Reviews by gatorgrl91
Summary:

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Welcome to part 3 of the storm series. Sixteen years after Weather the Storm. Follow the Skip, Bella, and their kids - now older, wiser, and enmeshed in the family business. How will Edward cope with trying to teach Damion and Sonny the ropes, keeping Kylie out of trouble, and Bella happy? Does he still have what it takes to juggle all his duties? Mobward. OOC. AU. Romance/Humor/crime.


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: G8or Favor8s Read, Stories Read by CNYBella, Edwards Paradox Completed Favourites, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, My Favorite Stories, All Time Favorites, Storm Series, My favs past present and future
Chapters: 54 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 549405 Read Count: 806721
[Report This] Published: 24 Aug 2012 Updated: 22 May 2013
Reviewer: gatorgrl91 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 03 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 20: Gotcha

Omg!! How do u do it?? It keeps getting better & better...hotter & hotter...more romantic, funny, crazy & all around fabulous!!!
I flove Sonny!! His POV is by far my new fav!!! I hate Sonny & Maggie have all these mountains to climb in order to be together, but I'm hopeful!!
I'm also glad Katie is being more of a friend to Sonny now (or so it seems).
THANK U for updating early!!
** I usually say "feel free to update early" but started to wonder if that might make me seem ungrateful & make u feel like no matter what u do, u can't please people. PLEASE don't think either of those!! U always give more that what u promise & usually do it earlier than we expect!! For that, I'm so grateful.**

I'm so addicted to these characters!! Flove them!!! :)

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Date: 16 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 23: My Girl

What a surprise!! :) Thank U 4 the update!! & "See u Wednesday!"...oh bless u Sexy!! :)
I think Lauren's "Skip" moment w/Damion is what's fucking w/his head. Biotch!!
I Flove Maggie & Sonny together...I want them to work out I just hope she doesn't get preggos-she doesn't need anymore ridicule from the bitches @ school or her family. I'm glad sonny came to her rescue! I agree w/Edward, Dame is acting out b/c he doesn't know how to handle all of these feelings. I think Bella & Amelia should go kick Lauren's ass *when* they find out. *hint hint, wink wink*
U da best! Thx bunches for the surprise update. It's GREATLY APPRECIATED!!!!
Have a great one! :)

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Date: 16 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 24: A Rock

HOLY SHIT!!!!
That was...WOW...no words to describe how awesome this chap was!!! First, Amelia saying that virgin shit to Maggie-NOT cool! Then the EPIC reveal from Amelia to Bella. Then Ant/Dame. Then the Bella/Damion event (poor Dame w/his shame) with Amelia/Edward in the background! (I think Amelia is dead-on w/her psych assessment of Dame as is Bella of her "Maggie realization" as to her appeal to Damion.) Finally, Lauren getting the smack down she so rightly deserves-& much more-to the cliffie of "Did Bella shoot Lauren"???
U rock Sexy!!
I was jumping 4 jOy that u updated early!!! Thank U!!
I agree w/the others...I'll still b reading this if u write abt the grandbabies!!! Ur that good...This story is that awesome!!
Keep 'em coming!!! :)
Heather-Davidson, NC

Reviewer: gatorgrl91 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 29 May 2013 Title: Chapter 53: Epilogue Two

Awesome as always!!! I'm sad it's the end, but what a wild ride it has been!!! Thank you for ALWAYS providing excellence!! You have such a gift at writing and hope you get a book deal for the WHOLE trilogy!! It's THAT good!!
Good luck in all you do!
ps: SO glad you are keeping the Facebook group!! It brightens my day when I see one of your posts-regardless of what it is about!!! :)

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Date: 28 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 27: Blazing Guns

Awesome!!!...as always Sexy!! :) So glad Dame's OK & that Skip came to his 'rescue', so to speak!! Looking forward to the reactions from the family of my fav couple tying the knot!! I flove Sonny & Maggie!!!

