Reviews by helese
Summary:

In a world that is rapidly being overrun by zombies, a group people from different walks of life converge, while learning to live and love amongst the ruins of their old lives. AH. Language, gore, humor, lemons. Indie TwiFic Award Nominee! stories/1619/images/Love_and_Zombies_banner.jpg


Categories: Non-Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Jasper
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02 Bella/Jasper stories
Chapters: 22 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 61045 Read Count: 8473
[Report This] Published: 15 Feb 2010 Updated: 16 Apr 2010
Reviewer: helese Signed
Date: 03 May 2010 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2 Running is Sometimes the Best Option

I am LOVING this story! I can't wait to find out if all our characters eventually meet up somewhere. 

Thank you so much for sharing!



Author's Response: glad you like, thanks for reading!

Reviewer: helese Signed
Date: 03 May 2010 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3 Mad Scientists, Dogs, and a Hummer

Yay! Jasper and Alice met Rosalie. 

Zombie Survival Handbook, awesome!



Author's Response: :-) yes it is!

Reviewer: helese Signed
Date: 03 May 2010 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4 On the Road Again

Poor Emmett. 

I really like your Rosalie. And Alice is too funny. 



Author's Response: I'm glad that you like them, it's difficult to make likable characters in a world like this one

Reviewer: helese Signed
Date: 03 May 2010 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5 Spoons Annoy Me

"Amorous endeavors can be contemplated on when we're not about to die!" Carlisle is too cute. 

Poor Ben and Angela, but jeez, she could have waited until she helped find a cure, and then shot herself. I think Ben would be disappointed. 

Yay, now Emmett, Carlisle and Esme are together and so are Rosalie, Alice, Jasper and Edward! Now we just need Bella and the two groups together. 

"... currently AWOL on account of the zombie apocalypse." I love Emmett.



Author's Response: the characters just kind of took off on me lol

Reviewer: helese Signed
Date: 03 May 2010 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6 To WallyWorld We Go!

WooHoo! The whole gang is together (right?) and there's already some electricity between E&B and it sounds like I get to read about some massive zombie killin in the chapter. I'm stoked! 



Author's Response: there's always some zombie killing to do!

Reviewer: helese Signed
Date: 03 May 2010 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7 Incoming!

Ugh, why'd you have to go and make Tanya all human? I actually feel bad for her. Obviously she should have been more supportive of Edward's career, but I think she knows that, and I doubt she could help feeling lonely. She made one mistake and Edward won't even think about forgiving her... 



Author's Response: Tanya deserved a break in this story, since I was doing things so differently with a lot of the others

Reviewer: helese Signed
Date: 03 May 2010 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8 Game Plans

I'm just loving the shit out of this story. I sometimes like to imagine what I would should some crazy 28 Days Later shit happen and, of course, all the awesome stuff I would raid to survive on is like the first stop. 

I can tell you put a lot of thought into this story and it really shows. 



Author's Response: yeah, I put so much thought into some of this that it scared readers off lol

Reviewer: helese Signed
Date: 03 May 2010 Title: Chapter 10: Luck is Always Two-Faced

Oh that's just too sad.

I don't see how Esme can be saved. People die, then become zombies, right? Vera was bitten, her heart stopped, she died, then she became reanimated. I don't see how anyone can be brought back to life, especially after their blood has coagulated and junk.

Sheesh, why'd you have to go and kill sweet Esme? 



Author's Response: I'm sorry hun, but that's a horror story for you

Reviewer: helese Signed
Date: 03 May 2010 Title: Chapter 15: Two Months

OMG! Seriously sick. I fucking loved it. 



Author's Response: I know! *evil laugh*

Reviewer: helese Signed
Date: 04 May 2010 Title: Chapter 16: Where There Is Smoke....................

Finally the peeps are going to find out about Carlisle's so very dirty secret (ick!)

People seriously asked you to change your story? That's f*cking rude. I'll admit I was creeped out by Carlisle and his necrophilia, but that's what horror's all about! I loved it!



Author's Response: yes, I had a few people tell me that they weren't going to read my stuff anymore if I didn't make the changes they wanted

Reviewer: helese Signed
Date: 04 May 2010 Title: Chapter 17: To Hell with Waldo, Where's Edward?

