Reviews by Lizzyliz
Summary: Past Featured Story

 

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Isabella is a magazine writer, whose life is thrown into disarray when her husband leaves her for another woman. To escape her routine life, she accepts an assignment to interview a Parisian Madame, whom she believes is running a brothel. But Isabella will soon discover that there are more facets to love and romance, especially when Madame Esme selects her as her next project.

WRITTEN FOR THE 2013 JANUARY DRABBLE WARS

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Friendship, Hurt/Comfort,, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Lilyellacullens want to read list!, Misstoria's Stories to Read
Chapters: 64 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 83682 Read Count: 124964
[Report This] Published: 26 Jan 2013 Updated: 26 Sep 2013
Reviewer: Lizzyliz Signed
Date: 25 Mar 2013 Title: Chapter 45: Midnight Surprise

I'm so glad Edward and Bella are together. 

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Date: 22 Mar 2013 Title: Chapter 44: Southern Comfort

I loved hearing Jaspers story. I can't wait for the next chapter.

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Date: 25 Feb 2013 Title: Chapter 39: Selfless Father

I loved this chapter and Edward is so sweet. I can't wait until Wednesday.

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Date: 18 Mar 2013 Title: Chapter 42: Little Casanova

I'm glad your back. Great chapter.

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Date: 31 Jan 2013 Title: Chapter 24: Enchanting Soirée

I love Edward in this story, so charming.

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Date: 25 Mar 2013 Title: Chapter 46: The Wedding

It's too bad they couldn't have their big wedding. A hopsital wedding was sweet. 

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Date: 20 Mar 2013 Title: Chapter 43: Missing You

Great chapter. I'm excited that she is talking with Jasper.

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Date: 15 Feb 2013 Title: Chapter 34: Learning Experience

I love that Edward caught her. So funny.

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Date: 26 Feb 2013 Title: Chapter 40: Dîner Romantique

I loved it. Thank you for the chapter.

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Date: 01 Mar 2013 Title: Chapter 41: Brazen Love

I am so excited for the update. I love Esme in this and can't wait for her happiness.

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Date: 18 Apr 2013 Title: Chapter 55: Adieu Paris

I can't wait for Charlie and Edward to meet

 

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Date: 11 Apr 2013 Title: Chapter 50: Close Up

I loved this, I can't wait for the next chapter.

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Date: 17 Apr 2013 Title: Chapter 54: Je t'aime

It's so sad she has to leave. Poor Charlie.

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Date: 26 Jan 2013 Title: Chapter 8: Faux Pas

Just found the story and really enjoying it. I can't wait for more.

Reviewer: Lizzyliz Signed
Date: 29 Jan 2013 Title: Chapter 22: Irish Luck

Great chapter, great insight.

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Date: 30 Jan 2013 Title: Chapter 23: The List

I love it. Nice touch with using Jacob Black as an actor.

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Date: 17 Feb 2013 Title: Chapter 35: Beautifully Honest

I love Edward and Bella in this. I want to know more about Edward.

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Date: 22 Feb 2013 Title: Chapter 37: Honestly Charming

I loved this chapter and I can't wait for more interactiosn with Edward and Bella. I hope you feel better.

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Date: 23 Feb 2013 Title: Chapter 38: Golden Surprise

I can't wait for the date.

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Date: 06 Apr 2013 Title: Chapter 47: Unpleasant News

I'm glad you're back. I was missing the story. Great chapter.

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Date: 09 Apr 2013 Title: Chapter 48: Thoughtful Gift

I can't wait for Bella and Edward to be back together.

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Date: 12 Apr 2013 Title: Chapter 51: Crossing Lines

Very hot.

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Date: 16 Apr 2013 Title: Chapter 53: Second Chances

Such a great couple of chapters. I'm so glad Esme got her happiness.

Reviewer: Lizzyliz Signed
Date: 19 Apr 2013 Title: Chapter 62: EPILOGUE

This was such a great story, I'm sad to see it end.

Summary:

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Banner By FrozenSoldier

 

I.S "Light Foot" Mason is a notorious gunslinger in the west, no one knows what she looks like or the fact it's a woman. Now Bella is on the run and found herself in Tumbleweed. Will her past come back to haunt her or will she find love in the local sheriff?

