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Bio:
Stay at home mom who loves to read Edward and Bella stories.
Bella Swan is kidnapped from her monotonous life by the rich and reclusive Edward Cullen who has fallen in love wirh her from afar. Can she overcome her anger and fall in love & can they both learn from their mistakes?
Rated: M (18 and over)
AH, AU, Contains: Violence, Foul Language, Lemons
Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02 WIP Reads
Chapters: 24 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 95443 Read Count: 83458
Date: 11 May 2011 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5
Wow!! My apologies for not reviewing before now. This story is intriguing and has captured my attention and I can't read fast enough. It is wonderful!!
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A troubling childhood has left Bella shy and scared of her own shadow. Her life is turned upside down when she is sent to live with the Dad and brother she never knew at the age of 15. Can Charlie and Emmett along with Edward and the gang help Bella? E/B, A/J Em/? *abuse is discussed*
Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories, I Whitlock's read , Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiHu, Stories I've Already read, My Favorite Stories, luv2write finished reads
Chapters: 36 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 160653 Read Count: 171520
Date: 13 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3
Awwww, poor Rose!! Can't believe I'm saying that.
Date: 13 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2
WOW!! Fantastic story!! Can't wait to keep reading!
Date: 15 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 26
This is a fantastic story!! My apologies for not reviewing all along. I'll go back and review every chapter.
I'm usually not into "Bella/Edward teenage" stories much but I have thoroughly enjoyed this one.
Renee's family is one fucked up in the head family. Geez!!
I feel for poor Charlie. He can't catch a fucking break!! Poor guy!
Taking place in 17th century Europe, Princess Isabella, only daughter of King Charles I of Spain, faces her fate as her arranged marriage to Prince Edward, future King of England, approaches. The Prince is known for his indiscriminate cavorting with the ladies of his land, leading the Princess to fear that she will suffer the same fate as her mother and many other queens before and since, to be trapped in a loveless marriage to an unfaithful husband. Will Princess Isabella ever find happiness while bound to the fate of her birth? AH/OC/Eventual Lemons
Warning: This will be an NC17 story for later chapters.
Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's not read yet, Finished, I Whitlock's read , Amberina's Completed Favs List, Completed Stories, Edwards Paradox Completed Favourites, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, J's Read and Loved Stories, mamih's favorites, TBR
Chapters: 30 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 92977 Read Count: 373213
Date: 22 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 30: Epilogue
WOW!! Fucking WOW!! What a fantastic story!! I started reading it yesterday morning and just now finished it.
The Epilogue is amazing and I am soo pleased with it. It's hard to imagine Edward and Bella dieing in any story but the way you ended this one with them being together once again, is awesome!!
I thoroughly enjoyed this story. I love this "frame of time" and need to watch the Tutors (I believe that was the name of the show that inspired you to write this story).
You did a great job and I wanted you to know how much I enjoyed it!!
**WARNING - THIS STORY CONTAINS VIOLENCE, SEXUAL MATERIAL, OFFENSIVE LANGUAGE AND OTHER CONTENT THAT MAY DISTURB SOME PEOPLE. YOU HAVE BEEN WARNED.**
Edward Cullen is the leader of The Clan, a fierce and deadly group of assassins for hire and he knows nothing besides violence and blood. When he meets Bella, he begins to imagine that there might be more for him out there.
A dark journey of love, power and death.
All Human, Cannon Pairings and TEAM EDWARD
Please be warned, this story gets pretty graphic later on.
A special thank you to evilangel813 for the awesome banner.
Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: To Read (Geddy)
Chapters: 35 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 234131 Read Count: 195559
Date: 21 Sep 2011 Title: Chapter 19: Good to be Home
I absolutely loved this chapter!!!
I usually don't read this type of story BUT I've been reading Savage's stories for quite some time now and I guess my "tastes" are changing. :) This story actually scares the shit out of me when it comes to my two young daughters. Geez!!
Now, do you know WHY I loved this chapter??? 100% pure Emmett!!!! I swear I laughed my ass off when he came through the door from his 2nd trip in a row where he walks in on Edward and Carlisle trying to kill each other. That was mofo funny!! I can soo see Emmett having the type of reaction he did in this chapter.
I'm an Edward girl 100% but Emmett is my VERY close 2nd. Love me some Emmett!!
Date: 13 Sep 2011 Title: Chapter 1: First Impressions are Forever
WOW!! Can't wait to see where this goes!!
"I leaned over my wife again and stroke every little inch of her face “I’ll make your pain stop…” I kissed her unmoving lips with all the love I had as I thrust the sharp needle straight into her heart..."
~*~*~
"Renesmee's tiny warm hand touched my neck. She showed me the three of us in this room with me holding her and with Bella laying on the bed her thoughts shifted and re-focused on Bella, they had a questioning edge…"
~*~*~
This story is a retelling of Breaking Dawn. It sticks to cannon up until Bella and Edward are back from Isle Esme, from there on it's all mine! In a way this is how I wish Breaking Dawn was written. However, the major focus of this story is on Edward and Renesmee's relationship rather than Bella's experience. So if you're a Dadward fan this story will appeal to you! (or at least I hope it will)
Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Romance
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 19 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 72115 Read Count: 11221
Date: 14 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 5: Meeting Renesmee
Look at you, not sure where to take this story from here and there are 6 more chapters. Way to go!
This was a great chapter! Dadward is absolutely adoreable. You're doing a great job!
I also agree with the whole "growth spurt" thing w/Renesmee. Good call. It's not fair that after all B/E went through to get her here that they get cheated out of her childhood. Like you said, that goes for Ren, too.
Author's Response:
hey mldewolf,
I'm so happy you like where this is going so far... Yeah there are six more chapters but the story is starting to drag and that's due to my not being sure where I want to go with this story. I have most of it figured out but there's this missing moment... anyway, I'm glad you agree with my opinion on Renesmee.
Thanks for reviewing, it means a lot.
till next time,
Mimozka
Date: 13 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 4: Confrontation
Man, you are saying everything I wanted said in the books. Thank you!! Excellent!!
