Reviews by Dumbeline
Summary: Past Featured Story

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After a terrible shipwreck in the Mediterranean Sea, Isabella Swan, marquise de Courville, her two best friends and her loyal servants are rescued, but only to become slaves and serve the Volturi brothers, three men with very dark desires. All human. Domward.

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Erotica, Historical
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Domward's Dungeon, Finished, My Favorite Stories
Chapters: 45 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 201090 Read Count: 183997
[Report This] Published: 05 May 2010 Updated: 14 Jul 2012
Reviewer: Dumbeline Signed
Date: 04 Dec 2011 Title: Chapter 38: Tanya's last resort

Yes, I am very tempted to use translator on French version, but I am well aware of the loss of the right meaning and suspense, so I will just be patient for the updates.

I really like these type of stories and thank you for your great imagination. ;)

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You'll Find What You're Looking For At Walmart

What happens when a lonely and betrayed vampire meets his mate at Walmart?  He claims her, of course.  Join Peter and Bella as they band together with their ragtag team of friends to creatively exact revenge on those who did them wrong.  Peter x Bella pairing.

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Categories: Twilight, Non-Canon Pairings, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Peter
Genre: Humor, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: My favs past present and future
Chapters: 46 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 301749 Read Count: 81586
[Report This] Published: 07 Mar 2011 Updated: 12 Mar 2018
Reviewer: Dumbeline Signed
Date: 03 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Too bad Wal-Mart didn't last in Germany ! ;)



Author's Response:

I never knew that fact.  Still Germany is a wonderful country.  I'd love to visit again.

Hope Springs by justginger Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 1133]
Summary: Past Featured Story

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"Where would you go if you are trying to start a new life but you had nowhere to go and no one to care?  Bella Swan has been alone for most of her life, she is young and she is scared, but now she has another life to protect.  She is heading for a new country - a new life and then she ends up in HOPE SPRINGS.  Her life intertwines with all the eccentric characters in this little piece of heaven in Vermont and just like that - she will never be the same.  She meets the Sherriff, the truck driver, the semi-retired doctor, the lawyer, the farmer, and the new best friends, but it is the new young doctor in town that turns her life upside down.  Is he as stuck up as he seems or does he have a wild side?  Is Bella as tough and as jaded as she seems?  Will she run, or will she allow the people in this town to teach her to hope, to dream, and to love?"

NEW BANNER BY YSAR!! (ISN'T IT AWESOME??)

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Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Humor, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories, To Read, To Read (Geddy), Kuu Faves, Stories I've Already read, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, J's Read and Loved Stories, My favs past present and future , Read
Chapters: 40 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 432038 Read Count: 218311
[Report This] Published: 17 Dec 2011 Updated: 24 Dec 2012
Reviewer: Dumbeline Signed
Date: 11 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 31: Chapter 31 - Birthday wishes

Yes, this chapter was perfect! Now I will be smiling the rest of the day.

I loved the characters of People like us, but I have to admit I am not sure a sequel would be wise unless you already would have a plot that is just itching to be told.

Gods and Wolves by bmitw Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 129]
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What if the Cullens made the treaty and then stayed? What if the wolves kept phasing? And what is Bella walking into?

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Categories: Non-Canon Pairings, Twilight, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/OC
Genre: Drama, Supernatural
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: Supernatural
Series: None
Chapters: 49 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 172013 Read Count: 23816
[Report This] Published: 09 Jun 2012 Updated: 04 Dec 2012
Reviewer: Dumbeline Signed
Date: 06 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 22

Bad, bad Carlisle and I am not even gonna mention Jasper and Edward. Actually shame on them all. You really got an original plot here and it will be interesting to say the least where this story is going to be heading. Can't wait. :)



Author's Response:

Thanks Dumbeline :)

Yes it is certainly different lol. The brainstorming sessions with my betas are epically fun. I have some big plans and I hope that nobody catches me out on them...

