Reviews by gigi9598
Homecoming by dont_run Rated: M starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 1227]
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A troubling childhood has left Bella shy and scared of her own shadow. Her life is turned upside down when she is sent to live with the Dad and brother she never knew at the age of 15. Can Charlie and Emmett along with Edward and the gang help Bella? E/B, A/J Em/? *abuse is discussed*

 

 

 


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories, I Whitlock's read , Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiHu, Stories I've Already read, My Favorite Stories, luv2write finished reads
Chapters: 36 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 160653 Read Count: 171465
[Report This] Published: 09 Feb 2010 Updated: 23 May 2012
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Date: 23 Mar 2016 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19

Oh poor Bella! I got a good laugh out of that tho.

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Banner by the talented: SoapyMayhem FanFiction

Bella at age thirteen is left with nothing more than a fake ID, and two year old twin half siblings to care for.  She makes due knowing it is up to her to give them a good life and education, she was never given.  Working as a cleaner at the university five years later, she meets Professor Masen a man who believes all women are out to hurt, or destroy him.  Can an uneducated Bella teach him something?  What will happen when Bella is another woman who has hid the truth from him? 


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Erotica, Mystery, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: My all time favorites, Themslovebug90's read stories, Stories Read by CNYBella, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, To Read , Misstoria's Stories to Read, Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiMaf, J's Read and Loved Stories, My favs past present and future , Read & Enjoyed, Read
Chapters: 35 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 325411 Read Count: 263184
[Report This] Published: 12 Jan 2012 Updated: 05 Sep 2012
Reviewer: gigi9598 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 05 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 35: Chapter 35: The Epilogue - Welcome to the Masen family

This has been a fantastic journey...thank you it was a pleasure reading your story.
Onto the next! Can't wait to see what you come up with.

Author's Response:

This has been a fantastic journey and we are sad yet excited that we finally clicked completed.  Keep in mind to watch out for Enduring His Cimmerian View to update, there are a few of those yet to write and post.  There is not a real posting schedule for those, but they will be written. 

Nikky and I are writing a couple more stories at least together and we hope to see you checking them out too.  We have a stalker story coming soon, as well as a BDSM/Olderward story coming out.  We also have a pretty large one-shot that will post soon, that we wrote for the Forbidden Fruit contest.  We can’t tell you the name of it yet, but there are a TON of great stories entered in the contest.

I started posting the new story collaboration I am doing with Jess2002, it is called Bases Loaded and you can find it under the author name of JessAndTAT.

We again thank you all so much, Kasi (& Nikky)

Stealing Home by Nolebucgrl Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 4]
Summary:

Edward Cullen is hot shot baseball player in a bit of a slump. Bella Swan is the girl that he couldn't have long ago and now she's his new owner and he can't have her again. Will he walk away or swing for the fences?


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Humor, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Drive's Stories to read that are Completed and Not completed, Amberina's Completed Favs List, Stories I've Already read, Bella's Must Reads!, My favs past present and future
Chapters: 2 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 19390 Read Count: 2098
[Report This] Published: 31 May 2012 Updated: 31 May 2012
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Date: 26 Aug 2013 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

I love baseball, Baseballward and a knowledgeable Bella, so this story has become one of my favorites already! well done and thank you.

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Bella meets Edward, but what she does know not who he is and what he does. But Edward knows the lines that he's crossing when he makes the decision to be with her. Many factors are against them. Will their love be enough? or will the lines be too strong?


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Drive's Stories to read that are Completed and Not completed, Stories I've Already read, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, Dumbi's Most Wanted
Chapters: 135 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 441443 Read Count: 491592
[Report This] Published: 31 May 2012 Updated: 08 Aug 2013
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Date: 04 Feb 2013 Title: Chapter 103: Chapter 103

Happy dance! the bitch is dead! and poor Edward, but they will be fine.

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Date: 17 May 2013 Title: Chapter 117: Chapter 117

What a mess to come home to. And poor Rose and Emmett, I cannot imagine it.
Looking forward to the next chapter

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Date: 03 May 2013 Title: Chapter 115: Chapter 115

LOVE this, always look forward to an update. Thanks

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Date: 03 Feb 2013 Title: Chapter 102: Chapter 102

Holy shit! Renee is one sick mother. Kill her Edward!! sorry I get carried away....lol Let BELLA do it!!!

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Date: 16 Dec 2012 Title: Chapter 92: Chapter 92

Jane is a pain in the ass! If she ever grabbed my husband I would be all over her like white on rice. Bella needs to send a message to that one. A BABY!! whoot! that was great news.....looking forward to the next update.

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Date: 01 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 64: Chapter 64

whoot baby time! and I loved Bella taking down Jane, good job girl.

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Date: 05 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 74: Chapter 74

I love their love....their bond, their little family which I think is going to be added onto the way they are going at it!
LOL

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Date: 30 Mar 2013 Title: Chapter 110: Chapter 110

I love all the sexing and their relationship. Thanks!!

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Date: 11 May 2013 Title: Chapter 116: Chapter 116

Another great chapter. I am anxious as to what is waiting for them at home. Glad Bella agreed to moving into the house with the rest of the family. Safer for all I think.
Looking forward to the next! thank you

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Date: 19 Jul 2013 Title: Chapter 129: Chapter 129

wow Alice has flipped! She does need some meds, poor Bella didn't deserve that

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Date: 04 Aug 2013 Title: Chapter 134: Chapter 134

Never expected Aro's death. Whoa. Alice seriously needs help she is delusional,so I agreed with Aro's decision. He was the only one who could take charge of her it seems.
Looking forward to reading how Edward takes over the business

Wisp by judo_lin Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 871]
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wisp

 

Edward wins more than he bargained for at what was supposed to be a friendly poker game. AH.


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: None
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Drive's Stories to read that are Completed and Not completed, Can't wait for an update, My Favorite Stories, My favs past present and future
Chapters: 63 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 304154 Read Count: 221078
[Report This] Published: 06 Jun 2012 Updated: 23 Nov 2014
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Date: 15 Jan 2013 Title: Chapter 39: Chapter 39

Oh so glad Wisp has Pet back. Edward, you are a good good man for taking care of Wisp and Pet. Pet so vital to Wisp as much as the people in her life are.

Reviewer: gigi9598 Signed
Date: 15 Jan 2013 Title: Chapter 38: Chapter 38

Thank God! PET!!

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It was just a long weekend in Vegas, so how did eighteen year old high school senior Bella Swan end up married to thirty one year old movie exec, Edward Cullen? This is the story of their awkward life. 

Me and Mr Cullen Banner


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Erotica, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Can't wait for an update, To Read (Geddy), Lilyellacullens want to read list!, J's Read and Loved Stories, Stories I've read, My favs past present and future , Read & Enjoyed
Chapters: 35 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 118398 Read Count: 324374
[Report This] Published: 07 Jun 2012 Updated: 02 Nov 2013
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Date: 26 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19 - Our Family Expanded?