 

 


Categories: Twilight, All Human, Alternate Universe, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Action, Adventure, Angst, Drama, Family, Friendship, Historical, Humor, Hurt/Comfort,, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 7 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 12365 Read Count: 4953
[Report This] Published: 29 Jan 2013 Updated: 26 Mar 2013
Reviewer: Lizzyliz Signed
Date: 29 Jan 2013 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I like it. I can't wait for the next chapter.

Summary:

Banner By: Ro Normann

When seventeen-year-old Bella is kidnapped while out with Alice Cullen—she taken as a prize to be awarded the winner of an underground fighting tournament.  Will Alice’s adopted brother be the unlikely hero to save the day?  All Human/Rated M


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Friendship, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: To Read , Stories I've read
Chapters: 137 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 15976 Read Count: 315390
[Report This] Published: 11 Mar 2013 Updated: 17 Mar 2013
Reviewer: Lizzyliz Signed
Date: 17 Mar 2013 Title: Chapter 137: Chapter 137

This was a great story. I really enjoyed it.

Reviewer: Lizzyliz Signed
Date: 15 Mar 2013 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11

I really like this story and I can't wait for more. Great job.

Reviewer: Lizzyliz Signed
Date: 15 Mar 2013 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21

Great story. 

Reviewer: Lizzyliz Signed
Date: 15 Mar 2013 Title: Chapter 27: Chapter 27

The chain of events are crazy. 

Reviewer: Lizzyliz Signed
Date: 15 Mar 2013 Title: Chapter 29: Chapter 29

Poor Alice.

Reviewer: Lizzyliz Signed
Date: 17 Mar 2013 Title: Chapter 91: Chapter 91

Great chapters today. I can't wait for tomorrow.

Summary: Past Featured Story

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Banner by: Deebelle1

Summary: Teen mother Isabella finds herself in a precarious situation. The person, who has given her and her baby a home, has passed away. The landlord wants her out at all costs. Insert DSHS worker Edward Cullen. What happens when he steps over the line of his job? What happens when Isabella is more to him than he expected? A/H, M


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Family, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiHu, luv2write finished reads
Chapters: 6 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 42147 Read Count: 22702
[Report This] Published: 18 Mar 2013 Updated: 20 Jul 2013
Reviewer: Lizzyliz Signed
Date: 18 Mar 2013 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I really like the story and I can't wait for me. Great job.



Author's Response:

Wow to say that we are blown away by the response to this is a complete understatement of what we actually do feel—shock, awe, happiness, thrill ... just to name a few of our feelings. The fact that this one-shot only garnered an honorable mention in the contest does not go anywhere near the exhilaration we both feel over the heartfelt reviews and PM's we've received telling us how much you've loved this and how you voted for it. We have tossed a few ideas back and forth and have some of the story out-lined. Trust in us to finish this, but it will most likely be at least a couple of weeks before the next chapter posts, but it will be a substantial chapter and well worth the wait. A lot of you want Tanya, Renee, Phil, and James to get their just dues. Trust in us, we are usually great at doling out punishments. When all is done and said there should be no rock left unturned in the story. We're not sure how many chapters we will add, but you will get complete resolution by the end. Thanks again for taking the time to read, review and to those of you who voted for us, thanks for that too. Nikky & Kasi~

Reviewer: Lizzyliz Signed
Date: 27 Mar 2013 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

I love this story. I can't wait for more.

FIGHT CLUB by beatlerosie Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstar [Reviews - 23]
Summary: Past Featured Story

 

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I fight. I f**k. I bleed.

Occasionally blackout and then I don't remember

what the f**k I've done and with whom...

Sh*t.

 


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human, Alternate Universe, Crossover
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Angst
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 2 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 299 Read Count: 30051
[Report This] Published: 20 Mar 2013 Updated: 07 Nov 2014
Reviewer: Lizzyliz Signed
Date: 24 Mar 2013 Title: FIGHT CLUB

Great chapters today. I'm so glad Alice got the truth of what happened.



Author's Response:

You're my first reviewer that isn't complaining about Alice :)

Reviewer: Lizzyliz Signed
Date: 01 Apr 2013 Title: FIGHT CLUB

I don't trust the agent

Reviewer: Lizzyliz Signed
Date: 01 Apr 2013 Title: FIGHT CLUB

I'm so glad its back. 

Reviewer: Lizzyliz Signed
Date: 21 Mar 2013 Title: FIGHT CLUB

Great story. I can't wait for more.



Author's Response:

Keep reading... I've got 72 chapters written.  Almost finished. I'm posting about 10-15 chapters per day.

Thanks for reading.

