Reviews by breaking aurora
Summary:

Edward and Bella, kidnapped and forced to play out a sick man's fantasy where every decision has a consequence. Will Edward and Bella be able to admit their love after the trials they endure? ExB AxJ. Language,lemons, sexual violence,unconventional.

Thank you to JA Mash for the banner.


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Angst, Drama, Erotica, Romance, Suspense/Thriller
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Drive's Stories to read that are Completed, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, My Favorite Stories, Dumbi's Most Wanted
Chapters: 89 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 453698 Read Count: 923392
[Report This] Published: 02 Jun 2012 Updated: 29 Sep 2015
Reviewer: breaking aurora Signed
Date: 23 Sep 2014 Title: Chapter 87: Chapter 77

oh drats!  I'd assumed that the story was completed (even though it wasn't marked that way) -- while a lot of questions have been answered, I'd love to see the ending, the wedding, the babies, what exactly happened to Aro :-)  I know you're a busy bee, writing original fiction and all, but I hope you finish this sometime in the near future!  pretty, pretty please! :-) 

Reviewer: breaking aurora Signed
Date: 13 Sep 2014 Title: Chapter 33: Chapter 33

haha!  you go, Edward!  sex superstar!!! LOL :-)  oh, and poor Jasper, Mr. Quicky, it had been so long -- hopefully he won't feel guilty about it afterwards

Reviewer: breaking aurora Signed
Date: 14 Sep 2014 Title: Chapter 34: Chapter 34

hahahahaha!!!!!!!!!!!!  one chapter where I actually like Aro -- amazing! lol  Oh, this was such sweet revenge!!!  "anal sex is the devil's work"!!!  oh, and James breaking Alice's hymen....hmmm, wonder what happened there......what a sick f#cker he is!



Author's Response:

I love that you are reading and commenting.. makes me want to write more....

Reviewer: breaking aurora Signed
Date: 20 Sep 2014 Title: Chapter 56: Chapter 56

No, No!!!  don't stop the breast stimulation! :-) lol  While I don't want Aro or James touching Bella, the shower scene in this chapter, when Edward cums in Bella after swallowing down her milk, dear Lord, that was f#cking hot!!!!!!!!!!!!!!  I'm glad he's finally realized he has a little bit of a freaky side ;-)  I love how tender, yet primal they are with each other.  And yeah, i'm about to nail James in the nuts -- that guy needs to major dose of karma.  I think Victoria or one of the chicks should stab him in the neck and smile while watching him bleed to death -- I'm mean I know!!! lol  The pics for this chapter were super hot too!

Summary: Past Featured Story

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Edward Cullen is a famous movie star as is his girlfriend Tanya, the mother of his child. Their son is a week old and can't seem to keep any formula down. Annoyed by the crying and finding motherhood tedious, Tanya takes off for the spa and a commercial shoot leaving Edward alone with their newborn. 

After trying nearly every formula on the market, Esme, Edward's sister suggests breast milk. It seems like a long shot, but when Bella Swan answers the unusual ad, Edward thinks all of his problems are solved. His son is doing well, but he has a new problem, an undeniable attraction for the woman who saved his son's life. 

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Categories: Twilight
Characters: None
Genre: Erotica
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: Happily Ever After
Series: Read & Enjoyed
Chapters: 159 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 91905 Read Count: 1113980
[Report This] Published: 12 Jan 2015 Updated: 11 Jul 2017
Reviewer: breaking aurora Signed
Date: 07 Feb 2015 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

That's quite alright, hon -- doesn't have to be anything like IR -- I love seeing your range as an author! :-)  I can love both stories completely separate from one another -- just found the breastfeeding link interesting.  And you're updating IR this weekend?!  woohoo!!!!  I'm working all weekend, so I will have something to enjoy after a long day at work :-)



Author's Response:

IR had come to a restful place for me, but I do think that I'll put out the epilogues people wanted... give a real.. "and they lived happily ever after"  though I think I'll continue epilogues for a long, long time. 

Reviewer: breaking aurora Signed
Date: 06 Feb 2015 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 4 (Part 5)

I never review on this site for some reason - well, unless it's not posted on FFn, but your Rob gif inspired me to do so -- gahhhh, isn't he gorgeous?! lol  I'm loving this story so much, hon!  While I've been along the journey of "Involuntary Rapture", it's so interesting to see you write a different spin on breastfeeding :-)  This story is sweet, you can feel how desperate Edward is to get proper nutrition for his son, and I look forward to the ride you take us on, whether it be kinky or not.  I've been enjoying your daily updates so much and read them right away!  I sure hope Bella is open to Edward's proposition :-)



Author's Response:

Well, it's only a matter of time till ff kicks me off with milk money. They are quite uptight about their fictions. This is very different than IR... (which I'm updating this weekend!!!)

Reviewer: breaking aurora Signed
Date: 10 Oct 2015 Title: Chapter 105: Chapter 17 Part 5

Very hot snippet from "Breaking China"! :-)  -- still loving Milk Money too! I stop whatever I'm doing, every time it updates -- loved the latest update.  Glad to see E&B finally making some progress and looking forward to the fallout aimed at Tanya :-)

Reviewer: breaking aurora Signed
Date: 11 Mar 2015 Title: Chapter 48: Chapter 8 Part 8

Thank you, thank you, thank you for the "Yes Mistress" gift!  And duh, forgetful me, Happy Belated Birthday to you too!!!  So sorry I didn't send a note on Facebook.  I just read today's update through your blog and LOL -- poor Edward and his interrupted wet dream! :-))))  I've also been reading "Yes, Master" on my Kindle too - so hot!  I'll be sure and leave you a review when I finish!  :-)  As for this particular chapter --- ohhhh, the press statement -- I have a strange feeling that Tanya will suddenly appear once she realizes Mr. Broccoli Cheddar Soup (is that the right name?!) has moved in!!!  I'm sure she'll sign up to be Mother of the Year (yeah right!)

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Summary: Emmett Cullen messes up and has to repeat his senior year of high school. What will happen when he starts bringing home Bella, and how will his father Edward react? Things get intense when Edward starts to think of Bella in more ways than just his son's girlfriend.


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Erotica, Friendship, Hurt/Comfort,, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiHu
Chapters: 25 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 85896 Read Count: 126038
[Report This] Published: 01 Jul 2015 Updated: 05 Oct 2015
Reviewer: breaking aurora Signed
Date: 07 Aug 2015 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11

Yay! following you on TWCS now, because who wants an edited chapter?! hehe....nah, I understand about needing to comply with FFn's TOS.  Loved this chapter -- more and more pieces added to E & B's puzzle, and we get to see Emmett's childlike side.  I love the "mom" moments that Emmett and Bella share at times, so she should be able to slip right into that role quite well ;-)  And Christmas holiday coming up -- can't wait!!! ho ho ho 'fo 'sho!!! LOL I love the frequent updates - thank you!!!

Reviewer: breaking aurora Signed
Date: 22 Sep 2015 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23

Bow chicka bow wow! :-) hehe.....Man, Bella's parents are @ssholes!  I'd say good riddance but I know she's not ready to sever all ties.  As always, I love Tia! :-)