Thank u for updating early! I have yet to find another author as dedicated & sensitive to their readers as U!! :)

To the haters: buzz off!! If u read all of SexyLexi's reviews, u would c the truth...she's an awesome, well loved, respected & talented writer! It's proven in the fact that she has invoked such passionate feelings in all the readers...haters included! It takes a special & talented person to persevere thru difficult times and continue writing-SexyLexi deserves better! She deserves respect at the very least! **Cowards are NOT welcome!!!** Beware b/c she has a very large & loyal following! Muwahahaha!!! :)

Btw, Sexy thx for the rec for CaraNo!!! I luv her stuff & didn't realize she had new stuff b/c it's not listing on FFnet nor here, thus I'm not getting email updates!! But b/c of ur rec, I found her blogspot & am reading all of her stories!!! Wow! Close Yours Eyes was just awesome!!! Reading her stories is a great way for me to keep occupied in between ur updates!!! :)
SO glad ur feeling better!! Ur the best! Don't let the haters get u down! I hope it's obvious how much u r loved AND liked!!!

U da bomb!!! Don't forget it!!! :)

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Date: 06 Nov 2012 Title: Chapter 28: Comfortably Numb

Sexy-
First, I'm so glad that you are okay. Oh man--I was so nervous for you-I'm like dude I hope she is okay. I kept bugging my husband: "check on storm updates for Bay Ridge!" & "what's going on in Brooklyn?"! *of course he looked @ me like I was crazy, but hey-ur my fav! * :)

That was really sweet of Damion, to tell maggie's parents that they should trust Sonny & Maggie-give them a chance. She deserves better.

I really don't like the way Amelia is pushing Damion. I wonder if she slept with him that night to ensure that she was pregnant. I hope not. I couldnt quite tell what his true emotions were during their interactions in this chap. They were great b4 this & really hope they can find their way back.

Edward said to "be straight", so I hope that he will be. Love his loving interactions with Bella and Edward. I hope Sonny and Damion can work things out.

Living in NC & growing up in SC, I am no stranger to hurricanes. I feel like we get hurricanes like y'all get snow. :) Preparations are the key 2 succes I believe! I dont understand y the power trucks/workers, red cross, etc weren't already close by & on standby. Of course it would take hours/days to travel AFTER the storm! *duh*
< My husband & I wondered y people sat in gas lines for 4-8 hrs when they could have driven 3 hrs away with very few problems & filled up. ?? I guess thats why hindsight is 20/20. :) >

Take care & I hope u "weather this next storm" in a good way!

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Date: 15 Nov 2012 Title: Chapter 30: Maybe

Awesome as always!!! I'm going thru major "Storm" withdrawal!!!
:)

Got some answers to old & new questions-like Aro's thoughts abt Bella after his memory returned-but also rose new questions--what will the fallout of a dead Caius be? What will come of Sonny & Dame's lunch? Plus the still lingering one... Is Amelia really prego?

Hope u have power & r toasty warm! I'll b hoping u get 2 c BDII also!! :)
THANKS BUNCHES!!!

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Date: 21 Nov 2012 Title: Chapter 31: Dr. Jekyll & Mr. Hyde

Loved it--as always!!! Thanks bunches 4 ur loyalty 2 this story!! I love the Storm series & will always read every word-& love it!!! U bring such life 2 ur characters. Makes me feel like I'm living right along side of them!! Only great writers can do that!!! I find myself thinking of these characters frequently during my days while going about my life!!! THAT takes talent 2 have that kind of an impact!!
Thank U!!
:)
HaPpY ThAnKsGiViNg Sexy!!! :)

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Date: 22 Nov 2012 Title: Chapter 32: In Between

HaPpY ThAnKsGiViNg!!

I'm happy 4 Dame. I hate that he & Amelia didn't work out, but she turned psycho & that just isn't cool! :) Glad 2 c Damion can bounce back-find some light. I'm curious 2 c how he & Jordan play out.
What is Luke Drasso's deal?? Hidden agenda??

