Reviews by Holidai
Summary: Past Featured Story

 

Bella's life was irrevocably changed by the vampires who left her behind. Alone in the world now, she finds herself drawn to another. Fighting for her life has changed her and now, the new family she has found will change her as well...


Categories: Non-Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Peter
Genre: Drama, Romance
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories, Themslovebug90's read stories, My favs past present and future
Chapters: 33 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 125187 Read Count: 71712
[Report This] Published: 23 Nov 2010 Updated: 04 Jun 2012
Reviewer: Holidai Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 26 Aug 2014 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

I liked this chapter.

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Date: 26 Aug 2014 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

I liked the way you describe both Bella and Peter's scents! I like that Bella is reasinable and seems to trust her instincts -- even if she doesn't quite get why she is having such reactions/feelings. I liked their convesation and her maturity.

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Date: 26 Aug 2014 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

Excellent chapter!

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Date: 26 Aug 2014 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

This chapter was sweet and fascinating. Very well done!

Reviewer: Holidai Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 26 Aug 2014 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

Awesomesquared!

Reviewer: Holidai Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 26 Aug 2014 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I read this long ago on FFN and am so thrilled to have found the story here! This is one of my favorite non-canon stories. I may not review every chapter but I had to say it once because I do love this story. :)

Dying To Love by WeeKittyAndTAT Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 27]
Summary: Past Featured Story

 

FBI coroner Masen, tries to find evidence to stop the Necromance Killer. With the newest ‘victim’ really alive, will her information help him catch the killer? One-shot for Halloween. Joint collaboration of: Weekitty and TeamAllTwilight.

The wonderful banner is SoapyMayhem Fanfiction.  You can find her on facebook under that name.

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Mystery, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: G8or Favor8s Read, Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiHu
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 16554 Read Count: 3364
[Report This] Published: 31 Oct 2011 Updated: 31 Oct 2011
Reviewer: Holidai Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 13 Mar 2013 Title: Chapter 1: One-Shot For Halloween: Dying To Love

This was a very good story.  It was very interesting and very sweet too.

Summary:

I am a vampire. He is a human. I am designed to kill. He is my ultimate prey. But can I make him mine?

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Fantasy, Romance, Supernatural
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Can't wait for an update, Stories Read by CNYBella, Bella 84's To Be Read List, Stories I've read, Tufano79 Stories
Chapters: 25 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 163034 Read Count: 48916
[Report This] Published: 31 May 2012 Updated: 31 Jan 2015
Reviewer: Holidai Signed
Date: 16 Nov 2013 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20

I hope the core members of their group come through the upcoming fights and come through well.  I really liked this chapter.

A Ilha do Amor by tufano79 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 777]
Summary: Past Featured Story

Bella Swan, reeling from the unceremonious ending of her engagement on her wedding day, heads on her honeymoon minus ONE groom. Edward Cullen, is 'sleeping' his way through the guests at the resort on Isle Esme. They meet on the island off the coast of Brazil but will they find love on a ilha do amor? The island of love?

AIDA

Nominee

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Erotica, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Stories Read by CNYBella, Stories I've Already read, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, Dumbeline's WIP to read list, Bella's Must Reads!, Bella 84's To Be Read List, Stories I've read, My favs past present and future , TBR, Tufano79 Stories
Chapters: 38 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 325748 Read Count: 299861
[Report This] Published: 06 Sep 2012 Updated: 29 Nov 2014
Reviewer: Holidai Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 14 Oct 2013 Title: Chapter 22: Halloween Hijinks

I am glad they made up.  I really liked Alice in this chapter.  I also liked the other characters but I just especially liked the way you wrote her.  This was a really lovely chapter.

