Reviews by olive_oil_4_u
Summary: Past Featured Story

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Edward Cullen, enigmatic, flirtatious, and career focused, 30 year old General surgeon, moves from NYC to the sleepy town of Port Jervis, which is a small town in upstate NY, to join his father's practice, after residency. Bella Swan, shy and independent, 23 year old surgical technologist, has lived in Port Jervis all her life. Same stuff different day, is her usual mantra. How will the arrival of the new Doctor in town change things?

 

This is a Edward/Bella story, which is all human, with canon couples. The story, which is centered around a hospital, is not your typical medical based drama. It takes place in the operating room, where two people from two different sides of the surgical spectrum meet. There is not only romance and drama. There will be Angst and a crap load of humor too. Plus this is rated M for language and future lemons. Please enjoy! FYI this is my first Fanfic and is not Beta'd. So I apologize a head of time for any grammatical errors that there may be. The first few chapters are short, but hold on tight, for they do get longer. This story might just surprise you. I love it and hope you all do too.  Please leave a review. Let me know what you all think.

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Turning to Edward, I felt a magnetic pull. His eyes alone wrenching me forward. Stopping myself, a foot away from him, he lightly touched the bruises that adourned my jaw and kissed my forehead, I then closed the distance, latching my arms around him. He embraced me and I buried my head into his chest. Holding me tightly to him, I had finally found the comfort that I have craved since last night.

This was when I just knew, I had fallen in love with Edward Cullen.

 

 By- SexyLexiCullen

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories, My All-Time Favorites, I Whitlock's read , Love to drive's Stories to read, Love to drive's Stories to read set 2, Amberina's Completed Favs List, Kuu Faves, Stories Read by CNYBella, Completed Stories, Stories I've Already read, Edwards Paradox Completed Favourites, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, My Favorite Stories, To Read , The Story of Us Series, J's Read and Loved Stories, Bella's Must Reads!, My favs past present and future
Chapters: 52 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 359531 Read Count: 420760
[Report This] Published: 04 Jun 2010 Updated: 22 Jul 2010
Reviewer: olive_oil_4_u Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 22 Dec 2012 Title: Chapter 47: Long Beach Island

This chapter is HILARIOUS!!! I dont want to review each chapter individually yet. I am enjoying the story tremendiously!

Summary:

Living Amongst Vampires Banner

 

In a world dominated by vampires, humans are forced to donate blood and abide by the strict rules of the vampire government. Bella has never experienced life in an all-human world and one day the only life she knows shatters to pieces when her parents are killed by a vampire. She is adopted by her parents' friends, who happen to be vampires. Her life turns upside down as she moves to an all-vampire town. Will she have the strength to go on after all that she has endured? Will one special vampire heal her wounds as she struggles to live a life amongst vampires? Edward and Bella pairing, AU, OOC

Warning: This story contains explicit adult content, language, violence, vampire marking and bloodplay.

 

I want to thank Dazzled~by~Jake for this awesome banner! And my awesome Beta Lindz! xo


 

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Categories: Twilight, Alternate Universe
Characters: None
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Love to drive's Stories to read
Chapters: 27 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 384211 Read Count: 238931
[Report This] Published: 14 Aug 2010 Updated: 05 Sep 2022
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Date: 11 May 2016 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13

I dont know weather to be turn on or grossed out.
However, I could use some help with my monthly since i just started today!!

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Date: 04 Jun 2016 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21

I hope your RL is holding up. Be strong.

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Date: 10 Jun 2016 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22

Knew there was going to be more grief.

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Date: 19 May 2016 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19

You are terribly cute!
And Im not thinking right now...."you've f***ed my brains out!"

Summary: Past Featured Story

Fifty Shades...More

Book I

A continuation of the Fifty Shades Trilogy

Ana and Christian have been together for 7 years. They have built a good life together and have 2 beautiful children. But, in spite of Ana's love, will Christian ever gain insight into his past and be able to deal with his pain? Will Ana be able to continue if he can't? After reading the trilogy I discovered that I needed ….More.

This story was originally published on FanFiction.net, however it had to be altered to meet their rating requirements. It continues to be updated there. This is the original. ENJOY.

NC-17: Content is only suitable for mature adults, ages 18 & up. May contain explicit language and adult themes.

If you have difficulty contacting me on this site, feel free to PM me on the FF site.

