Reviews by vicki219
Summary: Past Featured Story

15 yr old Bella has a fairly normal life. That was until her mum's new boyfriend came on the scene. Will Bella survive her new life? Dark Themes, Cannon Pairings. GRAPHIC

Thanks mkystich for the amazing new banner... AGAIN!!! :)


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's not read yet, I Whitlock's read , My Favorite Stories
Chapters: 37 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 89516 Read Count: 311087
[Report This] Published: 21 Jan 2010 Updated: 04 May 2011
Reviewer: vicki219 Signed
Date: 21 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11 - Not Your Own

Really good story so far. Am looking forward to seeing where you are going to take it next.

Reviewer: vicki219 Signed
Date: 31 Mar 2010 Title: Volturi Order

Really cool chapter. Will be looking forward to the updates whenever you post them :-)

Breathe Again by ysar Rated: M starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 149]
Summary: Past Featured Story

You know those fics where Edward doesn't come back and Bella forgets about him and five seconds later she's in bed with Jacob and none of it makes any damn sense?
Yeah, this isn't one of them.

A BELLIE AWARDS NOMINEE!

This story picks up from the moment in New Moon when Jacob has driven Bella home after the cliff diving incident, right before he catches the scent of Alice. Only in this telling, Alice wasn't looking, so there's no sudden appearance at Bella's house, no Rosalie calling Edward and sending him on a suicidal mission to Volterra, and no reason for Bella to do anything but believe that Edward didn't love her anymore. This is simply a story of what might have happened if everyone stayed mostly in character and Edward's return was delayed. Yes, delayed. Because we all know that he was "this close" to coming back on his own anyhow.
So what would have happened if Bella had tried to move on with her life?  Would she have found happiness with Jacob?  And would Edward be too late?

* First in a series of stories that tell of Bella and Jacob during Edward's absence, Bella's start at college, and the Cullens' eventual return.


~I thought of Jacob’s warm arms wrapped around me, his infectious laughter, and his ability to keep me from falling to pieces again… The pain choking my heart relaxed and I could breathe.~

 

~“More than anything,” I whispered, not caring what I'd just agreed to. When it came to Bella, it didn't matter what the question was. I just wanted.~

Winner of:

Best Author, Most Romantic, Favorite Jacob, Most Suspenseful, & Best WIP in the Wolfpack Awards | Best Non-Canon Pairing (Incomplete) and Best WIP in the Moonlight Awards | Best During the Series in the Razzle Dazzle Awards | The Storyteller Award in the Shimmer Awards | Best JacobxBella in the Silent Tear Awards | Best Jacob Point of View in the Twilight Twins Awards


Categories: Twilight, Alternate Universe
Characters: None
Genre: Romance, Young Adult
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: A Blazing Sun, 108.9, Jacob Black Wins the Girl
Chapters: 76 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 163880 Read Count: 35972
[Report This] Published: 28 Jan 2010 Updated: 12 Sep 2010
Reviewer: vicki219 Signed
Date: 20 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 73: Distractions: Bella's POV

Cool ending to the chapter. Can't wait for your next one.

Reviewer: vicki219 Signed
Date: 19 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 51: Quiet: Bella's POV

Love, love, love this story! Whilst i am a Team Edward girl, for this story i would actually like Bella to end up with Jacob!

Reviewer: vicki219 Signed
Date: 19 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 70: Honesty: Jacob's POV

I got re-routed from the ericnorthman.net website to read another story and then i spotted your story and it sounded really interesting so i started to read it. The stories really interesting and captivating by the way.

Summary:

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Bella Swan is kidnapped from her monotonous life by the rich and reclusive Edward Cullen who has fallen in love wirh her from afar. Can she overcome her anger and fall in love & can they both learn from their mistakes? 

Rated: M (18 and over)

AH, AU, Contains: Violence, Foul Language, Lemons


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02 WIP Reads
Chapters: 24 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 95443 Read Count: 83458
[Report This] Published: 28 Jan 2010 Updated: 03 Apr 2013
Reviewer: vicki219 Signed
Date: 19 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16

Aww this is such an awesome story! I am really enjoying reading it and am really looking forward to the next update!!

Summary: Past Featured Story

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Bella and the gang are the popular rich kids of Forks high, new teacher Mr. Cullen starts, B wants him right away. What starts out as a passionate affair ends up as a cataylyst for the obsession of a dangerous drug lord to take action. Lemons.

Be warned- this is not your average teacher/student story

Now completed- Thanks to all my readers and reviewers.

