Reviews by caroled
Summary: Past Featured Story

Bella gets sent to a school by her boyfriend to help her become the wife he wants. It isn't what Bella expects, at all.

BDSM, Dark story.

 

 

 

 


Categories: Non-Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward, Bella/Alice, Bella/Carlisle, Bella/Emmett, Bella/James, Bella/Jasper, Bella/Jasper/Alice, Bella/Rose, Carlisle/Esme, Carlisle/Other or Original Character, Edward/Bella/OC, Edward/Carlisle (Slash), Edward/Jasper (slash)
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: My To Read List, Ageise02's Read Stories, Finished, I Whitlock's read , My Favorite Stories, To Read
Chapters: 78 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 297603 Read Count: 1515184
[Report This] Published: 22 Jan 2010 Updated: 21 May 2010
Reviewer: caroled Signed
Date: 05 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 55: Chapter 54: Carlisle DAY 20 PART A

How is it that he acts 180 degrees different with Rachel then he did with Bella.  Of all of the people at the school, with the exception of Mike, he was the only one that was cruel to her, after all he raped and beat her. This trip to the office was the first time he was kind or compassionate with her. There were 4 people who were at fault for what happened to Bella..James, Laurent, Carlisle and Bella herself.  Carlisle should not have been allowed to reopen the school in the end.

Summary: Past Featured Story

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Vampire, Edward Masen, craves someone's body more than her blood.  Can he ever see Bella as more than a pleasure giver?  Can Bella ever see Edward as anything other than a monster?

This story is intended for mature readers only (18 and over).   Subject matter could be disturbing to some readers.

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories, My All-Time Favorites, Fics to Read, My all time favorites, My Favorite Stories
Chapters: 20 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 49527 Read Count: 88020
[Report This] Published: 17 Feb 2010 Updated: 11 Sep 2011
Reviewer: caroled Signed
Date: 10 May 2011 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18

Please update soon.  Can't wait til Carlisle there,  maybe Alice too.

Reviewer: caroled Signed
Date: 29 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I am enjoying your story.  I read the next chapter in your blog and I am suprised that Edward really isn't treating her any better.  I want to see him suffer for what he is doing, but it seems like the only way to make that happen is if Bella suffers. I hope it is time for a visit from Carlisle.

Reviewer: caroled Signed
Date: 29 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11

I am wondering why Emmett didn't just take Bella from Edward?  He could have brought Rosalie and they would have no problem with over powering him.

Reviewer: caroled Signed
Date: 09 Sep 2011 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19

I hope you will update again soon.  Will she die or be a vampire and kick his butt?  I am not sure which would be better.

Summary: Past Featured Story

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After a terrible shipwreck in the Mediterranean Sea, Isabella Swan, marquise de Courville, her two best friends and her loyal servants are rescued, but only to become slaves and serve the Volturi brothers, three men with very dark desires. All human. Domward.

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Erotica, Historical
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Domward's Dungeon, Finished, My Favorite Stories
Chapters: 45 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 201090 Read Count: 184002
[Report This] Published: 05 May 2010 Updated: 14 Jul 2012
Reviewer: caroled Signed
Date: 23 Dec 2011 Title: Chapter 39: Rosalie among the Volturi

I just wanted to let you know that I am enjoying your story,  I just wished you updated more often. 



Author's Response:

I'm sorry but I don't feel like updating more often for 8 people who take the time to review my story, as nice as those 8 people are. Should I receive 10 times more, then yes, I would definitely be very motivated to finish this story faster, but I'm only human and when I see the reviews dropping from 15-20 to 5-10, my motivation takes a plunge too. Now, I know some people will tell me it's because I don't update more often that my reviews did drop, but this argument doesn't hold water as the reviews started dropping when I was updating more often, and I know of a lot of stories that get loads of reviews no matter the frequency and regularity of the updates (for instance My viking and Bonne foi).

Wishing you the best for 2012.

Summary:

 

Edroar the Angry Lion frightens all the girls and boys at Cullen Publishing with his loud roar. Will his new massage therapist Bella Swan run away like all the rest, or can she tame this savage beast?  AH/AU   OOC


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: My All-Time Favorites
Chapters: 19 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 134649 Read Count: 25372
[Report This] Published: 09 Jun 2010 Updated: 06 May 2016
Reviewer: caroled Signed
Date: 17 Jan 2012 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12 - Fool in the Rain

I Just wanted to say I am really enjoying your story and looking forward to your next update.

Reviewer: caroled Signed
Date: 11 Feb 2012 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13 You Give Me Fever

I was happy to see the update, I am glad Bella continues to hold her own.   I am also glad that Edroar is making some progress.  I hope your next update is soon.

Summary: Past Featured Story

 

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Thanks to AcrosstheSkyinStars for the amazing banner.

 

After getting lost in the woods on a camping trip, Bella finds a man who is living a different life. Can two such different worlds mesh when communication is nearly impossible? 

