Reviews by TillITryIllNeverKnow
Summary: Past Featured Story

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Charolette died 60 years ago and left Peter.  Edward left Bella in the forest nearly two hundred years ago.  Peter has been alone and Bella has been through hell; how will they find common ground?  What will happen when these two cross paths?

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Categories: Twilight, Non-Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Peter
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 19 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 78843 Read Count: 18428
[Report This] Published: 17 Apr 2010 Updated: 15 Jul 2012
Reviewer: TillITryIllNeverKnow Signed
Date: 14 Sep 2014 Title: Chapter 19: MY HAPPY ENDING

Thank you for finishing out this story!  I really enjoyed it as it didn't have "pat" answers and solutions to problems.  Things needed to be worked out....as they do in life.  Again, I really enjoyed this one with its ups and downs and all!  Thank you for working so hard on it for us!

Summary:

 

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“We found her Chief Swan, she’s ALIVE! We found Isabella!" Alive? She had really survived the last tens years?

They said I was going home but where was home now?

OOC AU Dark themed you've been warned. No rape! But there is talk about slaves and abuse   Bella x Edward

 

 


Categories: Twilight, Alternate Universe
Characters: None
Genre: Suspense/Thriller
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 21 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 77399 Read Count: 33003
[Report This] Published: 25 Apr 2010 Updated: 25 Feb 2011
Reviewer: TillITryIllNeverKnow Signed
Date: 27 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I find the concept here fascinating.  Total brain-washing vampire style!  You convey Bella's confusion perfectly.

Reviewer: TillITryIllNeverKnow Signed
Date: 27 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

Master should be interesting!  I keep trying to figure out who he is.  Looking forward to more!

Reviewer: TillITryIllNeverKnow Signed
Date: 28 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

Great chapter, and your "puzzle pieces" are all falling into place nicely.  And may I say congratulations!  This is the first story I've read in ages where Tanya isn't a b!*^#@!  Not that she's my favorite or anything, it just shows imagination and originality on your part.  Nice cliffhanger (treehanger?) too!

Reviewer: TillITryIllNeverKnow Signed
Date: 02 May 2010 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

Edeward's going to have his hands full!  Should be fascinating though!!!

Reviewer: TillITryIllNeverKnow Signed
Date: 03 May 2010 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

Wonderful chapter.  The ins and outs of the human psyche are amazing.

Reviewer: TillITryIllNeverKnow Signed
Date: 06 May 2010 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

The perfection in this chapter is in the details.  How hard it is for Bella to be in public, her ABSOLUTE instense follow through on words and orders.  You bring my head to a different place.  You know it...the "what if" place.  Kudos!



Author's Response:

thank you for your glowing reveiw, its reveiws like yours that gives me a great amount of pride in what i am doing. i appreciate every reveiw so always let me know how i am doing right or wrong. its the only way i will acheive to do better. thank you so much for reading it.  michele

Reviewer: TillITryIllNeverKnow Signed
Date: 10 May 2010 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

Great job!  You've taken the steriotypical relationship between Jacob and Edward and flipped it on its ear.  Nice one!  I'm particularly fond of getting inside everyone's heads. 

Reviewer: TillITryIllNeverKnow Signed
Date: 22 May 2010 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

Nice stuff!  Poor Bella!  You have to love Edward - guilty with Bella, screamed at by Alice, and you haver to figure Charlie won't be thrilled!  Lovin' it all!

Reviewer: TillITryIllNeverKnow Signed
Date: 18 May 2010 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

Wonderful chapter!  You bring a lot of detail into the experiences that Bella is both having and feeling now.  Kudos on that!  Bella's confusion and fear of being abandoned are both heartbreaking and profoundly deep.   



Author's Response:

i am sorry it took so long to respond to your reveiw i was trying to get the new chapter up. your reveiw definitaly pushed me to get it there. it feels good to know people like and appreciate my hard work. thank you so much for reading it! michele

Reviewer: TillITryIllNeverKnow Signed
Date: 24 May 2010 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

Great stuff!  Bella's even dealing with her inner demons.  Darker next chapter, hmm?  Count me in!

Reviewer: TillITryIllNeverKnow Signed
Date: 04 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11

This is most definatley dark, but handled extremely well.  When the "darkness" starts to creep up on you, that's the time to add something lighter.  Like Esme pulling Edward out of the room callin him by 3 names!  Such a mother thing to do and only we can give it that extra umph when our kids hear it!   It would make no sense if Isabella adjusted smoothly and swiftly; her road is bound to have setbacks.  Follow your instincts.  They haven't failed you yet!



Author's Response:

Thank You for reading my work and reveiws like yours definitely let me know that i am doing it right. Always feel free to tell me what you think because I rely on them to do a better job! Thanks again!

Reviewer: TillITryIllNeverKnow Signed
Date: 17 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12

Ah Esme started the ball rolling alright!  Nice, very, very nice!  I love the way you bring us through the relationships anhd then hit us with the heavy outside drama.  It works so well!

Reviewer: TillITryIllNeverKnow Signed
Date: 19 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14

As always...lovin' it!  You're pulling a larger family together now.  Wonderful!

Reviewer: TillITryIllNeverKnow Signed
Date: 03 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16

Wonderfully action packed  and emotional chapters.  Alec?!  Who knew!!  Great turn there.  Sorry it took so long to catch up.  Ah, vacation! 

Reviewer: TillITryIllNeverKnow Signed
Date: 31 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17

I say leave it to Jasper to re- evaluate.  He is the tactician. 

Summary: Past Featured Story

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Bella and family move to NH to escape a tragedy that left her a teen mother. She's not looking for a life beyond being a good mom, but the gang works to show her that there is more to life, friends, and family than blood.AH/C&NC pairs/18&over NOW COMPLETE

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Categories: Twilight, Non-Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Jasper
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's not read yet, Ageise02 Bella/Jasper stories
Chapters: 28 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 79296 Read Count: 30349
[Report This] Published: 27 Apr 2010 Updated: 27 Jul 2010
Reviewer: TillITryIllNeverKnow Signed
Date: 27 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Moving Day

Great start.  You've set the emotional groundwork.  Let her rip!!!



Author's Response: I'm working on it! lol

Summary: Past Featured Story

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Bella struggles to survive on her own after Edward leaves her. A chance encounter with Jasper will alter life for both of them. BxJ. Rated NC-17 for language, adult situations, and eventual lemons.

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Categories: Twilight, Non-Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Jasper
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories, My favs past present and future
Chapters: 34 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 234838 Read Count: 38993
[Report This] Published: 10 May 2010 Updated: 05 Feb 2011
Reviewer: TillITryIllNeverKnow Signed
Date: 25 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 26

True, I due hate cliffhangers, but to be fair I also love them when they are used well.  Like here.  I also love the fact that now Bella is surrounded by people who genuinely love her.  Jasper, Peter, Char, Emmett...  Having stood alone for so long it has to help!  Wonderful chapter! 



