Reviews by Tamara
Summary: Past Featured Story

Bella gets sent to a school by her boyfriend to help her become the wife he wants. It isn't what Bella expects, at all.

BDSM, Dark story.

 

 

 

 


Categories: Non-Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward, Bella/Alice, Bella/Carlisle, Bella/Emmett, Bella/James, Bella/Jasper, Bella/Jasper/Alice, Bella/Rose, Carlisle/Esme, Carlisle/Other or Original Character, Edward/Bella/OC, Edward/Carlisle (Slash), Edward/Jasper (slash)
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: My To Read List, Ageise02's Read Stories, Finished, I Whitlock's read , My Favorite Stories, To Read
Chapters: 78 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 297603 Read Count: 1514758
[Report This] Published: 22 Jan 2010 Updated: 21 May 2010
Reviewer: Tamara Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 31 Jan 2010 Title: Chapter 68: Chapter 67: Bella DAY 23

Oh your so good at leaving us just hanging!  Love the new chapter - thank you!

Edward's Clan by Greenaway Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 1470]
Summary: Past Featured Story

 

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**WARNING - THIS STORY CONTAINS VIOLENCE, SEXUAL MATERIAL, OFFENSIVE LANGUAGE AND OTHER CONTENT THAT MAY DISTURB SOME PEOPLE. YOU HAVE BEEN WARNED.**

Edward Cullen is the leader of The Clan, a fierce and deadly group of assassins for hire and he knows nothing besides violence and blood. When he meets Bella, he begins to imagine that there might be more for him out there.

A dark journey of love, power and death.


All Human, Cannon Pairings and TEAM EDWARD

Please be warned, this story gets pretty graphic later on.

 

A special thank you to evilangel813 for the awesome banner.


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: To Read (Geddy)
Chapters: 35 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 234131 Read Count: 195559
[Report This] Published: 23 Feb 2010 Updated: 11 Jun 2012
Reviewer: Tamara Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 08 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 6: The Demon Comes Out to Play

WOW!!!

Reviewer: Tamara Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 14 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 8: Fathers and Sons

Great chapter!

Ethics Be Damned by krazyk85 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 489]
Summary: Past Featured Story

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Banner made by xrxdanixrx

Bella Swan is a 28 year old woman who is a narcotics detective for the Seattle Police Department. Bella is assigned to go undercover as a high school student to bring down a massive drug ring fronted by the elusive Drug Lord Aro Volturi. Bella soon finds herself falling for her English teacher Edward Masen...

Edward Masen is instantly attracted to this new student, but can't pursue a relationship with a young girl.

 Will these two keep things in perspective or will their ethics be damned?

Based loosely on 21 Jumpstreet and Never Been Kissed

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's not read yet, Drive's Stories to read that are Completed and Not completed, G8or Favor8s Read
Chapters: 35 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 191208 Read Count: 71569
[Report This] Published: 12 Apr 2010 Updated: 23 Dec 2010
Reviewer: Tamara Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 07 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 28: Chapter 28

My apologies for not reviewing sooner - I just had to keep reading!!!!  Wonderful story - I love it.  Thank you so much and I am looking forward to the next chapter!

Reviewer: Tamara Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 08 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 29: Chapter 29

Awesome chapter!  I'm so glad Charlie know's something is up.  Thank you for the update!

Reviewer: Tamara Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 10 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 30: Chapter 30

FAb chapter!  I'm glad both Aro and Tanya got what they deserved.  Thank you for the chapter!

Reviewer: Tamara Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 07 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 34: Chapter 34

Awww - I love how you ended this story!  What a fun and intense journey we had!!!!  Thank you so very much and I hope you continue to write!



Author's Response: Thank you! It was crazy intense, huh? I will continue to write...I'm too addicted to it. I'll see you on the epi, hun :)

Summary: Past Featured Story

Bella is graduating high school and looking for a Dom.  Edward is the Head Master at her school and he is who she wants.  Problem - he is married, has kids, a friend of Bella's fathers, 35 and oh! he isn't a Dom.  Can she get him? - Maybe!

  My entry for FF's Forbidden Lemon contest.

Banner inside chapter 1 to comply with Google ads requirements.

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Domward's Dungeon, Ageise02's Read Stories, Bdsm stories only, I Whitlock's read , Love to drive's Stories to read set 2, My all time favorites, Amberina's Completed Favs List, My Favorite Stories, To Read , Fav BDSM Fics, My favs past present and future
Chapters: 22 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 210865 Read Count: 123447
[Report This] Published: 25 Apr 2010 Updated: 17 Mar 2011
Reviewer: Tamara Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 07 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 4: The Second Six Months

Love love love this story!!!!  I want Edward as my master :)  Can't wait for the next chapter!

Reviewer: Tamara Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 29 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 6: Christmas Break - The Second Year

Terrific chapter!  Tanya's a real piece of work..and I hope she gets what she deserves.  Thank you!

Reviewer: Tamara Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 23 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 12: Christmas Break The Fourth Year

WOW - LOVE LOVE LOVE this chapter!!!!!  The wedding was perfect and so was the very hot sex on the lamborghini!  Whew!!! Thank you for the update!  If I could give you double the coffee - I would :)



Author's Response:

Thank you and thanks for reading!!

Reviewer: Tamara Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 02 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 13: The Fourth Year The Second Six Months

What a great chapter!  So much going on :)  Edwards mom is a real piece of work but I hope she comes to terms with Bella.