I'm so addicted 2 ur characters it's almost embarrassing!! :) (notice I said *almost*!) It's that good!
Thanks 4 ur frequent & awesome updates. Every chapter is a winner!!
:)

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Date: 28 Nov 2012 Title: Chapter 33: Crumbs

Awesome as always!!! I don't have a good feeling abt this whole C-bag deal. The $ being there seems like a trap--marked bills to catch the Skip??? I feel a storm brewing & I'm frightful for the Skip & his family. I really hope Carlisle is right on all accounts. Sonny just *has* to stay outta trouble!!! No dying or jail time for any of the Fam! :)

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Date: 28 Nov 2012 Title: Chapter 34: Dinner

Oh my my!! Dinner was fab!!
I'm concerned/scared 4 Sonny & Maggie! 1). The FBI. 2). Whomever called Mags.
FBI: I'm afraid they r gonna go thru Maggie 2 get 2 Sonny--or even trying 2 get the Skip. She's so innocent I don't know if she'd hold up under pressure. I'm thinking there's another FBI plant or rat in their midst. Layla trying 2 get revenge on Sonny - could've gone 2 FBI or even his previous eclipse manager. I don't think we've heard the last from the FBI.
The call: I'm thinking Amelia trying 2 cause problems between Maggie & sonny cause she likely blames Maggie 4 her & Dame's demise. Or, on a more positive take, Layla calling 2 warn sonny of the FBI trying 2 turn her/snooping around. Thinking that calling Maggie's phone 2 alert him is prob safe.

I wouldn't b surprised if u heard my squeal all the way up in Brooklyn from NC whenever I get my email notifying me of ur update!!!

With the amount of thought I put into figuring out the mysteries & possible angles of ur story, I'm not sure what that indicates...1) I have NO life 2) ur that good of a writer or 3) BOTH!!! :) I'm going w/#2!!! :)
Thx 4 all ur hard work & dedication 2 this story!!!
:)
U da best!

Reviewer: gatorgrl91 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 21 Dec 2012 Title: Chapter 38: Chapter 38

Sexy- As always, a fantastic chapter!

There are so many dynamics in each update that could each take the story in a different direction. Be it trouble for Edward/Aro out west, further addiction issues w/Sonny, marital problems for Sonny/Maggie, FBI problems/getting caught in the switch up of identities or alibis, etc. Not to mention the direction the lives of other characters take. It just goes to show how the actions of one can affect the lives of others!

Due 2 my obsession w/all things "Storm" and reading in ur reviews that other readers are doing it, I went back & re-read QS, WTS, & EyeOS. Once again, it was a fabulous experience! I'm not sure what I'm going 2 do when Riders is finished, which I hope isn't for quite some time (like 50+ chapters more 😜)!!

I have yet 2 understand HOW or WHY u have "Storm" haters. I know u have many more positive & glowing reviews than negative, but also understand how the negative can stick with u. I just hope u remember & know in ur heart how much people LOVE/FLOVE ur writing--ALL of it!!! (Of course I am partial 2 ur Storm series!! :)

I anxiously await the Riders update every Sunday & Wednesday!! I even try & hold out so I can read 2 chapters back 2 back, but sometimes that proves 2 b impossible!! I'm not sure if ur still updating twice a week, but just know that my Storm obsession is alive & well!!

Although I'm wishing & hoping 4 a Storm update/double update gift 4 Christmas, I'm not going anywhere if I don't get it!!

Hope u & urs have a Merry Christmas & a Happy New Year!! Merry Christmas to all the "Storm" characters & 2 all a good update!!! :)

Flove ya,
Heather
P. S. I voted 4 ALL things "Storm"!!! I hope u win--u deserve it!

Reviewer: gatorgrl91 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 04 Jan 2013 Title: Chapter 39: Chicken

Awwww-Yeah for Dame!!! Also, glad Sonny recognized his mistakes & is remorseful. All this happy feels like the calm before the *Storm*!