Author's Response:

Wow, that's the first compliment I've received on the cliffies, lol!  I get it though- it's so hard with fanfiction, where we're always waiting for the next chapter.  If it was a book, we just have to turn the page to find out what happened!

 

Thanks for reading and revieiwng!

Reviewer: TillITryIllNeverKnow Signed
Date: 01 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 27: Chapter 27

Amazing cliffhanger.... and that's the Jasper we all know and love!  Mess with his family, and you will be sorry and pay.  Your Scotish phonetic-speak is truly impressive.  I have Scottish relatives and reading it is like listening to them.  Great work.



Author's Response:

I'm so glad you're enjoying the Scottish!  I can't take credit for it, because one member of team Malcolm just straight up translates for me.  The others then give me suggestions on how to make it better- do any two Scottish people talk the same? :)  Anyway, it's a VERY time consuming process, so I'm glad you think it's a nice touch!  Thanks for reading and reviewing!

Reviewer: TillITryIllNeverKnow Signed
Date: 12 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 28: Chapter 28

Stunningly raw and perfect!!!  Every single syllable!



Author's Response: Thank you so much- I had several complaints about how I adressed Bella's change, so I'm thrilled that you appeciate the way I handled it! Always refreshing when someone sees what I was trying to do- thank you for reading and reviewing!

Reviewer: TillITryIllNeverKnow Signed
Date: 12 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 29: Chapter 29

Perfection...and probably one of the best "turnings" I've ever read!  I thad it all.  Thank you also for dealing with  Edward - and in that way!  It was positive poetry!



Author's Response:

Again, thank you for the kind words.  I'm really glad you liked what I did with it- I was trying hard to make it significant without being repetitive.  I found it challenging, lol!  Glad you liked Bella's treatment of Edward- that was fun to write, lol!  Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!

Reviewer: TillITryIllNeverKnow Signed
Date: 07 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 31: Chapter 31

More than yummy!  You help us feel the connection between Bella and Jasper and how deep it really goes.  Her idea about Edward was inspired and it should be interesting to see if it works or Carlisle kills him having finally used up his patience on him!  Wonderful!



Author's Response:

Glad you enjoyed all the connectin, hee hee!  Somehow, I think Carlisle will hang onto his patience for Edward, but we'll have to wait and see!  Thanks for reading and reviewing!

Fuggiasco by kdc2239 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 848]
Summary: Past Featured Story

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Edward, homeless since age twelve is used to the gritty, hard life. Now twenty, his main goal is to make it in the world, and off the streets. What happens when a girl who seems to be broken beyond repair becomes his new shadow, and needs help more than he can possibly know? 

 


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Finished, Amberina's Completed Favs List, Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiHu
Chapters: 36 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 153298 Read Count: 73242
[Report This] Published: 11 May 2010 Updated: 23 Jan 2012
Reviewer: TillITryIllNeverKnow Signed
Date: 09 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2 Boogie Man

I'm addicted to this story now!  You make me want to know the characters and their stories.  That's saying something!  You've also brought us to a world I'm sure most of us have never experienced.  It's eye-opening.  As my mother always said, "There but for the grace of God, go I."  You just might be inspiring some new Miss Elizabeths!  Stunningly touching!

Reviewer: TillITryIllNeverKnow Signed
Date: 09 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3 Careful Where You Stand

I have to confess; I used a translator to see what Bella was saying.  It was either that or my Italian brother-in-law!  The chapter?  Bellisima!  I keep hoping that sshe will open up to Edward more, but hopefully time will tell.

Reviewer: TillITryIllNeverKnow Signed
Date: 09 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5 Spies

Love the update...and have a great time away on vacation!  Enjoy!  We'll be waiting for you!!



Author's Response:

Thanks so much for reading and taking the time to review! I hope you like the next chapter, here’s a little teaser from it :) 

 

“Thanks man,” I say as I brush past him, wanting to find Bella even more now that I know she’s alone. I’ve gone through the building three times and around the outside as well, but I can’t find Bella anywhere. I have a rock in the pit of my stomach, and I’m scared as fuck that whoever she has been hiding from has found her. I stand outside the Mission, cursing myself for being late. 

 

I don’t know what to do. I feel sick. If something has happened... or some fucker has taken her - I don’t even fucking know her real last name to start to look for her. I’m pacing back and forth in front of the Mission, and the sun has set. I don’t fucking know what to do. I decide to go back to the motel room to get the money I have stashed and do whatever I can to find her.  

Reviewer: TillITryIllNeverKnow Signed
Date: 06 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8 Secrets

Great back story!!  Get the tissues!  It should be interesting if Edward catches up to alec. 



Author's Response:

Thanks so much for reading and reviewing! I hope you like the next chapter!

Summary: Past Featured Story

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Being a Knight of the Round Table is a great honor.  But in this story, things are not always what they seem.  Join your favorite Twilight characters as they discover lies, truths, deception, betrayals and love all in the court of Camelot.  Canon and non-canon couples.  Humans and witches, wizards, dragons, immortals, etc.  Various POVs.    

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(Banner above by the amazing Mehek18 for thetwilightawards.com)

 

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Categories: King Arthur/Merlin, Twilight, Crossover, Non-Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Alice/Jasper/Edward, Emmett/OC, Jacob/OC, Jasper/OC, King Arthur/Guinevere, Other Misc Char or Pairings(nc)
Genre: Action, Drama, Fantasy, Friendship, Historical, Humor, Hurt/Comfort,, Mystery, Romance, Sci-Fi
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: Historical Romance, Love and Faith, Supernatural
Series: Finished, Ageise02 Bella/Jasper stories
Chapters: 56 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 155108 Read Count: 21896
[Report This] Published: 11 May 2010 Updated: 16 Jan 2012
Reviewer: TillITryIllNeverKnow Signed
Date: 24 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

However slow they come, I'll be waiting.  I think this shows lots of possibilities and promise!  I'm just sorry pooor Emmett is only a horse here.  I'll content myself with the knowledge that he's a great horse though!



Author's Response:

Oh don't worry, Emmett will appear at some point...in some way.

Reviewer: TillITryIllNeverKnow Signed
Date: 24 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

So Rose pulled "a Carrie" on Victoria?  Ugh!  Anyway, Alice is honorable and sweet.  Maybe she needs to ask herself why NOT Jasper?  Would she really prefer him to be caught in the machinations of some of the others?  Loving the story!



Author's Response:

Thanks, Till!  All will be revealed.  :)

Only hope by militato123 Rated: M starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 65]
Summary: Past Featured Story

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After spending an intimate night together, Edward realizes what a true danger he is to Bella and decides to leave. Depression finally sinks in when she realizes she's pregnant and a certain deadly vampire has come for her; Aro Volturi.

