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A Twin Thing by Yulliah Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstar [Reviews - 43]
Summary:

When Jasper finds out he has a sister, a twin sister no less, he can't wait to meet her. He soon finds himself on a plane to London to do just that. But when the doors to the meeting hall open and he finds himself staring into a pair of emerald green eyes, he knows he should turn around and go home immediately.


Categories: Non-Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Edward/Jasper (slash)
Genre: Angst, Family, Hurt/Comfort,, Romance, Slash
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 18 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 63501 Read Count: 5831
[Report This] Published: 12 Jun 2012 Updated: 20 Nov 2012
Reviewer: holz1313666 Signed starstar
Date: 18 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I love the start to this story.

I feel so sorry for Jasper and everything that has happened to him so far. I hope finding Rosalie can bring him some comfort and happiness.



Author's Response:

:D Thank you so much!

Love,

Yull

Reviewer: holz1313666 Signed starstarhalf-star
Date: 18 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

Oh, Jasper! What have you got yourself in to.

I wish that hugging his sister wasn't such a strange thing for him, but hopefully in time it becomes easier. Although, with Jasper's blossoming feelings about Edward I have a feeling things are going to to complicated.



Author's Response:

Heya,

Thank you for your read and review!
Well, it has all the tools for turning this into a really awkward situation, I just hope I can make it live up to everyone's expectations! :)

Love,
Yull

Reviewer: holz1313666 Signed starstarhalf-star
Date: 25 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

Edward is seriously sending mixed messages. One minute he seems to flirty with Jasper  the next he seems to be all "Oh, my! I think Jasper likes me - I need to go act all weird now."

Rosalie's strong reaction to Edward's failed attempt at a joke really shocked me, I didn't expect it of her.



Author's Response:

Heya,

 

Thank you for the review!

Yeah, Rose's reaction was a strong one, I think it's mostly her protective side towards Jasper though... She isn't really violent...
And Edward SERIOUSLY needs to get his act together!

 

Love,

Jules

Reviewer: holz1313666 Signed starstarstarhalf-star
Date: 30 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

I loved this chapter so much!

Poor Jasper having to play football, it's hell on earth! No joke.

If I were Jasper I would be straight into that shower with all those naked men - you'd have to drag me back out, especially if there is a naked, wet soapy Edward involved.

I'm dying to know what the phone conversation between Edward and Rosalie was about. I think it involved a lot more than Rosalie delivering the news that her Nana died.

I think Edward has a secret and I really want to know what it is!



Author's Response:

Oh I despise playing footy with vehemence!

TY so much for the read and review!

 

Love,

Jules

Reviewer: holz1313666 Signed starstarstar
Date: 11 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

I love seeing protective Jasper in the hospital.

I feel really sorry for Rosalie in this chapter, her grandmother just died, her boyfriend is a bit of an arse, and then her brother leaves her. I understand why Jasper left, and I feel sorry for him too, but at this moment it's Rosalie I feel the most for.



Author's Response:

Heya,

 

Thank you for reading and reviewing!

Jasper isn't a push over when it comes to protecting the ones he loves... :D

And yeah, wasn't the smartest move to leave, and Rosalie sure deserves some sympathy right now...

Love,

Jules

Reviewer: holz1313666 Signed starstarstar
Date: 14 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

All of Jasper's memories made me so sad! I just wanted to give him the biggest hug and never let go. He's a sad soul, but I'm happy he's decided to get back on track.



Author's Response:

Heya,

Thank you so much for the read and reveiw!

Aye, if I could cuddle him better, I would... :(

 

Love,

Jules

Reviewer: holz1313666 Signed starstarstar
Date: 21 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

Glad to see Jasper working on his problems.

Can't wait for the next chapter!



Author's Response:

Heya,

 

Thank you! 

 

Love,

Jules

Reviewer: holz1313666 Signed starstarstarhalf-star
Date: 26 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

Jasper definitely needs a hug. The breakdown he had during the session with his doctor where he hated his inner child broke my heart.

The letters from Charlotte to her children showed Jasper exactly what a loving mother is and it's so sad thathe missed out on that.

I'm glad Rosalie and Jasper are really starting to communicate.



Author's Response:

Heya,

Thank you!

Yeah, they both missed out on a great mother, though Rosalie ended up well, Jasper really got cheated!

Love,

Jules

Reviewer: holz1313666 Signed starstarstarstar
Date: 30 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

What are you doing to me!

You can't leave the chapter there and expect me to wait patiently. I may go crazy waiting for the next chapter...



Author's Response:

No, no, noooo!

Don't go crazy! Though I can reccomand a really goot therapist! *wiggles eyebrows*

thank you for the read and review!

Love,

Jules