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: G8or Favor8s Read
Chapters: 26 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 88667 Read Count: 55121
[Report This] Published: 30 Jan 2010 Updated: 04 Mar 2010
Reviewer: vicki219 Signed
Date: 05 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 26-Epilogue

Awww, thats was such a good ending to the story. X



Author's Response:

Thank you, glad you enjoyed it.

Summary: Past Featured Story

Bella is 17 and tired of being the 'good girl'. Senior year calls for change. She finds it in the arms of 25 yr old Edward. Consequences for her choices cause a ripple effect that even she could never have been prepared for.

New banner made by: mkystich, thanks bb!

 

 

 


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: My All-Time Favorites, My Favorite Stories
Chapters: 29 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 71042 Read Count: 116432
[Report This] Published: 08 Feb 2010 Updated: 02 Jun 2015
Reviewer: vicki219 Signed
Date: 05 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

To be fair, i totally agree with what you have got in the chapter end notes. She is one lucky B! lol.

Homecoming by dont_run Rated: M starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 1227]
Summary: Past Featured Story

banner by mehek18 site http://mehek18.tumblr.com/

A troubling childhood has left Bella shy and scared of her own shadow. Her life is turned upside down when she is sent to live with the Dad and brother she never knew at the age of 15. Can Charlie and Emmett along with Edward and the gang help Bella? E/B, A/J Em/? *abuse is discussed*

 

 

 


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories, I Whitlock's read , Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiHu, Stories I've Already read, My Favorite Stories, luv2write finished reads
Chapters: 36 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 160653 Read Count: 171527
[Report This] Published: 09 Feb 2010 Updated: 23 May 2012
Reviewer: vicki219 Signed
Date: 11 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

Omg please please, don't leave it there! I really wanna know what happens next. Please update soon!

Reviewer: vicki219 Signed
Date: 07 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14

Yay, i'm glad Edward is going to be her first Kiss as Jake is an a**. Lol hope you update some more soon.

Saving Bella by Mynxi Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 330]
Summary: Past Featured Story

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Jasper returns to Forks to apologize but was never prepared for what he found. Now he knows he needs to make it right. But how? Will Bella find love again?Lemons in the future! Non-canon AU New Moon.

 

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Categories: Twilight, Non-Canon Pairings, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Jasper
Genre: None
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: LeslieWhitlock's completed & recommended read stories, My favs past present and future , Ageise02 Bella/Jasper stories
Chapters: 55 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 281055 Read Count: 89652
[Report This] Published: 09 Feb 2010 Updated: 29 Nov 2010
Reviewer: vicki219 Signed
Date: 28 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 31: Chapter 31

Cool chapter! Hope you update some more soon.

My Happy Ending? by Bellavista Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 136]
Summary: Past Featured Story

Disclaimer: All previously recognized characters, place, and plot markers are property of their respective owners, which in the case of this story is, The Twilight Saga and Stephanie Meyer. No copyright infringement is intended.

Set during Eclipse when Edward and Bella are back together adn trying to work out their relationship. Jacob is not happy that Bella is back with Edward after everything that happened when he left her before.

Bella and Edward continue to grow in their relationship regardless of the trouble that a very angry and very jealous Jacob tries to cause. That is until Jacob finally snaps and does something that will change his, and the rest of the characters lives, forever.

The story contains lots of Cullen fun, romance, drama, violence, angst and a few lemons thrown in for good measure.


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 46 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 224791 Read Count: 38863
[Report This] Published: 12 Feb 2010 Updated: 09 Mar 2013
Reviewer: vicki219 Signed
Date: 07 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10 BPOV

Please, please, please don't leave it there!! I will be anxiously awaiting the next chapter. Brill story!

Road Maps by Oleander Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 108]
Summary:

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It's now six years later; Bella is graduating from Dartmouth, Edward is in Med School. How have their lives changed over the years and what's to come down the road?

AU-Human, rated NC-17 for mature language, mature subject matter, talk of abuse.SEQUEL TO BRANDED.  Please read Branded before reading this story.

 

 


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's not read yet
Chapters: 36 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 149939 Read Count: 18955
[Report This] Published: 14 Feb 2010 Updated: 10 Mar 2010
Reviewer: vicki219 Signed
Date: 21 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 24: Daddy Dearest

Wow, thats really all i can say. You're a really talented writer and i can't wait to read more of the story.



Author's Response:

Thanks, vicki.  I appreciate it.  :)  Makes it all worthwhile.

Reviewer: vicki219 Signed
Date: 27 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 32: A Peanut By Any Other Name

Aww thats soo cute!!!



