Reviews by avidreader69
Summary:

Edward writes a message and puts it in a bottle. While on vacation with his family, he drops it in the ocean. Hoping to find his soulmate the way his grandfather did. Will it end in love or in nothing? Sometimes you just have to believe in fate.

 

 


Categories: Twilight
Characters: None
Genre: Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Drive's Stories to read that are Completed and Not completed
Chapters: 12 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 27091 Read Count: 5149
[Report This] Published: 20 Sep 2011 Updated: 31 May 2012
Reviewer: avidreader69 Signed
Date: 20 Sep 2011 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

It's a romantic and hopeful beginning!



Author's Response:

Say Goodbye by Chloe Masen Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 151]
Summary: Past Featured Story

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Bella Swan loved, until that love was thrown away. She hoped, until it died inside of her. She cried, until the tears dried up, and in their place, darkness fell. She wasn't afraid of it, she embraced it, clung to it. It made her feel alive. Then she got even.

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 28 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 69505 Read Count: 27183
[Report This] Published: 23 Oct 2011 Updated: 03 Nov 2013
Reviewer: avidreader69 Signed
Date: 29 Oct 2011 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2: Cleaning House

Friends don't let friends live in delusions!  At least she is taking steps in taking back her identity and life!



Author's Response:

She's definitely going to take steps. As for 'delusions'... I'm not quite understanding your intent? I'd love it if you'd clarify?

Reviewer: avidreader69 Signed
Date: 30 Oct 2011 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1: Meeting Bella

Maybe I am off in this but I am thinking she steps beyond hopeful that he will return to delusional when she still purchases milk for him for an entire year!  There is something distinctly unhealthy about that.  It seems like she lost herself in him so totally that she hung onto some reminders of him just to keep who she identified herslef as( a person who took all of her cues from someone else).  Yes?  Am I judging too quickly?  Let me know!



Author's Response:

You're certainly on the right track with delusional. She's by no means in a healthy place, but my concern was that you felt perhaps that Alice was in some way partially to blame for this? If that was, indeed, your thinking, then I can only hope that a more in-depth look at their friendship might give you a more favorable opinion of her. Thank you for taking the time to read, review, and respond :) 

Summary:

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Bella has a problem...she's just a tad bit distracted at work. Who knew facial hair could drive you crazy? Quickie One-shot that I planned to continue, but it never got any reviews. If it gets some interest, I will continue it. :)


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Humor, One-Shot, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 490 Read Count: 1300
[Report This] Published: 25 Oct 2011 Updated: 25 Oct 2011
Reviewer: avidreader69 Signed
Date: 26 Oct 2011 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Ohhhhh, he really needs to be put in his place!  She needs to set him up at their next meeting to get him back!



Author's Response:

Awww he was teasing her in a flirty way. Wonder what would happen if he called her to his office after the meeting??