Reviews by Saphira
Summary: Past Featured Story

15 yr old Bella has a fairly normal life. That was until her mum's new boyfriend came on the scene. Will Bella survive her new life? Dark Themes, Cannon Pairings. GRAPHIC

Thanks mkystich for the amazing new banner... AGAIN!!! :)


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's not read yet, I Whitlock's read , My Favorite Stories
Chapters: 37 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 89516 Read Count: 311074
[Report This] Published: 21 Jan 2010 Updated: 04 May 2011
Reviewer: Saphira Signed
Date: 18 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21 –Eyes Upon Us

The story you write is creepy, like realy realy creepy, but i like it a lod even if it gives me chills... prrr

Anyway I'm waiting for new chapter... :P

Dragon Stones by katmom Rated: T starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 50]
Summary:

 

Edward and his dragon companion, Volterra, believe that Volterra's mate is lost...gone either in death or time. 

Bella, a servant in the castle, discovers and makes a connection with Kathea, a long dead dragon. 

She is asked to help with Kathea's daughter. She and the young dragon, ShayTan, become Bond-Mates. 

 DRAGON STONES was the THIRD PLACE WINNER in the

Once Upon a Twilight Contest! 

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Categories: Twilight
Characters: None
Genre: Fantasy
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 8 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 55360 Read Count: 2688
[Report This] Published: 05 Mar 2010 Updated: 30 Jan 2011
Reviewer: Saphira Signed
Date: 04 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7 Volterra

Ahhhh, I just love your story... :D

I have been liked dragons since I can remember and you have made them almost perfect, I say almost because perfect dosn't exist, but if it would, then it be just like in your story... :D I'd like a lot to say, but I just can't seem to remember the words I need... XP Anyway your story really really good and like I said pefore: I love it! :D

I tottaly hope that next chapter comes reallly soon! :D

 

I'm sorry, if my wording is wierd, but it's like that beacause I have learned english only some years... :)



Author's Response:

Thank you for reading, Saphira...I love dragons too...

I'm working on the next chapter now...

Kathie

Summary: Past Featured Story

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An evil Volturi experiment, Werewolves and Vampires, Imprints, and our favorite clumsy girl. This will be a much different Twilight story...Summary is in the first page, so click it!

Disclaimer: I do not own Stephanie's characters as you all know. I hope you enjoy!

fs

 

 

 


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Edward, Renesmee/Jacob
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 80 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 141698 Read Count: 16318
[Report This] Published: 21 Apr 2010 Updated: 23 Sep 2010
Reviewer: Saphira Signed
Date: 17 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 52: Chapter 52- Woo Girl

I like your story. A Lot. And I do hope to see next chapter soon:D

Haunted by cullens_pet Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 55]
Summary: Past Featured Story

Create your own banner at mybannermaker.com!

 

 

Draco has waited for years to claim her for his own. He has a plan and nothing the Head Girl does is going to stop him. Originally a one-shot song fic that due to demand has been expanded into a full story.


Categories: Harry Potter
Characters: None
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 6 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 16310 Read Count: 9208
[Report This] Published: 25 Apr 2010 Updated: 12 May 2010
Reviewer: Saphira Signed
Date: 20 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

I think i like every story you write and i realy like this story a lot. :D

Hope to read next chapter soon... :)

Married to the Enemy by Gelix Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 1706]
Summary: Past Featured Story

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After a night of celebration in Vegas, Bella finds herself married to the man who made her life a living hell for seven years. Follow her as she finds true love where she least expected it!

AU/AU OCC. Canon pairing. Rated M for future lemons.

 


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: None
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's not read yet, LeslieWhitlock's completed & recommended read stories, I Whitlock's read , Amberina's Completed Favs List, Kuu Faves, Misstoria's Stories to Read, My favs past present and future , Kit's Must Reads!
Chapters: 50 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 315953 Read Count: 297704
[Report This] Published: 14 May 2010 Updated: 28 Jan 2011
Reviewer: Saphira Signed
Date: 12 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 22: Christmas

To bad, that there is no baby Cullen comin', yet...

I ilke to read your story. :D



Author's Response:

YET is the keyword ;)

Thank you!

xx
Gelix

Reviewer: Saphira Signed
Date: 19 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 24: The Honeymoon

I hope that Bella isn't seriosly sick and that she is waitin for a child... :P

I truly hope that Sunday would come sooner...