Thank you for the update and can't wait for the next chapter.

Reviewer: Tamara Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 18 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 14: The Fifth Year The First Six Months

What a great chapter!  Thanks so much!!!

For those of us that need it - what does Emily's license plate say?  I can never figure those things out. :)



Author's Response:

Punch Buggy - like the game kids play when they see a VW bug.

 

Thanks for reading!!

Summary: Past Featured Story

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After a terrible shipwreck in the Mediterranean Sea, Isabella Swan, marquise de Courville, her two best friends and her loyal servants are rescued, but only to become slaves and serve the Volturi brothers, three men with very dark desires. All human. Domward.

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Erotica, Historical
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Domward's Dungeon, Finished, My Favorite Stories
Chapters: 45 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 201090 Read Count: 184000
[Report This] Published: 05 May 2010 Updated: 14 Jul 2012
Reviewer: Tamara Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 02 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 14: Second day in Volterra

I just found your story and had to read it from start to finish.  Wonderful story and I can't wait to see what happens next!

Thank you so much :)



Author's Response:

I'm glad you like my story. I like to write it ;-)

Reviewer: Tamara Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 06 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 15: Another kind of punishment

Great chapter!  Even tho I am a huge Jasper fan - I loved it when she smacked him with the branding iron - good for her!

Looking forward to the next update - thank you!

Reviewer: Tamara Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 21 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 16: Emmett Cullen, comte de Morvalle

Loved getting Emmett's POV!

Thanks so much for the update :D



Author's Response:

And I love what Rosalie is going to do to him...

Reviewer: Tamara Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 26 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 17: Rosalie Hale, duchesse d'Essanges

Hehehehehehe - poor Emmett! NOT!  I just love Rosalie - fab chapter!!!!!

Thanks so much!

Reviewer: Tamara Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 05 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 18: Doctor Carlisle Cullen

I absolutely adore Carlisle :)

Thanks so much for the update!!!!

Reviewer: Tamara Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 17 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 19: Third day in Volterra

Oh Fabulous chapter!!!!  I just love my Carlisle :) 

Thanks so much for the update!

Reviewer: Tamara Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 10 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 21: A slave trainer's obligations

NNNNNNNNNNNOOOOOOOOOOO - you can't end it right there!!!!!

Whatever will Edward do with Bella for punishment :)

Thank you so much for the update



Author's Response:

You know what they say, "What doesn't kill you makes you stronger"

I think we'll have a taste of that in the next chapter...

Reviewer: Tamara Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 23 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 23: Caring for Bella

Ummm - really?  Leaving us hanging like this is just cruel and unusual punishment!  :)  What a way to wake up tho - *heavy sigh

 

Thanks so much for the update!



Author's Response:

The wait will be worth it, I promise.

Reviewer: Tamara Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 12 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 24: Between heaven and hell

Oh God your really going to leave us hanging aren't you!  The anticipation is killing me!!!  Hehe

I'm happy that Bella is finally coming around and acknowleding her feelings for Edward.

Thank you so much for the update ~ Happy Holidays and Happy New Year!

Reviewer: Tamara Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 01 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 25: Jasper Whitlock

WOW - disturbing chapter!  Poor Jasper :( Having witnesses those sick f*cks....

Thanks for the update!

Happy New Year!!

Married to the Enemy by Gelix Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 1706]
Summary: Past Featured Story

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After a night of celebration in Vegas, Bella finds herself married to the man who made her life a living hell for seven years. Follow her as she finds true love where she least expected it!

AU/AU OCC. Canon pairing. Rated M for future lemons.

 


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: None
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's not read yet, LeslieWhitlock's completed & recommended read stories, I Whitlock's read , Amberina's Completed Favs List, Kuu Faves, Misstoria's Stories to Read, My favs past present and future , Kit's Must Reads!
Chapters: 50 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 315953 Read Count: 297704
[Report This] Published: 14 May 2010 Updated: 28 Jan 2011
Reviewer: Tamara Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 15 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 23: New Year's Eve

Oh very HOT chapter - love the shower :)

I'm glad Bella is going to seek some help - she really needs to put things to rest in order to move on.

Thank you for the chapter!!!



Author's Response:

Thank you! :)

xx
Gelix

Reviewer: Tamara Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 28 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 19: Thanksgiving

My apologies for not reviewing sooner - once I started reading I just couldn't stop!  What a fun story - thank you!  I'm glad Bella is finally lightening up a bit - boy was she uptight.  :)  I'm looking forward to the next chapter.

Reviewer: Tamara Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 09 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 21: Plans

What the....oh so not nice to leave us hanging right here!!!!!!

Terrific chapter and IMHO - too soon for a little Cullen yet :)

Thank you and I look forward to the next chapter!



Author's Response:

Sorry! But I'll post the chapter in a few hours! :)

Thank you!

xx
Gelix

Reviewer: Tamara Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 12 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 22: Christmas

Ok, I didn't want Bella to be pregnant yet - but that was so emotional between her and Edward...

Wonderful chapter - thank you so much!



Author's Response:

Thank you! :)

xx
Gelix

Reviewer: Tamara Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 18 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 24: The Honeymoon

Oh great chapter!  So either Bella is pregnant or she is really sick with something else...hmmmmmmm  What would Gelix do...  :)

Thank you and I'm looking forward to the next chapter!



