Reviews by Natsar
Summary: Past Featured Story

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How can a woman go on after learning that the love of her life has
committed one of the ultimate wrongs. Bella will have to fiind out for herself
after she learns who Edward truly is.  Will she love him regardless of his
flaws?

 

Banner courtesy of RachelCullen77. Thank you wifey!


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Romance
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 21 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 68332 Read Count: 37494
[Report This] Published: 27 May 2010 Updated: 23 Dec 2010
Reviewer: Natsar Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 31 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 14: Music

The songs are very sweet and I am not saying Bella shouldn't read his letters, listen to the music, even talk to him for closure but that should be were it ends. Once a cheater, always a cheater. I mean if she is willing to have an open relationship I guess Edward would be a good choice but how could she ever trust him to be faithful to only her??? He has already proven how good he is at lying. I think there is a huge difference between forgiving someone and setting yourself up so that person has a chance to wrong you again. That is like repeatingly touching a hot stove... Thanks for the update. :~)



Author's Response:

Thanks for reading my little story.  Here is the James interview.  Enjoy!

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Reviewer: Natsar Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 08 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 16: Family Consensus

UHG! This story is so good and so bad both... Is Edward still with Tayna? If so, why? He must know Bella would never give him a chance to make up if he is still with Tayna. Thanks for the update.

Reviewer: Natsar Signed half-star
Date: 11 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 20: The Dance

Don't even know how to review this shit. You never explained why Edward fucked Tayna to begin with and now you kill him so we will never know. Guess it is your way of having a mind fuck...



Author's Response:

First,thanks for reading. Secondly, in chapter 17 I did answer the "Why did he cheat." Here is the excert. 

"I've asked some of these before I want to see you when you answer them."

"Okay."

"Why?"

He looked confused. "Why did I cheat on you?" I nodded. "In short, I was scared."

"Scared of what?" I questioned.

"Scared of us." He started. "We were together for so long and things between us were so good and I just knew if I didn't make a commitment to you that you would leave."

"So you cheated because our relationship was too good?" What kind of sense did that make?

"No. I cheated because I guess subconsciously I sabotaged our relationship. I didn't want to break your heart and I didn't think I'd ever be able to commit to you like you deserved."

"That makes no sense Edward."

"I know it makes no sense. It wasn't you though. It was nothing you did. Deep down I was scared of our relationship. I was so scared it was all going to fall apart if I didn't propose to you and I thought if you left me, you could find someone better for you."

"That's dumb but whatever."

"I always loved you though."

"You have a great way of showing it. You should have just talked to me about what you were feeling and we could have worked it out

Summary: Past Featured Story

Banner by Salix Caprea

Thank you Salix Caprea for the lovely banner:

It has been four years since Edward left Bella in New Moon.  There were no werewolves and Jacob was never more than Bella's friend.  Bella has just graduated from college when Edward accidently crosses her path and finds himself being drawn back into Bella's life.  But Bella is not the same teenager he knew. She is a grown woman with a very grown up lifestyle.  This tells the story of how Edward, realizing he can't live without the love of his existence, and with the help of all of the Cullens, endeavors to win her back.  There are some laughs along the way.  The story is EPOV and rated NC-17 for sexual language and content. 

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories, My all time favorites, Amberina's Completed Favs List, My Favorite Stories
Chapters: 47 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 117349 Read Count: 64701
[Report This] Published: 31 May 2010 Updated: 06 Aug 2010
Reviewer: Natsar Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 03 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 26-Second Chances

I know it seemed like Edward cockblocked himself but seriously, what did you expect from him. He is all about talking. Not to worry, I am sure once he gets going he will devote himself completely to the task at hand, or mouth in this case...lol



Author's Response:

Nat:  Lol. I think that is very insightful.

Summary: Past Featured Story

gbb

Bella has always been the odd one out, never having many friends.
College life could turn that all around. But her friendship with Edward Cullen
might not be exactly what it seems. Does the shy, sweet Edward have a secret?
AH, OOC, DARK

 

My very dear friend (and beta) made this video for me! I LOVE IT! THANK YOU BB!!

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=InDa53qyRhY

 

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories, My Favorite Stories
Chapters: 20 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 96619 Read Count: 12762
[Report This] Published: 10 Jun 2010 Updated: 13 Jul 2010
Reviewer: Natsar Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 22 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 13: The Aftermath

Mace is so hot! What he did was totally wrong but I think Bella would be better off with Mace. I think Edward is a little too boring...lol



Author's Response:

Aww, poor Edward!  YOu think he's boring?? lol, he can't help it ;)

Thanks so much for your review! :)

Uprising by allforkedup Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 424]
Summary:

Kidnapped into slavery, Edward tries his best to work diligently in order to avoid punishment and keep his wife safe.  Nothing about his life is his own, not even the intimacy between him and his Bella... and she, too, could be taken away at any time.  What happens when he has no choice but to make a big 'mistake'?  What will the punishment be?  Will it break him?  Inspired by the song 'Uprising' by Muse (which I think has a stupid video).

Contains adult situations and language; please do not read if you are under 18.


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Finished
Chapters: 51 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 181405 Read Count: 61310
[Report This] Published: 14 Jun 2010 Updated: 10 Oct 2011
Reviewer: Natsar Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 25 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 34: Chapter 34

Great chapter! Thanks!

Reviewer: Natsar Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 04 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 40: Chapter 40

Ok, I have to say 'sisters' or not, the girls taking Edward shopping at Victoria Secrets without Bella was totally uncool of them. And they were gready to spend all that money, even if Edward said it was ok. Just a good thing poor Jazz and Em didn't have to pay for it. Hopefully they will teach there wives what the word budget means...

Parachute by KitsuShel Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 1971]
Summary: Past Featured Story

parachute

After finding a child abandoned on the streets of Seattle, Bella Swan raises him as her own. What happens to their lives when his biological family is finally found?

 

 

 

 

 


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories, Finished, My all time favorites, Drive's Stories to read that are Completed and Not completed, Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiHu, Stories I've Already read, My Favorite Stories, Misstoria's Stories to Read, J's Read and Loved Stories, My favs past present and future
Chapters: 38 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 145849 Read Count: 211604
[Report This] Published: 21 Jun 2010 Updated: 04 Feb 2011
Reviewer: Natsar Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 16 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 6

Are we ever going to meet Edward?



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for your review! I really appreciate you taking the time to read my story! The next chapter should up be up before you know it! ;-) If you weren't already aware, I've been posting the story every Friday (on FFnet and hopefully here now as well!) and on Mondays, I post teasers for the next chapter to everyone who reviews the latest chapter, plus send a completely different teaser to the Fictionators blog, as well as a pic tease. 


Now, my ever awesome Beta has taken it upon herself to set us up a Blog! So, instead of having to hunt down the Fictionators and PicTeases, they'll both be posted to Parachute's blog in one convenient place! Feel free to check it out!  http://kitsushel.blogspot.com/


Also, the teasers for the reviewers are going to stay just that for now, no one else gets to see this except for you and your awesomeness!


Thanks again for giving my story a chance!
<3Shel

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Bella turned from her spot at the window when her phone started ringing. 
"Hello?" she asked.
"Hello, is this Mrs. Swan?" a cheery voice responded.
"This is Bella Swan," she replied hesitantly.
"Hello, Mrs. Swan, I'm calling to inform you that your son, Jack, has just been admitted here at Port Angeles County Hospital."
"Oh, my God, is he alright?!"


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Reviewer: Natsar Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 24 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 7

Totally don't care about skipping the wedding. I am sooooooo ready to get to the Bella and Edward and Jack part. Thanks!



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for your review! I really appreciate you taking the time to read my story! I update every Friday and post teasers on Mondays. In fact, there is delicious little teaser, along with a Pic Tease, up on the Parachute Blog as we speak. 

I added a separate story called "Parachute Outtakes" as a place to keep everything together! There's an outtake of the new car purchase and Jack's 8th birthday up right now! Check it out! Feel free to leave any suggestions for future outtakes in your reviews over there! As you can tell from this message, I respond to every single review because you guys rock my socks!

Also, as another head's up, Parachute's 1000th reviewer will get to choose the subject of one of the outtakes and maybe a little something else. It's the best way that I can think to to thank you guys for all of your love and support!

<3

Shel


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Charlie cast his line out into the lake, watching Jack out of the corner of his eye. It was obvious that the boy had a lot on his mind. 