Well Maggie needs a swift kick in the ass, she is so going to be trouble for this young bride. Glad they decided to wait for a baby, enough to handle right now. Can't wait to read the fallout at school! Great story

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Bella Swan works as a nurse at Cook County Hospital in the ER. She's older and desperate for love. It's hindered by her shy personality and plump body. Her father, whom she lives with, teases her relentlessly for being fat and single.

Edward Cullen, thirty-three, is hired as a doctor in the ER. He's getting over a divorce. He moved to Chicago to be closer to his family: sister, Rosalie, and brother, Jasper. Rosalie is younger than Edward by ten years and is struggling with an eating disorder brought on by a heinous rape of her ex-boyfriend. Jasper, twenty-seven, is finishing up his doctorate in history.

Bella is charmed by this new doctor in the ER. He's kind and thinks about his patients and maintains a friendly rapport with the nurses and orderlies. Edward is intrigued by the sad nurse who does her job efficiently but doesn't have a sparkle in her eyes.

Will she allow Dr. Cullen into her life or will she let her insecurities get in the way of her happiness. Perhaps, Dr. Feelgood can write her a prescription. A prescription for love...

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Banner created by Canan ~ Thank you!


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Erotica, Friendship, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: I Whitlock's read , Drive's Stories to read that are Completed and Not completed, Can't wait for an update, Stories Read by CNYBella, Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiHu, Stories I've Already read, Edwards Paradox Completed Favourites, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, My Favorite Stories, Dumbi's Most Wanted, J's Read and Loved Stories, Bella 84's To Be Read List, Stories I've read, My favs past present and future , Read & Enjoyed, Tufano79 Stories
Chapters: 35 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 331720 Read Count: 419156
[Report This] Published: 24 Jun 2012 Updated: 02 Aug 2013
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Date: 13 Nov 2012 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18

Ahhh good for them! they are moving in together, the first step to their happy ever after. Looking forward to Edward's point of view, meeting with Jacob...more Jasper

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Date: 03 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12

poor Bella, a father that treats her like dirt and has destroyed her self esteem. Thankfully Edward loves her and has stuck true to her and their relationship. He is so good for her. Happy to hear the next chapter will be happy, this one was tough for sure! great writing

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Date: 14 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13

Lets see....Jasper is an ass, he could be nicer to Bella, after all it isn't HIS relationship. He needs to grow up.Maybe Alice needs to leave his ass and he will see what he is doing. I wonder about the email, waiting for the next chapter but I have some thoughts on that as well. Good-bye James!

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Date: 17 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14

What a great chapter! I have no clue what is going on with Jasper, why does he give a dam who Edward loves, why so hateful to Bella.
Jacob, what a lowlife. This is going to be interesting. And why do I have a feeling Jacob had something to do with Charlie getting out of jail?

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Date: 29 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15

great chapter. Love that Bella is building her confidence, finally standing up for herself. Hope she gets the chance to use some of her kick boxing skills on Jacob he needs a swift kick.
Waiting for your approval on twitter so I can follow you.

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Date: 16 Dec 2012 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20

What a great birthday for Edward, Bella did a fine job. I love how their relationship is progressing.

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Date: 26 Jun 2013 Title: Chapter 33: Chapter 33

Oh I am so happy for them! Finally, after all they have been through, their happy ever after. I would LOVE a sequel...hint, hint
What a wonderful story you have written. You are truly talented and I am so happy to have found you in this vast land of fanfiction. Thank you!

Summary: Past Featured Story

Rebecca Summers enjoys pleasing herself with the curtains open. That is, until a mysterious man calls to tell her that he is watching. Her fantasy becomes reality as she begins to perform for this stranger, following his instructions over the phone while he watches from afar. Rebecca’s world is turned upside down when finally they meet and she enters into a D/s relationship with her Midnight Caller. This is not the complete fic. These are the original pictures that went with the drabble version.


Categories: Erotica
Characters: None
Genre: Erotica
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Drive's Stories to read that are Completed and Not completed, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, My Favorite Stories, kegkaty's read stories
Chapters: 320 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 24894 Read Count: 3028763
[Report This] Published: 26 Jun 2012 Updated: 31 May 2013
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Date: 29 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 98: Chapter 98

with this build up I cannot imagine what it will be like when they meet!

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Date: 26 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 151: Chapter 151

Count me in, I always rate this story if not review! things are heating up, they are meeting!

Author's Response:

omg... i forgot about the rating! I bet that man/woman gave me no "cups" since I wasn't their "cup"

 

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Date: 28 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 153: Chapter 153

Oh they are in the playroom! Love the choice of safe words. Hope you day gets better

Summary:

SYSM Banner

 

 

When life gives you lemons, you make lemonade. But, what happens when life throws you a bad-boy biker, an uptight neighbor, and a couple of kids? You cross your fingers and hope for the best! AH-Rated 'M'.

Beta: Sunflower Fanfiction


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Humor, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 89 Read Count: 13545
[Report This] Published: 01 Jul 2012 Updated: 04 Jul 2017
Reviewer: gigi9598 Signed
Date: 28 Jul 2012 Title: Saving You, Saving Me

OMG that was priceless,"Bye of a bitch!" good job Masen, and Edward of course....

Summary:

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Fifty Shades...Clarity

Book II

A continuation of the Fifty Shades Trilogy

 

 

You will probably want to read Fifty Shades More before starting this one.

"I look  into his beautiful gray eyes and my heart melts. I still love this man. He taught me how to love. He gave me my precious children.  He tried to  lay the world at my feet and he gave me his love and his trust."  Christian has confronted his demons. Ana has accepted his past. But will Christian's past intrude on the future? Can Ana live with it, if it does?  This is Book II.


Categories: Fifty Shades Trilogy, Canon
Characters: Anastasia Steele/Christian Grey
Genre: Angst, Erotica, Hurt/Comfort,, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: Risqué
Series: G8or Favor8s Read, Stories I've read, Fifty Shades ...More
Chapters: 32 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 139308 Read Count: 138644
[Report This] Published: 10 Jul 2012 Updated: 05 Sep 2012
Reviewer: gigi9598 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 30 Aug 2012 Title: Fifty Shades...Clarity

Oh wow, so hard, kleenex needed for poor Bella and Christian. I too lost a child, it is so so difficult, I wouldn't wish it on anyone fictional or real.

Reviewer: gigi9598 Signed
Date: 28 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 28: Chapter 28

Is it horrible that I want to say good that bitch is dead? Cause I just said it! And Sam, sweet innocent little baby, and how are Christian and Bella going to handle this heartbreak? what story! waiting anxiously for the next chapter!

Author's Response:

You can say it. She isn't real. 

I hated  having Sam go. It was hard.

E.

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Date: 17 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

o-o the bitch is back and wants Christian back as well.

Author's Response:

Oh, yes she does.

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Date: 26 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 27: Chapter 27

Wow not expecting that! Had to be that wicked witch who pushed Bella! looking forward to the next chapter.

Author's Response:

Posted.

Thanks for leaving a review.

E.

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Date: 01 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 30: Chapter 30

What a good friend Kate is, and she has a mind like a steel trap! didn't take her long to connect the dots. It was good for Bella to talk about it. Funeral is going to be bitchin to get through, I will need a kleenex alert. :(

Author's Response:

Probably not a lot of detail about the funeral. Maybe a retrospect. I doubt anyone could get through the actual funeral of a baby. I know I  doubt I could write it. Need to get to happier times and put the bad times in the rear view mrror.