Summary:

 

Bella orphaned, ward of the state, reaches adulthood. She meets one person and she thinks she has found her forever, but he breaks her heart and throws her aside.  At twenty-one she finds she is the sole beneficiary of the Swan Hotel.  Weird things happen, and the evil spirit in the hotel has decided that Bella belongs to him.  Will he get her, or will a local ghost hunter be able to save her. Rated for Adult reading. AH

Banner made by: TeamAllTwilight 


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Mystery, One-Shot, Supernatural, Suspense/Thriller
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 23222 Read Count: 2986
[Report This] Published: 27 Oct 2012 Updated: 27 Oct 2012
Reviewer: Holidai Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 13 Mar 2013 Title: Chapter 1: Halloween 2012

This was wow!  I am unsure if reviewed it already on FFnet but I figure it cannot hurt to say again.  I really, really loved this story.  It was so interesting and I just loved the chemistry between them.  So incredibly well done! :D



Author's Response:

Well this was our second annual Halloween scary story to share; I am stoked to see what kind of stuff Nikky comes up with for next year.  This is sadly completed, so those of you who wanted us to turn it into a full story, at over 22k it has said all it has to say, but thanks for loving our stuff so much that you want us to add to it.  I am not a big super-natural writer, or alternate universe writer, so this was mainly all Nikky; I just helped research things, reworded and re-worked things and added bits here and there.

 

Be sure to check out our other stories and if you like yourself some Older-ward and Dom-ward stuff be watching for the new story we have coming out soon, because it is going to be good in so many bad ways...(insert my evil cackle here...)

 

Well I promised that I would tell you all about my experience with the super-natural, so here ya go.   When I was 18/19 I lived in this house in Rock Island, Illinois.  The house was old and quite spooky anyway, but not huge in size.  The basement had closed off walls that had been bricked over that were at one time part of tunnels used for the escape and hiding of slaves.  The second floor was one large room and it had a dead bolt lock on the door.  I used the whole second floor as my bedroom.  The only people, who had a key to my room, were my mother, my best friend and myself.  Well one night my best friend and I went out to a movie, before leaving I got mad and threw a wadded up bunch of necklaces, bracelets and earrings on the comforter of my bed.  It was a HUGE knotted mess of silver and gold, some real some fake, but I never took very great care of it.  I had been trying to untangle one necklace, but couldn’t get it.  There must have been fifteen or more necklaces, and several dangling earring sets and bracelets/anklets in the wadded mess.

 

When I left the house I locked my door, because I didn’t trust anyone in my room.  My mom was also gone and the whole house was locked up.  My mom was with her boyfriend and actually spent the night there.  My bff and I went to see two movies back to back and then went out to eat and came back to my house.  When we opened my bedroom door, and turned on the light all of the knotted up jewelry was all separated and laying out in neat rows across my bed.  Matching sets were even sitting together.  All three keys were accounted for, and there was no sign of someone breaking into the house or my room, all doors had been completely locked up tight.

 

A few weeks later we had someone come in that claimed they could converse with the spirits and that there was a family who had died in the house many, many, years ago of some sort of plague like disease.  Well it was a younger woman her husband and 2 children a boy around 6/7 and a baby girl and the couple’s grandmother.  It was the boy who unknotted all the jewelry, he apparently liked to do puzzles, that is what the person said who talked to the spirits.

 

Several other weird things happened in that house.  The toilet used to flush all by itself.  Someone hid my mother’s glasses and then threw them at her when her back was turned after looking for them for a few hours.  My mom came home one day to a pot of water boiling on the stove, and she was the only one in town, me and anyone else who had access to the house were out of town for a concert and she had locked the door before work that day, when she came home water was boiling on the stove.  Many other odd things happened, but I was never so happy in my life when the people we rented from sold the house and we had to move.

 

Okay all that is my scary story, from when I was younger.  I sometimes now think I see something and then it is gone when I look back, some people say that is a spirit, and some say imagination.  Either way, I believe in that stuff.  Hope you all have a very safe and wonderful Halloween, save the tricks for the adults, and treats for the kiddies.  See you all soon on EHCV, with our update of Jane’s POV.  Much love, Kasi (& Nikky)~

 

 

 

 

 

PS... I am so sorry I missed seeing this review come in and the lateness of you getting this review reply... Kasi~

Summary: Past Featured Story

They survived falling in love and having four children. Now, Geekward and Nerdella are parents of teenagers. Say a prayer for them for they are in for a bumpy ride. But, a ghost from the past is rearing his ugly head. Follow along as Geekward and Nerdella deal with having teens, battle with the blast from the past and why is Demetri hugging a cow? ANSOL/TGGTP Sequel. ExB AH/AU

STTD

Thanks to Evilnat for the amazing banner! You are the bomb, girl


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Erotica, Family, Humor, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: G8or Favor8s Read, Stories I've Already read, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, My Favorite Stories, Bella's Must Reads!, Bella 84's To Be Read List, My favs past present and future , A Nerd Story of Love Series, Read & Enjoyed
Chapters: 30 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 269577 Read Count: 89457
[Report This] Published: 26 Nov 2012 Updated: 26 Jul 2015
Reviewer: Holidai Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 06 Oct 2013 Title: Chapter 11: Mortal Coil

I really enjoyed this chapter.  Will Owen and Edward really be miserable as long as they have the dog, though?  Or only if they forget to take their pills?  I hope its the latter...