Reviewer: Lizzyliz Signed
Date: 22 Mar 2013 Title: FIGHT CLUB

Great few chapters. I love Bella. I love Alice. It's a great story.



Author's Response:

Thank you! 

Reviewer: Lizzyliz Signed
Date: 04 Apr 2013 Title: FIGHT CLUB

I loved the past couple of chapters. I can't wait for more.

Summary: Past Featured Story

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Edward is a single father and a police officer in Rock Island, Il. His new neighbor is his boss, Mike. What happens when Edward thinks Mike is beating his wife, Bella? Can Edward help save Bella? Does Bella need to be saved? Written for Jess2002, happy birthday to our friend. AH/M


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 10 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 66334 Read Count: 26445
[Report This] Published: 11 Jul 2013 Updated: 19 Jul 2013
Reviewer: Lizzyliz Signed
Date: 11 Jul 2013 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

A really good story. I can't wait for more.



Author's Response:

Thank you for reading and reviewing PP. As we already said this is for Jess2002 birthday, we will be posting one chapter a day the last been on the July 20th.
Hope you enjoy.
Kasi and Nikky

Reviewer: Lizzyliz Signed
Date: 12 Jul 2013 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

Another great chapter. I can't wait for tomorrow.

Reviewer: Lizzyliz Signed
Date: 14 Jul 2013 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

Mike is a creep.

Reviewer: Lizzyliz Signed
Date: 15 Jul 2013 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

I can't believe we have to wait until tomorrow for another chapter. 

Reviewer: Lizzyliz Signed
Date: 16 Jul 2013 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

I like the twist. Great chapter.

Reviewer: Lizzyliz Signed
Date: 17 Jul 2013 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

I can't believe its almost over. A really great story.

Reviewer: Lizzyliz Signed
Date: 18 Jul 2013 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

Crazy chapter. I'm so glad they are all getting along.

Summary: Past Featured Story

Banner by the wonderful and talented DeeBelle1.

Some so called friends invite Bella out for her birthday, and send her to a BDSM club as a prank. What happens when the owner of the club sees her? Will he be able to set aside his Dom nature? Will she ever believe she deserves to have her needs met? Will he be able to set aside his wants and desires to meet those needs, or will she find her true desire is to submit to him? AH/M


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Erotica, Friendship, Hurt/Comfort,, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Stories I've Already read, J's Read and Loved Stories, Stories I've read, Fav BDSM Fics, Read
Chapters: 25 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 204571 Read Count: 334740
[Report This] Published: 22 Jul 2013 Updated: 31 Dec 2013
Reviewer: Lizzyliz Signed
Date: 12 Aug 2013 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter Four

Poor Bella. I'm so glad she has Edward to take care of her, only if she would let him.



Author's Response:

Well that is pretty much verbatim the reaction we were expecting.  We did have a reviewer or two who feels that Bella has been abused to limits of overkill and that Edward shouldn’t want to be with a kid.  I want to address this a little before things get blown out of proportion on this train of thought.  Showing the things Bella lives with and has lived with, is how we are showing her ways of adapting.  Bella has been severely neglected all her life.  She knows no other way.  Speaking from some experience on the matter, when you grow up in a household without both parents and you pretty much raise yourself, and get pushed aside for your parents needs can either make you or break you.  When you solely depend on yourself, you tend to learn to not react the way people normally would.  Bella’s childhood in this story is a lot like mine, in the place where I had no contact with my father at all from age of 6 to 16, who I then saw twice at age 16 and never again until I was 21.  My mom started dating when I was young, but when I was 9 she met a man who she chose to place before me.  By the time I was 12 I lived alone, she gave me the money to pay the bills.  So yes this stuff does happen.  I am by far not a perfect parent myself and I may be a single parent, but I am always here for my children.  I turned out okay, and with the exception of not being able to be in a healthy relationship I am not screwed up.  Edward in this story sees the good in Bella, and sees that she is more than she’s been made to believe she is.  Bella was made to grow up fast as a child.  She parented her mother for years.  She pushed away by the same mother she raised to go live with a father who resents her for choosing her mother over him.  Now we had some questions about waiting until Thanksgiving, and it will be Thanksgiving soon in the story.  Just a few more things have to happen first.  Be patient, everything in this story will happen for a reason.  We have had a great number of followers and reviewers for this story, so we do write one major reply and send to all, but we do try to answer all questions asked ... of course we don’t want to give away too much.  I do hope that this helped you understand a bit more about how and why Bella just lets things roll and adapts to what goes on.  You can always join us on Facebook at the group called TeamAllTwilight & AndTAT Fan Fiction.  On behalf of Nikky and I, thank you for reading and reviewing.  It means a lot to us.  Kasi (&Nikky)

 

TEASER: I quickly snap a picture, before speaking to her.  “No, just a normal picture, but you can pose for me anytime you’d like.” I wiggle my eyebrows at her as I snap another picture of her.