Thanks.

E.

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Date: 05 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 32: Chapter 32

Well that was a fantastic story, looking forward to part three..........

Author's Response:

Finally posted.

Thanks.

E.

Bases Loaded by JessAndTAT Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 327]
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Spending summer vacation traveling with the St. Louis Cardinals isn’t every teen girls idea of fun.  What happens when the teen daughter of the team doc falls for one of the players?  Can they find love or will life get in the way?  AH/Cannon and Non-Cannon Pairings/Rated NC-17

Wonderful Banner made by: Stephenie Masen

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: To Read (Geddy), Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiHu, Stories I've Already read, Lilyellacullens want to read list!
Chapters: 28 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 115192 Read Count: 87329
[Report This] Published: 05 Sep 2012 Updated: 01 Dec 2013
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Date: 03 Feb 2013 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22

I think Alice is so messed up, she is jealous of what Edward and Bella have and since she doesn't have it will try to break them up. Edward really needs to smarten up to Alice's manipulating ways or he is going to lose Bella. Sometimes you have to lose what you have to appreciate it.

A Ilha do Amor by tufano79 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 777]
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Bella Swan, reeling from the unceremonious ending of her engagement on her wedding day, heads on her honeymoon minus ONE groom. Edward Cullen, is 'sleeping' his way through the guests at the resort on Isle Esme. They meet on the island off the coast of Brazil but will they find love on a ilha do amor? The island of love?

AIDA

Nominee

Win


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Erotica, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Stories Read by CNYBella, Stories I've Already read, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, Dumbeline's WIP to read list, Bella's Must Reads!, Bella 84's To Be Read List, Stories I've read, My favs past present and future , TBR, Tufano79 Stories
Chapters: 38 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 325748 Read Count: 299861
[Report This] Published: 06 Sep 2012 Updated: 29 Nov 2014
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Date: 06 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 1: Broken Fairy Tale

oh another good one! Poor Bella and poor Alice. But things are gonna heat up on the island, I gotta a feeling! Looking forward to the next chapter.

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Fifty Shades...Full Circle

Book III

A continuation of the Fifty Shades Trilogy

*A Writer's Coffee Shop Featured Story May 2013*

Thank You.

This story  continues where Fifty Shades...Clarity left off. Ana and Christian have endured a hard year, scandal, heartache and Christian finally recognizing and  accepting his past  have plagued them. Yet they remain strong with their love for each other and  their family. Will new revelations tear them apart? Will the coming changes divide them or make them stronger?       This is Book III. You will probably want to read 'Fifty Shades More', Book I and 'Fifty Shade Clarity', Book II first. They are both posted here.


Categories: Fifty Shades Trilogy
Characters: Anastasia Steele/Christian Grey
Genre: Erotica, Family, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: Happily Ever After
Series: G8or Favor8s Read, Dumbeline's WIP to read list, Stories I've read, Fifty Shades ...More
Chapters: 162 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 660157 Read Count: 591625
[Report This] Published: 08 Sep 2012 Updated: 06 Dec 2015
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Date: 19 May 2014 Title: Chapter 138: Chapter 138

Fantastic chapter as always, well worth the wait. Thank you for doing this for us each week.

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Date: 29 Apr 2013 Title: Chapter 74: Chapter 74

Great chapter!

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Date: 12 Apr 2013 Title: Chapter 69: Chapter 69

Left us hanging! haha That's ok, everyone is home safe and sound. I have no clue what happened but I bet it is "good".

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Date: 15 Feb 2014 Title: Chapter 128: Chapter 128

So good, so so good. thank you for another great chapter. And it's about dam time Ana put her foot down with Christian.

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Date: 20 Jul 2014 Title: Chapter 147: Chapter 147

OMG! that was fantastic! I chuckled and laughed my way through it. I really enjoy your writing. Thank you for the update.

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Date: 11 Aug 2013 Title: Chapter 99: Chapter 99

oh gosh brace yourself people Christian is in the ER and his cub is hurt! great chapter

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Date: 21 Mar 2013 Title: Chapter 63: Chapter 63

I love the banter back and forth that Ana and Christian do. Its funny, sweet and loving. I so enjoy this story. thank you

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Date: 18 Jan 2014 Title: Chapter 124: Chapter 124

That was another stellar chapter. I love family time Christian and Bella. Spicy too! lol thank you

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Date: 01 Mar 2013 Title: Chapter 57: Chapter 57

Oh that was so good. Thank you

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Date: 08 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I am so glad you are continuing this story. It is a great piece of work.
Ha! Ms Bellows hit the road, no one hits on Mr.Grey.......
wonder if they make it through lunch without some loving?

Author's Response:

Maybe not lunch, but definately laters baby.

Thanks. E.

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Date: 26 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

another great chapter! gosh I love your writing

Author's Response:

Thank you so much.

E.

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Date: 06 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11

I know they were fighting over something serious, but honestly I was in stitches laughing. Really Christian has no clue, but he means well, but just doesn't it. I don't blame Bella for being upset. Anyway, lets hear what he says about Mia's news!!! And where did the engagement ring go? I am really curious about that.

Author's Response:

Answers on the way. thanks for reading and leaving a review.

E.

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Date: 03 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

Oh Christian, always wanting to do the right thing but going about it the wrong way. His heart is in the right place though. Now who took the ring? I think its Myra, who else could it be? Not Gail!

Author's Response:

Poor little socially inept Christian. He tries so hard. He always means well.  Gail would never do that.

E.

 

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Date: 16 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14

omg that was hysterical! a drunk Christian Grey is funny. Good to see him out of his element for a change.

Author's Response:

Thank you. I'm glad you enjoyed the chapter. And thank you for leaving a review.

E.

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Date: 21 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16

What a great chapter! Loved the wedding, Grace was priceless yelling FUCK, oh what I would have given to see everyone's faces! LOL and the little minx had her mother's engagement ring. Here I thought the maid did it!

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Date: 18 Apr 2013 Title: Chapter 71: Chapter 71

As always, loved it! Ana and Christian loving is always electric. And Teddy, oh boy,getting to that age where he has questions. Christian will need extra therapy dealing with it. LOL

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Date: 25 Dec 2012 Title: Chapter 36: Chapter 36

What a wonderful heartwarming chapter,Merry Christmas

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Date: 29 Dec 2012 Title: Chapter 38: Chapter 38

What a great chapter, I was laughing so hard I almost peed my pants when Christian was eating Jack's treats!

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Date: 24 Jan 2013 Title: Chapter 47: Chapter 47

This chapter made me roar with laughter, poor Teddy, playful Christian and Ana.

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Date: 21 Feb 2013 Title: Chapter 55: Chapter 55

Oh no, its Tommy, poor little man.