Author's Response:

It's just three more days!

Thank you for your review! :)

xx
Gelix

Summary:

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The newest Malfoy may not be in Slytherin but he still hates Ron Weasley. Scorpius is nothing like his father, however. When he finds something he wants, he takes it. He's got his sights set on Hermione Weasley and she won't escape!


Categories: Harry Potter
Characters: Hermione/Scorpius Malfoy
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 22 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 46467 Read Count: 18224
[Report This] Published: 21 May 2010 Updated: 05 Jan 2013
Reviewer: Saphira Signed
Date: 20 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

I's think you the great writer, I's hope to read next chapter, I's like your story, I's think it's little bit creepy, but I's like it still. XD

Okey okey, i like your story and i wanna read next chapter soon, please. :D

Summary: Past Featured Story

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"I've watched you for years. There is no other witch, pureblooded or not, More fitting to become the next Lady of the Manor. You are the best and Malfoy's always have the best."

Draco Malfoy's account on how he persued and finally conquered Hermione Granger.

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Categories: Harry Potter
Characters: Hermione /Draco Malfoy
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 3 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 12675 Read Count: 4683
[Report This] Published: 24 May 2010 Updated: 30 May 2010
Reviewer: Saphira Signed
Date: 19 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

Ah, i read your story and i liked it. :)

I know it's complete, but i still whiss, that you'd write the epiloge... :D

Thanks for good story to read... ;)

Summary:

Sequel to Here We Go Again. Bella, Edward, Carlisle, and the others are all back for a new case with the FBI. Will this be the case that breaks them all for good? AH, NC-17 for launguage, lemons, and violence.

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Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories, I Whitlock's read , G8or Favor8s Read, My Favorite Stories, The FBI Saga
Chapters: 41 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 95951 Read Count: 79441
[Report This] Published: 26 May 2010 Updated: 02 Nov 2010
Reviewer: Saphira Signed
Date: 04 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 8

Ha ha haa, I can't stop laughing after reading this sentence: Any man who would kidnap a woman, much less a federal agent, needs his ass kissed. It was so good... XD

It's very good storey ang I love it. :D

Hope to read next chapter soon. :P



Author's Response: lol, thanks;)

Parachute by KitsuShel Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 1971]
Summary: Past Featured Story

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After finding a child abandoned on the streets of Seattle, Bella Swan raises him as her own. What happens to their lives when his biological family is finally found?

 

 

 

 

 


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories, Finished, My all time favorites, Drive's Stories to read that are Completed and Not completed, Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiHu, Stories I've Already read, My Favorite Stories, Misstoria's Stories to Read, J's Read and Loved Stories, My favs past present and future
Chapters: 38 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 145849 Read Count: 211498
[Report This] Published: 21 Jun 2010 Updated: 04 Feb 2011
Reviewer: Saphira Signed
Date: 30 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 8

Ahh... I like your story a lot!

I started reading it at nine or ten pm and I just couldn't stop reading it, so here I am, writng a comment 3 am and waiting for next chapter com realy soon! :D

Good luck for writing:P



Author's Response:

{I love that you're enjoying the story! Don't feel bad. Trust me, I've been known for reading and writing reviews when I should be sleeping, too! Hell, it's 2:55 a.m. here now and I'm replying to your review, lmao!}

Thank you so much for your review! I hope you enjoy the double chapter this week! Look for Chapter 9 to post sometime tomorrow!

I just want to remind everyone that the 1000th reviewer on FFnet, as well as the 500th on Twilighted and TWCS, will get to choose the subject(s) for one of the Parachute Outtakes!

<3

Shel

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"Tanya suggested that we rent a hotel room for a week or so to see how things go. If they are good, then she knows a guy who can rent us a house to stay in for the summer." Bella rolled her eyes at the thought of Tanya and her "guys."

Charlie's eyes widened. 

"So, you could possibly be gone for the whole summer?" he asked as he swallowed back his anxiety. He hadn't gone more than two weeks without seeing Bella or Jack for the past five years. Even then, most of the time they were only about a two hour drive away. Two and a half months suddenly seemed like an eternity to him.