I keep snapping pictures as we talk in my office.  I know I have a few that I can use, but I can’t seem to stop taking her picture.  

“I think that’s enough pictures of just me.  Come on, Edward. Why don’t you take one with the both of us?”

I take the camera away from my face, before grinning at her.  I walk over to the oversized comfy chair then sit.  Off to my left is the large stone fireplace, and the flames are casting their warmth on my feet.  Once I’m sitting, I pat my leg in motion for her to join me.  “Come on, Beautiful.”

Bella looks at me, then to my leg as she slowly stands and makes her way to me.  She glances at the arm of the chair and I shake my head at her.

“Please, Beautiful, just to take your picture. I swear I don’t bite.”

“Liar,” Bella chuckles, looking at me. 

I look at her and frown.

“Don’t give me that look Edward, I’ve seen your club and read the first two books you loaned me.  Plus, you look like the type of guy that likes to bite, at least a little.”

I chuckle nodding, because she’s right, I am a biter. “You’ve got me, dead to rights on that one, but I swear I won’t bite you ... today.”

Bella sits on my knee and I pull her back so she is flush with my front.  I raise my hand with the camera in front of us and snap away.  Slowly, I feel Bella relax in my arm and she drops her head to the side of my neck.  I take a few more, before kissing the side of her head.

Reviewer: Lizzyliz Signed
Date: 05 Aug 2013 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

A great chapter. I can't wait for more. It's so sad that Charlie stood her up.



Author's Response:

Hey everyone thanks for reading and reviewing.  There have been several questions and some we can’t fully answer to not give away too much about the story and where we’re taking it.  But let’s start off with the easy stuff.  This will be about 25 chapters in total, give or take a few and we update every Monday or very late Sunday night.  There are many questions regarding the scene that Edward will be participating in.  It is a scheduled demo, teaching session.  We don’t want to give away any info on the scene as of yet, but trust us that there will be nothing remotely sexual about it for Edward at all.  The submissive which will be a part of the exhibition will not in any way shape or form, want or try to keep Edward as their own.  As for more info on Bella’s parents and why they are the way they are, you all really have to be a little patient, you haven’t even met them yet.  There are a LOT of seriously wicked guesses as to what is going on and why things are the way they are, but so far nothing is dead on correct.  You can join us on Facebook, search for the group called: TeamAllTwilight & AndTAT Fan Fiction and you will find us.  Hope you enjoy the teaser... Nikky & Kasi~

 

TEASER:  The rest of the night goes slowly and my mind often deviates back to Bella.  I end up texting her just to have some communication with her.

Beautiful. How was work tonight?  Did you get much work done for college?  I just finished eating some of the lovely apple pie that you made me. It was truly one of the best I’ve ever tasted. Thank you.  ~Edward

I try to focus on my work, but find myself unable to stop looking at my cell. I close the club and head home.  I’m sad and upset that she didn’t respond to my text. By the time I get home, I feel even more upset and even angry.  I wonder why she wouldn’t text me back.  Thinking over reasons, I make a mental list. 

Have I scared her off? No, I don’t think that’s it.  She wouldn’t have agreed to meet up with me if I had scared her.  From what I see and know of her, she doesn’t ignore people, so that can't be it. 

Maybe her phone is out of minutes.  Now this is more possible, because her cell is one of those cheap pay-as-you-go ones and she has little money.  If that’s the reason, then there is no way for her to call or text me back.  Do dorm rooms come with a phone in them? Not really sure about that, I’ll have to check.  I know she is the type of person that would try to keep money on her cell and would say if she was low.  She has often said she needed to switch her phone off because she was low on minutes. 

Maybe she fell asleep and is a deep sleeper.  It has been after midnight when I texted her.  She did say she was normally home before eight and in bed by ten most nights.  Yep, that must be it.  She’ll most likely text me once she’s awake.  I’m sure she’ll feel bad that she missed my text.  One thing is for sure, she doesn’t need me being on her ass like white on rice.