"Well, kid," Charlie started, "you look like you need someone to talk to. That's why we're out here. Nothing like the peace and tranquility of fishing to help clear your mind. I come out here a lot more now that you and your mom moved into your own place." 

Charlie noticed that Jack flinched a little when he mentioned Bella. Jack sighed and continued to gaze out over the water. 

"Will she?" he asked. Charlie raised an eyebrow.

"Will she what?"

"Will she still be my mom if we go to Chicago to meet my family?" 

When Jack turned towards him, Charlie's heart broke at how the boy's eyes were filled with sadness. He cleared the emotion out of his throat.

"Of course she will. Bella will love you and consider you her son until the day she dies. One thing you gotta learn about us Swan's, Jack, is that when we love, we love forever, just like the actual birds. You'll always be a part of our hearts." 

Charlie blinked back tears as Jack let his drip down his face.

"I don't want to leave you or mom, Pops. Please don't let them keep me!" he cried.


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Reviewer: Natsar Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 07 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 10

OMG! How did I just know you would stop there??? LOL Please update soon...  :~)



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for your review! For those of you who are new to the story, I update every Friday and post teasers on Mondays. The latest teases are up on the Blog (http://kitsushel.blogspot.com/) as we speak. I know everyone's excited about Edward finally showing up! I am too, lol! I love reading your reactions to the chapter and answering your questions!


<3  Shel

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"I could have left him at that police station and let the damn state take care of it, but I didn't. I stood up and chose to do it. I had to make difficult decisions on a daily basis. Things that I shouldn't have had to worry about, but I did. Because I loved him. For the past five goddamned years, I've loved him and I've made sure that he was fed and clothed and taken care of. I made sure that he had to best education that I could afford and that he knew that he was loved. I've bled, sweat and cried over this child. So screw you, Mr. Cullen, and the horse you rode in on," she seethed in fury.    

Reviewer: Natsar Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 27 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 13

Oh they just can't be apart at the end of summer. Jack will be so heartbroken to have to leave his biological family again. Not to mention Edward being away from Bella...



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for your review! Just in case you're unaware, the story updates every Friday and I post teasers on Mondays; the latest teases are up on the Parachute Blog as we speak!

My computer is having issues at the moment, but I don't anticipate any delays for Friday! I normally respond to reviews on Monday afternoons, but said computer issues kept me from it until today! 

Hope you enjoy the teasers!

XoXo  Shel


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The pair got lost in each other's eyes until they were interrupted by the pounding of feet on steps.

Jack skidded to a halt in the hallway at the top of the stairs. He looked between his parents curiously, not quite sure what to make of them standing so close to each other. He walked over to his mother's side and looked up at his father. 

"Is everything okay here, Mom?" he asked Bella, while never taking his eyes off of Edward. 

Bella suppressed a giggle at Jack's attempt at bravado. She placed a hand on her son's shoulder, which caused him to look up at her. She smiled at him and nodded. 

"Everything is just fine, Jack. We were just about to head outside."

 

Reviewer: Natsar Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 15 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 20

Awesome first date! Thanks for the update! Good luck on the award. I will go vote now. :~)



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for your review! The next chapter should be up sometime tomorrow (well, later today, lol). It's a bit shorter than normal, but on the plus side, you'll be getting a full chapter again on Friday. Oh, and have you checked out the Blog teasers yet? There is doozy of a one up there this week! Plus the one for Chapter 22 will go up Wednesday night. (kitsushel.blogspot.com)

Thanks for all of the love and support!

=)

Shel

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Now that she had fallen in adoration with the Cullen clan, she couldn't imagine leaving them. But on the same token, she couldn't imagine leaving her own family and friends behind. The questions whirled around like a tornado, forcing her to blink back tears at their sudden force. She felt a nudge and turned to Esme, who was smiling at her.

"Hey, no frowning," she half-whispered. "Try to enjoy the day, sweetie."

Bella shook her head and smiled sadly. "I'm sorry, Esme. Too many thoughts running around in my head. I don't know what I'm doing."

Esme laughed lightly. "Oh, sweetheart! None of us know what we're doing. Life's a dance that we learn as we go. Everything will work out for the best, you'll see."

"How can you be so sure, Esme? I can't see how this will end happily."

Bella sniffed and looked down at her plate.

"How can I not, Bella? Fate stepped in and brought you to love and keep Jack safe. Fate brought you and Jack back to us. I can't help but be hopeful for the future, especially knowing that my grandson is alive and safe and loved."

Reviewer: Natsar Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 10 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 15

Awe poor Edward. No wonder he 'wasn't feeling well' all of a sudden...lol



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for your review! The Monday teases are up on the Blog (http://kitsushel.blogpot.com) as we speak, so check them out if you'd like! Included this week are teasers for the next Outtake, titled: Save Me San Francisco.

Also, today is the last day to vote in The Hidden Star Awards! Even if you decide not to vote for Parachute (Best Canon Category). stop by and support your favorite authors/stories that might be up for awards! Link is on my profile and up on the Blog!

XoXo

Shel


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"Good afternoon, Mr. Cullen," a beautiful brunette with ice blue eyes simpered, as she stood from her seat behind a large desk. "I was told you wouldn't be in the office for a few weeks." 

Bella quirked an eyebrow at the girl's blatant flirtatiousness. She looked over at Edward and noticed that his posture immediately straightened and his voice took on a cooler tone.

"Gianna," he nodded to the woman. "I'm only stopping by to grab a few things and to show my family around a little bit."
Bella's eyes cut to his face, surprised to have herself included in that statement. He smiled gently at her before leading her and Jack towards the large corner office.

"Family?" Gianna asked, confused. She didn't spare Bella a second glance, but her jaw dropped as soon as she got a good look at Jack. "Oh my God," she whispered and sat down quickly. As soon as Edward's door closed behind them, she picked up her phone and dialed.

"Jane? You are not going to believe who just walked in here!"    

 

Reviewer: Natsar Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 24 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 17

 "I have a proposition for you" What the *!/? does he want and how did he get her cell phone number???



Author's Response:

 

Thank you so much for your review! The Monday teases are up on the Blog (http://kitsushel.blogspot.com) as we speak, so check them out if you'd like! The teaser this week isn't much, but the one on the Blog is more exciting, lol. I've been driving myself crazy trying to get my O/S for the All Hallow's Eve contest finished, so I wouldn't get your hopes up for an early posting this week, sorry! See you guys on Friday!

<3 Shel


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Jack curled up with Bella on the couch opposite of Edward, who was propped up with a ton of pillows. Her hand absentmindedly ran through the boy's hair and he hummed a contented sound. She heard a soft laugh come from Edward and looked up to see that he was smiling adoringly at her and Jack.

'Is it worth it?' She thought. 'Is potentially falling in love with him worth the heartache I'll feel at the end of the summer?'

His eyes moved up to hers and sent her a brilliant smile that made her breath catch in her throat.

The better question to have asked would have been, if it was even possible to avoid it happening any longer.    

 

Reviewer: Natsar Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 08 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 19

Awe. That was sweet. Thanks for the update. :~)



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for your review! The Monday teases are up on the Blog (kitsushel.blogspot.com) as we speak, so check them out if you'd like! I have it on good authority that it's a *squeal*-worthy one!

I play TwiFicTrivia on Twitter every Tuesday at 9 pm EST. It is so much freaking fun. Check it out if you get the chance! We had a bunch of new players this past week, so I figured I'd mention it one more time. I won't bring it up again for awhile.

=)

Shel

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Bella sighed and smiled, her eyes closed and facing the sky, as the classical notes of Tchaicovsky's 1812 Overture swirled around the air. She felt Edward's hand gently begin to play with her hair and she bit her lip to stifle a sigh. He had been nothing short of amazing today and she didn't want their date to come to a close any time soon.

She opened her eyes and turned her face slightly to the left.

Edward's fingers still held onto a strand of hair as he smiled down at her.

"Enjoying the concert?" he asked, in a low husky voice. She smiled widely and nodded happily.

Reviewer: Natsar Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 10 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 31: Chapter 30

Hope Jenks finds out something soon! Thanks for the update. :~)



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for reviewing! The Monday teasers are up on the Blog. (kitsushel.blogspot.com) It ties in with this one nicely.

Voting for the Original Character Awards ends today! We're up for Most Original Plot as well as Jack for Best Offspring and Best Male! It's going to be super tough!

Make sure you leave your pitchforks at the door before reading the teaser! This chapter's drama skyrockets, but I think it's necessary to complete our journey and it's the way that I've always pictured it heading.

