Reviews by Kougas Older Woman
Summary:

Bella hasn't spoken a word to anyone in over two years. Charlie is frustrated and lost at how to help her. When the Cullen's move to Forks, will they be able to help her open up? Will Charlie still be there if he really knew what she was hiding?

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Banner by, rpattz1990 

 

Warning: This story deals with dark subject matter.


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories, I Whitlock's read , Stories I've Already read, My Favorite Stories, luv2write finished reads, to read
Chapters: 50 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 85605 Read Count: 161941
[Report This] Published: 19 Feb 2010 Updated: 15 Apr 2010
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Date: 16 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19

I like Peter as a counsellor, he is really great!!



Author's Response:

Thank you:)

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Date: 17 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20

Love how Edwards reaction is to talk and act like a man would have ages ago



Author's Response:

Thank you:)

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Date: 17 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21

Everyone but them knows that they both love each other!



Author's Response:

I know!

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Date: 19 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22

In art therapy she will paint him flying through the air in his red underwear and cape! That's a picture he won't want Emmett and Jasper to see!



Author's Response:

lol, that would be funny

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Date: 20 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23

I wonder how long it will take them to admit their feelings



Author's Response:

I know.....

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Date: 21 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24

I wonder what Jasper needs to talk about.

I really love this story, please keep it coming!



Author's Response:

Thanks!

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Date: 22 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 25

Very sweet! And Edward's response is?



Author's Response:

Edward sats "I hate you! Get teh hell awaat from me." Oh, wait wrong story....

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Date: 22 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 26

That was such a feel good chapter, I read it twice!

I've been argueing with my 15 year old daughter today, really needed a smile, thanks!



Author's Response:

Bless you for argueing with your 15 yrs old.....Mine is only 7...

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Date: 24 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 28: Chapter 28

Who's there?!! I can't wait to find out!



Author's Response:

Thanks!

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Date: 25 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 29: Chapter 29

Charlie needs to not shut her out! She'll feel like he is rejecting her!



Author's Response:

I know! thankS:)

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Date: 25 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 30: Chapter 30

They are so sweet together!



Author's Response:

Thanks!

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Date: 27 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 31: Chapter 31

Edward will get her through this.



Author's Response:

Yes, he will:)

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Date: 27 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 32: Chapter 32

Bella is getting her life back! Giving a statement is going to be hard on her though.



Author's Response:

Yes, it will be:)

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Date: 28 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 33: Chapter 33

Go Bella!



Author's Response:

Thanks!

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Date: 30 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 34: Chapter 34

So, he got a total pf 26 years, I kind of wish the judge had said "with no chance of parole".



Author's Response:

Thank!

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Date: 01 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 36: Chapter 36

They are such a great family! I wanna be a Cullen!



Author's Response:

me too!

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Date: 02 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 37: Chapter 37

Renee needs to just leave!



Author's Response:

That she does!

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Date: 04 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 38: Chapter 38

I hope Renee gets the hint and goes away!



Author's Response:

Me too!

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Date: 04 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 39: Chapter 39

Are they going to baker act her?



Author's Response:

Thanks :)

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Date: 05 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 40: Chapter 40

I like what you would like to do to Renee! It takes a special kind of bitch to walk away from her own child!



Author's Response:

I know! Thanks for the review!

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Date: 06 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 41: Chapter 41

Charlie is such an awesome dad!! I wish he was mine!!



Author's Response:

Me too:) thanks!

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Date: 07 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 42: Chapter 42

She has the worlds best family!!



Author's Response:

Yes, she does:)

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Date: 09 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 43: Chapter 43

Charlie is so happy that she is alive and talking that he goesn't care about the language, I wish he was my dad! He is awesome!



Author's Response:

I think that when yoe've been through as much as Bella has been, you get the right to cuss!

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Date: 09 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 44: Chapter 44

It's so great that they are all going to stay together!



Author's Response:

thanks!

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Date: 12 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 47: Chapter 47

Beautiful!



Author's Response: Thank you:)

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Date: 14 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 49: Chapter 49

He's so perfect for her!



Author's Response:

Thanks:)

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Date: 15 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 50: Chapter 50

Perfect ending!!