Author's Response:

Thank you! :)

And yes, that is a very good question. You'll see what I came up with in the next chapter!

xx
Gelix

Reviewer: Tamara Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 25 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 26: Heartbeats

Awwww - what a happy chapter!  Love it!  And you did really good with the doctors appt.  :)

 

Thank you and looking forward to the next chapter.



Author's Response:

Thank you so much! :)

I was pretty scared that I screwed that one up, since I've never been to one! ^^

xx
Gelix

Reviewer: Tamara Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 01 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 28: Grandparents

I really liked this chapter!  I'm thrilled that everyone is excited and that Bella is eating :)  My thoughts are kind of mixed on telling Renee'...

Thank you for the chapter and looking forward to the next one!



Author's Response:

Thank you! :)

xx
Gelix

Reviewer: Tamara Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 05 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 29: Blossoming Flower

I'm so happy for Rose and Emmett!  What a great chapter and I would love the recipe for the noodles :)

(Love the new banner!)

Thank you for the update!



Author's Response:

Thank you so much! :)

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Okay, so for the macaronis. It's very simple. You take the amount of macaronis that you usuall do and put them (unboiled) in a pot, then you add twice as much milk. Add some salt and then you boil it. But be careful and make sure to stir all the time because it gets easily stuck in the bottom if you dont! You boil it until it gets thick. Here in Sweden we add some ketchup on top, then it's ready to eat!

 

Good luck and if you have any questions feel free to ask! :)

xx
Gelix

Reviewer: Tamara Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 19 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 32: Surprise

Fab chapter!  I remember having nightmares like that when I was pregnant..not fun at all!  I just hope for Bella and Edward they are just dreams and not a premonition!

 

Thanks so much for the update!



Author's Response:

Thank you so much! :D

xx
Gelix

Reviewer: Tamara Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 26 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 33: Babysitting

Bella and Edward are so cute when they babysit :)

Thanks so much for the update!



Author's Response:

Yeah, they are. I can't wait for Emily and Dadward *sigh* ;)

xx
Gelix

Reviewer: Tamara Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 03 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 34: Stood up

Oh how I remember those "ugly, cranky, hippo" days! 

Great chapter!  I think Alice and Rose will be very supportive of Emily's name :)



Author's Response:

Thank you so much! :)

xx
Gelix

Reviewer: Tamara Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 10 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 35: A mother's touch

I could listen to Edward's piano playing all night *sigh

Thanks so much for the update!



Author's Response:

Yeah, me too! :)

xx
Gelix

Reviewer: Tamara Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 17 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 36: Best birthday ever

Loved how Bella celebrated Edwards birthday with the pictures and the little notes..very clever!  Edward with the car was just like a little kid in a candy store hehehehehe.

Thanks so much for the update!

Good luck with going back to school.  I went back after 20 some years of being out.  It's difficult but will be worth it.

 



Author's Response:

Thank you! :D

Yeah, I've only been gone for 1,5 years, and it's only 'preparation' school until the real deal next fall. I'm still nervous, though ;)

xx
Gelix

Reviewer: Tamara Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 31 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 38: Starting of a new life

Another wonderful chapter - thanks so much!



Author's Response:

Thank you so much!

xx
Gelix

Reviewer: Tamara Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 07 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 39: Emily Grace Cullen

Yeah - I'm so glad she is finally here!  Awesome chapter - and I think Emily needs Edwards green eyes :)

Reviewer: Tamara Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 22 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 41: On our own

New parents are so cute :)  Alice needs a baby too....

It cracks me up when you have Edward change poopy diapers :-)

Thanks for the update!



Author's Response:

I'm glad you liked that, haha ;)

xx
Gelix

Reviewer: Tamara Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 28 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 42: Halfway to fifty

Great chapter!  Poor Alice - she needs a baby too :)

Thanks so much for the update!



Author's Response:

Thank you! :D

xx
Gelix

Reviewer: Tamara Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 13 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 44: Alone Time

Wonderful chapter!  I'm glad Edward and Bella got some alone time - yeah!!!!

Thank you for the update and I'm looking forward to the next chapter!

Summary: Past Featured Story

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Carlisle Cullen has been the object of Bella Swans fantasies for years. The problem with that is he’s a very bad boy. Hot tempered and tortured by his past. Can Bella break through his cold, hard mask and warm his icy heart? What secrets are hidden inside the home and hearts of Carlisle and his Brother and sister?

Story starts out light with some humor becomes more intense in later chapters.

 

All human characters….contains underage drinking, drugs, sex, abuse. 

 

 I'd like to thank Moonlit Wishes for making me an awesome banner for this story.

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Categories: Twilight, Non-Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Carlisle
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 27 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 55668 Read Count: 23163
[Report This] Published: 15 May 2010 Updated: 04 Nov 2010
Reviewer: Tamara Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 21 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

*sigh*  I want bad-boy Carlisle :D

Awesome story!!!



Author's Response:

And just what do you plan on doing with him? lol...thanks for the review and love the coffee.....later, Diane :)

Reviewer: Tamara Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 21 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11 Pressure can be relieved with Phone sex.

Yum!  I want hot phone sex with Carlisle!!!!  Whew - it's hot in here :)

Thank you - looking forward to the next chapter!!!!



Author's Response:

That was my very first try at a lemon. Carlisle sure knows how to get my fire burnin' as well. I think this is the first time anyone has thanked me... so Thank You and as Always I love the Coffee....Diane

Reviewer: Tamara Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 28 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13 Surprise, we're here!