♥ Shel ♥

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"Call Tanya and give her this info. She'll know what to do."

"Yes, ma'am. I'll keep my ear to the ground. If I find anything else out, I'll let you know."

Bella pocketed her iPhone and her hands curled into fists. The anger that she had experienced minutes earlier paled in comparison to the rage that coursed through her. The proof that James was a part of Jack's abandonment was black and white in front of her face. She fully planned on marching back into that office and tearing a new asshole into anyone who dared to get in her way. When the elevator reached the final floor, she was alone.

The doors opened and before she could step out, she found herself once again face to face with James Brooks. His eye widened in shock and her fist flew without thought. He swiftly caught her hand and pushed her back into the elevator with his body weight. "

What the hell are you doing?" he hissed angrily.

"You- you-" she stuttered. "You piece of shit! I'm not leaving here until I talk to Edward. I know who you are and what you did to Jack. You're a miserable excuse for a human being!" she shouted in her fury.

Quicker than she could blink, one of his forearms was pressed against her throat menacingly while the other hand gripped her by the hair.

"You couldn't just leave, could you?" he ground out. "No, you had to be Miss High-And-Mighty. From the first moment I laid eyes on you, I knew you'd be a challenge."

Reviewer: Natsar Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 18 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 32: Chapter 31

UGH!!! Just want to choke Edward! Bella tried to warn him about James but noooooo, he didn't want to hear it. Why the fuck would he schedule an appointment with James when he knew Bella was coming to see him??? Hope Charlie figures out what is going on. Stupid Edward...



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for reviewing! The Monday teasers are up on the Blog. (kitsushel.blogspot.com) Sorry these went out a few days late, but I was busy working on EPOV to go hand-in-hand with the next chapter, so I hope I'm forgiven. The next chapter should be up in a few hours and the Outtake sometime this weekend. ;-)

I'm so sad to see Parachute ending soon. It's been my baby for the past six months and I'm so thankful and grateful to each one onf you who has walked this journey with me! I'm not a big fan of angst or unnecessary drama, so our loose ends are starting to become tied up with Chapter 32. I only anticipate another 6 or so chapters before we're all finished. *sad face*

Parachute ended up winning the 3 Original Character Awards that it was up for, so much love and adoration to everyone who voted! Voting for The Avant Garde Awards ends on the 26th.

♥ Shel ♥

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Victoria flew at Bella, pushing her forward as the other girl struggled.

"Stop it!" Victoria whispered. "Unless you want to fucking die, then keep right on fighting me."

Bella ceased to move and felt Victoria's hands pulling at the knot in the rope around her wrists. "Why are you helping me?" she asked in confusion.

"I may be a shitty mother, but I'm not a killer, Bella. We've got to get out of here. He's come unhinged."

"Really, Vicki? Is that what you think of me?" James voice echoed throughout the room.

Victoria froze just as the knot slipped away and Bella felt her hands come loose. She fought the fire in her shoulders and kept her hands together so that James wouldn't realize that she was free. Victoria's ice blue eyes were large with fear as she turned to face her lover.

Summary:

Jasper finds Bella in the forest bleeding after Edward leaves in New Moon


Categories: Non-Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Jasper
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 4872 Read Count: 786
[Report This] Published: 27 Jun 2010 Updated: 27 Jun 2010
Reviewer: Natsar Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 28 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

OH! So sweet but I feel like it is cut off at the very end. I would like another chapter just to round out the feelings of Bella and Jasper. Thanks!

Summary:

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bella is a naive girl. she thinks nothing can happen to her, she thinks she will find the perfect man, have an okay job, struggle alittle, than have kids and settle down.

how wrong she was. she meets this boy who is perfect, or so she thinks. one thing leads to another and bella is stuck in a world she can not nor ever get out of. she tries but in the end she is always for ever his.

nc-17 for rape, lemons, killing, drugs,etc.

warning: dark edward and sexual abuse

Hey everyone so my story has been reported for all the lemons sexual abuse drugs and rape. Even though it states these things in the warning and is in the nc-17 category. I have not violated any rules and my stories are not as graphic as many are on this website. So if this story is deleted you know why.  Sorry to all those enjoying it and wanting more, I apologize for this one persons actions in advance. If you want to know who reported this story just look in the reviews and you will see! 

-Love Sinister :D

 


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 19 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 49477 Read Count: 49642
[Report This] Published: 07 Jul 2010 Updated: 14 Mar 2018
Reviewer: Natsar Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 24 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 3: lost, hurt, pain, and acceptance

Seriously, poor Bella needs to chill or she won't live to see her kids grow up. I think Edward would be a lot less mean if she stopped fighting him so much. I am not saying for her to give up, just bide her time until she can escape.



Author's Response:

yeah but hey she's stubborn she'll learn soon enough

Diamond in the Rough by lmlx8 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 4248]
Summary: Past Featured Story

ditr                   

Bella is coming from a bad marriage, and memories that haunt her. After recieving her Master's degree in Psychology, she begins to embrace her submissive nature. When she mets Edward she is drawn to his Dominating character. Can Edward help her to get over the pain from her past, and find peace at his feet.

 

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Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Action, Drama, Humor, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Domward's Dungeon, I Whitlock's read , My Favorite Stories, Fav BDSM Fics
Chapters: 110 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 949046 Read Count: 1255208
[Report This] Published: 19 Jul 2010 Updated: 18 Sep 2014
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Date: 13 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18

UHG! Those horrid little people! I should hope Edward puts them in there place! He 'played' with Irena? Isn't she like his aunt or something? I forgot... Thanks for the update. :~)



Author's Response:

No...Irena was his first submissive and they parted ways, Edward explained that at their coffee date...Thanks for reading ...lml

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Date: 20 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20

Thanks for the update. Now I remember Alex... Glad Edward let Bella have input on her tat.



Author's Response:

Edward only mentioned him as someone he knew... but like I said my edward keeps his promises...thanks for the comment ...lml

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Date: 22 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Awesome start! I am very excited for you to continue this story. I find it somewhat strange that Leah would be ok with her husband attending a play party with Bella but they must all be good friends.



Author's Response:

It wasn't a play party. Jake would not have gone to that with Bella and she would have been very uncomfortable asking him.

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Date: 26 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

Great chapter! Thanks for the update! :~)



Author's Response:

Thanks for the review, here’s your treat

     a little teaser

 

“Baby, I’m going to have to hear all your shit. I need to know. Because I need to be able to know what’s ok and what’s not. I need to know how far to push you, without causing damage either physically or emotionally and I don’t ever want to hurt you. You are going to have to trust me with everything you have in you. It’s a process, we start out slow, when I can trust you, and you can trust me, without any doubt” He smiled “Baby, that’s when we made it to the top. But it’s a long way up there. There’s going to be lots of tears and letting go.” He took a deep breath, glanced around the street then looked back into my eyes “My question for you is, do you want to climb up that ladder with me?”

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Date: 27 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

Wonder what is up with Edward? He must be seriously over thinking something...

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Date: 03 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

Hey going to the grocery store can be more fun than the movies...at least you can talk. lol



Author's Response:

That's very true and you also get to see their eating habits...lml

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Date: 06 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

Awesome chapter! Loved the 'sugar coated cardboard'...  Will Edward and Bella be going over soft and hard limits? Thanks for the update!



Author's Response:

Thanks for the review. I don't want to answer your question, because I don't want to lie and I don't want to give anything away either. All I can say is stay tuned.

Thanks for reading and leaving a review, here’s a teaser for you…lml

 

 

“What are you thinking about?” I turned to face his voice; he was sitting in one of the chairs, watching me. His face was relaxed but he had an intense look in his eyes. I released the lip I didn’t realize I was biting “I was just imagining being restrained and blindfolded”

 

He didn’t say anything at first, he just shifted in the chair, before asking “What was happening to you?”

 

“Mmm...”I hummed “....nameless, faceless people were sitting in those chairs, watching me struggle not to cum.” I blushed with the last word.

 

“Ahhh... and that would be something you would enjoy?”

 

 I closed my eyes and inhaled deeply, I didn’t realize before but the room had a smell of Jasmine and Lavender. “Yes...I think I would enjoy that very much.”

 

 

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Date: 16 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

Loved this chapter and looking forward to reading Bella's limits. Thanks!