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Reviewer: Saphira Signed
Date: 30 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 9

I realy realy hope, that I can read next chapter reallly soon, because it's very good story:D



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for your review! I really appreciate you taking the time to read my story! I update every Friday and post teasers on Mondays. In fact, there is delicious little teaser, along with a Pic Tease, up on the Parachute Blog as we speak.

I have taken to calling you, my readers, "Verucas". A good number of you are so demanding and impatient, even though I update every week! It makes me feel so damned loved and I give you this moniker in adoration! You truly give me chills and warm my heart at the same time with every review you leave me! As you can tell from this message, I respond to every single review that is left for me because you guys rock my socks!

Parachute's 1000th reviewer On FFnet was given the option to choose the subject of one of the outtakes and she deferred the choice to my judgement, so I will continue to listen to ideas and then maybe post a poll to see what you guys as a whole would like to see. The 500th reviewers on Twilighted and here will also be extended the same deal, since I want no one to feel left out!

Oh, and one more thing! An awesome Veruca named Phoebe started Parachute a thread on the Twilighted Forum! The link is up on the blog if you need it! In addition, thanks to many of you, Parachute was named as FanFic Addicts Fic of the Month! Super-freaking-yay!

I love you guys something fierce and I hope this next chapter lives up to your expectations of the first Cullen meeting!

XoXo

Shel


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Esme's gaze went back and forth between Bella and Jack. She could clearly see the love that wound between the two of them and a million questions started to swirl around her.

"How?" she asked, as tears started to trickle from her verdant eyes. "What happened? How did you find him? How long have you known we were his family?"  Both she and Carlisle looked at Bella expectantly.

"It's very long story," Bella chuckled, humorlessly. "Let me start at the beginning."

Bella started to tell the Cullen her tale, starting with finding Jack in the alley and taking him to the police station. She didn't get very far. They were interrupted with the sound of the front door opening and a loud voice calling out of the foyer.

"Mom! We're here!"

Bella felt something tighten in her stomach as she prepared to come face to face with Jack's father. Her nerves were at an all-time high and she briefly wondered if Dr. Cullen could prescribe her something to help prevent an ulcer from forming.

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Reviewer: Saphira Signed
Date: 06 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 10

How could you, how could you stop here???!!!

You're so evil, you know that I love your story, and still you're gonna kill me, 'cause I just can't wait your next chapter soooooo long, it's gonna be a pure torture!!!

Wonder how Edward's gonna react???

Good, no very very good luck for writng quicker and posting next chapter sooner, than I can say parachute!!! :D



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for your review! For those of you who are new to the story, I update every Friday and post teasers on Mondays. The latest teases are up on the Blog (http://kitsushel.blogspot.com/) as we speak. I know everyone's excited about Edward finally showing up! I am too, lol! I love reading your reactions to the chapter and answering your questions!


<3  Shel

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"I could have left him at that police station and let the damn state take care of it, but I didn't. I stood up and chose to do it. I had to make difficult decisions on a daily basis. Things that I shouldn't have had to worry about, but I did. Because I loved him. For the past five goddamned years, I've loved him and I've made sure that he was fed and clothed and taken care of. I made sure that he had to best education that I could afford and that he knew that he was loved. I've bled, sweat and cried over this child. So screw you, Mr. Cullen, and the horse you rode in on," she seethed in fury.    

Reviewer: Saphira Signed
Date: 13 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 11

Ahh...

It's sad but really really good story. :D

I'd like to have that library in my home too! :P

Anyway keep writing and posting and I keep loving you! :*

XD



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for your review! For those of you who are new to the story, I update every Friday and post teasers on Mondays. The latest teases are up on the Blog (http://kitsushel.blogspot.com/) as we speak, along with some new pictures from this upcoming chapter! We're up to 428 reviews here, so I wanted to remind everyone that the 500th reviewer here will get to pick the subject of one of the Outtakes, just like the 1000th on FFnet and the 500th on Twilighted did. Thank you again for all of your love and support!


XoXo

Shel


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"Wait, you're staying in his house instead of the hotel? Bella, is that really safe? I mean, I know you want to make everyone happy, but you've gotta think about your own safely, seriously!" Alice chastised.

"Calm down, woman. It's his parents house, which is enormous and beautiful. I figured it would be fine, since I was calling you and Dad to let you know where I would be. Just in case you needed somewhere to start looking for the body."