Awesome chapter!  Thank you!!!!



Author's Response:

 Thank you as well. Glad you liked it, and you must know by now that I love the coffee cups. They always make me smile. Hope to hear more from you next chapter.....Diane

Reviewer: Tamara Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 07 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14 Jasper and Alice

Jezuz James is a real prick.  I'm hoping they shoot him :)  Thank you for this chapter!



Author's Response:

:) James always gets his in the end. He's a great villian.....thanks for reviewing Tamara and your very welcomed. Love the coffee, btw, Diane

Reviewer: Tamara Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 09 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15 Caveman Carlisle

YES!  I love Carlisle and his "big stick"  hehehehe. Fun chapter Diane!  Thank you so much and have a wonderful vacation!



Author's Response:

Carlisle has to have a 'big stick' it would just be wrong if it was a little one..hehe. Glad you liked it and thanks for the well wishes, I had a really nice time...oh I almost forgot, thanks for the coffee, Diane

Reviewer: Tamara Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 19 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16 Bella Loves Sex

How I love starting my mornings with hot Carlisle sex..  :)  Hope Jasper and the rest of the family (except James) are ok.  Thank you for this chapter Diane!!!!



Author's Response:

HI Tamara, Carlisle sex is a good way to wake up...lol. Oh how I wish he were real :). Wow everyone is really wanting James dead....perfect! Thanks for reading and reviewing for me, lovin' the coffee.....Diane

Reviewer: Tamara Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 21 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17 Jasper Remembers How and Why his Mother Died.

WOW Diane - very powerful and emotional chapter.  No matter how disturbing, I am happy to have Jasper's story.  At first I wanted Carlisle to kill James, now I want Jasper to do it.  Thank you so much!!



Author's Response:

Thank You Tamara, I have been so nervous about this chapter. I know alot of people have been asking, I was worried that you all might get upset with me over it. But it explains so much about the 'Cullens' and why they act bad ass, I think. I have three different people in mind to kill him, cause lets face it he's got to die....lol. Thanks for the review and coffee....Diane

Reviewer: Tamara Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 26 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18 Time to Talk

Ack - your killing me here Diane!!!  :D  I will kill that son of a bitch myself!! Hehehehehe - thank you for the update!!!!



Author's Response:

You make me giggle-I just love you. Thanks for the review, giggle and coffee. :) Diane

Reviewer: Tamara Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 02 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19 Plan in Action

*screams*  OMG Diane - I was ready to crack open the champagne and drink a toast to the assholes death!!!!!  I will keep it on ice for the next chapter..  :)

Loved your twist on the Freddy Krueger song - that was was brilliant  hehehehe

Thank you for the update sweetie!!



Author's Response:

Hi Tamara, I wish I could tell you when to crack that bottle opened.

I am so glad you have a good sense of humor-brilliant isn't a word I have ever been called, I like it....he he.

I will get the next chapter out on Thursday cause, I know people are worried about the boys. There will be a something unsuspected in it.

Love hearing from as well Darlin'. Thanks for the coffee, good stuff for inspiration....Diane

Reviewer: Tamara Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 05 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20 Total Confusion

Still keeping that champagne on ice - for now :)

This chapter made me laugh and cry at the same time. Carlisle's words to Bella just about killed me!  But I do love that Alice shot James in the ass - that's perfect! :)

Thank you so much for the chapter!



Author's Response:

Thank You for always supporting me. James is an ass so perfect spot, huh?...lol. Well I'm sorry if I made you cry but I like that it touched you. I guess you love them as much as I do.

When the story is over pop that Champagne and pass it around girlfriend. I'm sure everyone could use it. (especially Carlisle, hehe) Thanks for the coffee....Diane

Reviewer: Tamara Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 09 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21 What’s Happening?

*Is sitting on her seat bouncing like Alice*.....Diane, I am going to have to color my hair when this story is done due to all the grey from your cliffhangars!

Fab chapter sweetie - I loved Carlisles "near death experience" and that he will have twin girls - that makes me smile. 

But poor Edward and Emmett - they can't go to jail *insert whine here*

Thank you for the chapter hun!!!  :)



Author's Response:

Oh God Tamara you are really funny. I only thought I had one really bad cliffhanger and I caught so much crap from it. I was excitied about writing the NDE. I worked on that alot, I know different people see different things. I think Carlisle needed to see his mother and Dad was a bonus. The girls were an inspiration for him to return to his life.

They have to arrest everyone that was involved. I just wanted to tell it from their pov. Poor Edward seemed to lose his sense of humor and Emmett was just furious at the injustice of it all.

Thank You for the great review, sweetie. I really appreciate your comtinued support. If I could give you coffee back I would. Love, Diane

Reviewer: Tamara Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 16 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22 Bella and Alice

Yeah - I'm glad Bella and Alice worked things out!!!  Oh oh oh, now that James is off to jail, (YES), maybe Bubba will make him his girlfriend and James will get what he deserves :)  Then it will be time for the tequila shooters...sorry I drank the champagne already...hehehehehe

I always hate to see my favorite stories start to wrap up but did I read you will have outtakes?  See me Alice dancing over that????  :)

Thank you for the update Diane!



Author's Response:

God I love you. I am still laughing. Maybe Bubba has a new kind of head game for James, huh! lol! You're just determined to get me giddy. So you d the champagne? I guess that's okay, you must have gotten thirsty, huh. But tequila would certainly put everyone on their butts.