Poor Jasper -- he kinda needs a hug.  I hope lil Gianna will be alright.  I also hope Alice can pull herself together and find something positive to use as an outlet.  Something that makes her smile and allows her to focus lots of energy so she is not lashing out so much.

The end was sad but also, hmm, happy isn't the word but peaceful...yeah, peaceful works.

Summary:

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We were together nine years … and then we weren't.   Now I’m just pretending.  The trouble is, I’ve never been very good at lying. 

With one drunken kiss at a New Year’s Eve party, lives change when the clock strikes midnight.

 


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Angst, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiHu, Stories I've Already read, Stories I've read
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 3810 Read Count: 1628
[Report This] Published: 29 Dec 2012 Updated: 29 Dec 2012
Reviewer: Holidai Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 01 Nov 2013 Title: Chapter 1: On the Stroke of Midnight

This story was lovely and sweet and I adored the ending. :)

Summary: Past Featured Story

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He is the 'toast of Hollywood' and she is his queen, but their lives are not a fairytale. With children, real life and someone who is trying to break them apart, Edward and Bella will need to fight for their Happily Ever After.  From the red carpet, to the bedroom to the playroom, can their love survive? *HEA* OOC, AH, CANON COUPLES.

*WARNING: THIS STORY IS STRICTLY NC -17* FOR LANGUAGE AND EXPLICIT SCENES - BDSM.


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Erotica, Family, Friendship, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Kuu Faves, Stories I've Already read, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, My Favorite Stories, J's Read and Loved Stories, Stories I've read, My favs past present and future , Read
Chapters: 28 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 313471 Read Count: 113785
[Report This] Published: 31 Dec 2012 Updated: 26 Dec 2017
Reviewer: Holidai Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 23 Mar 2013 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

This was really sweet and interesting.  It was very well done.  I hope Max talks to his parents soon.

Tribute by SexylexiCullen Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 3420]
Summary: Past Featured Story

The Few. The Proud. The Strong. Returning Marine Edward Masino has spent the first years of his adult life embodying that motto. But as he moves back to the Brooklyn neighborhood where he grew up, he is introduced to a whole new code of ethics. He quickly learns that some rules cry out to be bent, but there are others that, if broken, will get him killed.

*Drama. Humor. Romance. Hurt. Friendship. Crime, you name it. It's listed Drama/Romance, but there are many facets. EVENTUAL Canon Couples (Rome wasn't built in a day) Edward/Bella.

Beta'd by HollettLA

Banner by CaraNo


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Action, Angst, Drama, Friendship, Humor, Hurt/Comfort,, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Lilyellacullens want to read list!, Dumbi's Most Wanted, Misstoria's Stories to Read
Chapters: 123 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 200288 Read Count: 717315
[Report This] Published: 11 Jan 2013 Updated: 23 Sep 2013
Reviewer: Holidai Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 23 Sep 2013 Title: Chapter 122: Chapter 122

Poor Edward, that's gotta ache.  Lol, I laughed the that sucked line.  It seems like they've truly found their groove.  I am happy for them.

Reviewer: Holidai Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 23 Sep 2013 Title: Chapter 123: Chapter 123

I dunno, maybe I'm just not that trusting but it feels like Elizabeth is playing Bella.  She turns the tears and sorrow on and off too easily.  If I'm reading it all wrong then I'll be glad to be proven wrong but a part of me thinks she really has an agenda.  I hope she doesn't cause trouble for or between Bella and Edward -- she scares me.  Like I said though, I fully admit that I could be wrong.  I hope Bella does tell Edward, that she decides to trust her man and not go against what works for them.  As long as the three of them (Bella, Edward and Eddie) are well though, that's pretty much all that matters to me.  

