Reviews by tuggerpie
Summary: Past Featured Story

15 yr old Bella has a fairly normal life. That was until her mum's new boyfriend came on the scene. Will Bella survive her new life? Dark Themes, Cannon Pairings. GRAPHIC

Thanks mkystich for the amazing new banner... AGAIN!!! :)


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's not read yet, I Whitlock's read , My Favorite Stories
Chapters: 37 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 89516 Read Count: 311087
[Report This] Published: 21 Jan 2010 Updated: 04 May 2011
Reviewer: tuggerpie Signed
Date: 25 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9 : Rebirth

Thanks for the update!  Can't wait for the next chapter.  

Reviewer: tuggerpie Signed
Date: 06 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10 - In My Hands

I DIDN'T get my post, but was cruising by anyway!  Seriously, you guys amaze and scare the hell at of me at the same time.  It gave me goose bumps....

Reviewer: tuggerpie Signed
Date: 20 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11 - Not Your Own

Wow, Aro is going to punish her for his own feelings.  I can already see it coming!  I am hoping the "Future" she meets tomorrow is Edward.  Great chapter ladies!

Summary: Past Featured Story

Bella gets sent to a school by her boyfriend to help her become the wife he wants. It isn't what Bella expects, at all.

BDSM, Dark story.

 

 

 

 


Categories: Non-Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward, Bella/Alice, Bella/Carlisle, Bella/Emmett, Bella/James, Bella/Jasper, Bella/Jasper/Alice, Bella/Rose, Carlisle/Esme, Carlisle/Other or Original Character, Edward/Bella/OC, Edward/Carlisle (Slash), Edward/Jasper (slash)
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: My To Read List, Ageise02's Read Stories, Finished, I Whitlock's read , My Favorite Stories, To Read
Chapters: 78 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 297603 Read Count: 1514751
[Report This] Published: 22 Jan 2010 Updated: 21 May 2010
Reviewer: tuggerpie Signed
Date: 19 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 71: Chapter 70: Bella DAY 23 and 24

O.M.G.  I am screaming like a little bitch right now!  What is it about the two of you and your story telling that has me squirming at the edge of my set checking my email for updates every two minutes.   O.M.G. I bow to your feet, you guys are so awesome! 

Reviewer: tuggerpie Signed
Date: 02 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1: Bella - DAY 1

OMG!   The anticipation is killing me.  The next chapter is BPOV, right?  Oh no, it's going to be EPOV and the anticipation is going to kill me even more!!!!!

Reviewer: tuggerpie Signed
Date: 10 Mar 2010 Title: The Training School Saga

I can not wait for the next chapter.........  

Reviewer: tuggerpie Signed
Date: 25 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 75: Chapter 74: James

YAY!!!!!!!  If Bella takes care of James herself she can heal that much quicker and not feel like she is dependent on Edward.  I hope it's a BPOV next!!!

Reviewer: tuggerpie Signed
Date: 17 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 76: Chapter 75 - Bella

Great ending for James!  Instead of showing Bella before she met James, I would like to see more of how James changed Bella during the relationship prior to dropping her off at the school.  It is very easy for someone to manipulate and control someone else by various forms of abuse whether it be physical, verbal or emotional.  I think showing that aspect of the story, although we see it in Victoria, would maybe shed the light to so many people that may not even realize it is happening to them.  Given Victoria's own past, it is easy to see how quickly he got to her, but Bella is a whole other story. I think for the most part we all feel Bella is a strong character in general so I can't see it being so easy for James to change her.  It must have taken a while to break down Bella and cut her off from her family and friends.  

Only two chapters left!!!!! : ( : ( : ( : ( : (

Reviewer: tuggerpie Signed
Date: 21 May 2010 Title: Chapter 78: Chapter 78

Did you have to end it there???  Come on, one more smuttake would have eased the pain of the story ending just a little!!!  Great job girls!  I am really sorry to see this story end.  Can't wait to see what you two come up with next!!!

