Reviews by brookie1
Wisp by judo_lin Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 871]
Summary: Past Featured Story

wisp

 

Edward wins more than he bargained for at what was supposed to be a friendly poker game. AH.


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: None
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Drive's Stories to read that are Completed and Not completed, Can't wait for an update, My Favorite Stories, My favs past present and future
Chapters: 63 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 304154 Read Count: 221097
[Report This] Published: 06 Jun 2012 Updated: 23 Nov 2014
Reviewer: brookie1 Signed
Date: 27 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18

rose is also doing good to befriend her and interest her in other things. she is so special to rose. and more to edward i love this story

Reviewer: brookie1 Signed
Date: 28 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19

poor bella this is such a interesting plot . i throughly enjoy and look forward to each update

Reviewer: brookie1 Signed
Date: 30 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20

oh man i love this story .and i know it is stressful to wait for updates. it is like being interupted while watching a movie at the most interesting time

Reviewer: brookie1 Signed
Date: 12 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 26

absolutely adorable this is the upmost beautiful, emotional ,amazing story i have ever read.

A Slow Boil by kts Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 190]
Summary: Past Featured Story

a slow boil

Bella's an exchange student hoping to find a job to keep herself employed for the summer, so that she can stay on at an exclusive University. Her best job prospect is a part-time housekeeping position with one Mr. Cullen.


Categories: All Human
Characters: None
Genre: Humor, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: G8or Favor8s Read
Chapters: 25 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 78922 Read Count: 59640
[Report This] Published: 08 Jun 2012 Updated: 01 Jul 2012
Reviewer: brookie1 Signed
Date: 12 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 25

this story is fantastic .i could not stop reading until i was done .you are to be praised for your talent on writing this well written story

A Mother´s Advice by maymay74 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 249]
Summary:

Bella met Edward. Then, after a few dates, she got pregnant and married him. But now they re fighting against their family and more people who just don't want them together. Bella feels she's repeating her parents story. Would a package from the past be the help she needs?


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 42 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 116319 Read Count: 38380
[Report This] Published: 09 Jun 2012 Updated: 15 Mar 2016
Reviewer: brookie1 Signed
Date: 28 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17

sneaky bastard i don't trust him either



Author's Response:

YES, NICE TO KNOW EDWARD IS REBELLONG

Reviewer: brookie1 Signed
Date: 09 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

PERFECT HOOK UP THEY ARE REALLY IN TO EACH OTHER



Author's Response:

I'D LIKE TO THINK IT WAS LUST AT FIRST SIGHT

Reviewer: brookie1 Signed
Date: 09 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2 The next day

OH MAN I AM GLAD DADDY CARLISLE IS NOT MY FATHER



Author's Response:

YEAH, HE ISN'T 'FATHER OF THE YEAR' MATERIAL

Reviewer: brookie1 Signed
Date: 09 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

THE PRINCE FINDS HIS PRINCESS IDENTIDY



Author's Response:

YEP, DESPITE THE BAD DRAWING

Reviewer: brookie1 Signed
Date: 09 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

OH POOR GUY THAT HAS TO HURT. BUT I MUST SAY WHY DO THEY CALL THEM BLUE BALLS ? DO THEY ACTUALLY TURN BLUE? OR DO THEY JUST SWIVAL UP IN A NICE TIGHT SACK ?



Author's Response:

IN MY OPINION, MEN MAKE SUCH DRAMA FOR A LITTLE UNCOMFORTABLE SITUATION ;)

Reviewer: brookie1 Signed
Date: 09 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

THEY ARE CLOSE AS A FAMILY I AM GLAD TO SEE THAT



Author's Response:

THEY BECOME CLOSER RECENTLY, BUT STILL IT'S GREAT

Reviewer: brookie1 Signed
Date: 09 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

OH GOIOSDNESS WHAT JUST HAPPENED JAZZ SAID WE NEED TO LEAVE NOW



Author's Response:

JASPER KNOWS HOW TO KILL A MOMENT

Reviewer: brookie1 Signed
Date: 09 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