 

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Categories: Fifty Shades Trilogy, Canon
Characters: Anastasia Steele/Christian Grey
Genre: Angst, Erotica, Hurt/Comfort,, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: Risqué
Series: 50 Shades - Read, G8or Favor8s Read, Stories I've read, Fifty Shades ...More
Chapters: 32 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 107982 Read Count: 145605
[Report This] Published: 24 Jun 2012 Updated: 10 Jul 2012
Reviewer: olive_oil_4_u Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 10 Aug 2013 Title: Chapter 31: Chapter 31

Tring to submit review for whole story.
Nuwriter, this is chewy, yummy, worth reading beyond all the lemons. In the begining I was leaving review for each chapter. The words breathed MOREinto each character. I could not pause. I felt I may miss something. Silly hugh?! The sex, passion, absolute primal needs, and love obtains massive erotic frequencies. Wet, needy, breathless....

Author's Response:

Wow. Thanks. Glad you are enjoying it. You've got a lot more to go. The ride is just beginnng.

E.

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Date: 04 Aug 2013 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Ok.. Im hung up on why she cryin. I hope Christian isnt abusing her

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Date: 04 Aug 2013 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

Seems Ana may be missing THE Play Room?

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Date: 04 Aug 2013 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

Drawn to the positive aspects of sorting out a complication. I had not thought of how strong Christians details to micromanage would effect a non BSDM relationship.

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Date: 04 Aug 2013 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

Very piqued!

Summary: Past Featured Story

My continuation of the 50 Shades Series. One of my qualms with the series is that it didn't really develop Ana Steele as a person. My focus is to add more depth to her and continue the story. With my sense of humor. It begins with Ana 5 months pregnant

My story has language throughout and some sexual content.

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Categories: Fifty Shades Trilogy
Characters: Anastasia Steele/Christian Grey
Genre: Drama, Humor
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: Happily Ever After
Series: 50 Shades - Read
Chapters: 18 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 24265 Read Count: 49077
[Report This] Published: 27 Jun 2012 Updated: 28 Jun 2012
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Date: 25 Mar 2013 Title: Chapter 15: Worst Week Ever

LOVE! LOVE! LOVE it!

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Date: 25 Mar 2013 Title: Chapter 8: Nolan Reed

Hilarious!

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Date: 25 Mar 2013 Title: Chapter 1: Love you, Mean it.

A new way for 'discussions' between spouces!

Summary:

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Fifty Shades...Clarity

Book II

A continuation of the Fifty Shades Trilogy

 

 

You will probably want to read Fifty Shades More before starting this one.

"I look  into his beautiful gray eyes and my heart melts. I still love this man. He taught me how to love. He gave me my precious children.  He tried to  lay the world at my feet and he gave me his love and his trust."  Christian has confronted his demons. Ana has accepted his past. But will Christian's past intrude on the future? Can Ana live with it, if it does?  This is Book II.


Categories: Fifty Shades Trilogy, Canon
Characters: Anastasia Steele/Christian Grey
Genre: Angst, Erotica, Hurt/Comfort,, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: Risqué
Series: G8or Favor8s Read, Stories I've read, Fifty Shades ...More
Chapters: 32 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 139308 Read Count: 138644
[Report This] Published: 10 Jul 2012 Updated: 05 Sep 2012
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Date: 12 Aug 2013 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

Thought for sure Dr. Green was going to announce TWINS!!!

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Date: 14 Oct 2016 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

Not at all. Very well written!  Thank you 😃

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Date: 13 Aug 2013 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12

Ana knows it! Body language says it all BabeZ!
Loving the 2nd book! ;$

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Date: 13 Aug 2013 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13

Christian is a Motherf****r.......that makes me a Smutlover! :0

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Date: 15 Aug 2013 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19

Marvelous coorporate skills Mrs. Gray.

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Date: 16 Aug 2013 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24

A woman standing up for herself!

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Date: 16 Aug 2013 Title: Chapter 27: Chapter 27

Reading fast, breathing fast!

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Date: 16 Aug 2013 Title: Chapter 32: Chapter 32

Passionate, breath taking, heart pounding LOVE story!

Summary:

This is my take on Ana and Christian as they prepare for their wedding. Wedding Fun, 50 Shades style...


