I am glad that at the end of this chapter Bella and Edward are together again.  Did they file any kind of complaint against Tanya regarding the stolen money for utilities and rent that Bella did pay?  Did she get a money order or anything?  I remember using those a long time ago and they had carbons on the back.  Something that could discredit her complaint.  I know she was not named but I think you can say you have an idea who the complaintant might be and file paperwork that shows proof otherwise.  I really don't know.  I just want them to be safe and happy.  I think Charlie dropped the ball in not being more forceful regarding Bella and he is taking it out on Edward.  They are not physically blood-related, nor were they raised together, so their love makes sense to me.

I hope Bella is looking for somewhere new for the both of them or perhaps will be ameniable to them living together.  Then again, she may need to stand on her own two feet, if only to know she can.  I do hope they talk and therefore smooth the feathers that are ruffling with insecurity.  I really liked this update.

I think I've missed a few chapters of this story, I will have to catch up soon. :)  I hope they caught Jacob.  If not then I hope he and his friends do not harm them Edward or Bella again.

This was a real lovely chapter. :)

Oh wow.  This chapter was so good.  I am glad Bella is finally away from Renee.  I cannot understand any mother treating her child that way but that does not mean I do not know it happens, because it definitely (sadly) does.  I am glad Bella is being told the secret.  I am hopeful that the big oops moments of canon might not be happening now.  Lol, however you write this story I will read it, I am definitely all in.  I love stories like this where history is altered, they are so much fun and so enjoyable!  Edward is still away?  I look forward to Bella starting Forks High.  I very much look forward to more, I am so curious and intrigued as to what will happen next! :D

I am so glad Alice was not in fact evil.  I admit, I worried for a bit.  I hope the ladies can all find something to do together that they will all enjoy.  Or maybe they can take turns?  I dunno.  Regardless, I loved this chapter!  This story is so delightful.

I do wonder if Bella would have married a wolf but would not have been his imprint.  Or maybe this is the way of saying the universe changes and adapts along with it's inhabitants?  Regardless, loved, loved, loved. :D

This was a great update!  I feel for poor Bella.  I hope she will have her happiness soon.  Phil sounds like a wonderful man and the Cullens are great people.

I really liked this chapter!  I hope Bella takes some of the clothes -- warm clothing is a must in chilly areas.  I am curious what Bella wanted to do when she turned 18, what kind of plans she may or may not have had.  I was a bit surprised at the school rule -- since I've never heard of such a thing -- but I like it since it gives her a reason to be where she'll be.  That's part of the joys of fiction. :)  I hope she does better at Forks High than at other schools, though I kinda hope she doesn't fall into false friendship (Jess, Lauren, etc) too.  Meh, I am so curious, I don't care who she befriends just so long as you keep updating because this story is fun! :)  Oh and I am really glad you wrote Rose the way you did, I like her and I'm enjoying liking her. :)

Oh dear, I hope Jacob breaking the treaty first will make what Bella has told him invalid, so to speak.  Still, she's human and not bound by it at all in the first place.  I like how she said she didn't want to be a vampire but their friend.  While I do hope someday she will be immortal (so she'll never die) I am glad she can enjoy being human too. :)

I really liked this chapter!  I am kinda glad she's a touch disenchanted with Jacob, less stress.  I loved Esme's realizations.  Poor Edward must have felt so alone in those moments.  I hope he will find a confidant in Bella.  I am glad Bella refuses to be run roughshod by Alice.  While I know Alice is well-meaning it is indeed Bella's life and incredibly unfair for Alice to decide the directions in which it goes.  Big things (disasters, etc) make sense but the pants you wear on a certain day?  Naw. ;)

Okay, enough rambly.  I loved this update.  I am so hopeful for all of them.  I liked Charlie too, I really liked seeing more about him and his decisions.

Oh wow.  I hope Bella doesn't get tossed about and broken this time!  I shall wait and see though, whatever you decide to do you have definitely peaked my curiosity. :D  I loved the way Bella stood up to Lauren and Jessica.  I really enjoyed this chapter and am very much looking forward to more. :)

This chapter was really good.  I like the way Edward seems drawn to her and yet confused.  I liked the twist at the end too.

Oh wow.  I wonder if Edward's mind will be changed over time or if he will have an epifany?  I really enjoyed that we got both Bella and Edward's viewpoints in this chapter!  If Bella could be his ultimate happiness then it stands to reason that he could be hers as well.  Still, I like your Edward and actually understand where he is coming from in some ways.  His viewpoint seems less obstinate than canon Edward though his opinions are much the same.  I am really looking forward to more!

Oh wow.  I kinda figured Edward's epihphany would come after an intense moment and this fit the bill perfectly.  I really like how it came about!  I loved Charlie in this chapter too.  Excellent update! :)

This chapter was really terrific.  Sad but hopeful and very good.

I hope Bella becomes more comfortable with attention over time. This chapter was really exciting and very interesting. I really liked it!