Author's Response:

I'm glad you enjoyed it.  :)

Summary: Past Featured Story

Bella and Alice have been friends with benefits for ten years. When they meet Edward and Jasper, they find their missing peices. How will their families deal with their relationships? NC-17 for Lots of lemons: E/B, A/J, B/J, A/E, A/B, E/J, E/B/A/J

Banner by rpattz1990

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Categories: Twilight, Non-Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Alice/Jasper/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories, Themslovebug90's read stories, Stories I've Already read, My Favorite Stories, The Awakenings Saga, to read
Chapters: 56 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 102919 Read Count: 303615
[Report This] Published: 14 Feb 2010 Updated: 18 Apr 2010
Reviewer: vicki219 Signed
Date: 05 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11

Lol such a good chapter. Stupid Parents !



Author's Response:

thanks:)

Reviewer: vicki219 Signed
Date: 10 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14

Lol a very good chapter, although i am a little confused about the ending but i'm sure if i read it again i'll understand.



Author's Response:

It will all make more since in a few chapters:)

Reviewer: vicki219 Signed
Date: 11 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15

Aww, i feel so bad for her. Stupid parents, they should love her no matter what or they don't deserve her.



Author's Response:

I agree!

Reviewer: vicki219 Signed
Date: 11 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16

I agree with you, i so want Carlisle and Esme as my parents! Such a nice chapter.



Author's Response:

Thanks, hon:)

Reviewer: vicki219 Signed
Date: 14 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19

haha now thats just mean lol. Loved the update!



Author's Response:

Thanks:)

Reviewer: vicki219 Signed
Date: 23 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 29: Chapter 29

Hmmmm... interesting. Deffinately looking forward to the next chapter!



Author's Response:

Thanks!

Reviewer: vicki219 Signed
Date: 24 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 30: Chapter 30

Aww that is just too cute! I hope they say Yes!



Author's Response:

Thanks!

Reviewer: vicki219 Signed
Date: 27 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 34: Chapter 34

Haha that is just too funny lol. Really good update!!



Author's Response:

Thank you:)

Reviewer: vicki219 Signed
Date: 02 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 38: Chapter 38

Lol yeah that was a heck of a way to end christmas. I don't know if you're planning ot do this or not but it would be interesting if Bella or Alice got pregnant would it lol as they wouldn't really be able to tell whether it was Jasper's or Edwards considering they share all the time lol. But anyways, great update!



Author's Response:

It's all in the plans:)

Reviewer: vicki219 Signed
Date: 05 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 42: Chapter 42

Oh this is so cute. It will deffinately be interesting to see how Ben and Angela take it. Hope you update soon



Author's Response:

Thanks:)

Reviewer: vicki219 Signed
Date: 06 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 43: Chapter 43

Haha yeah Angela is very direct lol.



Author's Response:

lol, i know :)

Summary: Past Featured Story

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When everything goes wrong at the baseball field what happens to Edward and Bella? Can they survive what happens? What happens when you give your life for the one you love? Is there a heaven? What will Bella do when all her dreams come true and she really gets her Second Chance at her first love?  Cowritten with preciousfairymom80, go check out her stories too!

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories, Love to drive's Stories to read, Drive's Stories to read that are Completed and Not completed, Amberina's Completed Favs List, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, My Favorite Stories
Chapters: 35 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 102807 Read Count: 55128
[Report This] Published: 14 Feb 2010 Updated: 15 Sep 2010
Reviewer: vicki219 Signed
Date: 13 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

haha lol i love this story, especially this chapter. so funny lol. Please update more soon.



Author's Response:

Thanks so much! I will be updating soon!

Reviewer: vicki219 Signed
Date: 20 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13

That was so sweet! Very interesting chapters!! Can't wait for more.



Author's Response:

I love that you are enjoying this story! It is complete so I will try to post the chapters more regularly. I keep forgetting though so that is why I post multiples at one time. Thanks for enjoying!

Reviewer: vicki219 Signed
Date: 02 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17

Cool, Twins!! I love the fatc of Edward and Bella being parents of Twins while being human lol. Can't wait for the next chapter!



Author's Response:

Thanks for loving it!

Reviewer: vicki219 Signed
Date: 02 May 2010 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20

Well that's deffinately going to be interesting lol. I loved the way she messed with Jasper that was so cool lol.