"Bella, do not joke about this! I am going on record as saying that I completely disagree with this decision."

"Duly noted, Alice."

Reviewer: Saphira Signed
Date: 08 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 19

Awwww.... the end was just soooo awesome.... !!! :P

I don't like your story.

 

I LOVE YOUR STORY A LOT!!!! XP

Anyway good luck with everything... !!! :D:eD



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for your review! The Monday teases are up on the Blog (kitsushel.blogspot.com) as we speak, so check them out if you'd like! I have it on good authority that it's a *squeal*-worthy one!

I play TwiFicTrivia on Twitter every Tuesday at 9 pm EST. It is so much freaking fun. Check it out if you get the chance! We had a bunch of new players this past week, so I figured I'd mention it one more time. I won't bring it up again for awhile.

=)

Shel

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Bella sighed and smiled, her eyes closed and facing the sky, as the classical notes of Tchaicovsky's 1812 Overture swirled around the air. She felt Edward's hand gently begin to play with her hair and she bit her lip to stifle a sigh. He had been nothing short of amazing today and she didn't want their date to come to a close any time soon.

She opened her eyes and turned her face slightly to the left.

Edward's fingers still held onto a strand of hair as he smiled down at her.

"Enjoying the concert?" he asked, in a low husky voice. She smiled widely and nodded happily.

Summary:

picture created by Thiagher Lillie

"Boop! Bella's preggers!" Emmett said. "And guess whose the father?" Rosalie continued. "Edward Cullen!" Alice yelled. How could this day get any worse? Edward Cullen stalked toward us a harsh glare on his face.

Edward Cullen and Isabella Swan absolutely hate eachother. What will happen in this comedy? Can love find a way? What happens when the worst tears everything apart? Love is stronger than hate my friends but can it pull through the worst of life?


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Humor, Romance
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: To Read
Chapters: 29 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 52328 Read Count: 15446
[Report This] Published: 05 Aug 2010 Updated: 24 Aug 2010
Reviewer: Saphira Signed
Date: 10 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 9: You Turned Me Into Strawberry Shortcake!

Hahahahahaaaaa, I just can't stop laughing! XD

Sooooo freakin good, I wish, that I could see that in da real life! XP

Anyway, keep writin and postin Darlin' and I keep lovin you. :D

Summary:

*1955* Edward, a typical American youth of the fabulous fifties being ruled by his hormones, is the new kid in town. Romance/comedy/slight drama - a coming of age story with eventual E/B. AH. OOC. Rated M. EPOV


Categories: Twilight, All Human
Characters: None
Genre: Humor
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Stories Read by CNYBella, Lilyellacullens want to read list!
Chapters: 18 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 79827 Read Count: 14894
[Report This] Published: 18 Nov 2011 Updated: 28 May 2012
Reviewer: Saphira Signed
Date: 31 May 2012 Title: Chapter 18: Epoch

It's nice :D

Summary:

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A free-spirited archaeologist and a shy, absent-minded genius find a 500 year old vampire who thinks she's a goddess. They trying to sneak back to the US, teach her about the modern world, and trying very, very hard not to fall in love with the Dark Goddess. OOC/AU


Categories: Twilight, Non-Canon Pairings, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Edward/Jacob
Genre: Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: Supernatural
Series: Edwards Paradox Completed Favourites
Chapters: 32 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 149098 Read Count: 50356
[Report This] Published: 03 Apr 2012 Updated: 25 Nov 2012
Reviewer: Saphira Signed
Date: 05 May 2012 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12

Awesome, it's just awesome! :D

I want to read more and soon. :D

Reviewer: Saphira Signed
Date: 10 May 2012 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13

I really like your story, you know how to keep me interested and waiting impatently for next part... I wold tell you much more, but since english isn't my homelanguage i don't know how to express myself as much as in estonian... but i really like your story a lot. :D



Author's Response:

You expressed yourself quite well, and I'm very glad you're enjoying the story. Thank you for the compliment!

Reviewer: Saphira Signed
Date: 15 May 2012 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14

Bella is just awesome ! :D And so are you. :D

 



Author's Response:

Aww ... That's so sweet! Thank you!

Reviewer: Saphira Signed
Date: 21 May 2012 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16

I still really like your style of writing... :D