Author's Response:
I'm glad you're satisfied with it and to be honest when it comes to the Bella PoV I was stating my own opinion on Jacob rather than hers really... But it worked out in the end...
Date: 13 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 1: The Birth
WOW!! This is great! Can't wait to keep reading. Gotta go......
Author's Response:
Glad you like it! :)
Date: 13 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 3: Conflict
Don't hate you! Great chapter and a perfect cliffie! Atleast I don't have to wait for the next chapter. I can just jump to it (smirk).
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Edward Cullen is a 21 year old man who has the world at his finger tips. He has a great education, money, and plenty of women. The things he feels he's entitled to...but what happens when an innocent meeting with a beautiful, but older Isabella Swan at a coffee shop turns into something he never expected.
Will a hot and assertive woman like Bella, who likes to take control, finally be able to teach a young cocky Edward about life, sex, and women?
Thrust into a world filled with pain, pleasure, and all too consuming desire...Edward soon realizes it's a life he can't live without.
Chocolate Brown & Leather Whips teaser trailer by Emily Bowden
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Teaser Trailer #2
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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Wonderful World of Dommella, My all time favorites, Drive's Stories to read that are Completed and Not completed
Chapters: 49 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 318670 Read Count: 86080
Date: 19 Jan 2012 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter Four- No Longer a Figment of the Imagination
Okay, this chappie cracked my ass up! I laughed out loud at the part where Edward denied he knew his brother's to Bella and the "Nun yuh" part. Holy shit that was funny.
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Eighteen year old Bella Swan has moved to the small Western town of Spoons Valley to meet up with her older brother, Emmet, after their parents' deaths. She always figured that the Wild West that she read about would be like the descriptions in Harper's Weekly, but she didn't realize just how wild and dangerous things would get once she arrived.
AH. Canon Couples.
Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Action, Historical, Humor, Mystery, Romance
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's not read yet, Ageise02 Current Reads, Finished, Kuu Faves, My Favorite Stories, My favs past present and future
Chapters: 90 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 131753 Read Count: 282983
Date: 11 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7
FINALLY!! I'm enjoying this so far. Can't believe this is 90 chapters. Geez!!
Date: 12 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 25
OMG, I'm LMAO!! That was funny as shit!!
I just imagined what Alice's face must have looked like in church, not realizing that Emmett was asleep and he farts. God, that was hysterical! What a visual!!
I'm still giggling. I think my giggle box is turned over. Ugh!!
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Edward Masen was brought up in a world where responsibility to your family and class was everything. Tired of the endless pursuits of women he becomes more and more jaded. That is until, he meets his match…..
Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 30 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 113881 Read Count: 18955
Date: 05 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 15: 15. Captivated
I apologize for not reviewing before now. I've really enjoyed reading this story from "Mr. Darcy's" POV (per se). I love this book and movie and have enjoyed his POV immensely!!
You've done a great job and I will continue reading. I also appreciate the little tidbits of "desire" (kissing and whatnot) into it. I'm a smut queen...nough said.
Have a great Sunday!
Date: 07 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 30: Chapter 30
WONDERFUL story!!!!
I sooo appreciated it, especially the chapters from the wedding to the end.
You've done a fantastic job!
In a world dominated by vampires, humans are forced to donate blood and abide by the strict rules of the vampire government. Bella has never experienced life in an all-human world and one day the only life she knows shatters to pieces when her parents are killed by a vampire. She is adopted by her parents' friends, who happen to be vampires. Her life turns upside down as she moves to an all-vampire town. Will she have the strength to go on after all that she has endured? Will one special vampire heal her wounds as she struggles to live a life amongst vampires? Edward and Bella pairing, AU, OOC
Warning: This story contains explicit adult content, language, violence, vampire marking and bloodplay.
I want to thank Dazzled~by~Jake for this awesome banner! And my awesome Beta Lindz! xo
Categories: Twilight, Alternate Universe
Characters: None
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Love to drive's Stories to read
Chapters: 27 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 384211 Read Count: 238931
Date: 09 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5
WOW!! This story is amazing in a crazy way. It's a good thing. What an imagination you have!! It's wonderful!
I'm sooo thrilled that Edward heard Tanya. Bitch!! I hope they keep a close eye on things.
We are moving along really well. Can't wait to keep reading!!
Author's Response:
Wow! Thank you so much! I'm happy that you are liking it so far =) I hope you continue to like it.
Thank you for giving this story a chance. I appreciate it.
~Jells
Date: 09 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7
Why are you hiding? This was a great chapter! You are doing a great job! I love a possessive, loving Edward. Sexy mofo.
I feel sorry for Emmett having to carve "Rosalie" across his chest. That's a long ass name. Unless he carved Rose. Just a thought.
Off to the next chapter!
Author's Response:
LOL. I always tend ot get nervous when posting new chapters. Thank you so much. =) Glad you enjoyed it. *giggles* @ sexy mofo. Thanks, I'm happy you like him.
Yup, Emmett carved Rosalie. Poor guy. lol
Thanks again,
~Jells
Date: 09 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8
Okay, maybe it'll be mentioned in the future, but why hasn't anything been mentioned about turning Bella? Just curious.
Author's Response:
Hi!
Aro forbids the turning of the humans. It's against law. In chapter 12, I believe, you'll find out why it's forbidden. But everyone is adamant, they all want Bella to be changed into a hybrid =)
Thanks for reading =)
~Jells
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4yrs After leaving Forks Bella is ready to face the past. Faithful to her true love she sacrificed her happiness for his future. Now she s returning to Seatle in hopes to soon practice law. He`s moved on sort of, but can Edward forgive Bella´ s secret or is it to late for their ´Happily Ever After´ rated for languge and very lemony lemons!!!!
Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Romance
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Drive's Stories to read that are Completed and Not completed
Chapters: 7 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 44252 Read Count: 6166
Date: 08 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4: Confessions of a Not so Teenaged... Not so Drama´d Queen
This story is cracking me up. The whole Carlisle catching Edward at the breakfast table and what he said had me rolling.
This story has an upbeat attitude and dealing with the "theme" of it I do hope it stays that way, for the most part.