Categories: Fifty Shades Trilogy
Characters: Anastasia Steele/Christian Grey
Genre: Drama, Humor, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: Happily Ever After
Series: None
Chapters: 15 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 29972 Read Count: 19103
[Report This] Published: 30 Jul 2012 Updated: 30 Jul 2012
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Date: 01 Apr 2013 Title: Chapter 12: The Rehearsal

Before I even read this chapter, 'YELLOW' is a deep song that my soul sings. For the 1st time in this series I hesitate to read......I must continue. I must finish. I need MORE!

Red! Red! Red! by sunandsurf Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstar [Reviews - 8]
Summary:

A one-shot about the start of Christian's relationship with Elena. A tough story about a tough time in Christian's life. Very dark.


Categories: Fifty Shades Trilogy
Characters: Christian Grey/Other Character
Genre: Erotica
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 5982 Read Count: 1070
[Report This] Published: 04 Aug 2012 Updated: 04 Aug 2012
Reviewer: olive_oil_4_u Signed starstarstar
Date: 28 Mar 2013 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Like the plot to get Christian to learn control of himself. Would like more on his thoughts of how adepthis skill becomes on reading people.

Summary: Past Featured Story


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Fifty Shades...Full Circle

Book III

A continuation of the Fifty Shades Trilogy

*A Writer's Coffee Shop Featured Story May 2013*

Thank You.

This story  continues where Fifty Shades...Clarity left off. Ana and Christian have endured a hard year, scandal, heartache and Christian finally recognizing and  accepting his past  have plagued them. Yet they remain strong with their love for each other and  their family. Will new revelations tear them apart? Will the coming changes divide them or make them stronger?       This is Book III. You will probably want to read 'Fifty Shades More', Book I and 'Fifty Shade Clarity', Book II first. They are both posted here.


Categories: Fifty Shades Trilogy
Characters: Anastasia Steele/Christian Grey
Genre: Erotica, Family, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: Happily Ever After
Series: G8or Favor8s Read, Dumbeline's WIP to read list, Stories I've read, Fifty Shades ...More
Chapters: 162 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 660157 Read Count: 591625
[Report This] Published: 08 Sep 2012 Updated: 06 Dec 2015
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Date: 12 Feb 2014 Title: Chapter 127: Chapter 127

I am enjoying every chapter. Thank You for writing ;)

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Date: 07 Sep 2013 Title: Chapter 67: Chapter 67

It is shocking to have Ana use abusive words towards Christian. She getting a dirty mouth and should be punished.

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Date: 25 Aug 2013 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21

Just occured to me how pleasent it must be not to have a uterus. Sex anywhere and whenever!

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Date: 04 Sep 2013 Title: Chapter 54: Chapter 54

No more TV for Gracie!

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Date: 01 Sep 2013 Title: Chapter 39: Chapter 39

Happy New Year to you also! Its now Labor Day weekend 2013. Throughly enjoying your Christian and Ana.
Did anyone really believe Ana was going to be undetected from Christians radar? ;)

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Date: 02 Sep 2013 Title: Chapter 44: Chapter 44

YES!!!!!

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Date: 03 Sep 2013 Title: Chapter 49: Chapter 49

Gotta love that Ana and her well intended heart.

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Date: 09 Sep 2013 Title: Chapter 77: Chapter 77

"Three children in backseat!" line is HILARIOUS! Christian has humor, wit, and a pretty face!

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Date: 09 Sep 2013 Title: Chapter 78: Chapter 78

So many intriguing twists!

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Date: 09 Sep 2013 Title: Chapter 79: Chapter 79

Giving and getting Birthday sex is magical. ;p

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Date: 09 Sep 2013 Title: Chapter 80: Chapter 80

Thank you for sharing your FULL CIRCLE!

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Date: 10 Sep 2013 Title: Chapter 84: Chapter 84

Sticky gooey parts next!

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Date: 10 Sep 2013 Title: Chapter 86: Chapter 86

Oooohhhh!!!

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Date: 10 Sep 2013 Title: Chapter 87: Chapter 87

I can't catch my breath! Three hard breathing chapters in a row!!!

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Date: 11 Sep 2013 Title: Chapter 93: Chapter 93

Family reunions.....How lovely!

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Date: 13 Sep 2013 Title: Chapter 99: Chapter 99

Im throughy enjoying your Full Circle!

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Date: 13 Sep 2013 Title: Chapter 100: Chapter 100

'Crazy for loving you!' I remember my Mom singing that song. Patsy Cline sings it right?

