Reviews by PNW Luna
Summary: Past Featured Story

Bella gets sent to a school by her boyfriend to help her become the wife he wants. It isn't what Bella expects, at all.

BDSM, Dark story.

 

 

 

 


Categories: Non-Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward, Bella/Alice, Bella/Carlisle, Bella/Emmett, Bella/James, Bella/Jasper, Bella/Jasper/Alice, Bella/Rose, Carlisle/Esme, Carlisle/Other or Original Character, Edward/Bella/OC, Edward/Carlisle (Slash), Edward/Jasper (slash)
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: My To Read List, Ageise02's Read Stories, Finished, I Whitlock's read , My Favorite Stories, To Read
Chapters: 78 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 297603 Read Count: 1515286
[Report This] Published: 22 Jan 2010 Updated: 21 May 2010
Reviewer: PNW Luna Signed
Date: 01 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 68: Chapter 67: Bella DAY 23

Wow, what if it's love at first site for Jacob and Victoria?  That would be a big twist.  Or will she and the baby end up being casualties in James vendetta?  Looking forward the action and suspense that is sure to ensue with James' escape.  

Reviewer: PNW Luna Signed
Date: 22 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 72: Chapter 71 - James: Day 23 and 24

Well that takes care of Laurent or Lowrent as I like to call him.  So my burning questions:  Is Aro clean or dirty?  Will he help or hurt Carlisle?  What is James going to do now?  Will he kill Heidi?  Where will he take Bella and Victoria?  How will Edward and the gang find them?  I'll be staying tuned while waiting for all to be revealed...   

Reviewer: PNW Luna Signed
Date: 12 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 74: Chapter 73: Edward Day 23 and 24

   Thank God he dropped the phone.  Let's hope they get to them before he realizes the phone is gone.  Puhlease, no more Edward screaming and acting like an emo girl.  You need to man him up fast, before the confrontation. 

   Thank you...

Reviewer: PNW Luna Signed
Date: 11 May 2010 Title: Chapter 77: Chapter 77: Chapter 76

   What goes around comes around and karma has found James.  He is now doomed to that fate worse than death which is slavery.

   Thank you ladies...  

Reviewer: PNW Luna Signed
Date: 25 May 2010 Title: Chapter 78: Chapter 78

   What a way to end it!  "So, Isabella, you wish to play?"   Good job at wrapping it all up with a bow on top.  

 

   Again many thanks and much gratitude to you both for sharing your time and talent with us and for bringing us TWCS Library as an alternative to Fan Fiction.  It was a wild ride and very much appreciated...

Summary: Past Featured Story

 

Bella has grown from an orphaned sixteen year old raised by her older brother Emmett and his friends affectionately known as ‘her boys’, to an up and coming first year medical intern. When a day in the ER turns dangerous can her boys, now members of the best SWAT team in Chicago save her? Eventual Canon pairings. Rated 'NC-17' for strong language, lemons.

 

 

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's not read yet, Fics to Read, LeslieWhitlock's completed & recommended read stories, Finished, Love to drive's Stories to read, Twilight - Read, Themslovebug90's read stories, Amberina's Completed Favs List, G8or Favor8s Read, Kuu Faves, Completed Stories, Stories I've Already read, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, My Favorite Stories, J's Read and Loved Stories, My favs past present and future , mamih's favorites, TBR
Chapters: 60 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 413119 Read Count: 753010
[Report This] Published: 14 Feb 2010 Updated: 16 Feb 2010
Reviewer: PNW Luna Signed
Date: 16 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 18: Missing and Misunderstandings

   Oh Sweet Jeebus!  She would have to walk in just at the exact wrong moment without staying long enough to see it resolved.  His Mother and Tanya buddies?  Dum, dum dum... 

   Regards, PNW Luna

   AKA Bella Luna on Twilighted

Reviewer: PNW Luna Signed
Date: 16 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 19: Runaway Rollercoaster

Whew!  That was a close one.  Glad the break-up drama wasn't too drawn out and was resolved rather quickly...

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Date: 16 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 20: Decoys and Deprecation

I'm so glad they had the opportunity to hash through their history and emotions.  Good way to do it by using their playlists...

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Date: 16 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 21: Getting Reacquainted

   Thank you for making Bella magnanimous and wanting to help Tanya.  Looking forward to the Edward/Elizabeth confrontation.  

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Date: 16 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 22: Truth Revealed

   I'm so glad things worked out for Edward with Elizabeth.  Now, whenever I hear Sex on Fire by the KOL I'll be thinking of this scene in your story.  Thank you for another great chapter.... 

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Date: 17 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 24: For The First Time

   Holy Hot Damn Batman!!!!  All men should be required to learn how to gratify a woman by reading Twi Fan Fic.  Lord knows how many men out there are benefitting from having their better halfs reading it...

   BTW, excellent playlist, thank you!!!! 

