Reviews by Marianne Northman Cullen
PEOPLE LIKE US by justginger Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 3989]
Summary: Past Featured Story

Edward Cullan is the hottest movie star. Bella Swan is an art grad, in Italy for the summer. Their worlds collide in the most unlikely way.  He unlocks what she has hidden for so long - a dark side...


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Erotica, Family, Fantasy, Friendship, Historical, Horror, Humor, Hurt/Comfort,, Mystery, One-Shot, Parody/Crackfic, Poetry, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Domward's Dungeon, My To Read List, Ageise02's Read Stories, Bdsm stories only, Finished, Twilight - Read, Amberina's Completed Favs List, Kuu Faves, Stories Read by CNYBella, Stories I've Already read, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, My Favorite Stories, J's Read and Loved Stories, Stories I've read, Fav BDSM Fics, My favs past present and future , Read
Chapters: 81 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 1339257 Read Count: 995744
[Report This] Published: 24 Feb 2010 Updated: 04 Dec 2011
Reviewer: Marianne Northman Cullen Signed
Date: 03 May 2010 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22

I think Edward is gonna throw a shit fit when he hears about this!! It's a good opportunity to tell her to move in with him though!! She can't say no now!!!!!!

Loved it!!!

xoxo

Marianne

Reviewer: Marianne Northman Cullen Signed
Date: 11 May 2010 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23

She is so screwed!!! The Voice is back!! This is gonna be soooo effing good!

xoxo

Marianne

Reviewer: Marianne Northman Cullen Signed
Date: 14 May 2010 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24

I have no prob about the chapter not ending... ;)

Loved it as it is!!

xoxo

Marianne



Author's Response:

thank you - busy with next chapter

Reviewer: Marianne Northman Cullen Signed
Date: 22 May 2010 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 25

I loved it!!!

***raises her hand jumping up and down**** I want the outtake I! I! ma'am!

i also want the fight!!

xoxo

Marianne



Author's Response:

Thank you - Okay, I love the enthusiasm - I'll get right on that then!

Diamond Man by SatansDarkAngel Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 302]
Summary: Past Featured Story

 

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Bella swan is the most popular of singers in Chicago. Edward is the drinking/ smoker/ handsome mob boss who walks into Bella’s fathers club to collect a debt. While Aro gets the money Edward and his associates wait and listen to the music, that’s when Edward first lay eyes on Bella Swan and was determined to make her his.

 

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Finished, Ageise02 To Read 2, Amberina's Completed Favs List, Lilyellacullens want to read list!
Chapters: 24 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 54794 Read Count: 64202
[Report This] Published: 11 Mar 2010 Updated: 29 Aug 2011
Reviewer: Marianne Northman Cullen Signed
Date: 21 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Bloody hell... I am from Greece ok? WHen I red this the first time all I wanted to do was stop and go fetch the bloody dictionary.... But then If I stoped I thought that I would miss what happened next so I didn't even bat an eyelash...

Anyway... I loved it!!

xoxo

Marianne

Reviewer: Marianne Northman Cullen Signed
Date: 21 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

I like it even more!! Is charlie sick??

xx

M

Reviewer: Marianne Northman Cullen Signed
Date: 21 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

Loved it!!

xx

Marianne

Reviewer: Marianne Northman Cullen Signed
Date: 21 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

I am a bit confused here ***scratches her head***

Emmett said in chapie one (or two) that he wants Royce's king girl... And now he is mairried to her?? WTF?

Anyway... I like it!!

xx

Marianne

Reviewer: Marianne Northman Cullen Signed
Date: 26 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

Good one!! I didn't mind the wait! The songs from CA were hot!! I can just imagine it... Poor Edward! or should I say lucky?! ***winks***

Reviewer: Marianne Northman Cullen Signed
Date: 02 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

WOW!! I didn't see that comming!! Great!

xx

MArianne

Reviewer: Marianne Northman Cullen Signed
Date: 12 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

WHERE THE FUCK IS HE???? Hell!

Loved it even though it's ansty!

xx

M

Reviewer: Marianne Northman Cullen Signed
Date: 17 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

Lollygagger indeed!! What's the name of the song??

Loved it!

xx

marianne



Author's Response:

Its candyman by Christina Agulara

 

Thanks for the review :)

Reviewer: Marianne Northman Cullen Signed
Date: 24 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11

Loved it!! The new songs are great and sway is actually one of my favs!!

xx

Marianne

 

Reviewer: Marianne Northman Cullen Signed
Date: 07 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12

Loved the paper!!

That bitch is behind the dick Marazano?? You're joking!!! Can I have her and torture the hellouta her??? It won't be painfull!! For me!!! ****dark chuckle****

xx

Marianne

Reviewer: Marianne Northman Cullen Signed
Date: 21 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13

Tha shithead Marazano!! I am soo going to gut him like a bloody fish!!! What a fucking coward!

Bella's Dad I wonder who he is.... Carlisle Cullen? Aro Volturi? Caius  (that would be intresting!!)? Oh the possibilities!!!

Can't wait to find out!!

xx

marianne

PS Good luck with job hunting hun!

Reviewer: Marianne Northman Cullen Signed
Date: 03 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14

For fucks sake I am sooo close to torturing Renee until she screams bloody murder!!!

Urg!

Anyway I loved it as usual!

I can't wait to see the reaction Edward will have an dI see that there will be new names here won't they? That Vitorio and his bro!

