Reviews by indefinable1
Edward's Clan by Greenaway Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 1470]
Summary: Past Featured Story

 

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**WARNING - THIS STORY CONTAINS VIOLENCE, SEXUAL MATERIAL, OFFENSIVE LANGUAGE AND OTHER CONTENT THAT MAY DISTURB SOME PEOPLE. YOU HAVE BEEN WARNED.**

Edward Cullen is the leader of The Clan, a fierce and deadly group of assassins for hire and he knows nothing besides violence and blood. When he meets Bella, he begins to imagine that there might be more for him out there.

A dark journey of love, power and death.


All Human, Cannon Pairings and TEAM EDWARD

Please be warned, this story gets pretty graphic later on.

 

A special thank you to evilangel813 for the awesome banner.


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: To Read (Geddy)
Chapters: 35 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 234131 Read Count: 195559
[Report This] Published: 23 Feb 2010 Updated: 11 Jun 2012
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Date: 11 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 27: The Difficult Choices We Make

i'm so sorry i've been behind on my reviews. i've had two deaths in the family in the past week and two major family "events", plus my sons birthday.  the past few weeks have been crazy here.

as always - i love you and every word you type.  perfect as always.  i can't wait for the next updates.

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Date: 12 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 28: Friends in Unlikely Places

i can't believe it... 6 MONTHS....  damn - poor E has bound to gained a few extra personalities in there by now - but i loved it as always - you're awesome and you rock and thanks for being fuck-hot-cool!  MistyDarling / Indefinable1

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Date: 05 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 30: The Rescue: Part Two – Reunions

you're killing me woman!!!!  sorry i've been such a slacker - i've had a LOT going on and i didn't read anything for several weeks! ugh - real life can be a bitch sometimes!

anyway - it was fabulous as always - even when i'm pissed off - i still love it! can't wait for the next update and please don't make it take too long ;)

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Date: 21 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 29: The Rescue - Part One: Farewells

i think i've forgotten to post comments lately - but i love you and still am a dedicated follower!!!!

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Date: 21 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 31: – the Rescue: Part Three – Home is Where the Broken Hearts Lay

love love love YOU

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Date: 20 Dec 2011 Title: Chapter 33: Finding Purpose

you are an amazingly fabulous writer and this will always be one of my most favorite fics ever - LOVE YOU ENDLESSLY!!

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Date: 20 Dec 2011 Title: Chapter 34: Happier Times

SO IN LOVE with your update.  I will always check back for more of you.  You know you're one of my most favorites around and even though real life gets in the way, I hope this side of you is one that you can always express and share.  Can't wait for the next chapter!!!!

Summary:

flod

 

 

 

Dr. Edward Anthony Masen Cullen is a world renowned pediatric neurologist, he´s also a very sought after Dominant living in the Seattle area. What happens when the thrill of the playroom is no longer enough? What happens when he wants more than just a Friday through Sunday arrangement... Bella Swan a very young and very successful Corporate Attorney, who happens to be secretly crushing on her best friends older brother. It all starts with a dream, but after a very short, but failed marriage, Bella decides it´s time to give in to her submissive nature. With the help of her best friend and a blind date, can Bella finally find all the things her live is missing. ExB Rated for BDSM themes and lemony goodness. 

 

A very big thank you to the wonderful Kris Mkystich for my new banner!  Isn´t it sexy!!! Check her out in the December Drabble Wars!!  http://www.fanfiction.net/s/8769101/3/School-Of-Mischief

 

 

Winner of a Tomato Soup Award!

 

 

Nomimated for two Wordsmith Awards!

 

 

 

Voted Must Read Monday by Twi Girls Next Door

 

 

Winner of two Wordsmith Awards!

 

 

 

 


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Erotica, Romance
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Domward's Dungeon, Bdsm stories only, Twilight - Read, Drive's Stories to read that are Completed and Not completed, Can't wait for an update, Stories I've Already read, My Favorite Stories, Misstoria's Stories to Read, J's Read and Loved Stories, Fav BDSM Fics
Chapters: 31 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 312058 Read Count: 389607
[Report This] Published: 07 Nov 2010 Updated: 19 Aug 2016
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Date: 25 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 13: The fall of the Cullen Empire pt. 2... The Aftermath....

it's hard to find a good bdsm story - and this is the kind i like.  i love when edward falls in love with the submissive bella.  it makes sex so much hotter!!!  awesome fic!!!  now that i'm all caught up - can't wait for the next update!!!

i just happened across this one a few days ago!! glad i did!