I've missed ur updates so much-but I'm glad ur back!!! Even though this chapter was short & sweet, it was awesome-as always!!! Can't wait for more! :)

This is by far, the best Mobward in the fanfiction world, & quite possibly the best story/Series as well!

Off to read the QS outtake now! Thx!

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Date: 19 Apr 2013 Title: Chapter 47: Empire

Still lovin' ur story!!! Saw ur post on fb and if that's ur new story, I'm totally stoked!!!

Ur such a great writer, it's a disappointment to read other stories! No offense to other authors, but u and those who u rec, truly set the bar high!!! :)

Reviewer: gatorgrl91 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 14 Nov 2013 Title: Chapter 54: Chapter 54

Yum! Awesome as always!!
Thx! :)

Summary: Past Featured Story


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Fifty Shades...Full Circle

Book III

A continuation of the Fifty Shades Trilogy

*A Writer's Coffee Shop Featured Story May 2013*

Thank You.

This story  continues where Fifty Shades...Clarity left off. Ana and Christian have endured a hard year, scandal, heartache and Christian finally recognizing and  accepting his past  have plagued them. Yet they remain strong with their love for each other and  their family. Will new revelations tear them apart? Will the coming changes divide them or make them stronger?       This is Book III. You will probably want to read 'Fifty Shades More', Book I and 'Fifty Shade Clarity', Book II first. They are both posted here.


Categories: Fifty Shades Trilogy
Characters: Anastasia Steele/Christian Grey
Genre: Erotica, Family, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: Happily Ever After
Series: G8or Favor8s Read, Dumbeline's WIP to read list, Stories I've read, Fifty Shades ...More
Chapters: 162 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 660157 Read Count: 591802
[Report This] Published: 08 Sep 2012 Updated: 06 Dec 2015
Reviewer: gatorgrl91 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 10 Apr 2013 Title: Chapter 68: Chapter 68

Yikes!!! I can't believe you left us with a cliffie!!!!
Duh duh duh.....
Pls update soon!! :)

Reviewer: gatorgrl91 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 12 Apr 2013 Title: Chapter 69: Chapter 69

Oh man!!! U left us hanging!!! No fair! :)

Reviewer: gatorgrl91 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 16 Apr 2013 Title: Chapter 70: Chapter 70

Glad they r all safe!!!:)
Thx!

Summary: Past Featured Story

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Twenty-two-year-old Bella Swan works for Edward Cullen, the thirty-nine-year-old Vice President at Providence Medical Center in Portland.  After years of fighting their attraction to each other, a quick tryst in the break room leads to a thrilling but complicated relationship.  Trying not to get caught by the prying eyes of their entire workplace, they’re forced to hide their relationship and deal with his ex-wife and his sixteen-year-old daughter.


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Stories I've Already read, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, Dumbi's Most Wanted, Stories I've read, My favs past present and future
Chapters: 36 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 190983 Read Count: 94882
[Report This] Published: 21 May 2013 Updated: 18 Jun 2013
Reviewer: gatorgrl91 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 17 Apr 2013 Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 25 - University of Portland

Maybe I missed it, but what's the meaning behind the leaf and pearl charms?

Author's Response:

Haha, my pre-readers asked me that, too.  There isn't actually any deeper meaning.  Just thought it was a pretty little necklace, and it looked like something Maggie would pick out for Bella.  :)  Hope you aren't disappointed that there isn't more to it!  Thanks for the review!

Summary:

According to recent studies, people are most likely to meet their soul mate in the supermarket. I, Bella Swan, can attest to that.


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Humor, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: G8or Favor8s Read
Chapters: 7 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 10694 Read Count: 4861
[Report This] Published: 26 Oct 2012 Updated: 20 Nov 2012
Reviewer: gatorgrl91 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 30 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

Very good!
:)

Author's Response:

Thank you :) :) : )

Loose Screws by AgoodWITCH Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 505]
Summary:

When your college degree and $2.25 will get you on a ride on a subway, if you weren’t stuck in the Podunk town of Forks, Bella struggles to figure out her adult life. A job that was a last resort, and a feeling she can’t get rid of lead her down a path she never imagined. Forks Hardware is the beginning of that journey, and it’s easy to see that to work there requires a few loose screws.

