Reviews by Nara13
Summary: Past Featured Story

15 yr old Bella has a fairly normal life. That was until her mum's new boyfriend came on the scene. Will Bella survive her new life? Dark Themes, Cannon Pairings. GRAPHIC

Thanks mkystich for the amazing new banner... AGAIN!!! :)


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's not read yet, I Whitlock's read , My Favorite Stories
Chapters: 37 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 89516 Read Count: 311087
[Report This] Published: 21 Jan 2010 Updated: 04 May 2011
Reviewer: Nara13 Signed
Date: 15 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 25 - Free Will

Please, please, please let him run into Charlien and/or see the flyer with her picture on it. I know it will probably be awile but I gotta say that I already can't wait until Aro is brought down. He is one sick mofo!

The Perfect Wife by rmcrms5 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 3541]
Summary: Past Featured Story

After Renee and Phil die in a car accident on Bella’s 17th birthday. She is sent to live with her father, Charlie and brother, James in Forks WA after being separated for 10 years with no contact. Charlie dabbles in training and placement of the “perfect” wife for exclusive clientele. Bella quickly learns that she’s going that she’s going to get more than a high school education. She's going to be educated with a purpose.
I don’t own Twilight

 

 

TPW Avi 

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories, LeslieWhitlock's completed & recommended read stories, Finished, Themslovebug90's read stories, My Favorite Stories, Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiMaf, Read & Enjoyed
Chapters: 55 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 244105 Read Count: 1625277
[Report This] Published: 23 Jan 2010 Updated: 07 Oct 2010
Reviewer: Nara13 Signed
Date: 28 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 49: Chapter 48

I know this makes me a really bad person but I really hope something really awful happens to Carlisle, Marcus and Demetri. Some kind of karmic payback. That would be sweet!



Author's Response:

But of course SOMETHING will happen, just can't tell what yet.  :)

Homecoming by dont_run Rated: M starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 1227]
Summary: Past Featured Story

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A troubling childhood has left Bella shy and scared of her own shadow. Her life is turned upside down when she is sent to live with the Dad and brother she never knew at the age of 15. Can Charlie and Emmett along with Edward and the gang help Bella? E/B, A/J Em/? *abuse is discussed*

 

 

 


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories, I Whitlock's read , Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiHu, Stories I've Already read, My Favorite Stories, luv2write finished reads
Chapters: 36 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 160653 Read Count: 171527
[Report This] Published: 09 Feb 2010 Updated: 23 May 2012
Reviewer: Nara13 Signed
Date: 24 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 26

Oooooo, what a cliffie! Thank you for the new chapter. Can't wait for the next one!!!!!!!!!!

Reviewer: Nara13 Signed
Date: 10 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 27: Chapter 27

Poor Charlie! Bella has got to be just absolutely overwhelmed!!! Please have Edward make it all better. Pretty please? And thank you for giving us the 411 through Em's POV. This was a great chapter. As if we didn't all know how psycho Renee is already, you really laid her bare with this one. Great work! Oh and I want Tanya bulldozed! LOL!

PEOPLE LIKE US by justginger Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 3989]
Summary: Past Featured Story

Edward Cullan is the hottest movie star. Bella Swan is an art grad, in Italy for the summer. Their worlds collide in the most unlikely way.  He unlocks what she has hidden for so long - a dark side...


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Erotica, Family, Fantasy, Friendship, Historical, Horror, Humor, Hurt/Comfort,, Mystery, One-Shot, Parody/Crackfic, Poetry, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Domward's Dungeon, My To Read List, Ageise02's Read Stories, Bdsm stories only, Finished, Twilight - Read, Amberina's Completed Favs List, Kuu Faves, Stories Read by CNYBella, Stories I've Already read, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, My Favorite Stories, J's Read and Loved Stories, Stories I've read, Fav BDSM Fics, My favs past present and future , Read
Chapters: 81 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 1339257 Read Count: 995735
[Report This] Published: 24 Feb 2010 Updated: 04 Dec 2011
Reviewer: Nara13 Signed
Date: 09 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 36: Chapter 36

In my humble opinion they both messed up. Bella should have used her safe words, bottom line, end of story on that one. She can't keep telling him she's green when she's feeling what she's feeling. On the other hand, Edward messed up as well (again just my opinion), big time. Bella is brand new to this and she doesn't know these people and even her little escapade with Alice the one night in no way prepared her for what would happen when she went with Edward. He should have done a much better job in letting her know what things might happen. Yes, he pushed her to ask questions but it's hard to ask questions in regards to things you wouldn't even dream about happening. He showed extremely poor judgment in all 3 instances (Mandy, Angela and the flirting girls). He has his sub so allowing another Dom to practically molest him in front of her is NOT acceptable unless they have spoken about it beforehand and he knows she is alright with this. The same goes for Angela sitting at his feet and engaging the other sub girls in flirtatious banter. There is no room for jealousy in BDSM, on this point, I wholeheartedly agree and at the same time one of the other biggest rules of BDSM is COMMUNICATION. TRUST AND COMMUNICATION is what keeps the jealousy at bay. Just as Bella messed up by not communicating to him with her safe words, he messed up by not communicating what may happen with him and others at the party and asking her how she felt about that. As her Dom, her welfare is his first priority and I feel that at least to a certain degree, he failed in this. I'm just sayin'.



