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Bio:
sucks....I wrote a cute little bio and it got erased!
What if Edward decided to come back to Bella, only to find she had left town with Jacob? Would he have the persistance to find her? Would Bella and Edward get their happily ever after, in spite of the werewolves, Tanya and the Volturi? canon
Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Romance, Supernatural, Suspense/Thriller
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: To Read (Geddy)
Chapters: 149 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 667044 Read Count: 181679
Date: 21 Jun 2011 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20 Early Surprises
Oh, for the love of Goodness....do you think we could possibly read this many chapters and NOT be INTERESTED in your version!!!! LOL!!! Yes, it's great...awesome....stupendous!!! I will just reiterate though...the editing needs to be more concise! Please look over the last few chapters and clean it up (though the sex scenes were pretty well done!! :) Well, I'm off to bed....sweet dreams, my friend!
Author's Response:
I'm re editing most of the chapters!~ i was a chemistry major, my English leaves a lot to be desired, and my punctuation is even worse! lol! Glad you are enjoying the story! Sorry it has taken me so long to answer, moving after 25 years is about to do me in! lol!
Date: 07 Jun 2011 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 Bella
Love it so far....I voluteer to do your editing and check spelling! :)
Author's Response:
Love you lots! Glad you like it so far!
Date: 11 Jun 2011 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8 Leaves & Looking
hee, hee...good point about the power of a Mom! We can incite a riot, we can win wars, we can encourage our children to be the best they can be or the flip side, degrade them til they think they are worthless. Yep....Mom's have that opportunity...to make or break a child!
Author's Response:
Yep, I just had to let it be esme that got through to him when no one else could!
Thanks for leaving a review!
Date: 16 Jun 2011 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10 Ambulance
Dang...Vickisan, you had my heart in my throat! You scared the B'Jesus out of me!
Author's Response:
Ha! I just wanted to have a set of circumstances that made it seem other than what it was! i love this cliffie!
Date: 16 Jun 2011 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11 Promises
oooohhhh...that was good! :)
Author's Response:
Love hearing from you, hope you get to read again soon!
Date: 17 Jun 2011 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12 Relatives & Reunions
Love, love, love....all we need is Love, love, love! LOL that was good!
Author's Response:
I take it that means you liked it?
Date: 17 Jun 2011 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14 Routine
Oh darn, I need to read the next chapter but I;ve got to get to bed!!! Darn you, Vickisan, for writing such a great story! :) Good night!
Author's Response:
So glad you like the story!
Date: 18 Jun 2011 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15 Hope, Love & Sex
Hot, hot, hot!
Author's Response:
Thanks!
Date: 18 Jun 2011 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17 Vampire
Sad? Well, after describing lovemaking like that....I imagine most readers are breathing a little heavy themselves! Let's get to the next chapter....fast! LOL
Author's Response:
Ha! Thanks!
Date: 18 Jun 2011 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18 Confessions
Very nice....finally they have a talk about their time away from each other! I was wondering when it would finally happen! Well, since I have so much to do before going to work, I better get my a_ _ in gear, thanks for starting my day off so interestingly! LOL Sex in the morning works for me!
Author's Response:
They will have more of a talk later, really just started talking! Sorry it has taken me so long to answer, moving after 25 years is about to do me in! lol!
Really excited that you are reading my story, my friend!
Date: 01 Jul 2011 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 25 Mother & Daughter
Mom is right, Dad is wrong! How typical is that? Ha! We know what's best for our young'uns! That's right!
Author's Response:
I does seem to always work out that way, doesn't it!
Date: 01 Jul 2011 Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 26 Adjusting
Yes, I like it that Charlie can APOLOGIZE! Now, to find a REAL MAN who can do that! Huh, or is he only in your imagination? :)
Author's Response:
Ah! Taking a few minutes to read . . . nice! Thanks for leaving a review!
Date: 09 Jul 2011 Title: Chapter 28: Chapter 28 Meadow
Compromise? Not likely!
"Hut his thoughts told me"...what does that mean? (in the Charlie POV)
Author's Response:
Still can't find the error - help me out!
Date: 09 Jul 2011 Title: Chapter 29: Chapter 29 Mending
begging for comments?....hee, hee....you are too funny!!!
Author's Response:
Hey, sometimes you just need a response!
Date: 09 Jul 2011 Title: Chapter 30: Chapter 30 Past
ah ha...I see where you are taking this! LOL
Author's Response:
What?
Date: 09 Jul 2011 Title: Chapter 31: Chapter 31 Blood
HOT, HOT & HOT! LOL and he's finally asleep! yeah!
Author's Response:
Good, good, good. I was afraid it was too much!
Date: 28 Jul 2011 Title: Chapter 32: Chapter 32 Happenings
He looked as tough I had slapped him. ???? what does that mean
Som a vampire was in the car before the crash??? So, a vampire was in the car before the crash!
Everything else was amazing.....I loved the responses Edward gave to Jessica! LOL
Author's Response:
Yep, Edward really is not sorry that Jessica can't taunt Bella any more! He was, after all, toying with the idea of ending her himself! lol
Date: 28 Jul 2011 Title: Chapter 33: Chapter 33 Leaving Forks
then the trip can commense! (should be "commence")
I told her as I starred straight at her (should be "stared")
It was all I cold manage to say (should be "could")
to see me lift he photos of us (should be "the")
I am still enjoying your story!!! But, now I'm off to bed....sweet dreams! Talk to you tomorrow!
Author's Response:
I found some of the mistakes and am fixing them! mostly i'm sleeping - just soooo tired!
Date: 16 Oct 2011 Title: Chapter 34: Chapter 34 Yellowstone
ok...I liked this chapter, though I am getting to the point where I want to get to know Jasper a little better! When will that happen?
Author's Response:
Jasper doesn't really get close to many people, but more is revesled with him as we go along! thanks for reviewing!
Date: 16 Oct 2011 Title: Chapter 35: Chapter 35 Hunting
Oh yeah....that was a good one! :) well, I'm off to bed....sleep well!
Author's Response:
Glad you're reading the story again - thought I just really sucked! lol