Reviewer: Holidai Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 23 Sep 2013 Title: Chapter 121: Chapter 121

Oh wow, two sides to the story now.  Such a sad story too.  I am glad Edward did not have to hear it first hand.  Even if Bella recounts it when they're alone, she knows him best, she can gauge how he's feeling and reacting -- she'll be there for him and not colored by the emotions of the memories.

Summary: Past Featured Story

 

When eight year old Rebecca Cullen is given a gold coin from the mall Santa, to make a wish on, what will she wish for and will that wish come true in time for Christmas morning? Will Edward realize that what he's been searching for is already there? Will Bella give up waiting for Edward to see her and move on? Olderward/AH/Rated M

This was our entry into the Holly Jolly Holiday Contest.  We won 1st place Fans Vote and 2nd place Judges Vote... Thank you everyone.

 

 

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Family, Friendship, Hurt/Comfort,, One-Shot, Romance, Supernatural
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 13606 Read Count: 4629
[Report This] Published: 17 Jan 2013 Updated: 17 Jan 2013
Reviewer: Holidai Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 13 Mar 2013 Title: Chapter 1: Wishing On A Christmas Coin

Aw, ya'll write the sweetest stories.  I really liked this.  I also really liked the characters.

Summary: Past Featured Story

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Top Banner made by:TeamAllTwilight and book cover banner made by: InkJess Cullen

After graduation, smart mouthed Isabella Swan finds out her father’s set her up in an arranged marriage.  Not wanting to marry Jake and live on the res, she runs. In Chicago, she finds herself jobless—living with Alice.  She seeks a job at a strip club. Edward Cullen calls her a child and tells her no—too bad NO isn’t a word she likes. Birthday story for Silverblossom. AH/ratedM


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Erotica, Friendship, Humor, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: G8or Favor8s Read, To Read , Stories I've read
Chapters: 317 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 57061 Read Count: 1814324
[Report This] Published: 24 Jan 2013 Updated: 11 Apr 2013
Reviewer: Holidai Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 26 Feb 2013 Title: Chapter 215: Chapter 215

Lol, Eleazar doesn't want to hear Tanya's tantrum. ;)

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Date: 26 Feb 2013 Title: Chapter 214: Chapter 214

Jacob acts like Bella is something to be owned.  I am glad Forks is far away, if only because he seems like he could be dangerous.

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Date: 28 Feb 2013 Title: Chapter 225: Chapter 225

I think he will be super surprised.  I think he'll also feel bad for a moment for having thought so poorly of her in the past.  Mostly I hope he sweeps her off her sexual feet! ;)

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Date: 26 Feb 2013 Title: Chapter 213: Chapter 213

I would like to think that Eleazar is sane. :)  Honestly I hope he will not be a problem.  I am glad either way that Charlie is being asked to leave.  Jacob too.

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Date: 28 Feb 2013 Title: Chapter 224: Chapter 224

I think this chapter was really sweet, well done. :)

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Date: 19 Feb 2013 Title: Chapter 143: Chapter 143

Yea, the witch is gone!  Its not a house dropped on the miserable cow but lets face it -- she's naturally miserable.  Karma rocks. ;D  I am glad Edward now knows, maybe he'll leap and grab up Bella before he loses her forever...not that he will because I just know they will get their HEA. :D  I've probably said it before but I adore how strong and positive your Bella is.

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Date: 26 Feb 2013 Title: Chapter 212: Chapter 212

I think Charlie will react like the idiot he is.  I know he thinks he loves his daughter but to ignore the shit that's fallen out of Jacob's mouth, to put his daughter in that kind of danger...he doesn't deserve to be a father.  I did love this chapter though. :)

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Date: 27 Feb 2013 Title: Chapter 221: Chapter 221

Poor Bella, she really isn't used to being treated well.  I hope that changes soon. :)

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Date: 26 Feb 2013 Title: Chapter 210: Chapter 210

Jake is a psychotic moron.  He wants the perfect 50's housewife but he was gonna let his friends rape and abuse her.  Geez, he should be locked up somewhere...

I know Eleazar comes in the next chapter but I am glad that Edward keeps things on the up and up so he cannot blackmail him in any way.  I also really like that Edward makes it clear to Charlie that he holds no influence since he's made such poor decisions regarding Bella.

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Date: 27 Feb 2013 Title: Chapter 220: Chapter 220

I am glad Alice will be staying with Jasper.

