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ddkc

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After graduation, smart mouthed Isabella Swan finds out her father’s set her up in an arranged marriage.  Not wanting to marry Jake and live on the res, she runs. In Chicago, she finds herself jobless—living with Alice.  She seeks a job at a strip club. Edward Cullen calls her a child and tells her no—too bad NO isn’t a word she likes. Birthday story for Silverblossom. AH/ratedM


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Erotica, Friendship, Humor, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: G8or Favor8s Read, To Read , Stories I've read
Chapters: 317 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 57061 Read Count: 1814525
[Report This] Published: 24 Jan 2013 Updated: 11 Apr 2013
Reviewer: Iluvlil lion Signed
Date: 31 Jan 2013 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

Go Bella! :D I hope she does hit him lol :)

Author's Response:

Thanks for reading and reviewing our story, we love that you all have taken the time to leave us some love.  Please Google and check out The Glory Awards, our story His Cimmerian View is up for an award against one of our favorite stories Better Than Pie ... Since we are up against such an outstanding story we ask that you go vote for one of the two, because they are both great.  Thanks for reading and reviewing and showing your love to DDKC.  Kasi & Nikky~

Reviewer: Iluvlil lion Signed
Date: 31 Jan 2013 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

Oh hell no he didn't just say that!!!! O.o

Author's Response:

Thanks for reading and reviewing our story, we love that you all have taken the time to leave us some love.  Please Google and check out The Glory Awards, our story His Cimmerian View is up for an award against one of our favorite stories Better Than Pie ... Since we are up against such an outstanding story we ask that you go vote for one of the two, because they are both great.  Thanks for reading and reviewing and showing your love to DDKC.  Kasi & Nikky~

Reviewer: Iluvlil lion Signed
Date: 31 Jan 2013 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

Omg did he just say what he said lol he's nuts!!!

Author's Response:

Thanks for reading and reviewing our story, we love that you all have taken the time to leave us some love.  Please Google and check out The Glory Awards, our story His Cimmerian View is up for an award against one of our favorite stories Better Than Pie ... Since we are up against such an outstanding story we ask that you go vote for one of the two, because they are both great.  Thanks for reading and reviewing and showing your love to DDKC.  Kasi & Nikky~

Reviewer: Iluvlil lion Signed
Date: 31 Jan 2013 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

Yup they sure do need help!!! Lol poor Bella :)

Author's Response:

Thanks for reading and reviewing our story, we love that you all have taken the time to leave us some love.  Please Google and check out The Glory Awards, our story His Cimmerian View is up for an award against one of our favorite stories Better Than Pie ... Since we are up against such an outstanding story we ask that you go vote for one of the two, because they are both great.  Thanks for reading and reviewing and showing your love to DDKC.  Kasi & Nikky~

Reviewer: Iluvlil lion Signed
Date: 31 Jan 2013 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

Yeah way to make her feel better lol :)

Author's Response:

Thanks for reading and reviewing our story, we love that you all have taken the time to leave us some love.  Please Google and check out The Glory Awards, our story His Cimmerian View is up for an award against one of our favorite stories Better Than Pie ... Since we are up against such an outstanding story we ask that you go vote for one of the two, because they are both great.  Thanks for reading and reviewing and showing your love to DDKC.  Kasi & Nikky~

Reviewer: Iluvlil lion Signed
Date: 04 Mar 2013 Title: Chapter 274: Chapter 274

Yeah Edward and Charlie both made right decisions!! :D

Reviewer: Iluvlil lion Signed
Date: 26 Feb 2013 Title: Chapter 207: Chapter 207

I hope both do and then Edward can kick Charlie's ass!!

Reviewer: Iluvlil lion Signed
Date: 26 Feb 2013 Title: Chapter 208: Chapter 208

Now he gets he's head out of he's ass it was about time Edward!!!

Reviewer: Iluvlil lion Signed
Date: 26 Feb 2013 Title: Chapter 206: Chapter 206

I hope both get their ass kicked!! :D

Reviewer: Iluvlil lion Signed
Date: 26 Feb 2013 Title: Chapter 205: Chapter 205

Ugh can someone kick he's ass please!!