I hope you believe in HEAs b/c I know it's not all going to be fun times.
I haven't gotten to the last updated chapter. yet, but I did notice it's been almost two months since you updated this story. Not to put you on a guilt trip but I do hope you update soon. I know real life gets in the way and that has to come first but it's soo hard to wait sometimes, ya know?
Anyway, I'm sure I will be reviewing more and on the last updated chapter. Hope you are having a great day.
Dr. Edward Anthony Masen Cullen is a world renowned pediatric neurologist, he´s also a very sought after Dominant living in the Seattle area. What happens when the thrill of the playroom is no longer enough? What happens when he wants more than just a Friday through Sunday arrangement... Bella Swan a very young and very successful Corporate Attorney, who happens to be secretly crushing on her best friends older brother. It all starts with a dream, but after a very short, but failed marriage, Bella decides it´s time to give in to her submissive nature. With the help of her best friend and a blind date, can Bella finally find all the things her live is missing. ExB Rated for BDSM themes and lemony goodness.
A very big thank you to the wonderful Kris Mkystich for my new banner! Isn´t it sexy!!! Check her out in the December Drabble Wars!! http://www.fanfiction.net/s/8769101/3/School-Of-Mischief
Winner of a Tomato Soup Award!
Nomimated for two Wordsmith Awards!
Voted Must Read Monday by Twi Girls Next Door
Winner of two Wordsmith Awards!
Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Erotica, Romance
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Domward's Dungeon, Bdsm stories only, Twilight - Read, Drive's Stories to read that are Completed and Not completed, Can't wait for an update, Stories I've Already read, My Favorite Stories, Misstoria's Stories to Read, J's Read and Loved Stories, Fav BDSM Fics
Chapters: 31 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 312058 Read Count: 389611
Date: 19 Sep 2011 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 19: Real Life... Outside of the Bubble... pt.1
Awesomeness!! Loved the naughty pics and videos on your blog!! Soo fucking hot!!
Tanya, that bitch!! I hate her (and not just in the is story)!!
Can't wait for the next chappie!!
Date: 09 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 1: PROLOGUE: BLIND DATING
Fucking WOW!!
I've been reading on my phone this afternoon and haven't been able to review until now. I'm on Chapter 3, now.
This story ROCKS!!! I just got finished reading your other story TOHTMMW. It rocks, too!! I love your sense of humor!! It's greatness!!
It is going to eat me alive to wait until you get us up to the Prologue, in both stories. I CAN'T WAIT!!! You are a tease of a writer. That's not a bad thing, though. You're good, girl, keep going!!
Author's Response:
Thanks, I´m glad you´re enjoying it so far! Thanks for taking the time to review!
Krazi
xoxo
Date: 09 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 2: PAGING DR. CULLEN
I HATE fucking Tanya with a purple passion. Am I telling my age there?
I HATE her in every story. I actually found a story once where she was a horse. It was hysterical. I also read a story where she was a nice aunt of Edwards. Weird. I love the diversity, tough. I just roll my eyes when she shows up in a story. It's to be expected. I'm use to it by now.
Can't wait to keep reading. Gotta run.
Author's Response:
Ha ha! A horse, you must let me know the name of that story! Yeah, Tanya and Jacob are two characters that I very seldom love in stories, but I must say,¨Ms. Tanya does make the perfect villian!¨ Thanks for reading and taking the time to review!
Krazi
xoxo
Date: 10 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 5: Revelations... What´s Done In the Dark...
Still loving this story BUT I do have to say that it is wearing on me that you're only updating every two weeks. Ugh!! I'm not trying to be a bitch, I just love this story soo much I want it to "move along" and at this rate it'll be next year (literally) before we can get these two together.
I know real life comes first and I will try my best to be patient.
I think you are wonderful, humorous and talented writer. I will stick with you no matter how long it takes.
Author's Response:
Thanks for reading and taking the time to review!! Laterzzz:) Krazi xoxo
Date: 15 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 6: Propositions, Female Dommes, & Cell Phones...
OMG!! That rocked!! Thank you, honey, for moving us right along here. That's awesome!! GREAT, long ass chapter! Wonderful!!
Maybe by Jan 1st, we'll be back to the Prologue and "the scene" in question? That would be great! No pressure!!
I'm sorry, we (your readers) are slave drivers. I just love this story soo much. It's very intriguing! Can't wait to get my BFF to read it.
Thanks for posting early, too.
Now all we've got to do is get through this phone call, Charlie's visit and back to the Prologue. Right?
I love all the pics, btw.
I can't fucking wait until Edward and Bella realize that "Sir" and "Pet" are each other!! That will be fucking epic and I can't imagine the fireworks that will occur. Yippee!!
I think it is fucking insane that you live in Spain and I live in Texas. I don't know why that blows my mind soo much, but it does. It's cool.
Outtake on Jasper and Alice would be great as well as a Mojo POV. Too cute!! Have a great Christmas season!
Author's Response:
Ha ha! You crack me the hell up! Don´t get too insane with my location, because after three years of the spanish life, I´m calling it quits. As of 9pm tomorrow night, I´ll be a California girl. My mom lives in Lousiana, so I´ll leave her there down south to keep you company! Lol! I´m glad your liking the story, and I´m really hoping that tomorrow during my long ass flight; I can give you guys a little Christmas cheer. Don´t bet the ranch on it just yet, but you guys inspire me to keep the story going! Thanks for all the encouragement! You guys are slave drivers, but in the best possible way. I can truly say, that I´ve only recieved love and the utmost respect as far as all my reviews go, so moving it along is the least I can do, when you take the time to leave great personal reviews like this! Thanks for reading, reviewing, and keeping me on my toes! Mojo sends his love and a fist bump!
Laterzzz:)
Krazi & Mojo (my tiny partner in crime)
xoxo
Date: 02 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 7: How the Douche Stole Christmas...
Great chapter but yes, I'm disappointed. I'm just super anxious to get on with the Edward part of the story. Maybe next time.
Hope you have had a great holidays and can't wait for the next chapter in two weeks.
I truly enjoyed this chapter. Seth is precious!
