Reviews by BlackGreen
The Perfect Wife by rmcrms5 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 3541]
Summary: Past Featured Story

After Renee and Phil die in a car accident on Bella’s 17th birthday. She is sent to live with her father, Charlie and brother, James in Forks WA after being separated for 10 years with no contact. Charlie dabbles in training and placement of the “perfect” wife for exclusive clientele. Bella quickly learns that she’s going that she’s going to get more than a high school education. She's going to be educated with a purpose.
I don’t own Twilight

 

 

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories, LeslieWhitlock's completed & recommended read stories, Finished, Themslovebug90's read stories, My Favorite Stories, Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiMaf, Read & Enjoyed
Chapters: 55 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 244105 Read Count: 1625348
[Report This] Published: 23 Jan 2010 Updated: 07 Oct 2010
Reviewer: BlackGreen Signed
Date: 05 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 50: Chapter 49

stil the same i cant see the chapter whats wrong in other storys is the same

Reviewer: BlackGreen Signed
Date: 05 Mar 2010 Title: The Perfect Wife

" Story text is not saving while we transfer to the new dedicated server. This problem should be fixed shortly. Please bear with us while we get everything set up. Thank you. " here is the problem :)

Summary: Past Featured Story

Bella is 17 and tired of being the 'good girl'. Senior year calls for change. She finds it in the arms of 25 yr old Edward. Consequences for her choices cause a ripple effect that even she could never have been prepared for.

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Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: My All-Time Favorites, My Favorite Stories
Chapters: 29 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 71042 Read Count: 116432
[Report This] Published: 08 Feb 2010 Updated: 02 Jun 2015
Reviewer: BlackGreen Signed
Date: 17 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

I need more fast :P I like Edward that way and Bella hmm she is " calm water " she can't deny she likes it

Summary:

Bella Swan is starting a new job with the FBI. Not only does she have to prove to the boys that she belongs but she has to face the demons from her past before they find her. NC-17 for language and lemons B/E, R/Em, A/J, Es/C

 

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Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: G8or Favor8s Read, My Favorite Stories, The FBI Saga, to read
Chapters: 41 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 95413 Read Count: 135502
[Report This] Published: 15 Apr 2010 Updated: 25 May 2010
Reviewer: BlackGreen Signed
Date: 21 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

hmm i think .....i think that ......i think that i love it and that i NEEED MORE FAST :)



Author's Response:

Thank you!!

A Perfect Love by Robicorn Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 791]
Summary: Past Featured Story

Dr Edward Cullen is a twenty-six year old single dad who is sexually frustrated until he meets his sister Alice's college roommate Bella Swan. Sparks fly over Thanksgiving weekend. Lemons. Collab with Robinated Cont of 1 shot for Ninapolitins DILF contest

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Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's not read yet, Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiHu, Stories I've Already read, Brooklyn - to read, luv2write finished reads, My favs past present and future
Chapters: 20 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 113225 Read Count: 106344
[Report This] Published: 16 Apr 2010 Updated: 16 Oct 2010
Reviewer: BlackGreen Signed
Date: 19 May 2010 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12

Gee stupid Kate.... I want Emma back ....

Married to the Enemy by Gelix Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 1706]
Summary: Past Featured Story

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After a night of celebration in Vegas, Bella finds herself married to the man who made her life a living hell for seven years. Follow her as she finds true love where she least expected it!

AU/AU OCC. Canon pairing. Rated M for future lemons.

 


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: None
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's not read yet, LeslieWhitlock's completed & recommended read stories, I Whitlock's read , Amberina's Completed Favs List, Kuu Faves, Misstoria's Stories to Read, My favs past present and future , Kit's Must Reads!
Chapters: 50 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 315953 Read Count: 297714
[Report This] Published: 14 May 2010 Updated: 28 Jan 2011
Reviewer: BlackGreen Signed
Date: 08 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 21: Plans

Baby Cullen would be great :)



Author's Response:

Okay, thank you for your opinion! :)

xx
Gelix

Parachute by KitsuShel Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 1971]
Summary: Past Featured Story

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After finding a child abandoned on the streets of Seattle, Bella Swan raises him as her own. What happens to their lives when his biological family is finally found?