Reviewer: Iluvlil lion Signed
Date: 26 Feb 2013 Title: Chapter 204: Chapter 204

Oh please now Charlie defending her?? He saw Jacob hit her and didn't do anything!!!

Reviewer: Iluvlil lion Signed
Date: 26 Feb 2013 Title: Chapter 203: Chapter 203

:(

Reviewer: Iluvlil lion Signed
Date: 26 Feb 2013 Title: Chapter 201: Chapter 201

Well I hope he kicks Jacobs ass!!

Reviewer: Iluvlil lion Signed
Date: 26 Feb 2013 Title: Chapter 202: Chapter 202

Oh Charlie I hope you get your ass kicked too!!

Reviewer: Iluvlil lion Signed
Date: 01 Mar 2013 Title: Chapter 241: Chapter 241

He's sweet when he's not being an ass!!

Reviewer: Iluvlil lion Signed
Date: 01 Mar 2013 Title: Chapter 239: Chapter 239

Aww loved the chapter!! :)

Reviewer: Iluvlil lion Signed
Date: 01 Mar 2013 Title: Chapter 240: Chapter 240

:)

Reviewer: Iluvlil lion Signed
Date: 01 Mar 2013 Title: Chapter 236: Chapter 236

She's probably is turn on lol :)

Reviewer: Iluvlil lion Signed
Date: 01 Mar 2013 Title: Chapter 237: Chapter 237

Oh damn!! :D

Reviewer: Iluvlil lion Signed
Date: 01 Mar 2013 Title: Chapter 238: Chapter 238

Haha and she's the one who didn't want to be popping out babies lol :)

Reviewer: Iluvlil lion Signed
Date: 01 Mar 2013 Title: Chapter 235: Chapter 235

Aww their finally together!! :D

Reviewer: Iluvlil lion Signed
Date: 31 Jan 2013 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

Omg crazy people!! :)

Author's Response:

Thanks for reading and reviewing our story, we love that you all have taken the time to leave us some love.  Please Google and check out The Glory Awards, our story His Cimmerian View is up for an award against one of our favorite stories Better Than Pie ... Since we are up against such an outstanding story we ask that you go vote for one of the two, because they are both great.  Thanks for reading and reviewing and showing your love to DDKC.  Kasi & Nikky~

Reviewer: Iluvlil lion Signed
Date: 01 Mar 2013 Title: Chapter 232: Chapter 232

Haha loved it!! :D

Reviewer: Iluvlil lion Signed
Date: 01 Mar 2013 Title: Chapter 233: Chapter 233

Well I say fast full push cause slow hurt like yeah no words lol :)

Reviewer: Iluvlil lion Signed
Date: 01 Mar 2013 Title: Chapter 234: Chapter 234

Yeah he's way was better :)

Reviewer: Iluvlil lion Signed
Date: 15 Feb 2013 Title: Chapter 106: Chapter 106

Oh man she would pout cuz she can't see him anymore lol :)

Reviewer: Iluvlil lion Signed
Date: 15 Feb 2013 Title: Chapter 105: Chapter 105

Oh wow Bella she can't stop staring lol

Reviewer: Iluvlil lion Signed
Date: 01 Mar 2013 Title: Chapter 230: Chapter 230

Haha but he loves her and her mouth!! Lol :)

Reviewer: Iluvlil lion Signed
Date: 01 Mar 2013 Title: Chapter 231: Chapter 231

Damn!! :D

Reviewer: Iluvlil lion Signed
Date: 01 Mar 2013 Title: Chapter 229: Chapter 229

Damn!! I bet she's liking he's reaction to her v-card!! Lol :D

Reviewer: Iluvlil lion Signed
Date: 01 Mar 2013 Title: Chapter 227: Chapter 227

Oh she better and he better treat her good too!! :D

Reviewer: Iluvlil lion Signed
Date: 01 Mar 2013 Title: Chapter 228: Chapter 228

Oh damn!! Marriage!! O.O yup I love Edward even though he was an ass before!! :)