I feel myself calming down after thinking over the theories, and I decide to head to bed.  I wake up and look at my phone seeing it's a little after seven in the morning, but I still don’t have a text from Bella.  I frown and let out a sigh as I rub my face, knowing that I need to get moving.  I’m supposed to be meeting my dad at nine for breakfast, because he won’t be able to attend dinner tonight.

I get showered and dressed all while glaring at my cell.  I see that there is still no incoming text. I text my father to say that I’m on way, and ask if he could text me back to be sure he got my message.  I frown even more when he's answering my text minutes later.  Well, that takes away the newest theory that my cell is not receiving incoming text messages.

I arrive at the hospital and see dad is waiting for me.

“What was the texting all about?”

 

Reviewer: Lizzyliz Signed
Date: 19 Aug 2013 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

I can't wait to hear what Jenks has to say.



Author's Response:

Hello everyone!  Thanks for all your kind words.  We want to start off by addressing some of the frequent questions.  This quote (“I know they love me, really ... I know but, it’s strange, maybe it’s just me. You know that I see and hear things differently from the rest of the world, but thank you for doing this and answering my questions.”) from chapter five had someone ask, what Bella meant.   Bella is referring to how she perceives her family versus the way others do.  Jacob is not a card we are showing yet, you’ll have to be patient to see what he has up his sleeve.  Did Bella hear him in the shower?  We have yet to hear that answer from Bella ourselves, but in my thoughts she surely did.  Will there be any chapters in Bella’s POV?  She is talking a little here and there, but nothing’s set in stone as of yet.  Shouldn’t Edward as a good Dom cancel the scene?  The scene is not canceled, but it has been modified from the original way it was written.  This was for several reasons.  We have sixteen chapters written, yet we still continue to makes tweaks and changes here and there before posting.  When we started making him have hard feelings about the upcoming scene, or feel nervous about it, we started discussing it more.  We found a way to appease us, our readers and yet still show what we wanted to show.  So trust us—please.  I’m glad we haven’t fallen into the pleads for more chapters to post faster, because in the last week we haven’t gotten another one done.  Of course WeeKittyAndTAT, JessAndTAT and TeamAllTwilight all submitted pieces of work into the Fandom Fights LLS.  WeeKittyAndTAT did an Epilogue of sorts for Ropin’ A Sitter.  JessAndTAT did a future take on Bases Loaded.  I wrote a new fan fiction novella, it’s called, The Things That Make You Click.  All of these will post to our FFN and TWCS accounts, but not until after December first.  Watch for two one-shots to post soon to our account, the winners will be announced tomorrow in the More is MORE contest.  Think that brings you all up to speed.  Feel free to PM us and ask questions if you have them.  Nikky & Kasi~

 

TEASER:  “Felix, my father is coming in tonight. Please have him come straight to my office.  Keep everyone else out until I’m done. If there are any problems, I trust you to deal with them accordingly.”

Felix nods at me, but doesn’t say anything. I carry on, walking toward Jenks, when I’m stopped by Tanya.

“Sir, I have some news that I would like to share with you.”

I turn and face Tanya who looks like the cat who got the cream. “Tanya, I’m very busy, it’ll have to wait until tomorrow.” 

I move away from her, but she grabs my wrist pulling me back. “It’s very important, Sir.”

I yank my arm away from her, turning to face her once more. “Tanya, don’t you tell me when I will speak with you. I’m busy, so unless you’re going to die in the next five minutes and need me to call an EMT for you, I don’t want to know. And never touch me again without my consent!”

I walk away without waiting for her response. As I approach Jenks, he shakes his head, looking behind me at Tanya.

“Ah, still trying to get your attention then?”

I nod at him, opening up my office.

“I’d stay away from that one; she’s clearly after money, fame and quite frankly, has ‘whore’ written all over her.”

I chuckle a little at his quite accurate synopsis of Tanya. “Yes, I know. Those are the main reasons I have always refused her, that, and she makes me lose brain cells every time she opens her mouth. But enough about her, what did you find out.”

Jenks looks at me sadly and I can clearly see the worry on his face. “This is not going to be easy to read. Even harder for you I’d say, because you’ve become somewhat involved with the girl.”

I nod at him in understanding. “Just show me.”