Reviewer: vicki219 Signed
Date: 14 May 2010 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21

Aww that's so cute!! Please update some more soon

Reviewer: vicki219 Signed
Date: 17 May 2010 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22

Omg trust Mike to still be a pervert and Jessica to still be desperate lol. Hope you update some more soon

Reviewer: vicki219 Signed
Date: 20 May 2010 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23

Haha this was so funny, i can't believe they got caught! Atleast they wern't still on the piano lmao

Hiding Bella by nails233 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 214]
Summary:

stories/8628/images/hiding_Bella_Banner.jpgI found a secret hiding in the Alaskan wilderness while on summer vacation. Now I need to keep that secret safe and protected. But what affect will it have on me? What will happen if its exposed? What will I sacrifice to keep it safe? AU,REG PAIRS  EXB

 


Categories: Twilight, Alternate Universe
Characters: None
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 35 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 79986 Read Count: 22413
[Report This] Published: 18 Feb 2010 Updated: 19 Feb 2011
Reviewer: vicki219 Signed
Date: 05 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16

I love this story, it's so cute!!

Reviewer: vicki219 Signed
Date: 11 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23

Haha thats so funny. Drunk Bella lol. Gotta say, it's interesting to see that Alcohol still affected her body in the same way just like a normal human.

High Noon by RiaMaria Rated: M starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 68]
Summary: Past Featured Story

Set 5 years after Breaking Dawn, the Cullens leave Forks for a new life. However, one of them lapses, putting the entire family at risk. This is not a Jake and Nessie story, and gets quite dark in places. Contains vampire violence.

 

I was rooted to the spot. I had been a vampire for five years, but I had never taken a human life, nor seen one taken. In the instant it took me to take in the broken form in his lap, I finally understood what I was, what we all were. I could smell the blood from the lifeless body in front of me, and it smelled good. My throat burned and my mouth filled with venom.

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories
Chapters: 25 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 83172 Read Count: 4853
[Report This] Published: 18 Feb 2010 Updated: 23 Mar 2010
Reviewer: vicki219 Signed
Date: 11 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 19: 19. Escape

Wow that was such an intense chapter. I am so looking foward to reading what is going to happen next!

Reviewer: vicki219 Signed
Date: 19 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 22: 22. Waiting for Absolution

Oooh please don't leave it there, i'm really anxious to know what's happened to Carlisle. i love Bella's new ability though, it kinda makes sense in a way as an extension of her shield. Will be looking forward to the next chapter.

Reviewer: vicki219 Signed
Date: 21 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 23: 23. The Stand

Oh no poor Rosalie. Thats so sad. Really good chapter though,  i will be anxiously awaiting the next update!!

Reviewer: vicki219 Signed
Date: 21 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 24: 24. Wolves Defiant

Oh no, it's so sad that some of the wolves died. Hopefully everyone else makes it. Excellent chapter update. I am so looking forward to the next one. Can't wait!! :-D

Love at 1st Bite by AgoodWITCH Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 64]
Summary: Past Featured Story

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Edward is instantly drawn to the new girl, Bella Swan. From their first meeting he is overtaken by a desire for her body as well as her blood. After a week in Denali he returns to Forks and visits the object of his obsession. What happens in her room that night will change both of their lives forever. First chapter was written for the "In the Dark" Contest.

 

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Categories: Twilight, Alternate Universe
Characters: None
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Wanna read
Chapters: 11 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 50865 Read Count: 17368
[Report This] Published: 18 Feb 2010 Updated: 03 Jan 2017
Reviewer: vicki219 Signed
Date: 05 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 4: Outside Intrusions

I am really loving this story and i can't wait for the next chapter!



Author's Response:

I'm so glad you liked the story!  Hope you enjoy where we're headed!

Summary:

Bella hasn't spoken a word to anyone in over two years. Charlie is frustrated and lost at how to help her. When the Cullen's move to Forks, will they be able to help her open up? Will Charlie still be there if he really knew what she was hiding?

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Banner by, rpattz1990 

 

Warning: This story deals with dark subject matter.


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories, I Whitlock's read , Stories I've Already read, My Favorite Stories, luv2write finished reads, to read
Chapters: 50 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 85605 Read Count: 161912
[Report This] Published: 19 Feb 2010 Updated: 15 Apr 2010
Reviewer: vicki219 Signed
Date: 21 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

This is story is so sad in places but really good at the same time. Can't wait for more.



Author's Response:

Thank you. This is a pretty sad sotry for the most part.

Reviewer: vicki219 Signed
Date: 23 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

Am enjoying reading this story so so much!!



Author's Response:

Thank you :)

Reviewer: vicki219 Signed
Date: 26 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

I can't wait too read what happens next. This is a really good story. Hope you update again soon!