Happy new Year

take care

Marianne

Reviewer: Marianne Northman Cullen Signed
Date: 08 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15

Holly shit!!! Rose is pregnant and NOT FROM EMMET!!! I didn't see that coming!!! WOW!!!
Poor Rose...

Loved the other...!

xoxo

marianne

Reviewer: Marianne Northman Cullen Signed
Date: 16 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16

LOVED IT! It was short (yeah... I did notice! ***winks***) but's ok!!

The ring it's perfect!!!

xoxo

marianne

PS I know it's so totally irrelevant but rose's phrase reminded me of this song... It's one of my favs!! http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=uxUATkpMQ8A

Reviewer: Marianne Northman Cullen Signed
Date: 28 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17

Loved it! I cn't start to tell you how much!!

I think Emmet is in trouble!!! ***note the sarcasm****

lol

xoxo

marianne

Reviewer: Marianne Northman Cullen Signed
Date: 23 Jun 2011 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19

I am getting so exciting because I wanna learn every fucking detail!

I am so sorry for Elizabeth!

is Seth gay? If not I would like seeing him with Rose... Emmet is such an asshole right now...

:)

xx

Marianne

Reviewer: Marianne Northman Cullen Signed
Date: 21 Jul 2011 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21

MArazano is in deep shit indeed!!! I wonder how the Volturi are connected with bella...

Reviewer: Marianne Northman Cullen Signed
Date: 25 Jul 2011 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22

They are pissed that's for sure... Too bad there are no sharks in Italy... Maybe throw him in the aquariium in crete?? It's convinient... With their jet it's only 3 hours from Rome (through Athens of course...)

I can imagine other deaths too and more bloody but let's see what you'll come up with! I can't wait!

On second thought. She will be able to get pregnant wont she?

Loved it!
xx

Marianne

Summary:

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Bella Swan gets a job as a personal assistant to the "The Sexiest Man Alive" Edward Masen while attending USC.  Sparks fly between her much older boss and her, but they soon find that temptation is too hard to fight.

 

It's a coming of age story with Bella, who learns to embrace herself as well as the life she's found herself thrown into, and a little Britward on the side.

 

*WARNING:  Rated NC-17 for language, lemons, and adult sit.*


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's not read yet, My All-Time Favorites, I Whitlock's read , Amberina's Completed Favs List, G8or Favor8s Read, Kuu Faves, My Favorite Stories, Brooklyn - to read, My favs past present and future , TBR
Chapters: 46 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 298638 Read Count: 143766
[Report This] Published: 15 Mar 2010 Updated: 15 Dec 2010
Reviewer: Marianne Northman Cullen Signed
Date: 22 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

Awesome story!! Can I make the outfits??? Please? ***Alice Cullen pout***



Author's Response:

Outfits?  I've never even thought about that.  I guess...  How does something like this work? LOL

Reviewer: Marianne Northman Cullen Signed
Date: 23 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I am so sorry for the delay... It's been a hectic week!

So this is actually quite simple! I help with the visual part of the story. For example in chapter 1 you described what Bella wore to go to the interview. I create an outfit with sth close or the exact items you describe to help the readers better imagine her!

I am working with other writes and we have tried 2 ways. My closest friends (I mean those who trust me even though I can be a cold heartless bitch some times(!) ***laughs at herself***) let me create sth from scratch just with a hint like "it's sth casual..." or "I want red in it" etc. Others prefer to describe me sth they imagined and then I try to find sth close to it!!

To help you understand here is what I thought it could look like like Bella's interview outfit...

www.polyvore.com/bella_interview/set?id=17133020

Of course if you decide to accept my offer I would like to say that this is a draft and when it's finished it will look like the others in my profile (not in the clothes but you get my meaning ;) )

Also I'd really like to say that I can change ANYTHING you don't like!

xoxo

Marianne

 



Author's Response:

That's actually exactly what I pictured her wearing when I wrote it. I like it.  :)

Let me know where to direct everyone, and I'll stick a link in there on my A/N each chapter.

Reviewer: Marianne Northman Cullen Signed
Date: 24 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I am really glad you liked it!!I will touch it up and give you the link! I'll also work sth out for the rest!! I'll contact you before the weekend! Do you want sth for the next chapter so that I rush it to you first??

Thanks
xx

Marianne



Author's Response:

Uhhh....

That went right over my head.  Just PM me and we'll get it all figured out, LOL.

Reviewer: Marianne Northman Cullen Signed
Date: 28 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

Hilarious!! I loved it!!I can't wait for chap 7!

xoxo

Marianne

Reviewer: Marianne Northman Cullen Signed
Date: 29 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

Great chapter!! I liked it very much!! Do you want me to do sth??

xoxo

Marianne

Reviewer: Marianne Northman Cullen Signed
Date: 06 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

Amazing chapter!!! I loved it!! And sorry for the delay again!!!

I can't wait for Ch 9!!! Do u want me to put some underwear in the set??

Reviewer: Marianne Northman Cullen Signed
Date: 07 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

Awesome!! I loved the audi!! I'll send you the outfits for cp 10 later on!!!

xoxo

Marianne

Reviewer: Marianne Northman Cullen Signed
Date: 21 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

Loved it!! What to do for the next chapter??