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Date: 09 May 2013 Title: Chapter 77: Chapter 77

That was a great chapter! Loved Christian taking Ana soaring and to IHOP....ah memories. The kids, the towel snapping, they have a great relationship.
Thank you

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Date: 16 May 2013 Title: Chapter 78: Chapter 78

That was a shocker wasn't it? Mrs.Robinson house! well done there.
I know that Ana's mom loves her, of course she does, but she couldn't fly out for one day for her child's bd? selfish I think.
Now I wonder who is on the phone and what is happening next?
great chapter, thank you

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Date: 24 May 2013 Title: Chapter 80: Chapter 80

Fantastic chapter! thank you

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Date: 31 May 2013 Title: Chapter 82: Chapter 82

Fantastic chapter as always, thank you!

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Date: 12 Jul 2013 Title: Chapter 94: Chapter 94

What a wonderful chapter! The kids, Virginia, all of it. Sorry for Ana Christian is sick, men when they are sick are worse than 3 kids sick! thank you!

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Date: 13 Oct 2013 Title: Chapter 109: Chapter 109

great chapter!!

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Date: 11 Jan 2014 Title: Chapter 123: Chapter 123

Oh this was another stellar chapter. I love the interaction between Christian and Grace....so dam cute.
And NO! not the end....can't this be the story that never ends? haha
Thank you for taking the time to write this.

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Date: 26 Jan 2014 Title: Chapter 125: Chapter 125

Another fantastic chapter! thank you!!!

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Date: 03 May 2014 Title: Fifty Shades...Full Circle

Thanks for the wonderful update! And please, if you need a week off, we fans should be the least of your worries. You do this for us each week unconditionally, and I for one, greatly appreciate it. So, thank you.

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Date: 25 May 2014 Title: Chapter 139: Chapter 139

As always, fantastic chapter! thank you so much for taking the time to write this for our enjoyment.

Reviewer: gigi9598 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 31 May 2014 Title: Chapter 140: Chapter 140

awww! you knew once Christian held Bo Peep it was all over. Another child to love.
Thank you so much for doing this, I look forward to the update every week.
Hugs!

Summary: Past Featured Story

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Esme Cullen's matchmaking leads to her son Edward dating fledging wedding photographer, Bella Swan. Falling for each other is effortless and soon Bella's career begins to take off. However, not everyone is quite so thrilled about Bella's happiness and success. A continuation of "The Wedding Photographer".


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Stories I've Already read
Chapters: 31 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 139889 Read Count: 63250
[Report This] Published: 25 Sep 2012 Updated: 21 Apr 2013
Reviewer: gigi9598 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 01 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 2 - Brunch

What a great family! It sounds like Bella and Edward are off to a great start, although backwards, sex first LOL
not necessarily a bad thing..... looking forward to more updates

Author's Response:

Yeah, his family is awesome.  I loved writing them.  They are off to a great start.  And while it may not the typical order of things, it works for them.  :)

Thanks for the review, I really appreciate it!

Reviewer: gigi9598 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 21 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 4 - Anticipation

Looks like Edward is ready to settle down. I can't wait to read about their lunch date. I like how they are being up front with their past relationships, starting out on the right foot. Love this chapter!

Author's Response:

Yeah, he's definitely ready for a more serious relationship.  The lunch date is fun, I think you'll really enjoy it.  And yep, they really want to do this right.  :)  So glad you liked it!  Thanks for leaving the review, I really appreciate it.

Summary: Past Featured Story

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Twenty-two-year-old Bella Swan works for Edward Cullen, the thirty-nine-year-old Vice President at Providence Medical Center in Portland.  After years of fighting their attraction to each other, a quick tryst in the break room leads to a thrilling but complicated relationship.  Trying not to get caught by the prying eyes of their entire workplace, they’re forced to hide their relationship and deal with his ex-wife and his sixteen-year-old daughter.


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Stories I've Already read, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, Dumbi's Most Wanted, Stories I've read, My favs past present and future
Chapters: 36 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 190983 Read Count: 94836
[Report This] Published: 21 May 2013 Updated: 18 Jun 2013
Reviewer: gigi9598 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 24 Apr 2013 Title: Chapter 27: Chapter 26 - Washington Square Mall

I have loved the twist and turns of this story from the start. They have fought for their relationship and now hopefully things will even out for them. Nice moment in the kitchen with Maggie....nice night in the bedroom!

Author's Response:

So glad you're enjoying all of the twists and turns.  They really have foaught hard, haven't they?  They deserve good things, and there are plenty of those on the way.  Thrilled that you liked the moment in the kitchen with Maggie, and the night in the bedroom.  ;) 

Reviewer: gigi9598 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 21 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3 - The Bedroom

I am so glad they got together, age doesn't matter when the heart wants....
now who the heck burst through the door???
A daughter?? o-o

Author's Response:

Edward's still a little worried about the age thing, but Bella will convince him he's the right man for her.  And oh yes, that's his daughter!  She's not happy to find her dad groping some woman in the kitchen. 

Thanks so much for the review! I really appreciate that you took the time to let me know you enjoyed it.

Reviewer: gigi9598 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 27 Nov 2012 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7 - The Shower

Its not going to be easy, and I think Bella is going to have to be the stronger person in this relationship due to Edward's insecurity. Hopefully she will keep him grounded with her love. But I bet its gonna be a bumpy ride!

Author's Response:

You're right, it's definitely not going to be easy.  But it will be worth it.  Bella's strong enough to handle this and he will get there.  :)  Thank you for the nice review!

Reviewer: gigi9598 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 15 Jan 2013 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13 - Bella's Living Room

While Alice was being a bitch, I think she is just concerned about Bella. She had some valid points and I have a feeling things will come to a head at work. Ah well, true love never runs smooth does it? Looking forward to the next chapter

Author's Response:

Alice is concerned about Bella.  Her delivery was horrid, and she had her reasons, but she could have been far more tactful.  You're definitely right that true love never runs smooth!  These two have quite a ways to go.  Thanks for the nice review! 

Reviewer: gigi9598 Signed
Date: 07 Feb 2013 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16 - The Entryway

Wow what a chapter! Heidi ripping into Edward, shame on her! she knew her daughter was waiting in the car, did she think she would sit there forever? too bad Maggie heard all of this, but at least now its out in the open and can be dealt with. And Bella? I wonder how long this is going to go on, and will she be hanging on by her finger nails waiting for Edward to find time for her? Of course his priority is his daughter but he has to make some time at least for Bella. Can't wait for the next update.

Author's Response:

I know! Kind of an emotional roller-coaster, wasn't it?  Yeah, Heidi was too focused on her own needs to think about her daughter.  It is good that it's in the open now, and Edward can deal with it. 

I promise it isn't going to be tooo long, and they'll find ways to be together without making the situation worse.  They're going to have to be a bit creative, but they'll do it!

Thanks for the review! Glad you enjoyed the chapter.

Reviewer: gigi9598 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 07 May 2013 Title: Chapter 29: Chapter 28 - The Market

That was wonderful!!! Bella brings so much into that home that Edward and Maggie were missing. Great chapter, happy to see them all getting along and enjoying the holiday. Heidi can piss off now, she threw away the relationship with her husband and daughter! LOL

Author's Response:

So thrilled that you enjoyed it.  Bella really does give E&M what they were lacking.  Glad you enjoyed all of the time they're spending together.  And yeah, Maggie will have a good relationship with her mother, but she and Bella and Edward are really going to be a family.  Thanks for the nice review, I appreciate it so much!