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 15 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 21135 Read Count: 8560
[Report This] Published: 17 May 2010 Updated: 14 Oct 2011
Reviewer: TillITryIllNeverKnow Signed
Date: 19 May 2010 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

Scary concept!  Not only does the love of your life run out on you, but you then wind up in the hands of Aro and Crew only to find you're having twins!!  This girl So-o needs a break!  Nice work.



Author's Response:

Thanks for the  review. theres going to be lots of drama lots fightting. twins will have amazing powers. Edward will be coming up soon in the next few ch. may be the next two. i hope you keep reading and reviewing. - mili

Paper Cut by cakes4547 Rated: T starstarstarstar [Reviews - 4]
Summary:

This is a three part short story that is Jasper's point of view of Bella's 18th Birthday party.  Read what the evening was like through Jasper's thirsty eyes.

We learn about his past as he struggles to forget the horrors that shaped him into the only Cullen who still struggles significantly with a day to day life of abstaining from human blood.  Alice has tried for decades to help her husband abstain, but we all know that he eventually slips. 

What caused him to finally break? 

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By twilightcakes at 2011-01-19

Jasper certainly never thought a paper cut would change his life or the lives of those around him so significantly.  Set during New Moon.

 

 

 

 

 


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward, Jasper/Alice
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 4 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 20619 Read Count: 389
[Report This] Published: 19 May 2010 Updated: 20 Jan 2011
Reviewer: TillITryIllNeverKnow Signed
Date: 21 May 2010 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

The depth of view in this piece is marvelous!  It makes me feel like I'm in my own head listening to my thought sand views on all kinds of things.  Bravo!  Not easily done...at least not doe WELL.  Kudos!

Reviewer: TillITryIllNeverKnow Signed
Date: 19 May 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Paper Cut - Part I

I've always wanted to experiience Bella's birthday through Jasper's eyes!  Knowing Jasper, he won't treat himself well!  I can't wait for your update!



Author's Response:

Thank you for the review, that was so sweet of you!  I'm so glad you enjoyed the story - I am hard at work on part III!

Reviewer: TillITryIllNeverKnow Signed
Date: 08 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 3: Paper Cut Part III

Superb!  Not only did you give us the event itself from within Jasper's mind, but the emotional upheaval that they have gone through in the past.  In a weird way, Alice's reactions through the years and Jasper's feelings about them remind me of my own childhood.  My mother didn't believe in hitting me.  But when I saw just how disappointed she was in me at various times for various things, it was like being stabbed, shot and hung....all at once.  Her disappointment was worse than any physical injury that anyone could have inflicted!  That's Jasper with Alice.  I'm looking forward to Part 4.  I just hope someone remembers to tell Jasper that Bella always understood and never blamed him.  Insome ways, I think that very reaction may have helped him more than anything anyone's said or done before.  Great stuff!  This story is "Mind candy"!

Summary:

After Edward leaves Bella is left alone until a change she never dreamed of happening could lead her to the man of her dreams. Will learning from the past help her accept her future. Mature for later chapters and characters OOC a little Please R&R! Includes vampires, werewolves, and other mythical creatures in a dramatic battle, but most of all it is a story about love and building a family built on trust after so much heartache! Bella/Paul pairing! Complete!!!!


Categories: Non-Canon Pairings, Twilight, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Paul
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 54 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 193432 Read Count: 23286
[Report This] Published: 19 May 2010 Updated: 24 Jul 2010
Reviewer: TillITryIllNeverKnow Signed
Date: 20 May 2010 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

Lovin' Empowered Bella!  I especially love her sharing her memories of the Cullens with the pack.  Knowing there's a treaty with this one group does not mean acceptance.  Edward sucking the venom out, Esme cooking for her, Carlisle caring for her, Emmett playing video games with her, Alice being Alice and shopping with her might.  they know that they can believe what they've seen.  Brilliant twist I'd like to say!

Reviewer: TillITryIllNeverKnow Signed
Date: 20 May 2010 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

Perhaps Bella's inner "Mama Wolf"  is the beginnings of her being the Alpha Female?  The only female wolf that mates and bears young?  Collin and Brady's dad better watch his butt now!

Reviewer: TillITryIllNeverKnow Signed
Date: 20 May 2010 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

I loved the save.  It did what it had to, but left him free so that you always wonder,"What if he shows up some day?"  Loved it!

Doll by LizzieHopscotch Rated: T [Reviews - 6]
Summary:

Sequel to The Letter.

The Cullens left Volterra desolate and Bella is trapped within more than the city walls. When the Cullens are called back for the reveal of Felix's mate will they save her? Or will Bella stay trapped behind her walls?

 


Categories: Non-Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Felix
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 12 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 11472 Read Count: 2804
[Report This] Published: 27 May 2010 Updated: 05 Jun 2010
Reviewer: TillITryIllNeverKnow Signed
Date: 27 May 2010 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 3

You hooked me totally!  I discovered this piece first and then backtracked and came forward.  Stunning work.  I especially love this piece.  Heidi is a revelation and her POV is key, I think, to Bella's survival both physical and emotional.  Aro goit the girl he wanted, only to loose the powers to her inner mind.  Briliiant!!!!  I can't wait for more!

Reviewer: TillITryIllNeverKnow Signed
Date: 01 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 5

Go Heidi!  She's taking a tremendoous risk should Aro touch her!  This is going to be excellent!  Bravo on a superb storyline!

Reviewer: TillITryIllNeverKnow Signed
Date: 08 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 12: Epilogue

I love the conclusion here.  It makes perfect sense to me, and oh wouldn't I love to see what Felix looks like and if they found all the parts!  I'l be looking forward to the next phase of this!!!

Summary:

I have consolidated the out takes of People like us into one place!  These are the sub stories born out of the pages of PLU. 


Categories: Twilight
Characters: None
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: My To Read List, Finished, Amberina's Completed Favs List, Stories Read by CNYBella, Stories I've Already read, My Favorite Stories, J's Read and Loved Stories, Stories I've read, My favs past present and future
Chapters: 9 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 54321 Read Count: 227653
[Report This] Published: 02 Jun 2010 Updated: 05 Feb 2011
Reviewer: TillITryIllNeverKnow Signed
Date: 03 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 - Alice and Jasper #1

Loved it!  It pushes the edges and brings us deep inside Jasper and Alice's commitment to each other.

Summary: Past Featured Story

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Carlisle and Esme are the foundation of the Cullen Coven.  However, this love story started as a tragedy for Esme -- a loveless marriage, the death of her baby and finally an attempt at suicide.  This story traces how Carlisle and Esme eventually find each other and fall in love.  It weaves together Carlisle's and Esme's bio facts provided to Twilight Lexicon by Stephenie Meyer with some original ideas. Canon! Rated R for later lemon content.