Author's Response:

Thanks:)

Victim by tima Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 102]
Summary: Past Featured Story

victim

 

She once lived the life of luxury with her husband, James, but then he became abusive. With the help of an unlikely friend, she escapes James' abuse, becomes Bella Swan, and starts fresh in a new town. She meets a handsome young man named Edward who will help her heal, but will she ever fully get over the abuse she suffered? 

When James gets wind that his wife isn't dead, what lengths will he go to take back what he feels is his?

Rated for future sexy times, some scenes of violence, abuse, and cursing.

(loosely based on Sleeping with the Enemy, but with large differences, and a Twilight twist)

 

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 31 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 166331 Read Count: 17131
[Report This] Published: 19 Feb 2010 Updated: 05 Nov 2011
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Date: 01 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 16: Goodbyes

I would have never thought about the memory card being a possible threat.

Can't wait for their trip!



Author's Response:

It would definitely be, if those pictures fell into the wrong hands...

I also can't wait for their trip! And I'm nearly done writing it! :)

Thanks for reading and reviewing!

~Fatima

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Date: 14 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 17: A Weekend to Remember

I'm so happy for Bella & Edward!



Author's Response:

meeeee too!! :) :) Trust me, it was such a relief to write this chapter!!!! :)

Thanks for reading and reviewing!

~Fatima

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Date: 17 May 2010 Title: Chapter 18: Uh-Oh

I hope she is pregnant!!!!

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Date: 09 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 19: Inevitabilities

OMG!!! Please stop James!!!!



Author's Response:

rest assured; he will be stopped, but it might take some time...
Thanks for reading and reviewing! It means a lot!
~Fatima

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Date: 07 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 20: Christmas with the Cullens

Bella and Edward are so happy now, it kind of scares me that James is looking for her!

I need more!!

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Date: 14 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 24: Safe Distance

I hope they can stop James!!!

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Date: 13 Jun 2011 Title: Chapter 30: Protecting Bella

It makes me smile when you update, please do so as often as you can!

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Date: 21 Feb 2015 Title: Chapter 31: A Newfound Peace

Very sweet! Would love epilogue

Summary: Past Featured Story

whacw

What happens at Charlie's wedding is hot and unforgettable for Bella Swan. Charlie's best man has her moaning and melting everywhere from her father's living room to the coat closet at the rehearsal dinner. But great no-strings-attached sex suddenly becomes complicated. And what will happen when Bella meets someone else who just happens to be the best man's son?

NC-17 All Human/OOC

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Sorry, but translantions on this fic are NO longer allowed.

 


Categories: Twilight, Non-Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Carlisle
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 19 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 112113 Read Count: 43565
[Report This] Published: 21 Feb 2010 Updated: 21 Apr 2010
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Date: 03 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14: Secrets Exposed

OOOOH!!! How will they explain this!!! How did he find out?!

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Date: 18 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15: Broken Promises

I hope Edward tells him what he had been doing!

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Date: 05 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16: Words of Wisdom

I'd like to see Edward's POV.

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Date: 13 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17: The Long Road To Healing

Carlisle better do something major to get Bella back!

Kill Kate!

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Date: 21 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18: Forever

I'm so glad they are re-united!!

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Date: 22 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 19: Epilogue: 1095 Days Later

Someone for everyone and a baby to boot, perfect!

PEOPLE LIKE US by justginger Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 3989]
Summary: Past Featured Story

Edward Cullan is the hottest movie star. Bella Swan is an art grad, in Italy for the summer. Their worlds collide in the most unlikely way.  He unlocks what she has hidden for so long - a dark side...


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Erotica, Family, Fantasy, Friendship, Historical, Horror, Humor, Hurt/Comfort,, Mystery, One-Shot, Parody/Crackfic, Poetry, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Domward's Dungeon, My To Read List, Ageise02's Read Stories, Bdsm stories only, Finished, Twilight - Read, Amberina's Completed Favs List, Kuu Faves, Stories Read by CNYBella, Stories I've Already read, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, My Favorite Stories, J's Read and Loved Stories, Stories I've read, Fav BDSM Fics, My favs past present and future , Read
Chapters: 81 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 1339257 Read Count: 995786
[Report This] Published: 24 Feb 2010 Updated: 04 Dec 2011
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Date: 31 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 34: Chapter 34

Poor Bella! I'm sure that they where tears of joy and not that Esme was mad.