Reviewer: Dumbeline Signed
Date: 12 Nov 2012 Title: Chapter 32: Chapter 31

Oh, how sweet!  Yes, Charlie is a true romantic at heart and he knows she is it fot him, but will the story turnout like the book or with your own special twist?

Your story is the reason I check at least twice daily for an upate!



Author's Response:

Thanks Dumbeline. I appreciate that you like the story so much. :)

Some things change and some don't lol.

Reviewer: Dumbeline Signed
Date: 15 Nov 2012 Title: Chapter 33: Chapter 32

Poor Charlie even though we knew it, but he got pretty cynical at the end. Yeah, can't wait til we are caught up with 2005 and Bella's 1st day of school. I just reread the first chapters to tide me over!



Author's Response:

Thanks for the review Dumbeline :)

That's something I haven't actually done. Too busy writing it lol. There's not a lot to go before Bella is back, but there are a few things that I have to deal with.

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Revised April 2012: Bella Swan is a wallflower. Quiet and shy but with a secret lurking within her soul. Will her new professor and his TA be the ones to discover her secret and what will she think when she discovers theirs? Lemons galore. POLY B/E/J

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Categories: Non-Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward/Jasper
Genre: Angst, Erotica, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Love to drive's Stories to read set 2, Stories Read by CNYBella, Read & Enjoyed
Chapters: 46 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 69591 Read Count: 158449
[Report This] Published: 11 Jun 2012 Updated: 14 Jul 2012
Reviewer: Dumbeline Signed
Date: 24 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 44: Another Brick in the Wall

Love this story, it's taking a interesting course.

Summary: Past Featured Story

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Bella, a fledgling lawyer, has better luck in a courtroom than with men. Enter the hottie in the pricey suit who offers to pay double her going rate, and he’s not talking legal fees. The pair find themselves deep in a compensation-based misunderstanding until a few months later when she realizes she may be in love with her one and only regular. *Entry for the 2012 Taste of the Forbidden Contest**

 

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Erotica, One-Shot
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiMaf
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 10814 Read Count: 3787
[Report This] Published: 08 Sep 2012 Updated: 08 Sep 2012
Reviewer: Dumbeline Signed
Date: 11 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Loved it!



Author's Response:

mwah!

xoxo

TB and Jelly

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Banner by the wonderful and talented DeeBelle1.

Some so called friends invite Bella out for her birthday, and send her to a BDSM club as a prank. What happens when the owner of the club sees her? Will he be able to set aside his Dom nature? Will she ever believe she deserves to have her needs met? Will he be able to set aside his wants and desires to meet those needs, or will she find her true desire is to submit to him? AH/M


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Erotica, Friendship, Hurt/Comfort,, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Stories I've Already read, J's Read and Loved Stories, Stories I've read, Fav BDSM Fics, Read
Chapters: 25 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 204571 Read Count: 334491
[Report This] Published: 22 Jul 2013 Updated: 31 Dec 2013
Reviewer: Dumbeline Signed
Date: 29 Aug 2013 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

Simply Beautiful how the story progresses, also loved that he didn't directly play with Carmen that was a big +E. Thank you to silver 4 the video, first FF one i watched have to say lovely for the visuals. ;)



Author's Response:

Thanks for reading and reviewing.  We were very glad to see that the major majority of you are no longer questioning Edward’s abilities to do the right thing.  The next chapter is the chapter that will really set things into motion.

 We have had some concerns brought to our attention regarding the fact that Bella talks to Edward about herself in third person.  We are not saying that EVERY submissive talks to their Dominant in third person, but the research we’ve done, more often than not it is the way it is.  Keep in mind that we’ve spoken to Dominants and submissives alike during our research.  In this story Bella has a photographic memory, she could have read any number of books which reference the usage of third party speaking as a natural way to show submission.  Neither of us is saying anyone else should do this, but in this story Bella is quite the natural at speaking as a submissive. 