Reviewer: Iluvlil lion Signed
Date: 01 Mar 2013 Title: Chapter 226: Chapter 226

Oh O.O he just declared himself wow!! :)

Reviewer: Iluvlil lion Signed
Date: 01 Mar 2013 Title: Chapter 224: Chapter 224

So just like that he thinks he's going to sleep with her?? O.o

Reviewer: Iluvlil lion Signed
Date: 01 Mar 2013 Title: Chapter 225: Chapter 225

Oh shit!! Yeah he's going to be surprised lol :D

Reviewer: Iluvlil lion Signed
Date: 01 Mar 2013 Title: Chapter 223: Chapter 223

I just hope it's not Tanya or who knows maybe Charlie O.O

Reviewer: Iluvlil lion Signed
Date: 01 Mar 2013 Title: Chapter 222: Chapter 222

He better take care of her lol :)

Reviewer: Iluvlil lion Signed
Date: 19 Feb 2013 Title: Chapter 143: Chapter 143

O.O you said what?? Oh Edward I bet he's going to start treating her different after all the time he was being an ass and a jerk!! I hope she gives him hell and doesn't let him off the hook so easily!! :)

Reviewer: Iluvlil lion Signed
Date: 19 Feb 2013 Title: Chapter 139: Chapter 139

Oh Edward feeling like bad for all the stuff you said already?? And you trusted Angela?? O.o

Reviewer: Iluvlil lion Signed
Date: 19 Feb 2013 Title: Chapter 140: Chapter 140

Yup I'm glad she told him so now he can shut it!!

Reviewer: Iluvlil lion Signed
Date: 19 Feb 2013 Title: Chapter 141: Chapter 141

I bet it was Edward!! Can I say idiot!!!

Reviewer: Iluvlil lion Signed
Date: 19 Feb 2013 Title: Chapter 138: Chapter 138

You tell him Bella :)

Reviewer: Iluvlil lion Signed
Date: 19 Feb 2013 Title: Chapter 142: Chapter 142

Maybe he took all frustration on he's stuff!!

Reviewer: Iluvlil lion Signed
Date: 18 Feb 2013 Title: Chapter 132: Chapter 132

I hope he has manners and he's not an ass!!

Reviewer: Iluvlil lion Signed
Date: 18 Feb 2013 Title: Chapter 133: Chapter 133

Aha jerk I say anyways lol

Reviewer: Iluvlil lion Signed
Date: 18 Feb 2013 Title: Chapter 134: Chapter 134

Oh Edward your going to eat your words ass!!!

Reviewer: Iluvlil lion Signed
Date: 18 Feb 2013 Title: Chapter 135: Chapter 135

I hope it does and he at least gets kicked or punched lol

Reviewer: Iluvlil lion Signed
Date: 18 Feb 2013 Title: Chapter 136: Chapter 136

Oh Edward you jerk!!

Reviewer: Iluvlil lion Signed
Date: 18 Feb 2013 Title: Chapter 137: Chapter 137

Oh Edward yeah pretty soon your going to regret ever being an ass and a jerk to her!!

Reviewer: Iluvlil lion Signed
Date: 18 Feb 2013 Title: Chapter 130: Chapter 130

Oh ouch I bet that hurt Angela!! :D

Reviewer: Iluvlil lion Signed
Date: 18 Feb 2013 Title: Chapter 131: Chapter 131

I'm glad she didn't let Angela say all that nasty stuff to Alice!!! Oh and I bet Jasper isn't going to be too happy to hear those things about he's Alice!! :)

Reviewer: Iluvlil lion Signed
Date: 18 Feb 2013 Title: Chapter 128: Chapter 128

Oh damn I don't think that's going to end too good!!