Reviewer: gigi9598 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 14 May 2013 Title: Chapter 30: Chapter 29 - The Party

That was a great chapter. The party went off without a hitch and everyone got along. Bella and Edward deserved that after all they have been through. Looking forward to the next chapter! Love it! Love it!

Author's Response:

So glad you liked the party!  You're right, they really do deserve a nice relaxing celebration after everything they've been through.  Thank you so much for the review, I appreciate it!

Reviewer: gigi9598 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 18 Jun 2013 Title: Chapter 35: Chapter 34 - Edward's Desk

Fantastic! I have loved and fought for this couple the whole time. Thank you for a great story. Looking forward to the epi.

Author's Response: I really love that you have that connection with them. Thrilled that you have enjoyed the story and I think you'll really love the epi.

Reviewer: gigi9598 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 25 Jun 2013 Title: Chapter 36: Chapter 35 - The Future

Lord that chapter made me cry like a baby. What a delightful ending to a wonderful story. If it's meant to be, it will be, love conquers all. Thank you so much for this beautiful story.

Author's Response:

Yep, the chapter made me cry when I wrote. So thrilled that you enjoyed the story and that you liked the ending!  Thanks so much. I appreciate that you took the time to review! 

Summary: Past Featured Story

They survived falling in love and having four children. Now, Geekward and Nerdella are parents of teenagers. Say a prayer for them for they are in for a bumpy ride. But, a ghost from the past is rearing his ugly head. Follow along as Geekward and Nerdella deal with having teens, battle with the blast from the past and why is Demetri hugging a cow? ANSOL/TGGTP Sequel. ExB AH/AU

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Thanks to Evilnat for the amazing banner! You are the bomb, girl


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Erotica, Family, Humor, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: G8or Favor8s Read, Stories I've Already read, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, My Favorite Stories, Bella's Must Reads!, Bella 84's To Be Read List, My favs past present and future , A Nerd Story of Love Series, Read & Enjoyed
Chapters: 30 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 269577 Read Count: 89457
[Report This] Published: 26 Nov 2012 Updated: 26 Jul 2015
Reviewer: gigi9598 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 27 Jun 2014 Title: Chapter 16: A Parent's Worst Nightmare

I am not a writer by any means, but your struggles do not show. This was a great chapter. Your words follow and the story line is fantastic! Sorry I can't help with the climax, but know I am here supporting you and patiently waiting for the next update. thank you!

Summary:

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Bella is a teacher whose students win a Go Green contest with the Houston Astros. Their prize: star player, Edward Cullen will present them with the award at home plate during a game. But will Bella win more than what the team is offering?


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 16 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 40769 Read Count: 4863
[Report This] Published: 25 Dec 2012 Updated: 27 Jan 2014
Reviewer: gigi9598 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 03 Feb 2013 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

I love this story. I have just found your stories "by accident", I was browsing authors and happened to click you much to my good luck! We have all been sick and I have been laying around reading. What a great way to spend an afternoon. I look forward to more updates....
My hubs is also a firefighter so I really enjoyed your other stories and good relate.
thank you!

Author's Response:

Thank you so much for reading ang reviewing. I'm sorry your sick but I'm thrilled that you found my stories. Since I'm new to writing, I'm a math teacher so writing fiction  isn't high priority, I tend to stick with what I know and love. Besides, why research for Edward's job when I can just ask the hubby!  ;)

Thank you again for reading and reviewing. Here is the teaser promised.

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His eyes stayed locked with mine as he quietly replied, "You're very welcome, beautiful."
My eyes widened at the same time that his did, both of us looking away and my blush increase tenfold.
Did this god of a man really just call me beautiful? Surely I heard him wrong. I could not have heard that correctly. Did anyone else hear him?

Summary: Past Featured Story

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He is the 'toast of Hollywood' and she is his queen, but their lives are not a fairytale. With children, real life and someone who is trying to break them apart, Edward and Bella will need to fight for their Happily Ever After.  From the red carpet, to the bedroom to the playroom, can their love survive? *HEA* OOC, AH, CANON COUPLES.

*WARNING: THIS STORY IS STRICTLY NC -17* FOR LANGUAGE AND EXPLICIT SCENES - BDSM.


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Erotica, Family, Friendship, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Kuu Faves, Stories I've Already read, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, My Favorite Stories, J's Read and Loved Stories, Stories I've read, My favs past present and future , Read
Chapters: 28 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 313471 Read Count: 113785
[Report This] Published: 31 Dec 2012 Updated: 26 Dec 2017
Reviewer: gigi9598 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 29 Apr 2013 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

That was a great chapter.

Author's Response:

Thanks so much for reading xoxo

New Found Desires by Ezzy Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 27]
Summary:

Bella comes out of an abusive arranged marriage to James with the help of her Neighbor Edward who gives her a place to stay, she soon feels more than friendship towards him and when she finds out that him and his family live a BDSM/ Gorean lifestyle she starts to have more and more desires she didn't know she could have as she learns more about this lifestyle, But will it work and can she get over her past to embrace her feelings? find out in New Found Desires!


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Action, Drama, Erotica, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 7 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 41875 Read Count: 13975
[Report This] Published: 01 Feb 2013 Updated: 22 Feb 2023
Reviewer: gigi9598 Signed
Date: 07 Feb 2013 Title: New Found Desires

These anon reviewers seem to be making the rounds. There are those of us who enjoy your story and don't mind the errors. Please don't let these cowards who hide behind the anon button stop you from doing what you love and what we enjoy. Hugs

Author's Response:

Thank you for your words, I am sorry for the mistakes as it is mostly computer issues, but they shouldn't be too much of a prob now as I have some what fixed it.

La Cantante by tufano79 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 625]
Summary: Past Featured Story

Bella is a freshman in college studying to be a music teacher. Edward is a pre-med student at the same school but secretly wants to be a musician. They both meet and sparks fly. However, Bella's past may make it difficult. ExB, AH EDITED and REPOSTED!

La Cantante

 


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Angst, Drama, Erotica, Friendship, Humor, Hurt/Comfort,
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Stories I've Already read, Edwards Paradox Completed Favourites, Misstoria's Stories to Read, Bella's Must Reads!, Stories I've read, Tufano79 Stories
Chapters: 100 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 594750 Read Count: 327913
[Report This] Published: 03 Jul 2013 Updated: 13 Apr 2015
Reviewer: gigi9598 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 13 Sep 2013 Title: Chapter 32: Chapter 32

Great chapter! really enjoy this story and your writing, thank you!

Summary: Past Featured Story

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Edward is a single father and a police officer in Rock Island, Il. His new neighbor is his boss, Mike. What happens when Edward thinks Mike is beating his wife, Bella? Can Edward help save Bella? Does Bella need to be saved? Written for Jess2002, happy birthday to our friend. AH/M


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 10 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 66334 Read Count: 26445
[Report This] Published: 11 Jul 2013 Updated: 19 Jul 2013
Reviewer: gigi9598 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 13 Jul 2013 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

I have no idea what is going on. At first It thought Mike was beating Bella, but now I don't think so. And I wonder if they are really married. Witness protection or something. This is very good. looking forward to the next chapter

Summary: Past Featured Story

Banner by the wonderful and talented DeeBelle1.

