Reviews by Whateverhater69
Never Say Never by Wombat Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 1025]
Summary:

Issued with a death sentence since birth Bella’s life was never her own; in an attempt to escape her abusive childhood she flees to Forks, Bella is destined to be with Edward for eternity but can he save her from the clutches of Aro and his army before its too late or will she be able to save herself.

This story contains Abuse, Violence, Love, War, Sex, Masturbation, Kidnapping, Rape, Death and a heap of other things.... Please don't read if you are not of age!!!!

Twilight Rocks But I Do Not Own It.... I do however own this story!!!!

This story is for Adults only. So Don't Read if you are not old enough......

I suck at summaries so please give my story a go.

 


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 9 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 58299 Read Count: 55216
[Report This] Published: 25 Jun 2010 Updated: 03 Jan 2013
Reviewer: Whateverhater69 Signed
Date: 02 Aug 2010 Title: Never Say Never

power theif LOL I like this story -

Reviewer: Whateverhater69 Signed
Date: 02 Aug 2010 Title: Never Say Never

i dont hate you since you realize the issue LOL

great update!



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for reviewing.... you are awesome...... SQuEAl !!!!! Bigh hugs

Reviewer: Whateverhater69 Signed
Date: 03 Aug 2010 Title: Never Say Never

i cant wait to see all her powers (that she's has absorbed *so far*) GREAT UPDATE! I hope she takes James's tracking powers

Reviewer: Whateverhater69 Signed
Date: 03 Aug 2010 Title: Never Say Never

Great update!!!

Reviewer: Whateverhater69 Signed
Date: 03 Aug 2010 Title: Never Say Never

I wonder if Bella will start being evil and having visiions and start killing people LOL j/k



Author's Response:

HA... I don't know about the evil killing people part but she will certainly use Jasper's gift on Edward for naughty evil things... hehehehehe...

Thanks for reading and for your reviews I love reading them

Reviewer: Whateverhater69 Signed
Date: 12 Aug 2010 Title: Never Say Never

Emo much Eddie?? "

... I am a monster… in that moment I felt everything... grief… fear… heartache… misery... terror… despair… anguish… sorrow... I just wanted to die”

Rosalie is comfy with her inner b!tch -- I love it!

LMAO --- Great update!!

THANKS FOR THE SHOUT OUTS!!



Author's Response:

You are most welcome.... I am glad you like the story and thanks a bunch for taking the time to review

Reviewer: Whateverhater69 Signed
Date: 12 Aug 2010 Title: Never Say Never

I think her eyes are black bc Edward's are black -- is she *that* in tune with him maybe?

Ali is a *f r e a k* LOL

Where is Aro and what is he doing? Is he still plotting? I know he is LOL



Author's Response:

OMG..... you are the first one to pick the correct reason for her eyes..... Yes she is that in tune with him.....hehehehe... I love Alice... and you are right Aro is not far away and yes he is always plotting

Reviewer: Whateverhater69 Signed
Date: 12 Aug 2010 Title: Never Say Never

Alice is FUN - i would love a bestie like her

Bella's best line EVER : "What a way to die" LMAO

Great update --- im trying to play catch up with the updates LOL



Author's Response:

That's cool... I am glad you like the story... I am trying to post Ch 30 but it keeps failing and I am about to throw the computer at the wall.....GRRRRRR

Reviewer: Whateverhater69 Signed
Date: 20 Aug 2010 Title: Never Say Never

HA HA HA HA -- I guess i'm *in tune* with this story--reviewer's intuition maybe?? LMAO -- cant wait to keep reading!!!!