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Date: 19 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11

"Maybe it was mean of me..." Maybe?!? LOL Yes, Edward dear, it was definately 'mean of you' LOL Thanks for the update! :~)



Author's Response:

laughs and agrees with you...it was mean of him, but he can be a cocky bastard..,

 

Thanks for reading and leaving a comment…here’s a teaser for you…lml

 

            “Hello.”

 

             “Hello to you how is your day?” Alice was loading the dishwasher.

 

            “Good, I had my last class today, and now I am at your sisters.” Alice looked up “Hello Edward, I stole your girrrllfriend.” she yelled stretching out the girl. He chuckled, but didn’t reply to her comment.  

 

            “Good, I’m glad you’re having a nice day. Did you sleep well?” I could hear the amusement in his voice, and I narrowed my eyes speaking softly “Once I got to sleep, I did”

 

            “Why couldn’t you sleep?” I could feel the heat in my face from the blush “Because somebody was being mean.” He chuckled. I looked at Alice; she smiled and winked at me.

 

            “Well if it’s any consolation, I’m sorry I was mean.”

 

            “Liar!” He laughed “Ah, my Bella, you know me already.”

 

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Date: 27 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13

Awe, Edward was sooo nice to 'take care of Bella' instead of leaving...lol



Author's Response:

Awe...yeah he took care of her ...lol  i wish someone would take care of me like that ....lol.

Thanks for reading and leaving a comment...

Here's a teaser for you...lml

“Um Edward, do you know the answer to my question?” He chuckled

 

“What question was that Bella?” Damn he was going to make me ask. I glanced at the women in my car, their attention was completely on me

 

“Um, you know about what time” the other end of the phone was completly quiet.

 

“Edward you still there?”

 

“Yes, I’m here it’s almost one o’clock” Shit he was really going to make me say it.

 

 “I could just guess.”

 

“You could, but don’t guess wrong” I took a deep breath and just asked.

 

“Edward, what time did we go to sleep last night?” I looked to Carol, she had a shocked look on her face as she asked in a hushed whisper.

 

“Your sleeping with him?” Peggy on the other hand was not as quiet.

 

“I knew you were getting laid, that’s why you been so happy lately”

 

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Date: 31 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14

Loved the collaring! I really loved what Isabella said to Edward. Thanks!



Author's Response:

Thanks for reading and leaving a comment, I'm glad you like my story...lml

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Date: 02 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15

I have to ask...What does the sentence say? Thanks for the update. :~)



Author's Response:

You will find out what she has to write...patience and control are the words for the weekend,,,

Thanks for reading, and leaving a comment, I have a teaser for you..  lml

Edward grew serious looking at my eyes through the reflection of the mirror over the dresser.

 

            “Do you feel more confident? By the time you laid down, you certainly acted more confident.”

 

            “Yes, I do. At least I have a general idea how you want me to act and what you expect from me.” He stood up straight placing his hands on my shoulders before kissing the top of my head.

 

             “Good, get ready. Can you try to be in the kitchen by seven-thirty? I want to talk to you.”

 

             I pursed my lips “You can’t talk now?” He sighed drawing his pointer finger in a circle in front of him.

 

            “Edward and Bella here, Master and submissive in the kitchen” he said pointing towards the door.

 

            “Am I in trouble again?” I asked with interest my voice coming out in a whine.

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Date: 09 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17

I loved Bella attacking Emment. Served him right...lol



Author's Response:

I thought so too...BTW I would have chosen 'You Lost That Lov'n Feeling' for the men to sing...

Thanks for reading and leaving a comment I have a teaser for you...lml

I stood in front of Edward’s door waiting for him to answer. The eleven o’clock appointment with Mr. Tanner gave me an extra hour. The door opened to a confused Edward

 

“Isabella?” I couldn’t help myself he was so handsome standing there and I was so gitty that I threw my arms around his neck and practically jumped in his arms, kissing his surprised lips.

 

            It only took him a second to respond as he held me closer to him. When he pulled away he had a smirk on his face.

 

 “What was that for?” I kissed him again “Thank you for the roses, they are beautiful”

 

           

“Is that all it takes to get you to jump me?” I giggled “Oh, I don’t need a reason to jump you”

 

            I was going to kiss him again, but a loud throat clearing from our left caught my attention. Edward patted my bottom, setting me down. When I looked over his shoulder I saw four sets of curious eyes watching me, and a woman on her knees looking at the floor. Oh my god, I can’t believe I just threw myself at him in front of his company, of course my face heated up with my embarrassment causing Edward to chuckle.

 

 “Come on I’ll introduce you” he said as his arm wrapped around my waist guiding me into the room.

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Date: 16 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19

Is Alex like a private investigator or security? Would Edward really want to have the club passed down to him? I am not sure how Bella would feel dealing with that full time. Thanks for the update. :~)



Author's Response:

I will tell you this..Alex is not an investigator and the only other thing I will say is that unlike SM's Edward mine does not lie and he always keeps his promise...

Thanks for reading and leaving a comment...I have a teaser for you ...lml

The quick shower I took felt amazing, and if I had time I would have stayed in there longer and let the water wash away all the stress from the day along with the grunge. Edward was sitting on the bed when I came out of the bathroom wrapped in a towel.

 

“Where are we going?” I wanted to know what to wear. I was hoping for casual, I just didn’t feel like dressing up.

 

 “No where fancy, just a quick bite to eat and then we have somewhere else I want to stop at.”

 

            I pulled my bra and panties out of the drawer along with a pair of dark blue skinny jeans. When I came out of the closet holding a red fitted t-shirt Edward had my hair brush in his hand.

 

“Come here” he motioned to the bed,

 

 I got a tight feeling in my stomach and my girly parts practically begged me to hurry to him. He sat back spreading his legs pulling me onto the bed so I sat between his thighs. Edward unraveled the towel on my head and began running the brush through my hair

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Date: 27 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22

Really want James to die now but the ending was soooo sweet. Thanks for the update. :~)



Author's Response:

thanks for reading and leaving a comment ..lml

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Date: 30 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23

You really had me worried for a second. After the dog barking then Bella missing... Whew, glad it worked out, this time. Thanks for the update. :~)



Author's Response:

Thanks for reading and leaving a comment. I have a teaser for you

“The phone Bella” I could see him trying to rein in his anger and I knew that had we been anywhere else but this room, I would have been Isabella at that moment.

 

“I turned it off”

 

“You…” Edward didn’t get to finish his statement because I continued to explain.

 

“On the way back, Sally was upset and we were talking and the phone kept ringing and interrupting us, so I turned it off.” He sat there with his head down running his hand through his hair for what seemed like forever before his eyes finally met mine again and he released a long sigh.

 

“Bella..” Edward sighed again “I’m going to give you one more chance to just stay in this room and relax tonight. I’ll bring your dinner up here; we’ll take a long bath and watch TV.”

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Date: 04 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24

I totally understand that Edward had to do this but you still can't help but feel a little bad for Bella. Thanks for the update. :~)



Author's Response:

I felt bad for her too, however Edward had to do something...lml

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Date: 04 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 32: Chapter 32

Hey do you know who makes Orgasmic? I tried to google it but came up with several different products. I totally love that you tell us about the products in your story. Thanks! :~)



Author's Response:

Yes you can get it from Fantasia Home parties I have the link

 

http://corporate.fantasiahomeparties.com/Products/ProductDetails.aspx?prodid=184&cid=110

 

I believe it is exclusive to them, personally I think the stuff is fantasic

it is spectacular and I would love to go again...Thanks for reading and leaving a comment, I have a teaser for you...lml

 

When I got back to Bella she was half awake thanks to Seth’s persistence, I sat on the edge of the couch looking down at her.

 

“Hey” my fingers ran along the line of her jaw.

 

“Hi. Do I smell food” I smiled at her

 

“You do. Are you hungry?”

 

“Starving” she admitted while she sat up “It’s weird because I ate lunch”

 

“Yeah well that was four hours ago and your body worked really hard on the way home” her lip went between her teeth while her face flushed pink. I chuckled at her response “What are you thinking?”

 

“I’m thinking about my reward. I get a reward.” Bella’s whole face lit up and her eyes sparkled. 

 

“That you do, what would you like?” I asked tucking a lock of hair behind her ear

 

“You” I looked into her eyes “You have me love.”

 

“Nooo…I want you” Bella flung herself at me straddling my lap with a force so hard she knocked me backwards on the couch.

