Reviews by Khoes
Summary: Past Featured Story

She thought he was everything; He thought she hung the moon. Now, Bella and Edward face their toughest challenge in a race against time. Will love be enough? AH & NC-17 Cannon Pairings.

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Categories: Twilight, All Human, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02 WIP Reads, Stories to read, Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiHu, Stories I've Already read, My Favorite Stories, Dumbeline's WIP to read list, to read
Chapters: 47 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 133949 Read Count: 159982
[Report This] Published: 08 Jan 2011 Updated: 10 Mar 2014
Reviewer: Khoes Signed
Date: 08 Jan 2013 Title: Chapter 31: Chapter 31

Leaving readers with a cliffy is torture! Update soon! 

 

Come Closer by Chloe Masen Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 437]
Summary: Past Featured Story

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Come Closer... Isabella. The one woman Edward can't have. The one woman he doesn't dare claim. Does he? Is he strong enough to resist the forbidden?


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Lilyellacullens want to read list!, Dumbi's Most Wanted, Read & Enjoyed
Chapters: 36 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 169215 Read Count: 103462
[Report This] Published: 25 Aug 2011 Updated: 21 Apr 2013
Reviewer: Khoes Signed
Date: 01 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8 : Masochists

I started this story a while ago, but I didn't remember why I stopped until I reread. It's a good story and it flows nicely, but I feel like Bella's character did a 360 that seemed a little too fast and unreal. It went from this innocent, holding her stuffed animal, sweet character to a foul mouthed bad girl dynamic within a chapter.  From the attack at her work to the dinner where she calls Edward "slutward" it just felt like it was a whole new character all of a sudden. It's just my opinion. I feel like the dynamics of Bella's character just changed too drastically in too short of a time span.

Summary: Past Featured Story

My continuation of the 50 Shades Series. One of my qualms with the series is that it didn't really develop Ana Steele as a person. My focus is to add more depth to her and continue the story. With my sense of humor. It begins with Ana 5 months pregnant

My story has language throughout and some sexual content.

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Categories: Fifty Shades Trilogy
Characters: Anastasia Steele/Christian Grey
Genre: Drama, Humor
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: Happily Ever After
Series: 50 Shades - Read
Chapters: 18 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 24265 Read Count: 49123
[Report This] Published: 27 Jun 2012 Updated: 28 Jun 2012
Reviewer: Khoes Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 08 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 1: Love you, Mean it.

You're writing is good. It's hard to find authors who can really mimick the feel of a book, but you did a really good job of making it seem like it was Ana and Christian. Enjoying reading this! Keep it up. 

Summary:

The Quileute legends were not entirely accurate in their depiction of imprinting. Who was to know that the pack imperative was so strong? Bella is just about to find out how strong. A/U. Warning: menage, mature themes, domestic discipline.


Categories: Twilight, Alternate Universe, Non-Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Brady, Bella/Colin, Bella/Embry, Bella/Jacob, Bella/Jared, Bella/Paul, Bella/Quil, Bella/Sam, Bella/Seth
Genre: Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 2 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 277262 Read Count: 388292
[Report This] Published: 06 Jul 2012 Updated: 05 Oct 2019
Reviewer: Khoes Signed
Date: 12 Jun 2013 Title: The Pack Imperative

You're back! This story is always on my mind! Thanks for updating!

Reviewer: Khoes Signed
Date: 22 Jan 2013 Title: The Pack Imperative

Loving this story. I get so excited for updates from you! Excited to see how the story progresses.  Thanks for the update! 

Tribute by SexylexiCullen Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 3420]
Summary: Past Featured Story

The Few. The Proud. The Strong. Returning Marine Edward Masino has spent the first years of his adult life embodying that motto. But as he moves back to the Brooklyn neighborhood where he grew up, he is introduced to a whole new code of ethics. He quickly learns that some rules cry out to be bent, but there are others that, if broken, will get him killed.

*Drama. Humor. Romance. Hurt. Friendship. Crime, you name it. It's listed Drama/Romance, but there are many facets. EVENTUAL Canon Couples (Rome wasn't built in a day) Edward/Bella.

Beta'd by HollettLA

Banner by CaraNo


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Action, Angst, Drama, Friendship, Humor, Hurt/Comfort,, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Lilyellacullens want to read list!, Dumbi's Most Wanted, Misstoria's Stories to Read
Chapters: 123 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 200288 Read Count: 717533
[Report This] Published: 11 Jan 2013 Updated: 23 Sep 2013
Reviewer: Khoes Signed
Date: 26 Jan 2013 Title: Chapter 43: Chapter 43

Yikes! Read a lot of mob fiction and have never read about cleaving and grinding a body! Even said "eww" outloud imagining that scene. Loving your series. Was scared when your story disappeared from FF!