Yes there will be about three outtakes and thank you for asking. One is called 'Crazy ex-girlfriend' It just ended up being funny and out of character for Bella.

The other two are disturbing though because I had originally written Jasper as being Jame's victim even now. So I know there will be a lot of people who won't read it. :(  It involves the graphic rape scene that I mentioned. Like I said disturbing but with a different outcome for James when he pushes Jasper to far.

Thank You for your review and the laughs, coffee was good as well...Diane.

 

Reviewer: Tamara Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 23 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23 First Jail Then Bail

Hmmmm - so James the Prick has been out for days....wonder what the little shit has been up to???  So now that our Carlisle has figured out where the body is will he get blamed or will James the Prick move the body?  So many unanswered questions that I need a drink :) or two :)

Thank you for the update Diane!  Wish I could give you more than 10 coffees - oh oh oh - my 10 for you are spiked, hows that?  :)



Author's Response:

If I were James I would get the hell out of Dodge. But I guess he doesn't think like normal people.  You are asking some good questions girl.

 You can spike my coffee all you want to because I need it. ;)

Thank you for the positive review Tamara. It keeps me going forward, Diane

Reviewer: Tamara Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 31 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24 The Cave

UHHHHH DIANE!!!  You cannot leave me hanging like this without knowing who killed the son of a bitch!!!!!  BUT, I am dancing and twirling and spilling the new CASE of champagne all over me now that he is dead!!!!!!  My money is on Rosalie..  :)

Thank you so much for the new chapter!

Cheers!  o0o000oo00oo00  (Champagne bubbles)

 

Hugs!



Author's Response:

You're hilarious girl...so you got some more champagne. Does that mean you finished of the jello shooters was it? And without me, oh girl, how rude...j/k. There is no wrong answer to who killed James. Everyone has a different opinion, and it was left open for the readers to decide. They all had very good reasons to kill him and they all wanted to do it. I guess Uncle Cass will never tell either. ;) Take Care and I will be looking forward to hearing from you again Monday! Take Care and a big Emmett bear hug for ya.

Reviewer: Tamara Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 07 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 25

Oh Diane - I am sooooo sad this story is over but I LOVE how you ended it!!!!  Of all the fanfic's I have read, and I have a read a LOT, this one is definitely in my top 3. :) Did I tell you I love the ending?  Is he dead or isn't he?  Don't tell me I wasted good champagne...that would be evil of you :)  I certainly hope you continue to write as I love your style.  Please post the outtakes!  I've added you as a favorite author so I don't lose contact or miss anything.  Thank you again for this fantastic journey - it was one hell of a ride <3



Author's Response:

Thanks Tamara,

 I have loved having you along. I take this story being in your top three as a huge compliment. I'll post the outtakes in about a month. I need to finish up another story and then I'll be down to the one. I kind of wrote myself into a tight corner with three going and being a first time writer. When I am down to the one I will have plenty of time to edit and clean-up those outtakes. I would love to know what your top two are. I am curious if I have read them or not. I love a good read and I spend alot of time sorting through stories looking for a good one.

 All of mine seem to go in completly different directions, but one thing seems to stay the same. They all star Carlisle with Jasper always close by. I hope to hear from you again. You have made me giggle so many times in your reviews. You're always trying to get me to drink with you...lol. Thank You for always filling all of my coffee cups to the top. Things like that have kept me going when my mind has been tired. I will always finish what I start and I know you understand this whenever I say ' I hate to be left hanging' with a story. There are some really great one's out there that will probably never get finished. So if anything it has taught me not to do that.

Thanks for everything lady, and don't get lost out there in computer land.

-Hugs, Diane

Reviewer: Tamara Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 05 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 26 Outtake: Crazy Ex-Girlfriend

Ooooo great outtake!  I love being a visualizer - I could just picture everything that Bella was dishing out!

Thanks so much sweetie and I miss ya!!!!!



Author's Response:

I miss you too girl. It feels like I lost so many friends whenever the story ended.

 I could picture everything in my head as well. I got a good laugh from Bella being so feisty and standing up to the Bad Boys...lol.

Take care and I look forward to hearing from you next outtake. Oh and the coffee, I love the coffee. Thanks for filling them up as always!

-Diane

Reviewer: Tamara Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 04 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 27: Chapter 27 Bad Boys Part Two

Woo Hoo!!!!  I LOVE Jasper almost as much as Carlisle!  I can't wait - you don't know how excited I am for a new story from you!!!!  Stocking up on the champagne for this :)

Still miss you and hope your doing awesome!!!



Author's Response:

OMG girl I have missed you and your booze offerings so much...high five. I have been working on getting this outline together all day and part of yesterday. I am getting excited about all of it!

And I have missed you a lot. Take care of your awesome self and I hope to start posting as soon as I get at least three chapters ahead on this one. Which won't take long once I get it rolling. :)

You remembered the coffee...you are so on my good side...lol.

Summary:

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Thank You moonlit_wishes for making this banner for me...I Love it !!!

 

 

 

An evil scientific Bella sets out to make Carlisle pay for her painful past. She will inflict her pain on him both as a vampire and a human. If things don’t go as planned will Bella return Carlisle to his family before it’s too late?

 

This story is of a very mature nature. Please Do Not read this if your under the legal age.