Some so called friends invite Bella out for her birthday, and send her to a BDSM club as a prank. What happens when the owner of the club sees her? Will he be able to set aside his Dom nature? Will she ever believe she deserves to have her needs met? Will he be able to set aside his wants and desires to meet those needs, or will she find her true desire is to submit to him? AH/M


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Erotica, Friendship, Hurt/Comfort,, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Stories I've Already read, J's Read and Loved Stories, Stories I've read, Fav BDSM Fics, Read
Chapters: 25 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 204571 Read Count: 334502
[Report This] Published: 22 Jul 2013 Updated: 31 Dec 2013
Reviewer: gigi9598 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 23 Jul 2013 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter: One

Oh gosh this is going to be good. Innocent yet extremely intelligent Bella and the rich sophisticated Dom.

Author's Response:

Well so far everyone seems to be loving the story and we are so happy about that.  Not a lot of questions asked this go around, but there will probably be some more by the next chapter.  This story will be somewhere between twenty and thirty chapters when complete.  We mentioned this will post once a week on Mondays.  If for some reason Kasi can’t post Monday morning, it may post late Sunday night.  The Cullen’s are very accepting of Edward’s choices in life and his lifestyle, therefore yes the Cullen’s would be good to Bella if she were to be around them.  Thanks for reading and reviewing, we look forward to hearing more of your thoughts as the story goes.  (Nikky) & Kasi~

Reviewer: gigi9598 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 05 Aug 2013 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

I love this! I want to know more about Bella's background, her family. That coward Charlie promised he would go to the interview and he fishes instead? what a jerk.... think it was Bella's lucky day when she met Edward. I also think the girls, and I say that loosely in the dorm are going to make Bella's life more hell then they already do after meeting Edward. Thanks for the update.

Author's Response:

Hey everyone thanks for reading and reviewing.  There have been several questions and some we can’t fully answer to not give away too much about the story and where we’re taking it.  But let’s start off with the easy stuff.  This will be about 25 chapters in total, give or take a few and we update every Monday or very late Sunday night.  There are many questions regarding the scene that Edward will be participating in.  It is a scheduled demo, teaching session.  We don’t want to give away any info on the scene as of yet, but trust us that there will be nothing remotely sexual about it for Edward at all.  The submissive which will be a part of the exhibition will not in any way shape or form, want or try to keep Edward as their own.  As for more info on Bella’s parents and why they are the way they are, you all really have to be a little patient, you haven’t even met them yet.  There are a LOT of seriously wicked guesses as to what is going on and why things are the way they are, but so far nothing is dead on correct.  You can join us on Facebook, search for the group called: TeamAllTwilight & AndTAT Fan Fiction and you will find us.  Hope you enjoy the teaser... Nikky & Kasi~

 

TEASER:  The rest of the night goes slowly and my mind often deviates back to Bella.  I end up texting her just to have some communication with her.

Beautiful. How was work tonight?  Did you get much work done for college?  I just finished eating some of the lovely apple pie that you made me. It was truly one of the best I’ve ever tasted. Thank you.  ~Edward

I try to focus on my work, but find myself unable to stop looking at my cell. I close the club and head home.  I’m sad and upset that she didn’t respond to my text. By the time I get home, I feel even more upset and even angry.  I wonder why she wouldn’t text me back.  Thinking over reasons, I make a mental list. 

Have I scared her off? No, I don’t think that’s it.  She wouldn’t have agreed to meet up with me if I had scared her.  From what I see and know of her, she doesn’t ignore people, so that can't be it. 

Maybe her phone is out of minutes.  Now this is more possible, because her cell is one of those cheap pay-as-you-go ones and she has little money.  If that’s the reason, then there is no way for her to call or text me back.  Do dorm rooms come with a phone in them? Not really sure about that, I’ll have to check.  I know she is the type of person that would try to keep money on her cell and would say if she was low.  She has often said she needed to switch her phone off because she was low on minutes. 

Maybe she fell asleep and is a deep sleeper.  It has been after midnight when I texted her.  She did say she was normally home before eight and in bed by ten most nights.  Yep, that must be it.  She’ll most likely text me once she’s awake.  I’m sure she’ll feel bad that she missed my text.  One thing is for sure, she doesn’t need me being on her ass like white on rice.

I feel myself calming down after thinking over the theories, and I decide to head to bed.  I wake up and look at my phone seeing it's a little after seven in the morning, but I still don’t have a text from Bella.  I frown and let out a sigh as I rub my face, knowing that I need to get moving.  I’m supposed to be meeting my dad at nine for breakfast, because he won’t be able to attend dinner tonight.

I get showered and dressed all while glaring at my cell.  I see that there is still no incoming text. I text my father to say that I’m on way, and ask if he could text me back to be sure he got my message.  I frown even more when he's answering my text minutes later.  Well, that takes away the newest theory that my cell is not receiving incoming text messages.

I arrive at the hospital and see dad is waiting for me.

“What was the texting all about?”

 

Reviewer: gigi9598 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 16 Aug 2013 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter Four

Bella just can't catch a break! and her roommates? bleh. Looking forward to the next chapter, thank you

Author's Response:

Well that is pretty much verbatim the reaction we were expecting.  We did have a reviewer or two who feels that Bella has been abused to limits of overkill and that Edward shouldn’t want to be with a kid.  I want to address this a little before things get blown out of proportion on this train of thought.  Showing the things Bella lives with and has lived with, is how we are showing her ways of adapting.  Bella has been severely neglected all her life.  She knows no other way.  Speaking from some experience on the matter, when you grow up in a household without both parents and you pretty much raise yourself, and get pushed aside for your parents needs can either make you or break you.  When you solely depend on yourself, you tend to learn to not react the way people normally would.  Bella’s childhood in this story is a lot like mine, in the place where I had no contact with my father at all from age of 6 to 16, who I then saw twice at age 16 and never again until I was 21.  My mom started dating when I was young, but when I was 9 she met a man who she chose to place before me.  By the time I was 12 I lived alone, she gave me the money to pay the bills.  So yes this stuff does happen.  I am by far not a perfect parent myself and I may be a single parent, but I am always here for my children.  I turned out okay, and with the exception of not being able to be in a healthy relationship I am not screwed up.  Edward in this story sees the good in Bella, and sees that she is more than she’s been made to believe she is.  Bella was made to grow up fast as a child.  She parented her mother for years.  She pushed away by the same mother she raised to go live with a father who resents her for choosing her mother over him.  Now we had some questions about waiting until Thanksgiving, and it will be Thanksgiving soon in the story.  Just a few more things have to happen first.  Be patient, everything in this story will happen for a reason.  We have had a great number of followers and reviewers for this story, so we do write one major reply and send to all, but we do try to answer all questions asked ... of course we don’t want to give away too much.  I do hope that this helped you understand a bit more about how and why Bella just lets things roll and adapts to what goes on.  You can always join us on Facebook at the group called TeamAllTwilight & AndTAT Fan Fiction.  On behalf of Nikky and I, thank you for reading and reviewing.  It means a lot to us.  Kasi (&Nikky)

 

TEASER: I quickly snap a picture, before speaking to her.  “No, just a normal picture, but you can pose for me anytime you’d like.” I wiggle my eyebrows at her as I snap another picture of her.