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Date: 27 Feb 2013 Title: Chapter 219: Chapter 219

I hope Bella will feel safe once they reach Edward's home.

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Date: 28 Feb 2013 Title: Chapter 227: Chapter 227

I look forward to tomorrow.  You certainly have not let me down.  I thought I would wait and read this story when it was completely finished but I was drawn in...and boy am I glad I was! :D  You update so much every day that my naturally impatient nature has been calmed, lol.

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Date: 27 Feb 2013 Title: Chapter 218: Chapter 218

I hope Bella will be alright.

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Date: 26 Feb 2013 Title: Chapter 211: Chapter 211

I am so super glad Bella is of age, they cannot make her go anywhere! :D  If her contract is up what will she do for money though?  Oh and I love that Edward smacked Jake around.

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Date: 28 Feb 2013 Title: Chapter 226: Chapter 226

I think Bella will surprise me -- no matter what her reaction is -- so I will be patient and wait. ;)  I think Bella's reaction may depend on her ability to support herself and if she goes to school or has babies right away...I am eager to find out.

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Date: 01 Mar 2013 Title: Chapter 239: Chapter 239

I like how playful they are together.  I look forward to tomorrow's updates. :)

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Date: 01 Mar 2013 Title: Chapter 236: Chapter 236

I think it was special for her, simply because they were together.

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Date: 01 Mar 2013 Title: Chapter 237: Chapter 237

Oops. ;)  Naw, I think he'll be okay with it.  I like EPOV, I like BPOV too but I love EPOV. :)

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Date: 01 Mar 2013 Title: Chapter 238: Chapter 238

Wow, seven kids?  Dang, I think I would be a bit nervous too.  Still, they'll have forever and always have each other for support. :)

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Date: 04 Mar 2013 Title: Chapter 275: Chapter 275

Aw, this was sweet. :)

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Date: 01 Mar 2013 Title: Chapter 235: Chapter 235

I really liked this chapter. :)

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Date: 01 Mar 2013 Title: Chapter 234: Chapter 234

I admire the restraint it must take to stay still once fully sheathed. :)

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Date: 28 Feb 2013 Title: Chapter 233: Chapter 233

I am glad he cares so much about her and that she wants him just as badly.

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Date: 28 Feb 2013 Title: Chapter 232: Chapter 232

I loved this chapter. :)  I like Bella being aggressive too.

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Date: 28 Feb 2013 Title: Chapter 231: Chapter 231

I think I love it. :)  Will Bella do the accounting Jasper had such trouble with?

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Date: 04 Mar 2013 Title: Chapter 278: Chapter 278

Utter joy?  What can I say, I'm a hopeful one. ;)

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Date: 04 Mar 2013 Title: Chapter 279: Chapter 279

Loved this, so sweet. :)

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Date: 04 Mar 2013 Title: Chapter 280: Chapter 280

I am glad Bella got a ride from Carlisle and Esme and not someone dangerous.

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Date: 20 Feb 2013 Title: Chapter 151: Chapter 151

Aw, well this was just as good.  If Bella can't be gettin' hot loving then at least Alice is!

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Date: 20 Feb 2013 Title: Chapter 150: Chapter 150

Would but I could!  Dang, what a tease.  I am assuming he is at her door?  Yup, I'm the optimistic sort. ;)

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Date: 20 Feb 2013 Title: Chapter 144: Chapter 144

I hope he does not freak out again.  But I also admit I am a total wimp who can read Bella and Edward the united front take on anything.  Hurting each other though just slays me.  I will read no matter what because I read His Cimmerian View and fell in love with your writing.  Btw, I really liked Bella helping him clean up, I thought that was really sweet.