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Date: 12 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13

I love the matching bracelettes, he is such a romantic!

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Date: 14 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14

I hope Bella kicks her ass!

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Date: 21 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15

Can't wait for everyone's reaction to her place and truck!

Also, where is Angela?



Author's Response:

As Edward would say "Patience, my love..." all in good time! 

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Date: 24 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16

They had a great reunion!

I can't wait for everyone's reaction to where she lives!

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Date: 29 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17

Can't wait to see what his idea is!!

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Date: 04 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18

Poor Edward!

He really does need totalk to her!

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Date: 12 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19

OMG!!  He really messed up! I hope she is OK!!

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Date: 15 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20

She is a riot!



Author's Response:

she is wonderful to write - I giggle like a complete loon sometimes as I am writing

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Date: 26 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21

I love Emmett!!!



Author's Response:

me too!! I have posted an Emm and Rose outtake - hope you enjoy it!

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Date: 04 May 2010 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22

It's your birthday and you gave me a present by updating! That is so awesome!! Thank you and Happy birthday! :D

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Date: 10 May 2010 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23

She wanted him in dom mode! She's going to get it!



Author's Response:

that's what I told her!! thanks for the review

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Date: 14 May 2010 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24

Edward is going to want to kill James when he finds out about it!

Can't wait for more!!

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Date: 22 May 2010 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 25

I hope she tells him about James!!!



Author's Response:

me too! If she doesn't... there's bound to be trouble!

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Date: 28 May 2010 Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 26

Don't leave Bella!!! Do what he told you to do!!!!



Author's Response:

THANK YOU - I told her, but she only listens with half an ear (hmm sounds familier..)

xoxo

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Date: 05 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 27: Chapter 27

I really want that lesson!!!! Please!!!



Author's Response:

OMG - stand in line!! thanks for the review KOW!

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Date: 19 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 29: Chapter 29

Aro won't give him a hard time about Bella, will he?

Is Jake going to be a threat?



Author's Response:

no  -  Aro is a good guy here - quite the E & B champion - Jacob on the other hand... (have you ever heard the saying about a leopard changing his spots? hmmm)

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Date: 27 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 30: Chapter 30

I've got to google a sqweeler!!!

I loved it!



Author's Response:

I KNOW!! it's going on my christmas list!!

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Date: 03 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 31: Chapter 31

This is not good! I hope Anderson is keeping a real close eye on James! Especially now that he has joined forces with Jacob!

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Date: 10 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 32: Chapter 32

I hope they take care of James and Jacob!



Author's Response:

a little faith please... :)

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Date: 17 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 33: Chapter 33

Have Anderson or any of the Cullens found out that Jacob is around yet?



Author's Response: no, not yet - all in good time! thanks so much for the review!!

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Date: 17 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 64: Chapter 64

Thanks for the update!! Loved it and will be waiting for more!



Author's Response:

thank you so much for the review - more is on it's way!

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Date: 01 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 35: Chapter 35

I like the idea of Charlie going to the Cullen's place, it is safer for Bella.



Author's Response:

thank you for the review!

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Date: 08 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 36: Chapter 36

Really can't blame her for getting jealous and upset about the way some of the women acted and talked with her right there.



Author's Response:

thanks for reviewing again kow xoxo

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Date: 13 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 37: Chapter 37

They really are awesome together!

I can't wait for Charlie to meet the family!



Author's Response:

me too!! I think they will be good for him, or send him running for the hills! thank you so much for your review

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Date: 22 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 38: Chapter 38

Cause Jacob and James are out there!

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Date: 29 Aug 2010 Title: PEOPLE LIKE US

OMG! I'm on the edge of my seat waiting to see what is going to happen!!!!



Author's Response:

thank you so much :)

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Date: 03 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 40: Chapter 40

I'm so glad they are all OK! Bella was bad ass awesome!

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Date: 12 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 41: Chapter 41

I loved Emmett's reaction! I picture him buying baby video games!