THIS IS GREAT



Author's Response:

I'M GLAD YOU LIKE IT, THANKS

Reviewer: brookie1 Signed
Date: 09 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

WAY TO GO EDWARD BE STRONG AND LET YOUR DAD KNOW YOU ARE A MAN AND HANDLE YOUR OWN STUFF



Author's Response:

YEAH, EDWARD DESERVE IT

Reviewer: brookie1 Signed
Date: 09 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

DID THEY TAKE THE TEST TO TRY AND SAY THAT THEY ARE PREG BYCARLISLE OR ONEOF THE CULLENS



Author's Response:

MMM, LET'S SAY YOU'LL FIND OUT SOON. AND IT WILL BE FUNNY ;)

Reviewer: brookie1 Signed
Date: 09 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

A cullen baby wow it will surely be cute



Author's Response:

IT'S GONNA BE THE CUTEST BABY

Reviewer: brookie1 Signed
Date: 09 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11

oh god bella's mom is really sick



Author's Response:

SADLY, THIS IS TRUE. BUT IT'S THEIR CHANECE TO RECONNECT

Reviewer: brookie1 Signed
Date: 09 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12

oh how wonderful reunited mother and daughjter forgiveness when practiced is great



Author's Response:

QTHANKS FOR READING AND REVIEWING EVERY CHAPTER,  FIRST, I REALLY LIKE TO THANK YOU, FEEL FREE TO ASK OR SHARE YOUR IDEAS OR ANYTHING YOU WANT.  SECOND, YOU'RE RIGHT WITH FORGIVENESS,  IT WILL BE GREAT BOTH OF THEM

Reviewer: brookie1 Signed
Date: 10 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13

ABSOLUTELY AWSOME



Author's Response:

THANK YOU VERY MUCH



Author's Response:

THANK YOU VERY MUCH

Reviewer: brookie1 Signed
Date: 13 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14

oh how i love nosy people so predictable. this story is fantastic



Author's Response:

THANK YOU

Reviewer: brookie1 Signed
Date: 15 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15

poor carlisle what a shock hope eleazar survives the heart attack. a daughter like tonya could give any boby a HEART ATTACK FROM STRESS.



Author's Response:

DONT WORRY, ELEAZAR IS GONNA BE OK. 

Reviewer: brookie1 Signed
Date: 24 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16

elioping is forb the best no jake no long engagement and who would say no to edward



Author's Response:

YOU TOOK THE WORDS FROM MY MOUTH :D

Reviewer: brookie1 Signed
Date: 02 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18

hurray i am so glad that carlisle was detained so bella aqnd edward can get married



Author's Response:

YES, CARLISLE JUST HAVE TO ACCEPT IT

Reviewer: brookie1 Signed
Date: 05 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19

amazing themost wonderful moment was when they anounced them man and wife . that means there will be juicy moments to come after this



Author's Response:

YEAH! NOW SOME SEXY TIMES WILL COME FOR THEM ;)

Reviewer: brookie1 Signed
Date: 16 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20

jake's appoligy letter 

 i don't like either of their daddy's.

edward is so kind and he loves her and will protect her and their child.



Author's Response:

EDWARD IS SO SWEET, HE WILL MAKE EVERUTHING FOR BELLA

Reviewer: brookie1 Signed
Date: 29 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21

i don't think charlie murdered jake      

edwards and bella's time alone must have felt great because when they got back home look at what was waiting lots of phone calls

 

wonderwhat they are having i can't waitto read aboput the first time edward or bella hold their child it will be amazing



Author's Response:

OH NO, CHARLIE DIDN'T KILL JAKE, HE LEFT TOWN. IT WAS ALL PRODUCT OF ROSE'S AND LEAH'SIMAGINATION (AND BOOZE)IT WILL TAKE SOME TIME TO GET TO KNOW THEIR BABY BUT IT WILL BE TOO CUTE THANKS FOR READ AND REVIEW

Summary: Past Featured Story

Bella Swan works as a nurse at Cook County Hospital in the ER. She's older and desperate for love. It's hindered by her shy personality and plump body. Her father, whom she lives with, teases her relentlessly for being fat and single.