I am so excited for this story!

I love the changes you have made to canon.  It gels perfectly and yet makes the story much better. :)

I liked this story.  It was fun and sweet and I really enjoyed your characters.  Well done! :)

I liked this lil story, it was fun and enjoyable and very nice. :)

This chapter was enchanting!  I love the playfulness and closeness of the three of them.  I am glad Pam has decided to play it smart, I hope she will develop a friendship with Bella and Charlotte too, after all, they have enough enemies.  Godric and Eric are human celebrities?  That is neat.  I admit, I never considered that aspect of the whole revelation thing.  Anyway, I truly enjoyed this chapter.  I really like your writing style. :)

This chapter was really great.  I like how smart and caring your characters are - Sam, Godric and Eric were beautifully done.

I liked the conversation with Godric, Eric and Charlie.  Charlie is awful cold to be thinking about an election when his child is so fragile but I have known people with parents like that (sadly).  I like that Bella has a growing circle of people who will help protect her until she can protect herself. :)

I am glad Charlie will be taken to task for his neglect of his child.  Parents are meant to protect, guide and love their children -- never to ignore them because it is easier.  I am glad Pam seems to be responding more positively to Bella being human.  I really, really like the way you have writen Ludwig.  I am curious, will your Pam be more like the show's Pam or the books' Pam?

This chapter was wonderful!  I really enjoyed the first half of it being a peak into Alcide's mind.  I also really enjoy the way you wrote him, he is more fleshed out than the books and far more enjoyable.  More tolerant and interesting.

I also really enjoyed Eric, he is fun and serious at the same time.  I like the bond between Eric and Godric and the three of them.  I am also glad that Bella is starting to heal.

I truly enjoyed this chapter. :)

Oh, how I loved this chapter!  It was so sweet but also super special too.  The ceremony was beautiful and the meaning behind it even more so.  The fact that it was touched by a Goddess even better.  This chapter was truly spectacular! :D

I like the thought of Bella and Eric reminiscing in the way siblings do.  Charlie is just awful.  I loved Godric's threat and speech to Charlie.  I also really enjoyed Eric's confrontation with Charlie.  The three of them are absolutely a family. :) I am so glad Bella has them. :)

I definitely like how Paul has come to be one of them.  I love that Sam was so wise.  I like the way Eric teases Bella but never goes too far.  I love the care Godric shows Bella in this chapter.  I like how she concerns herself with their needs too.  I'm highly curious - do the coffins have oxygen pumped in or are there discrete holes in them?  You don't have to answer, I just cannot help but asking.  Regardless, I loved this chapter as I have loved the others!

What a beautiful chapter!  This love scene was so intimate and sweet.  I am positively enchanted. :)

I loved Bella and Godric's conversation.  They shared their conflicting viewpoints, expanded on others -- it was a very mature and *equal* conversation.

Sorry to delete my review minutes after I wrote it.  I reread and realized I must have scrolled a bit too fast because I missed that they are following the car.  I am so incredibly relieved.  It gives me hope Bella will not be tortured by the spiky-haired freak and the copper-haired loser.  I loved this chapter.  I am so glad I reread because it gives me hope Godric and Bella will be reunited soon.  I hope Emmett will see the truth in Bella's eyes and listen to her.  I cannot imagine anyone would want to live a complete human life with a babysitter, no matter how well-meaning.  I also hope Charlotte will be alright.  I am curious about Mordred too.  Anyway, I really enjoyed this update.  I admit though, I am eager for Bella to no longer be human so that she will no longer be so vulnerable.  I also hope her scent has changed enough that she will never be tasty to Edward again.

I love the way Bella was able to stand up for herself and back up her words.  I like the way Damon and Elijah are there for her but let her have a leading role in her own life. :)  I also like Jasper.  Terrific chapter!

I very much enjoyed this chapter!  It was really good and very interesting. :)

This chapter was steamy and fun!  I really enjoyed it. :)

Their banter is fantastic! 

I *love* her confidence! Confident Bella is one of my favorite Bellas! I love the way Demetri coached her through feeding. Also, love declarations! (Okay, caught up on reviews. I started reading and realized I hadn't reviewed a single chapter so I went back and fixed that.)

I wonder if Edward behaves so dangerously because he thinks he's soulless anyway or he's so vain he thinks he's above the law. I am quite eager for them to catch up with him! This chapter was a bit sad but really needed. 

I liked the sharing in this chapter. I also really liked the pace. 

Edward is a really good guy.  Charlie on the other hand needs to grow up a little.  I will be rooting for Bella and her baby. :)

I loved this chapter, it was so sweet. :)  I like that Edward has always looked for an older woman because that is what he saw growing up. :)

What a lovely little story. :)  I am glad they got their HEA without too much trouble and no separating. :)  Thank you for writing and sharing it with us.

I loved this little story! There is something so sweet about this couple. I can't put it into words but enchanted mush sounds like a darn fine descriptive for me after I've read their stories. :)