Reviews by mystic1709
Parachute by KitsuShel Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 1971]
Summary: Past Featured Story

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After finding a child abandoned on the streets of Seattle, Bella Swan raises him as her own. What happens to their lives when his biological family is finally found?

 

 

 

 

 


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories, Finished, My all time favorites, Drive's Stories to read that are Completed and Not completed, Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiHu, Stories I've Already read, My Favorite Stories, Misstoria's Stories to Read, J's Read and Loved Stories, My favs past present and future
Chapters: 38 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 145849 Read Count: 211508
[Report This] Published: 21 Jun 2010 Updated: 04 Feb 2011
Reviewer: mystic1709 Signed
Date: 10 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 15

im loving this story more and more with every chapter cant wait to find out what happens.



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for your review! The Monday teases are up on the Blog (http://kitsushel.blogpot.com) as we speak, so check them out if you'd like! Included this week are teasers for the next Outtake, titled: Save Me San Francisco.

Also, today is the last day to vote in The Hidden Star Awards! Even if you decide not to vote for Parachute (Best Canon Category). stop by and support your favorite authors/stories that might be up for awards! Link is on my profile and up on the Blog!

XoXo

Shel


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"Good afternoon, Mr. Cullen," a beautiful brunette with ice blue eyes simpered, as she stood from her seat behind a large desk. "I was told you wouldn't be in the office for a few weeks." 

Bella quirked an eyebrow at the girl's blatant flirtatiousness. She looked over at Edward and noticed that his posture immediately straightened and his voice took on a cooler tone.

"Gianna," he nodded to the woman. "I'm only stopping by to grab a few things and to show my family around a little bit."
Bella's eyes cut to his face, surprised to have herself included in that statement. He smiled gently at her before leading her and Jack towards the large corner office.

"Family?" Gianna asked, confused. She didn't spare Bella a second glance, but her jaw dropped as soon as she got a good look at Jack. "Oh my God," she whispered and sat down quickly. As soon as Edward's door closed behind them, she picked up her phone and dialed.

"Jane? You are not going to believe who just walked in here!"    

 

Play With Me by angela4148 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 236]
Summary: Past Featured Story

Edward gets talked into meeting Bella, a Dominatrix who is looking for a new submissive. Will Edward hand over control to a woman who he barely knows? Will Bella lose some of the control she fights so hard to keep? ALL EPOV. Cannon Pairs, lots-O-lemons and funnies.

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Wonderful World of Dommella, Ageise02's Read Stories, Bdsm stories only, My all time favorites, Drive's Stories to read that are Completed and Not completed, Fav BDSM Fics
Chapters: 21 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 81629 Read Count: 45276
[Report This] Published: 09 Jul 2010 Updated: 30 Dec 2010
Reviewer: mystic1709 Signed
Date: 21 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 15: Ch 14 Antibiotics are the Devils Candy

yea i kinda figured after she was getting sick cause of the turkey after getting over being sick. suprising how meny women dont know that if you take antibiotics it pretty much cancels out birth control pills. (meat made me sick with my youngest durring first trimester lol)



Author's Response:

You'd be surprised how often women don't know that LOL thanks so much for reading <3

Summary: Past Featured Story

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28 year old English teacher, Bella Swan is dreading being dragged to her 10 year reunion with Alice; until a certain social networking site offers her a very welcome blast from the past... BxE, AH. NC-17 for lemons in later chapters.

 

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Romance
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Stories Read by CNYBella, Bella's Must Reads!
Chapters: 43 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 126861 Read Count: 61925
[Report This] Published: 06 Sep 2010 Updated: 13 Aug 2011
Reviewer: mystic1709 Signed
Date: 15 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12

so very well written by the end i was in tears. my mother and grandmother went threw that same thing at about the same stage of pregnancy. its not an easy thing to go threw and my mom still has a hard time every year around his duedate. i wouldnt wish this experience on anyone, so sad.



Author's Response:

It's a pain which never goes away. It was the anniversary of the day I lost and gave birth to my twin sons on Sunday just past, and although it gets "easier" - it will never leave and you'll never forget x

Summary: Past Featured Story

 

Bella Swan is looking forward to going to college, when she is raped and left for dead. She is sent away when her parents find out about her pregnancy. She meets Dr. Edward Cullen who has come to help his mother. Can Love truly Heal? Human/rape/language

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02 Current Reads, Themslovebug90's read stories, Amberina's Completed Favs List, Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiHu, luv2write finished reads
Chapters: 22 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 61003 Read Count: 59003
[Report This] Published: 02 Dec 2010 Updated: 05 Mar 2012
Reviewer: mystic1709 Signed
Date: 15 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16 Bad Company

ah bloody hell was a cliffy lol id smack that bitch if she was my mother.

Fold Your Wings by Jadalulu Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 1036]
Summary:

'The liberties he assumes with my body should enrage me, anger me beyond my own sanity. But it's just not that simple.' Encounters born of need. Consequences neither saw coming. Guard your hearts. Not the ExB you're used to. 