Author's Response:

Thanks! I'll get it out to you later... after a major caffeine fix ;)

Reviewer: Marianne Northman Cullen Signed
Date: 21 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Please tell me i didn't wake you up!! here it's 5:30 pm and I am not used to the time difference which is WOW!!

xoxo

 



Author's Response:

LMAO... No worries.  I  turn my damn phone off so I DON'T get woke up in the middle of the night by a random alert notification or something :)  I just was sleepy this morning because my son woke me up at the butt crack of dawn this morning.  For no good reason... *sigh*

Reviewer: Marianne Northman Cullen Signed
Date: 15 May 2010 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12

Loved it so much!! Sorry about your pc... I know how it is!

xoxo

marianne

Summary: Past Featured Story

 

Bella Cullen and her family aren't the only one's in Forks with a secret.
Will Bella be able to withstand the tempting blood of newcomer Edward Masen, while unravelling the mystery behind his facade? 
OOC, AU, Future Citrus

Twilight...with a twist...

~COMPLETE~

fs


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 16 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 90926 Read Count: 12221
[Report This] Published: 18 Mar 2010 Updated: 17 Apr 2011
Reviewer: Marianne Northman Cullen Signed
Date: 17 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16: Time Passes

I CAN'T FUCKING BELIEVE IT!! I was sooo going to get you killed after what happened in last chapter but I guess waiting did get me something good!!

I loved it! So much!

Thank you!

xoxo

marianne



Author's Response:

LOL, your review made me laugh and cringe. I wasnt sure if I should be happy or scared. But I LOVE it so thank you. I am so happy that you got the HEA you wanted. I know it was a crazy way to get it, but we got it nonetheless. THANK YOU for all your reviews and kindness. I will always appreciate it!

Reviewer: Marianne Northman Cullen Signed
Date: 11 May 2010 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8: Recollection

Loved it!!



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for the review! It means so much that you are enjoying this story!!!

Reviewer: Marianne Northman Cullen Signed
Date: 14 May 2010 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9: Confession Part 1

Loved it sooo much!!!!!

Xoxo

marianne



Author's Response:

Thank you Marianne! Your support means so much to me =)

Reviewer: Marianne Northman Cullen Signed
Date: 27 May 2010 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10: Confession Part 2

I love it!! The twists are amazing!!

xoxo

M



Author's Response:

So glad you are enjoying!!! Thank you for reading and reviewing =)

Reviewer: Marianne Northman Cullen Signed
Date: 14 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11: Family

Loved it sooo much!!

I want them to fight!!

I am out for blood actually!

xoxo

Marianne



Author's Response:

Thanks Marianne for your review. You and I seem to be thinking the same, lol. I have a feeling things are going to get a little nasty next chapter...well the next few maybe because something tells me that Esme has some shit up her sleeve too! As always, thank you for your support of this story, it means alot to me =)

Reviewer: Marianne Northman Cullen Signed
Date: 01 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12: Uninvited

I loved it!! You know how I like a good fight so I can't wait!!!

xoxo

Marianne



Author's Response:

Marianne, I promise you will get alot more fight next chapter. This needed to take place to prep us for next chapter. As always thank you for your review and for your support =)

Reviewer: Marianne Northman Cullen Signed
Date: 22 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13: Checkmate

So worth the wait! Edward was amazing... Where is the bitch?

xox

Marianne



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for sticking around :) This was a tough chapter to write, but I am very happy with the way it turned out. So glad you liked it as well. Esme and her devious ways are just beginning, she will def be making another appearance, and soon. Thanks again for your support ;)

Reviewer: Marianne Northman Cullen Signed
Date: 21 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14:The End

Serously? I did expect it but read it? It's much more final and it hurts a bit... Oh I'm dying to see what Carlisle knows!!!

Love it as always!

xx

Marianne



Author's Response:

Thanks Marianne for the review...this chapter has gotten mixed reviews, lol. It was necessary for the story, plus there was no way I could leave it out. I hope I did it some justice...I think so far it was the hardest chapter to write. I officially hate Bella, just saying ;) Thanks again ;)

Schadenfreude by ladyinblue6 Rated: NC-17 [Reviews - 12]
Summary:

There ain't no rest for the wicked, until we close our eyes for good.


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 9 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 14334 Read Count: 786
[Report This] Published: 19 Mar 2010 Updated: 24 May 2010
Reviewer: Marianne Northman Cullen Signed
Date: 19 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 1: The Beginning

Intriguing prologue!!

I would really like to see what's next!



Author's Response:

Thanks!

Reviewer: Marianne Northman Cullen Signed
Date: 29 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 2: The Prostitute

Ahhh this is gonna be sooo much fun!

xoxo

Marianne



Author's Response:

Thanks!

Reviewer: Marianne Northman Cullen Signed
Date: 06 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 3: The Robber

Poor Emmett!! I really hated that he died! :(

xx

Marianne



Author's Response:

"There ain't no rest for the wicked until they close their eyes for good."

Reviewer: Marianne Northman Cullen Signed
Date: 08 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 1: The Beginning

**Hands up** I surrender!

xx

M



Author's Response:

Heh, same here!

Reviewer: Marianne Northman Cullen Signed
Date: 11 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 4: The Crazy Ex-Girlfriend

WOW.... a doze of crazyness in this chap...

So 3 down and much more to go... (not couning bella)

xoxo

Marianne



Author's Response:

Very crazy, I agree.

Reviewer: Marianne Northman Cullen Signed
Date: 18 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 5: The Corrupt Priest

Ok that was enlightening to say at the least....

WHen I read this I thought of a song called "House of Wolves" by My chemical romance...