 

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Carlisle/Esme
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 17 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 49807 Read Count: 3984
[Report This] Published: 04 Jun 2010 Updated: 17 Oct 2010
Reviewer: TillITryIllNeverKnow Signed
Date: 05 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 1: First Sight

The inner Esme!  I love her; she is so underused and yet so commanding in presence, drawing the family together through everything.  I'm looking forward to this ride!!  Also, love the banner!



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for your comments.  I agree with you completely -- we get small hints on her strength, so we know it is there -- I hope I let her shine a bit...

Thanks also for mentnioning the banner.  I did it myself with programs I found online.  Just kept trying until I felt it matched my feelings for this story.  Hope you keep reading and commenting!

Reviewer: TillITryIllNeverKnow Signed
Date: 27 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 3: Ashland, Wisconsin

Told from Eme's POV, thisd chapter is even more heart-rending!  Even knowing the ending, we still cheer for the baby.  Well done!

Reviewer: TillITryIllNeverKnow Signed
Date: 28 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 4: Lost and Found

Wonderful chapter,sad in so many ways, yet hopeful in so many others.  We know Esme's hurt in the past, but the promise of her future and a man who understands what it truly means to love are waiting!  You brought it home!

Reviewer: TillITryIllNeverKnow Signed
Date: 04 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 5: Resurrection

Thank God for Carlisle!  Even knowing Esme may choose not to stay with him, Carlisle has to try to save her.  As the end hinted, convincing Esme to want to live will be harder.  Nice, very nice!



Author's Response:

Thanks so much for your comment! So glad to see you are sticking this story.  I guess there is no fighting that soulmate connection.  I just love C&E!

Reviewer: TillITryIllNeverKnow Signed
Date: 24 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 7: Secrets

Seeing the beginnings of the Cullen family is always a treat.  I, personally, don't believe Edward would have known how to love Bella if it hadn't been for Esme's influence.  Nice work!



Author's Response:

I so agree!  I have always felt Edward had a good heart -- that's what drew Carlilse to him in the first place (beyond Eliz), but C&E were his 'adult' rolemodels and that will come through.  I hope you enjoy the mostly charming/innocent Edward in this story.  And I also think it is good to read a not-so-perfect Esme and Carlilse as they were young too.  Thanks so much for your comment/review and I look forward to hearing from you again!

Reviewer: TillITryIllNeverKnow Signed
Date: 07 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 9: Decisions

Silly Esme!  Her destination is the man she just left.  I'm glad Charles got what was coming to him though.  (small, aren't I?)  This was a wonderful chapter and showed the woman Esme was destined to become beginning to blossom.



Author's Response:

Thanks again for reviewing!  I love writing back stories and you will learn much about C&E.  I have to admit, I don't keep Esme away for long -- I just could delay my gratification!

Reviewer: TillITryIllNeverKnow Signed
Date: 14 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 10: Homecoming

Wonderful!  I especially loved picturing Esme pulling the locked drug locker door off at the hinge!  THAT was a great touch!  I also loved Edward's take and point of view when talking to Carlisle. 



Author's Response:

Thanks so much for the review.  I had to give Esme a dramatic re-entrance!  Edward is quite the card in this story.  Always there at the right moment and helping Carlisle and Esme along...

Reviewer: TillITryIllNeverKnow Signed
Date: 29 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 11: A Leap of Faith

Gotta love that Carlisle!  His heart may not be beating, but it's strong and limitless!



Author's Response:

Lord knows, I do love Carlisle.  I have a series of o/s I have been writing exclusively from C&E POV and plan to post those here at the end of this story as a series of future outtakes (is there such a thing as future outtakes?) and think you might enjoy them  -- you will get some different sides of C&E in those.

Reviewer: TillITryIllNeverKnow Signed
Date: 22 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 14: Plans, Prayers and Promises

Lovely!  And the vows are perfection!



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for your review.  Honeymoon is up and ready for  you!!

Reviewer: TillITryIllNeverKnow Signed
Date: 28 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 15: Honeymoon, Part I

Damn!  That was nothing short of glorious!  They are a matched set.  Esme's passion and forwardness to Carlisle's new found desire and gentility.  I can't wait for a very yummy honeymoon part 2!



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for your review!  I just LOVE C&E.  I was thinking of posting an AU/AH one-shot I wrote about them with another author -- it's cute and playful -- Esme's a real minx too!  Part II is ready!

Reviewer: TillITryIllNeverKnow Signed
Date: 04 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 16: Honeymoon, Part II

Lusciously erotic and thoroughly intoxicating!  Esme's realization that her new body could be a plus in the love and sex department could also have a bit to do with the fact that Carlisle is NO Charles.  As you note, he is usually refined and controlled; the idea of being able to make him com undone must be outrageously erotic!  Lovely chapter, and yet of so sexy!!

Healing by LizzieHopscotch Rated: T [Reviews - 9]
Summary:

Sequel to Doll and The Letter.

She's woken up and left the Volturi, but where will Bella go now? Will she go back to the Cullens? Or will she stay on her own? And how will she move forward in her life when Felix just won't let her go?


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 13 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 12277 Read Count: 1623
[Report This] Published: 10 Jun 2010 Updated: 20 Jul 2010
Reviewer: TillITryIllNeverKnow Signed
Date: 16 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

Truly touching.  It's good to see that Bella hasn't shut down completely.  Her allowing a bond to devel;op between herself and Garrett is a sign.  (Even if, and especially if he is in her thoughts a substitute for Emmett!)  Her feelings about Charlie show the same thing.  Bella is healing, and Garrett may be more than helping while Edward's contin ued distance and commitment do the same.  I loved it!!

Reviewer: TillITryIllNeverKnow Signed
Date: 16 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

Good for Bella!  She at least will stand for paul and his memory.  Garrett has worked his magic.  Nice stuff!

Reviewer: TillITryIllNeverKnow Signed
Date: 16 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

And they say there are no romantic matchmakers in the world!  Let's hear it for Bronagh!

Reviewer: TillITryIllNeverKnow Signed
Date: 10 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

Patience is a virtue, they say....let's hope Edward has a lot.  The girl has serious ISSUES to work through.  Marvelous stuff!

Reviewer: TillITryIllNeverKnow Signed
Date: 23 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

Go Rosalie!  They may not have been close before, but Rosalie's willingness to be upfront and help is making it all easier on Bella than anyone else is. 

Reviewer: TillITryIllNeverKnow Signed
Date: 21 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12

Let's hear it for Bronagh!  she's a tough cookie...and funny when the going gets tough!

Reviewer: TillITryIllNeverKnow Signed
Date: 21 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13

Loved the summary!  I can see Bronagh giving Emmett as good as she gets and being that other half Demitri longs for.  Great strory!  Your work is on my alert so I'll be watching for it! 

Summary: Past Featured Story

Bella Swan is in for the shock of her life when Edward Cullen comes back into her life 7 years after graduation.  Can the scars from her past be healed by the reclusive musician or will she shut him out like she has everyone else since the fateful accident four years ago. 