(There are no werewolves or vampires in this fic)


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories, Finished, Love to drive's Stories to read, My Favorite Stories
Chapters: 29 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 68305 Read Count: 68253
[Report This] Published: 02 Apr 2011 Updated: 07 Jan 2012
Reviewer: caroled Signed
Date: 16 May 2011 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

I really like your story and I am very curious about what happens next.  Of course I want them to be together whether in civilization or in the wilderness.  One idea, buy or rent a house near those woods and the wolves and they can have the best of both worlds. I hope you will be updating.



Author's Response:

Updates are every Thursday

 

The support you all are giving me is amazing. Thank you all so much.

 

Here is a teaser for the next chapter, I think you all will enjoy. *winks*

 

Bella felt herself lean into Edward even though she made no conscious effort to do so. He was like a planet, having his own separate gravity that pulled her in whenever she got too close. Edward began to lean in, too, bending his head down to meet hers. She waited, holding her breath for his kiss, but he moved unbearably slow. So just before he finally reached her lips, Bella gasped in a quick breath for lack of oxygen, and then her mouth was covered with his.

Edward was pressed up against her and Bella could feel his hardness on her stomach. What normally would have embarrassed her, made her moan, and that made Edward push his lips harder to hers. Bella lightened the kiss, so she could playfully peck at his lips a couple of times before bringing her tongue out to sweep it across his lower lip.

 

 

---Also you can see an additional teaser on Facebook on the FanFicAholics Anon Teaser Forum

 

 

 

Reviewer: caroled Signed
Date: 26 May 2011 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

Looking forward to your next update.



Author's Response:

I can’t say thank you enough. So I’ll say it with a naughty teaser.

 

Once his hands were clean, Bella debated on what to do next; she made the mistake of looking up into his dark green eyes and found herself lost. She hadn’t known him long enough to feel such a pull to him and yet she found it harder to deny every minute they were together.  He was already the biggest part of her life and she felt more at home with him than she had ever felt with anyone.  And yet some part of her felt like she was taking advantage of this innocent man. How could he choose her when he didn’t even know there were choices?

Shaking her head, Bella brought the soap to Edward’s chest and went to work on his flawless physique.  She was so lost in her thoughts about what was right and what was wrong she hadn’t noticed how low the soap in her hand was dipping until Edward growled.  Or was that a moan? Either way, the sound was fantastic, and it shot right through Bella like a lightning bolt.  Bella dropped the soap just as Edward grabbed her hand; his grip was firm but not forceful.  He lowered her hand to him and she looked up to him to see his eyes pleading with her.

“Touch,” he said, but it was really more of a question. He was asking for relief.

 

 

---Also you can see an additional teaser on Facebook on the FanFicAholics Anon Updates Forum (This is different, they are combining their updates and teaser forum there so make sure you head to the right one)

 

 

 

 

Darkest Desire by britchick69 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 339]
Summary: Past Featured Story

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Set on the Yorkshire Moors in 1800's, Edward Cullen isolates himself from the lust and want filled thoughts of humans. He is disturbed by an injured traveler who stumbles across his mansion in search of respite. Upon reading his mind Edward is captivated by the man's beautiful daughter, Isabella. Edward will stop at nothing to make her his...whatever the cost.

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Erotica, Historical, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Drive's Stories to read that are Completed and Not completed
Chapters: 20 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 49752 Read Count: 77471
[Report This] Published: 04 Nov 2011 Updated: 06 Jan 2012
Reviewer: caroled Signed
Date: 07 Jan 2012 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20 Forever

I enjoyed your story and your regular updates was a nice change from other authors. 



Author's Response:

Thanks glad to hear you enjoyed it and appreciated the regularity. ;0)

Master May I by smmiskimen Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 456]
Summary: Past Featured Story

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Drabble fic. Edward is Bella's Master and is very particular in the playroom. But his sweet pet knows how to make him happy. E&B, AH, OOC. Banner by Soapy Mayhem

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Erotica, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: My all time favorites, Drive's Stories to read that are Completed and Not completed, Amberina's Completed Favs List, Stories I've Already read
Chapters: 93 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 9757 Read Count: 225250
[Report This] Published: 07 Dec 2011 Updated: 06 Jan 2012
Reviewer: caroled Signed
Date: 06 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 93: Chapter 93

I enjoyed your story.

Danger In New York by cristina Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 536]
Summary: Past Featured Story

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A Corrupt district attorney and his daughter who pays the ultimate price for her father's betrayal. Two brothers at war and a family divided.

Twins Edward/Anthony. Mature content, mention of rape, abuse, drug use, prostitution, human trafficking, crime.

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Categories: Twilight, All Human
Characters: None
Genre: Drama
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 40 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 90965 Read Count: 84469
[Report This] Published: 30 Mar 2016 Updated: 28 Apr 2016
Reviewer: caroled Signed
Date: 29 Apr 2016 Title: Chapter 40: Chapter 40

I filled out a review, but I'm not sure it was successfully submitted, so I'm trying it again. I enjoyed your story and looked forward  & appreciated your regular updates.  I am sad that the story has ended and I am really hoping that you will continue it.