So glad he came back:)

I love your story. It's really sad about what happened to Bella, I'm glad Edward is back.

Wow! Finally the victorian is giving in:)

Really hit:)

I think he knew her a long time ago. She was the girl near the truck

Yes it was fun:) 

Loved this chapter:)

This truly was a wonderful story. Although it is a romantic and sweet story it also focuses on the true trials in life specially with fertility and the added aging factors of the characters. I think u have done a great job overall. I also see a marked improvement in your writing style as the story progressed. I must say the later chapters are really good. I'm a writer myself so I understand how hard it is to write specially when a story has difficult themes. Love your work. Good luck.

Author's Response:

Thank you, so very much for your wonderful review.  I am proud of any of the stories I have written, or helped write.  Considering the education I have.  Having anyone read something I write, makes me proud.  Out of the two stories that I have written and completed, I have had very few negative comments made of them.  Less than a handful, I would say.  I grew up being the fat girl who got picked on, so I spent a lot of time skipping school.  I used to skip at least one or two days a week in 7th grade.  In 8th grade I virtually did not attend school at all the last whole half of the year.  In 9th grade I skipped 47 days of school and spent the equal equivalent in In school suspension, so I in reality missed almost 100 days of the 180 day school year by spending it either skipping, or out of classes. Not to mention the many days, when I would just go to my first class be counted as present and leave.  In tenth grade I was involved in a car accident that ended my high school career completely.  I should have graduated in the class of 1988 and I actually took the GED testing in 1994 and got my GED.  I have honestly never taken and passed any kind of English or Composition class in high school or Jr, high.  I was never a good student, even in elementary, because I hated school.  I started skipping school in 4th grade.  To have the ability to write a story that anyone reads and have them thing it is good, or well written is amazing to me.  I have always loved reading and I have always been an avid reader.  Even skipping school, I spent a lot of time with my nose in a book, maybe not the books teachers would have wanted me to read, but all the same I read.  My biggest issues are my usage of tense, and punctuation when writing stories.  All in all I am proud to have anyone read and complete my stories, and I am very grateful for any of the reviews I have gotten.  Thank you again for reading and reviewing my story.  I know that you are already reading Lipstick Kisses And Inked Virtuoso, that Jess2002 and I am writing, and I hope that you continue to enjoy that story as well.  I will be putting out a one-shot with weekitty here soon.  It will post both here and on fanfiction the author name for that will be weekittyandtat.  I look forward to hearing more from you in the future.  Thank you again, Kasi~

Looks like a very interesting start:)

Oh dear!:) Simply oh dear!

Great chapter:)

What a story!

Lol things are heating up:)

Pls pls pls this weekend!!!!!! Can't take it anymore!!!

Glad they finally did it. But would love to have the whole thing in Bella's point of view. I think her thoughts are dry interesting:) pls do write bella's pov. 

Loved the ending:) thanks for writing and sharing this amazing story with us:)

sweet story:)

What an amazing lovely story. I'm truly touched. I just read the first line of the authors note in the next chapter. And I thought I should say this. Please don't be hurt by that former review you got for your story said you have an amazing and loving heart to be able to write such a touching story.

Lovely story:) Would love to read more stories from Charlie's point of view about Ranesmee and the Cullens.

Lovely story

That was so sweet:)