Reviews by foreverjasperskitten
The Perfect Wife by rmcrms5 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 3541]
Summary: Past Featured Story

After Renee and Phil die in a car accident on Bella’s 17th birthday. She is sent to live with her father, Charlie and brother, James in Forks WA after being separated for 10 years with no contact. Charlie dabbles in training and placement of the “perfect” wife for exclusive clientele. Bella quickly learns that she’s going that she’s going to get more than a high school education. She's going to be educated with a purpose.
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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories, LeslieWhitlock's completed & recommended read stories, Finished, Themslovebug90's read stories, My Favorite Stories, Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiMaf, Read & Enjoyed
Chapters: 55 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 244105 Read Count: 1625340
[Report This] Published: 23 Jan 2010 Updated: 07 Oct 2010
Reviewer: foreverjasperskitten Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 06 May 2012 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 18

I'm so eager to know if Bella will have the oppurtunity to tell Edward about how James raped her anally and that Charlie has photos of her. To me this is important. I almost can't wait to know. And to see what kind of retribution will be given.

Great story brw:)



Author's Response:

Thanks for giving the story a shot. I hope you continue to enjoy.

Love and Obsession by michelly Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 284]
Summary: Past Featured Story

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Things were just starting to calm down for Emmett and Bella since the death of their parents, when the new kid James comes to town and shakes up Bella’s world.

Her crush had turned into love, his love turned into obsession. His obsession became Bella’s nightmare.

B/Jms at first then B/E


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: G8or Favor8s Read
Chapters: 30 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 230732 Read Count: 36438
[Report This] Published: 17 Apr 2010 Updated: 15 Nov 2011
Reviewer: foreverjasperskitten Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 09 Mar 2012 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22

I have to admit I'm not an Edward/Bella paired fan. I'm more of a Jasper/Bella fan. Mostly because most Edwards in fics I've read and in the movie are emo and broody. Don't get me wrong, I LOVE Rob bigtime. Anyway, I think your version of Edward is the best written that I've read so far. I really like him in this fic. You really are an amazing writer and after this I look forward to more of your stories:)



Author's Response:

Reviewer: foreverjasperskitten Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 06 Mar 2012 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Wow! I really enjoyed this first chapter. When Bella spoke of the loss of her parents and the greif and sorrow her and Emmett share, I actually sobbed. It was pretty powerful. 

Great GREAT job on the beginning of what I'm sure I will find to be a wonderful fic.

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Date: 07 Mar 2012 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

Those were some great jokes! 

What does James think or feel about Edward's Affection towards Bella?

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Date: 08 Mar 2012 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18

This chapter had me in tears. I have 3 boys of my own and can't have anymore. And even though I'm grateful for them, I still yearn for another. With that and this exceptionally well written chapter I needed half a box of Kleenex. Good job!

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Date: 09 Mar 2012 Title: Chapter 27: Chapter 27

I just wanted to say, after reading your authors note in the beginning, you have a duty to yourself first and foremost when painting "your" vision. I'm appalled that some of your readers would actually send you hate mail, as if in order to sway you to write or not write the way they wanted. It's crass and dispicable. Take what you can from the haters if anything, and ignore the rest. Don't ever sell yourself short or change for anyone but you. I'm behind you 100%