Edward Cullen, thirty-three, is hired as a doctor in the ER. He's getting over a divorce. He moved to Chicago to be closer to his family: sister, Rosalie, and brother, Jasper. Rosalie is younger than Edward by ten years and is struggling with an eating disorder brought on by a heinous rape of her ex-boyfriend. Jasper, twenty-seven, is finishing up his doctorate in history.

Bella is charmed by this new doctor in the ER. He's kind and thinks about his patients and maintains a friendly rapport with the nurses and orderlies. Edward is intrigued by the sad nurse who does her job efficiently but doesn't have a sparkle in her eyes.

Will she allow Dr. Cullen into her life or will she let her insecurities get in the way of her happiness. Perhaps, Dr. Feelgood can write her a prescription. A prescription for love...

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Erotica, Friendship, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: I Whitlock's read , Drive's Stories to read that are Completed and Not completed, Can't wait for an update, Stories Read by CNYBella, Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiHu, Stories I've Already read, Edwards Paradox Completed Favourites, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, My Favorite Stories, Dumbi's Most Wanted, J's Read and Loved Stories, Bella 84's To Be Read List, Stories I've read, My favs past present and future , Read & Enjoyed, Tufano79 Stories
Chapters: 35 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 331720 Read Count: 419235
[Report This] Published: 24 Jun 2012 Updated: 02 Aug 2013
Reviewer: brookie1 Signed
Date: 17 Feb 2013 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24

yes this was some nice moments and we can't leave poor rose hanging to long she needs this trial over

Love is Strange by MarieCarro Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 301]
Summary: Past Featured Story

 

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Bella Swan and Edward Cullen live in the small town of Ligonier in Pennsylvania. They've been best friends since they were six years old, and not much can keep them apart. Bella wants to leave small-town life behind, while Edward is fine with whatever, but that's not the only complication in their relationship. What happens when they fall in love ... with each other?

 


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Angst, Drama, Friendship, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Stories I've Already read, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, Misstoria's Stories to Read
Chapters: 43 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 142307 Read Count: 86912
[Report This] Published: 02 Jul 2012 Updated: 08 Jun 2021
Reviewer: brookie1 Signed
Date: 03 Jul 2012 Title: Love is Strange

i'm hooked i need more

Save Tonight by ahommel Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 49]
Summary:

AU - It's been nine months since Edward fled the woods in Forks, fled from her for her. Each day his willpower crumbles a little more, feeling the insistent pull to return to her side. Upon returning, a passionate night will erupt between them.

Bella and Edward


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Angst, Erotica
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 7 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 16688 Read Count: 6795
[Report This] Published: 11 Jul 2012 Updated: 26 Nov 2012
Reviewer: brookie1 Signed
Date: 07 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1: Everything

OH MY GOSH BVELLA HE CAME BACK WAKE UP

Reviewer: brookie1 Signed
Date: 07 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2: All Fall Down

AMAZING SIMPLY AWSOME

All Alone by robsessed73 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 792]
Summary: Past Featured Story

All Alone

I am a 16 Year old girl from a small town in Forks. I have a loving family and the greatest twin brother. My life changed forever the day I won a radio contest to attend a film premiere and meet my actor crush, Edward Masen. After spending one night with him my life will never be the same again. Rated M for language and lemons.