Thanks to evilangel813 for my beautiful banner!!

TRIBE won The Emerging Swan Award!

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Romance
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 24 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 124446 Read Count: 34252
[Report This] Published: 10 Jun 2010 Updated: 03 Aug 2011
Reviewer: TillITryIllNeverKnow Signed
Date: 09 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 10: Birthday Wishes

Well, if your other readers are anything like me, that last chapter had them so hot they had to keep reading or go insane!  It has it all - romance, drama, intrigue, angst, and even some humor.  Speaking for myself, I didn't review till now because I simply HAD to just keep going!  Let's put it this way, it is now 2:04 am.  I have to be up at 5:45 am.  But I didn't want to stop reading yet.  If I don't now though, no one will get anywhere in the morning!  This story blows me away!  As for you.... take care and know my thoughts are with you and your family.  You and that precious bundle will be in my prayers and thoughts!  Take care!  Joanie

 

Different Beginnings by Ezzy Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 16]
Summary:

How would things be if Carlisle turned Bella first 100 years after he was turned? what if Esme was Emmett and Edward's real mother and they were all human and Jasper found Alice whlie Alice was a newborn and they found Bella and Carlisle then Rosalie joins???

follow from Carlisle's POV first then goes to Bella's, possibly other to come, as we see how things would be like if there were different beginnings for all of our favourite charactors.


Categories: Non-Canon Pairings, Twilight, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Carlisle
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 16 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 51670 Read Count: 7156
[Report This] Published: 12 Jun 2010 Updated: 17 Nov 2022
Reviewer: TillITryIllNeverKnow Signed
Date: 20 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 2: The Next Step

I must say, I find the changes you intend and the differences you've laid out intriguing.  I'm looking forward to reading much more!



Author's Response:

well thank you, more is coming and i do hope you and all the ther readers enjoy

Reviewer: TillITryIllNeverKnow Signed
Date: 20 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 4: Where we go from here

Marvelous.  Both sides  seen and handled beautifully.



Author's Response:

thank you very much

Reviewer: TillITryIllNeverKnow Signed
Date: 20 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 5: This is My New Life

Finally, a home where she is loved and appreciated!  Great chapter.  One little queery, the handmade cross that you write about, is that the one pictured in Twilight at the foot of the stairs?



Author's Response:

Basically yea, it's the same cross except that mine has a little charring and it is made of a dark hard wood. thank you for reviewing it really means a lot to me.

Reviewer: TillITryIllNeverKnow Signed
Date: 20 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

Love your Jasper!



Author's Response:

thank you, i don't like how you never got much interaction with him and bella even though Jasper is a good person and all of that so i like to add more of Jasper into my stories and make his control (if the story is about Vamps) better than in the books because i want to give him a break for a change...lol

Reviewer: TillITryIllNeverKnow Signed
Date: 25 Jan 2013 Title: Chapter 3: A Companion Made for Just Me

I love the changes and possibilities they lead to.  Carlisle with Bella as a daughter could be wonderful.  She will have the love, respect, and kindness she has so needed.  And he will have the love and a connection.  Wonderful!



Author's Response:

thank you so very much for your review! keep reading as there is still pleanty more of this story!

Summary:

Taking Bella swim wear shopping was suppose to be easy. But what happens when Charlotte gets more than she bargained for? One Shot for now

 


Categories: Non-Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Jasper
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 2849 Read Count: 1663
[Report This] Published: 23 Jun 2010 Updated: 23 Jun 2010
Reviewer: TillITryIllNeverKnow Signed
Date: 24 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Luscious!  Jazz and Charlotte together while Bella and Peter are enjoying the same.  If you do add another chapter, Bella and Peter should SO be it...with a little more Bella and Charlotte thrown in.  Perhaps even Jazz and Peter!  But this chapter...damn I enjoyed this!

Never Say Never by Wombat Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 1025]
Summary:

Issued with a death sentence since birth Bella’s life was never her own; in an attempt to escape her abusive childhood she flees to Forks, Bella is destined to be with Edward for eternity but can he save her from the clutches of Aro and his army before its too late or will she be able to save herself.

This story contains Abuse, Violence, Love, War, Sex, Masturbation, Kidnapping, Rape, Death and a heap of other things.... Please don't read if you are not of age!!!!

Twilight Rocks But I Do Not Own It.... I do however own this story!!!!

This story is for Adults only. So Don't Read if you are not old enough......

I suck at summaries so please give my story a go.

 


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 9 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 58299 Read Count: 55216
[Report This] Published: 25 Jun 2010 Updated: 03 Jan 2013
Reviewer: TillITryIllNeverKnow Signed
Date: 02 Sep 2010 Title: Never Say Never

Nice ending!!!  And may I add - Go Rosalie!  The girl should be a therapist!  Beautifully handled!



Author's Response:

YAY!!!! Thanks so much for taking the time to review... You made my day with your praise!!!!

Reviewer: TillITryIllNeverKnow Signed
Date: 15 Sep 2010 Title: Never Say Never

Awesome!  Perfectly awesome!

Reviewer: TillITryIllNeverKnow Signed
Date: 15 Sep 2010 Title: Never Say Never

Wickedly evil cliffhanger you have there...and bless you for it!



Author's Response:

hehehehe... SqUeAl!!!! Thanks sooooooo much for reviewing, I really can't wait for you all too read EPOV so I won't make you wait too long....

Reviewer: TillITryIllNeverKnow Signed
Date: 05 Nov 2012 Title: Chapter 1: Author Note

Absolutely we want you to!  I'm glad you're in a happier and more content place now, and I wish you a wonderful journey!  Be happy!

Reviewer: TillITryIllNeverKnow Signed
Date: 20 Nov 2012 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 2 - First Encounters

Finally, an Emmett that does more than play video games!  Poor Bella though!  She has been through the wringer!  Great chapter.



Author's Response:

Emmybear rocks!!!! Giggle.

Thanks soooo much for pressing that little review button

Mafia Princess by verucasin Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 527]
Summary: Past Featured Story

stories/23069/images/MafiaPrincess.jpg

Banner by MsRason

 

All Humans. OOC. He is the mob boss that wants to rekindle what they had. She is the daughter of the rival mob, who just recently accepted her fate. Will uniting together solve all their problems? ExB


Categories: Twilight
Characters: None
Genre: Romance
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: I Whitlock's read , To Read (Geddy)
Chapters: 32 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 116080 Read Count: 87538
[Report This] Published: 27 Jul 2010 Updated: 07 Feb 2012
Reviewer: TillITryIllNeverKnow Signed
Date: 08 Feb 2012 Title: Chapter 32: Chapter 32

II can't ay enough about this story!  It's marvelous - rich and intense with characters that are well thought out and multi- faceted.  A true gift to your readers.  Thank you.  I discovered it at 32 chapters and read straight through. ( recharging my IPad along the way.).  I'm looking forward to your next update!  Again, thank you for a great read!