I keep snapping pictures as we talk in my office.  I know I have a few that I can use, but I can’t seem to stop taking her picture.  

“I think that’s enough pictures of just me.  Come on, Edward. Why don’t you take one with the both of us?”

I take the camera away from my face, before grinning at her.  I walk over to the oversized comfy chair then sit.  Off to my left is the large stone fireplace, and the flames are casting their warmth on my feet.  Once I’m sitting, I pat my leg in motion for her to join me.  “Come on, Beautiful.”

Bella looks at me, then to my leg as she slowly stands and makes her way to me.  She glances at the arm of the chair and I shake my head at her.

“Please, Beautiful, just to take your picture. I swear I don’t bite.”

“Liar,” Bella chuckles, looking at me. 

I look at her and frown.

“Don’t give me that look Edward, I’ve seen your club and read the first two books you loaned me.  Plus, you look like the type of guy that likes to bite, at least a little.”

I chuckle nodding, because she’s right, I am a biter. “You’ve got me, dead to rights on that one, but I swear I won’t bite you ... today.”

Bella sits on my knee and I pull her back so she is flush with my front.  I raise my hand with the camera in front of us and snap away.  Slowly, I feel Bella relax in my arm and she drops her head to the side of my neck.  I take a few more, before kissing the side of her head.

Reviewer: gigi9598 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 09 Sep 2013 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

Holy Crow. Poor Bella. And Edward showed great restraint, although I wouldn't bet on it now they are headed home. Give them all they deserve Edward and then a bit more!

Author's Response:

We knew the reactions to chapter eight would be intense and strong.  We were shocked that some of you actually attacked Bella for being weak, but at the same time it’s not surprising.  Sometimes people who are mentally abused and neglected for years strive only for some sort of love.  I can’t imagine any child not wanting their parent to love them.  We all see love in differing ways, and when you’re raised not feeling that unconditional parental love, it makes you strive to have it—at least it did for me.  Bella will come into her own strength soon, and with the help of Edward and his family she will get better.  We are stoked for you to see the interaction with Bella viewing Esme and the way that Esme treats her children, so a portion of that is your teaser.
Many of you asked why Edward did not just beat Charlie down, or how he could have not stopped the situation, or known Jake was in the kitchen.  Edward is one person, and he was trying to watch out for Leah, Jake, Charlie, Brady and didn’t know if he could trust any of the other five people there as well.  As for when Charlie smacked Bella, he had his attention focused on Leah and Jacob.  As for why he did not punch or beat down anyone, imagine this:  Edward defends Bella by striking someone or several someone’s.  He gets arrested his word against several, one of whom is the police chief.  Meanwhile Bella is unprotected and left with the wolves.  It was best for him to do as he did get her out and safe.  And trust that he will be dealing with this.  The ball has already been rolling on a few things, but this just upped the ante.
I’m sad to say that we have lost some readers, but again we cannot and will not apologize or rose color a story about an abused girl, when a good lot of the abuse she withstands is things that are personal to one of the writers and or other people the writers know.  Abuse happens and the largest form of abuse out there is mental abuse and neglect.  Awareness is a key to making things better.  Bullying is a problem, and awareness is a key.  We are however thankful that we have readers who trust in us to bring things full circle.
Thanks for reading and reviewing, Nikky & Kasi~

 

Teaser:  “This is very nice, Esme,” Bella says after taking a bite.

Esme smiles broadly at Bella.  “Thank you, dear.  Edward tells me you're quite a wonderful cook yourself.”

Bella’s blush appears on her face.  “I’m nowhere near as good of a cook as this.”

I shake my head at her.  “Trust me, Bella’s cooking is to die for,” I say as Emmett passes me the wine. I pour some for Esme, Bella, and then lastly for myself.

“What are you going to college for?” Rose asks as she looks at Bella.

“I’m getting a law degree,” Bella answers, but I know the whole table can hear the sadness in her voice.

“And Edward tells us that you’re a dancer, a quite wonderful one at that.”  I look to Alice, smiling that she brought up something that makes my girl happy.

Bella nods at Alice.  “Yes, I love dancing, but I only do it for fun.”

“You’re in the Christmas dance program for the college though, right?” Esme asks as she looks at Bella.

“Yes,” she replies with another blush.

“Carlisle and I have tickets for three of the performances. I’m so looking forward to the show, and seeing you dance, of course.  The dance department director has been bragging to the board of directors about the dances that you have choreographed.” Again Bella blushes more at hearing about the commendations she’s being given.

“That’s got to be the cutest blush ever,” Emmett says in a childish voice, which is followed by a slap from Rose. 

“I love dancing, and the people I’ve been dancing with are all great.  I just hope that no one’s disappointed at the end of the night.”

Esme frowns a little. “I’m sure no one will be disappointed, dear.” My mom smiles at Bella in a way that I can see the mother in her trying to break out and pull Bella in.

The rest of the dinner seems to fly by with everyone talking about what’s been happening.  The more the night goes on, the more Esme became motherly to Bella, but I’ve also noticed Bella becoming uncomfortable with it.  At so many times, she’s looked like she isn’t sure how to react at something Esme has said or done.  She’s remained respectful, but I’ve seen her slowly distancing herself from Esme.

I walk Bella to the car and open the door for her. “I’ll just be a few seconds.” I give her a wink and walk back to house.

As soon as I do, I can hear Esme’s upset voice.  “We really need to do something.  I won’t accept that nothing can be done.”

I hear my father sigh.  “It takes time, dear.”

“No, first those little punks ... I’ll let you and Edward deal with them, but Charlie is mine!”

I chuckle, but feel a little nervous, because I can hear the anger in my mom’s voice. 

 

Reviewer: gigi9598 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 08 Dec 2013 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21

Bless Esme for tossing Renee, that was great!

Author's Response:

Wow, I dropped the ball, normally I have the review reply all written out before now.  So all Nikky has to do is send it to all the reviewers at FFN, and I do TWCS and I post one in the comments FicPad.  I dropped the ball this week.  Between personal stuff and the holidays and other drama things, I just flat out missed the bus.  I am so sorry for the delay in you getting this from us.  There were not a lot of questions at all, but you all seem to LOVE Esme, and how could we blame you.  I FLOVE her myself.  This is short but sweet, but hey you’re going to get an extra long teaser …   Thanks everyone for reading and reviewing.  Nikky and Kasi~

TEASER:  As Bella’s face pales, I look to see who she’s looking at.  I see Sue walking in with a crying Leah clutching her arm.  When I turn my head I catch James rolling his eyes at the display that Leah is putting on.

