Reviews by Princess Mishawaka
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A silent war came that changed everything. Humans are chosen at birth to be a vampires mate. What happens when Bella is given to the God of War on her 16th Birthday? Will she survive the darkness and her mate? Or will she beg for her own death.


Categories: Non-Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Jasper
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 23 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 69505 Read Count: 108585
[Report This] Published: 10 Feb 2010 Updated: 28 Oct 2011
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Date: 22 Aug 2010 Title: Once Upon a Vampire

Love this story and am so glad you are posting to it. It must be Carlisle who is after Bella but I just don't know. I want to see the major in action and it looks like I will very soon.

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Date: 08 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20

I know vampires can be cruel creatures and I know that they can also be fantastic lovers. Jasper is both. The Major just seems to be cruel.

I think Bella will be more able to tolerate and even to challenge Jasper as she grows into her part as his mate. But can she live through being mated with the Major.

Love this story, glad you are posting again. You are the very best author.

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On a mid-September evening, Edward Cullen broke off his relationship with Bella and the entire Cullen family left Forks never to be seen again.

2 years have passed and now Bella Swan is a Psychology & English Literature undergraduate at MIT University. She has abandoned love and any sort of relationship, burying her self in her studies and a limited social life. But when an unexpected guest arrives at MIT during the fall, she finds herself reunited with The Cullens and embraces the dawning of a new threat on the horizon that could divide her and the Cullens for the last time.

 


Categories: Twilight, Alternate Universe
Characters: None
Genre: Drama, Romance, Supernatural
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02 Bella/Jasper stories
Chapters: 32 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 185139 Read Count: 17980
[Report This] Published: 01 Mar 2010 Updated: 06 Feb 2011
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Date: 31 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

I have been reading this on fanfic so I couldn't wait to read it here and see what you have changed or added. I love this story it's full of mystery.

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Elizabeth is bought from her father to be Aro's bride. She is kept prisoner in his home and has to endure unspeakable torture. This is an out take for Involuntary Rapture.


Categories: Non-Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Other Misc Char or Pairings(nc)
Genre: Angst
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Drive's Stories to read that are Completed, My Favorite Stories
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 9621 Read Count: 5262
[Report This] Published: 17 Jun 2012 Updated: 17 Jun 2012
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Date: 24 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 1: Elizabeth's Story

Very good writing. Very difficult story to write but you did it very well. I feel so sorry for Elizabeth and all she had to endure but in the end she had the  man she wanted and her baby. It seems Anthony loves her so much that raising the baby as his own is no impossition. I did love the ending you wrote for Aro. Smashed peen. I wish his father had one too and mouth too. I hated the father more than Aro. I wonder if Aro would have even done this if his father hadn't made him. I guess Aro's mother had to go through it too so Aro probably thought it was acceptable. 

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"Sticks and stones may break our bones... but Bella will surely kill us."

 

What happens when an overprotective father sends his innocent baby girl to a private self-defense course run by a gay man?  Oh if he only knew what he was paying for!  Edward and Jasper aren't the only ones who have something to teach, seems Bella does as well... the art of patience.

Poly/slash included.

Extended past the June Drabble War entry.

Picks up right after Bella shoots Mike. :)

Beta'd by the amazing texasbella and the beautiful banner made by the ever so talented JA Mash

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Categories: Twilight, Non-Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward/Jasper
Genre: Adventure, Erotica, Family, Humor, Romance, Slash
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Love to drive's Stories to read, Love to drive's Stories to read set 2, My Favorite Stories
Chapters: 126 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 25886 Read Count: 407945
[Report This] Published: 22 Jun 2012 Updated: 19 Aug 2012
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Date: 29 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

I think Charlie is a very smart man. Learning to shoot is the perfect birth control option for a girl

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Date: 29 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

Charlie is a bit over protective

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Date: 07 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

So priviledged to have Charlie for a father

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Date: 07 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

Bella just give in and go on with your life. Charlie will never back down.