Author's Response:

hehehe.... It's really funny how different readers pick up on the not so clear little hints and then other readers don't see the plot when it slaps them.... hehehehe,,, Your Ace

Summary: Past Featured Story

 

 

Rebel Bella has been shipped around the U.S. for years to different foster homes after being placed in Child Protective Services. What will happen when she is placed with uptight Edward and his family?  Adult language/Violence/Lemons

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Amberina's Completed Favs List, G8or Favor8s Read, Misstoria's Stories to Read
Chapters: 29 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 134043 Read Count: 42791
[Report This] Published: 07 Jul 2010 Updated: 05 Jul 2011
Reviewer: Whateverhater69 Signed
Date: 14 Jul 2011 Title: Chapter 1: Darkness

great start - i like this story



Author's Response:

yay!  i'm so glad you like it.  let me know what you think of the rest of it, too!  thanks so much for reading and reviewing!! ;)

Reviewer: Whateverhater69 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 14 Jul 2011 Title: Chapter 2: Home

I love this!!



Author's Response:

yay!!  that makes me super happy :)  glad you're enjoying it.  thanks so much for the review!! ;)

Reviewer: Whateverhater69 Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: 14 Jul 2011 Title: Chapter 3: Traitor

glad it's already up i hate cliffies LOL



Author's Response:

LOL!  it's a good thing then... b/c i'm kinda addicted to cliffies :)

Reviewer: Whateverhater69 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 14 Jul 2011 Title: Chapter 9: Victims

I think the bodyguard is Jasper :)

Reviewer: Whateverhater69 Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: 14 Jul 2011 Title: Chapter 10: Agent J

HAHAHAHAHA - i thought of jake after i hit submit



Author's Response:

hahaha!!  the majority of the readers thought jasper, too... but i promise, jake is a much better fit.  jasper will be coming soon!!  ::twss::  LOL!  ;)

Reviewer: Whateverhater69 Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: 14 Jul 2011 Title: Chapter 14: Unexpected

smh @ riley - cool it already jeez

 

great chapter



Author's Response:

lol!  riley's one crazy guy... thanks for the review!!  ;)

Reviewer: Whateverhater69 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 14 Jul 2011 Title: Chapter 17: Shocked

WTF Royce smh



Author's Response:

exactly!!!  ;)

Reviewer: Whateverhater69 Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: 15 Jul 2011 Title: Chapter 21: Confession

i knew it was a tumor!! sorry that he has it though



Author's Response:

yep... he does.  sad, but true.  now we know he's fighting an evil just like bella.  they kinda match :)

Reviewer: Whateverhater69 Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: 15 Jul 2011 Title: Chapter 24: Broken

probably Riley or someone dealing with James



Author's Response:

very good guess! :)

Reviewer: Whateverhater69 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 15 Jul 2011 Title: Chapter 26: Fallout

WOW - good job bella



Author's Response:

i like to think so, too :)  she really did do a great job!  ;)

Summary: Past Featured Story

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Volturri have departed and life goes on for the Cullens and the pack. Renesme is growing up and Jacob is growing deeper and deeper in love. Their love is magical, but how with the magical world respond to it. What happens when Nahuel returns to fight for his percieved destiny? And can the Volturi survive a betrayal and a parting that will ally some with the Cullens and make others forever their enemies?

 I have the best Beta- daring2believe...You rock girl!

Thank you Moonlit-Dreams for the amazing banner!!!

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Renesmee/Jacob
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 27 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 50993 Read Count: 2294
[Report This] Published: 26 Jul 2010 Updated: 05 Nov 2011
Reviewer: Whateverhater69 Signed
Date: 30 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 1: One Tribe-Chapter 1

I like the start of this story



Author's Response:

I am so glad you are enjoying it.

Reviewer: Whateverhater69 Signed
Date: 30 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 3: Visions and Dreams-Chapter 3

Great update!! I hope she has a new power!!!

Reviewer: Whateverhater69 Signed
Date: 30 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 5: Imprint 101-Chapter 5

great update

Reviewer: Whateverhater69 Signed
Date: 30 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 6: Coupled Off-Chapter 6

:-)

Reviewer: Whateverhater69 Signed
Date: 04 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 10: Through Space and Time- Chapter 10

the voltorri no doubt or some random vamp out for revenge... cantwait for the next update :-)



Author's Response:

I am so glad you are enjoying it. Thanks for the support.

