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Life in a maternity unit is full of ups and downs!
Bella Swan, an experienced midwife at Forks Hospital meets the new obstetrician, Edward Cullen and the attraction is instant.
As their hands touched, she gasped softly as she felt the shock of electricity that seemed to pass through their skin. Dropping his hand abruptly, her brown eyes wide in surprise, Bella stepped back. Without volition, Bella felt her face flame with another cursed blush. Damn, she was 26 years old. When was she going to stop blushing like a schoolgirl?
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All Human/Alternate Universe
Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's not read yet, LeslieWhitlock's completed & recommended read stories, Amberina's Completed Favs List, Brooklyn - to read, luv2write finished reads
Chapters: 37 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 222356 Read Count: 85885
A stalker is trying to get close to Edward Masen, a green-eyed 24 year old concert pianist.
He hires Elite Guardians to keep him safe from the one who is stalking him.
Bella Cullen is the owner/operator of the company.
She's also a 110 year old vampire.
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In the MYSTIC AWARDS:
GUARDING EDWARD WON FIRST RUNNER UP IN THE
CUTE CATEGORY:
Story that makes you feel all warm and fuzzy!
Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's not read yet, Brooklyn - to read
Chapters: 49 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 200652 Read Count: 30101
Date: 26 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Prologue and Chapter One...Blood Singer
This is an exciting beginning. I can't wait to read the rest.
Author's Response:
Hi MyriadProBOld!~
Hope you enjoy the rest...
Kathie
Date: 26 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2 Choices
Nice job. I really like the feeling of this story. You know how some stories are just tired or not articulate or smart. This one feels like it is going to be a fun ride.
Date: 27 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3 Face to Face
Nice job writing about bella's struggle.
Author's Response:
Thanks, MyriadProBold...nice to hear!
Thanks for reading...
Kathie
Date: 27 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4 Who is She?
I'm glad you aren't doing the repeating chapters thing. It does get tired and it keeps the story moving forward. I'm glad you did it for this intro to Edward.
Author's Response:
That does get tiring...but I really wanted Edward's thoughts here...glad you liked it too...
Kathie
Date: 27 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5 Love Letters
I'm glad Bella seems to have a good amount of control around Edward.
Author's Response:
She is trying, that's for sure! Wouldn't do for the boss lady to kill off the clients...
AND it would have made for a very SHORT story...LOL
Thanks for reading, MPB!
Kathie
Date: 27 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6 I Love Him, He's MINE!
Ok- maybe you had too much fun writing this psycho? I'm afraid of her.
Author's Response:
LOL...you aren't the FIRST person to say so...LOL
My family was QUITE concerned...LOL
She is freaky...but oh so much fun to write! That worried ME just a little too...LOL
Kathie
Date: 27 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7 How Fast Can This Baby Go?
I really like your Emmett. He's what i think his character should be like. I like that Edward is getting along so well and wants to know the cullens better.
Author's Response:
Glad you like him...he really is sweet...
Kathie
Date: 27 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8 Too Close to Home
Nice job letting Bella have the medical degrees. I hope Lauren gets caught soon. I'm trying not to look ahead, but it's hard.
Date: 27 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8 Too Close to Home
Nice job letting Bella have the medical degrees. I hope Lauren gets caught soon. I'm trying not to look ahead, but it's hard.
Date: 27 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8 Too Close to Home
Nice job letting Bella have the medical degrees. I hope Lauren gets caught soon. I'm trying not to look ahead, but it's hard.
Author's Response:
Yep, good thing she knew a bit about pregnancy...
Have faith...I'm all about the HEA (Happily Ever After)!!!
Kathie
Date: 28 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9 Discoveries
I kind of laughed about the four star chef thing. No five stats at hospitals. ;-)
thanks for including the painting.
Author's Response:
You are welcome...It was from the right time frame anyway...and it works in well with the story...later!
The food in that hospital was seriously GOOD...really!
Kathie
Date: 28 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10 On Guard
I liked bella's story and so relieved that James seems to be out of the picture for the rest if hhis story.
Author's Response:
Glad you enjoyed the back story...I just saw it and had to write it..
Kathie
Date: 30 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11 Before the Dawn
Now I want tea.
Nice job. I like that Bella is getting more comfortable with edward.
Author's Response:
I want some tea too! Maybe we can have a cuppa with Edward... ;D
Thanks for reading, MPB!
Kathie
Date: 30 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12 His Girl Friday
I can't guess what the missing scent is either.
Author's Response:
Not to worry...disclosure will come!
Kathie
Date: 30 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13 Taken
I would totally be checking out the traffic page if I had a story posted. You should see me when I'm tracking ups numbers online. ;-)
something about Bella helping Edward into his tux is just yummy.
