I know Bella is going to be told somewhere along the way that Tanya spent the night with Edward. Please allow her to understand he was protecting Tanya from the severity of what happened, and not have her doubt Edward's love, and his allegience to Bella. I am sure Jasper will set Bella straight soon after, or Alice will, but why show her having doubts once those were resolved in the meadow the day before. I understand they both had doubts about how the other felt while they were totally in love. Now that those issues have been resolved, let them be resolved. They already have enough issues with being captive, and Aro's ideas of how men and women treat each other. I do love the scenes, and humiliations though. They are HOT. Thanks for writing.

I think Anthony really needed to go back there and stomp the crap out of Marcus' dick as well so neither of them had anything that worked. And perhaps since they were living on an island where there were really no laws, perhaps Marcus and Aro needed to be doing a bit of dying as well. But then Involuntary Rapture wouldn't exist. I know, I was warned. I am not complaining, just hoping for female justice.

I really do love all the BDSM stuff in here and Involuntary Rapture, but I am safe and sane, and prefer my BDSM to be consentual, like Midnight Caller. Or the Birthday Spanking. Those are really HOT. As are your picture drabbles. I have to say you are one of my favorite authors at this point. Keep up the fantastic work.

I also love how well everything is written. I don't have to read through spelling errors and incorrect words. It makes a real difference, placing you above the crowd.