Especially this part:

You play ring around the ambulance,
Well like you never gave a care.
So get the choir boys around you,
It's a compliment, I swear.
And I said, ashes to ashes, we all fall down,
I wanna hear you sing the praise,
I said, ashes to ashes, we all fall down,
We got innocence for days!

Well, I think I'm gonna burn in hell,
Everybody burn the house right down.

And say, ha
What I wanna say
Tell me I'm an angel,
Take this to my grave.
Tell me I'm a bad man,
Kick me like a stray.
Tell me I'm an angel,
Take this to my grave.

I think it fits like a glove....

xoxo
Marianne



Author's Response:

That is a great song for the Carlisle segment.

Reviewer: Marianne Northman Cullen Signed
Date: 01 May 2010 Title: Chapter 7: The Mental Hermaphrodite

WOW!! This was soo like Gollum (Lord of the rings) awesome!!

I can't wait for the last one (Bella is out) i suppose is Rose huh?

xoxo

Marianne



Author's Response:

Rose was last chapter. She's the drug dealer. Bella will be in the final chapter.

I know! I loved writing this one, for some twisted reason.

Reviewer: Marianne Northman Cullen Signed
Date: 08 May 2010 Title: Chapter 8: The Abusive Perfectionist

I don't mind it beung small!! Poor seth! Also o re-read Rose... For a reason the name hadn't registered with me....

i can't wait for Bella!!

xoxo

M



Author's Response:

Thanks!

Reviewer: Marianne Northman Cullen Signed
Date: 24 May 2010 Title: Chapter 9: The End

AMAZING TWIST!!!!! Absolutelly love it!!

xoxo

Marianne



Author's Response:

Thanks so much!

Summary:

Written for the Summer of Smut '09 one-shot contest. Has been rec'd and featured by the Perv Pack's Smut Shack.

On vacation, a beautiful woman is taken captive by a sexy bartender. They become consumed in a night of...ahem...fun. Rated NC-17 for mature themes, profanity, lemons, etc.

[created by me]

I ignored the cat calls that were flowing around me, leaving Rose to deal with them as I leant on my right hand, using my left to coax the bartender forward. He stalked towards me and swung my legs to his side of the bar, grabbing my hips to close the gap between us.

Come join us on Facebook!

[created by me]


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 6473 Read Count: 1588
[Report This] Published: 19 Mar 2010 Updated: 19 Mar 2010
Reviewer: Marianne Northman Cullen Signed
Date: 20 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Captive

Great!! The lemony gallore left me panting! ;)

Marianne



Author's Response:

Ah, so my evil plan worked ;) Thanks a lot for reviewing! I appreciate it.

- tanya xo

Summary:

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The long awaited 'Etched in my Skin'-outtake of the f*ckhot doctor Carlisle and Esme! Tattoos and Smut! What more do you want?

Written especially for Sessahhh whose awesome reviews inspired me to do this!!

Contains explicit sexual content!! If you're underaged, you have no bussiness reading this!!


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Carlisle/Esme
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Amberina's Completed Favs List, Stories I've read
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 2263 Read Count: 926
[Report This] Published: 23 Mar 2010 Updated: 23 Mar 2010
Reviewer: Marianne Northman Cullen Signed
Date: 12 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Passion and Ink

Oh... Someone is naughty!!

Loved it!

xoxo

Marianne



Author's Response:

(Looks over shoulders) Who? Where? Is he hot?

LOL

Summary:

Outtakes from Lustful Awakings. Find out what happened behind the closed doors between Peter, Charlotte, Charlie, and Renee,or William, Catherine, Carlisle, and Esme. Might even be some Emmett, Rose, Garrett, and Kate. Rated NC-17 for graphic lemons, slash, and language.


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Other Misc Char or Pairings
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories, Stories I've Already read, My Favorite Stories, The Awakenings Saga, to read
Chapters: 15 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 26618 Read Count: 27937
[Report This] Published: 30 Mar 2010 Updated: 09 Sep 2010
Reviewer: Marianne Northman Cullen Signed
Date: 31 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Ok I told you I would read it... I must admit that I am not as freaked out about Charlie as I thought I would be but it was a cold shower... I'll get used to it!

I like it in a twisted sort of way if I forget that Charlie is DAD.... So I;ll get over it ;)

xoxo

Marianne

I can't wait for Mr C.... ***glazed eyes daydreaming about Carlisle coevered in choco syrup and on his chest written DILF with caramel***

***snaps out of it***

***blushes***

C u!



Author's Response:

lol, thanks for reading it, even through Charlie is a dad! You crack me up!

We still have a few more before we get to Mr. C:) Now, I'm really hungry for choco and caramel...

Ethics Be Damned by krazyk85 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 489]
Summary: Past Featured Story

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Banner made by xrxdanixrx

Bella Swan is a 28 year old woman who is a narcotics detective for the Seattle Police Department. Bella is assigned to go undercover as a high school student to bring down a massive drug ring fronted by the elusive Drug Lord Aro Volturi. Bella soon finds herself falling for her English teacher Edward Masen...

Edward Masen is instantly attracted to this new student, but can't pursue a relationship with a young girl.

 Will these two keep things in perspective or will their ethics be damned?