I think you did great. I didn't see a vaccine coming to be honest, and I definitely didn't think Carlisle was going to be eaten by his dead lover.

And Charlie's POV was too cute. He's such a sap. 



Author's Response: I heart Charlie lol

Reviewer: helese Signed
Date: 04 May 2010 Title: Chapter 18: What Can Go Wrong Will

"Dun dun dun. I know, crazy place to end it, but I had to save some good stuff for later! :-)"

Woohoo! I love good stuff!



Author's Response: lol happy you enjoyed!

Reviewer: helese Signed
Date: 05 May 2010 Title: Chapter 21: Flight

I kind of wish you'd put the story on hiatus and let it go a little longer when you were up to it again. I've really been enjoying it and hate to see it end, but it's your call, obviously. 

I really hope Edward and Bella aren't dead... :(

In general I hate reading unhappy endings, but I can totally respect an author who's willing to kill main characters for the plot. Not many are willing to do that so it always comes as a surprise when one dies. 

Regardless of the outcome, if you're happy with the ending that's all that really matters. If you're not, you can always change it or write a sequel (if you haven't killed everyone by the end). (*nudge, nudge, wink, wink*)



Author's Response: I'm sorry hun

Reviewer: helese Signed
Date: 05 May 2010 Title: Chapter 22: Five Years Later.....

So I'm bummed about Bella and Edward being dead but that's just because I'm a sap for those two. I would have loved to read more about the settlement and whatever happened with the vaccinations and the zombies. Thank you again for taking the time to share your story with the fandom. This is definitely one of favs, I've never before taken the time to post reviews on two sites just because I think the story deserves it. I really liked that you followed the different characters and didn't focus on just one. Those stories are fine, but I think you did a great job making this story more about a community of survivors rather than one person or couple surviving. If I could offer any advice, it would be this: Your characters have their own personalities but I think you could express them more, especially when writing in so many different points of view. Many of the character's voices sounded much the same. Thanks again, I really enjoyed it, H



Author's Response: sorry I let you down

Summary:

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Slash: Jasper is a privileged high school senior. A fight between his friend and a "blue collar" student leads to a surprising discovery about someone he's lusted after for a long time. Written for the Support Stacie Auction. Explicit sexuality/language.


Categories: Non-Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Edward/Jasper (slash)
Genre: Slash
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 6252 Read Count: 639
[Report This] Published: 16 Feb 2010 Updated: 16 Feb 2010
Reviewer: helese Signed
Date: 17 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Of Slums and Sultans

Very, very hot and still sweet. I seriously loved it. 

Thank you so much for sharing!

Edward's Clan by Greenaway Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 1470]
Summary: Past Featured Story

 

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**WARNING - THIS STORY CONTAINS VIOLENCE, SEXUAL MATERIAL, OFFENSIVE LANGUAGE AND OTHER CONTENT THAT MAY DISTURB SOME PEOPLE. YOU HAVE BEEN WARNED.**

Edward Cullen is the leader of The Clan, a fierce and deadly group of assassins for hire and he knows nothing besides violence and blood. When he meets Bella, he begins to imagine that there might be more for him out there.

A dark journey of love, power and death.


All Human, Cannon Pairings and TEAM EDWARD

Please be warned, this story gets pretty graphic later on.

 

A special thank you to evilangel813 for the awesome banner.


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: To Read (Geddy)
Chapters: 35 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 234131 Read Count: 195569
[Report This] Published: 23 Feb 2010 Updated: 11 Jun 2012
Reviewer: helese Signed
Date: 09 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 1: First Impressions are Forever

Thanks a ton for getting back to me. I'm a little sensitive but anything with a cruel (to Bella) Edward just skeeves me the f*ck out. 

So, yeah, thanks again for replying to my question and for being so honest, I really appreciate it. As you can see I decided to give it a try and so far I'm liking it. 

Thanks a ton for sharing your story with the fandom! 

Reviewer: helese Signed
Date: 09 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 2: Mothers, Fathers and Everything in Between

I want to believe that Esme really loves Edward, but she feels she's failed him because he's followed his father's footsteps, but rather than blame Carlisle, whom she obviously adores, she blames Edward and has to essentially sedate herself to keep the reality of her situation from pulling her under. The opposite of love isn't hate, it's indifference.  Maybe I'm just an optimist? 