Categories: Non-Canon Pairings, Twilight, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Jasper
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02 Bella/Jasper stories
Chapters: 23 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 62819 Read Count: 6931
[Report This] Published: 15 Jun 2010 Updated: 06 Sep 2011
Reviewer: Tamara Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 12 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 Learning Lessons

Ohhhh Bitchy Bella has come out to play!  I was happy to find this story by you Diane!  I have really missed you!!!!  I have quite a few chapters to read to get caught up with story, but I love where it is headed!!!!!

Talk with you soon sweetie!!!!!



Author's Response:

Hi coffee Lady,

 OMG I am so happy to hear from you. This is a totally different type of story than I have ever tried to write before. I got a little off tone in places, sorry about that. I was always going from one whim to another one. :)

Reviewer: Tamara Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 12 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2 The Room

Dayum but Bella really is a bitch isn't she!  She's being so mean to my Carlisle!!!!!!! :)

Off to the next chapter!



Author's Response:

She was being such an Evil Bitch that she actually won two awards...who knew people wanted an Evil Isabella?

So thirsty thanks for the coffee and reviews.

:)

Reviewer: Tamara Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 12 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3 The Local News

*sigh* I want Carlisle at MY mercy...hehehehehe

 



Author's Response:

I bet you would be a lot nicer to him if he played along like a good boy too!!!! <EG>

Reviewer: Tamara Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 12 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4 If you take a Vampire against his will, is it a Crime?

Well if that wasn't a panty soaking chapter!  Carlisle played an awesome mind game....hehehehehe

Thanks for the chapter sweetie!!!!



Author's Response:

Yeah, Isabella thinks she's so smart. You can't out smart a vampire he has to be a willing subject to allow himself to be hurt. One with a heart who feels bad.

Oh how I love the smell of coffee!

Reviewer: Tamara Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 12 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5 Fire, Fire, Fire

grrrrr Bella is such a f*ucking bitch!!!!!  Bad bad Bella!!!!!

My poor Carlisle needs me! :)



Author's Response:

She really was a bitch him. I think my muse shouldn't have done those bad, bad things. Actually if Carlisle were my vampire to play with he would always be naked and smiling. :)

Thanks for the coffee and reviews you're making me look good lady!!!

Reviewer: Tamara Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 12 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6 Jasper's Capture

*runs screaming*

Bella, excuse me, Isabella, is killing me here!!!!  First my Carlisle and now my Jasper.......

I just want to slap the shit out of her!!!!! :)

Thank you for the chapter!



Author's Response:

Of course its them because I love both those guys too.  :)  They are always the stars !!! God did you see Jasper with those red eyes in Eclipse? He so has to have those in the second part to this story.

Coffee smells great as always!

Reviewer: Tamara Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 12 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7 Carlisle Submits

Ooooo Carlisle likes it a little rough does he......

After all that the bitch is doing to him he is still so caring and compassionate...thats my boy. :)

Thank you!



Author's Response:

He is a sweetie and she really does screw him over for awhile. She is such a bitch!

Thanks, as always, for the gifts you leave me.

Reviewer: Tamara Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 12 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

What a sadistic evil bitch!  I hate her!!  :)



Author's Response:

Then I've done my job well. :)

Reviewer: Tamara Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 12 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9 After the Transformation

Ya know, come to think of it, I can actually "see" what your saying in this story applying to the movies and books.  Especially with Jasper....  :)  I can see how they controlled him..hmmmmmm

You are absolutely brilliant with your writing and this is one of the reason't your at the top of my list of favorite fanfic writers. :)

Thanks for this chapter!



Author's Response:

And this is one of the reasons your at the top of my list of reviewers. Thank You! I hope you'll be reading Bad Boys Two: Jasper's Struggle  come January. :) I am already way ahead on those chapters :)

Thanks for reviewing and leaving coffee under my Christmas Tree!

-Diane

Reviewer: Tamara Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 12 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10 Can I Show You My Office?

Oh God - I want Peter on a desk like that!  hehehehehe  And to have Jasper watching....I need a drink and a cold shower. :)

Love the chapter sweets!



Author's Response:

Gotta love those hot men!!! Even though they cause alot of water bills to go up around the world...hehe.

Thanks Diane

Reviewer: Tamara Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 12 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11 Never Push A Vampire

Ok, I thought that was extremely hot and not rape at all. :)  I LOVE Jasper all tough and in command......gets the girlie parts tingling ya know ?

 

Thanks for the chapter!!!!!



Author's Response:

Um hum I know all to well.

Thanks for the review and coffee.

Reviewer: Tamara Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 12 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12 Everything Is Confusing on This Cloudy Day.

Bella needs some major ass whipping by old Karma......

She make an awesome villianess!

Thanks for the chapter!



Author's Response:

Thank You Tamara...she is turning out to be a real bitch !!!

Reviewer: Tamara Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 13 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13 Then and Now

Love to see the Cullen girls ganging up on Bella - she so deserves it :)

Thanks sweetie!



Author's Response:

Yeah they gang up for awhile. Like I said I went off tone a couple of times in this story. I wanted the readers to feel for everyone individually but I think it may have been to much.

Thanks for the coffee and the reviews...Diane

Reviewer: Tamara Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 13 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14 Bella Tells Jasper the Truth.

Ooooo Karma is rearing her ugly head to Bella!  Woo Hoo - I hope she gets what she deserves.. :)



Author's Response:

Oh Evil Isabella ends up on a ride like she never expected...hehehehe.

Thanks Again!!