Based loosely on 21 Jumpstreet and Never Been Kissed

d

fs


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's not read yet, Drive's Stories to read that are Completed and Not completed, G8or Favor8s Read
Chapters: 35 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 191208 Read Count: 71569
[Report This] Published: 12 Apr 2010 Updated: 23 Dec 2010
Reviewer: Marianne Northman Cullen Signed
Date: 07 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23

FUCK ME!!! No fucking way!!! I am in fucking SCHOCK and my filter is sooo fuc...damn off!!!

Loved it!!

xoxo

marianne

Reviewer: Marianne Northman Cullen Signed
Date: 26 May 2010 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21

Soo Edward indeed!!

Poor Rose... And why do I have a feeling that Agent Reed is whith Aro?!

lol

xx

M

Reviewer: Marianne Northman Cullen Signed
Date: 01 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22

nah... I knew it... Actually I though it was going to be a flat out no...

I loved it though!!

Jasper is hilarious!!

xoxo

marianne

Reviewer: Marianne Northman Cullen Signed
Date: 15 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 25

I like the promice girl!! Keep it please!! I wanna keep my sanity for a bit and beating Tanya in bloody pulp would be a nice way to do it!!

lol

I think it was a good idea telling him I mean.., But she messed up the why...

Rose is right there...

xoxo

Marianne

Reviewer: Marianne Northman Cullen Signed
Date: 18 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 26

I prefer the longer chapies and I do not mind the time in between so much because very short chapters are just getting on my nerves actually... (Full with clifies which I loathe lol)

I loved it! Bella is right noone is safe and I get off on it! Gimme blood!!

I still think for a peculiar reason that Agent Reed is the informnant...

xoxo

Marianne

Reviewer: Marianne Northman Cullen Signed
Date: 25 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 27: Chapter 27

Loved it!! Yes I agree too about making the right move!

xoxo

Marianne

Reviewer: Marianne Northman Cullen Signed
Date: 06 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 28: Chapter 28

I pray to he isn't wrong ;)

Now I had I weird flash-want.... Can we have hot make-up smut after all that??

Irrelevant much?! lol

xoxo

Marianne



Author's Response: Maybe *snickers* Bella still needs to use her cuffs on Edward....oh the possiblities ;)

Reviewer: Marianne Northman Cullen Signed
Date: 11 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 30: Chapter 30

I didn't hate it!! It was goood!!!

xoxo

Marianne

Reviewer: Marianne Northman Cullen Signed
Date: 18 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 31: Chapter 31

Cliffies in the A/N??!!! Are you fucking with us???

I loved it you evil creature!

xoxo

MArianne

Reviewer: Marianne Northman Cullen Signed
Date: 21 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 32: Chapter 32

YAY!! He asked charlie!! Now we have to wait to see the proposal!! Can I fond the wedding dress??

Please??!!

xx

M

Reviewer: Marianne Northman Cullen Signed
Date: 24 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 35: Epilogue

Oh my god.... i am leaking! I loved it!! it was soo amazing!!

Thank you!

Merry Christmas Darling!

xoxo

marianne

Citrus Dreams by ash_golden Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 29]
Summary: Past Featured Story

cdb

 

Bella has a fun time reading while waiting on Edward to come back from his hunt. LEMONY. Vamps. OOC. All canon. Please review!

fs


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 3 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 7998 Read Count: 1832
[Report This] Published: 16 Apr 2010 Updated: 21 Apr 2010
Reviewer: Marianne Northman Cullen Signed
Date: 24 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

I can't find the poll! I like it!

Summary:

Sequel to Lustful Awakings. When Bella wakes up from her coma with no memory of her life with Edward, Jasper, and Alice, will they be able to help her remember? Will she still want them if she does remember? Same pairings as in LA. NC-17

Banner by rpattz1990

memory


Categories: Non-Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Alice/Jasper/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories, Stories I've Already read, My Favorite Stories, The Awakenings Saga
Chapters: 63 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 153264 Read Count: 159083
[Report This] Published: 18 Apr 2010 Updated: 14 Sep 2010
Reviewer: Marianne Northman Cullen Signed
Date: 19 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

You have got to be kidding me... Painful just that!! Please make her remember!! Use my sharks as a motive if needed ***evil grin***

Love ya

xoxo

Marianne



Author's Response:

LOL, not the sharks!! No, please, no....I'll do better! Please???? Ok, now that I've had my dramatic meltdwon, I promise everything will be ok....eventually ;)

Reviewer: Marianne Northman Cullen Signed
Date: 19 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

You evil evil girl I hate the word "eventually" as much as Jake...

lol

***thinks about future***

***another devilish grin***



Author's Response:

ok, hows this, I promise that by the end of the stroy that they live happily ever after, in the land of fairy's and pixie's :) Better?

Reviewer: Marianne Northman Cullen Signed
Date: 19 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

No... ***pouts and stomps her foot down like Alice***

Nice try! ;)



Author's Response:

Well, damn.....

Reviewer: Marianne Northman Cullen Signed
Date: 12 May 2010 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 25

For a fucking reason I can't fanthom I didn't get the updates for the last 6 chapters.... Anyway now I read them and I loved them all!! Yay for me!

xoxo

Marianne



Author's Response:

lol, thanks:)

Reviewer: Marianne Northman Cullen Signed
Date: 13 May 2010 Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 26

You know I love you but I really don't wanna see the rents popping up children... I mean I don't know how I'll get it.... We'll see I guess!

xoxo

marianne



Author's Response:

The parents won't be having any children:)

Summary: Past Featured Story

Bella is graduating high school and looking for a Dom.  Edward is the Head Master at her school and he is who she wants.  Problem - he is married, has kids, a friend of Bella's fathers, 35 and oh! he isn't a Dom.  Can she get him? - Maybe!