 


Categories: Twilight, All Human
Characters: None
Genre: Drama
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: My All-Time Favorites, Fics to Read, I Whitlock's read , Ageise02 WIP Reads, My Favorite Stories
Chapters: 22 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 104224 Read Count: 143206
[Report This] Published: 18 Apr 2011 Updated: 04 Dec 2011
Reviewer: mystic1709 Signed
Date: 15 May 2011 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 13

well he has a point. want wait to see how this turns out.

Summary:

After a night out with friends, Bella wakes up with a raging case of WTF did I do last night? Might as well blame it on the alcohol because really, what else can you blame your stupidity on? O/S

Blame Banner

Banner by the awesomely talented vajanet


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Humor
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 3364 Read Count: 923
[Report This] Published: 02 Jun 2011 Updated: 02 Jun 2011
Reviewer: mystic1709 Signed
Date: 02 Jun 2011 Title: Chapter 1: Blame It On The Alcohol

lol that was pretty funny. 



Author's Response:

Thanks for reading and reviewing!

 

Strawberry Wine by Isis Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 255]
Summary: Past Featured Story

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Seventeen year old Alli Wilson falls hard and fast for the cowboy next door. She lies about her age, and has the most magical summer of her life. Things get down right awkward once school starts and she stumbles in to her AP English class to find the cowboy next door is her new teacher.

First assignment? An Essay: How I spent my summer vacation.

Lemons.

 

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Categories: Original Fiction, Romance
Characters: None
Genre: Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: Romantic Comedy
Series: G8or Favor8s Read
Chapters: 34 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 54159 Read Count: 21171
[Report This] Published: 18 Jun 2011 Updated: 09 Mar 2012
Reviewer: mystic1709 Signed
Date: 28 Feb 2012 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24

yea we have all had girls like that in school but i always found it best to resist the urge to punch her face in and just ignore her every thing dont even show any reaction and blow it off like its nothing and they stop because usually they act like that either they want to make themselves feel better or they just want the attention. (or both) and when you dont give them the reaction they want they will move on to someone else....that being said i love this story so far cant wait to see what happens next.



Author's Response:

Yeah, Yvette is a typical snarky bully. Sometimes they get bored with you and other times they try harder to get a reaction from you.

Thanks for reviewing!

Summary:

Bella is asked out on a date by fellow student, at Seattle University, Jacob Black. She's somewhat eager to go out with him, having felt some kind of physical attractiont to him.

But what happens when she takes down his number incorrectly?

Bella and Edward had an unusual meeting just over a year ago. When Bella took down a friend's phone number, incorrectly, she proceeded to text Edward instead, forming a fast friendship with him and eventually falling in love. A year later and once again their relationship is via text and email as Edward is gaining some valid work experience while helping those less fortunate, in third world countries. Edward has big plans for his return and Bella has a secret which may throw a spanner in the works.


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: One-Shot, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Love to drive's Stories to read set 2, G8or Favor8s Read
Chapters: 2 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 20337 Read Count: 6726
[Report This] Published: 06 Jul 2011 Updated: 07 Apr 2012
Reviewer: mystic1709 Signed
Date: 06 Jul 2011 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

that was so sweet. loved it.



Author's Response:

Thanks for your review x

Selfish by mmsinful Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 378]
Summary: Past Featured Story

 

Bella left everything behind for her husband the moment she married young. Now, as the years have gone by and her life has become a cycle of regret, she decides to finally be selfish and love herself instead. Drabble fic. Rated NC-17 cause you never really know. E/B

Banner done by Christine: 

@Christag_banner
christag_banners@yahoo.com
www.christagbanners.blogspot.com


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Lilyellacullens want to read list!
Chapters: 70 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 32975 Read Count: 63661
[Report This] Published: 02 Oct 2011 Updated: 07 Dec 2011
Reviewer: mystic1709 Signed
Date: 06 Oct 2011 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15

i would be pissed mainly cause he is giving alice what she wanted to begin with, to have it hard and dirty not just slow and soft. not to mention its against the girlfriend code to hook up with an ex that fast after a breakup and chances are its not the first time. that friend would have alot of work to do to get back on my good side if it was me.

Hope Springs by justginger Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 1133]
Summary: Past Featured Story

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"Where would you go if you are trying to start a new life but you had nowhere to go and no one to care?  Bella Swan has been alone for most of her life, she is young and she is scared, but now she has another life to protect.  She is heading for a new country - a new life and then she ends up in HOPE SPRINGS.  Her life intertwines with all the eccentric characters in this little piece of heaven in Vermont and just like that - she will never be the same.  She meets the Sherriff, the truck driver, the semi-retired doctor, the lawyer, the farmer, and the new best friends, but it is the new young doctor in town that turns her life upside down.  Is he as stuck up as he seems or does he have a wild side?  Is Bella as tough and as jaded as she seems?  Will she run, or will she allow the people in this town to teach her to hope, to dream, and to love?"