Author's Response:
Sorry! I hope this makes up for your disappointment! Lol! You guys are so great! I thank you enough for reading and reviewing! The response to this chapter is absolutely overwhelming! For being so great check out the blog for a teaser of the upcoming chapter! Enjoy and as always, let me know what you guys think! www.fortheloveofdomination.blogspot.com Laterzzz:) ~Krazi & Mojo~ xoxo
Date: 17 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 8: Twas A Night With Sir... And All Through the House...
I wasn't sure what to think of the last two to three sentences of the chapter. BUT it's Rosalie he called....isn't it? That could have been taken a couple of different ways BUT I choose to believe it's Rose and not some tramp. Does that even make sense?
This was a fantastic chapter!! They are sooo fucking hot together (fanning myself)!! GEEZ!
I'm DIEING to get to the club scene at the prologue. Hurry, hurry, hurry, please. Sorry, I'm just whining. Dieing for them to figure out who the "each other" is. Make sense? AND, of course, the fuckhot sex that's gonna happen.
Author's Response:
Sorry for the late response to reviews, but I figured everyone would rather have a new chapter instead. Lol! Well how about both, along with a teaser from chapter 10! Squeee! So here´s to TGIF! Don´t forget to checkout the blog for updates, pictease, and chapter teasers! Thanks for reading, reviewing and being the best readers an author could ask for!
Laterzzzz:)
Krazi and Mojo
xoxo
www.fortheloveofdomination.blogspot.com
Date: 30 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter: 9 And So It Begins...
WOW, fucking WOW!! What a great chapter....and guess what.....next chappie will be back to the Prologue, no? I sinerely hope so. Can't wait, can't wait, can't wait!! I want that test scene and Edward and Bella to realize who each other is. Like yesterday! God, that's gonna be epic and amazing!
Poor little Mojo. Nasty Emmett. Just kidding, that is a little twisted but I love me some Emmett. He's my boy!
Have a great next two weeks and until next time.....
Author's Response:
Happy Super Bowl Sunday! I hope your favorite team wins! Thanks for reading and reviewing! Check out the blog for chapter 9 & 10 PicTease! www.fortheloveofdomination.blogspot.com Laterzzz:) ~Krazi & Mojo~ xoxo
Date: 04 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 13: The fall of the Cullen Empire pt. 2... The Aftermath....
FAN-FUCKING-TASTIC!! Holy shit!! I tell you just about everytime, I think, but I fucking ADORE this story.
Yippee!! I'm soo thrilled how this chapter turned out.
Can't wait to see what happens next.
Have a great weekend!!!!
P.S. Thank you for being soo consistent on updates. I sooo look forward to them.
Date: 07 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 10: It´s Playtime...
Holy shit!!! OMG that was awesome!! Thank you, thank you!! Finally! I'm thrilled how the chapter turned out. It's only going to get even better from here on out.
The only thing I can't wait for is for them to find out who each other are and to just blossom from there. I'm sure there will be tough times along the way after they find out who they are but.....I just can't wait.
I also can't wait for Edward to find out about Jake and then Bella still being a virgin. Geez, that's gonna be priceless.
I just adore this story and am always chomping at the bit for more. Please don't ever worry about responding to my reviews. I'd rather you write.
Great job and have a great week!!
P.S. I wish there was a higher rating than a 10 b/c every chapter would get higher than a 10. Love to you!!
Date: 14 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 11: Guess Who´s Coming to Dinner... the Morning After...
Are you fucking serious? If you fucking quit now, I will hunt your ass down, seriously!!!!!
This was fucking incredible!!!!! I'm soo thrilled you gave us "the meet". I was afraid you would leave us with another cliffe and make me wait for them to see each other and figure it out until the next chapter. I'm sooo relieved.
You did leave us with a small cliffe and I swear if you stop this story now, I WILL go postal!! I adore this story! It's one of my favorites!! It's creative and sensual and just the right amout of intrigue, angst and a fan-fucking-tastic story line.
I'm foaming at the mouth for the next chappie. Hurry up!! I'm not usually soo bossy but damn. We are right here at the penical before they can explore each other and have what they both soo desparately want and need...a lover and a BDSM relationship. I want to see them grow together and experience each other. Ppppllleeeaasseee!!!!! Plus I can't wait for Edward to hear about Jacob and find out that Bella is still a virgin. That is going to be epic!!!
Promise me you won't end the story here? I sincerely hope you were teasing.
Happy Valentine's Day. This was the best gift EVER! Thank you! Have a great week!!
Date: 24 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 12: The fall of the Cullen Empire...
Okay, since I read this last night A LOT of the pics in this chap that were showing last night aren't this morning. It's says "forbidden" where the pic is suppose to be. Just a heads up. BTW....fuckhot pics! Holy shit!! Loved them!
WOW!! Fantastic chapter and OMG, the cliffie????? Holy shit!! I want to be angry with you for leaving the chapter where you did, but I can't be mad. You've been sooo nice to us in the past and not left us with many cliffies so I can't complain.
BUT, I am going to be chomping at the bit for the next chapter. Poor Edward, his emotions are being pulled all over the place, well and the same goes for Bella, too. I was a little surprised there wasn't more of an actual conversation/explanation between Bella and Edward. But, I'm sure they will get it all covered eventually.
Love you, girl!!! Can't help but adore this story!! Can't wait till next time!!
Date: 27 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 14: The Start of Something Beautiful... Confessions, Forgiveness, and Love...ions of Lov, Forgiveness, and
YUM, YUM, YUMMY!! What a fan-fucking-tastic chapter!! Way to go!! It was perfect and Edward needs to calm down. I'd be surprised if Bella is anything but estatic about his confession at the end of the chapter. She loves him just as much!!
I sooo enjoyed this long ass chapter. Can't wait for the next. Sucked that some of the pics didn't come through, b/c your pics are fuck hawt and I love them!! That's okay though. I got what I wanted out of this chapter.
Have a great week, honey!! You deserve it!!