  My entry for FF's Forbidden Lemon contest.

Banner inside chapter 1 to comply with Google ads requirements.

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Domward's Dungeon, Ageise02's Read Stories, Bdsm stories only, I Whitlock's read , Love to drive's Stories to read set 2, My all time favorites, Amberina's Completed Favs List, My Favorite Stories, To Read , Fav BDSM Fics, My favs past present and future
Chapters: 22 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 210865 Read Count: 123469
[Report This] Published: 25 Apr 2010 Updated: 17 Mar 2011
Reviewer: Marianne Northman Cullen Signed
Date: 17 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 18: The Sixth Year The First Six Months

That was a mean cliffie!! Don't you dare let anything happen to them during the delivery!!! I swear I will hunt you down and throw you into my shark's pool!!

Other than that...

I loved it!!

Also I can't wait for the voting to start!!

How about a visit from tanya??? ***hint hint***

xx

Marianne ***grins***



Author's Response:

Thanks for reading - Beth

Reviewer: Marianne Northman Cullen Signed
Date: 16 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 21: Ten Years Later

LOVED IT!!! I can't even describe how much!!! It's not enough!!

xoxo

Marianne

PS Will we ever learn what happened to Alice??? My curiosity it's quite big there...



Author's Response:

I am not sure about Alice yet - maybe - thanks for reading - Beth

Reviewer: Marianne Northman Cullen Signed
Date: 17 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 22: Fifteen Years Later

OMG!!!!!!!!! I AM SO CRYING LIKE A BABY!!!!!

Loved it!
I have no words!
thank you!



Author's Response:

Thanks for reading - Beth

Summary: Past Featured Story

Bella is a student at UW who lives a routine, struggled life, but that changes when she meets Edward Cullen,CEO of his Company. How exactly do they meet? What happens when their lifes collide? Does Bella uncover Edwards darkest secrets or does Edward learn Bellas hidden truths first. D/S Material

 Thanks to bjelaja for taking the time to make this awesome banner! (:

 


Categories: Twilight, All Human
Characters: None
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Domward's Dungeon, My All-Time Favorites
Chapters: 14 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 38146 Read Count: 76150
[Report This] Published: 25 Apr 2010 Updated: 11 May 2014
Reviewer: Marianne Northman Cullen Signed
Date: 28 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12

Poor poor Volvo!!! If it's Edward's car the one Jasper got he is soooo screwed!! I am soo gonna love Eddie-boys reaction!!!! (****looks around worriedly and whispers**** Please don't tell him I called him that!!)

I loved it!!!

I think a freaking out Bella is hilarious!! When will she google the torture room?? Or library it (OMG is that even a word?? My english prof will have a fit ***rolls her eyes***) lol

xx

Marianne



Author's Response:

Marianne! I loved your review! I laughed the whole way through! Thanks for reading! And I hope to hear more from you!

XX-T

Reviewer: Marianne Northman Cullen Signed
Date: 11 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13

Ohhh I loved it! I can only imagine how Eddie boy will react!!! It will be so fraking cool!!

Shit... i think I spend too much time with my boyfriend I am starting to sound like him....

lol

I loved it!
xoxo

Marianne

Haunted by cullens_pet Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 55]
Summary: Past Featured Story

Create your own banner at mybannermaker.com!

 

 

Draco has waited for years to claim her for his own. He has a plan and nothing the Head Girl does is going to stop him. Originally a one-shot song fic that due to demand has been expanded into a full story.


Categories: Harry Potter
Characters: None
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 6 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 16310 Read Count: 9208
[Report This] Published: 25 Apr 2010 Updated: 12 May 2010
Reviewer: Marianne Northman Cullen Signed
Date: 25 May 2010 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

I can't wait to see Lusious reaction!!

Summary:

 

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stories/8628/images/Chelsawardbanner.jpg

 

 

“We found her Chief Swan, she’s ALIVE! We found Isabella!" Alive? She had really survived the last tens years?

They said I was going home but where was home now?

OOC AU Dark themed you've been warned. No rape! But there is talk about slaves and abuse   Bella x Edward

 

 


Categories: Twilight, Alternate Universe
Characters: None
Genre: Suspense/Thriller
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 21 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 77399 Read Count: 33003
[Report This] Published: 25 Apr 2010 Updated: 25 Feb 2011
Reviewer: Marianne Northman Cullen Signed
Date: 08 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18

but we don't have to wayt much?right? ***bats her eyelashes shamelessly***

loved it!

xx

marianne



Author's Response:

Ah, now that is really a good question. And the answer is the  next chapter is already written. Now it up to the Beta to send it back.

Thank you for reading and reviewing it!

Reviewer: Marianne Northman Cullen Signed
Date: 14 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19

Loved it!! HE is so fucking sweet it hurts!!

xx

Marianne

Summary:

A darker romance. Searching for balance and trust, Edward and Bella negotiate a tangled web of sex, blood, secrets, kink, and demons from the past. NOT CANON-STYLE VAMPIRES but canon pairings. Very, very AU.

WARNING: This story contains much in the way of lemons, violence, and dark and dominant Edward.


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 16 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 49922 Read Count: 11468
[Report This] Published: 05 May 2010 Updated: 20 Jan 2011
Reviewer: Marianne Northman Cullen Signed
Date: 23 May 2010 Title: Chapter 13: Out of the Past

Bitchy Esme and poor Bella is on the fucking floor!! Come on girl get up!!