Author's Response:

Thanks:)

Reviewer: vicki219 Signed
Date: 01 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

Really enjoyed that chapter. Can't wait for the next one.



Author's Response:

Thanks:)

Reviewer: vicki219 Signed
Date: 04 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

Aww this story is soo sad but good at the same time. Can't wait for the next chapter though?



Author's Response:

Thanks, next chapter will be up soon:)

Reviewer: vicki219 Signed
Date: 05 Mar 2010 Title: Fall to Pieces

oh no, that sick sick man. Really good telling of the story though. more please!



Author's Response:

Thanks:)

Reviewer: vicki219 Signed
Date: 08 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

That was such a good chapter but it was really sad as well. Actually made me want to cry. Love your work.



Author's Response:

Thank you:)

Reviewer: vicki219 Signed
Date: 11 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14

Omg, Lauren is such a complete Bitch! I swear if i ever met someone like her i would have to try very hard not to slap her lol.



Author's Response:

I know!

Reviewer: vicki219 Signed
Date: 13 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16

Aww that was such a nice chapter.



Author's Response:

Thanks!

Reviewer: vicki219 Signed
Date: 22 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 25

That is such a sweet ending to the chapter. Jaspers story is really sad but happy in the end which is good. Really liked the update, looking forward to more :-)



Author's Response:

Thanks:)

Reviewer: vicki219 Signed
Date: 23 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 27: Chapter 27

Oooh deffinately need to know what that means now.... Please update some more soon please.

Reviewer: vicki219 Signed
Date: 24 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 28: Chapter 28

Aww no how could you end it there, that's cruel. Please update more soon!



Author's Response:

I'm sorry! Ok, I'm not!

Reviewer: vicki219 Signed
Date: 25 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 29: Chapter 29

Really loved the chapter update. It's such a sad story but very interesting.



Author's Response:

Thank you

Reviewer: vicki219 Signed
Date: 27 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 32: Chapter 32

That was such a good chapter. I am glad that she is now realising it wasn't her fault. Loved the prank by the way lol.



Author's Response:

Thank you:)

Reviewer: vicki219 Signed
Date: 28 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 33: Chapter 33

Yay Go Bella!!



Author's Response:

Thanks!

Reviewer: vicki219 Signed
Date: 03 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 38: Chapter 38

Oh no that is so sad, i can't believe that Renee has only come back now and only becasue she heard what happened. Stupid. Hope you update soon!



Author's Response:

Thanks!

Reviewer: vicki219 Signed
Date: 05 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 40: Chapter 40

Omg this was so sad. I hope she gets through it. Hope you update soon please



Author's Response:

Thank you

Reviewer: vicki219 Signed
Date: 14 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 49: Chapter 49

Aww, that's so great that she finally had the courage to move on to that next step with Edward. I can't believe the story is nearly finished. Can't wait for the last chapter.



Author's Response:

Thank you:)

Summary: Past Featured Story

The story begins six months after Edward left Bella in the forest, but unfortunately things have taken a darker turn than our beloved SM wrote. This is the tale of how Edward and Bella eventually find their way back to each other, although it is a difficult road traveled. There will not be any reference to the events in Eclipse or BD.

Rating: NC-17 is for lemons sometime down the road!

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Much love to changedbyEdward and JustBiteMePlease for my awesome banner!!!

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, Alternate Universe
Characters: None
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's not read yet, Love to drive's Stories to read set 2, Amberina's Completed Favs List, Brooklyn - to read
Chapters: 39 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 94477 Read Count: 29121
[Report This] Published: 19 Feb 2010 Updated: 11 Jul 2010
Reviewer: vicki219 Signed
Date: 05 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15

Addicted to this story. It's very interesting and captivating and i am sooooo looking forward to the next chapter. 

Reviewer: vicki219 Signed
Date: 30 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17

Nice Chapter! :-)

Reviewer: vicki219 Signed
Date: 01 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19

I'm loving the fact that you have a kinda sinister plan for Bella with Mike as it will be interesting to see that plan out along with the Victoria situation and Bella and Edward. Hope you update soon!



Author's Response:

:)  Yep...Mike has big plans.....actually when I wrote him into the story I originally thought he was going to bring out the best in Vic, but turns out she has brought out the worst in him.....

Reviewer: vicki219 Signed
Date: 03 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21

Oh no that is not good. I hope she doesn't hate him forever. Please update soon. 