 

 

 

 

 


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories, Finished, My all time favorites, Drive's Stories to read that are Completed and Not completed, Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiHu, Stories I've Already read, My Favorite Stories, Misstoria's Stories to Read, J's Read and Loved Stories, My favs past present and future
Chapters: 38 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 145849 Read Count: 211604
[Report This] Published: 21 Jun 2010 Updated: 04 Feb 2011
Reviewer: BlackGreen Signed
Date: 13 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 11

I love it....I hope that Edward will be more nicer to Bella she taked care for his son for god sake...



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for your review! For those of you who are new to the story, I update every Friday and post teasers on Mondays. The latest teases are up on the Blog (http://kitsushel.blogspot.com/) as we speak, along with some new pictures from this upcoming chapter! We're up to 428 reviews here, so I wanted to remind everyone that the 500th reviewer here will get to pick the subject of one of the Outtakes, just like the 1000th on FFnet and the 500th on Twilighted did. Thank you again for all of your love and support!


XoXo

Shel


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"Wait, you're staying in his house instead of the hotel? Bella, is that really safe? I mean, I know you want to make everyone happy, but you've gotta think about your own safely, seriously!" Alice chastised.

"Calm down, woman. It's his parents house, which is enormous and beautiful. I figured it would be fine, since I was calling you and Dad to let you know where I would be. Just in case you needed somewhere to start looking for the body."

"Bella, do not joke about this! I am going on record as saying that I completely disagree with this decision."

"Duly noted, Alice."

Reviewer: BlackGreen Signed
Date: 20 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 12

I love it and that part : " Just in case you needed somewhere to start looking for the body." - you know its just hilarious. Its good that Edward apologize to her...I cant wait to see how it will end...

 



Author's Response:

 

Thank you so much for your review! Just in case you're unaware, the story updates every Friday and I post teasers on Mondays. The latest teases are up on the Parachute Blog as we speak! This past weekend was absolutely crazy and hectic for me, so I wouldn't be looking for Parachute to update early this week! Friday around 1:00 PM, EST will more than likely be when it posts! 

I love you guys and I'm always happy to hear your thoughts, whether it's on FB, Twitter, the Blog or the Twilighted thread. You guys rock my world!

<3 Shel


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As Bella yawned and stretched, her hand hit something soft and feathery. She opened her eyes and saw her fingers resting on auburn hair. Warm green eyes smiled happily at her. She sat up quickly and glanced around the room before turning back to the person in her bed.

"What are you doing?" she asked, slightly confused at his presence.     

 

Summary:

For the past eight years, Emmett, Bella, and Edward have been siblings thanks to the marriage of Edward's father to Em and Bella's mom.  Edward and Bella are best friends, but as their world expands to include the world of college, so does the relationship between Bella and Edward.  Will their family survive when Bella realizes she has more than brotherly love for her other brother?

 

 

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Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Romance
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's not read yet, Finished, Love to drive's Stories to read, Amberina's Completed Favs List, Completed Stories, Stories I've Already read, Edwards Paradox Completed Favourites, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, Brooklyn - to read, Read & Enjoyed
Chapters: 24 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 73513 Read Count: 106923
[Report This] Published: 10 Sep 2010 Updated: 25 Jan 2011
Reviewer: BlackGreen Signed
Date: 10 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 1: My Other Brother

Nice idea I like that story a LOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOT can't wait for next.

Summary:

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Bella and Edward have grown up practically hating each other. Friends and family will force them closer than ever before. Will they try to fight it, or give in? AH/AU OCC. Canon pairing. Rated M for future Lemons.


Categories: Twilight, All Human
Characters: None
Genre: Romance
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: My favs past present and future
Chapters: 22 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 113597 Read Count: 27217
[Report This] Published: 22 Sep 2010 Updated: 25 Feb 2011
Reviewer: BlackGreen Signed
Date: 22 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Rocking Car

I'M UNCONDITIONALLY IN LOVE keep writing this is great



Author's Response:

Thank you SO SO much! :D

xx
Gelix

Reviewer: BlackGreen Signed
Date: 29 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 2: The Party

It was nice of Jake to get her back home... I hope that everything will be ok...I NEED NEXT ONE :)

Summary: Past Featured Story

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When single Mom, Bella, opted to drive her children to Colorado for their visitation with their father, she never dreamed she would find something unexpected while stranded in a winter storm.  Can Edward heal Bella’s wounds and restore her faith in men, love, and herself?