Summary:

In this story, Bella is an orphan who has never met her parents. The only things she has from them is a golden bracelet and a box she was given on her seventeenth birthday. She also starts having strange dreams and her body is slowly changing. Then she meets the Cullens, but what are they? And what about her new friends?

Things cannot be any more confusing about Bella….or can they?

It can happen to anyone

 

 


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Romance, Supernatural
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Love and immortality
Chapters: 15 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 44525 Read Count: 11285
[Report This] Published: 28 Mar 2011 Updated: 30 May 2011
Reviewer: Whateverhater69 Signed
Date: 01 Jun 2011 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

I like it!! Great start :)



Author's Response:

Thanks!

Deceiving Fate by iambeagle Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 15]
Summary:

Bella, engaged to straitlaced Riley, begins having doubts when Edward enters her life again. AH, BPOV


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Lilyellacullens want to read list!
Chapters: 28 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 20136 Read Count: 19185
[Report This] Published: 27 Jul 2011 Updated: 27 Jul 2011
Reviewer: Whateverhater69 Signed
Date: 29 Jul 2011 Title: Chapter 1: Prologue

Great start!!!



Author's Response:

:)

Reviewer: Whateverhater69 Signed
Date: 29 Jul 2011 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 1

so excited!! i love the suspense :)



Author's Response:

:)

Reviewer: Whateverhater69 Signed
Date: 29 Jul 2011 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 4

Fiesty!!! So sad that it happened that way



Author's Response:

Yeah, Rose didn't know what was comin', huh? thanks for reading!! :)

Reviewer: Whateverhater69 Signed
Date: 29 Jul 2011 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 9

WOW - the nerve of Rose bringing that up at the table smh

Not sure I like Riley's mother lol



Author's Response:

Yeah, Nancy & Rose kind of deserve each other. I appreciate all of the reviews!!

Reviewer: Whateverhater69 Signed
Date: 29 Jul 2011 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 12

Riley's a douche LOL I wonder how the dinner went

Reviewer: Whateverhater69 Signed
Date: 29 Jul 2011 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 15

Riley IS a douche - Edward is cute -  I want her to talk to Nancy and Rose :)

Reviewer: Whateverhater69 Signed
Date: 29 Jul 2011 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 21

Ouch :(

Reviewer: Whateverhater69 Signed
Date: 29 Jul 2011 Title: Chapter 28: Epilogue

Awwwww. great story  :)

Kinda short but it was nice to read

 

Are you doing more?

I'm a Doctor by texasbella Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 16]
Summary:

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DRABBLE How does a man cope when his world crumbles around him and he thinks he's lost everything? What lengths will he go to in order to find happiness? Dark, disturbing, not for the feint of heart. NC-17 for MATURE CONTENT.

 

 

 

AWARD

 

 


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Angst, Horror, Suspense/Thriller
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 54 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 5930 Read Count: 34068
[Report This] Published: 04 Jun 2012 Updated: 04 Jun 2012
Reviewer: Whateverhater69 Signed
Date: 26 Sep 2016 Title: Chapter 54: Chapter 54

Creepy but .. I kinda like it.. I love it actually - I couldnt stop reading this and I cant imagine people had to wait. I was on pins waiting to click to the next chapter

It Takes a Village by Payton79 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 221]
Summary: Past Featured Story

 

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created by the wonderful heartfortwilight

 

 

Summary: Nowadays, families come in all shades and forms. When 32-year-old pediatrician Edward meets the woman of his dreams, he gets more than he bargained for. She’s captivating, but complicated, with her unconventional variation of family dynamic. Does she come with more baggage—or people—than he can handle? Will he be able to keep his distance? Maybe things aren’t quite as they seem. Sometimes, it takes a village...

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Categories: Twilight
Characters: None
Genre: Family, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 22 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 73244 Read Count: 29299
[Report This] Published: 01 Nov 2017 Updated: 30 Mar 2018
Reviewer: Whateverhater69 Signed
Date: 02 Apr 2018 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

I think Seth and Riley are gay and they are co parenting from the same household until Maddie gets older.