NEW BANNER BY YSAR!! (ISN'T IT AWESOME??)

HOPE SPRINGS

 


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Humor, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories, To Read, To Read (Geddy), Kuu Faves, Stories I've Already read, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, J's Read and Loved Stories, My favs past present and future , Read
Chapters: 40 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 432038 Read Count: 218319
[Report This] Published: 17 Dec 2011 Updated: 24 Dec 2012
Reviewer: mystic1709 Signed
Date: 01 Mar 2012 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14 - 'On the first day of Christmas...'

while he may be right that they needed to stop but he should have worded that differently cause of course the way he said it made her think he didnt want her. he sould have said we need to stop for now and slow down that they arnt ready for that step yet cause he just got back. hopefully soon he clears that up. now im going to be wondering till next update to see what happens lol.

Wrecked with Bella by jkazzie Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 583]
Summary: Past Featured Story

The Cullen's and Bella find themselves ship wrecked on a desert island in the Pacific.
AH, with canon pairings. 


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Action, Adventure, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: Action-Adventure
Series: To Read, To Read (Geddy), Stories I've Already read, Misstoria's Stories to Read, My favs past present and future
Chapters: 44 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 307616 Read Count: 106447
[Report This] Published: 02 Jan 2012 Updated: 30 Dec 2013
Reviewer: mystic1709 Signed
Date: 15 Apr 2012 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17 - Moody Blues

im thinking (and have been for awhile) that alice may be bipolar and is currently at a low point and of course has no meds.



Author's Response:

Hi mystic1709

Thanks for your review to chapter 17. You're right about Alice's meds, but not the condition - you're close though.

More on Alice coming up soon.

Regards, Jkazzie

Reviewer: mystic1709 Signed
Date: 04 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 27: Chapter 27 - Teaser ...

yay shes alive and that bastard is going down. ....but.... what about vicky? where is she? cant wait to find out



Author's Response:

Hi mystic1709

Thanks for reviewing the chapter 27 teaser.

Of course she's alive honey, it wouldn't be a story without bella! :)

I hope you enjoyed chapter 28 as well.

Vivi will be back ... sometime.

Look out for chapter 29 sometime this weekend.

Regards, Jkazzie

Coming Home by Sarges Girls Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 2243]
Summary: Past Featured Story

Coming Home by Sarge's Girls

School teacher Bella sends a care package and letter to Army sergeant Edward, who is stationed in Afghanistan.
They begin a relationship through letters, phone calls, and video chats.
There's love, there's language, and there's adult situations, plus a strong, independent Bella and the Edward we all know and love.


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Friendship, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Finished, My all time favorites, Themslovebug90's read stories, Stories Read by CNYBella, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, My Favorite Stories, Stories I've read, My favs past present and future , Read & Enjoyed
Chapters: 176 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 253102 Read Count: 661144
[Report This] Published: 03 Jun 2012 Updated: 06 Oct 2012
Reviewer: mystic1709 Signed
Date: 26 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 118: Chapter 119: Bella

some military wives might but chances are they wont because its such a short time they are in tampa. if it was for a year or 2 then yea most would. (hubby was in the army for a term)

Feet by DurtyNelly Rated: M starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 12]
Summary:

Winner of the Most Shocking Ending Award in the 2011 Fetlife Contest. 

Shoe shoping has never been this horrifying... 

 


 

Rating: M for mild violence and gore. 

Genre: Horror

Length: Short Story

Beta: Edward's Chipper


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Horror
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 2369 Read Count: 869
[Report This] Published: 05 Jun 2012 Updated: 05 Jun 2012
Reviewer: mystic1709 Signed
Date: 27 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

wow have you ever considered going into writing horror novels you would do very well i think.

Wisp by judo_lin Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 871]
Summary: Past Featured Story

wisp

 

Edward wins more than he bargained for at what was supposed to be a friendly poker game. AH.


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: None
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Drive's Stories to read that are Completed and Not completed, Can't wait for an update, My Favorite Stories, My favs past present and future
Chapters: 63 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 304154 Read Count: 221078
[Report This] Published: 06 Jun 2012 Updated: 23 Nov 2014
Reviewer: mystic1709 Signed
Date: 04 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 25

i did some searching and it looks like the other story was removed from fanfic. which is a good thing because i love this story and its a shame when others try to take credit for your original idea.

Glass by momma2fan Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 226]
Summary: Past Featured Story

Three women develop a close bond despite having never met face to face. When tragedy strikes one of them, they band together to help her heal. A story about friendship, loss, and love.

 

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Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Friendship
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: To Read
Chapters: 20 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 29708 Read Count: 33974
[Report This] Published: 10 Dec 2012 Updated: 23 Apr 2013
Reviewer: mystic1709 Signed
Date: 25 Mar 2013 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16

lol that was a funny way to end it sadly there is a whole generation that wont get it.

Reviewer: mystic1709 Signed
Date: 28 Jan 2013 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

that was just mean lol :D cant wait for the next chapter.