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Date: 18 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 42: Chapter 42

Can't wait to see how Charlie gets along with everyone!

Love the OMP!!



Author's Response:

thank you so much

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Date: 25 Sep 2010 Title: PEOPLE LIKE US

I love Charlie! But did anyone tell him to watch what he says around the interviewer that will be invading their Christmas?



Author's Response:

oh shit - I better make some calls!!! this should be good.

 

thanks for the review xoxo

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Date: 19 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 46: Chapter 46

I so want to be Bella!

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Date: 24 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 47: Chapter 47

I think he over reacted a bit!



Author's Response:

thanks for your review

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Date: 25 Sep 2011 Title: Chapter 76: Chapter 76

I am so hooked and needing more of this story! Don't leave me hanging too long, update as soon as possible please!



Author's Response:

Aww now KOW, you know that I won't keep you hanging too long - 2 weeks I promise!!

:)

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Date: 06 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 49: Chapter 49

I want a squealer!



Author's Response:

You and me both Honey!!!

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Date: 13 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 50: Chapter 50

OMG! How can Billy do that to her?!!!



Author's Response:

that's what I said!! :) sending you a thank you gift for your great reviews!PEOPLE LIKE US - OUTTAKE # 6

OUTTAKE - CONVERSATION BETWEEN JASPER AND ALICE

"Guys, I've got to go - Jazz please give this some serious thought and Alice, you need to stop being so fucking stubborn. I love you, Squirt!"

Edward almost crushed her in a hug. He slapped Jasper on the shoulder as he ran out the door.

 

"So... you talk about the size of my schlong?"  Jasper said.

Alice looked up at him with mounting excitement, "Well, it's quite impressive..." she said huskily.

Jasper smiled at her.  "Can we talk? I mean really talk; I've missed you Tink..."

Alice smiled through her tears. "I've missed you too Jazzy...."

Jasper looked uncomfortable for a moment and it bothered Alice.  She was used to Jasper Whitlock being decisive and in control.  Seeing him looking ill at ease was new.  There had been many disagreements in the Whitlock/Cullen home since Alice had moved in with Jasper two year before.

She had never lived alone, besides when she had gone to college and even then, she had attended Berkley, so that she was close to her family and Jasper.

Although over the years, they had learned to deal with Jasper's travelling for work and Alice's part time job as Edward's PA which had taken her away from time to time, through everything, including Alice's training as a submissive, their lines of communication had always been open and honest.

Alice had grown up in a house hold that was opinionated and not scared of voicing their points of view.  Esme and Carlisle had encouraged their children to have their own opinions and to share them.  They had also taught them to stick to their guns.

This was one of the many things that had attracted Jasper to Alice in the first place.  Although she was much younger than him when they met; he had always found Alice to be interesting to talk to and inevitably to argue with.  She was a spirited and enthusiastic young woman, with a warmth and energy that seemed to draw him in from the first moment.

Jasper on the other hand had grown up in a large family with two parents that had stuck together over the years because there was no other alternative for either one of them.  They were hardened by life, worn down by reality and for a reason that Jasper had never been able to fathom; they had decided to have three children of which Jasper was the youngest.  Eventually Jasper's father had strayed and a few years later, when Jasper was about twelve, he had suddenly come back to the trailer park where they lived with three small children in tow!

He had told Jasper's mother that they were his dead sister's kids, but after awhile he had confessed that they were his.  Jasper felt sorry for the three youngest children and when he had begun to make money from modeling and small acting jobs, he had made a decision to see that they would have an opportunity to further their education, go to college and make a proper life for themselves.  Although none of the children were really close or affectionate with each other, Jasper had stuck to his word and the three younger children had gone on to college.

Jasper couldn't believe that Ricky, the youngest of his stepsiblings had taken advantage of Jasper's generosity the way that he had!  Jasper had never asked for any compensation or payment for the money that he had given to his siblings or parents over the years; the only stipulation he had for continuing to support his mother and father was that the house that he had purchased for them remain in his mother's name.  Jasper was not close to his father and the distance had only grown when the man had abandoned his young family, leaving his wife to work three jobs to feed and clothe their three children.

