About time he gets his what's coming to him. I'm glad Rose finially seen the light, sorry for her brother loosing his job. After all he was fooled by Emmett too. I would hope that my brother would be looking out for me, by helping out my boyfriend.  I hope that he get a lot more time in jail, as for his mom she needs to see the light too, and realize what a monster she raised.

I hope Bella don't have to go thru with a trial, and that the wedding goes off without trouble.

No I have no Idea what James did to get into jail, but I have a feeling Jasper had something to do with it. Glad Emmett and him mother has finally got what they deserved.  See ya Friday

Great Chapter, girls. JudyBlue, I take it you have never lived in a small town where everyone knows you. From both of your parents live in the public eye, especially with there jobs. I by no means agree with how they treated Bella, growing up. I don't really think that they are religous nuts, I just think they raised her to be a certain way, and they expect her to live by what they tought her. If she had feared they wouldn't have stood by her if she was pregnant, she wouldn't have went to them. I was the first one in my family to have a baby without being married or her father being in the picture. My aunt said to me you know what caused it don't let it happen again. Like every parent they just want the best for their daughter. I do think they need to cut the apron strings thou. Like Carlisle he don't want his little girl to be all grown up, and on her own. He wants to prove he's still needed.

Love the story girls, can't wait for Friday.

I've said it before I'll bet that Alice's baby isn't Jaspers, and that she's Uley's. I wouldn't put it passed Alice or Angela to have been the one's filming the rapes. If they were I hope they throw the book at them. 

As for what's on the memory stick I'll bet pics and video's of Ethan growing during the time Edward was away from them.

I would hope that Edward would see that Bella is being truthful, she can't remember what happen but I don't think she was actually Raped. I think they roughed her up a bit, and took pics making it look like she was into it. Other wise Dr. Kate would have found she was raped and said something, I know Bella was kind of out of it, but I would hope that Jessica and Lauren would help her remember what happen.  As for her measuring small, when I had my last child, I wasn't sure when I got pregnant and when they did the ultra sound. It showed that I wasn't as far along as I was. By their measurements I wouldn't have been pregnant when I took the test and it came back that I was.

I hope your son's surgery comes out okay. I know what happen to the letter Bella sent, Alice got it and destored it, but he already knew about it. I wish you could redeam Jasper, I just don't see how he can keep going along with Alice. I kind of had a feeling Bella's rape case was some how going to end up on Edward's desk. After last chapter, I thought his grandfather was going to get them together, not that he didn't try to. How pissed is he going to be when he finds out" Edward is the dead-beat father" I don't think I want to be in his shoes, before he finds out what Alice did to her. Can't wait until next Tuesday.

I have to say back in the 80's when DNA became a way to prove who was the Father of a child. I was one of the first they did this on, they did blood test, in 85 on my daughter, then in later they decided to try the DNA so they took more blood. No it wasn't just a swab test back then. Well it came back 99.9% of him being the father, and he still took it to court. The judge thru it out, since the person who actually perform the test wasn't there the head of the lab that did the test was there. Well I won anyway, because he had made a mistake of sending her a card saying love daddy. That's my story of DNA, seeing as Angela works at doing these test I can bet her and Alice are in on it to prove the baby isn't Edward's. Alice always struck me as someone who gets her way. If you read the orignal story, you can see how she did what she wanted to get her way. Had she not wanted Bella with Edward she would have made it happen. Just saying.

Well what was Angela, doing using Ben to make Edward jelous, don't think it worked.  As for Alice I hope Jasper sees her the Bitch she is and leaves her too. Maybe she should just be with Angela. I hope Alice don't mess with Jasper giving Bella that note.

I wish you could post the back story chapters as soon as they are ready.

I think Edward is an ass, as for the DNA, I do believe Angela had a hand in the first one. The second one I'll bet someone who works in the NICU heard them talking about getting a second DNA, and told Angela. She works in a lab, I would be willing to bet that she knows others who works in labs.  I wouldn't be surprise to find out that the person who heard them talking about it suggested, the new lab and Angela had a buddy there. In another words I think she is up to know good, with Alices help of course. I still say Alice's baby isn't Jaspers and that is how this is all going to come out. Jasper will find out she isn't his and he will confess to Edward everything that Alice and Angela has been up too.