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Date: 25 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 10: It´s Playtime...

holy mother fucker in the heavens of lust!!! that was totally hot!!!  smoking hot!! loved it!

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Date: 25 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 11: Guess Who´s Coming to Dinner... the Morning After...

:) :)  love it

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Date: 25 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 12: The fall of the Cullen Empire...

the moments we've all been waiting for!!! for them to finally realize what we've all known!!  yikes this is getting soooooooo good!!!  i can't wait to see how this all plays out.  so hot and sexy!!! 

oh - btw - where the hell are finding all the sexy ass pictures you keep posting in the stories?

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Date: 25 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 1: PROLOGUE: BLIND DATING

great!

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Date: 25 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 1: DREAMS... WHAT DO THEY MEAN?

i really love this fic and hope that you continue it

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Date: 25 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 3: REVENGE IS A DISH... BEST SERVED COLD...

:)

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Date: 25 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter: 4 BREAKING UP IS HARD TO DO...

High Five

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Date: 25 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 6: Propositions, Female Dommes, & Cell Phones...

10!

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Date: 23 Jun 2011 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 17: What´s Done in Forks... Stays in Forks...

Question – I’m confused about this whole "Seth" kid. Back in Chapter 4 when he was first introduced, he was the night guard at Edward’s condo or something like that. Now it’s like he’s a child and calling Bella "Sissy" – it’s very confusing. I personally don’t care for the whole seth storyline part because I find it very boring and having nothing to do with what I’m reading the story for, which is Bella and Edward. But I’m still reading – and since I am I was hoping you could clarify how old Seth is and what’s going on.



Author's Response:

Sorry you feel that way, but Seth(Sue´s son) will remain apart of this story.  Also, the night doorman at Edward´s condo building is also named Seth, hope your confusion has been cleared up.  It´s not uncommon to know two people with the same name! Hope you stick around! 

Thank you for reviewing!  Checkout the blog for a teaser to chapter 18!


Krazi

xoxo

Summary:

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"Mom sleeping?" I asked.

He nodded. "All pilled up and passed out."

"You drugged her." I assessed, rising to my knees.

"Only suggested she take a sleeping pill." He too kneeled on the bed. "So what can I do for you this evening?"

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

This is dark. Characters: Bella, Edward, and Carlisle


Categories: Twilight, Non-Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Carlisle
Genre: Drama
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: My All-Time Favorites, G8or Favor8s Read, Edwards Paradox Completed Favourites
Chapters: 2 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 11281 Read Count: 26670
[Report This] Published: 23 Mar 2011 Updated: 25 Mar 2011
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Date: 05 Jun 2011 Title: Chapter 1: Cullen and Cullen

Hot!!

Quiet Storm by SexylexiCullen Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 1708]
Summary: Past Featured Story

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"Two weeks. Two years. Who cares?" A lesson in love, crime, and passion. When two young lovers find themselves in the middle of the storm, can love conquer all? AH. OOC. Rated M Mafia fic. 

Humor/Romance/Violence/Drama...you name it, QS has it, or will. Canon couples. Not canon characters. (Mafia fic) MobWard

 

Stephenie Meyer owns all things Twilight. 

Beta'd by aeglow

Banner by the amazing RoseArcadia


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Humor
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories, My All-Time Favorites, Love to drive's Stories to read, Love to drive's Stories to read set 2, Shena's Storys to Read, Themslovebug90's read stories, Amberina's Completed Favs List, G8or Favor8s Read, Kuu Faves, Stories Read by CNYBella, Completed Stories, Edwards Paradox Completed Favourites, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, My Favorite Stories, To Read , All Time Favorites, Storm Series, J's Read and Loved Stories, Storm Saga by SexiLexi, My favs past present and future , Read & Enjoyed
Chapters: 49 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 618485 Read Count: 2672544
[Report This] Published: 01 Apr 2011 Updated: 03 Jan 2013
Reviewer: indefinable1 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 09 Sep 2011 Title: Chapter 44: Epilogue

Girl I don’t know what the hell happened.  For whatever reason I didn’t get the notice that the epilogue had posted.  I finally got impatient and clicked on your name to see if there were any updates and saw that the new story had already started. 


You know I love all your stories.  My son goes to private Catholic school so I totally can relate to some of the stuff you write.  But for me as a single mom it’s not as easy to afford.  Anyway that’s neither here nor there. 


 


Can you do me a HUGE favor – can you give me a timeline. I got really confused on exactly when Edward was in jail and how long.  I wasn’t sure if he was in jail waiting for more than one trial or not.  Like if I’m being totally picky – I’d love for you to tell me the age they got married and then when they had each kid.  Also I’ve always been curious if this fic was set in today’s date or if it’s supposed to be set in the 90’s. I don’t know why but there are some things that remind me of the 90’s.  I think it’s the whole tanning bed thing. 