Author's Response:
I fixed the little picture problem and added a few more, if you´d like to take another peek! Lol! Thanks for reviewing! Be sure to check out the blog there's a teaser up of the next chapter! Krazi xoxo http://fortheloveofdomination.blogspot.com
Date: 15 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 15: A Work in Progress... Finding a Balance...
Absolutely beautiful! Long chapter, too! Love, love, loved it!! Your chapters are soo worth the wait!!!
I can't say one thing negative about this chapter. It was beautiful and you should be sooo proud!!!
Date: 12 May 2011 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 16: Bestfriends... Girlie Cars... and Roadside Service...
Fucking loved it!!! Poor Edward!!
Loved all the pics!!
Mojo and Edward are priceless!!
Thanks for the super long chappie!! Makes it soo worth the wait!!
Date: 19 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 18: Truth... Lies... and Black Eyes...
Fantastic chapter!! Bella is going to get her ass beat for talking to Edward that way!! Enjoyed it. Hope it's not another month and half or so before another update.
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When Bella was three, she was found abandonned outside of a hospital in LA. She was placed with Carlisle, Esme, and their twin boys, Emmett and Jasper. What happens when they move to Forks? NC-17&AH Cannon pairing.
Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories, I Whitlock's read , Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiHu, Stories I've Already read, My Favorite Stories, My favs past present and future , to read
Chapters: 60 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 186533 Read Count: 268908
Date: 29 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3
OMGosh!!! Coach Swan, Garrett and Angela are Bella's family aren't they? Holy shit!! Can't wait to see if I'm right. Might have to cheat and take a peek. ;) Great story!!
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Edward Cullen was in a marriage that was doomed from the start. Having been overseas when his wife left him, he's now coming home to Washington newly single and ready to reclaim his life.
Bella Swan was married right out of college only to find out that he was a cheater, a liar and an abuser. After escaping the marriage, she's moved back to Washington to the safety of family and new friends.
Will sparks fly when she moves across the hall from a mysteriously handsome and newly single neighbor?
*Rated for strong language and lemons* Banner made by: Kiwibeme
Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Romance
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Drive's Stories to read that are Completed and Not completed, Amberina's Completed Favs List, G8or Favor8s Read, Kuu Faves, Stories Read by CNYBella, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, luv2write finished reads, Read & Enjoyed
Chapters: 24 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 74537 Read Count: 94835
Date: 26 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1-Prologue
I'm intrigued and can't wait to keep reading!
Author's Response:
Great!! Glad you like it! Thanks for reading and reviewing!
Date: 26 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2
Okay, I usually don't like to ramble so I sometimes just give # ratings BUT this site won't let you do that w/o leaving a review.
Soo, I just wanted to say that so far this is "just the right amount" of angst and "just the right amount" of yummy. I'm impressed.
Hope you have had a great Thanksgiving day! I'm sitting here reading your story, drinking wine and watching the "Boys". Go Cowboys!! Don't hate me b/c I'm Texan!
Gotta go. Gotta keep reading.
Author's Response:
I'm happy you think so, that's what I was going for. Happy Thaksgiving to you as well!
Date: 26 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3
Aaaaawweeesssooommmeee!!
It doesn't usually take me this long to read a chapter BUT I do have a family (two girls and a husband) to take care of and they interfere w/my reading every now and then.
Author's Response:
Thank you! Hope you keep reading and enjoying my story.
Date: 28 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11
Awesome!! I love this story! You are doing a great job! I hope you get more readers and reviews. It deserves it!
Author's Response:
Thank you! This is my first story, so knowing that you think it's good is very gratifying! Thank you so much!
Date: 28 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13
Yummy!!
Author's Response:
Thanks! :)
Date: 01 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15
You did GREAT on the lemons! Way to go, girl! I LLLOOOVVEEE the dirty talk, ugh!! That's just FUCKHOT!! That's my new word, fuckhot (giggle).
Thanks for updating these two chapters at the same time. I would have been super disappointed if you had left it at Chapter 14 w/o the lemon.
Can't wait for more! You're doing great!!
Author's Response:
Thanks sooo much! Yeah, ya'll would've hunted me down if I only put up ch 14! Thank you for R/R! Awesome. Look for more Thursday or Friday, then again on Tuesday.
Date: 04 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16
Great!! I loved it!! You done good.
Author's Response:
Thank you, thank you very much!
Date: 07 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18
WOW!! All I have to say is I'm SUPER glad you posted the next chapter. Yippee!!
Author's Response:
Thanks! Glad you liked it. Thanks for R & R.
Date: 07 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19
GREATNESS!!! Thank you for udpating two chapters at a time. You've done that a couple of times now and I truly appreciate it!
Author's Response:
Wow! Thanks. Have I mentioned that I'm impatient? That makes me believe everyone else is, too. Truthfully, though, most of this story is already done. Thank you for your support and reviews.
Date: 10 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20
LOVED IT!! And thanks for the lemon! YUM!
Author's Response:
Thanks! Glad you liked the citrus. :)
Date: 10 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21
Oh, GEEZ!! I hope we don't have to wait too long.
Author's Response:
Yeah. Sorry. Next week! Thank you for R&R!
Date: 21 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24
Fantastic story!!
Author's Response:
I'm glad you liked it! Thanks for all the support! :)
This story picks up a year after Edward and Bella were married. He changed her on their honeymoon and there was no baby or confrontation with the Volturi. Bella realizes as they return from a trip to celebrate their first anniversary that the Cullens have been keeping a secret from her. Now, they want her to join in on the fun.
This story contains slash, fem-slash, polyamorous groupings…ah hell. It is a damned sexual buffet. If you are not into that sort of thing or if you are under 18, then just move along little ones. This story is NOT for you.
Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Erotica, One-Shot, Slash
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 11296 Read Count: 13861
Date: 23 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1- A Family Affair
This was crazy hot!! I loved it!!
I especially loved Bella and Emmett. I'm a "Edward girl" first and foremost....all the way. BUT, I adore Emmett just as much and I'm a sucker for a "well-built" man. His personality just makes his whole package perfect. Don'tcha think?
You did great! Happy Thanksgiving!