 

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Angst, Drama, Family, Friendship, Hurt/Comfort,, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: G8or Favor8s Read, Stories I've Already read, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, luv2write finished reads
Chapters: 131 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 86660 Read Count: 173570
[Report This] Published: 23 Nov 2012 Updated: 31 Mar 2013
Reviewer: gatorgrl91 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 11 Nov 2013 Title: Chapter 131: Epilogue

Nice story! So glad that Carlisle and Edward were able to resolve their differences. It made for a much nicer and fulfilling story and helped to soften the blow at the end.
Too cute!
Thx! :)

Summary: Past Featured Story

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"So, you have a kid?" He asks. "And you live with your best friend? Who happens to be a dude?"

I nod, and answer, "That would be correct."

"Isn't that weird?"

I smirk. Wait for it! "No weirder than the fact he's also my son's father." Needless to say, my date comes to a screeching halt.

BPOV. Family/Humor. Drabble.

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Family, Friendship, Humor
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: Happily Ever After
Series: G8or Favor8s Read, Lilyellacullens want to read list!
Chapters: 47 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 24443 Read Count: 102175
[Report This] Published: 08 Dec 2012 Updated: 06 Jan 2013
Reviewer: gatorgrl91 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 04 Jun 2013 Title: Chapter 44: Chapter 44

Awe!!! That was awesome!! Funny, sweet and a little lemony!! Thx!
:)

Summary: Past Featured Story

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Top Banner made by:TeamAllTwilight and book cover banner made by: InkJess Cullen

After graduation, smart mouthed Isabella Swan finds out her father’s set her up in an arranged marriage.  Not wanting to marry Jake and live on the res, she runs. In Chicago, she finds herself jobless—living with Alice.  She seeks a job at a strip club. Edward Cullen calls her a child and tells her no—too bad NO isn’t a word she likes. Birthday story for Silverblossom. AH/ratedM


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Erotica, Friendship, Humor, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: G8or Favor8s Read, To Read , Stories I've read
Chapters: 317 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 57061 Read Count: 1814525
[Report This] Published: 24 Jan 2013 Updated: 11 Apr 2013
Reviewer: gatorgrl91 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 30 May 2013 Title: Chapter 98: Chapter 98

Oh thank you for this story!!! I have had a hard time finding anything worth reading the last week and this is awesome!!! It's probably cause I've read all the good ones on this site and fanfiction though!!! I am addicted to reading--seriously, it is my full time job plus overtime!!! over 300 stories in a year.
If you have any stories you'd rec, please send them my way!!! :)

Author's Response:

Thanks for the wonderful words about this story.  I hoep you keep it on alert as well as us, because we have a lot of stuff coming out and a few more out-takes for this as well.  As for recs...  I will give ya a few links:

I write with this person and she has several stories here at the TWCS: http://www.thewriterscoffeeshop.com/library/viewuser.php?uid=558

Here is the account to get to our joint stories:  http://www.thewriterscoffeeshop.com/library/viewuser.php?uid=51415

Here is one of my favorite authors:  http://www.thewriterscoffeeshop.com/library/viewuser.php?uid=190

Kasi's account:  http://www.thewriterscoffeeshop.com/library/viewuser.php?uid=9581

 

Be sure to check out the many different things that we have posted as well.