 

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: Happily Ever After
Series: Stories I've Already read
Chapters: 35 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 145027 Read Count: 167465
[Report This] Published: 25 Aug 2012 Updated: 14 Jun 2014
Reviewer: brookie1 Signed
Date: 29 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 1

i love this story the look on lauren's face will be priceless



Author's Response: Thank you for the review. I hope that you continue to enjoy this story. Here is a teaser for chapter 2 Esme kept looking at me while she put about 4 pancakes onto my plate. I just couldn't get the smile off my face. "I would be smiling too if I won the kind of prize that you won" she laughed. Just then Alice came running in wearing the latest fashion. "Mum, can I use daddy's photocopier?" Alice's father was the head of the pediatric unit in Forks generel hospital. "Yes dear" Esme replied. Alice ran into her father's office with a note or letter in her hand. What is the little pixie up to now? She came back 5 minutes later with a small bag filled with copies of the note or letter. "Ali, what is all this?" "Well Bella, you know just as well as I do that Lauren is going to try and get out of this bet. So what I did was photo copy the agreement 200 times to either hang up on the lockers or hand them out to anyone that will take them, just so that she knows that she has to go through with it. Otherwise she will be labeled a coward, she smirked obviously pleased with herself. I was surprised. I can't believe that I have never thought of that. It was beyond brilliant. "OK you little pixie, lets get to school and put this plan into action," I grinned.

Reviewer: brookie1 Signed
Date: 29 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 1: Prologue

amazing

Reviewer: brookie1 Signed
Date: 18 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 5

I AM AMAZED HOW WELL THIS STORY CAPTIVATES ME. I AM NOT ONE TO EASILY GIVE IN TO EMOTIONS. I CRIED, WAS OVER JOYED, AT HOW HAPPY BELLA WAS. THEN I WAS SADDEN BY HIS THOUGHTS OF LEAVING HER.I WAS THRILLED WHEN IT WAS A MISUNDERSTANDING. I THEN WAS HAPPY AGAIN .BUT AFTER THE 6 A.M. CALL . IS HE USING HER? IF HE IS I HOPE EMMITT STUMPS HIS SORRY ASS.WHO IS THE GIRL THAT CALLED HIM?

 

I LOVED HER NOT LETTER JESSICA TAKE ADVANTAGE OF HER.

 

A TEASER WOULD BE GREAT ...PLEASE



Author's Response: hi thanks for the review. I love reading them and i'm so happy for the response I get from this story. enjoy the rest of the story here is a teaser for chapter 6 I went out the door and started banging on Jasper's door. He opened up wearing only his boxer shorts. There was a smell of sex coming from the room and I felt like gagging. "Jazz you've got to help me. It's Bella," I said desperatly. He looked at me with a look of anger and worry on his face. You could easily see that he was very protective of her. "What the fuck did you do now. Wait, I better put some clothes on and come out and join you. I wouldn't want to be in your shoes when Alice wakes up," he spat and closed the door.

Reviewer: brookie1 Signed
Date: 08 Sep 2012 Title: All Alone

ABSOLUTELY DREAMY



Author's Response: hi. thanks for your review. I love reading them all. I hope that you continue to enjoy the story. here is a teaser for chapter 5 "Bella, what is wrong? Did you just come from Edward's room?" Jasper got up off the floor and put his arms around me. "What happened darlin," he asked. I started crying and told them both the whole story. Jasper eyes filled with fury when I told them that he was trying to think of a way to leave me so that I would'nt be little miss clingy. He got up and started pacing the room. "That bastard. I know that he is a manwhore but this is a new low even for him. I see the way he treats girls but they are experienced and they usually have a different guy in their bed every night and don't get me started on Tanya Denali. I turned a blind eye before but never again," he yelled angrily.

Reviewer: brookie1 Signed
Date: 29 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 6

oh god nooooooooo. what is she going  to do edward is a bastard and doesn't really care



Author's Response: thank you for the review. I really enjoy reading them all and I love writing this story. Here is a teaser for chapter 7 of All Alone. If all goes well then I should have it up before I leave for australia. I suddenly felt tears come to my eyes. I don't know what to do. I know that Edward has a right to know that he is going to be a father but I also think that what he doesn't know won't hurt him. I was about to say this to Alice when I heard someone coming in the front door. Alice put her finger to her lips telling us to be quiet and then left the room to see who it was. She came back a few minutes later with Esme. Esme looked at us with a worried look in her eyes. "Is someone going to tell me what is going on or do I have to contact both Angela and Bella's parents and tell them they are ditching school," she said with a worried tone in her voice. I looked at Alice silently asking her what I should do. "Bella, I think that we should tell my mother what is going on. She will know what to do," she whispered with a weak smile on her face. Big fat tears started falling from my eyes. Esme came over to me and pulled me in for a hug. "Whatever you have to say Bella, it can't be all bad," she said. I nodded against her shoulder and pulled back. "Esme, I'm pregnant and I don't know what to do. Please help me," I cried as she pulled me in for another hug.