 

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Date: 04 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 33: Chapter 33

OMG! Everyone should have a pink BFF...lol Thanks for the update! :~)



Author's Response:

Everyone wants a BFF...lol ....it is spectacular and I would love to go again...Thanks for reading and leaving a comment, I have a teaser for you...lml

 

When I got back to Bella she was half awake thanks to Seth’s persistence, I sat on the edge of the couch looking down at her.

 

“Hey” my fingers ran along the line of her jaw.

 

“Hi. Do I smell food” I smiled at her

 

“You do. Are you hungry?”

 

“Starving” she admitted while she sat up “It’s weird because I ate lunch”

 

“Yeah well that was four hours ago and your body worked really hard on the way home” her lip went between her teeth while her face flushed pink. I chuckled at her response “What are you thinking?”

 

“I’m thinking about my reward. I get a reward.” Bella’s whole face lit up and her eyes sparkled. 

 

“That you do, what would you like?” I asked tucking a lock of hair behind her ear

 

“You” I looked into her eyes “You have me love.”

 

“Nooo…I want you” Bella flung herself at me straddling my lap with a force so hard she knocked me backwards on the couch.

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Date: 08 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 34: Chapter 34

I love this chapter. Edward is not wrong in calling Bella 'his slut' as long as she doesnt' have a problem with it. Thanks for the update! :~)



Author's Response:

thanks fro reading ...lml

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Date: 18 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 37: Chapter 37

Thanks for the update! I hope Bella will tell Edward about her little run in with Tayna... :~)



Author's Response:

i hope so too...usual ...Here is a teaser for you...lml

We sat a little longer talking about some of the things she would like to do there. I had not been to Victoria in a long time and there were some new attractions that were possibilities for us to see. I thought it was a good time to bring up the extended stay at the beach. Bella seemed very opened to that possibility, made all the more attractive because both hotels allowed pets.

 

“When you talk to Alice would you get the name of the hotel so I can sort of figure out what the cost is going to be” The statement was harmless enough but my answer must not have been.

 

“I got it Bella you don’t have to worry about paying” her eyes narrowed

 

“Edward I’m not going to let you pay for the whole thing. We’re both going we’ll both pay”

 

“I’m the one that suggested the long trip, I got it” I watched as the resentfulness rolled across her face.

 

“This is not up for discussion, I’m paying my half”

 

What does she mean half are we going to split the cost of meals?  

 

“Isabella be…” I didn’t get to finish, Bella’s eyes turned to pure fury

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Date: 29 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 40: Chapter 40

Awesome chapter! Thanks! :~)



Author's Response:

Thank you...

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Date: 31 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 74: Chapter 74 (1st half)

OK. I have to admit, I could only read 1/4 of this chapter. After I got to the part that Edward was actually going to use Bella's insecurities as a means of punishment for her, I had to stop. Even after Emment's warning, he still was soooo sure of himself that he totally forgot his girl! I will go back and finish this chapter once I have calmed down and hope Edward pulls his head out...



Author's Response:

I hope by now you calmed down...lol...it was a thought he had, and decided against it...that's all it was.

Summary: Past Featured Story

gtth

 ***NOW COMPLETE***

Bella Swan had led a very ordinary life.  She'd married her college boyfriend only to be betrayed when he left her for another girl.  After the death of her father, she pulled out a map and threw a dart.  The implications of that one simple act would surprise her beyond her belief.  She found a home...she found a job...could she find love again after surviving a cheating husband?  Only time will tell.  What secrets will the beautiful stranger she meets have and how will she deal with them? 

AH/OOC.  Canon pairings, with twists.  NC-17 for dirty language, a smattering of BDSM, and the usual lemony goodness.  If you wouldn't read it with your mother standing over your shoulder, you shouldn't be reading it at all!

fs


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's not read yet, My All-Time Favorites, Ageise02 Current Reads, Single parents , I Whitlock's read , My all time favorites, Amberina's Completed Favs List, G8or Favor8s Read, Stories Read by CNYBella, My Favorite Stories, My favs past present and future
Chapters: 38 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 258357 Read Count: 183823
[Report This] Published: 21 Jul 2010 Updated: 09 Mar 2011
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Date: 30 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17 - Christmas Cullen Style

Great update. Thanks!

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Date: 22 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 - Moving Day

Awe. So Sweet. I can't wait to read more. Thanks!

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Date: 27 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4 - Nannygate (Pt. 1)

UGH! I think Miss Marta is trying to find someone for her ugly niece! What a bitch!

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Date: 07 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8 - Revelation Number Two - It's a Biggie (Pt. 2)

What Edward said about Carmen being in the past is all well and good but he should have put a stop to her kissing him on the mouth and all that touching. That is just not cool.

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Date: 20 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10 - Only a Little Creepy (Pt. 1)

Next chapter fast please. :~)  Women usually know these things ~ if men would only listen sometimes it would make life a lot easier...lol

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Date: 25 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13 - Now, That's A Party!

Can't wait to see what is in the bag...lol Thanks for the update! :~)

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Date: 14 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19 - Have Yourlelf a Merry Little Break Down

WOW! Can't believe Edward was such as ass! I understand getting angry but some words can't be taken back. Even if Bella does forgive him, he has damaged the relationship and has a lot to make up for.

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Date: 06 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 37: Chapter 37 - A Promise Broken isn't Easily Fixed

Good God! This Edward is a total fuck up!!!

Mafia Princess by verucasin Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 527]
Summary: Past Featured Story

stories/23069/images/MafiaPrincess.jpg

Banner by MsRason

 

All Humans. OOC. He is the mob boss that wants to rekindle what they had. She is the daughter of the rival mob, who just recently accepted her fate. Will uniting together solve all their problems? ExB


Categories: Twilight
Characters: None
Genre: Romance
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: I Whitlock's read , To Read (Geddy)
Chapters: 32 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 116080 Read Count: 87571
[Report This] Published: 27 Jul 2010 Updated: 07 Feb 2012
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Date: 20 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

"Every time I fucked somebody, I imagined it was you," he murmured. "Every kiss, moan and every fucking orgasm I had with other women... I only had them because I was thinking of you. It's always been you."

Are you kidding me??? I guess it was too much to hope that Edward didn't fuck anyone else like he hoped Bella too... He is such as ass!



Author's Response:

Lol! yeah, he wasn't celibate..if that was what you meant. 

Diamond Extra's by lmlx8 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 265]
Summary:

These are extra's from my story. It just provides more information and will also provide a place for other POV's


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Erotica, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: My Favorite Stories
Chapters: 23 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 99277 Read Count: 40320
[Report This] Published: 05 Aug 2010 Updated: 04 Dec 2012
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Date: 20 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 3: A Chat With Edward

I noticed Edward said he wouldn't share Bella but didn't say anything about him doing something with another sub. I really hope he stays faithful to Bella. Even though he is the Dom, being exclusive works both ways.



Author's Response:

This is from Chapter 7, when edward was explaining the rules

1.      No other sexual partners -

 

I looked at her “Any questions?” She thought then asked “Just me, or does this apply for you too?”

 

“No this applies to both of us. I don’t share Isabella, and I wouldn’t do that to you.” She seemed pleased with that.

Hope tat should answer your question... thanks for the comment ...lml

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Date: 21 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 1: The Contract

Yes, it does. I was reading another story that was supposed to be exclusive also but Edward lets another woman kiss him on the mouth, flirts a lot, and gives another woman Bella's place at his feet. All this does is damage the trust between the sub and Dom. I just wanted to be sure this was not headed the same way. I actually stopped reading that story because I feel so strong about it. Thanks for your reply and am looking forward to the next update. :~)



Author's Response:

yes that would upset me too. I'm a Bella/Edward all the way.

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Date: 14 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 22: Alice in her own Wonderland

I think Alice is acting like a spoiled little snob. And her blaming Bella for getting pregnant is just crazy. I would say it is pregnancy hormones but I think it is more about Alice want to be in center of attention and control everyone. Poor Jazz. I know he wants to protect his wife but I think even he sees how bad she is behaving. I hope he can find a way to deal with her and help her without being mean to Bella or Edward because they have done nothing wrong.

Amazing Grace by Cullensgirl90 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 429]
Summary:

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Bella is given to Edward as a birthday present. He promises her that he will love her and never hurt her. Will he be able to keep his promise or will a dark secret tear them apart before their relationship can develop?

 Dark Edward.