Jasper had always thought that he would never find anyone to settle down with.  He didn't ever want the life that his parents had; tired, sad, disillusioned and settling for something because there was no time or money for dreams of something or someone else.  Someone better.

So the first step that Jasper had taken at the age of sixteen was to have himself emancipated.  He had tried to live in Los Angeles and he had hated every moment of it but as he begun earning good money, he decided to take classes at the local community college.  The first one was on finances.  Jasper wanted to know how to look after his money and how to make it grow.

He trusted few people and although people liked his quiet charm and whit; Jasper had a way of standing to one side and observing people that he found made him a good judge of character.  Jasper had come to rely on that instinct over the years.

It was an instinct that he could no longer rely on.  He had never thought for a million years that his younger brother would ever turn out to be the low life, perverted bastard that he was!  Every time Jasper thought of what Ricky had done, how Richard had betrayed his own brother by lusting, perving, salivating over his Alice!  His Alice!  Jasper wanted to kill Rick with a cold fury that he had never felt before.

How he had touched her, fucking forced himself on her when Jasper had been careless enough to leave her alone with him... FUCK!

Alice gasped as Jasper jumped to his feet.  His face was a cold, furious mask.

"Jasper please!  If you want to talk to me, then you need to calm the fuck down!  I can't reach you when you are like this!  If you are angry with me then just say so and let's get it out there!  If you think that I did anything to encourage your brother..." Alice cringed away as Jasper was suddenly in front of her with his hand clasped over her lips.

"Never - NEVER, EVER call that fucking piece of low down shit my brother!  I will kill him if I ever see him anywhere near you again!"  Jasper spat out as he held her.

Alice whimpered and she closed her eyes.  "Jazzy, you are scaring me..." 

This wild man wasn't her Jasper...

Alice felt the tears running down her cheeks and over Jasper's fingers.

Suddenly she was free.

Alice pushed a fist into her mouth to keep the sobs as quiet as she could.  Her whole body was trembling.

"Alice... sweet Jesus, I'm sorry... I didn't mean to scare you... Ali..."  Jasper choked out as he sat crouched clear across the room from where Alice sat.

Alice could see the anguish clearly on Jasper's face and she felt even worse than she had in the past few days.

This was all her fault!

"Come to me..."  Alice said, but Jasper just shook his head.

Alice slid off the sofa onto her knees and she crawled slowly across to where Jasper had slumped down against the wall.

Jasper could feel the intensity of Alice's gaze as he watched her moving slowly towards him.

"Ali..." he said in a half pleading, half warning.

"No.  You've spoken and now it is my turn..." Alice said when she was inches away from his face.

Her eyes searched his intensely.  The remorse and sorrow that Alice saw gave her the courage to move closer until her lips met his.

Jasper's head jerked backwards, but with nowhere to go, he hit the wall.

He cursed and rubbed his head.

Alice grinned at him, "Maybe that'll knock some sense into your thick skull!"  She quipped as she arranged herself between his outstretched legs; her thighs straddled his open ones so that he could feel her heated core through her jeans.

Jasper shut his eyes tightly and moaned as he tried to adjust himself.  Alice giggled and winked at him.

"We can get to that later, but first let's please resolve this ‘thing' once and for all!"  She said with determination.

"Gladly, Darlin'."

"Okay, I'm going first.  I need to tell you why I didn't tell you about... what was happening in the first place, but you cannot freak out on me!  Do you promise?"

Jasper could see how anxious Alice was and once again he was filled with remorse at his earlier behavior.

"I promise."

Alice took a deep breath, "I know that this might sound crazy to you, but when it happened the first time; I tried to just shrug it off.  I thought that perhaps I had imagined it or misread his signals in some way.  The next time it happened, your... well your father was in the room.  He, Rick grabbed my ass as I walked passed him.  I turned around as saw them looking at each other and Rick just winked at me and they burst out laughing... Jasper... you promised..." Alice broke off as she watched Jasper's eyes become dark and wild again.

Jasper felt as if he was ready to explode!  That no good, low fucking, good for nothing... BASTARD!  I. will. Kill. Him.

Jasper felt Alice's tiny hand stroking his cheek and he refocused on her anxious face.