“I will go back and take my seat, I hope you like my last surprise,” James says getting up and walking away.  I watch him trying to work out what he’s talking about, but chatting brings my eyes to the dock. I watch as two officers bring in Paul and Jacob.  I frown at them seeing that their heads seem to have been shaved and they both have those scalp molding scarfs on their heads.

“Please rise for the Honorable Judge Varner,” the court bailiff speaks out loud before anyone can say anything. 

The judge enters the room and sits in his chair, and tells us to be seated as he calls the court to order.  The judge reads over some paperwork and looks up at the defendant's table. 

“This is a court room, remove those head scarves,” the judge says bluntly.

I kiss Bella’s head, but the loud gasps make me turn my head.  I look around the room seeing everyone’s looking at Paul and Jacob.  As they move around at the reactions, I can see they have ‘rapist’ tattooed across their foreheads.

I turn to look at James who is smirking away.

“What did you do to him?” Leah screams as she stands up making her way toward Bella and I.

“Young woman, sit down!  No, in fact get out of my court room and don’t come back until you put some clothing on.  Bailiff remove this person, and do not let her back in here unless she’s dressed more appropriately.”

Leah’s mouth drops open as she looks at the judge with rage in her eyes. Two of the eight bailiffs in the room escort her out of the room with Sue running out of the room behind them.

I smile a little and turn back to pay attention to the judge.

“Are the defendants, still pleading not guilty?” the judge asks.

“Ernest Berty, for the defense, your honor,” the defense attorney stands and says.  “I’m representing both Mr. Lahote and Mr. Black and they both plead not guilty.  At this time, your honor, we are petitioning the court to have the trial moved due to bias and news coverage in this matter.”

“Well Mr. Berty, since both your clients are facing charges in four states including the great state of Washington, I doubt you’ll find anyone who hasn’t currently heard something of the case.  You have had your chance to question and discredit members of the jury, so therefore your request is not applicable.  Your request to move the hearing is denied, and further more future stalling tactics such as this will not happen in this court.”

I chuckle silently as the defense attorney tucks his tail and sits down.  The judge has the bailiff bring in the jury and they are seated.  We listen as both sides give their opening arguments.  I’m glad that as soon as the opening arguments are done, the judge breaks for lunch.

“How are you feeling, Love?” I ask Bella, as I lean close to her ear so our conversation is private.

“I’m all right, but I think I may head home soon, if that’s okay?”

I kiss her head.  “Of course it is, my love.”

Reviewer: gigi9598 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 31 Dec 2013 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 25

This was a great, great story. I am horrible with reviewing and for that I am sorry. I really enjoyed every chapter. Heading over to facebook to join the group! thank you

Summary: Past Featured Story

 

Detective Cullen has been married to his job for a very long time, and he doesn’t ever plan to change.  Bella Swan the overweight girl who gets used and tossed aside is his favorite waitress.  Can they make more out of this than friendship with benefits, or will she send him away when she decides she wants more?

(The use of the word steaks vs. stakes is a play on words - just FYI)


Banner by: Deebelle OneFic.


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Angst, Drama, Hurt/Comfort,, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: My favs past present and future
Chapters: 26 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 38822 Read Count: 159748
[Report This] Published: 26 Feb 2014 Updated: 16 Mar 2014
Reviewer: gigi9598 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 12 Mar 2014 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22

Oh I am so happy for them. Things are coming together quite nicely. Looking forward to Emmett and his "guy's" night.
thanks for the update

Reviewer: gigi9598 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 11 Mar 2014 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21

Wonderful chapter!! thank you!

Reviewer: gigi9598 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 09 Mar 2014 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19

Well Hallelujah!! Edward finally gets it. I am not sure if Bella knows she is pregnant or not...sometimes when life is in a turmoil you just forget about periods...
I am so glad to see this story continued here. There is always one bad apple that tries to ruin things for everyone. Thanks for not letting that happen. Love this story and thank you for the update.

Reviewer: gigi9598 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 10 Mar 2014 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20

Yes! yes yes yes! I don't blame her for being careful, Edward did let her walk out. No he didn't deal with it well, but still. And a baby, a sweet baby that is part of both of them. Wonderful! I love it! thank you so much for the update! Looking forward to the rest.

Reviewer: gigi9598 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 13 Mar 2014 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23

That was perfect. Just so simple and sweet. Just enough, no over the top. And I wish to hell Edward had put his fist in Mike's big mouth. Just one punch. But I suppose it was for the best he didn't. I hope in a future outtake Mike gets stuck with an old hag with no teeth and wiry hair! lol and a dozen kids!
Thank you for the update.

Reviewer: gigi9598 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 14 Mar 2014 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24

Oh wow. 10 pounds! ouch! haha
I love it. I loved Edward has all he deserved and wanted but didn't know. I am dying to know who this baby looks like...a mixture of both? I am also looking forward to his 8 month "vacation". This is going to be goooodd!
Thank you so much for the update.

Reviewer: gigi9598 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 15 Mar 2014 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 25

I am positive that MooAh more than enjoyed this story because I know I, and many others have. This has been a great story...you ladies are very talented and I want to thank you for your efforts. I look forward to the epilogue and much in the future.

Thank you, thank you!

Reviewer: gigi9598 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 16 Mar 2014 Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 26

Bravo! thank you so much, looking forward to much more from you both,
thank you.

Summary: Past Featured Story

CITF_Chandra

Banner by Chandrakanta

Isabella Swan, an up and coming graphic artist, lived in the heart of the Gold Coast in Chicago. She was comfortable in her brownstone, left to her by her grandmother.

Edward Cullen, a lieutenant in the Chicago Fire Department and the head of the rescue squad in Department Eighteen. He risks his life on a daily basis, putting out fires and saving strangers from burning buildings and mangled vehicles.

She was an innocent…someone caught in the cross hairs of their obsession with fire.

He was a hero…a man desperate to save the woman who was in danger from a serial arsonist. 

Little did they know, this monster was going to be the catalyst to start their fire, their fire of passion. 

They were Caught in the Flames

 

CITF

 

Banner by Fallingsnow Winter! Thank you! 

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Stories I've Already read, Stories I've read, Read & Enjoyed, Tufano79 Stories
Chapters: 176 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 244154 Read Count: 1082126
[Report This] Published: 23 Jun 2014 Updated: 24 Dec 2015
Reviewer: gigi9598 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 25 Jun 2014 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

LOVE IT!

Summary: Past Featured Story

The One and Only

 

What would it be like to know at first sight your one and only love? What if this was given to you as a gift to be passed down thru your generations? Follow the story of how an Angel from heaven gave this gift to the Clan Cullen in 1314 Scottish Highlands and how the gift is passed thru out the generations to present time. Will the Cullen Men find their One and Only?

 


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Family
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: Pure Romance
Series: Stories I've read, Read
Chapters: 27 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 83342 Read Count: 134476
[Report This] Published: 25 Jan 2015 Updated: 28 Apr 2015
Reviewer: gigi9598 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 22 Mar 2015 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21 Coming Back to Reality

It was sheer luck I found you and this story. What a wonderful storyline...the history, the wedding ceremony. Just the right amount of love and angst. You are a very talented writer in my opinion. I am looking forward to the rest of the story and more from you. Thank you for taking time to write this for us!