Reviewer: vicki219 Signed
Date: 09 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22

Awww, i so want to hug Jasper now, that is so sweet, what he did for Bella! Can't wait for the next chapter, hope you post it soon

Reviewer: vicki219 Signed
Date: 02 May 2010 Title: Chapter 27: Chapter 27

Haha Emmett is so gonna take the mick for Bella marking Edward lol. Nice!

Reviewer: vicki219 Signed
Date: 03 May 2010 Title: Chapter 28: Chapter 28

Wow, the hits just keep on coming for them don't they? Lol! Hope you update again soon

Reviewer: vicki219 Signed
Date: 10 May 2010 Title: Chapter 29: Chapter 29

Oh no that's so sad, poor Angela. Hope you update again soon

Summary: Past Featured Story

 

Taking place in 17th century Europe, Princess Isabella, only daughter of King Charles I of Spain, faces her fate as her arranged marriage to Prince Edward, future King of England, approaches.  The Prince is known for his indiscriminate cavorting with the ladies of his land, leading the Princess to fear that she will suffer the same fate as her mother and many other queens before and since, to be trapped in a loveless marriage to an unfaithful husband.  Will Princess Isabella ever find happiness while bound to the fate of her birth? AH/OC/Eventual Lemons

 

 

Warning: This will be an NC17 story for later chapters.



Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's not read yet, Finished, I Whitlock's read , Amberina's Completed Favs List, Completed Stories, Edwards Paradox Completed Favourites, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, J's Read and Loved Stories, mamih's favorites, TBR
Chapters: 30 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 92977 Read Count: 373222
[Report This] Published: 20 Feb 2010 Updated: 20 Jun 2010
Reviewer: vicki219 Signed
Date: 21 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 11: A Foreign Shore

Really cool update! I really love the time period the story is in, very cool idea for your story!!

Reviewer: vicki219 Signed
Date: 14 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 8: Bliss

This is such a cute story. It's a very different take on the whole Bella/Edward love story but i like it. It's really different. Hope you update more soon please!

Reviewer: vicki219 Signed
Date: 05 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 14: The Demands of Duty

Oh no that is so sad that they have to leave. Maybe he's leaving Bella with a part of himself? lol. Hope you update again soon

Reviewer: vicki219 Signed
Date: 02 May 2010 Title: Chapter 18: The Brewing Storm

I'm betting that Bella is pregnant from the way she is 'ill'. I hope Tanya goes away lol and doesn't ruin their life but she probably will. Hope you update soon

Reviewer: vicki219 Signed
Date: 10 May 2010 Title: Chapter 20: Banished

Yes! Tanya is gone, well for now i guess. Cool chapter, can't wait for the next update!

Reviewer: vicki219 Signed
Date: 08 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 25: Manipulation and Punishment

Hmm, this is a very intriguing story, can't wait for what is going to happen next!

Summary: Past Featured Story

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What happens at Charlie's wedding is hot and unforgettable for Bella Swan. Charlie's best man has her moaning and melting everywhere from her father's living room to the coat closet at the rehearsal dinner. But great no-strings-attached sex suddenly becomes complicated. And what will happen when Bella meets someone else who just happens to be the best man's son?

NC-17 All Human/OOC

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Sorry, but translantions on this fic are NO longer allowed.

 


Categories: Twilight, Non-Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Carlisle
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 19 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 112113 Read Count: 43565
[Report This] Published: 21 Feb 2010 Updated: 21 Apr 2010
Reviewer: vicki219 Signed
Date: 22 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10: Babysitting Edward Cullen

This is such a good story. Please upload some more soon!



Author's Response:

Thank you for the compliment! I will be uploading the next three chapters tonight

Reviewer: vicki219 Signed
Date: 23 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12: Drunk Confessions

Love it! That was such a funny couple of chapters lol. x

Reviewer: vicki219 Signed
Date: 10 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14: Secrets Exposed

OMG poor Bella, I feel sorry for her and Carlisle and even though i am Team Edward, i want her to get with Carlisle in your story. I can't wait for the next update. Please update soon and take away the suspense we are all feeling lol.

Reviewer: vicki219 Signed
Date: 05 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16: Words of Wisdom

Omg that was such a good chapter and i can't wait to find out what's gonna happen next 

Reviewer: vicki219 Signed
Date: 27 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 19: Epilogue: 1095 Days Later

Aww that was such an amazing story and i really love the baby's name, it's so cute and has significance as well. I can't believe the story is over but that was a really good ending.

Summary: Past Featured Story

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Thanks to Jadiona for the banner!

It's been years since the Cullens left.  There's been tragedy in Bella's life; she will find love where she least expects it.