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Date: 07 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

Oh Charlie is so smug

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Date: 07 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

OMG Bella is primed and ready for the guys at this camp

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Date: 07 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

Oh no Bella they might be gay but they could also be hunks

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Date: 07 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

Oh Bella I hope you packed your big dildo's because you will probably need them

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Date: 07 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

Typical Bella starting out with a BANG

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Date: 07 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11

OH I love Emmett and yes he is a hunk. So Edward is a Ho

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Date: 07 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12

I guess Edward and Jasper build there place in a hill. Oh no Em has a wife. DUH

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Date: 07 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13

Good girl Bella she brought her toys

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Date: 07 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14

Oh come on Bella give it a try

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Date: 07 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15

OMG Bella is going to take a sexy shower. Hope Eddy doesn't walk in

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Date: 07 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16

Now the question is whether the guys would walk in on Bella or Bella walk in on the guys

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Date: 07 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17

Oh wow I guess the phone is going to stop the abrupt discovery of sex/Bella/Ed/Jaz

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Date: 07 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18

She knows Jasper.. huh this is getting good

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Date: 07 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19

Oh Yes, they are all screwed

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Date: 07 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20

Oh come on Edward stop being such a bitch

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Date: 07 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21

Oh Bella is telling all on Jasper

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Date: 07 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22

Divide and conquer thats the name of the game

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Date: 07 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23

Yes, Edward you have turned into a squeeling girl

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Date: 07 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24

Oh no Jasper left and Edward is alone with Bella and she has her claws out

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Date: 07 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 25

OMG Edward is over powered and can no longer project respect

Boobage I love Emmett

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Date: 07 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 26

Oh Jasper you should have tried to hang on to Bella but it's true she is a daddy's girl

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Date: 07 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 27: Chapter 27

OH Bella what a move. I love it. She wins

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Date: 07 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 28: Chapter 28

Well Edward is stuck in the closit and Charlie is coming to check on his little girl. YAY

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Date: 07 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 29: Chapter 29

That's right Edward you need to fear Bella's cooking because it's the fastest way to your heart

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Date: 07 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 30: Chapter 30

Not going to bed yet boys now you have to work for your supper

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Edward Cullen is a famous movie star as is his girlfriend Tanya, the mother of his child. Their son is a week old and can't seem to keep any formula down. Annoyed by the crying and finding motherhood tedious, Tanya takes off for the spa and a commercial shoot leaving Edward alone with their newborn. 

After trying nearly every formula on the market, Esme, Edward's sister suggests breast milk. It seems like a long shot, but when Bella Swan answers the unusual ad, Edward thinks all of his problems are solved. His son is doing well, but he has a new problem, an undeniable attraction for the woman who saved his son's life. 

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Categories: Twilight
Characters: None
Genre: Erotica
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: Happily Ever After
Series: Read & Enjoyed
Chapters: 159 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 91905 Read Count: 1113980
[Report This] Published: 12 Jan 2015 Updated: 11 Jul 2017
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Date: 30 Aug 2015 Title: Chapter 85: Chapter 85

Thank you for adding a peek of China. I can't wait for it to come out.

Milk Money is always good and I loved that Charlie was gaining weight and was really doing well.

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Date: 09 Feb 2015 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 5 (part 5)

Bella isn't the nanny she is the milk maid. I think Edward will be singing a different tune very soon. He has been emotionly alone for a long time now.



Author's Response:

His whole life.. and I love that you review and over at ff :)   You are soooo cute!  

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Date: 25 Jul 2015 Title: Chapter 76: Chapter 13 Part 4

Please, please, please let the pop take more pictures and gossip more about Alice than Tanya and then Tanya gets mad.... oh I can't wait

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Date: 06 Mar 2015 Title: Chapter 45: Chapter 8 part 5

Oh they will move in. Alice is beyond excited to be close to Jasper and Bella doesn't know it yet but she wants to be closer to Edward

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Date: 23 Mar 2015 Title: Chapter 52: Chapter 9 Part 2

Alice and Emmett make any chapter funny. I love it.

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Date: 21 Sep 2015 Title: Chapter 90: Chapter 15 part 5

Edward is going to learn the hard way that Tanya the selfish brat is not true to him. I think he will know on their "date" he isn't the only one.