Author's Response:
There is something absolutely appealing about Emmett, I totally agree (personally I am a Edward and Carlisle fan...mmmmm, father and son combo with me as the go between. Oh sorry, got distracted). I had so much fun writing this and am glad you liked it. Thank you so much for the rating and reveiw!
Happy Thanksgiving to you too!!!
Nickey
Bella's life was irrevocably changed by the vampires who left her behind. Alone in the world now, she finds herself drawn to another. Fighting for her life has changed her and now, the new family she has found will change her as well...
Categories: Non-Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Peter
Genre: Drama, Romance
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories, Themslovebug90's read stories, My favs past present and future
Chapters: 33 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 125187 Read Count: 71713
Date: 19 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21
Great chapter!! Uh, oh......Alice has no idea what she's heading into. Should be interesting! Can't wait!
Date: 11 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17
Okay, love you, AWESOME chapter, but I want more!
My apologies for being soo greedy. It's my dreaded 40th birthday and all my friends that are turning 40 too left for Vegas today w/o me. Plus, today is the anniversary of my father's death. Sooo, I'm bumming. Poor me. I know, what a fucking pity party am I on.
Just kidding about wanting more. I mean, I do, but whenever another update is ready. I'm not trying to be pushy. I'm just in a weird mood.
Have a great rest of the week!!
Date: 02 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16
OMGosh, yes it is a much shorter chapter than I am use to you writing, but wonderful all the same.
Can't wait for the next chappie!!
Date: 25 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15
So how was the snow storm? I live in the DFW area of Texas and the first two weeks of this month we got hit with snow and ice. Don't even mention the Super Bowl to me. Sensitive subject. Fuckers like to diss us b/c of the likes of an ice storm we haven't had in approx 20 years. Geez, everywhere else gets snow but we get ice. I'd like to see those assholes come down here and drive on 2 inches of ice. Should I tell you how I really feel (smirk)? Seriously, hope things aren't too serious for you.
Okay, down to business. When's the next update? I'm chompin at the bit. This could go down one of 3 ways as I see it. #1) It's Victoria or some of her minions. #2) Curious vampires. #3) The Cullens. I'm dieing here. I've been trying to read your a/n's to see if you're just updating when you can or if it's once a week or a month or what.
God, I'd would have never thought I'd get into a Bella/? story. But this is wonderful. I'm trying to get my best friend to read it.
Hope you have a safe and wonderful weekend. Until next time.....hopefully very soon.
Author's Response:
Snow is good- electricity stayed on and thats all I really cared about. I've got about 6 inches on the back deck right now, and more still coming down. I think I'd have to take a pass on driving through the ice like that. No thanks.
You'll have to wait and see what happens. I can't give anything away just yet. Hopefully you'll like it though...
I'm glad you gave Bella a shot with another character outside of Edward. Don't get me wrong, the original is awesome and there are so many great stories out there, but changing up the pairing gives you a whole new world of stories. Peter gives the writer so much freedom to create a new character who isn't really stereotyped into acting a certain way. There are some amazing Peter, Jasper, Emmett and even Carlisle fics out there. And don't be scared of the wold boys either. I've read some incredible Paul and Sam fics as well.
Happy reading!
Date: 25 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13
Holy shit!! That was uber yummy!!!
Date: 25 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12
Wonderful!!
I do feel for Jasper. What can I say, I love the Cullens. I truly believe that all of them, including Edward thought Bella was his mate. It's hard for me to wrap my mind around that he's not. Not even including that he knowningly lied about it. I just don't see it.
Date: 25 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7
Wonderful!
Also, just so you know what really intrigued me to read this story? Your Banner. The actors you picked for your characters are gorgeous!! Love it!!
Date: 25 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2
Well, I'm about to start chapter 8 but I wanted to come back through before I got too far ahead and review every chapter. So from chapter 3 through chapter 7 I will just give you a one word review w/a # rating.
I'm a solid, HUGE Bella/Edward girl. To the core. I've read upteen stories in the last 2 years of reading this webiste and Twilighted and FF and this is my first Bella/someone else other than Edward story.
I'm loving it. It hurts my heart but it's a great alternative story line to what might have happened if Edward never came back. Fantastic story line!!
Hasn't gone un-noticed the Peter/Jasper part of the story that is being brought forth. Very creative and which means maybe in the future Bella and Alice with be brought back together at some point.
It does break my heart totally to think of what Edward is going to go through when he finds out. Sorry, even though he might have been a coward for not changing Bella and leaving her for her own good, you could tell where his heart was and what heartbreak he went through even w/o SM version of Midnight Sun.
I love your Bella. I love how she caught Garrett off guard in the beginning at the bar. That was greatness!! The whole thing has been. It's very intriguing and I hope you get lots of readers and reviews.
I'll be reviewing more.
Date: 24 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1
Thoroughly intrigued. Can't wait to read more.
Date: 19 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18
WOW!! That was wonderful!! Hot and sexy as hell!!
Date: 01 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19
Yes, I've read that story and no I didn't catch the reference, dammit!! It is a shame it has been abandoned. My BFF and I both have read it and discussed it.
I personally hate it when authors do that shit. I know it's their story and all but they have people who are supporting them and their story and to just abandon it w/o letting people know what their plans are or that the story is on hiatus, is unprofessional, in my opinion. Not that this is a "professional" situation but hopefully you understand what I'm saying.
This was, once again, a great chapter!! Good job!! Have a great weekend! Gotta to get my kidos up for school.
Date: 08 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20
WOW!!!! Even though that was a little hard to read, Bella has every right to get the revenge she soo deserves.
GREAT chapter!!
Date: 30 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22
WOW!! I just adore this story but it's sooo not what I'm use to. To be honest, I'm surprised I'm even reading it b/c I am such a "Edward girl".
But, I am soo intrigued with this story. It's truly awesome!!
Although, I do still feel bad for Edward. Sorry. He's my boy.
Can't wait for more! Have a great weekend!
Date: 01 Jun 2011 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24
Awww!! Can't wait to read about that reunion!!