Categories: Twilight, Non-Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/OC
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: To Read
Chapters: 43 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 185811 Read Count: 80457
[Report This] Published: 03 Sep 2010 Updated: 23 Jun 2011
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Date: 15 Oct 2010 Title: Amazing Grace

OMG!!! Even if Edward didn't put anything in her drink he totally knew about it! I can't believe he wanted to share her with Luke. Letting her kiss him and he wanted her to give him a blow job in front of all those people. I thought Eddy would be more possessive. Can't wait for the update! Thanks. :~)

The Vineyard by EricaNoelle180 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 512]
Summary: Past Featured Story

France 1830

After the betrayal and death of his wife, Englishman Edward Cullen is bitter by love. But  when he meets a tradesmen's daughter who was everything his late wife wasn't, Edward finds himself giving his heart to a woman who he, in the past, would deem improper. With duties of society and burdens of the past pushing them in all directions, will the two lovers be able to give themselves everything their hearts desire?

fs


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Historical, Romance
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Stories Read by CNYBella, Edwards Paradox Completed Favourites
Chapters: 28 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 69979 Read Count: 47190
[Report This] Published: 03 Oct 2010 Updated: 28 Feb 2011
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Date: 12 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 3

Very good job! Thanks for the update! :~)

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Date: 05 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 5

I like Bella fiesty but hope she doesn't push it to bitch. Nothing is as annoying as bitchy Bella. Thanks for the update. :~)

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Date: 08 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 6

I am so glad you are not going to include all of the boring stuff...lol Thanks for the update! :~)

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Date: 29 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 9

Yeah, they probably should have locked the door...

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Date: 01 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 10

I like your story. If someone does not like it, they should not 'waste their time' reading it. Thanks for the update. :~)

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Date: 02 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 11

I wouldn't leave her alone with Edward. Not that he would do anything but I wouldn't want her mauling him. It is one thing to give someone another chance but different to set yourself up to be hurt again.

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Date: 05 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 21

WOW! I can't wait to see what Edward's response will be when he realizes that James is Kate's father! So really, it should be James and Victoria raising Kate, not the Cullens. Because they have no blood tie to her at all. I wonder if James will take her? Thanks for the update!

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Date: 15 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 24

Yes! Go Jazz! Gotta love that guy! Thanks for the update! :~)

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Date: 22 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 25

Wow, can't believe Jasper cheated on Alice. What an ass! I really hate cheaters...

Please Remember Me by babylou23 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 64]
Summary:

stories/10761/images/Bannerpleaserememberme1.jpg

 

The day after Bella's 16th birthday, she disappears. Four years later and Edward still spends everyday looking for Bella. When he finally finds her, she does not remember who he is. Can Edward make her remember him and who she is or will she choose they life she was forced into.  NC-17 for dark themes, lemons and language.

This is my first ff, I have another one which I will post soon. I am addicted to twilight fanfiction more than the books, all my stories are human and Edward and Bella.

 Check out my blog for pictures and stuff;

http://babylou23-prm.blogspot.com

Disclaimer; All publicly recognizable characters, settings, etc are the property of their respective owners. The original characters and plots are the property of the author. The author is in no way associated with the owners, creaters, or producers media franchise. No copyright infringement intended.

I do not own twilight but I do own Pleaserememberme  copyrightbabylou23@2010.


Categories: Twilight, All Human
Characters: None
Genre: Drama
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 6 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 23908 Read Count: 4336
[Report This] Published: 18 Oct 2010 Updated: 12 Jul 2011
Reviewer: Natsar Signed
Date: 08 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Seriously, how can he say he is still hung up on Bella when he is acting like a 'man whore' his words, not mine. Doesn't even make sense... If he still really loved her he would not be fucking everything in sight and taking blow jobs from the office whore!



Author's Response:

All I can say is that he very confused and messed up. Hopefully he will be explain himself over time. Remember he is jus human and a men as well. lol, thank you for reviewing I love hearing what you think :-)

Summary:

A Bella/Edward Story

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(Banner by AngelGoddess1981) 

Bella loves Edward, much more than she should. Edward is an addict. Bella deals with it. Years of this cycle begin to take its toll, and Bella is fed up. A near fatal accident forces Edward into a coma, and Bella reexamines her previous decision. Will Bella stay, or is it all too much? OOC/AH

The story is based on events that happened to me in real life. I've just changed the situation some and adapted it to fit Stephanie Meyer's Characters.

(New Banner by DivineInspiration)

Warning:

This story is not intended for anyone under the age of 18. Some themes include underage drug abuse, adult drug abuse, violence while under the influence, poor judgment while intoxicated, graphic medical scenarios, graphic sexual situations that are consensual, explicit language, and extreme angst. Be advised, this work of fiction is not suitable for everyone. If you are under 18 or find these situations upsetting or uncomfortable, please move on. Otherwise, I urge you to read with caution.   

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Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories, My all time favorites
Chapters: 29 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 148282 Read Count: 31054
[Report This] Published: 29 Oct 2010 Updated: 15 Nov 2011
Reviewer: Natsar Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 17 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 1: I Don't Need a Hero

How can she be ok with him going out and getting that fucked up without her? What if he is fucking around on her and brings her home some lovely STD? Not to mention breaks her heart?

Reviewer: Natsar Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 17 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 2: I am Inside

I still don't understand why Bella doesn't go with him when he is out running with the whores??? Seriously, she should know Jasper is not going to rat him out.

Reviewer: Natsar Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 17 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 3: Roulette

Sorry but in my experience if a twenty something guy that is used to having sex is going weeks in between times with you, more likely than not, he is getting it somewhere else. I mean best friends are cool but what person is going to keep blowing off sex with their sig other to hand with their buddy???



Author's Response:

You bring up a very valid point. Most guys would be out screwing someone else. But if you've ever been with a person that is seriously addcited to drugs, you realize really quick that whatever fix they need always comes first. Before sex, before love, before anything. And, since Jasper knows where the drugs are at, Edward's going to follow him.

Reviewer: Natsar Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 23 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 13: Paranoid Android

Can't wait to see Bella confront Jasper...lol Thanks for the update! :~)



Author's Response:

Yes, there will be lots of surprises next chapter. 

Reviewer: Natsar Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 10 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 16: Why I'm Here

Thanks for the update! :~)



Author's Response:

Thank you for reviewing. The people who read my story still amaze me.

Reviewer: Natsar Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 21 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 17: Times Like These

Thanks so much for the update! Yea!!! Edward is waking up! I feel bad for Emment but Bella said about second chances was so good! Please update again soon with more Edward and Bella time...Thanks! :~)



Author's Response:

So glad you liked it. Yeah, Emmett was upset, but he's going to take what he can get and try to use it to make things better.

I'm working on the next update, just waiting for the betas to send it back.

Thanks for the review.

Summary:

flod

 

 

 

Dr. Edward Anthony Masen Cullen is a world renowned pediatric neurologist, he´s also a very sought after Dominant living in the Seattle area. What happens when the thrill of the playroom is no longer enough? What happens when he wants more than just a Friday through Sunday arrangement... Bella Swan a very young and very successful Corporate Attorney, who happens to be secretly crushing on her best friends older brother. It all starts with a dream, but after a very short, but failed marriage, Bella decides it´s time to give in to her submissive nature. With the help of her best friend and a blind date, can Bella finally find all the things her live is missing. ExB Rated for BDSM themes and lemony goodness. 

 

A very big thank you to the wonderful Kris Mkystich for my new banner!  Isn´t it sexy!!! Check her out in the December Drabble Wars!!  http://www.fanfiction.net/s/8769101/3/School-Of-Mischief

 

 

Winner of a Tomato Soup Award!

 

 

Nomimated for two Wordsmith Awards!

 

 

 

Voted Must Read Monday by Twi Girls Next Door

 

 

Winner of two Wordsmith Awards!

 

 

 

 


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Erotica, Romance
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Domward's Dungeon, Bdsm stories only, Twilight - Read, Drive's Stories to read that are Completed and Not completed, Can't wait for an update, Stories I've Already read, My Favorite Stories, Misstoria's Stories to Read, J's Read and Loved Stories, Fav BDSM Fics
Chapters: 31 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 312058 Read Count: 389629
[Report This] Published: 07 Nov 2010 Updated: 19 Aug 2016
Reviewer: Natsar Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 08 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 1: DREAMS... WHAT DO THEY MEAN?