Author's Response:

I thank you so much for your comments and your review.  I am learning so much from everyone and I know that they both messed up, my point was that just because he is EC, he is still just a man who makes mistakes and shows poor judgment on occasion.  I hope you review the next chapter and I hope you enjoy it.

Thanks again,

Michele

Reviewer: Nara13 Signed
Date: 09 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Sorry, I meant Vanessa, not Angela in my earlier review. Haha! Got carried away there.



Author's Response:

I know who you meant - it's okay - I get carried away all the time:)

Reviewer: Nara13 Signed
Date: 13 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 37: Chapter 37

Yay! Real progress from these two!!! Good for them. This was an excellent chapter.



Author's Response:

thanks for the review :)

Could It Be Destiny? by JenRar Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 246]
Summary: Past Featured Story

Could It Be Destiny? by JenRar

Bella Swan opens a bookstore in Port Angeles, which happens to be located right next to the
music store owned by a young man named Edward Cullen. Watch as they meet and form a relationship.

 

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Stories I've Already read
Chapters: 50 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 167136 Read Count: 84834
[Report This] Published: 27 Feb 2010 Updated: 23 Sep 2011
Reviewer: Nara13 Signed
Date: 10 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 29: Chapter 29

Bella cried out and Edward roared. How close do Rose and Emmett's neighbors live? LOL! Very excited for all the meet the parents stuff. Especially eager to read the conversation between Charlie and Edward. Always did love me some Charlie!



Author's Response:

Hehehe  Thanks.  ;)

To The Extreme by dont_run Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 258]
Summary: Past Featured Story

 

He's a cocky and arrogant dare devil. Bella's mind knows she should stay away from him. To bad her body doesn't agree. 

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: G8or Favor8s Read, Stories I've read
Chapters: 19 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 78446 Read Count: 29923
[Report This] Published: 20 Jun 2010 Updated: 12 Nov 2012
Reviewer: Nara13 Signed
Date: 24 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I definitely think you should continue this into a full story. It's really great. If you do continue it can you change it to a M or NC-17 so we can experience some action other than motorcross? LOL! Seriously though, it really is a great story. I hope you keep it going.

Reviewer: Nara13 Signed
Date: 18 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

I really, really, really loooove this Edward. He is all kinds of awesome! So excited to read about Sunday dinner with the parental units. :)

Reviewer: Nara13 Signed
Date: 10 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

That was fantastic! Great chapter!

Reviewer: Nara13 Signed
Date: 29 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

This was FABULOUS! Emmett at a nudist colony? Just doesn't get much better than that!!! LMFAO!!!!!!!!!!!! And Collin is such a sweetie. Can't wait to find out the details on Faith. Happy writing!

Author's Response:

Thanks for the review :0) LOL yea when I was plaining it out Emmett in my head kept begging to go so I said what the hell, and I think it works ;0)

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Edward's POV
"Yea?" I grab my brand fucking new cell phone off the hotel nightstand. The fucker woke me up, this better be important.
"Ed, you awake?" Em's voice comes down the line.
"I am now fucktard." I grumble looking at the 3:30 am flashing on the clock.
"Dude Bella and Rose are wasted, I mean drunk off their asses. I had to carry them out of the bar." He laughs.
"What the fuck Em?" I'm not sure if I'm mad that he called me about drinking women, or that he let them get drunk.
"So we go to Bella's bio Mom's nudist commune cult place, and I mean her Mom greats us butt ass naked. Then we meet this guy with a monster cock, wearing a leather loin cloth. All these people were chanting and dancing naked. It was wild. They tried to get us to get naked and we declined. Well any fucking way..."I interrupt his ass.
"You fucking let them stay there? What the fuck Emmett, you should have loaded them back into the fucking car, and gone back to fucking Seattle!" I yell.

Parachute by KitsuShel Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 1971]
Summary: Past Featured Story

parachute

After finding a child abandoned on the streets of Seattle, Bella Swan raises him as her own. What happens to their lives when his biological family is finally found?