Life in Spoons Valley continues as a new generation deals with changes in their small western town. Dr. Edward Cullen, returning after years of absence while attending medical school, believes that life back in his hometown will be boring after life in the city. Little does he know that even though the way of things in the west are slow to change, some things remain exciting, wild, and untamed.
This story is a continuation of my other story Lonesome Hearts. Please read that story first.
Categories: Twilight, All Human
Characters: None
Genre: Action, Drama, Historical, Humor, Romance
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: LeslieWhitlock's faves - not updated in 2012, Drive's Stories to read that are Completed and Not completed, My Favorite Stories, My favs past present and future
Chapters: 10 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 12783 Read Count: 9739
Date: 16 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3
Thank you for the chart! It helped immensley(sp).
Date: 21 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8
I'm sorry you're having a hard time with this story. I do hope you keep it up. I just want to encourage you. Take care.
Bella Swan is looking forward to going to college, when she is raped and left for dead. She is sent away when her parents find out about her pregnancy. She meets Dr. Edward Cullen who has come to help his mother. Can Love truly Heal? Human/rape/language
Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02 Current Reads, Themslovebug90's read stories, Amberina's Completed Favs List, Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiHu, luv2write finished reads
Chapters: 22 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 61003 Read Count: 59003
Date: 17 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19 Stupid Boy
Great chapter!! Shorter than usual but great!!! Can't wait for more!
Author's Response:
it was suppose to be with 18, i know so so short thankyou for reading and reviewing
Date: 11 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11 Karma's present
WOW!! GREAT chapter!! Can't wait for more!
Author's Response:
Thankyou so much
Date: 18 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12 skeleton's in the box
Great chapter!!
Breaks my heart for Edward and Bella. I understand but it still hurts.
James' dad killed him, didn't he?
Can't wait for more!
Author's Response:
yes, it looks like Mr. Newton did off his son... thankyou for your review
Date: 14 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16 Bad Company
Okay, I want to kill Renee & Michelle myself. I hope they have their asses handed to them by the judge. Edward and Bella and Charlie don't deserve any of this shit. They need an attorney with them.
Great chapter! Until next time!
Author's Response:
Jane came with them, she just hadnt showed up yet,...:)
Date: 01 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13 The ties that bind
OMGosh!! I want Edward and Bella together!! I'm soo thrilled that Edward wants the baby but I know he wants Bella, too. A Grandma Esme would be nothing but awesome!!
Yes, this chapter was unusually short but I understand and wish you luck in your move.
I sincerely hope Bella can't walk away. Even to go to college. There has to be another way. She could take classes online and go to the college for exams? I don't know....just something.
I want Bella and Edward inlove, like I know they are and to show it.
Have a great week!!
Author's Response:
Thankyou so much... the holidays are magic for some*wink wink*...lol
Date: 03 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15 Thankful Blessings
Great chapter!!! Can't wait for the next one!
I have had two pregnancies and both were like night and day. I didn't sleep through my watering breaking. I've never really heard of that. I did go through 10cm of labor at home, w/o realizing it and my baby was born within 10 mins of getting to the hospital. It was a close one. I had been at the hospital earlier that day and the dr sent me home. I just thought I was being a pussy and wouldn't give in to going back to the hospital until it was almost too late. My water broke within 5 mins of my daughter being born. It was crazy.
Have a great rest of the week and a great weekend!
Author's Response:
My son's water didnt break till he was born and then he came out with his hand on his head.. My last was the worse i thought my spine would split in two. i know know what back labor feels like. thankyou for your reciew i always enjoy hearing everyones stories
Date: 27 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17 Strength
GREAT chapter!! I'm soo glad Renee and Michelle got their asses handed to them by the judge. WHEW!!!!
Until next time.....
Author's Response:
They needed a period of happiness for a while:) thankyou so much for your review
Date: 29 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20 Life's Little Blessings
Well, Thank God for small favors. (wink)
Send my Thanks along to Ivtwilight09 for the birth and no cliffie.
Loved it! Great chapter! Can't wait to see what happens from here.
When single Mom, Bella, opted to drive her children to Colorado for their visitation with their father, she never dreamed she would find something unexpected while stranded in a winter storm. Can Edward heal Bella’s wounds and restore her faith in men, love, and herself?
Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Romance
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Amberina's Completed Favs List, Completed Stories, Stories I've Already read, Edwards Paradox Completed Favourites
Chapters: 10 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 44043 Read Count: 29843
Date: 20 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3
More, more, more!!!!! Please.
Date: 24 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6
GREATNESS!!
This sucks b/c I leave on Sunday to go out of town for 4 days and sometimes I get service on my phone and sometimes I don't so who knows if I'll get to read while I'm gone. UGH!!
If I do get to read, I can't review. I don't have an IPhone, yet. So, I'll review when I get back on Thursday or Friday.
Have a very Merry Christmas!
Date: 31 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10
LOVED it!! I was hoping this epi was a baby being born. Thank you!! It's been a pleasure.
Have a great New Year!!
What if Edward did not take the dramatic route and wait till noon to step into the sun in Volterra? What if Alice and Bella were incapable of getting to him in time? What if he was not the only casualty of bad timing and misread visions?
This story takes us down an alternate path than what we followed in New Moon. The Cullen’s are no longer whole and Bella is so badly damaged that she may be unreachable as she closes herself off to the pain of the outside world.
Can a new love save her? Can his voice pull her from the darkness?
This story is rated NC-17 for major angst, suicide and the possibility of far off lemons (who am I kidding? If you have read any of my stories, you know there will be lemons…but not for a while).
The top banner and this lovely blinkie is brought to you by my banner goddess, MissKingAtYourService. Check out her blog at misskingatyourservice.blogspot.com/.
Categories: Twilight, Non-Canon Pairings, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Carlisle
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories
Chapters: 28 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 140978 Read Count: 74032
Date: 15 Jun 2011 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7- Songs of the Heart
I have to say I am an Edward girl to the "tenth degree". I have stayed far away from these type of stories b/c they fucking kill me. I mean like...for days....kill me. Yeah, I know, get a life.