He needs to be better than Tanya and just walk away and not fight about it or out do her in cheating by mentioning Bella.

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Date: 17 Jul 2015 Title: Chapter 75: Chapter 13 part 3

Love the picture. Where is Bella???? I hope she isn't downstairs getting grilled by Tanya in front of their friends? Oh Edward get down there right now.

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Date: 17 Mar 2015 Title: Chapter 51: Chapter 9 Part 1

Just a simple laugh makes a house a home.

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Date: 12 Oct 2015 Title: Chapter 110: Chapter 17 Part 10

Such a good story I can't stop reading it. I even re read it.

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Date: 16 Aug 2015 Title: Chapter 78: Chapter 13 Part 6

Just perfect

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Date: 15 Aug 2015 Title: Chapter 77: Chapter 13 Part 5

So good. I love the way everything Bella does, including sitting on the couch, turns Edward on.

Hope Edward wins and Tanya doesn't

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Date: 30 Aug 2015 Title: Chapter 84: Chapter 14 part 4

Good for Elizabeth she got a good jab at Tanya and there was nothing she could do about it because the words came from her and Elizabeth just parroted her.

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Date: 09 Feb 2015 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 5 (Part 4)

Yes, Edward Bella is a beautiful woman and even Charlie knows she has breasts.

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Date: 27 Aug 2015 Title: Chapter 83: Chapter 14 part 3

I love this story and that Edward mentioned his son and Bella in his talk at the Oscars. I wonder about this tv show Edward and Tanya are starring in??

I bought your book can't hardly wait to read it.

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Date: 05 Feb 2015 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 4 (Part 5)

Oh No Edward. Charlie needs Bella you can't let her go. I even think Edward is falling in love with her.

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Date: 07 Jul 2015 Title: Chapter 73: Chapter 13 part 1

Tanya does. She may just do it too just to make a point that SHE is the mother.

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Date: 06 Feb 2015 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 5 (part 2)

Love picture.

Yes, Bella needs to eat more and drink lots of milk to nurse Charlie. I hope she does come to Edwards to feed Charlie.

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Date: 12 Jun 2015 Title: Chapter 68: Chapter 12 Part 2

So good. Can't wait to read about Alice's dress

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Date: 13 Oct 2015 Title: Chapter 111: Chapter 17 Part 11

For sure the slut sign was for Tanya? I hope so. Can't wait to see what Jasper puts out about Edward and Bella hugging.

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Date: 11 Oct 2015 Title: Chapter 109: Chapter 17 Part 9

Bella and Edward need to be so very careful because Tanya can fight custody and maybe even win. Especially if she proves adultry.

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Date: 18 Sep 2015 Title: Chapter 88: Chapter 15 part 3

I love this story but am mad at Edward right now.

I got your book Breaking China. I really loved it and although it was a bit hotter than I usually read I really enjoyed it.

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Date: 15 Oct 2015 Title: Chapter 112: Chapter 112

Tanya and James have a lot of gaal to stay at Edward's house even if they were just waiting to talk and even I don't believe that.

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Date: 25 Jun 2015 Title: Chapter 72: Chapter 12 part 6

Bella is just asking to get hurt. She will be sent packing with her little girl who was just getting used to living the rich life. Not to forget Charlie he will be completely confused and sad if Bella goes.

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Date: 25 Aug 2015 Title: Chapter 82: Chapter 82

Yes, I do think Edward could play a vampire. Emmett is a bad boy and Bella is way too open to keep this secret.

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Date: 13 Jun 2015 Title: Chapter 69: Chapter 12 Part 3

Love this story. I almost cried myself when you wrote about Edward crying.

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Date: 20 Aug 2015 Title: Chapter 81: Chapter 14 Part 1

Love this story

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Date: 11 Sep 2015 Title: Chapter 87: Chapter 15 Part 2

Great picture.

I think Edward is all caught up in Bella and since she has his son with her all the time it's just that Bella has a sure thing.