Some have suggested that Edward try to just be a boyfriend and not a Dom to Bella.  Edward will discuss all of this with her soon, we assure you that no stones will be left unturned.  Chapter eight you will get to meet Charlie, but first we will have a turning point in seven that many of you have been asking for and suggesting since chapter two. 

There have been a lot of comments and references about the neglect Bella has withstood from her ‘family’.  When Nikky and I first talked about this story I wanted us to play up the neglect, because it is a huge amount of the way many children live.  I have shared with everyone, in the author’s notes and review replies, that I was a victim of neglect.  When I talked about my own experiences it was not for your sympathy it was to say that I know it happens.  I want to say thank you to all of you who have made mention of my past abuse, and send hugs to those who have shared some of their own stories with us.  Not everything Nikky and I write about Bella happened to me, and as an adult I had a moderately decent relationship with my parents.  I cannot say that Bella will, or that this story will end with her having contact with her biological parents. 

We hope this addresses the majority of your concerns and or questions.  We will see you next week with a pivotal chapter in the story! 

Much love, Nikky & Kasi~

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“Please, excuse me, I need to take this,” I inform Aro and move away while answering my cell. “Beautiful, how are you this evening?”

I don’t hear a reply, but I can hear music in the background.

“Ah, shit! That hurt,” Bella’s voice comes across the line, but it sounds off and slurred.

“Bella, are you okay?” I ask alarmingly, already moving toward the exit.

“Oh, this ... weird ... I was going to call you.  I feel ... real funny ... strange.  My head ... hurt and ... I feel ... um ... so dizzy ...”

I see Felix standing guard close to the door and I head to him. “Bella, I’m on my way.  Stay on your cell.”

I pull my cell away from my mouth before speaking to Felix. “I need to go. Find Aro tell him I had to leave, he will assist you in any details you need.  Let him know he is in charge.”

He gives me a nod, and I exit the door and run to my car.

“Okay, Beautiful, stay right where you are and stay on the phone with me. I’m on my way to you.” I try to take some deep breaths to calm myself. “Where are you, Beautiful?” I start my car as I switch my cell to hands-free.

“I ... hum, bathroom ... I think. Fuck ... it’s warm in here.”

I know right now it is best to keep her talking. “Have you been drinking?” I ask frowning, because I know even when I’m out with her, Bella does not drink much.

“Nope ... I am ... a goo ... girl ... I swear ... Sir, no ... drink-ies ... for me.”

“There you are! I was wondering where you got off to. Who are you talking to?” I hear a male’s voice ask, and I move my car a little faster.

My Viking by she_viking Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 826]
Summary: Past Featured Story

 

Britain, 9th century:

Bella is captured by Vikings and brought with them to their homeland where her new fate awaits. Will she ever find happiness being a slave? Will it matter that she is given to Edvard, the chieftain of the village, to be his new bed thrall? 

 


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Angst, Erotica, Historical, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: My favs past present and future
Chapters: 23 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 137880 Read Count: 272398
[Report This] Published: 14 Dec 2011 Updated: 26 Dec 2019
Reviewer: Dumbeline Signed
Date: 08 Nov 2013 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18

Thank you for resuming this story. I have read a few Viking stories in the last years, thanks to True Blood Eric, but this was my first and by far my favorite.

Reign by Ruthlessly Yours Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 689]
Summary:

Be gentle, be sweet, speak of womanly things, but above all else give your king everything he desires, Lady Isabella Swan of Devonshire does none of these things..."

 

"It was the reign of life, it was the reign of death, of love, of hate, of gold, of dust, it was the era of kings, it was the era of the common man, of truth, of deception, of war, of peace. It was the Reign of Edward and Isabella. #Kingward #Royalward"

 

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Stories I've Already read, Read & Enjoyed
Chapters: 31 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 107093 Read Count: 109440
[Report This] Published: 13 Jan 2014 Updated: 09 Jan 2015
Reviewer: Dumbeline Signed
Date: 17 Feb 2014 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

This is at the moment my most anticipated "Has it updated yet?" story! 

Love it bunches :)