The Perfect Wife by rmcrms5 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 3541]
Summary: Past Featured Story

After Renee and Phil die in a car accident on Bella’s 17th birthday. She is sent to live with her father, Charlie and brother, James in Forks WA after being separated for 10 years with no contact. Charlie dabbles in training and placement of the “perfect” wife for exclusive clientele. Bella quickly learns that she’s going that she’s going to get more than a high school education. She's going to be educated with a purpose.
I don’t own Twilight

 

 

TPW Avi 

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories, LeslieWhitlock's completed & recommended read stories, Finished, Themslovebug90's read stories, My Favorite Stories, Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiMaf, Read & Enjoyed
Chapters: 55 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 244105 Read Count: 1625009
[Report This] Published: 23 Jan 2010 Updated: 07 Oct 2010
Reviewer: tuggerpie Signed
Date: 23 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 48: Chapter 47

Oh my frigg'n GOD!!!!!

Reviewer: tuggerpie Signed
Date: 25 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 49: Chapter 48

I was so scared (for Bella) to read this chapter.  Thank you for not letting Edward go back to the dark side.  I am still hoping he will off Carlise in the near future so that the whole family is safe.  Maybe Esme has something in the garden to help get rid of Carlise.....(one can only hope!) 

Thanks for the update, especially so quickly.  Your story and writing is awesome!!!

 

Reviewer: tuggerpie Signed
Date: 05 Mar 2010 Title: The Perfect Wife

That was beautiful! 

Reviewer: tuggerpie Signed
Date: 27 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 51: Chapter 50

Oh poor Bella, please let that be Edward there to rescue her.  Awesome Chapter, major heart-fail, but still awesome.  So Demetri's dad is unaware of his plan, but  is Carlise?????  Can't wait till the next chapter, thanks for the update!

Summary: Past Featured Story

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Edward has given up ever finding a vampire mate. He's decided on a new strategy-he'll find a human to become his mate. Easier said than done when others are in the way of who he wants.

Banner by Mehek18


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: To Read (Geddy), Misstoria's Stories to Read
Chapters: 36 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 109413 Read Count: 123486
[Report This] Published: 25 Jan 2010 Updated: 27 May 2014
Reviewer: tuggerpie Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 02 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12

Congratulations! Really glad you continued this story and look forward to more!!!

Summary:

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Bella Swan is kidnapped from her monotonous life by the rich and reclusive Edward Cullen who has fallen in love wirh her from afar. Can she overcome her anger and fall in love & can they both learn from their mistakes? 

Rated: M (18 and over)

AH, AU, Contains: Violence, Foul Language, Lemons


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02 WIP Reads
Chapters: 24 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 95443 Read Count: 83458
[Report This] Published: 28 Jan 2010 Updated: 03 Apr 2013
Reviewer: tuggerpie Signed
Date: 20 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

I just came across your story and am loving it!  

Reviewer: tuggerpie Signed
Date: 23 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12

Major cliff hanger!!!!!  Please update soon!

Reviewer: tuggerpie Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 09 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23

:)

Homecoming by dont_run Rated: M starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 1227]
Summary: Past Featured Story

banner by mehek18 site http://mehek18.tumblr.com/

A troubling childhood has left Bella shy and scared of her own shadow. Her life is turned upside down when she is sent to live with the Dad and brother she never knew at the age of 15. Can Charlie and Emmett along with Edward and the gang help Bella? E/B, A/J Em/? *abuse is discussed*

 

 

 


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories, I Whitlock's read , Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiHu, Stories I've Already read, My Favorite Stories, luv2write finished reads
Chapters: 36 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 160653 Read Count: 171465
[Report This] Published: 09 Feb 2010 Updated: 23 May 2012
Reviewer: tuggerpie Signed
Date: 10 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Just found your story, can't wait to go read the next chapter to see Bella's reaction to her new family and friends.  So far, it's very cute and I am looking forward to reading the chapters you already have posted and will add to my favorites so I don't miss any updates!

Reviewer: tuggerpie Signed
Date: 10 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

Damn, Eddie's right, Renee did a number on her!!!