Loved it!

xoxo

marianne

PS I am glad that you put it here!!

Summary:

Isabella Whitlock and Breaking Dawn have started their tour. Will crazed fans, a stalker, and who knows what else break them apart? E&B, J&A, Em&R NC-17 for lemons, language, and who knows what.


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories, Themslovebug90's read stories, My Favorite Stories, Brooklyn - to read, to read
Chapters: 33 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 156016 Read Count: 38483
[Report This] Published: 10 May 2010 Updated: 17 Jul 2010
Reviewer: Marianne Northman Cullen Signed
Date: 11 May 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Seattle

Gosh this is gonna be sooo fucking good!!!!!

xxoo

Marianne



Author's Response:

Thank you:)

Reviewer: Marianne Northman Cullen Signed
Date: 12 May 2010 Title: Chapter 2: Portland

I like it a lot!! Please please tell me I can make the 'fits!!?? ***pouts***

I was good in the others wasn't I???

xoxo

Marianne



Author's Response:

lol, Of course you can!

Reviewer: Marianne Northman Cullen Signed
Date: 13 May 2010 Title: Chapter 3: Sacramento

Loved it!! I'll have the fits ready bu tomorrow!

xoxo

Marianne



Author's Response:

Awesome, thank you:)

Reviewer: Marianne Northman Cullen Signed
Date: 15 May 2010 Title: Chapter 5: Salt Lake City

YAY!! Preggo Bella!! So here are the first sets sorry for the delay but my finals just started and I am a bit busy... :)

http://www.polyvore.com/david_copperfield_show/set?id=18746528

http://www.polyvore.com/las_vegas_galls/set?id=18726212

http://www.polyvore.com/las_vegas/set?id=18725547

http://www.polyvore.com/portland/set?id=18724463

http://www.polyvore.com/portland/set?id=18723699

xoxo

marianne

Reviewer: Marianne Northman Cullen Signed
Date: 16 May 2010 Title: Chapter 6: Denver

Loved it as always!! Here are the others!! Tell me if i have forgotten sth or/and if you want me to change sth!!

http://www.polyvore.com/denver/set?id=18795256

http://www.polyvore.com/zoo/set?id=18759666

http://www.polyvore.com/ready_to_leave/set?id=18747036

Reviewer: Marianne Northman Cullen Signed
Date: 17 May 2010 Title: Chapter 7: St. Paul

Loved it!!

xoxo



Author's Response:

Thank you:)

Reviewer: Marianne Northman Cullen Signed
Date: 21 May 2010 Title: Chapter 11: Colombus and Detroit

I can't wait to find out!! involving the press is a fucking awesome idea!



Author's Response:

Thank you;)

Reviewer: Marianne Northman Cullen Signed
Date: 23 May 2010 Title: Chapter 13: New York City

Loved it!! Nice twist!



Author's Response:

Thank you:)

Only hope by militato123 Rated: M starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 65]
Summary: Past Featured Story

edward bella

After spending an intimate night together, Edward realizes what a true danger he is to Bella and decides to leave. Depression finally sinks in when she realizes she's pregnant and a certain deadly vampire has come for her; Aro Volturi.

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 15 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 21135 Read Count: 8560
[Report This] Published: 17 May 2010 Updated: 14 Oct 2011
Reviewer: Marianne Northman Cullen Signed
Date: 22 May 2010 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

WOW! That's a mil! I like it but for fuck's sake slow down! I had to read it twice to actually get a better picture!!

Too many too fast!!

I really wanna know what happens next so please go on!!

xoxo

M



Author's Response:

hey, um... how exactly do you want me to slow down? it's my first storie just let me know exactly what you mean by slowing down.

i haven't finshed the next ch. yet, it might take a while maybe by monday or tomorrow .

please keep readind and reviewing. - mili

Reviewer: Marianne Northman Cullen Signed
Date: 23 May 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Sorry if I was harsh i didn't mean it!! I just meant that maybe you should slow down... For example when she learns she is pregnant I personally had to do a double take cause the reactions were too fast for me to keep up...

There is nothing bad with it!! I can't wait!

xoxo

marianne



Author's Response:

lol sorry about that. i'm just trying to get to the point which is when Alice and Edward pov would come. you might not wanna read the ch. i'm writting right now, because i'm skipping to the labor and only writting bits and pieces of what happenedduring the last three months. - mili

Reviewer: Marianne Northman Cullen Signed
Date: 23 May 2010 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

Ok now this was better in the pace!!

not that it bothers me but I believe in third line the last word is scream an in Demetris pov third line again is screamed...

It's nothing big I just wanted you to know so that you can correct it if needed!You are a human beign after all!! with all the pressure sth was left from you or your beta! It's ok!

I can't wait to see how Edward is doing!!

xoxo

Marianne



Author's Response:

i don't have a beta if yu haven't notice yet lol yeah i'm a sucky writer i know lol well i can assure you Edward is going to pay for leaving Bella in the woods. - mili

Reviewer: Marianne Northman Cullen Signed
Date: 23 May 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Nah... I don't mind!! I like the story and wanna see what will happen next!!

Of course I am not a beta but i can help if you want!