He kissed her quickly, "I'm okay, Ali, I promise.  I won't freak out on you again."

Alice nodded slowly, "He apologized to me later - your father, I mean.  The next day he told me that he had too much to drink and that he had made Rick promise never to touch me again.  He begged me not to tell you and then he said that... some girls just have an ‘air' about them..."

SON OF A BITCH!

Jasper opened his mouth to speak but Alice put her fingers over his lips.

She continued. "I know better than that, Jazz!  I know better!  I was raised to know better than that!  With all their bullshitting and nonsense, my brothers have never, ever treated any woman including me with anything than the utmost respect.  You have never treated me like a whore, but at that moment, I felt dirty.  And I felt like a two bit whore, who didn't deserve anything better.  Rick kept touching me, stupid little insignificant ‘slip-ups'.  Every time he was around me, sometimes you were in the next room or you had your back to us... He would graze my breasts by pushing past me in a doorway, or he would rub himself against me if he were standing behind us..." Alice shuddered in revulsion and Jasper couldn't take it any longer.

His arms wrapped Alice in a vice like grip. "Never, never, never..." He said over and over again against her neck as he pulled her closer.

"Jazz..."

"No - it's my turn now... never, ever again, Mary Alice Cullen.  Promise me that you will never let anyone ever make you feel like that again.  Especially not me!  God, Ali, I love you so much!  Just the thought of another man touching you... Fuck!  It's too much to even contemplate!  Do you know how I felt when I found out that Rick was... forcing himself on you?  When we forced Bella to tell us and we did force her - she didn't have a choice really, I wanted to fucking kill someone there and then!  As you know, I sat up all night just thinking about what could have happened to you!  And about how I was going to take care of you this time!  I couldn't help you last time, Darlin'.  I wasn't able to stop that animal putting his hands on you... but I was going to make sure that Rick never ever touched you again."

Alice brushed the tears of Jaspers cheeks.

"I love you so fucking much, Mary Alice Cullen-Whitlock.  You own me mind, body and soul.  If I lost you, my life would be so empty... please forgive me for hurting you and dragging this shit out.  Please, please don't ever put me through this again, Tink, my heart can't stand it."  Jasper whispered as they held each other's faces and gazed with longing into each other's eyes.

"I love you, Cowboy; you are my everything... my lover, my best friend, my Dom, my love.  I am sorry too.  No more secrets."

Their kiss was a relief.  For the first time in almost two weeks, their lips were soft and forgiving.  Lips touched, brushed, nibbled.  Tongues dueled and teased.  Eventually they couldn't take it any longer and Jasper held Alice to him as he tipped her onto the floor and loomed over her, his knees pushing her thighs apart.

Alice panted into his mouth.  "Can I get my clothes back?"

Jasper smiled against her lips, "yeah, especially the underwear..."

Alice giggled, "can I get my car back?"

Jasper shook his head, "sorry, you will be driven around for a while..."

Alice groaned, "but I can see my Bestie?"

Jasper rocked back on his knees as he looked at the bright twinkle in Alice's eyes. "Mary Alice..." He said with narrowed eyes.

Fuck! He is so sexy when he does that... now I need to change my panties! Damn Cowboy!

"Hmmm... take me upstairs Jazz... I've missed you..." Alice uttered the magic words.

J&A****~~~~PLU~~~~****J&A

An hour later, Alice lay sprawled across Jasper's bare chest.  Her eyes were closed but she was humming as Jasper played with her hair.

"Alice?"

"Yeah?"

"Supervised visits only..."  Jasper kissed her forehead.

"I know - but that's only for now..." Alice smiled to herself.

She wondered what Kate, Bella and Rosalie were doing on Saturday after the therapy session?  She had heard that Gap was having a sale....

Everything was right with the world after all.

J&A****~~~~PLU~~~~****J&A

I hope that you liked it!

Love

Michele

Reviewer: Kougas Older Woman Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 20 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 51: Chapter 51

I kind of wanted Edward to say something to Renee



Author's Response:

hey KOW - you know, I thought about it, but Bella had to do that on her own.  she has to realise that she is so much stronger than she thinks she is.  thanks for the review

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Date: 08 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 53: Chapter 53

Can't wait for Bella's weekend!