Author's Response:
Yes, it's addictive! LOL
Ah...Edward in a Tux...you're right...YUMMY!
Kathie
Date: 30 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14 Epiphany
I think lm's mom is worse. Yikes.
Author's Response:
Yes, you would be RIGHT...ugh..
But an HEA will come...eventually!
Thanks for reading...
Kathie
Date: 30 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15 Gone...Just Gone
Wow. The action is heating up. Poor Edward.
Author's Response:
OUCH...yep, heating up!
Aren't you glad you can click NEXT right away?
Kathie
Date: 30 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16 Interrogation
Nice job. I liked jasper's way of getting info from Lauren. I like all the parallels with the book I'm seeing.
Author's Response:
Thank you! I try to make them when I can...
Jasper was much easier on L than Bella would have been...ouch for sure...
Thanks for the review MPB!
Kathie
Date: 30 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17 Trying to Focus
Ok that is horrible. Really.
Author's Response:
Sorry! Hurry, click NEXT...
Kathie
Date: 30 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18 Rescue
I'm glad Edward got to see Bella sparkle before he passed out. I hope they can get his hand fixed.
Author's Response:
I'd love to see a sparkly, golden eyed vampire...sigh...you'd join me, right?
Kathie
Date: 30 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19 Later
I can't wait for Edward to really wake up and hang out with Bella.
Author's Response:
Soon!
Kathie
Date: 30 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20 The First question
How does the coffee cup thing work?
I was surprised by Edwards question. I really liked Emmett and the hunt.
I liked Carlisle coming in to see Edward and laughing at the question. I read that part a couple of times to make sure I didn't miss anything. Nice.
Author's Response:
At the bottom of your review box, there's a RATING button...a 10 gives me five steaming coffee cups...I do love those...LOL
Ah yes, Edward's question...he got to the important stuff first...LOL
Carlisle saw Bella's face at that question...and he knows his daughter is shocked...but in a nice way...
Thanks for reading!
Kathie
Date: 30 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21 It was Time
I felt that it was mostly my fault that Edward had been taken and injured. If only I had realized sooner that there were two stalkers. - silly Bella. He would have been dead if humans would have been watching him.
I'm really excited about them being in co. I had forgotten about the painting. I think he'll notice with her standing in front of it.
Author's Response:
True...he would have been! They were not nice people...
I loved the painting part...glad you liked it too!
Kathie
Date: 31 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22 Answers
It's so fun that you get your kids involved in your writing.
I love this chapter. Edwards reaction is so cool. Just what I hoped for - without being mundane.
Author's Response:
LOL...my family enjoys torturing me with ideas sometimes...LOL
Glad you like Edward's reaction...
Thanks for reading!
Kathie
Date: 31 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22 Answers
It's so fun that you get your kids involved in your writing.
I love this chapter. Edwards reaction is so cool. Just what I hoped for - without being mundane.
Date: 31 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23 Not Keeping the Secret
Nice job with all the questions and answers.
Author's Response:
I did brainstorm with the kids on the questions too!
Thanks, MPB, for reading and reviewing...
Kathie
Date: 31 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23 Not Keeping the Secret
Nice job with all the questions and answers.
Date: 31 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24 Anticipation
My guess: the volturi. Or Alice.
I'm so glad Edward told Bella first. Nice job.
I'm sure there's more to say, but I started this chapter before I went to sleep last night.
Author's Response:
Good guesses!
Yes, he needed to say it first...
Kathie
Date: 31 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 26 Gifts
I like that bella could drop her shield so Edward could read her.
I liked Edward telling Tanya off.
Author's Response:
Tanya was pretty shocked at his reaction...LOL...I loved that...
Thanks, MPB!
Kathie
Date: 31 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 27: Chapter 27 Options
I hope Edward doesn't feel pressured into becoming a vampire. I do like how well he's taking all this new information.
Author's Response:
That's why they are telling him all the pros and cons...so that he can make an informed decision...
Thanks for reading, MPB!
Kathie
Date: 01 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 28: Chapter 28 Perks
Nice.
Once again, I was amazed that one so unbreakable could appear so finely knit together.
I love this this line
Author's Response:
Thank you!
Kathie
Date: 01 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 29: Chapter 29 Drawbacks
You did a very good job of laying out the cons for Edward. I liked his idea of a headline.
Author's Response:
Ah, full disclosure! LOL
Gah...the headline!
Kathie
Date: 01 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 30: Chapter 30 Roommates
I love the trip to the bank. I love how Emmett has taken to cooking. He should open a restaurant. 6-star. ;-)
Author's Response:
Alice enjoyed that trip too...
