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Summary: Past Featured Story

Twilight AU. After a horrific car accident leaves Bella in a catatonic state, she's transferred to Forks Hospital under the care of Carlisle. What happens when Edward is faced with the lifeless girl in the bed and an undeniable pull begins? Can he bring her back from the hold her mind has on her, or will she be forever lost to the abyss? E&B, AU, Canon pairings.

 

 

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Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Finished, Themslovebug90's read stories, Stories I've Already read, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, My Favorite Stories, Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiSup, Read & Enjoyed
Chapters: 131 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 65741 Read Count: 411877
[Report This] Published: 14 May 2012 Updated: 03 Nov 2012
Reviewer: SimplieSaphire Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: 13 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23

*clapping frantically* <--- does that count. I love this so far and I know I'm a wall flower mostly but I just had to say that I think that this story is wonderful and that I hope she is actually responsive (the tears) on the outside and Edward can hear her either in her head or out (I'm not picky about the how lol) just that he hears her. My heart breaks for her situation, it feels so real. I am completely sucked into your story when i read it. Keep up the awesome chapters you are truly talented. 

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Date: 15 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24

I trust that you will make this up to us because that was evil, lol. I read through this chapter so fast because it seemed like that's how everything was happening to me. It was like an episode of a show playing out in my head and then there was a "To be contunued." Can't wait for tomorrow's chapter hopefully it won't leave us biting our thumbs for the whole weekend at the end like this one. Hehe. 

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Date: 16 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 25

I have faith that you'll let her make it through this. Now I'm going to twiddle my thumbs all weekend until the next update day. I'm actually glad that you put this in because I was trying to figure out how or if Carlisle was going to get back to them. Thank God for Alice. And thank you for the teaser, it's what gives me faith that she'll make it somehow. Edward would be crushed, then the family would be crushed. Not to mention Charlie. But I don't need to tell you that, your the creative genius. Anywho see you at the next post. 

Summary: Past Featured Story

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Bella is a divorced English teacher, who doesn't know she has a vampire in her class.

"Please don't push me away, Bella. Isn't it my choice if I want to be with you? I'm not a child in the way I feel."

"I'm not the older woman who's going to spend a season educating a teenage boy so he can go off and remember me fondly. I'm looking for forever."

"How do you know I couldn't..."

" Because you're a boy, Edward, a beautiful, sweet, confused, boy! You've got your whole life ahead of you. This kind of thing doesn't work out."

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Stories I've Already read
Chapters: 83 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 453800 Read Count: 81083
[Report This] Published: 18 Nov 2013 Updated: 30 May 2014
Reviewer: SimplieSaphire Signed
Date: 02 Dec 2015 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17 Second Chances

I love her comparisons between men, and for a brief minute I thought you may be hinting that Eric is a Quilliette descendant... guess ill have to wait and see!



Author's Response:

Thank you for reading and reviewing.  Considering my story took a detour from the original, where Bella and Edward never really got involved, a lot has changed.  Add in the twenty years, and it's a whole new ballgame.  I didn't think a woman like Bella would exist in a man-free vacuum, so I added Eric.  A little Quileute blood might have been fun, but I was looking for the road less traveled, not what everyone else was doing.  I've read fan fiction where Bella is paired with every member of the pack--and his brother.  That's fine if you're into that, but it's not what I wanted to write.  There are still bound to be strong hints and ties to the original, but Eric isn't a Quileute; he's a transplanted Southern boy.  

Reviewer: SimplieSaphire Signed
Date: 02 Dec 2015 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18 Dark Mysteries

Nooooo, I want andwers, Cullen! There's no time for vampire blood weaknesses! 



Author's Response:

I'm really not sure what you're talking about here.  andwers, Cullen?  If you're looking for a different story, I'm sorry....this is the one I wrote.  As to time, it's a very long tale, and chapter 18 is still early.  Thanks again for the review.  

Reviewer: SimplieSaphire Signed
Date: 02 Dec 2015 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 Ghosts

No I wasn't I meant 'answers' and I know that it's still early in the story with 60+ chapters left. I'm enjoying this story immensely! It wasn't a dig at you, I didn't mean it that way, and I apologize if that's the way it sounded. In my head I got into the moment and wanted him to give her answers, and instead he HAD to run away from her blood. Rationally, I know this is the way you wrote the story, it's your story, but I felt frustrated for Bella, which you wrote her frustration clear as day. 😊 



Author's Response:

Ha!  I am all too familiar with the confusion of missed keys.  No offense taken.  If I were that sensitieve, I couldn't post my writing.  I'm glad you're enjoying the story.  The readers on this site are kinder than where I first posted this one.  There, I had a handful of readers who made demands that I write a certain style or plot, because they wanted to read something cookie-cutter.  My knee-jerk reaction was to encourage them to write their own story, or go back and re-read the one they prefered.  I'm glad it was just a pesky key-stroke.  I'm not allergic to criticism, but my muse doesn't take kindly to direction--even from me.    Thanks for your kind words and reviews, and especially for reading.

Reviewer: SimplieSaphire Signed
Date: 12 Dec 2015 Title: Chapter 28: Chapter 28 Reality Check

Now I'm curious what "understanding" Edward & Lupin came to! :giggles: Thank you for your words. 



Author's Response:

This is a nod to traditional vampire lore, where vampires have mastery of dogs and wolves.  Edward just had to show Lupin who was top dog.  Thanks for reading and reviewing!