The Rebellion by maymay74 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 7]
Summary:

This was one of those sad nights since she left. But we were tired, we were ready to fight for her, it was time for a rebellion


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Humor, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 2595 Read Count: 480
[Report This] Published: 04 Sep 2012 Updated: 04 Sep 2012
Reviewer: brookie1 Signed
Date: 05 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 1: The Rebellion

i love happy ever afters



Author's Response:

YES, I WOULN'T HAVE IT ANOTHER WAY. THEY DESERVED TO BE TOGETHRR

Summary: Past Featured Story

rl

 

Edward and Bella met in High School. After graduation they lost contact and went on with their life. Years later they meet again. Both have a lot of secrets.

They’re both unhappy and when they bump in to each other, they start to realize that there is more than just friendship. A/H OC ExB


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 25 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 75604 Read Count: 30198
[Report This] Published: 13 Sep 2012 Updated: 27 Mar 2016
Reviewer: brookie1 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 01 Nov 2013 Title: Chapter 22: Support

OMG !!! my heart can;t stand much more. please get them all home alive and don't let paul get bellB

Tangled Hearts by Flora Mile Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 101]
Summary: Past Featured Story

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Bella life was everything she had dreamed it to be, a successful writer, a fiancé and everything is going the way she wants it. Until one unfaithful night changed it all. Can changing ones life plan work out the way you really want it. Is doing Artificial Insemination and creating a life going to make her truly happy?

Edward had seen enough tragedy, not only in the loss of his parents but now with his brother and his brother’s wife. If anything else happens, would Edward truly be standing? He might be a successful heart surgeon, but even then can he heal the hearts of two three year-olds?When Bella and Edward’s paths cross will it make them or break them!


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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Angst, Family, Friendship, Hurt/Comfort,, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 12 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 83640 Read Count: 18792
[Report This] Published: 12 Jan 2013 Updated: 17 Jan 2015
Reviewer: brookie1 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 19 Jan 2015 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 5 - No one can defeat us

this is amazing i throughly love it but Edwards family dying was a hard chapter to read for all the tears but it is wonderfully written.



Author's Response: It was a hard chapter to write. I can honestly say that I had tears. Thanks for the review. Regards Fiorella

Reviewer: brookie1 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 19 Jan 2015 Title: Chapter 12: A baby is born with the need to be love and never outgrows it.

I love this story .I am thrilled to no end to know you are still updatingf. thanks for sharing this amazing wonderful story.



Author's Response: Thank you for taking the time to read my story, I know that I have been missing, but I will do my best to get you an update soon. Regards Fiorella

Summary: Past Featured Story

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Banner by: Deebelle1

Summary: Teen mother Isabella finds herself in a precarious situation. The person, who has given her and her baby a home, has passed away. The landlord wants her out at all costs. Insert DSHS worker Edward Cullen. What happens when he steps over the line of his job? What happens when Isabella is more to him than he expected? A/H, M


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Family, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiHu, luv2write finished reads
Chapters: 6 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 42147 Read Count: 22702
[Report This] Published: 18 Mar 2013 Updated: 20 Jul 2013
Reviewer: brookie1 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 22 Aug 2013 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

such a sweet story i really loved it

Summary:

Edward is an eighteen year old man, who has been blind since the age of ten. This happened in a car accident in which his father was killed and his mother, Esme and his twin sister, Alice had taken care of him since then. They live in Miami, Florida, where Edward and Alice are both enrolling in college as freshmen.