Awesome chapter! I can't wait to see what she does to Jacob...lol Keep the chapters coming. Thanks! :~)

Reviewer: Natsar Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 08 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 1: PROLOGUE: BLIND DATING

Just to clear something up. Is Edward still Tayna's Dom? If he is, he shouldn't be meeting with Isabella unless he and Tayna have an open ended agreement. Otherwise, Isabella could be ending up with another cheater because if he is willing to 'cheat' on Tayna, he will do the same to her. Hopefully, he has already ended his agreement with Tayna and I just missed it somehow. Thanks! :~)



Author's Response:

I was offered a fellowship for six weeks in Switzerland and was having a hard time making up my mind. I knew it was the out I needed to get rid of Tanya, but I still wasn´t sure I wanted to leave Seattle for six week. I would miss my home and my family. I was struggling to make up my mind, then I heard the news of Isabella´s impending nuptials. That coupled with Tanya´s incessant phone calls and visits, aided in my decision to take the fellowship. I haven´t set foot in playroom since my return two weeks ago and due to all the traveling I had been doing it had been months since I had played with Tanya.

 

hopefully that cleared things up... with the prologue I mainly wanted to touch on things to kinda give an opening to the story.. sorry if I confused you, but of course keep in mind.. Alice is very protective of Bella and very close to her brother... she would never do that to Bella... she hooks them up because she trusts Edward to not take advantage of Bella and to protect her and train her properly.. thanks for reading and taking the time to review... the next chapter will be an EPOV and we´ll get a chance to know a little bit more about our favorite Dr. Dom!!!


Laterzz


Krazi

xoxo 

Reviewer: Natsar Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 19 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 18: Truth... Lies... and Black Eyes...

Thanks for the update! Love the pics! :~)

Summary: Past Featured Story

Everyones got secrets...dirty little secrets. Bella Swan is tired of her life, so will a swinger's party have someone swing her way. BPOV and EPOV. Warning...LEMONS AHEAD


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: G8or Favor8s Read
Chapters: 35 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 281157 Read Count: 140944
[Report This] Published: 08 Nov 2010 Updated: 15 Sep 2011
Reviewer: Natsar Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 21 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 9: To Happiness

WTF!?! Will these two ever get it right??? Does Edward want to stay with Angie now? Hope he finds out she has been cheating on him for so long with Ben. Actually, I hope she stays with Ben and just lets Edward go to Bella. Then everyone will be happy. Or maybe they could just spouse swap and Angie can go with Eric. Either way, we just need to get Bella and Edward together cause it's just wrong any other way... Thanks for the update. I think...lol ;~)



Author's Response:

I know....I want them together but *cough* Ari has EDWARD doing dumb dumb things...hahaha hope you like the rest....DLIR AND ARI

Summary: Past Featured Story

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When Edward & Bella's son, Nathan, goes missing it turns their lives upside down. This is the journey they take to find him, in the process realizing everything isn't always as it seems. Canon couples, E&B Eventually, NO Cheating

 

 

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Humor
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories, Finished, G8or Favor8s Read
Chapters: 30 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 152943 Read Count: 29067
[Report This] Published: 20 Nov 2010 Updated: 23 May 2012
Reviewer: Natsar Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 26 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

Still really pissed at Edward for not standing by Bella in the beginning but glad he finally grew some balls and stood up to his momma!

Reviewer: Natsar Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 26 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

WOW! Thanks for the update. Can't say I blame Bella. Glad to see Edward stand up to his mom but it may be too little too late for him. If he would have stood up from Bella in the beginning it would have been better. Now he may have too much to make up for. Guess that is what he gets for being a pussy and marrying Tayna...

Summary: Past Featured Story

 

Bella Swan is looking forward to going to college, when she is raped and left for dead. She is sent away when her parents find out about her pregnancy. She meets Dr. Edward Cullen who has come to help his mother. Can Love truly Heal? Human/rape/language

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02 Current Reads, Themslovebug90's read stories, Amberina's Completed Favs List, Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiHu, luv2write finished reads
Chapters: 22 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 61003 Read Count: 59013
[Report This] Published: 02 Dec 2010 Updated: 05 Mar 2012
Reviewer: Natsar Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 18 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11 Karma's present

WOW! Bella was a little harsh on Edward. He had not even done anything wrong.



Author's Response:

i agree, she needs to keep them hormones in check

Reviewer: Natsar Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 16 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19 Stupid Boy

If he fucking cheated on Bella then I hope they do bury him!!!



Author's Response:

i dont blame ya... i feel the same

Long December by JustJo94 Rated: T starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 14]
Summary: Past Featured Story

Long December

While facing the height of tension in their marrage, Bella wonders if she will be able to make it through the holiday season with out her husband. Holiday o/s AU/AH

This beautiful banner was constructed by the AMAZING Evenstar! Thank you, sweeheart! Merry X-mas!

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Romance
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 6291 Read Count: 704
[Report This] Published: 07 Dec 2010 Updated: 07 Dec 2010
Reviewer: Natsar Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 07 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Long December (One Shot)

This story is so sweet. It is far to easy to let life take over. Glad they were able to fix it.



Author's Response:

It's really a wonder how something so...normal, living that is, can be the one thing that tears us apart. We live for that person. We thrive for that one person, and yet, if we are not careful, it can be the one danger that can do us in.

I'm glad that you enjoyed the story...

Happy Holidays!

Summary: Past Featured Story

 

 

thanks to christagbanners.blogspot.com

Renee is cutting Bella off. Bella needs money and Edward has a lot of it, but Bella gets more than she expected. Can she handle it or will it be too much? lots of fluff and lemons consentual spankings. R&R


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Romance
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Completed Stories, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiMaf, My favs past present and future
Chapters: 43 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 139157 Read Count: 223966
[Report This] Published: 04 Jan 2011 Updated: 10 Oct 2011
Reviewer: Natsar Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 17 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11

"The second reason was where my problem lies. I didn't want Bella to think bad of me. It was a selfish reason, but it was the truth. I didn't think it would scare her away, per say, but I had a feeling that it would make her second guess our relationship. "

Ok, I have to say, I am a little concerned about what Edward might be keeping from Bella. Is he going to start making her wear a chastity belt or diapers or something???  I am not judging, just wondering...lol

Reviewer: Natsar Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 06 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20

WOW! Is Edward just trying to get Bella to leave??? What an ass!

Reviewer: Natsar Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 31 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15

I don't get why Edward would be upset with Bella. And why does Carlisle act like such as ass?

Reviewer: Natsar Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 07 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16

WOW! Looks like Edward and the boys need to grow some and stand up to daddy C...lol

Reviewer: Natsar Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 26 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 26

LOL! Seriously, poor Bella is a stupid little bitch isn't she...

Reviewer: Natsar Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 15 Jun 2011 Title: Chapter 32: Chapter 32

Yes. Edward is a total ass! I am glad that Bella has decided to learn how to take care of herself though. There is a blood test they can do right now to find out paternity. They don't have to wait until the baby is born. Update again soon please. Can't wait to see Eddy kissing Bella's ass...lol

Reviewer: Natsar Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 28 Jun 2011 Title: Chapter 35: Chapter 35

I know Edward was SUCH AN ASS!!! But I really hope they work it out! Thanks for the update! :~)

Summary: Past Featured Story

Bella Swan's life changed the day she found her husband in bed with another woman.  A chance meeting at the gym changes her life forever. This is the journey of how Bella ugly duckling became a Swan. AH

First few chapters need beta'd but later chapters are beta'd, still working on the beginning. 

 

image from gossipteen.com no infringement intended.

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Romance
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories, Bdsm stories only, To Read, I Whitlock's read , Amberina's Completed Favs List, Fav BDSM Fics
Chapters: 32 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 120408 Read Count: 138749
[Report This] Published: 09 Feb 2011 Updated: 20 Jan 2016
Reviewer: Natsar Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 09 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 2: A brand new world of kink

Thanks for the update.

Summary:

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With just weeks before the wedding, Bella and Edward's lives will be forever altered by one unwanted event. One event will change everything for everyone. Can witnessing one thing really ruin the lives of so many? Slash/Poly and everything in between.

with a lot pushing I mean helping from my friends I started this dark tale. It will not be what you think, So hold on to your booties its a bumpy ride with a lot of twists. Don't believe everything you read.


Categories: Twilight
Characters: None
Genre: Erotica, Sci-Fi
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 5 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 13496 Read Count: 4100
[Report This] Published: 10 Feb 2011 Updated: 11 Aug 2011
Reviewer: Natsar Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 12 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

I get that Jasper wanted Edward to be Bella's first but Edward didn't wait for her and in fact cheated on her several times with Jazz so even though Edward did not fuck Jazz he was still a long way from the virgin he claimed to be... Hope they find Edward soon and Bella kicks his ass before giving in to him...lol Thanks for the update.