Summary: Past Featured Story

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The summer of 2005 was the summer that changed Bella Swan's life forever. Sent to Ohio by her mother to attend a school for debutante girls not quite up to par, she meets Edward Masen, an apprentice. But is that really all he is? A story about psychological abuse, redemption, and healing. AH {{REWRITE/Formerly titled The Perfect Partner Program}}

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Angst, Drama, Hurt/Comfort,, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Stories I've Already read, Read & Enjoyed
Chapters: 32 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 93131 Read Count: 110637
[Report This] Published: 30 Jul 2013 Updated: 10 Feb 2019
Reviewer: Lizzyliz Signed
Date: 27 Aug 2013 Title: Shattered Reflections

Can't wait for the next chapter.



Author's Response:

:-)

Reviewer: Lizzyliz Signed
Date: 21 Sep 2014 Title: Shattered Reflections

Can't wait to see what happens next.

Reviewer: Lizzyliz Signed
Date: 31 Jul 2013 Title: Shattered Reflections

I read the first few chapters and this story has me really interested. I can't wait for more.



Author's Response:

I'm glad :-)

Reviewer: Lizzyliz Signed
Date: 05 Aug 2013 Title: Shattered Reflections

I can't wait for more.

Reviewer: Lizzyliz Signed
Date: 14 Aug 2013 Title: Shattered Reflections

I can't wait for more. I'd like to know more about the program and Edward.

Reviewer: Lizzyliz Signed
Date: 19 Aug 2013 Title: Shattered Reflections

I can't wait for the date.



Author's Response:

Reviewer: Lizzyliz Signed
Date: 09 Sep 2013 Title: Shattered Reflections

I can't wait for the next chapter.

Torn by Hanks Lady Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 97]
Summary: Past Featured Story

Banner by Mina Rivera

Family man Jacob has struggled to suppress his longing for guys, not always successfully, from a young age due to a strict upbringing. Outwardly he has everything, but what happens when he meets Paul on a business trip? Angst ensues and threatens the life has has made for himself.


Categories: Non-Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Jacob/OC
Genre: Angst, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 27 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 115214 Read Count: 6092
[Report This] Published: 01 Aug 2013 Updated: 16 Oct 2013
Reviewer: Lizzyliz Signed
Date: 09 Oct 2013 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 25

I'm glad Jake is out of the hospital.



Author's Response:

Thank you for reading. Now they can finally enjoy being together :)

Reviewer: Lizzyliz Signed
Date: 12 Aug 2013 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

The affair has started. I can't wait for the next chapter.



Author's Response:

Thank you for reading - the next chapter will be rather steamy again :D

Reviewer: Lizzyliz Signed
Date: 09 Aug 2013 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

Things are going to get crazy with Jake and Paul.



Author's Response:

They are indeed - thank you for reading :)

Reviewer: Lizzyliz Signed
Date: 23 Aug 2013 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

Super hot. I have a feeling though Leah has him being followed.



Author's Response:

Thank you for reading; glad you liked the steaminess ;)

Reviewer: Lizzyliz Signed
Date: 27 Aug 2013 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

I can't wait for next chapter.



Author's Response:

Thank you for reading - the next one won't be too long :)

Reviewer: Lizzyliz Signed
Date: 01 Aug 2013 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

This is a really great story. I can't wait for more chapters.



Author's Response:

Thank you for reading; I'm glad you like it so far!

Reviewer: Lizzyliz Signed
Date: 05 Aug 2013 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

I can't wait to see how Jake deals with this.



Author's Response:

Thank you for reading. He's going to be torturing himself quite a bit when he gets home ;)

Reviewer: Lizzyliz Signed
Date: 14 Aug 2013 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

I can't wait for more.



Author's Response:

Thank you for reading :)

Reviewer: Lizzyliz Signed
Date: 16 Aug 2013 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

Close call. I think Jake needs to just be honest. No matter how hard in the end being honest is better than lying.



Author's Response:

Thank you for reading; Jake is about to confide in a friend in the next chapter and get some advice :)

Reviewer: Lizzyliz Signed
Date: 18 Aug 2013 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

Poor Jake, he needs to continue to be honest with himself and with Leah. 



Author's Response:

Thank you for reading; he does plan to tell Leah but it doesn't go quite as he imagines ;)

Reviewer: Lizzyliz Signed
Date: 29 Aug 2013 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11

Poor Jake. It was a great chapter.



Author's Response:

Thank you for reading, I'm glad you enjoyed it :)

Reviewer: Lizzyliz Signed
Date: 03 Sep 2013 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13

A great chapter. I hope he gets his life worked out with Sarah and Paul. I hope Sarah is ok.