Reviewer: gatorgrl91 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 31 May 2013 Title: Chapter 315: Chapter 315

That was awesome!!! Thx! LOVED snarky and feisty Bella and sexy, dirty talking Edward! :)

ps: I've read all that y'all have posted under your names! (I usually don't read one shots as I need more than just a sampling!)
:) I've loved every story and hope y'all write more!!!!
:)

Summary: Past Featured Story

Analeigh is a nurse working at the ICU. She makes the mistake of falling in love with one of her mysterious patients, Jamie. Jamie's life is complicated and has a past that he does not wish to divulge. As they get closer together, they discovered by chance that both of them shared a mutual friend who Analeighe used to have feelings for. However, each of them have their own secrets and pasts that they do not wish to share with people, yet they are brought together in the web of secrets. What is the thing that threatens to tear all of them apart? And who will Analeigh be with together till the very end?


Categories: Drama, Original Fiction
Characters: None
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: G8or Favor8s Read
Chapters: 14 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 114265 Read Count: 375
[Report This] Published: 29 Jan 2013 Updated: 01 Feb 2013
Reviewer: gatorgrl91 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 03 Feb 2014 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 31 till Chapter 40

Ok-I had it wrong. I was thinking Matt and Jamie were "roommates" in jail! And then I thought they were both male prostitutes. But I did suspect that Jamie spent time in jail and probably for murder. So far, I haven't of anything to warrant Jamie's reason for his "dark and evil past". Nor analeigh's secret. ??? :)

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Date: 03 Feb 2014 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 41 till Chapter 45

I wondered abt contraception. I wonder if Jamie knows she's not on anything??? Will anything -good or bad - come from this????

Reviewer: gatorgrl91 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 03 Feb 2014 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 46 till Chapter 50

What is Matt's agenda?? I can't tell. Is there more than meets the eye between Matt and Jamie???

Reviewer: gatorgrl91 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 03 Feb 2014 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 26 till Chapter 30

The plot thickens!!! :)
*so many questions!!!

Reviewer: gatorgrl91 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 03 Feb 2014 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 6 to 10

I love this story!!! Only my 2nd original fic read on TWCS I have only read twilight and fifty shades fanfic for several years, but I'm really glad I ventured out to original fiction! Thx for sharing your talent!

Reviewer: gatorgrl91 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 03 Feb 2014 Title: Chapter 1: Prologue and Chapter 1 - 5

Hmmmm. Matt or Jamie? My vote is for Jamie!! I certainly would not have been as forgiving of Matt--I would have been on the phone to him screaming and yelling!!! :p Tho after 10yrs of not showing up, I think I might see the writing on the wall! Lol
*I'm guessing you are writing Aussie English. I'm American English, and while the queen's English is different, I didn't find it as confusing as Aussie English. :) However, I am enjoying learning the new words, etc, and I am getting more accustomed to reading it!
Thx! Great story!!

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Date: 03 Feb 2014 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 11 to Chapter 15

Well...concerned for Analeigh on a few things. 1). Her job-while I don't get the big deal as he has been released from the hospital and he isn't going back to see her, I'm worried she's too trusting of her coworkers and will get burned. 2). If Jamie has had 3 separate attacks on him, I'm worried-if it's the same person doing the attacks-they will target Analeigh now. 3). I get why she is not sharing info with Katherine, but I'm worried for her. The more Katherine talked, the more I wonder about Jamie. Is he on the up and up???

Awesome!!! Thx!

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Date: 03 Feb 2014 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 16 till Chapter 20

Matt returns!! And the plot thickens! What happened during those missing years. Is that why matt could never meet Analeigh

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Date: 03 Feb 2014 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 21 till Chapter 25

I caught the "another murder"!!! I figured that's what was in the past. Surprised abt Ryan tho. I wonder what's going on between Matt and Jamie and which one, if not both, are evil/bad???