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Date: 13 Sep 2013 Title: Chapter 101: Chapter 101

Yes, I believe she will... ;p

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Date: 14 Sep 2013 Title: Chapter 103: Chapter 103

Panting! Anyone else?

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Date: 08 Nov 2013 Title: Chapter 102: Chapter 102

They are so cute when they disagree!

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Date: 08 Nov 2013 Title: Chapter 104: Chapter 104

Goodness grief...Ana should know better! Although, it is exciting to see if she could get one nice surprise without Christian finding out.

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Date: 08 Nov 2013 Title: Chapter 105: Chapter 105

Ana did very well putting that smut writer in his place.
My thought is that Christian is planning for Friday night date. Or...market crashes and all financials are lost?

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Date: 09 Dec 2013 Title: Chapter 117: Chapter 117

FANTASTIC!

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Date: 13 Jan 2014 Title: Chapter 123: Chapter 123

Such a lovely twist

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Date: 20 Dec 2014 Title: Chapter 155: Chapter 155

Hearts & Flowers! xoxo
;)

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Date: 09 Nov 2015 Title: Chapter 157: Chapter 157

So romantic

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Date: 15 Nov 2015 Title: Fifty Shades...Full Circle

Not a CLIFF hanger.....more CLIT hanger,

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Date: 09 Dec 2015 Title: Chapter 159: Chapter 159

Just love the nick name Mouse!

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Date: 09 Dec 2015 Title: Chapter 162: Chapter 162

Love the Mouse nickname. Also a couole of chapters back of Teddys newborn story. Hope you are feeling better.

Offbeat by SexylexiCullen Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 323]
Summary:

He's a cop. She's a student. A missed connection during a traumatic time leaves them both longing, until fate brings them back together again. Romance, humor, slight drama. Canon couples. OOC. AU. This is my version of Copward, and this is a working summary.


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Humor, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Stories Read by CNYBella, Completed Stories
Chapters: 20 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 92614 Read Count: 42684
[Report This] Published: 20 Sep 2012 Updated: 19 Oct 2012
Reviewer: olive_oil_4_u Signed starstarstar
Date: 29 Jul 2013 Title: Chapter 18: Panic Room

Hello! I had mentioned a few chapters ago of the leep/jump of how Alice & Bella came to be in Manhatten. I reread story this month and see it is not important at this point. Unless further on that it may. Please update us soon on how the muesum goes.

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Date: 21 Apr 2013 Title: Chapter 1: Cop and Copper

Story has my attention. Like the relationships between charcters. Alice and Bella could be a tad older. Two 20yr olds in Manhatten from the other side of country, and 1of them is OCD is a bit of a leep. Attracted to story, plot can go different ways.



Author's Response:

how is it a leap?

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Date: 21 Apr 2013 Title: Chapter 3: Dreams

The pace is fine Sexi!

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Date: 21 Apr 2013 Title: Chapter 10: Date Night

Like this avenue that your takin. Edward has a different demeaner in this storu. Bella is the OCD!!!!

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Date: 05 Dec 2013 Title: Chapter 17: Gray Matter

Hard to read through the first part. Although you did warn us.

Summary: Past Featured Story

confused

Anastasia and Geneiveve Steele are enjoying their lives in New York City but the past comes back and rears it's ugly head. Original characters and new characters... different plot line that incorporates some of the original.

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Categories: Fifty Shades Trilogy
Characters: Anastasia Steele/Christian Grey
Genre: Drama, Hurt/Comfort,, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 32 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 82376 Read Count: 20446
[Report This] Published: 19 Nov 2012 Updated: 25 Dec 2012
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Date: 28 Mar 2013 Title: Chapter 1: In the Land of Women

OH MY!!!! This love story has caught my attention!,,;0

All's Fair by Greytosteele Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 161]
Summary: Past Featured Story

Christian Grey has proven himself in the business world. At thirty-one, he finds himself bored with life. The world of mergers and acquisitions no longer holds the same thrill. He wants more. Frustrated with government red tape and corrupt politicians, he decides to run for the Senate. Enter Anastasia Steele, an up and coming star in the political arena. AU fanfic.


Categories: Fifty Shades Trilogy
Characters: Anastasia Steele/Christian Grey
Genre: Drama, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: Happily Ever After, Love and Faith
Series: None
Chapters: 24 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 134692 Read Count: 26481
[Report This] Published: 22 Oct 2013 Updated: 10 Mar 2021
Reviewer: olive_oil_4_u Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 10 Dec 2014 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10 - Free pass or more?