Reviewer: tuggerpie Signed
Date: 10 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

I really love how you are doing different POV's for everyone except Bella.  It is a refreshing change from the norm of most stories.  I do hope to hear Bella's POV sometime in the future but really like how your going so far.  Oh, can you post your blog info, if you have already done this, sorry, I just haven't found it yet.  : )

Reviewer: tuggerpie Signed
Date: 10 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

Gosh, I wanted to smack Rose and hug Bella, LOL!  Can't wait til E&B really start falling for each other....

Reviewer: tuggerpie Signed
Date: 10 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

Wow, this is really good!

Reviewer: tuggerpie Signed
Date: 11 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

Great chapter!

Reviewer: tuggerpie Signed
Date: 11 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

You had me in tears and then I read the last two sentences darn it!  Great chapter.

Reviewer: tuggerpie Signed
Date: 11 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

Dusk, Masen Pattz, too funny!  But jaw porn was spot on!!!!!!  Wow, emotional chapter.

Reviewer: tuggerpie Signed
Date: 11 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

OMG! Heart fail cliffie!

Reviewer: tuggerpie Signed
Date: 16 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11

Great HEA.  At first I thought maybe Edward would be the first to get there just possibly stopping by to check on her, but I am glad all the boys got their moment to shine!!!!  So when is Edward going to fall in love with her so Jasper and Alice can be together too??????  All in due time, right????

Reviewer: tuggerpie Signed
Date: 26 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12

Wow a blog update and a new chapter all in one day, you are so spoiling us!  I just adore your story! 

I'm so happy to see Bella isn't too damaged after the ordeal with Renee and then Phil.  I hope after testifying it will help heal her some more.  I'm pretty sure I've mentioned this but I can't wait for Edward and Bella to start having romantic feelings.  If Tanya lashes out at Bella, we may just see Edwards lion claws come out!!!!  Anyway, can't wait for the next update as this one of the stories I drop everything for to go read.  Thanks!



Author's Response:

Thanks so much for the review, this chapter was a move towards Bella realizing she feels more for Edward than just safe haven/friendship. More to come soon... the relationship is going to really kick in to gear in about 3 chapters.

Reviewer: tuggerpie Signed
Date: 01 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13

I love it and love you for updating so soon!!!!

Reviewer: tuggerpie Signed
Date: 06 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14

Thank you!  I was having a crap day on the verge of tears and then I got the email you updated.  It was just what I needed (a sweet little pick me up)!  Now of course, the little cliffie has me yearning for more but I can deal until the next update!  Very cute chapter.  I love that you gave her a Sweet Sixteen party and her very first kiss (well almost, next chapter).  Hopefully you will give us an EPOV too!  Thanks for updating and making my day!

Reviewer: tuggerpie Signed
Date: 10 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15

Every time I read a chapter update, my heart swells a little more for your story. I just absolutely adore it!. I am really looking forward to seeing how Edward is going to deal with Alice and Jasper while developing feelings for Bella himself.  Can't wait for the next chapter!!!!

Reviewer: tuggerpie Signed
Date: 15 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16

Yay!!!!  Now hopefully Bertha will smother Renee with a pillow after she is done with her.  I am so looking forward to the guys asking for permission to take the girls out.  I can't imagine Charlie taking this well but from an earlier chapter, I know he can see it coming.  I hope the dads make the boys sweat it out a bit, I mean we are talking about their baby girls here!  LOL. 

I've told you before but I am going to keep saying it, I totally <3 this story and look forward to each and every chapter!!!!

Reviewer: tuggerpie Signed
Date: 22 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17

Loved the chapter.  Jasper puking was too funny although I was hoping to see Carlise make him sweat it out a little more!  Can't wait to see Bella and Alice's reaction. 

Congratulations on the baby!!!!  However, I am going to go thru serious withdrawals while waiting for a chapter update so therefore, I will baby sit so you can write, LOL!