I can't wait to get to torture Edward even if it's only a bit! ***winks***

lol

xoxo

M



Author's Response:

well you'll be suprise to find out who will torture Edward. it won't be Bella or the Volturi, but one of the twins.  um.... ok i guess you can be my beta person thing how eactly does it work? - mili

Reviewer: Marianne Northman Cullen Signed
Date: 23 May 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I don't know actually I've never done it... I usually create outfits and help the writers with the images they project.

As I said not a beta... They are in charge of the chapter! Correct grammar, voc, better phrasing maybe changing a bit the draft (not the plot or the dialogues the way of presentation)

I could just look out for sth you missed more like a pre-read! And in the mean time you can find a real beta!



Author's Response:

i'm not sure i like anyone being in charge my my chapter, so i'll just do it myself. - mili

Reviewer: Marianne Northman Cullen Signed
Date: 24 May 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Sure!! That is exactly one of the reasons I am NOT a beta.... I hate changing sth the a writer worked for so hard.... Guilty consience too much I guess....

 

Reviewer: Marianne Northman Cullen Signed
Date: 25 May 2010 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

I like it!! Only one q... When did they get to London?? Aren't they in Voltera??

xoxo

M



Author's Response:

ooops gotta  fix it, thanxs - mili

Reviewer: Marianne Northman Cullen Signed
Date: 27 May 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Nothing I just though I lost it for a sec!! Glad to help!

Reviewer: Marianne Northman Cullen Signed
Date: 27 May 2010 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

I saw this pic of Bella and though it would make an excellent banner so I did...

Do you like it?? You can use it if you want! It's for you after all!!

<a href="http://s881.photobucket.com/albums/ac13/Marianne_Northman_Cullen/?action=view&current=Kristen-Stewart-251-1.gif" target="_blank"><img src="http://i881.photobucket.com/albums/ac13/Marianne_Northman_Cullen/Kristen-Stewart-251-1.gif" border="0" alt="Photobucket"></a>

 

 

 



Author's Response:

yea i like it alot thanks so much, but hmmm.... i don't how to put it like in the site and all lol - mili

Reviewer: Marianne Northman Cullen Signed
Date: 27 May 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I actually don't know myself... Why don't you see if there is a spot where you put the summary??



Author's Response:
hey, i like this pic better..... can you like write what you wrote in the other pic in this one please?

Reviewer: Marianne Northman Cullen Signed
Date: 09 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

Let her go all bareseck on their asses for a bit!! It will be sooo much fun!!

xoxo

MArianne



Author's Response:

will do! ;)

Memories of Love by mizzdee Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 54]
Summary:

Bella Swan wants nothing more than to prepare for her future.

When Edward Cullen moves to town he quickly realizes that he wants nothing more than Bella Swan.

Will her painful past and his recent mistakes keep Bella from seeing the man Edward truly is?  Can she let Edward in?  Can the two form that lasting bond that can never be broken?  Or will the heartaches and tragedies tear them apart for good?

Rated NC-17 for some strong language and eventual mature content.

stories/13006/images/Memories2.jpg


Categories: Twilight
Characters: None
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 32 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 199361 Read Count: 9583
[Report This] Published: 25 May 2010 Updated: 26 Apr 2012
Reviewer: Marianne Northman Cullen Signed
Date: 14 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15 - Making New Friends

***rounds her eyes suspiciously*** don't even try to pass a sexy times with Jess for fuck's sake!! Come on!! I want BELLA!

lol

xx

marianne



Author's Response:

I know you want Bella, and so does Edward but he doesn't think he can have her right now.  He is too much of a gentleman to try and steal her from another guy.  Jessica just happened to be lucky enough to be the girl next door.  He's seen her every day since he moved in and he likes her.  He knows nothing about her reputation though.  He just doesn't realize what he's getting himself into.

Thanks for the review.  I hope to hear from you more often.  Let me know what you're thinkin - D

Summary: Past Featured Story

Sometimes, it's the simplest wishes that can change your life forever.

 

"Any change, even a change for the better, is accompanied by drawbacks and discomforts." Can Eric and Sookie survive the drawbacks of their changing future? Set after DitF

 

A Change Is Gonna Come

A Change Is Gonna Come


Categories: Southern Vampire Mysteries/True Blood, Alternate Universe, Canon
Characters: Eric/Sookie
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Lady Luciole's Favorites TB
Chapters: 31 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 119483 Read Count: 13150
[Report This] Published: 04 Jun 2010 Updated: 06 Jan 2013
Reviewer: Marianne Northman Cullen Signed
Date: 08 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 12: Can’t Change Me

I love the story really!!This Sook is awesome and Robert is really great! I wasn't going to review till I got to the last chapter but sth here made me change my mind!

I am from greece and even though I can see why it is possible it gave my the giggles for quite a time... So it's a small detail...

When we use the word "lígo" it mens a little quantity of sth much like you use "some" "a little" and "a few". To say "little mother" we would say "mikrí mitéra" (even if we say that she is young inage or little as in petite)

I just though you should know!

xoxo

Marianne

PS: Can we see Epov?? Please???? I really wanna see the rampage mode!

 



Author's Response:

Thanks so much for letting me know.! I'll fix that when I get a chance. I really appreciate you letting me know.

 

Thanks for reading,

 

Sarifina

Reviewer: Marianne Northman Cullen Signed
Date: 08 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 13: Scene Change

pams pov it great! She is cunning and even though I saw the Viking's rage I wished  must say he is a jerk... (not for the Sookie situation that I get but for the Pam thing... No bloody excuse...)

xx

Marianne