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Categories: Twilight, Non-Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Jasper
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 23 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 139798 Read Count: 20503
[Report This] Published: 22 Feb 2010 Updated: 11 Apr 2010
Reviewer: vicki219 Signed
Date: 22 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 1: BACKSTORY

This is a really good start to the story, can't wait too see what comes next!



Author's Response:

Thanks for the review!  It gets better , swear!

Reviewer: vicki219 Signed
Date: 28 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 2: MEETING

Very interesting twist to the story, can't wait to see where it goes.



Author's Response:

Thanks for the review!

Reviewer: vicki219 Signed
Date: 05 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 3: GETTING ACQUAINTED

Love this! Hope you update soon!



Author's Response:

Thank you for the review.  The majority of the story is written so the updates should be fast.  I was hoping for at least ten reviews and then I would update, but since that doesn't seem to be happening I'm waiting at least a week for each update.  Thanks for reading.

Reviewer: vicki219 Signed
Date: 08 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 4: INTERVIEW WITH A VAMPIRE

Haha i loved this chapter. I loved how her and jasper are getting along so well and how she wished that she could have ended her relationship with edward better. I thought it was pretty funny when she copped a feel and actually burst out laughing which earned a few weird looks from one of my sisters lol.



Author's Response:

Thanks for the review.  I get the same thing from my husband...always asking what's funny...I just have to shake my head at him.  Glad you enjoyed it.

Reviewer: vicki219 Signed
Date: 21 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 7: VICTORIA

Please please update some more soon!! I am loving this story so much, i can't wait for the next chapter!



Author's Response:

Thank you for the review.  I'm glad you are enjoying it.  I may post another one tonight it depends on how much writing I get done; I'm working on the last chapter right now.  So we'll see.

Reviewer: vicki219 Signed
Date: 21 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 8: GRADUATION

This was such an amazing chapter, you're a great writer and i am so excited for the next chapter!

By the way, i loved how you made everyone understand the way Jasper feels about his scars and that when you're with someone who loves you for you, something like a scar will only enhance youre features!



Author's Response:

Thank you for the review.  Your words mean so much to me.  Thank you for your kind words.  :)

Reviewer: vicki219 Signed
Date: 23 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 9: THE WHOLE TRUTH & NOTHING BUT THE TRUTH...

Wow i really loved this chapter, especially the dedication to Jasper in the front of the book!! The chapter turned out very well so don't doubt your mad skills lol. In my opinion i think Bella should be changed during the passion of making love becasue in a way her turning in BD was due to an accident because Reneseme broke her bones and spine etc...



Author's Response:

LOL...thank you for the review.    I'm glad you liked it.

Reviewer: vicki219 Signed
Date: 28 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 12: VIDEO CAMERA

Wow such a cool update!! I am so excited to see where you take the story next!



Author's Response:

Thank you for the review.  Update should be soon!

Reviewer: vicki219 Signed
Date: 30 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 13: TEXAS

I am so totally in love with this story, this was such an awesome chapter update. Is Bella gonna speak to or see the rest of the Cullen soon? Should be immensely interesting to see what happens. Please update more soon :-)



Author's Response:

Thank you for the review.  The Cullen's will appear, but not for a while.

Reviewer: vicki219 Signed
Date: 31 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 14: BULL RIDING FUN

Oh now, that is really evil to be leaving it there. I love the whole way your doing the Bella/Jasper relationship. I am dying for the next chapter, please update soon!!



Author's Response:

Thanks for the review.  Check out the outtake for chapter 13!

Reviewer: vicki219 Signed
Date: 31 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 15: JASPER'S VISIT PART I

Oh no, you just had to leave it there didn't you?! Please update fairly soon, please!



Author's Response:

Thank you for the review.  I know...I'm a brat.

Reviewer: vicki219 Signed
Date: 01 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 16: JASPER'S VISIT PART II

Oh wow, such a good chapter, i'm glad you did a 'normal' attack situation as most of the times it's a vampire attack or something of the like so... Looking forward to the next chapter, hope it's soon!



Author's Response:

Thanks for the review.  I'm glad you enjoyed it.

Reviewer: vicki219 Signed
Date: 02 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 17: COMING HOME

Yay another update! Thanks for updating so soon and don't worry the chapter wasn't too short, it was really good and explained Jasper's travel from the Cullens to Peter and Char's as well as Bella's incident. I am really looking forward to the next update i hope your pc isn't out of comission for too long. :-)



Author's Response:

Thanks for the review.  Oops.  I meant to take that part out...my computer is fine...that happen while I was writing the story.  Next update should be this weekend or tomorrow.

