Reviews by Pitje
Summary: Past Featured Story

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Edward has given up ever finding a vampire mate. He's decided on a new strategy-he'll find a human to become his mate. Easier said than done when others are in the way of who he wants.

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Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: To Read (Geddy), Misstoria's Stories to Read
Chapters: 36 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 109413 Read Count: 123486
[Report This] Published: 25 Jan 2010 Updated: 27 May 2014
Reviewer: Pitje Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 20 Mar 2012 Title: Chapter 28: Chapter 28

I wonder how Edward will take it if he finds out that Bella is becoming a vampire. 

Great chapter.

 



Author's Response:

His reaction will be interesting..

Reviewer: Pitje Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 18 Jan 2012 Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 26

Oh my god. I absolutely love your story. It is one of my favorites.

Next chapter please.

Reviewer: Pitje Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: 06 Feb 2012 Title: Chapter 27: Chapter 27

Great chapter. I wonder when Edward will find out that Bella is already becoming a vampire?

Summary: Past Featured Story

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After a terrible shipwreck in the Mediterranean Sea, Isabella Swan, marquise de Courville, her two best friends and her loyal servants are rescued, but only to become slaves and serve the Volturi brothers, three men with very dark desires. All human. Domward.

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Erotica, Historical
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Domward's Dungeon, Finished, My Favorite Stories
Chapters: 45 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 201090 Read Count: 183997
[Report This] Published: 05 May 2010 Updated: 14 Jul 2012
Reviewer: Pitje Signed starstarstarstar
Date: 11 Jan 2012 Title: Chapter 39: Rosalie among the Volturi

Just began reading your story. I absolutely love it.

Please continue with the translations because I can't wait to read the rest.



Author's Response:

Next chapter should be posted at the end of next week...

Reviewer: Pitje Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: 01 Apr 2012 Title: Chapter 41: Two lovers, ten prisoners, and one hundred freedmen, part 1

I'm sorry for your loss. But I'm glad FF is helping you.

I love your story.

Reviewer: Pitje Signed starstarstarstar
Date: 06 Feb 2012 Title: Chapter 40: The end of a reign of terror

Don't stop with this story. I do care. I think it's great story.

 



Author's Response:

I'm not going to stop, but it's hard to keep motivated with so little incentive, that's all...

Thanks for reading and reviewing.

Diamond in the Rough by lmlx8 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 4248]
Summary: Past Featured Story

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Bella is coming from a bad marriage, and memories that haunt her. After recieving her Master's degree in Psychology, she begins to embrace her submissive nature. When she mets Edward she is drawn to his Dominating character. Can Edward help her to get over the pain from her past, and find peace at his feet.

 

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Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Action, Drama, Humor, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Domward's Dungeon, I Whitlock's read , My Favorite Stories, Fav BDSM Fics
Chapters: 110 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 949046 Read Count: 1254874
[Report This] Published: 19 Jul 2010 Updated: 18 Sep 2014
Reviewer: Pitje Signed starstarstarstar
Date: 11 Dec 2011 Title: Chapter 79: Chapter 79

Great story. I love it. Can't wait to read the next chapter.



Author's Response:

THanks for reading ..louise

Reviewer: Pitje Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: 29 Jan 2012 Title: Chapter 84: Chapter 84

You gotta love Emmett. He is funny as hell but serious on the right times.

Thank god Bella those to lose the cum-slut attitude. I don’t think her relationship with Edward would work if she wants to be a cum-slut.

Please update soon.

 

Reviewer: Pitje Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 07 Apr 2012 Title: Chapter 87: Chapter 87

As always a great chapter. Love the ending. 

 

 



Author's Response:

Thank you ...louise

Reviewer: Pitje Signed starstarstarstar
Date: 06 Jan 2012 Title: Chapter 81: Chapter 81

I must say i'm glad Edward kept his word and sent Bella to the corner. She will know that Edward is a man of his words and it will be easier for Bella to learn not to sigh.

Please keep writing. Love your story.

Reviewer: Pitje Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 18 Jan 2012 Title: Chapter 83: Chapter 83

Edward was harsh, buy I think Bella made the mistake. Why didn't she say yellow?

I know Edward was only trying to learn Bella a lesson. But I don’t understand why Bella didn’t say her words. Maybe deep down she knew she was wrong.

Sorry if I make mistakes in my reviews. I’m Dutch and not so good in writing English. I’m better in reading English and I love to read your story.

 

Reviewer: Pitje Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: 19 Apr 2012 Title: Chapter 88: Chapter 88

The Cock Worship was definitely something more. I like it.

I can't wait the see how Edward will handle a hormonal Bella.

Great chapter.



Author's Response:

LOL ...

Q - How do you make a hormone?

A- Don't pay her....

LOL --- sorry i just had to do it to someone and you were the lucky one....lol -- thanks for reading and for letting me tell you my corny jokes ...louise

Reviewer: Pitje Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 06 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 98: Chapter 98

WOW there will be a sequel. IIIEEE Can't wait.

This chapter was as good as always. 

Summary:

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In a world dominated by vampires, humans are forced to donate blood and abide by the strict rules of the vampire government. Bella has never experienced life in an all-human world and one day the only life she knows shatters to pieces when her parents are killed by a vampire. She is adopted by her parents' friends, who happen to be vampires. Her life turns upside down as she moves to an all-vampire town. Will she have the strength to go on after all that she has endured? Will one special vampire heal her wounds as she struggles to live a life amongst vampires? Edward and Bella pairing, AU, OOC

Warning: This story contains explicit adult content, language, violence, vampire marking and bloodplay.