Reviewer: Iluvlil lion Signed
Date: 18 Feb 2013 Title: Chapter 129: Chapter 129

Oh I hope she doesn't!! :)

Reviewer: Iluvlil lion Signed
Date: 07 Feb 2013 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18

I'm just glad she has Alice to support her :)

Reviewer: Iluvlil lion Signed
Date: 09 Feb 2013 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19

Yay Bella is in Chicago!! :)

Reviewer: Iluvlil lion Signed
Date: 09 Feb 2013 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20

Damn at least she's being smart lol yeah coffee here in Cali depends on where u buy it I think the most expensive is Starbucks I think lol I don't really drink coffee :D

Reviewer: Iluvlil lion Signed
Date: 09 Feb 2013 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21

Haha it would have been funny if she did chase him lol poor Bella

Reviewer: Iluvlil lion Signed
Date: 09 Feb 2013 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22

Damn poor Bella :(

Reviewer: Iluvlil lion Signed
Date: 09 Feb 2013 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23

Haha well at least she kicked he's ass bastard lol :)

Reviewer: Iluvlil lion Signed
Date: 09 Feb 2013 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24

Oh so it's Jasper Alice is after :) I hope he can see past the looks and date her aww Bella I hope we see Edward soon :D

Reviewer: Iluvlil lion Signed
Date: 09 Feb 2013 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 25

Oh yay Edward!! :) I hope she does good lol and I say Alice should go for it :D

Reviewer: Iluvlil lion Signed
Date: 09 Feb 2013 Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 26

Damn GO Bella hope she makes it :)

Reviewer: Iluvlil lion Signed
Date: 09 Feb 2013 Title: Chapter 27: Chapter 27

I hope she does great lol :)

Reviewer: Iluvlil lion Signed
Date: 09 Feb 2013 Title: Chapter 28: Chapter 28

Haha aww Bella :D

Reviewer: Iluvlil lion Signed
Date: 09 Feb 2013 Title: Chapter 29: Chapter 29

Huh Mr. Cullen was kind of rude I should say :) I wonder why :D

Reviewer: Iluvlil lion Signed
Date: 09 Feb 2013 Title: Chapter 30: Chapter 30

Oh why would he be so rude?? :)

Reviewer: Iluvlil lion Signed
Date: 09 Feb 2013 Title: Chapter 31: Chapter 31

Haha way to go Bella don't let him intimate you lol :D

Reviewer: Iluvlil lion Signed
Date: 09 Feb 2013 Title: Chapter 32: Chapter 32

Haha I think Edward likes her on her knees lol :D

Reviewer: Iluvlil lion Signed
Date: 09 Feb 2013 Title: Chapter 33: Chapter 33

Damn I'm loving it!! :D

Reviewer: Iluvlil lion Signed
Date: 09 Feb 2013 Title: Chapter 34: Chapter 34

Haha yeah GO BELLA!!! Show he's grumpy ass u can do it!! :D

Reviewer: Iluvlil lion Signed
Date: 09 Feb 2013 Title: Chapter 35: Chapter 35

Yay I'm seriously loving the way Bella is in this Drabble!! :D

Reviewer: Iluvlil lion Signed
Date: 09 Feb 2013 Title: Chapter 36: Chapter 36

Damn I hope he's nice and doesn't want to get in Bella's pants lol it would break Alice's heart :)

Reviewer: Iluvlil lion Signed
Date: 09 Feb 2013 Title: Chapter 37: Chapter 37

Yay go Bella I think Alice needs a major boost in her self esteem!! :D

Reviewer: Iluvlil lion Signed
Date: 09 Feb 2013 Title: Chapter 38: Chapter 38

Yeah I have and it hurts like a lot lol poor Bella :)

Reviewer: Iluvlil lion Signed
Date: 09 Feb 2013 Title: Chapter 39: Chapter 39

I hope Bella does make Alice come out of her shell :)

Reviewer: Iluvlil lion Signed
Date: 09 Feb 2013 Title: Chapter 40: Chapter 40

Of course :D lol I regret never doing anything but oh we'll that was like neons ago haha I'm glad jasper is sweet with Alice :D

Reviewer: Iluvlil lion Signed
Date: 09 Feb 2013 Title: Chapter 41: Chapter 41

Lol I think Rose is doing both things at once lol :D

Reviewer: Iluvlil lion Signed
Date: 09 Feb 2013 Title: Chapter 42: Chapter 42

Haha I think shot will hit the fan pretty soon as he sees her lol and I can't wait to see he's reaction haha :D