Reviewer: tuggerpie Signed
Date: 05 May 2010 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18

You are absolutely amazing woman!!!  You just gave birth and still can put out a chapter, WOW!!!!  Congrats on your new bundle of joy.  I hope you post baby pics on your blog someday.  I did a little happy dance when I woke this morning to see a update had posted.  I really didn't expect one anytime soon considering everything.  Thank you for appeasing the many people that adore this story as much as I do.  The chapter was really cute.  I actually expected Bella to freak out when Vicky informed her it was a date and I thought for sure Alice would have had some thoughts about her brother taking out her best friend.  I can't wait to see Edward's POV and how the night ends.  Maybe a cute little chaste kiss is in the works or will Charlie be waiting up????? (wink, wink).  And awwwww, he asked her to the homecoming dance, too cute.  Also looking forward to Rose talking to Emmett and how that will all play out now that he asked Vicky on a date.  Again (and again) I totally adore your story and look forward to each and every chapter you post!  Thank you and congrats!!!!!

Reviewer: tuggerpie Signed
Date: 08 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20

I'm so happy you updated, but so sad for Bella!  It looks like therapy will be her only option for a healthy future.  But seriously, how cute that she googled how to kiss!!!!

I really don't know how you have time to write with a new baby, you amaze me!!!!  Can't wait for the next update as this is one of my favorite stories (ok, well that isn't all smut, LOL!)

Reviewer: tuggerpie Signed
Date: 11 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21

I received the update notification last nite while I was driving home and pulled over so I could read the latest chapter.  You have me hooked on this story like a drug!!!!!  Unfortunately it was too difficult to send a review from my darn phone though so I had to wait til this am when I had access to a computer. 

Very cute scene with Edward asking Bella to be his girlfriend.  Looking forward to him teaching her how to kiss, especially after all of her research, LOL!  I thought they would have to drag her kicking and screaming to therapy.  Just curious, did they already ask Edward to talk to her or did he just do it on his own?

Poor Emmett!  Rose was wrong but I so get "it".  Hopefully Emmett will come around as he really seemed to have his head on his shoulders after receiving the news.  Really interested to see how he will be reacting to Vickie now that he knows about Rose. 

Thanks for the quick update, can't wait til the next one and the next one after that and the next one after that, etc.... You don't plan on ending anytime EVER, right, LOL!!  I <3 this story, you are awesome!

 

Reviewer: tuggerpie Signed
Date: 15 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22

Thank you for the awesomely quick update!!!!  I absolutely love E&B but miss the other little POV's you spread thru the story.  I would love just a little tad bit from the parents watching the kids come together and how they feel about that and about Bella's progress etc.  Seriously, anything you give I will eat up regardless.  This is one of my drop everything to read the update stories and I have not had very many considering the amount I've read.  Looking forward to the next update!!!!!!!

Reviewer: tuggerpie Signed
Date: 22 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23

THANKS for the update!!!   Love how Bella stood up for herself!!!!  I hope you are hinting at kisses being in the future for E&B!!!  As far as the outtakes go, I'll take them how ever you want to serve them up.  I've already read To The Extreme and refuse to believe it is only a one-shot so I will be waiting patiently for an update on that as well!  Thank you for consistently updating, it is very much appreciated as this is one of my favorites right now!!!!

Reviewer: tuggerpie Signed
Date: 05 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24

Awesome chapter! So sweet. I'm happy you feel better and look forward to updates on both stories.

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Date: 02 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 25

OMG, if I knew you would be updating I wouldn't have gone away for the weekend. I've missed it so much! I think icky Vicky is the culprit for the break in. I have a sick feelings she is going to target Bella. Please update soon, I absolutly love this story.

Author's Response:

Thanks so much for the review. LOL sorry I didn't warn you hun, but I hope you had fun this weekend :0)

Reviewer: tuggerpie Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 08 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 27: Chapter 27

WOW!  After I started reading I realized I missed that last update and went back and read chapters 27 & 27!  Wow, didn't see that coming with Tanya.  Great chapters, can't wait to see how Edward and Bella feel about all of this and of course, each other!  : )

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Date: 15 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 28: Chapter 28

Great chapter, thanks for updating!