 

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Romance
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Amberina's Completed Favs List, Completed Stories, Stories I've Already read, Edwards Paradox Completed Favourites
Chapters: 10 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 44043 Read Count: 29843
[Report This] Published: 18 Dec 2010 Updated: 31 Dec 2010
Reviewer: BlackGreen Signed
Date: 19 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Sounds awesome from the beggining I love it !!! Can't wait for next chap.. Good job

The Anomaly by A Cullen Wannabe Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 22]
Summary:

 

Rebekah Gilbert, youngest sister of John and Grayson, fled Mystic Falls after her eldest brother’s funeral when truths long buried about her past were uncovered.  In an attempt to keep her family safe, she left only to return a year later in hopes of protecting her niece, Elena, from the things that go bump in the night.  Imagine her surprise when she returned to find Elena surrounded by more mythical creatures than she ever suspected.  As she merges back into life in Mystic Falls, she eventually reveals the reason why she’s there and how she may have the answer to the question of how to save Elena from sacrifice in order to break the curse of the sun and the moon…if only Damon will allow her to do what she needs to do in order to save more than one life with a single sacrifice of her own.

 

 

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Categories: The Vampire Diaries/The Originals, Alternate Universe
Characters: Damon/Elena
Genre: Drama, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 21 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 57401 Read Count: 3571
[Report This] Published: 04 Mar 2011 Updated: 24 May 2011
Reviewer: BlackGreen Signed
Date: 08 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

This should be in real episodes VD I love this story it's amazing can't wait for next chapter :) good job :)



Author's Response:

Thank you!!!  And thanks for reviewing

Reviewer: BlackGreen Signed
Date: 22 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16

wow I didn't expect THAT .....I had this in mind but just as a thought ..and here it is a BABY :) I love more and more this story...

Summary: Past Featured Story

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Quiet Storm Sequel. 

How does the head of the world's most powerful crime family juggle being a father, husband, and boss? Surrounded by trouble, Edward tries to manage his organization while struggling to spend time with his children and wife, Bella.

Two years have passed since the epilogue; do Bella and Edward still have what it takes to Weather the Storm? OOC. AH. Mobward/Daddyward. 

Edward/Bella. 

 


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Humor, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: My All-Time Favorites, Love to drive's Stories to read, Love to drive's Stories to read set 2, Themslovebug90's read stories, G8or Favor8s Read, Kuu Faves, Stories Read by CNYBella, Completed Stories, Edwards Paradox Completed Favourites, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, My Favorite Stories, To Read , All Time Favorites, Storm Series, My favs past present and future
Chapters: 60 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 535952 Read Count: 1533567
[Report This] Published: 10 Aug 2011 Updated: 24 Aug 2012
Reviewer: BlackGreen Signed
Date: 18 Nov 2011 Title: Chapter 19: A Tight Fit

I'm a silent reader but I just couldn't help myself to not write a review. I absolutly adore your writing, I fall in love with this story from the beginning. It's horrible that there are so mean people in this world. If they hate your writing why bother to read or write to you ( just get the f*** out ppl ). Keep going you are an amazing writer.

Hurricane by KitsuShel Rated: M starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 5]
Summary:

Would you kill to save a life?

My oneshot in Breath-of-twilight's 2011 Halloween Countdown.    


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, One-Shot, Suspense/Thriller
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 1491 Read Count: 426
[Report This] Published: 05 Dec 2011 Updated: 05 Dec 2011
Reviewer: BlackGreen Signed
Date: 05 Dec 2011 Title: Chapter 1: Hurricane

Nice one. That could be a good long term story. I like the ending and that Edward was with her all the time. At the beginning I thought it was Edward's story so I had a nice suprise that it was Bella. Keep going I love your stories.