 

I want to thank Dazzled~by~Jake for this awesome banner! And my awesome Beta Lindz! xo


 

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Categories: Twilight, Alternate Universe
Characters: None
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Love to drive's Stories to read
Chapters: 27 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 384211 Read Count: 238931
[Report This] Published: 14 Aug 2010 Updated: 05 Sep 2022
Reviewer: Pitje Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 26 Feb 2012 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20

OH MY GOD. Great chapter

Don't let us wait to long for the next.

 



Author's Response:

Thanks so much!!

 

I'll have a mini update asap. =)

 

Thanks again,

 

xox

 

Jells

 

Thought this was cute ...lol 

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Reviewer: Pitje Signed
Date: 27 Feb 2012 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

HAHA.

 



Author's Response:

=D 

Reviewer: Pitje Signed starstarstarstar
Date: 26 May 2012 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21

This chapter was a litlle different then the others. But I like it. Please update soon.



Author's Response:

Hey! *waves*

 

Yeah it was. A bit disturbing, lol. There will be a climax soon, but after things will look up for the couple. =)

 

Thanks for reading, I'm working hard on that next chap. 

 

Jells

Summary: Past Featured Story

 

 

 

In a world dominated by vampires, humans are forced to abide by the strict rules of the vampire government. Bella has never experienced life in an all-human world and one day the only life she knows shatters to pieces when she is kidnapped and sold to a vampire. She is unfortunately the object of the most ruthless, out of control, vampire‘s affection. Her life turns upside down as she moves to an all-vampire town. Will she have the strength to go on after all that she has endured her personal hell? Will the one special vampire heal her wounds as she struggles to live a life amongst vampires or will she become the victim of their most sinister instincts? Edward and Bella pairing, AU, OOC

Warning: This story contains explicit adult content, language, violence, vampire marking and blood play, Extreme Dark-ward, and murder.

Alternate version of the original story, Living Amongst Vampires. By IBELONGTOAVAMPIRE.

L.A.H, is co-written by Thaigher Lillie

Tkegl...Thank you!

 


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Action, Horror, Sci-Fi
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Love to drive's Stories to read
Chapters: 25 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 89094 Read Count: 129729
[Report This] Published: 22 Nov 2010 Updated: 10 Oct 2014
Reviewer: Pitje Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: 01 Apr 2012 Title: Chapter 22: Grand Funk

HAHA Good one.

You really got me there. :D



Author's Response:

Hey!!! *waves and giggles* 

 

Will have the next chapter posted this week. We are about 98.9 percent finished ;)

 

Thanks for reading!!

 

xox

 

jells

Reviewer: Pitje Signed
Date: 07 Jan 2012 Title: Chapter 17: Red Sky (Part One-Mini)

WOW!!.....Can't wait to read the rest. 

Love your story.

Reviewer: Pitje Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: 12 Mar 2012 Title: Chapter 21: Revolutionary Red pt.1 (actual chapter)

It gets better every time I read a new chapter. 

Great chapter.



Author's Response:

Hey Pitje! *waves* It's Jellllssss lol

 

Thank you!

 

We’ll have more soon. Thanks for reading and reviewing!

 

~Jells and Tyggy

Reviewer: Pitje Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 13 Apr 2012 Title: Chapter 23: Revolutionary Red pt.2 (actual chapter)

Now I'm not so confused anymore. I really like it that you explain a lot of things in the story. 

I think this is a great chapter and I love the character Demitri.

 

 



Author's Response:

Hiya!!! *waves* 

 

Thanks so much!!! 

A Kingdom Reborn by ammNI Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 539]
Summary: Past Featured Story

Many thanks to FrozenSoldier for creating this fabulous banner: 

A Kingdom Reborn #2

 

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Thanks to Joice84 for the fantastic banner!

Summary: The newly appointed King Edward has failed to produce an heir with his wife of fifteen years. At thirty years old Queen Tanya's chances of ever giving Edward a live son have greatly lessened. Edward's Privy Council have decided on a course of action: Queen Tanya will be asked to revoke the crown and her title as wife of Edward. Edward will then marry another. Many young ladies have been brought to court with the task of catching their king. Duty, Loyalty and Threats will bring England a queen who will change their king. But will it be for the better?

Rating for future content.


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Historical, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Finished, I Whitlock's read , Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiHu, Read & Enjoyed
Chapters: 17 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 44040 Read Count: 102041
[Report This] Published: 07 Aug 2011 Updated: 14 Nov 2012
Reviewer: Pitje Signed starstarstarstar
Date: 06 Feb 2012 Title: Chapter 12: Learning

I hope you will feel better soon and that the tablets are working.

I absolutely love your story and shall continue the read it even if I have to wait a bit longer for an update.

 

Summary:

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Welcome to part 3 of the storm series. Sixteen years after Weather the Storm. Follow the Skip, Bella, and their kids - now older, wiser, and enmeshed in the family business. How will Edward cope with trying to teach Damion and Sonny the ropes, keeping Kylie out of trouble, and Bella happy? Does he still have what it takes to juggle all his duties? Mobward. OOC. AU. Romance/Humor/crime.


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: G8or Favor8s Read, Stories Read by CNYBella, Edwards Paradox Completed Favourites, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, My Favorite Stories, All Time Favorites, Storm Series, My favs past present and future
Chapters: 54 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 549405 Read Count: 806411
[Report This] Published: 24 Aug 2012 Updated: 22 May 2013
Reviewer: Pitje Signed starstarstarstar
Date: 27 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 27: Blazing Guns

Normally I don't review stories, because I'm not so good with writing English. But I just want to say that I really love your story. You have a great imagination and you keep your stories real. Please don’t stop writing because of bad reviews.