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Date: 08 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 29: Chapter 29

Sweet chapter! The "talk" is sure to be hysterical. : )

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Date: 04 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 33: Chapter 33

Loved it!

Knights of Honor by katmom Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 34]
Summary: Past Featured Story

 

Knights of Honor

 

 Lord Edward is an Honorable Knight on a secret mission, Bella is offered to him as a gift from the Evil Duke Aro.

 “Age of Edward” contest entry.

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Historical
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 2 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 14787 Read Count: 2753
[Report This] Published: 05 Apr 2010 Updated: 29 Jan 2011
Reviewer: tuggerpie Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 30 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 2: Epilogue

I really enjoyed, thank you for sharing! : )

Author's Response:

Thank YOU for reviewing...and the lovely cups!~

Kathie

Summary:

 

Edroar the Angry Lion frightens all the girls and boys at Cullen Publishing with his loud roar. Will his new massage therapist Bella Swan run away like all the rest, or can she tame this savage beast?  AH/AU   OOC


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: My All-Time Favorites
Chapters: 19 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 134649 Read Count: 25372
[Report This] Published: 09 Jun 2010 Updated: 06 May 2016
Reviewer: tuggerpie Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 18 May 2011 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9 It's Electric!

Thanks for the update, looking forward to the next chapter. I hope the lion purrs!

Reviewer: tuggerpie Signed
Date: 25 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2 - What's in a Name?

Totally loving it!!!!!!  Can a slight snore be considered as purring????  LOL!  I see Bella will be giving him a run for his money which he probably isn't used to.  Can't wait for more interaction between the two!!!!!

Reviewer: tuggerpie Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 15 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6 Hells Bells

I see lion taming in Bella's near future! Great chapter! : )

Reviewer: tuggerpie Signed
Date: 29 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4 All that Jazz

Great chapter, loads of fun but no instant Alice/Jasper sparks? Looking forward to the next chapter and Edroar!

Author's Response:

So I’ve FINALLY finished Edroar chapter five. Sheesh…I know it took me forever. Let’s just say a certain Cullen was being a tad difficult… and it may not be who you suspect. I just gave the chapter to my beta and as soon as she’s finished with it I’ll post. YAY! I can’t wait. I’m so excited. Anyway, I just wanted to pop in to say thank you so much for taking the time to read and review my crazy little tale. Believe me I know reviews are never given lightly and they really mean so much to me. I hope you can forgive that it takes me so freaking looooong to reply. I have some strange OCD type affliction that I can’t seem to reply until I’ve finished the next chapter. What the hell is up with that? Perhaps I need to increase the meds…lol. Thanks again for taking the time to share your thoughts with me. Seriously, I can’t express how valuable a part of the writing process that truly is. I can’t wait to hear what you think of chapter 5. Gah! I always eagerly await the reaction and always fear the worst. Yes, I have some anxiety issues. It’s not pretty I tell ya. I’m SO Edroar Angela…sigh. If only I were as cool as Bella Swan.

 

P.S Jazz is thrilled with all the lovin he got from chapter 4. He said to make sure I throw some Darlins your way. Edroar of course is quite unhappy about sharing his readers with that southern charmer. He's just so darn possessive.

 

xoxo

Kelly

Reviewer: tuggerpie Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 31 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5 Who Does That?

Good chapter!  You can already feel the sparks flying between Alice and Jasper!  The demeanor and letter from Carlise is very intriguing.  Can't wait to find out what has the Cullen men so uncomfortably numb as you put.  I think Edroar was flirting when he was playing with her about breakfast and as soon as he realized it, he turned off his emotions asap.  I love how Bella can make him purr like a kitten one minute and the next she has him roaring like a lion!  She needs to keep working on those muscles to loosen him up : P 

Can't wait til the next update (also on Master of Disaster, hint hint hint LOL!)

 

Reviewer: tuggerpie Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 21 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7 - Amazing?

An update, wow it really must be Christmas! Just kidding. Thanks for the super long chapter. I can't wait to see what happens in New York and his reaction to Jake's book!

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Date: 11 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8 Face Off

Fun chapter!