Well, I thought I'd read the first chappie of this story...yeah, well, I've read the first 7 chapters in a real short amount of time. Yes, it's that good and I do admit to "skimming" the chapters b/c it would make me bawl like a baby to really get into it. Forgive me. I'm going through a lot in my life right now and can't afford to start "the tears"...it would wind up a bad thing, if you know what I mean. Once the tears get started...sometimes they don't stop. Ya know?
There is another story that is similar to this one but only in the way of Edward never coming back and Bella finding her "true" mate in Peter. It's Crimson Change by Rubicon_Queen here on TWCS. It is truly a great story and if you haven't read it.....you need to. Very intriguing....as is this story.
It's hard to imagine or read of Bella "with someone else" other than Edward BUT I am really enjoying this story. I'll be in touch.
Author's Response:
Thank you so much for the rating and review. If you need to get a life, then mine must be lost in the mail or on back order. Please girlfriend, I freakin write fan fiction because I have read the Twilight books an embarressing number of times and after reading way too much Twi-porn, decided to have a go at it. ;)
I'm sorry if my story brings on the tears, but I hope you find some smiles in it along the way. :)
I happen to love Crimsom Change and even rec'd her after one of my past chapters. I too started out as a die-hard E&B fanatic, but decided to branch out a bit when this idea struck me. If you would like to check out my other stuff, Use Somebody is a full-on E&B (all human) story.
Thanks again for taking the time to share your thoughts on the story. I hope you will stick with me as the story goes on.
Till next time
Nickey
Date: 16 Jun 2011 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8- Final Goodbyes and Reunions
No, not heartless...But I did hold the tears back. The "whole being with Edward in the meadow" the last few chapters and this one was especially hard. It broke my heart, actually. I always knew the love Bella and Edward had for each other. It was absolute magic!! You wrote it soo beautifully and ended it with Edward's parents and Esme and her baby. Absolutely beautiful. I hope Bella is able to tell the rest of them about it. We'll see.
Author's Response:
I'm glad you liked this. I re-wrote it three times before I was happy enough with the final results to post it.
Thanks for the rating and review.
Till next time
Nickey
Date: 16 Jun 2011 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9- Picking Up The Pieces
Wow!! Fucking Wow!! The whole Emmett in a rainbow colored poncho and mathching sombero w/"danglys". Too freaking cute and just "sooo Emmett". Perfect!!! I giggled my hiney off when I read that. I can just see Emmett bursting into the room in that get up. Too cute!!
Also, soo glad she told Carlisle about Edward's statement about how he was right in them retaining their souls. Wonderful!!
Author's Response:
I love to write Emmett. He is such a fun character that doesn't get nearly enough face time in the movies.
Thanks for the rating and review. And if you are so inclined, A Voice in the Darkness has made it to the 2nd round of voting for the Avant Garde Awards, you can vote at this link.
Best Makes Me Cry/Saddest FanFiction
Best Non-Graphic Lemon
Best Alice
Best Rosalie
Best Carlisle
Thanks again,
Nickey
Date: 20 Jun 2011 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18- A Christmas Wish
OMGosh!! How creative you are!! What a wonderful idea of the gifts Bella gave everyone for Christmas!! Too cute! Loved it!!
Author's Response:
Thank you so much for the rating and review! I'm glad you liked the gifts. That was actually the hardest part of the chapter for me to write.
Till next time
Nickey
Date: 05 Jul 2011 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22- A Change of Plans
WOW!! OMGosh!! I teared up big time in the beginning of this story when Bella was with Edward in the meadow when Bella was catatonic. That broke my heart when he said goodbye to her there. I'm an "Edward girl"...all the way. I was telling my bff about this story and she's like, "God, how can you read that!" She is saying that to me when she is the one that has a God awful thing for twisted stories. Geez!
But, for Edward to turn around and walk away from Bella this time, I was disappointed and hurt. I understand but it still hurt. I've enjoyed the lovestory between Carlisle and Bella but Edward is my #1.
This is a fantastic story and I can't believe I've had the heart to read it. I've really enjoyed it!!
Author's Response:
Ahhh, thanks so much for taking a chance on a C&B pairing. I am also an Edward girl to the core, but sometimes my mind can't help but wander. Thanks for the rating and review. My next chapter should be up later today.
Till then
Nickey
Sookie wants to add some excitement to her relationship with Eric, so she suggests a game of roleplay, using a certain vampire and Slayer as inspiration.
Categories: Southern Vampire Mysteries/True Blood, Alternate Universe
Characters: Eric/Sookie
Genre: Humor, One-Shot, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 1380 Read Count: 306
Bella, Rosalie, Alice and Esme are BFFs. While they're out camping together, they become the prey of unscrupulous hunters. A tale for adults with highly explicit sexual content. Rated M for all the things you can imagine, and maybe some you can't. Canon pairings.
Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: G8or Favor8s Read
Chapters: 7 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 30882 Read Count: 17464
Date: 26 Jun 2011 Title: Chapter 7: Last chapter
Great story!! Wished it would have last a little while longer. It had the potential. Thank you for writing it.
Author's Response:
After I finished this story (it took me only 16 days to publish all the chapters in French), i started another one and it took me more than a year to complete it. It is called The slave who wouldn't obey and in French it's 27 chapters long. In English it will have over 45 chapters when it's complete. Somehow, I know about long stories, lol.
Thank you for reading and reviewing.
Date: 01 May 2011 Title: Chapter 5: Fifth chapter
Ugh!! Edward is exasperating!! I can't decide about forgiving for what he did to Bella. Usually, I'm not such a hard ass but Geez, that was just soo wrong on soo many levels.
Can't wait till next time. Hope it's not too long.
Author's Response:
I wouldn't go easy on Edward if I were in Bella's shoes, but the girl is kind of blinded by love (or lust). She admitted herself last time that what he did, no matter how humiliating it was, just added fuel to the fire of her desire for him. And she also said that what she felt for him was more than just desire, so she might be very lenient toward him when they have a chance to have a serious talk. Now, I'm supposed to spend the next 3 weeks writing the sequel to this story in French, but I will try my best to also translate the next chapter in English.
Date: 22 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 1: First chapter
WOW!! This is going to be great!!