Author's Response:

Thank you for reading; glad you enjoyed the chapter. It'll be a while before things get better for any of them :(

Reviewer: Lizzyliz Signed
Date: 11 Sep 2013 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16

Yay a glimmer of happiness.



Author's Response:

Thank you for reading. The next chapter gets even better :)

Reviewer: Lizzyliz Signed
Date: 17 Sep 2013 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18

I'm glad they are back together.



Author's Response:

Thank you for reading. They will have some much happier times now :)

Reviewer: Lizzyliz Signed
Date: 26 Sep 2013 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21

I can't wait to see what happens to Jake and Paul. 



Author's Response:

Thank you for reading. Things will sadly be tough for them again :(

Reviewer: Lizzyliz Signed
Date: 16 Oct 2013 Title: Chapter 27: Chapter 27

A great ending.



Author's Response:

Thank you for reading; glad you enjoyed it :)

Summary: Past Featured Story

Detectives Edward, Emmett and Jasper are on the case of a serial killer roaming the U-Dub campus. With their sisters on campus, can they keep them safe and do their jobs effectively? What happens when feelings begin to change for Edward and Jasper? Will they be too late to save the girls they love? And who is that Killer in the Shadows? AH, canon couples.

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Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Suspense/Thriller
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Finished, G8or Favor8s Read, luv2write finished reads, Bella's Must Reads!
Chapters: 23 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 26659 Read Count: 45618
[Report This] Published: 03 Aug 2013 Updated: 21 Oct 2013
Reviewer: Lizzyliz Signed
Date: 09 Oct 2013 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 17

Don't wait too long to post the next chapter. I can't wait.

Reviewer: Lizzyliz Signed
Date: 10 Oct 2013 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 18

Can't wait for the next chapter. Don't take long.

Reviewer: Lizzyliz Signed
Date: 12 Oct 2013 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 19

I'm glad he's stabilizing. I can't wait for Wednesday for more. Love this story.

Reviewer: Lizzyliz Signed
Date: 07 Sep 2013 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 7

I can't wait for the next chapter.

Reviewer: Lizzyliz Signed
Date: 24 Aug 2013 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 4

I can't wait until Wednesday.

Reviewer: Lizzyliz Signed
Date: 04 Aug 2013 Title: Chapter 1: Prologue

Interesting. I'd like to see how this goes.

Reviewer: Lizzyliz Signed
Date: 14 Aug 2013 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 2

I love getting the history. So can't wait for more.

Reviewer: Lizzyliz Signed
Date: 21 Aug 2013 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 3

Enjoying this story, I can't wait for more

Reviewer: Lizzyliz Signed
Date: 28 Aug 2013 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 5

Would love longer chapters. I like the story and can't wait for more.

by Rated: [Reviews - ]
Summary:
Categories: Orphan
Characters: None
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: butterflybetty stories to read , My favs past present and future , My favs past present and future , My favs past present and future , Read & Enjoyed, Read, Read, Read, Read, to read, to read, to read, to read, to read, Tufano79 Stories, Tufano79 Stories, Ageise02 Bella/Jasper stories
Chapters: 0 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 0 Read Count: 0
[Report This] Published: 01 Jan 1970 Updated: 01 Jan 1970
Reviewer: Lizzyliz Signed
Date: 06 Aug 2013 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

Can't wait for the next chapter.

Reviewer: Lizzyliz Signed
Date: 25 Aug 2013 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

I would love longer chapters. I like the story and can't wait for more.

Reviewer: Lizzyliz Signed
Date: 05 Aug 2013 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Interesting. I'd like to see where this is leading.

Reviewer: Lizzyliz Signed
Date: 15 Aug 2013 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

Can't wait for more.

Summary: Past Featured Story

Running for Love by Sarge's Girls

Bella is the daughter of the vice president of the United States.
Edward is a new member of her Secret Service detail.
Will they be able to fight their attraction,
or will her eighteenth birthday mean a green light?

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiHu, Edwards Paradox Completed Favourites, Stories I've read
Chapters: 6 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 19150 Read Count: 12439
[Report This] Published: 09 Aug 2013 Updated: 10 Aug 2013
Reviewer: Lizzyliz Signed
Date: 10 Aug 2013 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

Hot chapter!

Reviewer: Lizzyliz Signed
Date: 09 Aug 2013 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

Interesting story. Can't wait for more.

Summary: Past Featured Story

BANNER BY: DeeBelle1 fanfic.