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Date: 25 Dec 2011 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12 - Fool in the Rain

Awww swoon! Lovely Christmas present, thank you!

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Date: 11 Feb 2012 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13 You Give Me Fever

Hottest kiss ever! Great chapter :)

To The Extreme by dont_run Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 258]
Summary: Past Featured Story

 

He's a cocky and arrogant dare devil. Bella's mind knows she should stay away from him. To bad her body doesn't agree. 

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: G8or Favor8s Read, Stories I've read
Chapters: 19 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 78446 Read Count: 29922
[Report This] Published: 20 Jun 2010 Updated: 12 Nov 2012
Reviewer: tuggerpie Signed
Date: 22 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Why are you even asking?  Of course we want you to continue!!!!!!!!!   So, when can we expect the new chapter?????

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Date: 28 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

Awesome, thanks for the update. I really miss your stories and hope you get your writing mojo back soon. I am patiently waiting for any update you want to throw at us!

Reviewer: tuggerpie Signed
Date: 09 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

Awesome!!!!  Loved the family interaction.  Surprised Bella did the deed as she seemed a little up tight at the beginning, but then again he did just resort her to a pile of goo so who in their right mind would or could say no to that hotness! 

Reviewer: tuggerpie Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 13 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

Good chapter. Can't wait to find out more about Faith and have E&B back together.

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Date: 28 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

That was hysterical, thanks for the update. I hope your son is feeling better!

Author's Response:

Thanks for the review :0) Alex is doing much better thank you for asking.

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Edward's POV
"Yea?" I grab my brand fucking new cell phone off the hotel nightstand. The fucker woke me up, this better be important.
"Ed, you awake?" Em's voice comes down the line.
"I am now fucktard." I grumble looking at the 3:30 am flashing on the clock.
"Dude Bella and Rose are wasted, I mean drunk off their asses. I had to carry them out of the bar." He laughs.
"What the fuck Em?" I'm not sure if I'm mad that he called me about drinking women, or that he let them get drunk.
"So we go to Bella's bio Mom's nudist commune cult place, and I mean her Mom greats us butt ass naked. Then we meet this guy with a monster cock, wearing a leather loin cloth. All these people were chanting and dancing naked. It was wild. They tried to get us to get naked and we declined. Well any fucking way..."I interrupt his ass.
"You fucking let them stay there? What the fuck Emmett, you should have loaded them back into the fucking car, and gone back to fucking Seattle!" I yell.

Lonesome Hearts by damsell Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 2091]
Summary: Past Featured Story

lonesome 

 

lh

 

New banner by Julie C.

 

Eighteen year old Bella Swan has moved to the small Western town of Spoons Valley to meet up with her older brother, Emmet, after their parents' deaths.  She always figured that the Wild West that she read about would be like the descriptions in Harper's Weekly, but she didn't realize just how wild and dangerous things would get once she arrived.

 

AH.  Canon Couples.

 


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Action, Historical, Humor, Mystery, Romance
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's not read yet, Ageise02 Current Reads, Finished, Kuu Faves, My Favorite Stories, My favs past present and future
Chapters: 90 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 131753 Read Count: 282983
[Report This] Published: 19 Jul 2010 Updated: 30 Nov 2010
Reviewer: tuggerpie Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 31 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18

I smell trouble brewing. I imagine the girls will get themselves in some hot water wandering around town too. How did Edward get out of church? The anticipation is killing me, I can't wait for the next chapter. Thanks for updating so quick!

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Date: 15 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 78: Chapter 78

Wow, didn't expect an update today. I will thank you after I catch my breath! LOL. Dragging? Not at all IMO. Please let them catch up before something horrible happens to Bella. Being molested by a creep is bad enough : )

Reviewer: tuggerpie Signed
Date: 28 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Just starting to read. So far so good. I love these types of stories, they are so refreshing from the norm. Off to read the next chapter.

Reviewer: tuggerpie Signed
Date: 28 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

Very interesting. Can't wait for a bronzed haired cowboy to ride up.