Sorry to hear about you all having the flu, and about Nikki's daughter being hurt. I had my knee surgery today, and I've been in and out of all day.  Took me all day to read an update on one of the other stories I'm reading and it was short. Now that is almost 1:30 in the morning I'm afraid I'm all slept out for now, and in pain. I hope you all get better quickly.

Some how I don't think Ulley video tape the rapes, I think he would want to take his turn at the victiams. Now I wouldn't put it passed Angela or Alice to have done it. Maybe it was Jasper that helped him. I really don't want it to be Jasper, but I can't help but think Alice has something on him to betray his best friend.  As for Charlie, I would bet he help Alice steel the money from Bella's job. Isn't he a cop he would know how to get in and out without anyone finding out. I'm glad Edward got to take out some of his anger on Charlie tho, and glad he didn't get charged for it, and Bella not getting mad at him for it. 

Well I'm glad Alice is getting what she's deserves. Of course she knew where Bella was she got the letter, and didn't she put her address in it. I hope she ends up getting charge with Ben. I still think that Angela and her had parts in the rape. She just said she wouldn't let Angela drug him and get in bed, and it wouldn't be rape.

Well now that Alice has a different therapist, maybe she'll get a little better. At least she won't let her get out. As for Ben and Angela I would sue them for everthing they would get for the book. Besides in this country there is a law that says that the person who commits the crimes can't profit from it, ie a book or movie.

Great start to the story, I haven't read one of your stories in a long time. I haven't looked to see what is new lately, just been reading the ones on my list and not adding anything new. Plus RL has been keeping really busy. Can't wait for the next update.

I have to say it's great that you want to donate, now but you know it's been going on since 2014 or before. You are just now hearing about it because Trump is president and not Obama. Oh did you hear about the mother who sent her daughter with some man who said he was her father, and when they let them go, he raped her because he really wasn't her father but by the time border control found out he was long gone. So I have to say that the border control checking to make sure that the people bringing children across the border are their parents is a good thing. Oh great chapter.

Jake's an ass, he should have told them that Bella and the kids were down there. I hope he gets fired from the police department for his actions.

I really hope Edward is a good guy and helps her to trust again. I guess we all have to endure some crappy dates before we find the right one.

I  have wondered all thru this story why his first wife died from a cancer that is curable.  I know that the  amish see drs, and go to hospitals for treatments.  I live in southern Michigan and we h as very plenty of amish people come to our town for the drs and,  I've seen them at hospital too. They also come to the farmers market the hospital has every week during the warmer months. 

I hope you update soon, that being said. I think it's Irena makes sence since she had been staying in NY with James. I know you don't want to reveal to much but you can tell us soon.

Well if I was Balla I would leave and not let him know where I was going, I wouldn't even tell Rose, either. I know he's part of the mob and proble won't have a promblem finding her if he wants to, but that's what he should have to do to prove to her he loves and believes her. Can't wait for the next chapter.

you have a good story going here, but I don't know why you would add in what happen in real life with Kristen and Rob. As far as I know they had a real relationship, and I'm not so sure she cheat, so much as it was sexual harrassment. If you are a true fan then you know that both of them protected their personal life, and for the some photographer to get them pics just seems a little off  to me. Anyway I will keep reading as long as we keep it fictional, I don't when I think of Edward and Bella they aren't Robert Pattison and Kristen Stewart, their lives has nothing to do with fiction.

I know this a made up story so you are taking some leway on how CPS would act, but you are way off base. I know if you don't have an adress they would never start a file, or they would start at the school since some of the complaint is about how much time he spend at school. In which they would see that he was involve with after school things and then they would probably drop it.  Just saying they would need a whole lot more than what they have to even start a file on them. Oh and there is no way that a social worker can just walk into your home and take your child without a whole lot of evience. Not just because the worker has a bias against you. Sorry but I just had to bring these things to your attention.

I'm glad she told him.

`you know I don't know why Rose is putting up with how the 2 of them treat Bella, she's  is her best friend and had been most of their lives. I get Bella really hasn't said anything but how shallow they are they must have made nasty comments about Bella to Rose. And if they have why hasn't she set them strait, or at least got them out of her life.