I'd love to have Emmett cook for me...as long as he used CINNAMON and not PAPRIKA in the French Toast!
Kathie
Date: 01 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 31: Chapter 31 Capture the Flag
I wondered if the nomads would be in on this.
I'm glad Edwards change will make things better.
Author's Response:
They really had to be...well, at some point!
Thanks for reading!
Kathie
Date: 02 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 32: Chapter 32 We're Going to the Chapel
It's so nice that vamp speed can get things done so quickly. I am excited for the wedding.
Esme's sex talk was pretty funny to me.
Author's Response:
LOL...given enough money, a wedding can be done in a day! Oh, and Alice's foresight to have that dress ready!
Glad you enjoyed Esme's sex talk...my girls rolled their eyes when I made them read it...LOL
Kathie
Date: 03 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 33: Chapter 33 We Do
Awesome wedding!
Author's Response:
Thanks, MPB...glad you enjoyed the wedding!
It's easy if you have MONEY and ALICE...LOL
Kathie
Date: 04 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 34: Chapter 34 Changes
I think the changing process was really well written. I like the way Edward woke up.
Author's Response:
Thank you! I had to really work at this chapter...my friend Kris finally gave me the kick I needed...LOL
Kathie
Date: 06 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 35: Chapter 35 New Life
I like that Edward stood up to the wolves.
Author's Response:
Glad you liked that, MPB!
I thought he had good reasons for his change...
Kathie
Date: 06 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 36: Chapter 36 Preparations
I thought Edward tossing Emmett was awesome. I also like that emmett wants to have Edward prank with him.
I'm glad the wolves seem to be getting along with the cullens.
Date: 06 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 36: Chapter 36 Preparations
I thought Edward tossing Emmett was awesome. I also like that emmett wants to have Edward prank with him.
I'm glad the wolves seem to be getting along with the cullens.
Author's Response:
LOL...I LOVED the tossing of the vampires!!! Much better than my family's ideas!
I think that Edward and Emmett will come up with some good pranks...everyone better watch out...
Thanks, so much, for reading MPB!
Kathie
Date: 06 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 37: Chapter 37 Nomads
Nice job with the nomad fight. It should have been like this in the books. Then SM could have used those pages for more yummy stuff.
Author's Response:
Whew...glad you liked the fight...some wanted it bigger...longer...harder...but it was an ARMY against THREE...I just couldn't see how they could WIN against the Cullens AND the wolves.
Thanks, again!
Kathie
Date: 06 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 38: Epilogue 1.0 Edward
Nice job. I like how Edward took his music with him in his new life.
Author's Response:
Thank you...he really needed his music...it is so much a part of him.
There will be more on that later...
Kathie
Date: 06 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 39: Epilogue 2.0 Alice
Great job with Alice. I'm glad she found a living relative.
Author's Response:
Ah, Alice...I really wanted her to know that she had been loved...
Thanks for reading...
Kathie
Date: 08 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 40: Epilogue 3.0 Rosalie
Cute. I like the name of the music studio.
Author's Response:
Thanks, Sweets! I had a lot of input on those...it was fun!
Kathie
Date: 08 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 41: Epilogue 4.0 Emmett's Christmas
Emmett is so sweet. The camera thing was so nice.
Author's Response:
I thought that was an appropriate gift from him. He really is one of my favorite characters...
Thanks for reading!
Kathie
Date: 08 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 41: Epilogue 4.0 Emmett's Christmas
Emmett is so sweet. The camera thing was so nice.
Date: 19 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 47: Epilogue 9.0 Edward
I really liked Edwards story. The part where they listened to the baby is precious.
Author's Response:
Thanks, MPB! Glad you liked it...I loved the baby part too...
Now that I have the next chapter of DRAGON STONES posted, I'm going to be working on Bella's Epilogue...hopefully it will be done done soon...
Kathie
After Edward left Bella never had much luck with life: her mother gets pregnant and dies in childbirth and her step father doesn't want anything to do with them. Charlie dies from a car crash in Seattle and Jacob imprinted and left her at the alter.
Even 10 years latter Edward Cullen still haunts her memory, and what could happen when he comes to her school, and how is it she doesn't appear a day over 23? Good genetics maybe?
Categories: Non-Canon Pairings, Twilight, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Jacob
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 12 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 28148 Read Count: 12872
Date: 30 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1: Book I
So this starts off like New Moon, but changes up after that?
Author's Response:
Yep, the first few chapters you'll see some things like the book, but after chapter 8 or so it doesnt really go by what happens in the book.