 

 

 

 

 


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories, Finished, My all time favorites, Drive's Stories to read that are Completed and Not completed, Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiHu, Stories I've Already read, My Favorite Stories, Misstoria's Stories to Read, J's Read and Loved Stories, My favs past present and future
Chapters: 38 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 145849 Read Count: 211508
[Report This] Published: 21 Jun 2010 Updated: 04 Feb 2011
Reviewer: Nara13 Signed
Date: 14 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 36: Chapter 35

I love this story so much. I'm so sad it's ending soon! LOL! It's awesome that you put in some Florence & the Machine as I am completely hooked on the Lungs CD right now.



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for reviewing! Over 1000 for this chapter alone between here and FFnet! You guys amaze me! The Monday teasers are up on the Blog. (kitsushel.blogspot.com)

Parachute is up for three Walk of Fame Awards: Angst Goddess, Queen of Hearts and Story of the Year. It's up against some major big ones like University of Edward Masen, Master of the Universe and Emancipation Proclamation, so I don't hold any expectation other than getting squashed like a bug. I am also up for three writing awards as well: Rising Starlet, Hopelessly Devoted and Musical Maestro.

I would adore winning the Hopelessly Devoted award. It's for the one writer that you know you can always count on. I think I've proven to you guys over and over that I'm "hopelessly devoted" to you, with the weekly updates and review replies to each and every reviewer. If you head over there and end up feeling that another author up for the award deserves it more, please follow your heart and vote for them. I just ask you to please keep me in consideration. ^_^

That being said, here are your promised teasers! The first from the next chapter of Parachute and the second from Victoria POV that I've written for the Fandom Against Domestic Violence fundraiser. =)

♥ Shel ♥

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Parachute ~ Chapter 36 Teaser:

Bella stood, drenched head to toe, in the middle of her front lawn. Hot tears streamed down her face as the chilly rain pelted her skin. Her mouth was open slightly in shock, as she gazed down with wide eyes at the man she loved more than life itself. Edward's hopeful, joyous face grinned up at her from his stance on one knee. The ring held in his hand was a single brilliant diamond that was simple, yet elegant.

"Isabella Swan, I have been captivated by you since the moment I first laid eyes on you. That love only grew and expanded as I got to know you and saw first hand what a wonderful mother you are to our son. Forever could never be long enough for me, to feel like I've had long enough with you. Marry me?"

She covered her mouth and let out a sob, before throwing her arms around him and shouting, "Yes!"

They fell together, a mass a limbs and lips, their hearts beating both beating wildly. He pulled away slightly and pushed a lock of rain-saturated hair from her face.

"Let's go inside, please. I don't want you to catch a cold."

When they stood, his eyes were drawn to her white shirt, now completely plastered against her bare breasts, her nipples hard and straining against the fabric. His hand reached out to brush against her breast, causing her to become self conscious and cross her arms across her chest. She laughed lightly and nodded her head towards the house.

"Come on, let's get dry."

Edward let out a loud guffaw. "I'd rather keep you wet, love."

His hands wrapped around her waist and he pulled her back to his chest as they tumbled into the house. Sopping wet clothes soon littered the foyer floor and hands roamed greedily.

"Where is our bedroom?" he asked huskily, sweeping her into his arms.

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Victoria POV Outtake ~ "In the End" teaser:

I won't ever be remembered for my common sense. I know most of you hate me and I'm fine with that. I deserve it. I was a bad, bad girl. For those of you who don't know my story, I'll start at the beginning.

My mother married my father for his money and power. When she'd finally had enough, she left and took half of his net worth, including me. He never seemed to mind. He sent an obscenely large support check once a month, but it always felt like a buy-off. Once he re-married and began a family with his new wife, our interactions were even fewer. Who knows how I would have turned out if he had made more of an effort? He's just as much to blame for my upbringing as my mother is. He knew how she was, yet he still didn't lift a finger to keep me.

Summary: Past Featured Story

 

 

Rebel Bella has been shipped around the U.S. for years to different foster homes after being placed in Child Protective Services. What will happen when she is placed with uptight Edward and his family?  Adult language/Violence/Lemons

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Amberina's Completed Favs List, G8or Favor8s Read, Misstoria's Stories to Read
Chapters: 29 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 134043 Read Count: 42789
[Report This] Published: 07 Jul 2010 Updated: 05 Jul 2011
Reviewer: Nara13 Signed
Date: 08 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 19: Information

The rec in People Like Us is what brought me here and I'm so glad. This is a great story and I eagerly await the next chapter.