Author's Response:

thanks for the review and it's not too long now.

Reviewer: Kougas Older Woman Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 12 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 54: Chapter 54

I really want to know about Esme and Carlisle!!! I would also like a peek at Rily's thoughts on his reaction to Esme.

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Date: 03 Jul 2011 Title: Chapter 70: Chapter 70

Lovin this story and bouncing in my seat anxiously waiting for more!

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Date: 18 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 55: Chapter 55

Can't wait for the Carlisle/Esme out take!

More! More!!!



Author's Response:

it's coming up next week before Christmas, and I know that you will love it.

xoxo

Reviewer: Kougas Older Woman Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 12 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 56: Chapter 56

More please! I love this story!

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Date: 15 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 57: Chapter 57

Awesome chapter! Can't wait for more!!



Author's Response:

thanks so much for the review

Reviewer: Kougas Older Woman Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 15 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 73: Chapter 73

I can be patient. At least I can try to be... OK, you know me better than that. I'm not patient at all!!! So give me more!

Reviewer: Kougas Older Woman Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 30 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 58: Chapter 58

Great chapter! Making out like teenagers and fucking like bunnies sounds fun! Can't wait for more!



Author's Response:

thank you so much for your comments and your review xoxo

Reviewer: Kougas Older Woman Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 28 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 60: Chapter 60

Great chapter! Can't wait for the next one!



Author's Response:

thank you so much for your review

Reviewer: Kougas Older Woman Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 13 Feb 2011 Title: PEOPLE LIKE US

Great story! Looking forward to more!

Reviewer: Kougas Older Woman Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 10 May 2011 Title: Chapter 66: Chapter 66

Keep it coming!! I can never get enough!



Author's Response:

will do! thanks for the review xoxo



Author's Response:

will do! thanks for the review xoxo

Reviewer: Kougas Older Woman Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 12 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 61: Chapter 61

I have an addiction! Please feed it by updating soon!

Reviewer: Kougas Older Woman Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 27 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 62: Chapter 62

Really glad you updated!! Can't wait for more!!



Author's Response:

Thank you sweetheart - more to come xoxo

Reviewer: Kougas Older Woman Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 10 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 63: Chapter 63

Loving this story! Can I have more? Please?!



Author's Response:

thank you, and yes Ma'am, coming up soon xoxo

Reviewer: Kougas Older Woman Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 24 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 65: Chapter 65

It takes me to my happy place to read such great stuff! Thanks for the lift!



Author's Response:

thank you so much for your review

Reviewer: Kougas Older Woman Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 21 May 2011 Title: Chapter 67: Chapter 67

Your story is an addiction to me, I need another fix!!

 



Author's Response:

soon, I promise xoxo

Reviewer: Kougas Older Woman Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 17 Jun 2011 Title: PEOPLE LIKE US

This story is totally awesome! I can't wait for more!!



Author's Response:

Hi sweetheart - I hope that you read the complete version - thanks again for your review - fun times ahead

Reviewer: Kougas Older Woman Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 18 Jun 2011 Title: Chapter 69: Chapter 69

This story is totally awesome! Poor Esme and Carlisle!! I can't wait for more!!



Author's Response:

thank you so much - won't be long!

Reviewer: Kougas Older Woman Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 28 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 74: Chapter 74

I don't want, I NEED more of your story!! Please update again soon!

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Date: 11 Sep 2011 Title: Chapter 75: Chapter 75

I know I'm never satisfied and always begging for more, but I can't help it!! More! More! Please...



Author's Response:

Ah, KOW, you beg so sweetly, who can refuse you? Out take coming up this weekend - keep a look out in your mail box! xoxo

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Date: 10 Oct 2011 Title: Chapter 77: Chapter 77

Some addicts need alcohol or drugs, I just need words. Please keep them coming!!



Author's Response:

You are food for my soul xoxo

Reviewer: Kougas Older Woman Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 22 Oct 2011 Title: Chapter 78: Chapter 78

If there was a fan fiction anonymous, my kids would probably force me to join but I would always miss the meetings if you had updated because I can't not read what you write! Everything else can wait!



Author's Response:

Oh my word KOW, you make me laugh!!