   PNW Luna aka Bella Luna on Twilighted

Reviewer: PNW Luna Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 17 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 25: Rearrangements and Rock Stars

Very entertaining :)

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Date: 17 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 26: Moving Ahead and Protective Mama Bears

   Wahoo!  You go Esme...  She knows how to put her sister in her place. 

   Now it's baby mama drama time with Tanya.  If she's so beautiful, she won't have any problems finding herself a Doctor.  Oh No!  Dr Sellers?  She's as big a danger magnet as Bella.  The Mob Doc will worm his way into their lives one way or another won't he...

   Prologue is really close?  Still 34 more chapters to go, not quite half way yet.  Like I said earlier, one of the advantages of being late to the party...

Reviewer: PNW Luna Signed
Date: 17 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 27: Underneath It All

   Ahhh!  I was going to go to bed after this chapter, now I can't.  Must read on to see how it all plays out...

   Re last chapter's review.  If my comment on the a/n announcing the prologue doesn't make sense, it's because I read prologue but for some reason (sleep deprivation maybe) my mind was thinking epilogue!!

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Date: 17 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 28: The Angel's Kiss

Oh. My. God!!! 

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Date: 18 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 32: Reaching Into the Darkness

   No word on the status of Trevor Sellers yet?  Bella is so young, why does she still feel the need to fast track?  She could easily take some time off and resume her internship at a later date and still be ahead of most people her age. 

   I like how you've made Bella's character so strong, intelligent, and independent for the most part.  Hope she doesn't get too bogged down in post traumatic stress syndrome.  Particularly since she has a strong support system of friends and family.

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Date: 18 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 33: Disturbed

  The guys had the right idea by taking Bella to the gym. 

Summary: Past Featured Story

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Summer Outtakes for the story Femme Docs and Kevlar Knights.  It all began the year her parent's died.  The boys took her to the beach that first summer trying to cheer her up.  It ended up being a yearly tradition for Bella and her boys.  Watch as their relationship matures and develops from one end of the pendulum swing to the other until they finally find equilibrium.  These outtakes also fill a few of the gaps between the wedding and the epilogue.  Come enjoy the angsty, hot, and volatile journey.

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Twilight, Love to drive's Stories to read, Themslovebug90's read stories, Amberina's Completed Favs List, G8or Favor8s Read, My Favorite Stories, My favs past present and future
Chapters: 11 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 69300 Read Count: 26418
[Report This] Published: 16 Feb 2010 Updated: 18 Feb 2010
Reviewer: PNW Luna Signed
Date: 29 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 11: The Last Summer With FDKK

I very much enjoyed the whole thing!  Thank you for sharing this delightful story. 

Fold Your Wings by Jadalulu Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 1036]
Summary:

'The liberties he assumes with my body should enrage me, anger me beyond my own sanity. But it's just not that simple.' Encounters born of need. Consequences neither saw coming. Guard your hearts. Not the ExB you're used to. 

 


Categories: Twilight, All Human
Characters: None
Genre: Drama
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: My All-Time Favorites, Fics to Read, I Whitlock's read , Ageise02 WIP Reads, My Favorite Stories
Chapters: 22 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 104224 Read Count: 143215
[Report This] Published: 18 Apr 2011 Updated: 04 Dec 2011
Reviewer: PNW Luna Signed
Date: 08 Jun 2011 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 13

She was neglected and emotionally abandoned by her mother.  She was abused by her father.  Then she was used and abused by Edward.  All the while working herself to the bone to make it on her own all alone.  She is so strong yet lonely, my heart aches for her.  I want to see her unload all that crap.  Then surround herself with warm loving friends as a surrogate family to replace the shitty one she came from. 

Then I want Edward to observe her once again.  This time he'll see she is the opposite of the poor, desperate girl he took advantage of.  I want him to see her transformed and being treated like a princess by a really nice guy.  Anything to make him feel even shittier about the way he once treated her.  He'll see enough to inspire and ensure that he cannot stay away.

Sorry, I'm stepping down now.  Your story stirs the emotions.  Looking forward to what you have in store for these two.  Thank you.  Regards, PNW Luna 

Reviewer: PNW Luna Signed starstarstarhalf-star
Date: 13 Jul 2011 Title: Chapter 1: Prologue

Wow!  That was intense and raw.  Her loneliness is as palpable as his grief.  The torturously slow reveal is almost painful.  Yet, I want more... 

Reviewer: PNW Luna Signed
Date: 02 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 16

Where I would Google him to see what info is out there on him, I can understand why she does not.  She is trying to move on, not get more invested.  Still tortuously slow reveal.  I keep waiting for it to happen, but I don't know what it is. 

So his daughter is alive yet not with her father.  She is a sensitive subject that can trigger panick attacks in him.  Why?  Who is her mother?  Is he divorced from the mother of his child or were they never married?   Obviously he does not have custody, did he lose visitation rights as well?  So many darn questions and not enough answers.   

Thank you for the update, looking forward to more...