Author's Response:

i'm so excited abou the PLU rec!  that was just amazing!  i'm glad you took a chance on my story, and i'm even happier that you're enjoying it!!  thanks so much for reading and reviewing!!  ;)

Diamond in the Rough by lmlx8 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 4248]
Summary: Past Featured Story

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Bella is coming from a bad marriage, and memories that haunt her. After recieving her Master's degree in Psychology, she begins to embrace her submissive nature. When she mets Edward she is drawn to his Dominating character. Can Edward help her to get over the pain from her past, and find peace at his feet.

 

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Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Action, Drama, Humor, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Domward's Dungeon, I Whitlock's read , My Favorite Stories, Fav BDSM Fics
Chapters: 110 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 949046 Read Count: 1255017
[Report This] Published: 19 Jul 2010 Updated: 18 Sep 2014
Reviewer: Nara13 Signed
Date: 13 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 49: Chapter 49

Too much smut? WHAT THE BLOODY HELL? THERE IS NO SUCH THING!!!!!!! And you can tell anyone that gives you grief that I said go find another story and stop killing my buzz man! Your story is EPIC (little Eclipse reference for you there :) and I wait every week with great anticipation for updates. I also LOVE the pace of this story and find it appalling that anyone would ask you to speed it up. Again, WTH? I know I don't review and for that I apologize, it's just me being lazy. However, I am a VERY faithful reader and have been with this story almost from the beginning. I will be so sad when the ride is over so you take as long as you need to, k? K. Hugs!



Author's Response:

That's what I said but it was more along the lines of ..."you have got to be kidding me" ....Thanks for reading I have this weeks teaser for you ...lml...

“It’s just the food” I told him as he followed me to the door barking the whole time “Seth!” I admonished while shutting down the alarm and opening the door to a very stunned Irena.

 

“Since when do you have a dog Edward?”

 

I didn’t respond to her question instead sighing heavily “What can I do for you Irena?”

 

“You can invite me in” She said as if it should be obvious.

 

Hesitantly I moved to the side to allow her entrance locking the door but leaving the alarm off, I wasn’t taking any chances. She stood in my living room watching Seth as he sat by my feet.

 

“I never thought you to be a dog lover” The sweetness in her voice confused me because the last time we spoke it was anything but friendly. That was the day she and Caius attacked Bella for which I found their actions deplorable.

 

“Cut the crap Irena why are you here?” My tone was rude but she deserved it and I didn’t trust her.

Summary:

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Dr. Edward Anthony Masen Cullen is a world renowned pediatric neurologist, he´s also a very sought after Dominant living in the Seattle area. What happens when the thrill of the playroom is no longer enough? What happens when he wants more than just a Friday through Sunday arrangement... Bella Swan a very young and very successful Corporate Attorney, who happens to be secretly crushing on her best friends older brother. It all starts with a dream, but after a very short, but failed marriage, Bella decides it´s time to give in to her submissive nature. With the help of her best friend and a blind date, can Bella finally find all the things her live is missing. ExB Rated for BDSM themes and lemony goodness. 

 

A very big thank you to the wonderful Kris Mkystich for my new banner!  Isn´t it sexy!!! Check her out in the December Drabble Wars!!  http://www.fanfiction.net/s/8769101/3/School-Of-Mischief

 

 

Winner of a Tomato Soup Award!

 

 

Nomimated for two Wordsmith Awards!

 

 

 

Voted Must Read Monday by Twi Girls Next Door

 

 

Winner of two Wordsmith Awards!

 

 

 

 


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Erotica, Romance
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Domward's Dungeon, Bdsm stories only, Twilight - Read, Drive's Stories to read that are Completed and Not completed, Can't wait for an update, Stories I've Already read, My Favorite Stories, Misstoria's Stories to Read, J's Read and Loved Stories, Fav BDSM Fics
Chapters: 31 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 312058 Read Count: 389615
[Report This] Published: 07 Nov 2010 Updated: 19 Aug 2016
Reviewer: Nara13 Signed
Date: 21 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 3: REVENGE IS A DISH... BEST SERVED COLD...

I LOOOVE this story. I saw it rec'd on People Like Us and I'm so glad she told her readers about you. Super excited to see the next chapter and the next and the next and the next . . . well you get the picture. Happy writing!



Author's Response:

 

Wow I´m blown away by the response this story is getting. I really want to thank each and everyone of you for reading and reviewing. Each review is specail and you guys keep me going and make want to keep you happy. Thanks for the patience as I move these two along, even those of you with ´forced patience´... you know who you are! lol! i love the threats of taking me into the playroom for a punishment scene.. What can I say DomWard owns me. Hang in there with me and let´s enjoy this crazy ride!!  *Happy Thanksgiving*


Laterzzz:P

 

Krazi

xoxoxo