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for the compliment. I'm glad you liked the story. =) *hugs*

Summary:

Banner by: TwiliteAddict

This is a two-shot from a parallel universe to my story "Forbidden Desire" I wrote for the Fics for Nashville fundraiser. Bella is an untried pleasure slave given to Edward on his 18th birthday by his insistent father.

Greek Togaward and Slave-girl Bella. AH, NC-17 for nudity, slavery (adult themes) and light citrusy feel.  My typical oddly In-Character OOC

 

 


Categories: Twilight, All Human
Characters: None
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 4065 Read Count: 1668
[Report This] Published: 07 Aug 2010 Updated: 07 Aug 2010
Reviewer: TillITryIllNeverKnow Signed
Date: 08 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Part I

Amazingly sensual and erotic!  The art of the alluring is tremendous and you have an art for bringing that to the forefront.  I'm looking forward to more!



Author's Response:

Thank-you so very much! I'm always so excited to see what you have to say, and was certainly not disappointed this time either!  I so appreciate you reading and responding!!! :D

Summary:

Living Amongst Vampires Banner

 

In a world dominated by vampires, humans are forced to donate blood and abide by the strict rules of the vampire government. Bella has never experienced life in an all-human world and one day the only life she knows shatters to pieces when her parents are killed by a vampire. She is adopted by her parents' friends, who happen to be vampires. Her life turns upside down as she moves to an all-vampire town. Will she have the strength to go on after all that she has endured? Will one special vampire heal her wounds as she struggles to live a life amongst vampires? Edward and Bella pairing, AU, OOC

Warning: This story contains explicit adult content, language, violence, vampire marking and bloodplay.

 

I want to thank Dazzled~by~Jake for this awesome banner! And my awesome Beta Lindz! xo


 

Inspire Fanfic winning banner


Categories: Twilight, Alternate Universe
Characters: None
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Love to drive's Stories to read
Chapters: 27 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 384211 Read Count: 238938
[Report This] Published: 14 Aug 2010 Updated: 05 Sep 2022
Reviewer: TillITryIllNeverKnow Signed
Date: 16 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

This is a unique story idea.  A great twist with a lot of possibilities.  Nice!



Author's Response:

Thank you =)

Reviewer: TillITryIllNeverKnow Signed
Date: 23 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

If I were Bella, I think I'd opt for homeschooling!  You really go for the details...I hadn't thought of lunch in a school of vampires!  Great stuff!



Author's Response:

LOL. I think I'd prolly want to be homeschooled too. Thank you =)

Reviewer: TillITryIllNeverKnow Signed
Date: 30 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

Gotta love that welcome wagon known as Tanya!  Great chapter.  You define the characters really well here. 



Author's Response:

LOL. Thank you =)

Thanks for reading/commenting too.

Reviewer: TillITryIllNeverKnow Signed
Date: 02 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

The marking might be kind of kinky, but it's sweetly sexy in this case.  Donation time?  Why not let her give it straight to Emmett...he likes O+ !  Great job.



Author's Response:

Thank you =)

LOL. There will be bloodplay int future chapters.

 

Reviewer: TillITryIllNeverKnow Signed
Date: 15 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

Great work.  The drama. the tension and of course the romance - a perfect balance, and may I just say, "Nice cliffhanger you have there!"  Kudos!  I'm looking forward to that E & B scene!



Author's Response:

Thank you so much =) I'm glad you enjoyed it!

And of course thanks for reading and commenting =)

 

Reviewer: TillITryIllNeverKnow Signed
Date: 22 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

Those pills give me the creeps too...to say nothing about the enforced donations and "Nazi concentration camp-like tattoos".  Sufficiently creepy!  Edward will not be a happy camper when he sees how Bella's body was abused.  Great work here.  If there were any readers not hooked by this story, they are now!



Author's Response:

There's something...strange going on to say the least. The vampire gov't is panicking for a reason. I wonder what Carlisle will think...maybe he knows something?

Thank you =) I try my best at creepy. lol I guess I have suceeded. And Edward won't be too happy. Oh boy! *runs and hides*

Thank you so much for reading/commenting and sticking with this. Hopefully I can keep you entertained =)

Reviewer: TillITryIllNeverKnow Signed
Date: 27 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

As a physician, I can't think that Carlisle will be any to pleased to see Bella's arms and know that the medication they want her to take could cause her body to react adversely.  The rest of the family tends to be very protective as well.  They will "not be amused", to quote Queen Elizabeth I.  How to spare Bella?  Turn her or have Carlisle taker over her care.  She'll die soon anyway.  Collapsed veins do not heal.  You have it all in here.  The intensity of love to the intensity of terror and fear.  Bravo!                                                                                                                    



Author's Response:

Thank you so much =)

There definitely has to be something that needs to be done right away. Like you have said, turn Bella (although creating hybrids is punishable by death-maybe it will be the only action left) or have Carlisle take over her care. I hope the vamp gov't won't cause too many problems. Bella needs help...fast!

Thanks for reading and commenting =)

Reviewer: TillITryIllNeverKnow Signed
Date: 03 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

Nice cliffhanger!  Let's see, who's approaching?  Possibly memebers of the Volturi?  I don't think it's Peter and Charlotte because Jasper would recognize their scents.  I'm looking forward to finding out who it is though!



Author's Response:

Thank you =) I hope you'll enjoy the next chapter.

And thank you so much for reading and commenting!

Summary: Past Featured Story

stories/12/images/ForTheLoveOfMyObsession.jpg

He met the girl of his dreams. She met the man of her nightmares. How far would you go for your obsession? AH/AU/OOC

For the BEYOND THE PALE contest-Third Place Voter's Choice Winner

Banner by Mehek18

 


Categories: Non-Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Emmett
Genre: Drama
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: To Read, My favs past present and future
Chapters: 18 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 44991 Read Count: 48122
[Report This] Published: 26 Aug 2010 Updated: 22 Sep 2013
Reviewer: TillITryIllNeverKnow Signed
Date: 30 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Mindblowing!  You brought a more than unque twist to this work and I can't wait to see what happens next!



Author's Response:

Thanks! I'm glad you liked it.

Reviewer: TillITryIllNeverKnow Signed
Date: 28 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

I love this story!  It reads like film nouire or a really good Hitchcock film.  It has style, it has flair and it has more twists than Lombard street!  Amazing work!



Author's Response:

I'm glad you like it.  I hope you continue to enjoy.