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Date: 18 Feb 2013 Title: Chapter 136: Chapter 136

I am so glad Bella is set and determined not to go home.  Edward really makes a lot of assumptions.  Innocent ones I am sure but really, she flirts with him but he thinks she should marry the first guy who asked?  I would doubt her love for that man...I am guessing Edward thinks that she would have the perfect vanilla life and a HEA if she did so.  I don't think he's mean spirited but he put too much stock into believing Angela when it is obvious she does not care for Bella.  I dunno, I think I'm kinda grumpy with what Edward said about not knowing who would want to marry her because it makes her sound unlovable.  Don't get me wrong, I will cheer when he finally knows the truth, I hope he is suitably contrite.  I just really want to hug Bella right now.  I hope this review did not sound too mean because it was not meant that way at all.  While I am incredibly frustrated with Edward and consider him really foolish for trusting Angela on business that concerns Bella, I am absolutely rooting for them.  I also really love this story.  I hope the next time Bella does not hit Angela back, she's just not worth it.  Aw, what the heck am I saying, I hope Angela is gone! ;)

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Date: 18 Feb 2013 Title: Chapter 135: Chapter 135

I am glad the truth will finally be out.  Angela is an idiot, I hope karma takes a big bite out her and then about a million little ones...

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Date: 04 Mar 2013 Title: Chapter 274: Chapter 274

Lol, living in sin...;)  I am glad Charlie has finally seen the light. :)

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Date: 11 Apr 2013 Title: Chapter 317: Chapter 317 Charlie & Lauren Out-take

I liked this lil outtake.  Well done. :)

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Date: 28 Feb 2013 Title: Chapter 230: Chapter 230

I like that Bella makes him a little off-balanced, a little anxious and nervous, I think its sweet and helps show the emotional component betwen them.

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Date: 04 Mar 2013 Title: Chapter 273: Chapter 273

I'm wowed the Charlie could step over him and not on him, lol. ;)

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Date: 28 Feb 2013 Title: Chapter 229: Chapter 229

Well done. :)

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Date: 04 Mar 2013 Title: Chapter 276: Chapter 276

No clue, but I am eagerly awaiting the answer! :)

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Date: 28 Feb 2013 Title: Chapter 228: Chapter 228

I like that Edward's proposal was true to his personality.  It makes more sense than a mask coming off once the wedding is over, ya know? :)

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Date: 04 Mar 2013 Title: Chapter 277: Chapter 277

I really must have missed a few chapters, I think.  I know I jumped in kinda late so I probably started reading, added you to my favorites, got an alert update and forgot to read the gap...yea me, I have my newest re-readable story. ;)

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Date: 04 Mar 2013 Title: Chapter 283: Chapter 283

No clue, but I look forward to finding out. ;)

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Date: 04 Mar 2013 Title: Chapter 282: Chapter 282

I think she might be able to render him speechless every once in awhile, in the very best of ways, of course. ;)

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Date: 04 Mar 2013 Title: Chapter 281: Chapter 281

I do hope Bella defends herself.  In that situation was she even near a phone to call Alice?  I mean, she couldn't call her Dad.  I do hope she can understand why he's worried but I also hope he can understand that she won't ever be doing it again.

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Date: 28 Feb 2013 Title: Chapter 223: Chapter 223

I like the playful flirting. :)

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Date: 28 Feb 2013 Title: Chapter 222: Chapter 222

I liked this chapter, alot. :)

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Date: 26 Feb 2013 Title: Chapter 216: Chapter 216

Eep, I do hope Edward just got a bit handsy with Tanya or mouthy and that he didn't actually have sex with her.  But yeowch, definitely a bad slip there. ;)

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Date: 17 Feb 2013 Title: Chapter 123: Chapter 123

I love how assetive your Bella is!

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Date: 20 Feb 2013 Title: Chapter 152: Chapter 152

Aw, I liked that Bella teased them a little but did not go too far.  It was just some gentle ribbing. :)

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Date: 20 Feb 2013 Title: Chapter 153: Chapter 153

Thank you for the Rose POV.  I honestly don't mind unbetaed stuff, then again I make plenty of grammatical mistakes so...  I hope his look does not work. ;)

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Date: 20 Feb 2013 Title: Chapter 154: Chapter 154

I like the banter.  I think its hot and sweet at the same time. :)

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Date: 20 Feb 2013 Title: Chapter 155: Chapter 155

Eep!

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Date: 20 Feb 2013 Title: Chapter 156: Chapter 156

I love how they are together.

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Date: 20 Feb 2013 Title: Chapter 157: Chapter 157

I like how Bella does sweet little things for him like getting him lunch.

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Date: 20 Feb 2013 Title: Chapter 158: Chapter 158

Oh dear, I hope it isn't her father...I am so glad Bella is a legal adult.