Thx! :)

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Date: 03 Feb 2014 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 51 till Chapter 60

Lots happening in this chapter!! Matt's outburst-not sure what to think abt that. And the kiss. And the stranger's thoughts in italics. All strange things. I didn't think the break in was random. Why take the necklace? What semblance did it have to anything??? I'm glad Katherine is on alert, but is she for Matt as well or just Jamie? Do the police know more and just aren't telling her? I dont think Matt is innocent totally either.
Great story!!! Thx!!! :)

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Date: 03 Feb 2014 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 61 till Chapter 70

What could Analeigh's secret be??? I had a thought..what if Ryan is Matt's son???? :p
Glad Jamie and Analeigh worked their stuff out and Ryan is with them.
Bottom line: I don't trust Matt! ;)

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Date: 03 Feb 2014 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 71 till Chapter 80

Her secret was as I suspected. Now Matt on the other hand...wow! Heartless jerk. I figured out who the "assailant" was too. I'm not quite certain of the motivation on Matt's part. What's up with Rachel?
So good!!! :)

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Date: 04 Feb 2014 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 81 till Chapter 84

So good!!! Matt=evil!!! I'm surprised they just "let it go"!!! I hope that doesn't come back to bite them!
Glad they got married too. Now if they can just get a baby!!! So sad she lost it. :(

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Date: 04 Feb 2014 Title: Chapter 14: Epilogue

Awesome!!! Excellent read!!! Thank you for sharing your talent! I saw you only have 1 story posted her, but if you have them on other sites, please let me know. I dont think you can private messenger people on TWCS, but you can on ffn. I'm under same pen name-so contact me there or reply to this review! I'd LOVE to read more of your stuf!!!! :)

Author's Response:

Hi

THank you for liking the story. I have another story - Picture of Love. That used to be here but I removed it as someone contacted me about publishing it and I had to take it down. If you are interested, PM me and I can advice you on where to purchase the copy

 

Kidnap101 by TrueEnglishRose Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 626]
Summary: Past Featured Story

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Bella Swan has just one mission; to save her childhood best friend from the clutches of Hollywood. She's got her work cut out for her, but she'll do it, even if she has to do things that she really doesn't want to. Written purely for laughs.


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: G8or Favor8s Read, Edwards Paradox Completed Favourites, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, J's Read and Loved Stories
Chapters: 64 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 11080 Read Count: 119895
[Report This] Published: 26 Apr 2013 Updated: 04 May 2013
Reviewer: gatorgrl91 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 22 Jun 2013 Title: Chapter 64: Chapter 64

Loved it!! Bella's humor was epic! Would love to c more!!
:)

Higher by SexylexiCullen Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 268]
Summary: Past Featured Story

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Summer of 1994: Dial-up internet. Pagers. Walkmans. AOL chat rooms. O.J in a white Bronco. And blazingly hot weather in Brooklyn where eighteen-year-old Bella Swan is filling her days making ice cream sundaes before she starts college. But one long night – full of Ecstasy, subway rides, dark dance clubs, and a boy she doesn't want to stay away from – may change everything. ExB, mostly canon. AH. HEA. 

Banners by KrisMkyStitch and Deebelle1

 


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: G8or Favor8s Read, Stories I've read
Chapters: 40 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 155380 Read Count: 127111
[Report This] Published: 01 May 2013 Updated: 01 May 2013
Reviewer: gatorgrl91 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 25 Jun 2013 Title: Chapter 40: Epilogue

Awesome! As usual, another epic story from you!!! I'm glad Edward never got caught. That was my fear in Riders as well as here! I read this in one sitting! Sooooo good! Thx!
:)

Mafia Princess by tufano79 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 2545]
Summary: Past Featured Story

Isabella del Cigno (21) is the daughter of the infamous mob boss, Charlie del Cigno (Cigno means swan in Italian). He's ruthless, cunning and deadly. The FBI wants to put an end to him but can't ever find enough evidence linking to him back to various crimes. Isabella is just as cunning and deadly but she lives the life of the mafia elite - fast cars, endless money and anything her heart desires, except freedom from the tyranny of her father. Charlie doesn't want his only child to be killed by his arch enemies, the Volturi, so Isabella is closely guarded.