 


Ok this probably made no sense but love you and love this fic and have followed faithfully since the beginning. 

Summary: Past Featured Story

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Quiet Storm Sequel. 

How does the head of the world's most powerful crime family juggle being a father, husband, and boss? Surrounded by trouble, Edward tries to manage his organization while struggling to spend time with his children and wife, Bella.

Two years have passed since the epilogue; do Bella and Edward still have what it takes to Weather the Storm? OOC. AH. Mobward/Daddyward. 

Edward/Bella. 

 


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Humor, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: My All-Time Favorites, Love to drive's Stories to read, Love to drive's Stories to read set 2, Themslovebug90's read stories, G8or Favor8s Read, Kuu Faves, Stories Read by CNYBella, Completed Stories, Edwards Paradox Completed Favourites, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, My Favorite Stories, To Read , All Time Favorites, Storm Series, My favs past present and future
Chapters: 60 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 535952 Read Count: 1532966
[Report This] Published: 10 Aug 2011 Updated: 24 Aug 2012
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Date: 16 Sep 2011 Title: Chapter 6: And Once More for Luck

LOVED IT! damn i love edward - licking!!!

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Date: 19 Oct 2011 Title: Chapter 11: Thou Mayest

Hi baby – even though I usually despise POV’s that aren’t E or B, I actually didn’t mind this chapter – I was totally rooting for Aro and Esme to get it on – and I was ticked off when they didn’t.  Poor guy needs some damn loving!!  I’m not sure what part you were worried about – I guess with Aro choking Lau – it didn’t bother me, I mean I don’t condone violence of any sort, but let’s face it – this isn’t exactly a “normal” story – anyway – I love it – and if you are going to give us another POV in the next update – I’d love to get the dirty on Aro & Esme – I want them to have a romantic tender moment – that would be sweet – and I think they both deserve it –


Love you

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Date: 09 Sep 2011 Title: Chapter 1: In Like Flynn

THANK YOU for giving me a lemon. I was totally going to ask for one.  I know for most people when they have kids – the sex stops – and I’m glad that E & B still got it going on. 


And WTF???  E showed Sonny porn!!!  Gawh that made me laugh. 

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Date: 09 Sep 2011 Title: Chapter 2: Conformity

It made me sad that Bella has to lie about her kids and about E.  I kinda get it, but also I think it’d be really hard for me to do something like that.  plus I don’t know how she managed to keep her mouth shut when her friends were talking bad about Edward and stuff. 


The period stuff was funny. I totally remember when I got mine and I was mortified when my mom told my dad about it.  so embarrassing. 


OMG – the gay talk.  that killed me.  My son is 6 and it’s soooooo hard to explain things the right way.  He asked me about praying and God the other day and if he just prayed for something then that meant it had to come true because God answers all prayers – well how the hell do I explain that?? so I said that God was like Santa Claus – just because you asked for something doesn’t mean you’re going to get what you asked for.  LOL


 


This is random but I love that they have a Rott now and so far you haven’t made the dog a savage that’s going to kill the baby or something.  I had two Rotts and they were the biggest loving babies you could ask for.  They get a bad rap usually.



Author's Response:

Thanks for reading and reviewing. Yes, it is very hard explaining things to kids. Maybe I'm a bad author, but that's kind of why I glossed it over. LOL. I love Rottys!

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Date: 19 Oct 2011 Title: Chapter 10: Misery Loves Company

Damn baby!! somehow I missed this chapter update – don’t know how – but DAMN that was hot.  The only thing I don’t know is how Bella kept from leaping over the table and clocking Lauren one.  And what the hell was up with Nanny?? I would have cried – and then cursed her out – what the hell is she thinking blaming Bella for that stuff!?!? dang the sex was amazing – loved it – poor kids are gonna be so fucking traumatized!!! LOL

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Date: 05 Oct 2011 Title: Chapter 8: Indemnity

poor bella - hope she gets better - love this fic

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Date: 05 Oct 2011 Title: Chapter 9: This Time Around

I personally think Edward did the right thing – when you have to wait for your punishment, just living in fear never knowing when it’s going to strike, that’s the worst time. Like when I was a kid and knew that I had to show my parents my bad report card, I was a nervous wreck!

I was actually hoping Carlisle would have tried a little bit more with Bella – cause that would just make it all the juicier – eekkk I love Edward –

I love that Aro slapped money in Sonny’s hand – that was classic.