Reviewer: Tamara Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 13 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15 Whispers to Carlisle

Boy - Bella just destroys and destroys hard doesn't she...



Author's Response:

I felt so bad for Esme and Edward in this chapter, then later I have to go and make Esme the bad guy and all she ever did was love her man...sighs.

Reviewer: Tamara Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 13 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16 Wicked Lies

Yeah - it's getting super thrilling!  I LOVE that my Carlisle knows the truth - oh just wait until he finds out the baby isn't his...he might need me to console him :)



Author's Response:

Or Isabella may be the one needing a tissue.

Thanks, Diane

Reviewer: Tamara Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 13 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17 Goodbye

Well dammit - now I just kinda feel sorry for the twit and I don't want too!!!!!



Author's Response:

HAHA I did good then :) Dances a happy dance!!!!

Reviewer: Tamara Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 13 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18 Changing, Fighting and a Makeover.

I'm so torn!  Should this be a "you go Alice and slap the shit out of Bella" or a "WTF Alice"?  lol

Thanks for the chapter!



Author's Response:

I think its a little of both actually. Like I said I put to many individual feelings in this story.

Thanks as always for the wine...I mean coffee.

Reviewer: Tamara Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 13 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19 Carlisle Wakes Up

OMG - Carlisle found his balls!  Love it when he is in control :)

Thank you!



Author's Response:

And he is going to keep them because they are such nice balls...yummy. I love an aggressive Carlisle!

Reviewer: Tamara Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 13 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20 Family Meeting

Awww sweetie - wish I could do something to help with the pain.  That makes me sad.  Know you are in my thoughts!

LOVE the chapter :)  Carlisle is so DOM :)

Thanks honey!



Author's Response:

Thank You for wishing me well Tamara. I had a hard way to go there for a little over two months and I'm still taking meds. Good news is that I am feeling human again and I'm ready to get into meanness with our vamps. :)

Thank You for the review and coffee, Diane.

Reviewer: Tamara Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 13 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21 Bella's Escape

Annabelle you did amazing with this chapter!  I knew Bella was alive somewhere...hehehehe

And ya gotta love Emmett :)

Thanks so much!



Author's Response:

Annabelle did do a great job stepping in there for me. I hate to make people wait for chapters and that seemed to be happening alot. So I asked her because she totally loves the story.

Emmett was the only thing I asked her to do. I want him to be smart and sexy in this story. He deserves to be the hero sometimes too. :)

Coffee is yummy.

Reviewer: Tamara Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 13 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22 Carlisle's Day Out

Ok, so that was like super HOT!  I need to go take a cold shower now:)

If I could give you double the coffee I would!



Author's Response:

See this is why I love you! you don't get mad at me for man stuff. I think it's sexy as hell and I would so be peeking around the corner to watch them...hehe. Thanks for leaving reviews on all these chapters as well as the coffee. You know it means a lot to me! One more chapter of this story that will be leaving a few unexpected twists and turns before the second part begins sometime in the new year. Because Carlsile isn't paying anymore. YAY !!!!

Never Say Never by Wombat Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 1025]
Summary:

Issued with a death sentence since birth Bella’s life was never her own; in an attempt to escape her abusive childhood she flees to Forks, Bella is destined to be with Edward for eternity but can he save her from the clutches of Aro and his army before its too late or will she be able to save herself.

This story contains Abuse, Violence, Love, War, Sex, Masturbation, Kidnapping, Rape, Death and a heap of other things.... Please don't read if you are not of age!!!!

Twilight Rocks But I Do Not Own It.... I do however own this story!!!!

This story is for Adults only. So Don't Read if you are not old enough......

I suck at summaries so please give my story a go.

 


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 9 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 58299 Read Count: 55216
[Report This] Published: 25 Jun 2010 Updated: 03 Jan 2013
Reviewer: Tamara Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 12 Sep 2010 Title: Never Say Never

Hot Hot Hot!!  I love Jasper.  :)  Chapter made my toes curl and send girlie tingles all over...HAHAHAHA

Thank you!



Author's Response:

LMAO!!!! hehehehehe... I have a confession.... Screw team Edward and team Jacob .... I am sooo team Jasper.... I hope you were able to find some relief after this ch...hehehe

Reviewer: Tamara Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 13 Sep 2010 Title: Never Say Never

Well damn - I was totally wrong on my guess..hehehehe

Thank you!

Reviewer: Tamara Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 12 Sep 2010 Title: Never Say Never

So I take it Aro is the father?  Or am I completely off base here...lololol

One way to find out - next chapter here I come!!!!!

Thanks sweetie :)



Author's Response:

hehehe... a few people thought that and you can be forgiven for jumping to that conclusion, it would make sense.... hehehe

Reviewer: Tamara Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 12 Sep 2010 Title: Never Say Never

ROFLOL - I love Alice :)



Author's Response:

YAY!!!!!!! Your killing me with laughter

Reviewer: Tamara Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 13 Sep 2010 Title: Never Say Never

Alice is such a perfect cockblock LOLOL

Thanks again!



Author's Response:

I know right.... I just want to shoot her sometimes.... hehehehe but its for the best Bella isn't ready.... YET... hehehe

Reviewer: Tamara Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 12 Sep 2010 Title: Never Say Never

Dayum - that chapter was hot!

(I didn't hate the chapter :)

Thank you and off to read the next chapter!!!!