Reviewer: tuggerpie Signed
Date: 28 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

Very cute! I can tell Carmen is going to be a scene stealer.

Reviewer: tuggerpie Signed
Date: 28 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

Wow, I thought the Mail Order Bride would be Rose. Love this little twist. I'm thinking it will be Alice and Sheriff Whitlock is going to be smitten. Still waiting for a bronzed haired cowboy to ride up!

Reviewer: tuggerpie Signed
Date: 28 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

Must go read next chapter asap. I'm having Edward withdrawals!

Reviewer: tuggerpie Signed
Date: 28 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

My suspicions have been confirmed about Alice. I'm off to go search for a bronzed haired cowboy.

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Date: 29 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

Awww, Edward! Swoon..... Fun way to introduce Edward.

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Date: 29 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

More swooning! Eduardo is gonna be I'm trouble.

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Date: 29 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

Really cute! I am totally enjoying this story!

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Date: 29 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

Yeah, Alice & Jasper!

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Date: 29 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11

I love it! Go Alice!!

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Date: 29 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12

Cute chapter! Love the boys being wasted.

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Date: 29 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13

I love Carmen!

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Date: 29 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14

I hope Carmen gives those boys a good tongue lashing!

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Date: 29 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15

Drunk and naked Edward, if only I was there to take advantage! Rose needs to come to the ranch for a visit. You should start a forum.

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Date: 29 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16

My poor boys are in the dog house : ( Looking forward to the next chapter now that I have read all that you have posted. I'm really enjoying thus far.

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Date: 29 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17

Awesome chapter! I love how Bella can trip over her own feet but ride a horse gracefully. Poor Edward can't get a break. Hopefully Sheriff Whitlock will be attening Sundays service! Please let the Mallory's be there too. I bet Miss Lauren has eyes on a certain cowboy I fancy so not only will she have issue with Alice for the smackdown she will be jealous of Bella. Can't wait for the next update.

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Date: 14 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 77: Chapter 77

I feel like I killed Tyler, lol!  Oh well, Eleazar is much more important than some cowpoke!   Seems to me, Rosie needs to put Carmen in her place sooner than later about her attitude.  Can't wait to see how their relationship plays out.  Carlise must be so torn by leaving Esme and helping the others when he knows she won't stay off her feet unless he is there to make her.  If anything happens to her or the baby, he will be beside himself in grief!  If we don't hear from you I hope you meet your deadline and have some time for yourself this weekend.  You will be missed but I think I can handle withdrawals for three days : )

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Date: 02 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19

Poor Rosie! The Volturi bros make me nervous. I anticipate trouble for and around the ranch as they try to pressure Emmett. Maybe Rosie will over hear something that will help him and take a trip out to the ranch where she can meet the girls too. If it works for your story, I would love more of Edward's backstory.

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Date: 03 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20

Thanks for the quick update. I feel so greedy because I want more! Oh and thank you for giving us a bit of Edward's back story.

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Date: 05 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21

Swoon! Loved the sweet little E&B moment and can't wait for their ride and picnic.

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Date: 06 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22

Sweet chapter!

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Date: 06 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23

Wow two chapters, Awesome! What's up with cockblocking Edward? Can't the poor boy catch a break with Bella? LOL. Loved Alice leaving Emmett hanging like that, too funny.

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Date: 06 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24

Absolutely loved that chapter! Carmen telling them to run because Emmett looked like the devil had me rolling! Totally looking forward to the next update!

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Date: 07 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 25

Awww, progress with E&B! Yeah! Missed Jasper at lunch. I guess we have some drama coming now that James is getting all stalker-ish.

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Date: 09 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 26

Awesome, thanks for the update!  I'm off to the forum now.

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Date: 11 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 27: Chapter 27

I can't wait til the festival!!! Court'n magic is gonna happen, I can feel it in the air. He is going to ask her to escort him right? Lol! Thanks for the update!

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Date: 11 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 28: Chapter 28

Swoon!!!!  More progress, I love it.  Please let him be back in time for the festival.  Pretty please!!!!!!!!

