 4:05 AM Title: Chapter 9
Oh my! Bella is hitting rock bottom. Poor Edward. Love this story.
Author's Response:
Thank you, doll!
Date: 21 Sep 2016 10:46 PM Title: Chapter 9
I know this is so hard for both Bella and Leah, but poor Edward is stuck in the middle, trying to everything for everybody. What's it going to take for all of them to find some peace? Can't wait to see how this gets resolved.
Thanks!
Sally
Author's Response:
Thank you so much for the review.
Date: 21 Sep 2016 10:39 PM Title: Chapter 9
IS THIS GOING TO BE A HAPPY ENDING ..... LIKE HEA FOR BELLA AND EDWARD HE SOULD THINK ABOUT HER FIRST AND BE THERE FOR HER ... SHE NEED HIM THEY HAVE TO TALK
Author's Response:
There will be a HEA, but it takes time to get there.
Date: 21 Sep 2016 10:00 PM Title: Chapter 9
Aww this broke my heart. I thought maybe they were steering in the right direction just to have the chapter end this way. :( I know it won't be easy and with everything Bella is feeling and going through I can't blame her for wanting to be Edward's main concern and for feeling jealous. I feel terrible for them both but mostly Bella, obviously. Ready for the next chapter. Thank you for writing this.
Author's Response:
There are a lot of layers to work through here for sure. Thank you for reading and reviewing.
Date: 21 Sep 2016 6:07 PM Title: Chapter 9
I'm glad she finally told him that he's picking them over her, because that is exactly what he's been doing. Bella should be his number one priority and it really doesn't seem like she is. And he can't come running whenever she has a meltdown!!?? She's not throwing a fit for not getting her way, she was terrorized. Bad move Edward. Can't wait for the next chapter.
Author's Response:
Thank you! I feel like you have a real understanding about this chapter.
Date: 20 Sep 2016 11:18 AM Title: Chapter 8
I wish you would finish this story!!!!!
Date: 06 Sep 2016 12:55 PM Title: Chapter 8
A shaken bottle will explode!
Date: 06 Sep 2016 4:37 AM Title: Chapter 8
Bless her heart
Date: 03 Sep 2016 8:07 PM Title: Chapter 8
I'm glad she has opened up to Jasper.
Date: 03 Sep 2016 2:36 PM Title: Chapter 8
Bella certainly has major issues to come to terms with. Maybe baking therapy will help. The fact she feels safe with Jasper should help. But, he's right--she needs to talk to Edward and be totally honest!
Thanks!
Sally
Date: 03 Sep 2016 6:17 AM Title: Chapter 8
Looking forward to more as always !
Date: 03 Sep 2016 1:41 AM Title: Chapter 8
Truly a great story sad very sad for what Bella and all those girls are going through.
Date: 02 Sep 2016 6:52 PM Title: Chapter 8
You do love to write these angst stories , don't you ? This is really a good one , though, even though I didn't read the one before. Keep up the great work !
Date: 02 Sep 2016 3:54 PM Title: Chapter 8
So glad that Jasper is there for her, even if she's reluctant to it. She does need to talk to Edward but I completely understand that talking to anyone about what she went through would be hard, especially if they don't know where she's coming from or if they care for her and maybe in her own way she's protecting him from hearing what she went through. Hope Bella and Edward make it out together on the other side
Date: 02 Sep 2016 4:34 AM Title: Chapter 8
I am surprised Edward is trying to talk to her more.
Date: 02 Sep 2016 4:18 AM Title: Chapter 8
I was hoping she would bet the shit out of the dough. Glad Jasper at least got her to talk some.
Date: 02 Sep 2016 1:45 AM Title: Chapter 8
I loved it! This has to be a hard story to write and I think you are doing a great job!!! Let that imanation run girl!! d84;a039;
Date: 02 Sep 2016 1:29 AM Title: Chapter 8
Gah, you had me scared with the teaser you posted! Thank fuck it wasn't anything bad. She's been through enough.
I'm with Jasper in this one, tho. She needs to stop running and start talking to Edward.
Thanks for the update. Can't wait to read the next one.
Xoxo Mina
Date: 29 Aug 2016 12:57 PM Title: Chapter 7
GAH! CAN'T BELIEVE YOU LEFT US WITH THAT CLIFFY!
Can't wait to read what happens next! Thanks for the update, bb!
xoxo
Mina
Date: 28 Aug 2016 10:13 PM Title: Chapter 7
Poor Bella and the other girls who have been tortured.
Date: 26 Aug 2016 1:57 AM Title: Chapter 7
Again, no alert but great chapter!
Author's Response:
This site has been having problems with email alerts going out. If you're not already in my group on FB, I always post the link there when I update. It's "fans of butterfly betty."
Date: 24 Aug 2016 12:45 AM Title: Chapter 7
Poor Bella. I feel horrible for her and all the girls. Ill be here for the next chapter.
Date: 23 Aug 2016 2:25 PM Title: Chapter 7
Why are they forcing Leah on Bella? Surely there was somewhere else she could stay. If Edward is so concerned about Bella's recovery, why isn't he listening to her. You'd think after all she's gone through, he'd pay more attention to how this is affecting her. I'm really digging this story. This forcing the Leah issue on her has been bothering me though. Looking forward to seeing where this goes.
Date: 23 Aug 2016 2:42 AM Title: Chapter 7
Poor Edward. Bella is a mess and he is grasping at straws. Love it.
Date: 23 Aug 2016 2:08 AM Title: Chapter 7
Bella really needs to talk to someone about what happened to her. I hope maybe Leah and Bella and Alice can help each other health.
Date: 23 Aug 2016 1:30 AM Title: Chapter 7
Bella still has such a long road to travel before she feels any kind of safe, even with Edward. And, now she has to deal with Leah being in the same house. *sigh*
Thanks!
Sally
Date: 23 Aug 2016 1:21 AM Title: Chapter 7
I keep thinking about this story and hoping for an update. Thank you! Tough story. I want to see it with a happy ending
Date: 23 Aug 2016 12:34 AM Title: Chapter 7
Another good chapter. You make them work throught the problems like real life. No magic wand cures.
Date: 31 Jul 2016 7:16 AM Title: Chapter 6
Wow ! Just discovered this story ! Tremendous ! Keep up the great work !
Date: 27 Jul 2016 12:32 AM Title: Chapter 5
Thank you for continuing. I was grabbed by your first story and Im so glad you are continuing with Bellas story. Im along for the ride