Reviewer: TillITryIllNeverKnow Signed
Date: 07 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

Seriously, your Emmett is so smart and so calculating and so down right cold he gives me the creeps and willys all at once!  Bravo for that, because even Stephen King can't accomplish that!  The last line here is the ultimate: " I win."  That alone describes his mindset.  For almost ayear he has had the engagement ring Edward planned to give Bella locked in a safe - a sort of physical trophy he can take out and measure himself by.  After all, everything else he has done can only be felt or suffered through.  The ring is tangible.  Amazing!  And as I said, the ultimate in scary.  (A compliment of the highest order.) 



Author's Response:

I'm glad you like it!  I (obviously) get a kick out of writing dark characters. It's an opportunity to release my inner-bitch and let her run amuck.  :)

Reviewer: TillITryIllNeverKnow Signed
Date: 19 Mar 2012 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12

 Yes!  Finally a light at the end of Bella's tunnel- and a Jasper- light no less!  I'm so glad you updated.  Thank you for that!  This story just keeps getting richer and richer.  I have to say James threw me for a loop here.  It was a nice surprise though!  And let's hear it for Charlotte!



Author's Response:

I went out on a limb with this story. I killed off Edward, made Emmett the bad guy and gave James some redeeming qualities. It's hard to be misterious if everyone knows the characters from the start.

Reviewer: TillITryIllNeverKnow Signed
Date: 14 Apr 2012 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13

Brilliant idea having Jasper react harshly when Bella arrives.  It takes her reaction to his words and volume for him to realize who she really is.  Trusting Jasper is in many ways Bella's first step on a road to recovery.  It is a true leap of faith.  Thou also give the reader a true sense of Jasper here.  He's tough, protective, but a true gentleman inside.  He hates that he frightened Bella.  She could have been met calmly, easily,and gently but you did so-o much better!  Kudos!!



Author's Response:

Thanks! I'm so glad you liked Jasper's introduction. Having a "polite meeting over tea" just didn't fit for the kind of man Bella is going to need. She needs someone who is willing to protect her.

Plus it just felt more real. First impressions aren't always the best.

Reviewer: TillITryIllNeverKnow Signed
Date: 20 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14

Loved Jasper's perspective on their first meeting.  I am so happy everything went well this year with your family - congratulations!  I'm also delighted to be able to continue the story.  I love the depth and raw emotions it produces.  Ihave a feeling that might go up even higher now that Jasper is in the mix!  Thank you so much for updating!  Told you we'd be waiting!



Author's Response:

I'm glad you like Jasper. He's going to be a lot of fun to write. Thanks for your patience.

Reviewer: TillITryIllNeverKnow Signed
Date: 28 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15

So happy to get your update!  We have a superstorm here and this was more than a lovely way to forget what is going on.  Thank you!  I love Maria here.



Author's Response:

A couple of authors with TWCS are stuck in Austin because of cancelled flights to the upper east coast. Stay safe!

Reviewer: TillITryIllNeverKnow Signed
Date: 14 Jan 2013 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16

So happy to read your update!  This story has such heart!  I know what you mean about having less time.  My own daughter is a sophomore in college - she lives at home.  I swear I have less time now than when she was in high school!

Jasper here is a true character!  He feels seriously and yet won't take a step closer to Bella.  His sense of honor is marvelous and it takes a ribbing from his brother-in-law to get him moving.  I love it!  He is the solid guy Bella truly needs to let her believe in men and life again.  Thanks for all your hard work.  I'm looking forward to more!



Author's Response:

I don't know if it holds true in your house, but I feel like I can't ask for as much help from my daughter when she comes home to visit as I expected from her in high school. Even over Christmas when she didn't have any studying to do, I still didn't get much help and she always wanted to spend the weekends shopping or going to movies with me. I'm certainly not going to turn down any opportunity that she picks me to spend time with over friends.lol!

I live in a small town in Texas and know several 'cowboys'. My Jasper is based on some of the best parts of all of them...along with the stubborn mulehead that seems to be a large part of every one of them as well.

Reviewer: TillITryIllNeverKnow Signed
Date: 20 Apr 2013 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17

Wonderful.  Bella is opening up again and reaching out for life tentatively.  And Jasper seems to be her key.  His very prescence is so real to her that he seems to ground her.  Now she is able, with Peter's help, to hear and deal with the truth.  Hopefully, she will stay at the ranch.  If she fears  for anyone in her life because of Emmett, she just might try to take off in an effort to keep them safe.  

Lovin' every word!  Thank you!



Author's Response:

Thank you for your wonderful review. I'm glad you're enjoying the story. Bella and Jasper need to actually communicate with each other instead of assuming how the other feels. Neither wants to upset the other and all their doing is making the other feel even worse.

Reviewer: TillITryIllNeverKnow Signed
Date: 24 Sep 2013 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18

I am so happy to see your update I could scream!  Thank you!  Especially with all you've been going through.  Please know that both you and of course your Mom will be in my prayers and remain there.

I love the fact that Jasper is opening up to Bella and she is starting to trust him.  Something tells me that Jasper can more than deal with anything Emmett dishes up - in spades!  I love the world you have created here and the characters in it.

Whenever you update, trust me, I'll be here waiting for it with baited breath!  Please take care!



Author's Response:

Thanks for sticking with me thru slow updates. I know it's aggrivating to wait, so please know I appreciate my readers! We haven't heard the last from Emmett yet and all country boys know how to deal up a good old fashioned ass whooping. lol!

Summary: Past Featured Story

 

Twilight retold. Bella has always felt that she was different. After moving back to Folks to live with her dad. Bella learns not only how truly different she is, and also the world around her AU/OOC Bella/Jasper*Rated NC-17 for Sex&Lang* A/E,Em/R,C/Es,P/C

stories/34076/images/TrueHeartsBanner.jpg      Banner By: Rachel MS

 

 

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Categories: Twilight, Non-Canon Pairings, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Jasper
Genre: Romance
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02 Bella/Jasper stories
Chapters: 47 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 279948 Read Count: 28911
[Report This] Published: 16 Sep 2010 Updated: 26 Feb 2011
Reviewer: TillITryIllNeverKnow Signed
Date: 26 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19

Good lord!  Citrus allergy?  That means I could be of the Fae!  Yes!  I love the action and Charlie's reappearance.



Author's Response:

Yes! All Elves, Faries, and Deamons are allergic to citrus! Thanks for your kind words.. Hugs~Izzy ;)

Thank You for your Review of Chapter 19. Here’s your Sneak Peek at Chapter 20.

Hugs~Izzy

Chapter 20

(JPOV)

All I could do was stand there, holding my mate in my arms, and growl when I thought someone was too fuckin’ close to her. I knew mentally that she was right, and that Carlisle needed to look at her. But I couldn’t seem to put the Major back into in box.

Hugs~Izzy

 

 

Reviewer: TillITryIllNeverKnow Signed
Date: 03 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20

Nice one!  I sthere venom?  Isn't there venom?  I love it; I especially love the banter between Bella and Jasper!  It's always easy, never forced or made up.  Kudos!