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Date: 27 Feb 2013 Title: Chapter 217: Chapter 217

Poor Bella, Jacob must have really scared her.  I am so glad Eleazar is sane.  Thank you for that. :) I too, really like your Rose.  I love it when she's tough but not cruel.

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Date: 23 Feb 2013 Title: Chapter 184: Chapter 184

I am glad Jasper called Edward out on his behavior.  I know emotion is irrational by nature but dang if he wasn't mean sometimes.  I am so glad your Bella is such a strong young lady!

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Date: 23 Feb 2013 Title: Chapter 185: Chapter 185

Bella spent $500 for a gift for her boss?  Wowie.  I guess it sorta cements he always owned her heart! :)

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Date: 23 Feb 2013 Title: Chapter 187: Chapter 187

Lol.  I loved this scene.

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Date: 23 Feb 2013 Title: Chapter 188: Chapter 188

I like these EPOVs, they helped fill out the story.  Well done!

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Date: 23 Feb 2013 Title: Chapter 190: Chapter 190

Angela was nuts, I figure familiarity was part of the reason Edward trusted her so much...

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Date: 23 Feb 2013 Title: Chapter 191: Chapter 191

I do wonder what has made Edward so jaded.  No matter, I am glad he has Bella in his life now. :)

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Date: 01 Mar 2013 Title: Chapter 240: Chapter 240

I hope your appointment goes well!  Also, I liked this chapter, very much. :)

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Date: 06 Mar 2013 Title: Chapter 284: Chapter 284

Well, he did tell her not to make a peep. ;)

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Date: 06 Mar 2013 Title: Chapter 285: Chapter 285

Hot!

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Date: 06 Mar 2013 Title: Chapter 286: Chapter 286

Hmm, hot squared. ;)

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Date: 06 Mar 2013 Title: Chapter 287: Chapter 287

Yup, agreed, their perfect match. :D

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Date: 06 Mar 2013 Title: Chapter 288: Chapter 288

I like that Edward is the only one she will ever dance privately for. :)

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Date: 06 Mar 2013 Title: Chapter 289: Chapter 289

I did actually think that Bella had a collection of vibes.  I like this twist though, that's kinda cool. :)

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Date: 06 Mar 2013 Title: Chapter 290: Chapter 290

Lol.

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Date: 06 Mar 2013 Title: Chapter 291: Chapter 291

Eep!  I am so excited for the next chapters...

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Date: 06 Mar 2013 Title: Chapter 292: Chapter 292

She insulted his sister and she thinks she's classy?  She talks like she rolled straight out of the dumpster.

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Date: 06 Mar 2013 Title: Chapter 293: Chapter 293

Aw, I like that Edward will always help her with her battles.  I for some reason thought Rose was his sister, but regardless, she's family. :)  I loved Edward's metaphor.

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Date: 07 Mar 2013 Title: Chapter 294: Chapter 294

Tanya is nuts.  This chapter was awesome though. :D

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Date: 07 Mar 2013 Title: Chapter 295: Chapter 295

This was sweet.

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Date: 07 Mar 2013 Title: Chapter 296: Chapter 296

I liked this, I did not know Charlie and Renee's marriage was arranged...

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Date: 07 Mar 2013 Title: Chapter 297: Chapter 297

I am glad Charlie knows he's made mistakes.  I hope this has opened his eyes to Jacob's true character, I cannot imagine that boy not hurting someone down the line...

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Date: 07 Mar 2013 Title: Chapter 298: Chapter 298

Oh Charlie's moving?  Yea, Bella and her Daddy's relationship can heal from this rift.

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Date: 07 Mar 2013 Title: Chapter 299: Chapter 299

I hope someday soon she wall call him Dad again.  She is being affectionate and open with him.  Still, Jacob must have been terrifying so I can understand her hesitence.

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Date: 07 Mar 2013 Title: Chapter 300: Chapter 300

I am glad he has apologized.

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Date: 07 Mar 2013 Title: Chapter 301: Chapter 301

I hope it is positive. :)

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Date: 07 Mar 2013 Title: Chapter 302: Chapter 302

Ooh, I do hope Jake suffers...he's a monster, he totally deserves it.  Actually I just hope he is neutered of his ability to harm others.

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Date: 07 Mar 2013 Title: Chapter 303: Chapter 303

I like Charlie seeing what is really before his eyes! :)