I really enjoy reading your Ana & Christian. Some time ago i had stopped reading due to chapters that were not written yet. I started from beginning again not to long ago. I am pleased to find more has been written! I feel the charge between them again! Thank you!

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Date: 13 Dec 2014 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20 - Mending Fences

So much Hearts & flowersxoxo

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Date: 13 Dec 2014 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22 - Sometimes Reality Bites

What a joyous tit' for tat' this is.

A Holiday Liaison by AshesAshes Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 6]
Summary: Past Featured Story

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It's the week before Christmas, and Bella is stuck doing her buddy, Mike, a favor. Months ago, she agreed to be his date for his company Christmas party. The plan is to make his long-time crush, Jessica, notice him, but Bella gets the surprise of a lifetime when she finds herself falling for Jessica's date instead. Laughter and lemons ensue.

 

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 10250 Read Count: 1334
[Report This] Published: 17 Dec 2013 Updated: 17 Dec 2013
Reviewer: olive_oil_4_u Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: 22 Dec 2015 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Enjoyed your version of a classic Christmas party. Hope you had a a speedy recovery. I see this is from a couple of years ago. Look forward to your follow up next! Merry Christmas 🎄2015

My Life as a Sub by ordlas Rated: NC-17 starstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 135]
Summary: Past Featured Story

What was it like to be one of the fifteen? This is the story of a CG submissive, some time between Leila and Susannah; it takes place before Ana comes into his life.

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Categories: Fifty Shades Trilogy
Characters: Christian Grey/Other Character
Genre: Drama, Erotica
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 37 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 87651 Read Count: 29472
[Report This] Published: 10 Jun 2014 Updated: 17 Feb 2017
Reviewer: olive_oil_4_u Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 23 Dec 2015 Title: Chapter 5: Weekend's end

Can i get a wkend like that?

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Date: 28 Oct 2017 Title: Chapter 36: Tonight, Tonight, Tonight

Awesomness

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Date: 28 Oct 2017 Title: Chapter 37: The Day After

I like Luke vanilla relationship!
Thinking of how experienced Severine is she knows there is a background file of her. She would also know that her contract with Christian would include no other intimacy with others.

Claiming by Lilith Blood Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 67]
Summary:

She could love me. She could even hate me. She could loathe my guts but she was not allowed to forget me. Love and hate, both can pave the path to obsession, especially when the thin line that separates them begins to blur. Warning: Dark!


Categories: Fifty Shades Trilogy
Characters: Anastasia Steele/Christian Grey
Genre: Drama
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: Risqué
Series: None
Chapters: 43 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 122715 Read Count: 44800
[Report This] Published: 07 Aug 2014 Updated: 14 Jan 2017
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Date: 17 Apr 2016 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15

Go Anna!

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Date: 17 Apr 2016 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16

Holy HYMEN

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Date: 17 Apr 2016 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17

Go Anna......my newly favorite heroine!

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Date: 18 Apr 2016 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21

We all have our own issues....

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Date: 18 Apr 2016 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22

Christian is definatly making scrapes on her skin from the wall. Plus leaving bruses on her wrists. If not already from the graduation night. They are BOTH boarderline psychos!

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Date: 18 Apr 2016 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 25

I am anticipating for the rest of this date!

Summary:

He could be anything he wants to be. He has so much potential, I can't let him fall short. I love him, but I have to let him go. (AU FanFiction). Chapter 32 and beyond... And the saga continues.


Categories: Alternate Universe, Fifty Shades Trilogy
Characters: Anastasia Steele/Christian Grey, Anastasia Steele/Other Character, Christian Grey/Other Character
Genre: Angst, Drama, Hurt/Comfort,, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: Happily Ever After, Pure Romance, Rich & Notorious, Romantic Comedy
Series: None
Chapters: 22 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 58911 Read Count: 15785
[Report This] Published: 07 Sep 2014 Updated: 08 Feb 2015
Reviewer: olive_oil_4_u Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: 13 Mar 2017 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11

I like your Ana. She has a strong mind. Christian is not flawless. These two characters can be touchable.

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Date: 14 Mar 2017 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14

Do it...Do it Gray!