Author's Response:

Thanks, I am so glad that you are enjoying the story. I love J/B scenes in my head, and they are EASY to write. They make the story worth writing for me. Hugs~Izzy

Thanks for your review of Chapter 21. Here’s your Sneak Peek at Chapter 22.

Hugs~Izzy

Chapter 22

(BPOV)

What are you holding back from me, Jasper Whitlock? I know that you are trying to hide something so you might as well spill it before I have to go dig through that mind of yours. I said, while crossing my arms over my chest. I’d rifle through his thoughts if I had to, and he knew it.

Hugs~Izzy

 

 

tHirTeEn by twolipps Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 216]
Summary: Past Featured Story

In the aftermath of war, the Volturi have given Bella a choice-live as a vampire among the Guard, or die. What will she choose and will Jasper be willing to train her as a newborn and then give her up at the end of 13 short months? Vamp/Human OOC / A darker Jasper

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Categories: Twilight, Non-Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Jasper
Genre: Romance
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: My favs past present and future
Chapters: 31 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 169540 Read Count: 16139
[Report This] Published: 21 Sep 2010 Updated: 01 Sep 2011
Reviewer: TillITryIllNeverKnow Signed
Date: 23 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I love it!!!  You have just the right blend of fear and the intensity that only Jasper can bring.  Perfection!  I can't wait to see where you bring us.  Your other story is one of my all time favorites - needless to say, I'm close to drooling at the very idea of another!



Author's Response:

You are so kind with your words, and you really know how to encourage an writer!

Thanks so much for checking out the new fic, and here's a tiny teaser for the next chapter:

"I ran my hands through my hair and noticed that they oddly smelled of Bella. I had only touched her once, and I already reeked of her. She had an intoxicatingly sweet smell and her scent sparked a physical reaction in me that I wasn’t expecting.  I didn’t know how to describe it; it was more than a feeling of hunger, it was a tight tugging feeling in my chest."

Reviewer: TillITryIllNeverKnow Signed
Date: 27 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

I've come to think of teasers as the toy surprise in a box of Cracker Jacks! Love it!  I must say, you have me stumped.  I assume Bella is still a shield, but for her to be masking Mike and Jassica as well...?  And unknowingly?  You have me hooked!  Something also tells me that Jasper might have a problem with Bella being killed.  Justa  thought.  Great chapter.  I especially love the simple world through Bella's eyes and also can't help but wonder how Charlie DID die. 



Author's Response:

I'm so glad that you are liking it so far.  And yup, Bella is a shield, she just doesn't know how powerful yet-- none of them know!

Thanks for reading and here’s another tiny teaser for ya!

“Demetri came at Bella again, and I reacted before I could consciously think about what I was doing. I caught him by the throat and slammed him to the earth, shaking the ground. Bella wobbled with the vibrations, and before she could fall, I had her in my arms, halfway across the meadow and shielding her from further attack.”

 

Reviewer: TillITryIllNeverKnow Signed
Date: 01 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

Outrageously good chapter.  Alice is irritated, Jasper is exasperated and poor Bella is just scared and confused.  She has no clue!  I love the bartering that when on in this chapter, it's so....Aro!  I can't wait to see how Bella and Jasper's relationship works out.  something tells me they're in for a rocky start!



Author's Response: Rocky start...you got that right! Thanks for reading hun. T

Reviewer: TillITryIllNeverKnow Signed
Date: 06 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

Make sure the UHAUL you rent is large enough!  If it's too small, it can mean several trips and lots of extra work!  (my sister-in-law and her husband messed up with this one)  Jasper in this chapter needs to take a deep brewath.  I love the push and pull between these two, however.  Jake now adds a whole new twist to this all!  Nice turn in the road!  Great work - especially Bella's emotional "oneness".



Author's Response:

Thanks for the advise hun!  I'm moving 13 hours away from where I currently live, so no back and forth trips for me! LOL

 

Yep, the wovles get thrown into the mix and Jasper is not going to be a happy camper.

Thanks for reading.


T

 

 

Reviewer: TillITryIllNeverKnow Signed
Date: 12 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

Great chapter!  Bringing the wolves in was inspired, as it brought about an even bigger connection between Bella and Jasper!  The man better learn how to sensor himself or she'll kill him when she's a newborn!  I'm so-o-o glad that you're continuing your other story!  It's a favorite guilty pleasure of mine!!



Author's Response:

I've got a feeling that Bella is going to be hard to handle as a newborn!

 

Thanks for sticking with me on this one.

 

T



Author's Response:

I've got a feeling that Bella is going to be hard to handle as a newborn!

 

Thanks for sticking with me on this one.

 

T

Reviewer: TillITryIllNeverKnow Signed
Date: 05 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14

I love the idea of Bella taking on Alice here!  Take no prisoners!  I sort of thought maybe Alice was working with Aro when I read she had been in Italy.  Designer or no, it's a great place to visit other interests.  By the way, Bella's revenge?  I love it!  All those designer clothes - destroyed!  Alice's reaction is bound to crack me up!!  I'm lovin' it!



Author's Response: Thank so much hun! T

Reviewer: TillITryIllNeverKnow Signed
Date: 16 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20

Steamily, beautifully delicious!  Jasper and bella's intensity positively glows!!!



Author's Response:

Thanks for reading hun!

 

 

T

Summary:

Winter, 1693. The hysteria of Salem has reached the town of Carlisle, MA, where a group of magistrates including Edward Masen are sent to investigate claims of witchcraft. Will they find the truth & save those who are innocent? FGB o/s Javamomma0921.

 

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Historical, One-Shot, Romance
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 17336 Read Count: 1154
[Report This] Published: 06 Oct 2010 Updated: 06 Oct 2010
Reviewer: TillITryIllNeverKnow Signed
Date: 06 Dec 2013 Title: Chapter 1: Bewitched, Bothered & Bewildered

Absolutley stunning!  I love this piece so much!  My family has been to Salem several times and I have read the histories of that judicial travesty.  Let me just say that you, in this work, have done the spirits and memory of those lost there proud!  You present an almost overwhelming amount of supposed evidence - just as justices centuries ago received.  You however go forth and prove the true wrongs done not only to the victims but the accused as well.  If only they had seen so clearly centuries ago!  Thank you for placing the past in the hands of the present and future generations so a long ago wrong might be remembered a nd the lessons learned then be brought forward.  Kudos on a job well done!  Thank you!

Summary:

Outtake for Creating A Mate.


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Romance
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Misstoria's Stories to Read
Chapters: 2 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 5062 Read Count: 1344
[Report This] Published: 09 Oct 2010 Updated: 01 Jan 2012
Reviewer: TillITryIllNeverKnow Signed
Date: 13 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1-Gifts

A wonderful explanation from "the inside".  Powers described as only those who experience them could.  Marvelous!



Author's Response:

Thanks. I figured if I was going to deviate from SM's story and powers then this might help with any confusion.