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Date: 28 Feb 2015 Title: Chapter 41: Chapter 8 Part 1

Very good chapter. Edward is acting like a father rather than a man who watches his little son die

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Date: 18 Aug 2015 Title: Chapter 80: Chapter 13 part 8

Kids say the darnist things. They are usually true.

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Date: 17 Aug 2015 Title: Chapter 79: Chapter 13 part 7

Edward is such a good father. Who is Jasper hiding upstairs? I want to know?

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Date: 01 Sep 2015 Title: Chapter 86: Chapter 15 Part 1

Rose and Emmett it always works out between the two of them. They may fight but they also make up. Edward will be surprised someday when he goes looking for Em and can't find him or Rose???

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Date: 02 Jun 2015 Title: Chapter 65: Chapter 11 part 5

Gotta hate Tanya especially after what she said about her baby not eating. She is no mother.

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Date: 19 Jun 2015 Title: Chapter 70: Chapter 12 Part 4

Tanya needs to have blue paint put into her shampoo HA

I just can't stand her but Edward married her and now the baby is hers too. Bella can't forget that

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Date: 26 May 2015 Title: Chapter 64: Chapter 11 Part 4

Very good. I love to see Tanya mad as a wet hen. She didn't want to breast feed Charlie so what's wrong with Bella doing it.

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Date: 25 Jan 2015 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 3 (part 1)

Love this story. Especially love baby Charlie

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Date: 20 Jun 2015 Title: Chapter 71: Chapter 12 Part 5

Beautiful picture of Bella.

Edward has to get through this oscar mess before he can do anything. He has to make a choice before he acts and he is about to act right now.

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Date: 27 Jan 2015 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 3 (part 2)

My 1st son, Mike was bound up and couldn't poop. I was young and I gave him an enema. Holding his little feet up I put my head down by his bottom to watch for the stuff to come. It came and it came in my face. My mother was watching and this story follows Mike and me still, years later.

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Date: 27 Jan 2015 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 3 (part 3)

Love Edward's thoughts. He loves his son so much and they are completely tied to Bella for Charlie's food source. When will they figure out that Bella needs to move in and feed little Charlie herself.

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Date: 29 Jan 2015 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 3 (part 5)

Every time I find one of your stories I celebrate because I know I have a treat in front of me. I love to read your work because it is flawless and really interesting. You can take a story like Twilight and make it yours and it's a whole lot better than SM.
I will just jump into this one and read whenever I can get a minute here and there. Wish I could just read straight through but I spend so much time with my husband and everything that goes along with the nursing home. Your stories give me a reprieve.



Author's Response:

I love that my stories give you reprieve, and that you feel like they are my own. I appreciate the praise, but I love Twilght! Also, it's far from flawless (this isn't even edited, but it will be if I publish it. Right now I'm just enjoying writing and reading reviews.)

Thanks for your wonderful words

 

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Date: 30 Jan 2015 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 3 (part 6)

Love this story

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Date: 31 Jan 2015 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 3 (Part 7)

I think little Charlie has quite a few people dancing around waiting to do anything for him. Too bad his mother is a witch

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Date: 01 Feb 2015 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 4 (part 1)

Kristin is a beautiful woman. I can't wait to see her in the film about Alzheimers, forget the name..HA guess I really need it. Darn Word, I hate it. not my day. I am snowed in too. I love this story and I want Edward to see Bella's beauty.



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It's snowing hard here. I bet we are close!

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Date: 01 Feb 2015 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I am in Mishawaka, IN. About an hour east from Chicago and the Univ. of Notre Dame is here. We will get lake effect snow from Lake Michigan so we will be snowed in for a while.



Author's Response:

I'm an hour north of Chicago so we're getting the same snow!

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Date: 02 Feb 2015 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 4 (part 2)

Very good chapter. I hope Edward appreciates everything Bella is doing.

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Date: 03 Feb 2015 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 4 (part 3)

Now Bella is doing a mother's job and loves to do it for Charlie. Edward has to see it and soften his heart.