Reviewer: Iluvlil lion Signed
Date: 10 Feb 2013 Title: Chapter 43: Chapter 43

Aww Alice I hope she lets Jasper show her that she can be beautiful no mater what shape you are :)

Reviewer: Iluvlil lion Signed
Date: 10 Feb 2013 Title: Chapter 44: Chapter 44

Haha not really he's the only one for me lol :)

Reviewer: Iluvlil lion Signed
Date: 10 Feb 2013 Title: Chapter 45: Chapter 45

Haha maybe something like "Little Girl" or something related to kid just to mess with Edward haha :D

Reviewer: Iluvlil lion Signed
Date: 10 Feb 2013 Title: Chapter 46: Chapter 46

Yay ok the name took me by surprise but I loved it!!! :D I hope she does awesome and wows Edward lol :)

Reviewer: Iluvlil lion Signed
Date: 10 Feb 2013 Title: Chapter 47: Chapter 47

Damn I hope she leaves him speechless lol :D

Reviewer: Iluvlil lion Signed
Date: 10 Feb 2013 Title: Chapter 48: Chapter 48

Loving it lol :D

Reviewer: Iluvlil lion Signed
Date: 10 Feb 2013 Title: Chapter 49: Chapter 49

Yay go Bella!!! :D

Reviewer: Iluvlil lion Signed
Date: 10 Feb 2013 Title: Chapter 50: Chapter 50

I think she will lol :D hopefully she makes it!! :)

Reviewer: Iluvlil lion Signed
Date: 11 Feb 2013 Title: Chapter 51: Chapter 51

I bet it was Edward and Rose lol ey think she's too young haha I bet he's glaring cuz he likes her and hates other man seeing her practically naked lol :D

Reviewer: Iluvlil lion Signed
Date: 11 Feb 2013 Title: Chapter 52: Chapter 52

Oh Edward :)

Reviewer: Iluvlil lion Signed
Date: 11 Feb 2013 Title: Chapter 53: Chapter 53

OMG he's such a jerk hope she beats he's ass for talking to her like that :/

Reviewer: Iluvlil lion Signed
Date: 11 Feb 2013 Title: Chapter 54: Chapter 54

Damn go Bella don't let him push you around :)

Reviewer: Iluvlil lion Signed
Date: 11 Feb 2013 Title: Chapter 55: Chapter 55

I hope she does so he can eat he's words jerk!! :/

Reviewer: Iluvlil lion Signed
Date: 11 Feb 2013 Title: Chapter 56: Chapter 56

Well I hope he apologizes he's a jerk and I hope she gives him a hard time lol :D

Reviewer: Iluvlil lion Signed
Date: 11 Feb 2013 Title: Chapter 57: Chapter 57

He's jerk lol :)

Reviewer: Iluvlil lion Signed
Date: 11 Feb 2013 Title: Chapter 58: Chapter 58

Lol I bet their not haha :)

Reviewer: Iluvlil lion Signed
Date: 11 Feb 2013 Title: Chapter 59: Chapter 59

I bet that when it comes to Bella he doesn't lol :D

Reviewer: Iluvlil lion Signed
Date: 13 Feb 2013 Title: Chapter 60: Chapter 60

Haha I loved the chapter!! :)

Reviewer: Iluvlil lion Signed
Date: 13 Feb 2013 Title: Chapter 61: Chapter 61

I bet he fell off he's chair edit hat that or he's head hit the desk lol :)

Reviewer: Iluvlil lion Signed
Date: 13 Feb 2013 Title: Chapter 62: Chapter 62

Aww poor Alice I hope he gets the confidence to give Jasper a chance :)

Reviewer: Iluvlil lion Signed
Date: 13 Feb 2013 Title: Chapter 63: Chapter 63

:)

Reviewer: Iluvlil lion Signed
Date: 13 Feb 2013 Title: Chapter 64: Chapter 64

I think the other vote was from Edward and I bet because Bella is young and maybe because Jasper liked her and Bella's friend with Alice maybe lol :)