Edward will be going into music and literature, while Alice will be taking business management and fashion design courses, since fashion has been her interest her whole life. Their mother, Esme has been a widow since the accident, but that is about to change when Dr. Carlisle Cullen starts treating Edward.

Bella has lived with her father, Charlie for four years since her mother remarried a man named Phil. She received a scholarship for a university in Miami, so she decided to move back in with her mother.

What will happen when Bella returns to Florida? Will Bella meet Edward? Will they fall in love?

All human story

"You don't have to see the one you love to know that the one."

 

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Link for the blog:  http://theblindsideofloveff.wordpress.com


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 22 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 69656 Read Count: 17796
[Report This] Published: 16 May 2013 Updated: 21 Feb 2014
Reviewer: brookie1 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 23 Jun 2013 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18: April Sleepover

great story i loved it

Summary: Past Featured Story

BANNER BY: DeeBelle1 fanfic.

SUMMARY:  Bella is in the wrong place at the wrong time.  What happens when Edward, a mob man decides to keep her, rather than kill her when she witnesses a murder he commits?  Will she ever willingly love him?  Will he ever trust her?  Birthday story for WeeKitty.  AH/M

 


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Angst, Drama, Erotica, Hurt/Comfort,, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Kuu Faves, Stories I've Already read
Chapters: 25 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 40121 Read Count: 98334
[Report This] Published: 17 Aug 2013 Updated: 18 Oct 2013
Reviewer: brookie1 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 23 Sep 2013 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15

wow that was intense edward didn't deserve the treatment her5 family gave him, yes he is possessive but he cares for her

Reviewer: brookie1 Signed
Date: 23 Sep 2013 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16

jealous edward is a hard ass because he will feel hurt if he is sweet

Summary: Past Featured Story

everythingIwanted_zps9dd57a41

 

A failed marriage and long divorce left Edward with a lot on his hands. Moving his kids closer to his family in New York was the fresh start he needed so that his family could thrive. Not knowing how he would juggle work and caring for his kids, he jumped at the chance to hire his brother's nanny to care for his own kids. But the moment Bella walked into his house everything changed. She started out as the nanny, but she quickly became everything he wanted.  

 

Bella's POV of this story is posted as Everything I Needed.


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Angst, Drama, Family, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Stories I've Already read, My favs past present and future
Chapters: 36 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 101886 Read Count: 89369
[Report This] Published: 28 Nov 2013 Updated: 18 Apr 2018
Reviewer: brookie1 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 06 Dec 2013 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Oh My God this is amazing!!! I am hooked!!!

Reviewer: brookie1 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 25 Jan 2015 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24

LOVE THIS STORY IT ALWAYS BRINGS A SMILE

Summary:

He always wanted to marry her, even as a child. From 7 to 27 changed his life forever for the better or was it for the worse? 


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 3228 Read Count: 486
[Report This] Published: 29 Dec 2013 Updated: 29 Dec 2013
Reviewer: brookie1 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 02 Jan 2014 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

awesome

Summary:

It wasn’t what anyone expected to happen in their future. Bella and Edward would have never expected to have another child….and gain a family member they only knew for a few hours. Welcome to The Family Future take. 


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Family
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 3283 Read Count: 388
[Report This] Published: 01 Jun 2014 Updated: 01 Jun 2014
Reviewer: brookie1 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 02 Jun 2014 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

wonderful story i throughly enjoyed it!

Two Blue Lines by Payton79 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 712]
Summary: Past Featured Story

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Banner made by Marie Carro

 

TFFA Banner

 

 

Bella, a good girl, was dumped by her long-time boyfriend. Edward, a young doctor, is feeling suffocated by his father's plans. Waking up next to a stranger is a shock for a good girl. Seeing the girl of your dreams run out on you the morning after sucks for a nice guy. What if two blue lines will bind the two together for life? What if they can't even remember how they came to be? AH

 

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Stories I've Already read, Read & Enjoyed
Chapters: 32 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 138987 Read Count: 146715
[Report This] Published: 18 Jun 2014 Updated: 21 Dec 2015
Reviewer: brookie1 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 03 Jan 2015 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 14 - Be Careful What You Wish For

 



Author's Response: Thanks so much! See you Monday.