I guess it's a good sign that Edward's ready for a change; it makes change that much easier. 

Reviewer: helese Signed
Date: 09 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 3: Becoming Whole Again

aw, these chapters seem to go by so fast. :(

Assassinward found love at first sight?

Is assassin spelt right? It looks weird when I type it. ass-ass-in. ?

Reviewer: helese Signed
Date: 09 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 4: Introducing The Demon

I'm scared for the next chapter. I'll just have to see how I do. I'll probably read it tomorrow rather than right before bedtime. *turns on night-light and snuggles up to her teddybear*

j/k

You'd think Carlisle would be a little more understanding, he is apparently madly in love with Esme, right? Why can't Edward be in love too? I can see that it's risky to keep her around, but sheesh!

First by esglee Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 7]
Summary:

As Edward prepares for Jasper’s arrival on the day after their high school graduation, he reminisces about their relationship and all of the ‘firsts’ they’ve shared. Rated NC-17 for mature content, including slash. AH, E/J.

 

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Categories: Twilight, All Human
Characters: None
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 10238 Read Count: 633
[Report This] Published: 26 Feb 2010 Updated: 26 Feb 2010
Reviewer: helese Signed
Date: 17 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Wow, very well done. You did a great job demonstrating the "slow burn". 

 

Thank you so much for sharing!



Author's Response:

Thank you for the lovely review.  One of my goals was to show the build up of the boys' relationship and not just jump into their first time.  I'm glad you enjoyed it.

Thanks for taking the time to read and review :)

Summary:

 

Edward and James run a private detective company. When a beautiful woman comes in with a case, these two may be in for more than they can handle. Set in the 1930's. Edward/Bella James/Victoria


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 8 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 12312 Read Count: 1954
[Report This] Published: 01 Mar 2010 Updated: 01 Mar 2010
Reviewer: helese Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 29 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8-What the dick?

Hey there. I read this story over on ff.net and saw it over with only 2 reviews so far (!?!) so I thought I'd send you a review to let you know, again, how much I liked this story and thanks for posting it here as well. 



Author's Response:

Thank you, you are so sweet. And I am glad you liked this one. It was one of my favorites to write.

The Sex Talk by Jennmc75 Rated: T starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 20]
Summary:

Get inside Charlie's head and see what he was thinking during the "sex talk" that takes place in chapter 2 of Eclipse.  My entry for the Twilight Novel Novice Eclipse Fan Fiction Challenge.  Rated T.

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Charlie/None
Genre: Drama, One-Shot, Young Adult
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: For the Love of Charlie
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 2170 Read Count: 873
[Report This] Published: 14 Apr 2010 Updated: 14 Apr 2010
Reviewer: helese Signed
Date: 16 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 1: The Sex Talk - One Shot

Too cute! I love Charlie too. Thanks so much for sharing!



Author's Response:

I'm so glad you liked my interpretation of Charlie :)

Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!

~Jenn

Love and Obsession by michelly Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 284]
Summary: Past Featured Story

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Things were just starting to calm down for Emmett and Bella since the death of their parents, when the new kid James comes to town and shakes up Bella’s world.

Her crush had turned into love, his love turned into obsession. His obsession became Bella’s nightmare.

B/Jms at first then B/E


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: G8or Favor8s Read
Chapters: 30 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 230732 Read Count: 36438
[Report This] Published: 17 Apr 2010 Updated: 15 Nov 2011
Reviewer: helese Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: 25 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 26

Sorry I haven't reviewed until the 26th chapter... I just read your a/n at the beginning of chapter 27 and thought I'd leave you a review. I'm glad you didn't let those emails stop you from writing. This is a pretty long story and you've obviously dedicated a ton of time and effort to it, don't let the opinions of a few stop you from doing what you love! 

This is by far my favorite chapter so far! It's very suspenseful and I never saw your Aro character coming. 

Thank you so much for sharing your story with the fandom!

Reviewer: helese Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: 25 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 27: Chapter 27

I think this is one of the best creepy James. I'm so sad there's only one more chapter left for now. L&O has become one of my top favorites and I can't wait for more!

Thanks again for taking the time to share your story with the fandom.