Reviews by whyuh
Stripped by punkfarie Rated: M starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 63]
Summary: Past Featured Story

Edward and Bella both nearly lose their lives when they lose their first loves. Can they find a reason to live in each other or will their relationship send one of them over the edge? OOC, ExB, AH. Rated M. COMPLETE

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Read & Enjoyed
Chapters: 36 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 245482 Read Count: 20819
[Report This] Published: 26 Jan 2010 Updated: 06 Feb 2010
Reviewer: whyuh Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 28 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 36: Chapter 36 - Epilogue

This truly is a "bundle of wonderful..." start to finish! BRAVA!

whyuh



Author's Response:

thank you! =D

Fourth Quarter by MBella Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 24]
Summary: Past Featured Story

Fourth Quarter

Edward is the star quarterback, Bella is the coach's daughter.  Falling in love can be bittersweet, but what happens when tragedy tears them apart and fate throws them back together years later?

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 31 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 146742 Read Count: 17966
[Report This] Published: 09 Feb 2010 Updated: 10 Feb 2010
Reviewer: whyuh Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: 19 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 31: Chapter 31 Outtake 1

You constantly thanked your readers/reviewers throughout this story...and although I may be late to the game (no pun intended...ok, maybe a little pun ;)) as one of them, can I just say, thank YOU for sharing your journey with US!

This was a beautifully sweet story, with just enough 'coming into their own' and heartache to show they earned their HEA in spades. You did a wonderful job with spinning this tale seamlessly, description changes aside because by the end I could see the dimples flashing and black eyes sparkling in my imagination with every smile they shared.

Your talent, and astounding football knowledge, made for an incredible story. Thank you again for allowing us to ride along with you!

whyuh

Summary: Past Featured Story

 

Bella has grown from an orphaned sixteen year old raised by her older brother Emmett and his friends affectionately known as ‘her boys’, to an up and coming first year medical intern. When a day in the ER turns dangerous can her boys, now members of the best SWAT team in Chicago save her? Eventual Canon pairings. Rated 'NC-17' for strong language, lemons.

 

 

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Newest fanmade banner that I thought was cool and had to add by Twilighted's ebonyy:

 

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's not read yet, Fics to Read, LeslieWhitlock's completed & recommended read stories, Finished, Love to drive's Stories to read, Twilight - Read, Themslovebug90's read stories, Amberina's Completed Favs List, G8or Favor8s Read, Kuu Faves, Completed Stories, Stories I've Already read, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, My Favorite Stories, J's Read and Loved Stories, My favs past present and future , mamih's favorites, TBR
Chapters: 60 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 413119 Read Count: 752919
[Report This] Published: 14 Feb 2010 Updated: 16 Feb 2010
Reviewer: whyuh Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: 03 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 54: Gearing Up and Getting Off

You said something earlier in the story about it possibly being your hottest, or tangiest, lemon you'd written....

Let's just end all doubt here and now - The phone/SURPRISE, I'M HOME! bit o' citrus ya got in this chapter? Sweet mother of mercy!! ---------------THUD--------------

Well done! *stands to applaud*  Oh yeah, BRAVA! Very well done!



Author's Response:

LOL.  Curtsies with a smile.  Why thank you!  I appreciate the applause :)  Glad you liked it!

Sinful Thoughts by vampiremama Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 28]
Summary:

Sinful Thoughts

 

Edward is adopted by the Swans at birth. A growing attraction threatens to destroy a family.


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's not read yet, Ageise02 Current Reads, Love to drive's Stories to read
Chapters: 30 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 84224 Read Count: 25636
[Report This] Published: 19 Feb 2010 Updated: 19 Feb 2010
Reviewer: whyuh Signed
Date: 06 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 30: Epilogue

With the warning at the beginning, I admit I started this story one eye closed and a semi icky look on my face. By the end of the 2nd chapter, I was leaning into the monitor itching to get to the next page!

This is a truly exquisite piece of work. I love the looks back they each take and how they seem to be talking straight to me while still telling the story in an entertaining way. Edward cracks me up with his "side notes."

You took a fantastic plot twist, boxed it up with honest coming of age feelings, then wrapped it with an endearing dialog bow. So well done! Thank you so much for sharing this beautiful tale with us all.

whyuh



Author's Response:

Thank you so much, I really appreciate you taking the time to leave such a wonderful review. I hope that you will check out some of my other fics as well and find them to your liking.

Summary: Past Featured Story

ADC,fanfic

 

Bella is a family attorney & Edward seeks her help. Friendship abounds, maybe more? AH OOC Rated M b/c they are adults & will do adult things! Canon Couples


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 18 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 91018 Read Count: 27772
[Report This] Published: 23 Feb 2010 Updated: 21 Dec 2010
Reviewer: whyuh Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 09 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17, Forever & The Rest of Forever

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Ok, I've got a few things to say about this story so, let's get on with it, shall we?

 

1) Shit fire and save matches! (from Ch 8)

Thank you SO much for this! LOL I've said the first part many a time in my life, but never heard the second part. You had be belly laughing, out loud, gasping for air on this one! Anyone that can give me the giggles so thoroughly deserves the "I'm not worthy" bows! ;)

 

2) "See Spot run. The ball is red. Spot likes the red ball." Yes, this is what my writing sounds like to me. So juvenile. I am almost embarrassed to post each chapter. (from Ch 7)

Now look here lil missy *takes your hand and wrist slaps it* Uh huh! Don't EVER let something so asinine leave your keyboard again. That is just plain silliness in the most absurd of ways.

This story was fun and funny, full of wit and humor, sweet and sassy, and so totally complete...*sighs*

There are no words, and if there are? Well, I can't find them. This was a beautiful read. So pleasing and sweet, yet heart wrenching enough to make it impossible to put down. The only thing I can say is "thank you." Thank you for recognizing your gift and taking time to outline these lovely ideas, thank you for writing them all down and weaving them together with masterfully realistic dialog, and thank you for having the courage to share it. You are blessed with an exquisite talent; please continue to show it to us all as we are all made better for it!

whyuh



Author's Response:

WOW!

Thanks so much for your review sweets! I appreciate from the depths of my heart!

~Stacy