Reviewer: vicki219 Signed
Date: 03 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 18: THE PAST, PRESENT & FUTURE

Oh wow that was such a brilliant chapter and i've got to say i am totally in love with the wedding Claddagh ring, it's absolutely gorgeous but understated as well. I am really excited for the next chapter as it means that Bella is gonna be a vampire soon lol. :-D



Author's Response:

Thank you for the review.  I'm glad you like the Claddagh ring; it means more to me that people like it since the picture I posted is a picture of my actual wedding ring.

Reviewer: vicki219 Signed
Date: 04 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 19: TEN YEARS LATER

Seriously...... Wow! That was such an amazing kickass chapter and i'm dying to know who it was that gasped though my bet would be on Alice for some reason. I am really looking forward to the next update. Hope you are able to update soon :-D



Author's Response:

Thank you for the review.  I love seeing your reviews.  Next chapter should be up soon.

Reviewer: vicki219 Signed
Date: 07 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 20: THE CULLENS

Oh no you ended on another juicy cliffy, please update soon. I'm dying to know what happens next.



Author's Response:

Thanks for the review.  Probably update tonight or tomorrow.  Thanks!

Reviewer: vicki219 Signed
Date: 09 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 21: WHO ARE YOU...?

I really liked the fight scene, it was quite believable for as believable as a vampire fight can be lol. I hope you update some more soon and i am so looking forward to the Peter/Bella story you mentioned as i'm sure it will be brill just like this story :-D



Author's Response:

Thanks...I'm really excited about it.  So far I only have four chapters and I'll start working on the fifth this weekend.  Thanks for the review.  I'm glad you liked the fight scene...I didn't realize how difficult it would be to write.

Reviewer: vicki219 Signed
Date: 11 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 22: AFTERMATH

Awesome chapter, really. It's a little sad that this is the last but one chapter of the story but all good things must come to an end i suppose. I seriously can;t wait for the next chapter :-D



Author's Response:

Thanks for the review.  What the hell...I'll post the last chapter before I go to bed!  :)

Reviewer: vicki219 Signed
Date: 11 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 23: ACCEPTANCE AND UNDERSTANDING

Yay, they finally accepted them! This was such an amwazing story and i loved it so much. It's a shame that the story ended but it was a great way to end it.  I can't wait for the Peter/Bella story



Author's Response:

Thanks for the review.  I'm glad you are looking forward to the Peter story.  I'm having fun writing it out right now.  I actually just finished chapter five.  :)

Summary:

What if Alice never came back after Bella went cliff diving? What if Bella let herself love Jacob? What will Bella feel when Edward comes back the day she graduates?


Categories: Non-Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Jacob
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02 To Read 2
Chapters: 20 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 52561 Read Count: 3338
[Report This] Published: 22 Feb 2010 Updated: 22 Feb 2010
Reviewer: vicki219 Signed
Date: 22 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 20: Surprises

I'm so glad your doing a sequel as you cannot leave it there. This is such a cool story i can't wait 2 start reading the sequel.

Summary:

Sequel to Without You. What happens when Jake imprints? And Kyle comes to Forks for a new toy? Can the Cullens protect Bella from it all? Will Bella find that she still loves Edward? Or is she destined to spend her life alone?


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 24 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 52498 Read Count: 2064
[Report This] Published: 22 Feb 2010 Updated: 23 Feb 2010
Reviewer: vicki219 Signed
Date: 22 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 8: All I Need

aww i love this story so much. it actually makes me want to cry, in a good way though 'cause it's so sad. Hope you update more soon!

Reviewer: vicki219 Signed
Date: 24 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 24: Reuions

That was brilliant and i like the way you ended it even though i'm curious as to what happens next. x

Summary: Past Featured Story

Bella finds out she's pregnant, but Edward wants nothing to do with it...it doesn't fit his plans! She moves on...Will time make Edward want to be in their lives before the baby is born? Will they find their way back to each other - AH/lemons later  NC-17 RATING FOR VOILENCE IN LATER CHAPTERS.

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories
Chapters: 21 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 56874 Read Count: 61051
[Report This] Published: 22 Feb 2010 Updated: 04 Apr 2010
Reviewer: vicki219 Signed
Date: 14 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15 - Moving Forward

Oh wow pregnancy pics, thats so cute! Hope you update more soon!

Reviewer: vicki219 Signed
Date: 28 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19 - Dark Passenger

Wow, this was such a brilliant chapter. I am glad you ended Jessica's life that way in way as it is a real possibilty to happen. Can't wait for the next chapter if there is one?