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Date: 04 Feb 2015 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 4 (part 4)

There now Edward can see the real family. Mama feeding the baby and Daddy who should divorce Tanya and make it a real family in name too.

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Date: 10 Feb 2015 Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 5 (part 6)

He will soon find out who Bella Swan is. I believe Edward is showing some feelings of protection for her. hmmmm

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Date: 12 Feb 2015 Title: Chapter 28: Chapter 5 (part 8)

Edward is enchanted with Bella breast feeding Charlie. He is thinking of her in a sexual way even though he knows breast feeding is natural. She is not trying to turn him on she is feeding Charlie

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Date: 14 Feb 2015 Title: Chapter 29: Chapter 5 (Part 9)

Love this chapter. It shows the opposites that Tanya and Bella are. The dresses vs changing Charlie's diaper.

You write very good and I really love your work.

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Date: 16 Feb 2015 Title: Chapter 31: Chapter 6 Part 1

Charlie must be a beautiful baby. Edward is right about the papazz as they are everywhere.

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Date: 17 Feb 2015 Title: Chapter 32: Chapter 6 (part 2)

Bella is doing everything for Charlie and her own little girl is going without her mama.

She is going to have to bring her along to Edward's house that's the only answer.

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Date: 18 Feb 2015 Title: Chapter 33: Chapter 6 (Part 3)

I love Alice she will protect Elizabeth no matter what. She can't go home so I can only imagine what was going through her head. I am so glad Edward is on top of it and is going to help

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Date: 19 Feb 2015 Title: Chapter 34: Chapter 6 (Part 4)

I really love the pictures you show at the end. Edward (Rob) and Bella (Kristin) seem so happy. It was so nice when they got along.

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Date: 20 Feb 2015 Title: Chapter 35: Chapter 7 (Part 1)

Who is Elizabeth's father? I can't remember if you ever said.



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It's Jacob. He was kinda an ass. Decided to just move along. Free spirit type.

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Date: 21 Feb 2015 Title: Chapter 36: Chapter 7 Part 2

Edward sure is a lucky guy. He gets to meet Alice and make an enemy at the same time.

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Date: 22 Feb 2015 Title: Chapter 37: Chapter 7 part 3

Now Alice knows about Tanya and all her evil ways of ignoring her own child. I can see how Alice would think they were talking about her and I am glad they worked that out.

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Date: 23 Feb 2015 Title: Chapter 38: Chapter 7 (Part 4)

Ashley Greene is so beautiful. I think she has Jasper wrapped around her finger right where he is supposed to be.

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Date: 25 Feb 2015 Title: Chapter 39: Chapter 7 part 5

What a picture it must have been for Alice to see Bella feeding Charlie. She has to know that this is all a dream and the minute Tanya walks in everybody will wake up

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Date: 27 Feb 2015 Title: Chapter 40: Chapter 7 Part 6

Very good chapter. I really love this story

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Date: 02 Mar 2015 Title: Chapter 42: Chapter 8 Part 2

Elizabeth is so sweet.

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Date: 04 Mar 2015 Title: Chapter 43: Chapter 8 part 3

They do make a perfect picture of a happy family

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Date: 10 Mar 2015 Title: Chapter 47: Chapter 8 part 7

Oh I want to be right here on my couch reading this when Tanya shows up. BONG, BANG, BOOM there will be an explosion.

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Date: 11 Mar 2015 Title: Chapter 48: Chapter 8 Part 8

Gotta read about Alice and Jasper racing.

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Date: 13 Mar 2015 Title: Chapter 49: Chapter 8 Part 9

What a dream. I love the picture

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Date: 16 Mar 2015 Title: Chapter 50: Chapter 8 part 10

Such a good chapter. It shows how bad Edward wants Bella and how he forgets all propriety.

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Date: 24 Mar 2015 Title: Chapter 53: Chapter 9 Part 3

Very good story. I love it.

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Date: 28 Mar 2015 Title: Chapter 54: Chapter 10 Part 1

All seems to be quiet at the Cullens. Fun and love abound. It's all going to fall down on their heads soon as Tanya comes in the door.