Edward Cullen (26) is a special agent in the FBI. He's chosen to infiltrate the del Cigno Syndicate of the mob. He works his way through the ranks and is eventually hired as Bella's bodyguard. Initially, he can't stand Bella - he thinks she's a whiny, self-centered, enabled b*tch. Then, she gets shot at and Edward knows he was chosen for this mission for a specific reason. Yes, he wants to bring down the del Cigno Syndicate but he must save Isabella, who has a secret of her own...

How can Edward fulfill his obligation for the FBI but still keep the girl?

MP

 

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Mafia Princess

 

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Romance, Suspense/Thriller
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: G8or Favor8s Read, Stories I've Already read, Edwards Paradox Completed Favourites, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, Dumbi's Most Wanted, Bella's Must Reads!, Stories I've read, Tufano79 Stories
Chapters: 201 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 240258 Read Count: 1130202
[Report This] Published: 30 May 2013 Updated: 12 Nov 2013
Reviewer: gatorgrl91 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 18 Nov 2013 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

Me likey!! Me likey a lot!! So glad I waited till it was completed because I wouldn't have wanted to wait for an update!!!
:)

Summary: Past Featured Story

Detectives Edward, Emmett and Jasper are on the case of a serial killer roaming the U-Dub campus. With their sisters on campus, can they keep them safe and do their jobs effectively? What happens when feelings begin to change for Edward and Jasper? Will they be too late to save the girls they love? And who is that Killer in the Shadows? AH, canon couples.

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Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Suspense/Thriller
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Finished, G8or Favor8s Read, luv2write finished reads, Bella's Must Reads!
Chapters: 23 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 26659 Read Count: 45618
[Report This] Published: 03 Aug 2013 Updated: 21 Oct 2013
Reviewer: gatorgrl91 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 05 Nov 2013 Title: Chapter 23: Epilogue

Short and sweet! I love the way you write, so I prefer the longer ones! But I'll take what I can get! Lol!
Thanks for sharing your talent. :)

Summary:

 

Fourth Addition to the Storm Series. This is a compilation of future-takes that follow Riders on the Storm. We'll hear from Damion, Kylie, and Sonny. We'll get glimpses into their future, adult lives. And every Storm character will be present, including Edward and Bella. Romance, Humor, Drama, and slight angst will ensue, along with other genres. *Will Update Quickly*


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward, Other Misc Char or Pairings
Genre: Drama, Family, Humor, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Storm Series, J's Read and Loved Stories, My favs past present and future
Chapters: 18 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 95666 Read Count: 106202
[Report This] Published: 20 Oct 2013 Updated: 20 Oct 2013
Reviewer: gatorgrl91 Signed
Date: 15 Nov 2013 Title: Chapter 8: Kylie Chapter 2

Lex-u have done it again!!! U made me fall in love with Kylie!!! She was such a little whiny brat in Riders!! And with the previous chapters talking about Kylie blowing thru some money, I figured she'd be the same, and I dreaded her POV, but I love how she has matured! I also can remember feeling like how she is feeling right now after I had my second child!!! While she was a really good baby, I was still overwhelmed and wondered if I'd ever get things down pat enough to survive! Fortunately, I did! Although now, lunch can be long gone and I'll remember I didn't feed my kids...and they are 11 & 14!!! Lol! :)

Reviewer: gatorgrl91 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 16 Nov 2013 Title: Chapter 12: Santino Chapter 2

Yum!!! Sonny is my fav!!! :)
Awesome as always!

Reviewer: gatorgrl91 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 16 Nov 2013 Title: Chapter 18: Santino Chapter 8

I'm stuck on repeat saying, "Awesome, awesome,
awesome!" But it's true!!!
Sonny is the best and my fave out of the whole bunch...and Maggie! Don't get me wrong, I love all the others, and you do a kick-ass job of writing them. They each have unique personalities, perspectives on things. The internal dialogue they have sets the stage for their mood and what the scene may be. I feel like I am actually in their head!
Thank you, again, for continuing my all time favorite series, The Storm!!!
Love you Lexi!
:)