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Date: 12 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 29: Chapter 29

I was totally surprised to see the festival approach so quick although I totally couldn't wait for it.  So sad that Edward didn't make it back in time.  I was so hoping he would ask Bella to go with him.  Poor A&J, how is it the Bella didn't even notice the chemistry between them?  Oh, she was probably thinking about why Edward didn't make it back in time, LOL!!!  Awesome update as usual!

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Date: 16 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 30: Chapter 30

Yes, he made it on time and asked her to dance, Swoon!!!!!!!  You made me a happy camper!  I'm surprised Edward didn't have to fight a line of boys to get to her.  OMG, I can't believe E&R are doing it in public like that!!!!!!  Thank you for the update!!!!

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Date: 17 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 31: Chapter 31

Awesome!  Jasper's rescue of Alice made me swoon when he said "It was my pleasure, little lady".  Too cute!!!!  Thank you for the update. Ok, I am going to go spout off in the forum now.

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Date: 24 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 57: Chapter 57

Gosh, I love a determined man!!!!  He'll break her down one way or the other.  I loved how you brought the other charactors of the original story in as some of Alice's students, very clever!!!!!  Also looks like Alice may be able to piece together whats going on with all the troubles around town and add valuable insight.  I hope she comes clean with Jasper soon because we all know love will win out in the end and it won't matter one way or the other to him. 

I hope you were able to finish up your other projects like you wanted and know how much you were missed.  You know you are the drug dealer to our crack habit, right????  Can't wait til next week so I can get my fix ; )  XOXOXO

 

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Date: 18 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 32: Chapter 32

I love Bella's reaction to Rose.  Not judging whatsoever or thinking she is not good enough for her brother, just simply curious to why they are not together if they love each other.  Thank you for my little E&B moment and clarifying who spent the night in jail.  I m so happy Jasper didn't lock Edward up with those dirty scoundrels but I am still holding a grudge against Emmett!!  LOL. 

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Date: 19 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 33: Chapter 33

Oh, I am so happy to see Emmett come to this conclusion on his own.  LMAO at Jasper.  It would have been a fraudian slip if he said I didn't touch HER bisquits.  Too funny!  The Race!  Oh my goodness, you had me sitting on the edge of my seat.  Go Eleazar!!!!  Evil cliffhanger!!!!!  You do know you are killing me, right??????

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Date: 20 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 34: Chapter 34

Awesome! Loved the chapter and the end result with Alice staying in town. She will be there for months during her recovery. I have NEVER been so eager for Monday to come, until now!

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Date: 23 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 35: Chapter 35

Absolutely loved it!!!  Edward's crooked smile makes me swoon and it's so cute that he won't let her walk.  Now if Emmett has a problem with a man like that for his baby sister, no man will ever be good enough.  Bella's scolding of Emmett was awesome and I can't wait to see what he is going to do!

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Date: 24 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 36: Chapter 36

The stuff with Alice and Jasper was so sweet!  Hopefully she said something in her sleep that will let Jasper know she returns his feelings.  Poor Emmett!  He really could use Rosie right now for a shoulder to cry on.  I have no doubt he will do the right thing (he already came to that conclusion on his own) but I hope he sets things right with Bella first and explains everything to her.  I love their relationship.  I have two older brothers (8 & 12yrs between us) and I am very close to one of them (8yrs between us).  I could not imagine the feeling of knowing someone you adore, who looks up to you or vice versa, being very disappointed in you and your behavior.  I would be sick with grief!

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Date: 25 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 37: Chapter 37

a279;What a GREAT chapter, well except for the Edward getting interrupted part.  Are you doing this to torture me???  Just kidding.  I loved the sibling/family history you added as well.  I am dying to know what Edward was going to say but I know that part of the story is more than likely not coming next so I will try to be as patient as possible. 

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Date: 26 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 38: Chapter 38

Wow, what a great chapter. The letter was just beyond words. I love Emmett and Bella's relationship. I foresee another conversation between Bella and Rosalie not to mention trouble coming to town if it does not already reside on a nearby ranch.