SUMMARY:  Bella is in the wrong place at the wrong time.  What happens when Edward, a mob man decides to keep her, rather than kill her when she witnesses a murder he commits?  Will she ever willingly love him?  Will he ever trust her?  Birthday story for WeeKitty.  AH/M

 


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Angst, Drama, Erotica, Hurt/Comfort,, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Kuu Faves, Stories I've Already read
Chapters: 25 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 40121 Read Count: 98334
[Report This] Published: 17 Aug 2013 Updated: 18 Oct 2013
Reviewer: Lizzyliz Signed
Date: 22 Aug 2013 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

Polite Edward didn't last very long. I wonder what Alice said.

Reviewer: Lizzyliz Signed
Date: 27 Aug 2013 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

I'm glad for the chapter and Bella having something normal in her life.

Dared to Truth by Chloe Masen Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 16]
Summary:

Dared to Truth banner by Christag Banners

 

Banner by Christag Banners

*Written for the Fandom4OK*

Summary: One party. One kiss. And one age-old game of Truth or Dare that... well, you'll see. Just like you already can how much I hate writing summaries.


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 6 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 17269 Read Count: 2412
[Report This] Published: 01 Sep 2013 Updated: 10 Feb 2014
Reviewer: Lizzyliz Signed
Date: 13 Jan 2014 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5: Slow Surrender and Instant Regret

Giving the story a shot. I can't wait for more.

Summary:

One time, no matter how hot or sexy was not enough. We both knew it. So he made me an offer I couldn't refuse. For the next year my body would belong to Edward R Cullen; the billionaire, the genius, the sex addict and the married man.  How did I get here and why don't I want to leave? 

 

 


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Erotica, Family
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Themslovebug90's read stories, Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiHu, Stories I've Already read, Stories I've read, My favs past present and future , Read & Enjoyed
Chapters: 30 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 104383 Read Count: 281130
[Report This] Published: 21 Sep 2013 Updated: 29 May 2014
Reviewer: Lizzyliz Signed
Date: 19 Jan 2014 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13

Love it!

 

Reviewer: Lizzyliz Signed
Date: 20 Jan 2014 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14

I like the skip of four years, forget the haters

Reviewer: Lizzyliz Signed
Date: 29 Jan 2014 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18

Loved this chapter!

Reviewer: Lizzyliz Signed
Date: 24 Apr 2014 Title: Chapter 28: Chapter 28

So glad for a new chapter. Can't wait for the next.

Reviewer: Lizzyliz Signed
Date: 29 May 2014 Title: Chapter 30: Chapter 30

It's so sad its over. I don't mind not knowing all the details of whats on the usb. You hinted enough to know its his mother talking to him. Great story.

Summary:

 

When Bella's cousin Rose finds out the truth of her parentage, both Bella and Rose's worlds get turned upside. Can they stay true to themselves and find love in the new world that they have been thrust into? Romance, Drama, Humor, Angst (pretty much cannon couples)


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Family, Humor, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 12 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 32857 Read Count: 2913
[Report This] Published: 31 Dec 2013 Updated: 31 Dec 2013
Reviewer: Lizzyliz Signed
Date: 17 Mar 2014 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

I can't wait for the dinner. It should be fun. Also can't wait for Rosalie and Emmett's relationship to blossom.

Reviewer: Lizzyliz Signed
Date: 02 Jan 2014 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 3

Just started the story. Can't wait for more.

Reviewer: Lizzyliz Signed
Date: 25 Jan 2014 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

I can't wait for the next chapter and for the whole truth.

Summary: Past Featured Story

Jacob and Bella have always been in love, but what's going to happen when they both meet obstacles and circumstances which will break them apart? Will the true love survive? Or will they be just another two broken hearts in the world?

Cover is made by: tlautnertracer.tumblr.com/    

 


Categories: Twilight, All Human, Non-Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Jacob
Genre: Angst, Erotica, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: Pure Romance
Series: None
Chapters: 10 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 27243 Read Count: 1804
[Report This] Published: 10 Jan 2014 Updated: 24 Feb 2014
Reviewer: Lizzyliz Signed
Date: 02 Jun 2014 Title: Chapter 10: The Call

I can't wait for the next chapter. Bella shouldn't call her mom, doesn't seem like it will end well.

Reviewer: Lizzyliz Signed
Date: 13 Jan 2014 Title: Chapter 2: The Cookies

I'm really interested with where this is going. I can't wait for the next chapter.



Author's Response:

I'm really glad you think so ^_^ And i just posted the next one. thanks for stopping by <3