Reviewer: brookie1 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 25 Jan 2015 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 15 - Livin Arrangements - Again

amazing story. come on Bella you love hi9m give it a chance



Author's Response: Thanks for your review. Yes, she does but she's not ready to see it. See you tomorrow with the update.

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Sometimes the bad things that happen in our lives put us directly in the path of the best things that will ever happen to us. ExB AH

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Angst
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Stories I've Already read, Read & Enjoyed
Chapters: 2 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 2110 Read Count: 123249
[Report This] Published: 05 Jan 2015 Updated: 29 Oct 2015
Reviewer: brookie1 Signed
Date: 16 Mar 2015 Title: Come Back Tomorrow

THIS STORY IS WONDERFUL . WHAT WAS aLICE TRYING TO SAY WHAT IF HE ISN'T DYING? IS THAT POSSIBLE bELLA GIVE HIM SOMETHING TO LIVE FOR.

Reviewer: brookie1 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 05 Mar 2015 Title: Come Back Tomorrow

excellent chapter god let their be something like a maricle happen he deserves to be happy.



Author's Response:

He does deserve to be happy.  He deserves all that life can give him, to make up for all that's happened to him.  We'll see...   :)

Reviewer: brookie1 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 31 Mar 2015 Title: Come Back Tomorrow

wonderful story I( hope somehoe this turns out okay.he is too young to just not try .



Author's Response:

Thank you!  :)  He is too young to just give up, isn't he?  Let's hope he has some options...

Reviewer: brookie1 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 20 Mar 2015 Title: Come Back Tomorrow

poor thing your heart loves whom ever it chooses to love. they both deserve their chance for happiness.



Author's Response:

Exactly right, and Bella's heart has already chosen.  And they do both deserve a change for happiness--maybe they can save each other.  :)

Reviewer: brookie1 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 19 Jan 2015 Title: Come Back Tomorrow

THIS STORY IS EPIC AS FOR ME i WILL ALWAYS REMEMBER THAT A FRIENDLY FACE AND SMILES GO ALONG WAY!



Author's Response:

:)  I'm so glad you're enjoying it!  Much more to come!

Reviewer: brookie1 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 27 Feb 2015 Title: Come Back Tomorrow

absolutely awsome story.



Author's Response:

Hi there!  Thanks for saying hello!  So glad you're loving the story!  :)

Reviewer: brookie1 Signed
Date: 09 Mar 2015 Title: Come Back Tomorrow

god how i

 

 

cried trying to read this update please let his pain be controlled. Poor Bella cried herself to sleep with his cat. I THINK bELLA IS FALLING IN LOVE. eDWARD LETTING bELLA IN AND WANTING HER VISIT TO BE LONGER INDICATES HE IS FALLING FOR HER AS WELL.OH GOD HOW WONDERFUL THAT WOULD BE AND ALSO SO VERY HARD TO SEE HIM SUFFER.I AM SO SORRY I CAN'T STOP THESE TEARS .PLEASE GOD HELP HIM MAKE HIM BETTER SOON.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 



Author's Response:

:(  I know.  I'm sorry!  This is hard on them, hard on me to write, and hard on you, too.  But there's a reason for it, and it will get better...eventually.  Yes, I think Edward is falling for Bella, even though he doesn't want to admit it.  We'll see... 

Reviewer: brookie1 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 25 Mar 2015 Title: Come Back Tomorrow

oh my this is so heart breaking today i can haRDLY WAIT FOR HIM TO AT LEAST GIVE HIMSELF A BREAK . bELLA EVERYONE NEEDS LOVE LET HIM KNOW HOW MUCH HE MEANS TO YOU ,IT COULD GIVE HIM THE WILL TO LIVE.



Author's Response:

A good idea, but then again, he has pushed away everyone he loves, and who loves him.  Would he do the same to her if he know how she felt?