Reviews by MrsShortHand
Summary: Past Featured Story

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Bella eventually moved on with her life after Edward left and never returned. Seven years have passed and she is now a teacher. When she starts her newest teaching assignment destiny intervenes to reunite them. Now she is faced with new challenges and decisions. Canon pairings. (Warnings: Violence/Mild strong language/Adult situations)

 

NB: I will be posting the EPOV (Student Liaison) alongside this as much as possible. The full version of Teachers Pet is on fanfiction.net but that will be the watered down version - this one will be complete with outtakes in place.


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Fantasy, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 28 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 116512 Read Count: 48850
[Report This] Published: 28 Feb 2010 Updated: 22 Nov 2011
Reviewer: MrsShortHand Signed
Date: 29 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 4: Difficult Conversations

I always hated how Bella just welcomed Edward back with no questions after all he did to her.  I'm glad you gave her more of a back bone :)

Reviewer: MrsShortHand Signed
Date: 29 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 6: Broken

Ohh I love that cycle of Alice seeing the vision - but had Edward not said anything to her then it would have never happened.

Reviewer: MrsShortHand Signed
Date: 01 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 13: Cain

"I think if Jacob hadn't already imprinted, I am pretty sure he would have done so on Edward in that second. Then there was their love of speed and hunting, although Edward meant animals and Jacob meant vampires -- which was a little awkward."

Best line of the chapter!

First & Ten by Nolebucgrl Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 828]
Summary: Past Featured Story

Bella Swan is an aspiring sports writer and her first big assignment is to interview the league's biggest, not to mention hottest, quarterback.  Will Edward Cullen school her in the rules of the game or will she teach him a thing or two?  Rated NC-17 for language, lemons.  An entry in The Sport of Love contest.


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Challenges:
Series: LeslieWhitlock's faves - not updated in 2012, Finished, My all time favorites, Drive's Stories to read that are Completed and Not completed, Amberina's Completed Favs List, G8or Favor8s Read, Kuu Faves, Stories I've Already read, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, J's Read and Loved Stories, Bella's Must Reads!, My favs past present and future
Chapters: 55 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 351776 Read Count: 189000
[Report This] Published: 06 Apr 2010 Updated: 05 Sep 2012
Reviewer: MrsShortHand Signed
Date: 27 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18 Post Game Interview

Ok so I personally blame you for not being able to update my own story like I had planned yesterday.  In a moment of writer's block, I stumbled upon your story and was hooked reading it the rest of the day.  I usually go to bed with ideas in my head for my next chapters - but instead it was all thoughts on that sexy locker room scene last night.  Damn you!  (In a good way)  :)



Author's Response:

Hee, I both love and hate when that happens :)  Always fun to find something good to read but I feel guilty for shirking!  I'm thilled that you enjoyed the story so much and I would apologize about sexy locker room scenes in your head but really, it's not a bad thing :)  So happy you liked it.  More coming soon!

Reviewer: MrsShortHand Signed
Date: 27 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Loved the twist at the end! :)



Author's Response:

Thank you!  I wanted to surprise everyone :)

Reviewer: MrsShortHand Signed
Date: 18 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21 Upon Further Review

I think you may be unintentionally making me fall in love with Emmett more than Edward.  Every word of dialogue you give him is priceless.  And he totally did something with her phone, right??



Author's Response:

Haha it's absolutely not intentional, but I truly adore this Emmett so much that I think it shines thorugh in my writing!  He makes me laugh the whole time.  Would you trust Emmett with your phone? :)  We shall see very soon!

Reviewer: MrsShortHand Signed
Date: 01 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23 The Game Winning Drive

I'll be waiting anxiously for that lemon ;)



Author's Response:

Hehe I'll be working on it very soon :)  Should be fun! 

Mafia Princess by verucasin Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 527]
Summary: Past Featured Story

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All Humans. OOC. He is the mob boss that wants to rekindle what they had. She is the daughter of the rival mob, who just recently accepted her fate. Will uniting together solve all their problems? ExB


Categories: Twilight
Characters: None
Genre: Romance
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: I Whitlock's read , To Read (Geddy)
Chapters: 32 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 116080 Read Count: 87537
[Report This] Published: 27 Jul 2010 Updated: 07 Feb 2012
Reviewer: MrsShortHand Signed
Date: 28 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

Dang, I know I'm only on chapter 2 but I still had to comment before I got to the last chapter.  This story is SO good!  I can't wait to keep reading!



Author's Response:

Thank you! =)

Reviewer: MrsShortHand Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 28 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

So good, so good, so good!  On to the next chapter!



Author's Response:

=) 

Reviewer: MrsShortHand Signed
Date: 28 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

Holy hell your lemons are hot!  I, literally, just called my husband and asked him to come home from work early ;)



Author's Response:

OMG! That's cool! Hope all my lemons have that effect on you. =) Btw, I have an OS that is smutty. If you like the lemons here, you would love that one-shot. I just posted it here. It's called 'The Servile Gal'. You would ravish your husband after reading it. LOL! =)

Anyway, thanks! =)

Reviewer: MrsShortHand Signed
Date: 28 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15

Well I just spent my entire day reading this story - and boy am I hooked!  You're a fantastic writer.  I hope you show a little bit of Edward's POV from the torture - it'd be interesting to see if he was turned on by his wife being ruthless or if it upset him.

Keep up the great work!  I can't wait to read more!



Author's Response:

I really loved you reviewing some chapters. Thank you! Happy New Year to you! =)