Summary:

Bella and Edward have been married for three years, the happiest years of their lifes...but after a heated argument, Edward storms out of the house. What Bella doesn't know is that Edward may never return... All Human story

The amazing  banner above was created by Mehek 18. You should really check out her site at http://mehek18.tumblr.com.


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 3 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 4800 Read Count: 3231
[Report This] Published: 21 Mar 2011 Updated: 29 Mar 2011
Reviewer: Natsar Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 24 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

OH! So sweet! Glad Edward pulled his head out of his ass...



Author's Response:

Lol I am glad that you like it and I agree Edward needed to get off his high horse ha ha. Thank you for the feedback love gem.

Summary: Past Featured Story

 

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Thanks to AcrosstheSkyinStars for the amazing banner.

 

After getting lost in the woods on a camping trip, Bella finds a man who is living a different life. Can two such different worlds mesh when communication is nearly impossible? 

(There are no werewolves or vampires in this fic)


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories, Finished, Love to drive's Stories to read, My Favorite Stories
Chapters: 29 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 68305 Read Count: 68253
[Report This] Published: 02 Apr 2011 Updated: 07 Jan 2012
Reviewer: Natsar Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 01 Oct 2011 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 25

This was another awesome chapter! So glad Edward at least has Billy to help fill in the blanks. Emment is great ~ and who doesn't love Rose in this chapter..lol! Thanks for the update! :~)

Reviewer: Natsar Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 29 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21

Yea! Emmett is going to be great for Edward! Thanks for the update! :~)



Author's Response:

Thank you for all your support by reviewing.

Here is your teaser

A knock on their door stopped Edward from answering her. Bella looked surprised when she opened to find Emmett on the other side. He had a wide grin on his face.

 

“I’m here for Edward. He’s going to help me finish the fence.”

 

“Oh,” Bella said, and then turned to see if Edward was going to come out of the room naked. “He’s just…”

 

“Don’t worry about us,” Emmett’s voice boomed, “I got it taken care of.”

 

Bella pondered for a moment before she decided to just trust Edward and Emmett and go. On her way out though, she couldn’t help laughing when she heard Emmett yell, “What in the tarnation? Put some pants on boy!”

 

---Also you can see an additional teaser on Facebook on the FanFicAholics Anon Updates Forum

 

 

 

 

 

 

Reviewer: Natsar Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 08 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

I like this story so far. Hope Bella doesn't break wolf boys heart...



Author's Response:

Every review is like a rainbow in my heart, so thanks! Here is a teaser for the next chapter.

 

This time he woke from her voice. He loosened the slack of his arm but didn’t let her go. Instead, he nuzzled her neck with his chin. His breathing became very heavy very fast, and before she knew it, Bella was flat on her back and Edward was on all fours above her.

He looked down at her with a dark lust in his eyes. His chest rose and fell with his breath and Bella found herself between a rock and a hard place, literally. She dug out the painful pebble from behind her back and tossed it off to the side.

She looked up to the man hovering over her and acknowledged to herself that he was a good looking man. She waited to see what he might do, and when he did nothing, she decided to try and get out from underneath him. She could tell from the look in his eyes what he wanted, but he seemed unsure about how to get it.

 

---Also you can see an additional teaser on Facebook on the FanFicAholics Anon Teaser Forum

Reviewer: Natsar Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 02 Jun 2011 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11

Thanks for the update! I loved the 'touch Bella' isn't he so sweet...lol



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for your review, I think next chapter is the one everyone has been waiting for.

Here is your teaser

The library was one of the city’s oldest buildings and it was a sight to behold, with large bookcases that had been carved with lion heads on the side. The tallest shelves required the sliding ladders that moved throughout the library on a metal rack. The whole building had an almost mystical or magical feel to it, and Edward, with his fluid, animalistic way of moving, seemed to oddly fit in with the feel of the place.

They ventured to the back of the library, to set up station in the research area. There were computers as well as microfiches available for patrons and their research.  Bella let her hands run along some of the books on their way back, enjoying the feel of the spines along her fingertips.  Passing by the nature section, she stopped and grabbed a book, handing it to Edward as he sat down at a table.

 

 

---Also you can see an additional teaser on Facebook on the FanFicAholics Anon Updates Forum (This is different, they are combining their updates and teaser forum there so make sure you head to the right one)

 

 

 

 

Ménage Triste by LaurieLou Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 23]
Summary:

It is the eighteenth century and a young Isabella Swan is wedded to the older, harsher Edward Cullen, Duke of Washington. He needs a male heir. She just wants to be loved. A one-shot about loss, love, lust and hope.


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Historical, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiHu
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 7299 Read Count: 4401
[Report This] Published: 06 Apr 2011 Updated: 06 Apr 2011
Reviewer: Natsar Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 06 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I agree that arranged marriages were common in time period but adultery is NEVER an 'okay thing to do' if you truly love the one you are with, no matter what time period it happens in. And Edward even told her that he did not love her when she walked in on him fucking another woman on their wedding night!!! Maybe he grew to love her but how or why would you ever trust someone like that? I think marriages that except adultery are marriages of show, not meaning. Thanks for sharing your story. It is well written, even if I don't agree with the content. :~)



Author's Response:

But you see, in those days it really was an 'okay thing to do' if you were a man, it would really be expected of you to be honest. I don't agree with at all, if a guy was to cheat on me his balls would be on my fire place. Edward told her he didn't love her to keep distance, he was cruel to her and even by the end of the piece she doesn't love him, but accepts her life with him. I like your term marriage with adultry are for show, well there Duke and Dutchess, there whole life would be paraded on show! Thank you for reviewing, I really loved hearing your views :-D

Summary: Past Featured Story

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What happens when two very busy people send two clueless people to pick up their babies from daycare? Bella Swan and Edward Cullen are in for a rough day but it may just have some nice repercussions. R&R please.

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: LeslieWhitlock's completed & recommended read stories, I Whitlock's read , Stories Read by CNYBella, J's Read and Loved Stories, My favs past present and future , Kit's Must Reads!
Chapters: 30 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 93326 Read Count: 47127
[Report This] Published: 10 Apr 2011 Updated: 03 Jun 2012
Reviewer: Natsar Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 04 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

WOW!!! Don't know what to say except Bella in some kind of ubber bitch! Can't believe how hateful she is to everyone around her. Hope she is not that way with poor Connor! Not sure if I want to read anymore... Bella just makes me want to kick her ass! Good luck with your story! :~)

Summary:

 

 

 

Isabella and Edward Cullen have been married a little over four years, and been together as a couple since they were seventeen.

When Bella stumbles across some devastating evidence of Edward's infidelity on the night she is to announce her pregnancy hearts are broken,will the couple be able to move on and repair?


Categories: Twilight
Characters: None
Genre: Drama
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 31 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 60066 Read Count: 30231
[Report This] Published: 11 Apr 2011 Updated: 04 Jun 2012
Reviewer: Natsar Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 11 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

You are a fucking ass Eddiekins!!!

Reviewer: Natsar Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 11 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

' who wouldn't judge Edward to harshly'  Seriously?!? He deserves to be judged very harshly ~ he fucking cheated on you for 4 months!!!

Fold Your Wings by Jadalulu Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 1036]
Summary:

'The liberties he assumes with my body should enrage me, anger me beyond my own sanity. But it's just not that simple.' Encounters born of need. Consequences neither saw coming. Guard your hearts. Not the ExB you're used to. 

 


Categories: Twilight, All Human
Characters: None
Genre: Drama
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: My All-Time Favorites, Fics to Read, I Whitlock's read , Ageise02 WIP Reads, My Favorite Stories
Chapters: 22 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 104224 Read Count: 143215
[Report This] Published: 18 Apr 2011 Updated: 04 Dec 2011
Reviewer: Natsar Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 08 Jun 2011 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 14

"Or volunteer to slap the shit out of Bella until she snaps out of it :)" Yea, I vote for that one...lol  No, seriously she has every right to be angry but knowing how her body responds to his should be enough for her to have at least asked for his contact info...How is she going to find him again if she wants to talk? And is Edward really not going to come back? Does he feel anything other than guilt for Bella? Thanks for the update! Hope the next one is sooner! :~)

Reviewer: Natsar Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 19 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 2

We will find out why Edward is such an ass? Will things get better between them in the end? Thanks for the update! :~)