Author's Response:

hehehe... YAY!!!! I love it when a new person reviews.... YOU MADE MY DAY!!!! Thanks a Bunch

Reviewer: Tamara Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 12 Sep 2010 Title: Never Say Never

roflol - I can just imagine a whole neighborhood horny as hell - that was great :)

Thank you and off to the next!



Author's Response:

hehehehe... i am glad you enjoyed and could picture the horny neighbours.... hehehehe

Reviewer: Tamara Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 12 Sep 2010 Title: Never Say Never

WOW - very powerful and emotional chapter! 

Thanks so much!



Author's Response:

Thanks a bunch!!!!! and thanks so much for taking the time to push that little button

Reviewer: Tamara Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 12 Sep 2010 Title: Never Say Never

Fab chapter sweetie!

Thank you!



Author's Response:

Thank you thank you thank you

Reviewer: Tamara Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 12 Sep 2010 Title: Never Say Never

WOW - so many unexpected twists and turns!  Can't wait to see how Bella develops into her powers - brilliant sweetie!!!!



Author's Response:

YAY!!!!! am soooo loving your reviews.... I can't wait til you get further along into my story... Bella will shock you

Reviewer: Tamara Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 12 Sep 2010 Title: Never Say Never

Love it!



Author's Response:

hehehehe

Reviewer: Tamara Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 12 Sep 2010 Title: Never Say Never

Great chapter!  I really need to take up speed reading to get caught up :)

Thanks again!  Off I go to the next chapt!



Author's Response:

hehehehe... you are flying through them... Thanks heaps for pushing that little button

Reviewer: Tamara Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 13 Sep 2010 Title: Never Say Never

Go Bella Go!  Love it!!!!!

Reviewer: Tamara Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 13 Sep 2010 Title: Never Say Never

Holy shit this chapter was awesome!  And I am all caught up too!  See me Alice bouncing?!  hahahahaha

Thank you so much sweetie - love this story!!!



Author's Response:

OMFG!!!!! How the hell did you catch up that fast.... hehehehe.... you are a super star!!!!!! Thanks for the review and keep them coming... you know I can actually see you bouncing....hahahahaha

Reviewer: Tamara Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 15 Sep 2010 Title: Never Say Never

OMG - you evil nasty bitch for leaving us hanging right there!!!!  (ya know I love ya)

Can't wait for Edwards POV on what he just witnessed hehehehehehe

Thank you so much for the shout out and for this chapter!!!!!



Author's Response: I know, I know but I just couldn't resist the evil cliffy.... I am becoming a master at them.... hehehe.... EPOV I think is sooooo hot you better fill your freezer with ice I won't make you wait too long for the update... maybe only a few days

Reviewer: Tamara Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 21 Sep 2010 Title: Never Say Never

Wonderful chapter!  It will be interesting to see what happens when Bella and Edward finally have sex.  Can't you just see a bunch of horny vampires going at it?!

Thanks for the update!



Author's Response:

hehehehe.... I don't think we will have to wait for them to go that far before there is a house full of horny vamps... Thanks heaps for reviewing

Reviewer: Tamara Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 23 Sep 2010 Title: Never Say Never

OMG - it sure is hot in here :)

Thanks so much for the update!



Author's Response:

hehehehehe thanks for reviewing

Reviewer: Tamara Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 27 Sep 2010 Title: Never Say Never

OMFG!  WOWZA!  Can you say frustrated now?  Hahahahahaha

And I love how everyone was "involved" 

Thanks so much for the sexy update - now I am off to find my husband :D



Author's Response:

hehehehehe LMAO!!!! you're funny, and I didn't mean to give you some relief just to end up back with a new round of tension but it was funny how it all came together... I'm glad you liked to family POV's I couldn't resist... hehehe

Thanks for reviewing MWAH!!!!

Reviewer: Tamara Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 09 Oct 2010 Title: Never Say Never

WOW - this chapter was Amazing!  I love the conversation between Edward and Charlie :)

Thanks so much for the update!



Author's Response:

amazing oh you stroke my ego very well... hehehehe Thanks for your review and I am so happy you like the chat between Edward and Charlie... I wonder how long it will take Edward to as her hehehehehe... check your email for the link to see what Bella was wearing in this ch.

 

 

Summary:

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bella is a naive girl. she thinks nothing can happen to her, she thinks she will find the perfect man, have an okay job, struggle alittle, than have kids and settle down.

how wrong she was. she meets this boy who is perfect, or so she thinks. one thing leads to another and bella is stuck in a world she can not nor ever get out of. she tries but in the end she is always for ever his.

nc-17 for rape, lemons, killing, drugs,etc.

warning: dark edward and sexual abuse

Hey everyone so my story has been reported for all the lemons sexual abuse drugs and rape. Even though it states these things in the warning and is in the nc-17 category. I have not violated any rules and my stories are not as graphic as many are on this website. So if this story is deleted you know why.  Sorry to all those enjoying it and wanting more, I apologize for this one persons actions in advance. If you want to know who reported this story just look in the reviews and you will see! 

-Love Sinister :D

 


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 19 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 49477 Read Count: 49642
[Report This] Published: 07 Jul 2010 Updated: 14 Mar 2018
Reviewer: Tamara Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 12 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 4: so close but so far away

WOW - Edward and the brothers are real pricks aren't they?????  Can't wait to see what happens next!  Bella and babies better hide good!

Reviewer: Tamara Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 25 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 5: story teller

Awesome chapter!  I'm going to guess another girl...

Thank you and looking forward to the next update!!