Summary:

This is the sequel to last year's holiday oneshot, A Holiday Liaison. After their kinky tryst at Mike Newton's company Christmas party, Edward tracks Bella down and asks her to be his New Year's Eve date. Is Bella and Edward’s searing connection purely circumstantial, or will Bella be able to give it her all and take what they have to the next level?

 


Categories: Twilight
Characters: None
Genre: One-Shot
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 13454 Read Count: 568
[Report This] Published: 26 Dec 2014 Updated: 26 Dec 2014
Reviewer: olive_oil_4_u Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 22 Dec 2015 Title: Chapter 1: More Than Midnight Oneshot

Really like these two stories. Maybe you can imagine another for 2015

Submission by Jersygal101 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 89]
Summary: Past Featured Story

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"I submit because I need it. I submit because for the first time in my life things feel right, and because I've never felt freer then when I'm kneeling before you with your collar around my neck engraved with your iniials." AH/Non-Canon

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Categories: Twilight, Non-Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Aro
Genre: Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: Dominance and submission
Series: None
Chapters: 25 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 66899 Read Count: 23822
[Report This] Published: 18 Jun 2015 Updated: 06 Aug 2016
Reviewer: olive_oil_4_u Signed starstarstarstar
Date: 20 Dec 2015 Title: Chapter 1: Prologue

Chp1..not clear as to what had her in that position. Did she look or not look at him? However the Prologue sets the scenario. I do want to continue reading. Thank you

Reviewer: olive_oil_4_u Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 20 Dec 2015 Title: Chapter 3: Rebuild

I like the characters you are using. Background for Bella is set up. Adventure plus new beginnings make great story telling to me. So Ms Jersygal 101.you have another reader to read this story! 🙌

Reviewer: olive_oil_4_u Signed starstarstarstar
Date: 20 Dec 2015 Title: Chapter 5: Reoccurring

Yes, i do like the story. Introductiona are made!

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Date: 20 Dec 2015 Title: Chapter 7: Declaration

Hope you are feeling bettter. The connection of Aro & Bella is hot. Although Aro is a bit forceful. However I get it.

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Date: 21 Dec 2015 Title: Chapter 9: Intimate

When she answers about boyfriends there is a question mark. Should there be a period instead?

Reviewer: olive_oil_4_u Signed starstarstarhalf-star
Date: 21 Dec 2015 Title: Chapter 10: Belonging

Is Aro taking to much advantage of Bellas innocence?

Reviewer: olive_oil_4_u Signed starstarstarstar
Date: 21 Dec 2015 Title: Chapter 11: Procedure

Thank you for the translations.
Your story is going very well. I am learning to appreciate the dominant.

Reviewer: olive_oil_4_u Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: 21 Dec 2015 Title: Chapter 12: Demonstration

I will squrim and talk back for you Bella. I got your back! 😉

Reviewer: olive_oil_4_u Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: 21 Dec 2015 Title: Chapter 13: Strength

I do appreciate your writing skills. The development of it has sustenance.

Reviewer: olive_oil_4_u Signed starstarstarhalf-star
Date: 22 Dec 2015 Title: Chapter 14: Exchange

I got confused when Bella drove back to Aros villa. I would have thought it would be Doras driver and Dora. I see Scarletts name.
Bella is at her usual game pushing men to their extreme at her discourse

Shhh... by Robshandmonkey Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 61]
Summary:

 

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Alyssa Jordan is about to enter a world she has only read about in books, but longs to experience. Her naive curiosity lands her in the wrong BDSM club, snaring the attention of the clubs owner.

Nicholas Anthony is a notorious bad boy and the owner of Taboo. 

One night, he spots a new face in the middle of his members only club. He is forced to confront her and find out how she managed to get in. He is blindsided by the attraction he has for the girl with a razor sharp tongue and defiant streak. 

His Dominant persona is about to be tested, and for once, he may be the one that ends up on his knees.

 


Categories: Original Fiction, Erotica, Romance, Supernatural
Characters: None
Genre: Erotica
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 3 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 16023 Read Count: 5821
[Report This] Published: 13 Feb 2016 Updated: 13 Feb 2016
Reviewer: olive_oil_4_u Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 23 Apr 2016 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3 What the hell is wrong with her instincts?

Congratulations! Your story has something that are new for me to read, a new setting. The storys convolutions are fascinating. I hope you continue writing this. I do not have or want a FB. Please post if you will continue. Also the information on how to obtain the publishment. Thank you. Sincerely....olive