Reviews by Elisefan
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Fifty Shades...Clarity

Book II

A continuation of the Fifty Shades Trilogy

 

 

You will probably want to read Fifty Shades More before starting this one.

"I look  into his beautiful gray eyes and my heart melts. I still love this man. He taught me how to love. He gave me my precious children.  He tried to  lay the world at my feet and he gave me his love and his trust."  Christian has confronted his demons. Ana has accepted his past. But will Christian's past intrude on the future? Can Ana live with it, if it does?  This is Book II.


Categories: Fifty Shades Trilogy, Canon
Characters: Anastasia Steele/Christian Grey
Genre: Angst, Erotica, Hurt/Comfort,, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: Risqué
Series: G8or Favor8s Read, Stories I've read, Fifty Shades ...More
Chapters: 32 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 139308 Read Count: 138690
[Report This] Published: 10 Jul 2012 Updated: 05 Sep 2012
Reviewer: Elisefan Signed
Date: 17 Dec 2012 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21

Just wanted to drop a review to let you know what an amazing job you have done with these stories. You have kept to the original charactes so unbeluevably so, while showing their development and maturity over the years. These are the best I have read on Fifty. I passed up your story originally thinking it was a true cheating story which is not my scene but I gave it a second chance not sure why and I am very glad I did.Thanks so much for sharing your talent!!

Summary: Past Featured Story


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Fifty Shades...Full Circle

Book III

A continuation of the Fifty Shades Trilogy

*A Writer's Coffee Shop Featured Story May 2013*

Thank You.

This story  continues where Fifty Shades...Clarity left off. Ana and Christian have endured a hard year, scandal, heartache and Christian finally recognizing and  accepting his past  have plagued them. Yet they remain strong with their love for each other and  their family. Will new revelations tear them apart? Will the coming changes divide them or make them stronger?       This is Book III. You will probably want to read 'Fifty Shades More', Book I and 'Fifty Shade Clarity', Book II first. They are both posted here.


Categories: Fifty Shades Trilogy
Characters: Anastasia Steele/Christian Grey
Genre: Erotica, Family, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: Happily Ever After
Series: G8or Favor8s Read, Dumbeline's WIP to read list, Stories I've read, Fifty Shades ...More
Chapters: 162 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 660157 Read Count: 591779
[Report This] Published: 08 Sep 2012 Updated: 06 Dec 2015
Reviewer: Elisefan Signed
Date: 10 Jan 2013 Title: Chapter 41: Chapter 41

Christian talks about trust! Really! Hypocrite!! What about betraying Ana's trust in the first story with that woman?! Come on I am sure there was some nudity there and some amount of betrayal! How dare he! I' m pissed at him now!Why hasn't Ana brought this up? No way she has forgotten his betrayal already!

 

 

Reviewer: Elisefan Signed
Date: 04 Jan 2013 Title: Chapter 31: Chapter 31

I dont know what I am going to do once I am done reading your amazing story. You are a fantastic writer. Again your Christian is amazingly just like the original books I feel Iam reading an actual published continuation! I will try to leave a review on fanfic website when I am done. Thanks so much for your time and effort on these amazing storyies.

 

Reviewer: Elisefan Signed
Date: 04 Jan 2013 Title: Chapter 34: Chapter 34

I am surprised you have received so many of these questions when your characters are true to the originals - which is a controlling Christian and Ana knew this when she married him. As for the sex - in the books Ana had a high sex drive too and yeah some of it 'cos she wanted to please him mostly she loves sex too. He told her at one time she could always say "no". And he is really only controlling when it comes to her safety and really only dominate when in the bedroom. Thanks for sharing the information but I would not be reading these very long stories of yours were they not true to the original books which I loved and well these are very good stories.

Reviewer: Elisefan Signed
Date: 12 Jan 2013 Title: Chapter 43: Chapter 43

There is only so much begging a person can do. Yes he needs his space and Ana should just leave him be. He doesn't want to talk with her,he is being a real arse.  I kinda of hope he doesn't show up Saturday add more angst to the story.Look forward to update as always:)

Reviewer: Elisefan Signed
Date: 21 Jan 2013 Title: Chapter 46: Chapter 46

I love family time! I hope you don't finish this story for a while!

Reviewer: Elisefan Signed
Date: 24 Jan 2013 Title: Chapter 47: Chapter 47

Fantastic sex! Love it love that there is still more to come.